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I would spread the clothsunder your feet:

But I, being poor, haveonly my dreams;

I have spread my dreamsunder your feet;

Tread softly because you

tread on my dreams.

- William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)

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Metaphor Poem

HopeLife

Marriage

Love

HateAngerDisappointment

Work

Happiness

Time

a knifea spoon

an egg

a brush

a windowa mirrora plate

a rope

a cup

a plant

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Metaphor Poem

HopeLife

Marriage

Love

HateAngerDisappointment

Work

Happiness

Time

a knifea spoon

an egg

a brush

a windowa mirrora plate

a rope

a cup

a plant

Marriage is a rope

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Metaphor Poem

HopeLife

Marriage

Love

HateAngerDisappointment

Work

Happiness

Time

a knifea spoon

an egg

a brush

a windowa mirrora plate

a rope

a cup

a plant

We help one another

We keep each other safe

Marriage is a rope

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Announcements

Consultation Sign-up

Tuesday October 26, 2010

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Todays Schedule

1. Creating Flow, Part II

2. Referencing

3. How to write a conclusion

4. Writers Workshop

Editing body paragraphs

Writing your essay

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Creating Flow with

Coherence & CohesionMy Hero: My Dad

By Kim Jong Il #8 C3

Cohesion

Coherence

Connections

between

sentences

Connectedness of

ideas of your

entire writing.

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Jigsaw

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What is Plagiarism?

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What is Plagiarism?

Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or closeimitation of the language and thoughts of

another author and the representation of them

as your own original work (Dictionary.com).

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In-text Citation

Everyone knows theyre going to die, but nobody believesit. If we did, we would do things differently. (Albom, 37).

(Author, page #)

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In-text Citation

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, whileloving someone deeply gives you courage. (Lao Tzu).

OR

Lao Tzu once said, Being deeply loved by someone gives youstrength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.

Famous Quote:

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Introduction

Conclusion

Body Paragraph

Body Paragraph

Body Paragraph

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Conclusion

Summary Statement

The Closer

Personal Reflection

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Editing & Sharing

1. Organization

2. Dos and Donts

3. Creating Flow(cohesion & coherence)

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