Peer Review by Mitesh Patel

Hello, as a computer science major I found your power point very interesting! Here are a few notes that I think you could benefit from.

Slide 1 – At first glance, I would change the title. Something more specific such as “How to build mobile applications” would work just fine. So basically you wont have to use the parenthesis. Initially I thought we were going to focus on creating an application that can be run on the computer itself such as a calculator and what not. Also, as a Mac user I would have liked to know if this would be capable on Mac or just Windows.

Slide 2 – Having an index is a smart idea! Good job on this slide.

Slide 3 – I would cut this slide down to a technical definition of a mobile application, which is what the professor wants. One or two sentences is good enough.

Slide 4 – Good!

Slide 5 – Nice brief overview!

Slide 6 – In this slide, I would of liked a link to the website but then again that is my preference which is optional.

Slide 9 – We can switch the wording on this slide by using better vocabulary. In example when you say “One of the important thing we need to be care about writing the code is syntax.” I would change it to “One of the important rules about writing code is syntax.” Also on the last sentence of the slide, I would insert “to” after “We need..”

Slide 10 – I would take out the definition of an Emulator

Slide 11 – I don’t think this slide is needed at all, or if you want you can define the vocab under the appropriate slide under the notes section of the power point and then tell the reader to look at the notes to see the definition.

Overall your power point was really good! I would have liked pictures near steps 2 and 3 so I could relate the screen I see to the picture on the slide. However, that is optional and not really needed unless someone is a visual learner like me! Grammar and vocabulary should be on point after you consider the adjustments I made. Well done!