Incorporating Sources

Rhetorical Appeals & Incorporating SourcesEnglish Comp 1Rhetorical AppealsThere are several ways to appeal to an audience, manipulating rhetoric is one way.Rhetoric is the art of speaking or writing effectively. According to Aristotle, rhetoric is "the ability, in each particular case, to see the available means of persuasion." He described three main forms of rhetorical appeal: Ethos, Logos, and Pathos. These appeals are prevalent in almost all arguments.Rhetorical AppealsEthos (Greek for 'character') refers to the trustworthiness or credibility of the writer or speaker. Ethos is often conveyed through tone and style of the message and through the way the writer or speaker refers to differing views. It can also be affected by the writer's reputation as it exists independently from the message--his or her expertise in the field, his or her previous record or integrity, and so forth. The impact of ethos is often called the argument's 'ethical appeal' or the 'appeal from credibility.'Rhetorical Appeals"I will end this war in Iraq responsibly, and finish the fight against al Qaeda and the Taliban in Afghanistan. I will rebuild our military to meet future conflicts. But I will also renew the tough, direct diplomacy that can prevent Iran from obtaining nuclear weapons and curb Russian aggression. I will build new partnerships to defeat the threats of the 21st century: terrorism and nuclear proliferation; poverty and genocide; climate change and disease. And I will restore our moral standing, so that America is once again that last, best hope for all who are called to the cause of freedom, who long for lives of peace, and who yearn for a better future."Democratic Presidential Candidate Acceptance Speech by Barack Obama. August 28th, 2008.Rhetorical AppealsPathos (Greek for 'suffering' or 'experience') is often associated with emotional appeal. But a better equivalent might be 'appeal to the audience's sympathies and imagination.' An appeal to pathos causes an audience not just to respond emotionally but to identify with the writer's point of view--to feel what the writer feels. Perhaps the most common way of conveying an emotional appeal is through narrative or story. Pathos refers to both the emotional and the imaginative impact of the message on an audience, the power with which the writer's message moves the audience to decision or action.Rhetorical Appeals"I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed."I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King Jr. August 28th, 1963.Rhetorical AppealsLogos (Greek for 'word') refers to the internal consistency of the message--the clarity of the claim, the logic of its reasons, and the effectiveness of its supporting evidence. The impact of logos on an audience is sometimes called the argument's logical appeal. To use logos would be to cite facts and statistics, historical and literal analogies, and citing certain authorities on a subject. Rhetorical Appeals"However, although private final demand, output, and employment have indeed been growing for more than a year, the pace of that growth recently appears somewhat less vigorous than we expected. Notably, since stabilizing in mid-2009, real household spending in the United States has grown in the range of 1 to 2 percent at annual rates, a relatively modest pace. Households' caution is understandable. Importantly, the painfully slow recovery in the labor market has restrained growth in labor income, raised uncertainty about job security and prospects, and damped confidence. Also, although consumer credit shows some signs of thawing, responses to our Senior Loan Officer Opinion Survey on Bank Lending Practices suggest that lending standards to households generally remain tight."The Economic Outlook and Monetary Policy by Ben Bernanke. August 27th, 2010.SOURCESCrediting Your Sources: Parenthetical CitationsEach time you incorporate source material, you must clearly direct your reader to the article/book/interview/etc. you are citing.

The parenthetical citation should include whatever is first on the work cited entry. Usually this will be the authors last name. However, if there is no author, it may be the title of the report or article. Unless your source does not have page numbers, you will also direct your reader to the page where the source material can be found.

Examples:(Jones, 52)(Most People Do Not Have Cosmetic Surgery for Vanity, 7)Crediting Your Sources: Attributive TagsAttributive Tags:According to SmithIn a recent report issued by the Department of EnergyYour first mention of an author should include their full name and identify them as an authority.

Example:

This is an issue that is especially important to Paul Lorenzi, an expert on nuclear energy. In a recent essay, he urges the re-examination of nuclear potential, statingCrediting Your SourcesYour parenthetical citations need not repeat any information that has already been provided in the text. If you have given the authors last name in the attributive tag, you do not need to include it in the parenthetical citation.

Warning: The person you are quoting, particularly in an edited essay, may not be the listed author on your Work Cited page. In this case, you may have an attributive tag crediting the speaker and a parenthetical citation crediting the source.Direct Quotations with Author and Page NumbersUsing an attributive tag:According to Paul Lorenzini, an expert on nuclear energy, in 2002, renewable sources supplied about 6 percent of U.S. total energy consumption, unchanged from the 6 percent they provided in 1970. And the bulk of that 6 percent is supplied by sources that are far from new: hydropower and wood waste (31).

Without an attributive tag:It is, however, important to note that in 2002, renewable sources supplied about 6 percent of U.S. total energy consumption, unchanged from the 6 percent they provided in 1970. And the bulk of that 6 percent is supplied by sources that are far from new: hydropower and wood waste (Lorenzini, 31).

Work Cited Entry:Lorenzini, Paul. "A second look at nuclear power: by overlooking nuclear power in the quest for clean energy, we are condemning ourselves to a future of increased fossil fuel use." Issues in Science and Technology 21.3 (2005): 31+. Gale Opposing Viewpoints In Context. Web. 1 May. 2011.Direct Quotations with No Author and No Page NumbersExample:Craig Bowren, a prominent medical ethicist, examines the difficult choices in a caring for the elderly, pointing out that, in today's world, an elderly person or their family must choose, for example, between dialysis and death, or a feeding tube and death (Excessive Treatment).

Work Cited Entry:"Excessive Treatment of People Dying of Old Age Is Cruel." The Elderly. Ed. Sylvia Engdahl. Detroit: Gale, 2011. Current Controversies. Gale Opposing Viewpoints In Context. Web. 1 May 2011.Long QuotationsWhen a quotation is more than 4 lines, format it as a separate block. Begin the quotation on a new line and indent the entire block a full inch from the margin. Omit the quotation marks and include the parenthetical citation after the closing punctuation. Maintain double spacing.

Example:

Medical ethicists examine the difficult choices in a caring for the elderly, pointing out that,In today's world, an elderly person or their family must choose, for example, between dialysis and death, or a feeding tube and death Those can be very simple choices when you're 40 and critically ill; they can be agonizing when you're 80 and the bad days outnumber the good days two to one. (Excessive Treatment)SummarizingIn your own words, briefly recount only the main ideas from the original text.

A summary should be significantly shorter than the original passage.

A summary should not include any words or phrases from the original (with the exception of proper nouns).SummarizingYou must credit the original source with an attributive tag and a parenthetical citation (if appropriate).

If your summary is several sentences long, use multiple attributive tags.

Example:In a recent essay, Michael Smith detailed his concerns about nuclear energy, pointing out that his primary issue is with potential environmental impact. He went on to address additional concerns, including the high cost of building and maintaining reactors, the problem of nuclear waste disposal, and the inability of current technology to replace fossil fuel based electricity. Finally, he addressed the challenges of reactor placement, touching on both natural disaster risk and resistance from local populations.ParaphrasingLike a summary, a paraphrase is written entirely in your own words (excluding proper nouns).

Unlike a summary, a paraphrase is close to the length of the source text.

You must clearly credit the source with attributive tags and (when appropriate) parenthetical citations.ParaphrasingTo paraphrase, you must change both the words and the sentence structure.

One approach is to, first, find synonyms for all of the words in the original passage. Second, rearrange the sentence structure. Finally, incorporate appropriate attributive tags to credit your source.ParaphrasingStudents frequently overuse direct quotation in taking notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact transcribing of source materials while taking notes.

Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd ed. (1976): 46-47

A legitimate paraphrase: In research papers students often quote excessively, failing to keep quoted material down to a desirable level. Since the problem usually originates during note taking, it is essential to minimize the material recorded verbatim (Lester 46-47)

ParaphrasingStudents frequently overuse direct quotation in taking notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact transcribing of source materials while taking notes.

Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd ed. (1976): 46-47

A plagiarized version: Students often use too many direct quotations when they take notes, resulting in too many of them in the final research paper. In fact, probably only about 10% of the final copy should consist of directly quoted material. So it is important to limit the amount of source material copied while taking notes.

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