how to make a good essay
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How To Make A Good Essay
By: Ummi Malikal Balqis, 1006666513
Essay is a piece of writing which is often written from an author's personal point of view. Before we
make an essay, we must select the topic to bounded the matery. The diagram of an essay is devided is
3 parts, there are introduction, body, and conclusion. Introduction contains general information and
thesis statement. Body contains some paragraphs, each paragraph should contain a topic sentence and
supporting sentence. The last, conclusion contains prediction, solution, or recomendation.
Selecting Topic
Before we write an essay, the first step to make a good essay is selecting a topic. The purpose of
selecting a topic is to bounded a subject that will be written. Selecting a topic for an essay is similar to
choosing a topic to write about in a paragraph. Several patterns of organization are possible for each
topic, examples:
1. Cause effect: What causes people to lose their job?
2. Problem solution: How to combat unemployment?
3. Comparison-contrast: Unemployment in Indonesia in the 60s and in the 90s
4. Definition/clarification: Poverty in terms of incomes distribution
The Introduction
The introduction is very important because this part tells the reader what the essay is all about. The
function of the introduction is to provide the background information, to capture the reader’s interest,
and to state the thesis. The introductory paragraph usually consist of three parts, there are hook,
connecting information, and thesis statement.
- The hook
The hook is the opening statement. There are many different ways to write a hook:
1. By asking question, example: Can you imagine if you choose to be a nurse?
2. By making an interesting observation or relating an anecdote.
3. By describing a unique scenario to catch the reader’s attention
4. Using a famous quotation or saying as a hook, example: “Give a man fish, and he will eat
ffor a day. Teach him how to fish and he’ll eat forever”
5. Using background information related to the thesis statement.
- Connecting Information
After the hook, the writter usually writes three to five sentences that help to introduce the
topic to the reader. These sentences can be background information about the topic or they
can be examples or explainations.
- Thesis Statement
After selecting a topic, we can make a thesis statement. This thesis statement is usually one
sentences that gives the purpose of the essay. There are the caracteristics of thesis statement:
1) Is the strongest, clearest statement in the essay
2) Comes in the beginning of the essay, usually at the end of the introdustory paragraph
3) Must NOT be a simple statement of fact that requires no elaburation. A simple statement
of fact has little possibilities for development
4) Sholud not be expressed as a quetion, because a question contains no attitude or opinion.
The ANSWER of the question is a thesis statement
5) Contain CONTROLLING IDEAS that will be used in the topic sentences of the body
paragraph of the essay
6) May be a STATEMENT OF OPINION that will be explained and proved in the body
paragraph
7) May may be STATEMENT OF INTENT that will be explained and illustrated in the
body paragraph of the essay
The example of thesis statement is “Hispanic contribution to American culture are reflected
in the words we speak, the foods we consume, and the music we enjoy”
Writing The Body
In essay, the thesis statement is directly related to the topic sentences in the body paragraph. Each
topic sentences relates to and deals with one or more of the controlling ideas in the thesis statement.
We can related each paragraph with transition words. The writer develops these paragraph and uses
linking information or transitions to make sure that the paragraph flow slowly from one to other.
Writing Conclusion
There are the guidelines that can make conclusion easier for us to write an effective conslusion.
1. Let the read know that this is the conclusion. You can use the following transitions for that
purpose:
In conclusion......................
To summarize....................
As we have seen...............
Finally................................
2. The conclusion should help the readers to reconsider the main ideas that you have given in the
essay
3. The final sentence of an essay often give a suggestion (result, consequences, a solution, a
recomendation, or call for action), an oppinion , or a prediction.
Bibliography
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http://www.bookrags.com/articles/2.html
International Students. July 22, 2011. General writing essay tips.
http://www.internationalstudent.com/essay_writing/essay_tips.shtml
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