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A Unit on Expressive Modes of Writing
Incorporating Mechanics and Research on Inventions
Understanding by Design
Submitted by Andrea Hanson
Descriptive
Paper
Informative
Paper
Friendly
Letter
Focus on adjectives
Write like a
salesperson/inventor
Conversational tone
Write like a
fan club member
Focus on facts
Write like a reporter/
tour guide/scientist
Expression
Mechanics
Focus on
uses of
invention
Explain invention Focus on pros
of invention
Graphic Organizer
The graphic organizer below depicts the similarities and differences among the three modes of
writing that are discussed throughout the unit. It also shows the ways in which all three relate, in
that they are require expression and proper mechanics. This graphic organizer is completed in
class with the students as well. Another graphic organizer is included in the form of a calendar of
each day’s activities throughout the unit.
Table of Contents
Title Page………………………………………………………………………………………….1
Cover Page Graphic Organizer……………………………………………………………………2
Table of Contents……………………………………………………………………………….3-4
Templates………………………………………………………………………………………….5
Stage One Template……………………………………………………………………..6-7
Stage Two Template………………………………………………………………………8
WHERE TO……………………………………………………………………………9-10
Calendars and Performance Task………………………………………………………………...11
Calendar………………………………………………………………………………….12
Thirty Day Plan………………………………………………………………………13-15
Performance Task………………………………………………………………………..16
Rubrics…………………………………………………………………………………………...17
Portfolio………………………………………………………………………………….18
Presentation……………………………………………………………………………....19
Informative Paper………………………………………………………………………...20
Descriptive Paper………………………………………………………………………...21
Friendly Letter…………………………………………………………………………...22
Mechanics………………………………………………………………………………..23
Teacher Made Tests……………………………………………………………………………...24
Test…………………………………………………………………………………...25-27
Answer Key…………………………………………………………………………..28-30
Additional Forms of Assessment………………………………………………………………...31
Reflections……………………………………………………………………………….32
Self-Evaluation on Practice………………………………………………………………33
Writing Evaluation: Peer and Student……………………………………………………34
Pretest………………………………………………………………………………...35-36
Posttest…………………………………………………………………………………...37
Lessons…………………………………………………………………………………………...38
Day Two……………………………………………………………………………...39-43
Example of three paper modes……………………………………………….44-46
Venn diagrams………………………………………………………………..47-48
Day Six……………………………………………………………………………….49-52
Day Twelve…………………………………………………………………………...53-57
Supply list………………………………………………………………………..58
Day Sixteen…………………………………………………………………………...59-63
Letter from “new student”……………………………………………………….64
Letter scramble worksheet and answer key…………………………………..65-66
Day Eighteen…………………………………………………………………………67-71
Diversity and Technology………………………………………………………………………..72
Exceptionalities and Cultural Diversity………………………………………………….73
Technology…………………………………………………………………………...74-77
Resource and Reference Lists……………………………………………………………………78
Resource List…………………………………………………………………………….79
Reference List……………………………………………………………………………80
Extras…………………………………………………………………………………………….81
Bulletin Board………………………………………………………………………...82-83
Substitute Folder…………………………………………………………………………84
Stage 1 Template
Title: Inventive and Expressive
Subject: Language Arts
Topic: Inventions
Grade: Third Grade
Designer: Andrea Hanson
Standards Addressed:
GRADE
3
II. WRITING A. Types of
Writing
The student
will compose
various pieces
of writing.
Write in a variety of modes to express meaning, including:
a. descriptive
b. narrative
c. informative
d. friendly letter
e. poetic
GRADE
3
II. WRITING C. Spelling,
Grammar,
and Usage
The student
will apply
standard
English
conventions
when writing.
1. Compose complete sentences when writing.
2. Recognize and correct spelling errors when writing.
3. Spell correctly one-syllable and two-syllable words that have
blends, contractions and compounds.
4. Spell common homophones correctly.
5. Apply grammar conventions correctly in writing, including:
a. nouns
b. verbs
c. adjectives
d. pronouns.
6. Apply punctuation conventions correctly in writing, including:
a. periods, question marks, exclamation points
b. capitalization of proper nouns
c. abbreviations
d. sentence beginnings
e. commas in a series.
Understandings: There are different types of writing used to describe different items.
There are different types of writing used to express different ideas.
There are conventions that dictate writing to aid in clarity.
Essential Questions:
Why write?
Why write expressively?
What makes writing informative?
What makes writing descriptive?
What makes a friendly letter?
Why use proper grammar?
Why punctuate?
Why write complete sentences?
Why spell correctly?
Students Will Know:
Writing styles (descriptive, informative, friendly letter)
Functions of different modes of writing
Grammar (nouns, verbs, adjectives, pronouns)
Punctuation (periods, question marks, exclamation points, sentence beginnings)
Sentence structure (complete sentences)
Spelling (homophones)
Students Will Be Able To:
Write in a variety of modes
Identify modes of writing
Use writing as a form of expression
Use appropriate grammar conventions
Use appropriate punctuation conventions
Compose sentences, using appropriate structure
Spell common homophones correctly
Stage 2 Template
Performance Task: A new student has moved to our country and does not know anything about your invention! It is
your task to help your new classmate. By becoming a newscaster, a scientist, an inventor, a
salesperson, a fan club member, a friend, or any other fitting role you get approved by me, you
will help our new friend learn about the invention. You will assemble a portfolio which includes
all three modes (using appropriate expression of course!) and your reflections. You will then
choose your favorite piece and present it to your classmates and parents. We all want to learn
from you. Remember to focus on expression and mechanics so that your new classmate will be
able to understand you!
Key Criteria: Other Evidence:
Portfolio Teacher Made Test
Descriptive Student Reflections (included in portfolio)
Expression Student Self-Assessments (of portfolio)
Descriptors/Adjectives Graphic Organizer
Factual (web included in pretest and protest)
Structure Conferences (over rough drafts)
Informative Self and Peer Evaluations (of rough drafts)
Expression Observations (in class during two lessons)
Facts
Factual
Structure
Friendly Letter
Expression
Format
Factual
Structure
Mechanics
Grammar
Punctuation
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Reflections
Timeliness/Neatness
Presentation
Paper Edited/Approved
Expression
Timely and Prepared
W Where is the unit going?
(from student perspective)
H Hook and hold the
student.
E Equip the student.
Explore the subject.
R Rethink and revise
opportunities.
E Evaluate performance and
progress.
Introduce the performance task
Make expectations clear by providing rubrics for all papers
early in their presentation
Discuss why learnings are important and useful
Expression as “jobs”
Journal questions and personal goals
Pretest (word association)
Bulletin board
Search school and home for inventions
Students choose their own topic
Students teach classmates and parents in presentations
Students watch video presentations of teacher
Associating “jobs” with modes by expression
Associating mechanics with clarity and expression
Provide research and work time
Provide access to computers before, during, and after school
Work mainly completed in class, except optional costume for
presentations
Reflections in morning journals
Self-assess writing and practice
Conferences with teacher and peers
Individual conference before final presentation and portfolio
Rehearsal before final presentation
Teacher available during work time
Review days
Pretest and posttest influences sequencing of lessons
Reflections in morning journals, opportunities to write
concerns and questions
Self evaluate the practice for their presentations
Self-evaluate writing
T Tailor unit to address
individual student needs.
O Organize unit in a logical
sequence.
Pretest and posttest influences sequencing of lessons
(word association activity)
Teacher-made test requires explanations for many areas so that
students may have different ideas, as long as they can explain
them
Vary resource materials (books and internet sources)
Students choose their own topics
Students present work using presentation and portfolio
Verbal/Linguistic: writing papers
Logical/Mathematical: Venn diagram of three modes
Visual/Spatial: videos and giant letter
Bodily/Kinesthetic: acting out mail scene and walking “I Spy”
Interpersonal: peer conferences
Intrapersonal: journaling
Naturalist: “I Spy” nature walk
Daily activities are arranged in a calendar to be posted on the
bulletin board
Daily activities are further explained in a thirty day plan
NOUNS
VERBS
3
Introduce
Inventions
Invent to
Present
Library
Research
Library
Research
Writing as
Expression
Introduce
Informative
Complete
Sentences
Complete
Sentences
Writing
Day
Writing/
Evaluation Day
Introduce
Descriptive
Adjectives
Writing
Day
Writing
Day
Writing/
Evaluation Day
Introduce
Friendly Letter
Pronouns
Spelling
Writing
Day
Writing/
Evaluation Day
Review
Modes
Mechanics Review/
TMT
TMT correction/
Review rubrics
Mode
Selection
Writing
Day
Work
Day
Work
Day
Presentations
Portfolio
Assembly
Subject
Make-up
Thirty Day Plan
Day One: Introduction to Inventions
Students take a pretest using a modified form of word association and web. Introduce the
performance task. Students tour the school as a whole-class and then split into smaller
groups. They observe items in the school which are inventions and gain inspiration for their
project. For homework, the students tour their homes or other locations for additional ideas.
Day Two: Invent to Present
I present my video examples of the three modes, emphasizing expression. Within groups,
students practice writing their own paragraphs in a certain mode, presenting them to
classmates and identifying others works as representations of a certain mode.
Day Three: Library Research
Students use the library to research their chosen topic. They use the internet and books.
Students are required to use at least three internet sources and two book sources.
Day Four: Library Research
Students use the library to research their chosen topic. They use the internet and books.
Students are required to use at least three internet sources and two book sources.
Day Five: Writing as Expression/Reflection
Return to my examples and discuss the roles that I portrayed. Students share ideas of how
their newly-research topics could be portrayed in each of the modes. Discuss affects that
mechanics can have on expression in writing. Discuss essential questions and big ideas, write
these on tagboard and add to the bulletin board. Students reflect on their plans for their
project and how they will write expressively; with all reflections they also have the
opportunity to note any concerns that they have so that we can address questions.
Day Six: Introduce Informative
Students learn about the function of informative writing. Focus on expression of facts.
Discuss roles which would be ideal for this mode (newscaster, scientist, inventor). Hand
out/discuss informative paper rubrics. Students begin drafting their informative papers.
Day Seven: Complete Sentences (part 1 of 2)
Hand out mechanics rubrics and discuss importance of mechanics in facilitating expression.
Students review sentence beginnings/endings and learn about nouns. Students create their
own Mad Libs which must have proper capitalization and punctuation, while leaving a space
for multiple nouns. Students exchange papers and fill in funny nouns in one another’s papers.
Day Eight: Complete Sentences (part 2 of 2)
Students learn about verbs as action words. Students play a modified version of charades to
get a sense of verbs as the actions that they perform. Students identify verbs in writing.
Students practice writing complete sentences, incorporating skills from yesterday and today.
Day Nine: Writing Day
Students are given time to write their informative papers. With all modes, the students may
begin by either writing or typing (whichever they are most comfortable with); however, they
must have all papers typed for their portfolios.
Day Ten: Writing/Evaluation Day
Students have additional work time. They may also conference with peers and/or teacher.
Prior to the start of the unit, students were taught to peer conference constructively. Morning
journal is a reflection on where they have seen informative expression in their daily lives.
Day Eleven: Introduce Descriptive
Students learn about the function of descriptive writing. Focus is on expression using
descriptors/adjectives. Discuss roles which would be ideal for this mode (salesperson,
inventor). Hand out/discuss descriptive paper rubrics.
Day Twelve: Adjectives
Students learn about adjectives as words to describe nouns. Students take a walk and play “I
Spy” to describe nature. Students describe mystery items using three adjectives. Students
compose progressive poems using at least five adjectives.
Day Thirteen: Writing Day
Students are given time to write their descriptive papers. There can also be additional class
time spent on adjectives if the concept is not yet clear to all.
Day Fourteen: Writing Day
Students are given time to write their descriptive papers.
Day Fifteen: Writing/Evaluation Day
Students have additional work time. They may also conference with peers and/or teacher.
Morning journal is a reflection on at least four of their favorite adjectives or descriptors and
why.
Day Sixteen: Introduce Friendly Letter
Students learn about the function of friendly letters. Focus is on expression using familiarity
and the letter format. Students read and learn from letter from new student. Students write
letter to new student. Review roles which would be ideal for this mode (fan club member,
friend). Hand out/discuss friendly letter rubrics. Students begin drafting the friendly letter for
their portfolios.
Day Seventeen: Pronouns
Students learn about pronouns as replacements of proper nouns. Students work in groups to
make short presentations in which they introduce themselves to the new student using at least
five pronouns. An example would be something such as: I like to swim. He likes to ride bike.
She mountain climbs. They play soccer. Together, we all like to play sports. All students
must contribute to the writing and presentation of the skit, to do this they may need to
perform more than one scenario.
Day Eighteen: Spelling
Students learn spelling of commonly used homophones. Students see a couple examples
acted out by the teacher. Students brainstorm common homophones they know of. Teacher
presents important homophones overlooked by students. Students write their own sentences
using homophones correctly. Students revise the rough drafts of their three papers.
Day Nineteen: Writing Day
Students are given time to write their friendly letters. Remind students that the school’s
address is featured on the bulletin board in the letter that we wrote as a class. Students should
use the school’s address in their letters to the “new student” not a home address (due to
potential safety and confidentiality issues.)
Day Twenty: Writing/Evaluation Day
Students have additional work time. They may also conference with peers and/or teacher.
Morning journal has students write a letter to one of their friends, family members, teachers,
etc (this one will not be graded or included in the portfolio, but mailed/delivered to the
person.)
Day Twenty-One: Review 3 modes
Students lead discussion on the three modes of writing. Expression in terms of type and roles
are central. Students reflect on which modes they feel most and least comfortable with and
why.
Day Twenty-Two: Review mechanics and short teacher-made test
Students work in groups to answer each others questions on mechanics which have arisen
during writing, with teacher circulating to clarify. Teacher initiates group discussion on
issues which are troubling multiple students. Students complete a short teacher-made test to
evaluate their understanding of the three modes and the mechanics which dictate writing.
Day Twenty-Three: Test correction and Introduce presentation/portfolio requirements
Review commonly missed questions from the test to clarify misconceptions. Go over whole
test and take questions. Introduce the requirements for the portfolio that all three pieces will
need to be typed and included, along with reflections that have been done throughout the unit
(do not have to be typed.) Students have already been told the requirements of each
individual piece in its introduction. Hand out/discuss presentation rubrics.
Day Twenty-Four: Mode selection
Students brainstorm in small groups how to present their favorite piece. Students turn in a
rough plan for approval before class ends.
Day Twenty-Five: Writing Day
Work day to modify paper for presentation. All students conference individually or in small
groups (two to four students) with teacher between today and day twenty-six.
Day Twenty-Six: Work Day
Students work on polishing their pieces to be placed in their portfolio. Students work on their
presentations. Complete any remaining student/teacher conferences.
Day Twenty-Seven: Work Day
Students work on polishing their pieces to be placed in their portfolio. Students work on their
presentations.
Day Twenty-Eight: Presentations
The students present their works to their parents and the other third grade classes. (Class is
longer as the work for math and social studies classes is moved to the last day of the unit.)
Day Twenty Nine: Portfolio assembly/Final reflection
Students complete the posttest, which is the same word association and web as the pretest.
Students have the remainder of the class period to finalize their portfolios and complete the
final reflection. The final reflection should be written as a letter to me, employing all of the
modes, telling me what they thought of the unit as a whole. All portfolios are due at the end
of day thirty.
Day Thirty: Make-up Math/Social Studies
Get ready to be Inventive and Expressive!!!
A new student has moved to our country and does not know anything
about your invention! It is your task to help your new classmate.
By becoming a newscaster, a scientist, an inventor, a salesperson, a fan
club member, a friend, or any other fitting role you get approved by me,
you will help our new friend learn about the invention.
You will assemble a portfolio which includes all three styles of writing
(using appropriate expression of course!) and your reflections.
You will then choose your favorite piece and present it to your
classmates and parents. We all want to learn from you. Remember to
focus on expression and mechanics so that your new classmate will be
able to understand you!
Hold onto this paper to help you keep track of your work and
brainstorming as we work together to learn.
Topic _____________________________________________________
Informative ________________________________________________
Descriptive ________________________________________________
Friendly Letter _____________________________________________
As you learn about each mode of writing, you will get more specifics on
the requirements of the projects.
Portfolio Rubric (116 points)
Notes:
Traits
Scale
Descriptive
(24 points)
Informative
(24 points)
Friendly
Letter
(24 points)
Mechanics
(24 points)
Reflections
(4 points)
Timeliness/Neatness
(4 points)
4
All reflections are complete
Show evidence of thought
Turned in on time
Typed
3
All reflections
are complete
One day late
Typed
2
One reflection missing
Two days late
Typed
1
Two reflections missing
Three days late
Typed
Score
Weights
*1
*1
*1
*2
*3
*2
Weighted
Score
Presentation Rubric (28 points)
Traits
Scale
Paper Edited and Approved
Expression
Timely and Prepared
4
Paper evaluated by self, peer, and
teacher
Appropriate expression
for mode
Paper
Materials
Practice (self-eval)
On time
3
Paper evaluated by self and teacher
Expression representative of
a different mode
Missing one element
2
Paper evaluated by peer and teacher
Little expression
Missing two elements
1
Paper not evaluated/approved by teacher
--- and/or ---
Rough draft presented
Monotone
Missing three elements
Score
Weights
*2
*3
*2
Weighted Score
Notes:
Informative Paper (24 points)
Traits
Scale
Expression
Facts
Factual
Structure
4
Expressive, fits mode,
integrates another mode
5 facts
0 factual errors
5 paragraphs
3
Expression that
fits mode
4 facts
1 factual error
4 paragraphs
2
Expression
does not fit mode
3 facts
2 factual errors
3 paragraphs
1
Little expression
2 facts
3 factual errors
2 paragraphs
Score
Weights
*2
*2
*1
*1
Weighted Score
Notes:
Descriptive Paper (24 points)
Traits
Scale
Expression
Descriptors/Adjectives
Factual
Structure
4
Expressive, fits mode,
integrates another mode
7 descriptors/adjectives
0 factual errors
5 paragraphs
3
Expression that
fits mode
6-5 descriptors/adjectives
1 factual error
4 paragraphs
2
Expression
does not fit mode
4-3 descriptors/adjectives
2 factual errors
3 paragraphs
1
Little expression
2 descriptors/adjectives
3 factual errors
2 paragraphs
Score
Weights
*2
*2
*1
*1
Weighted Score
Notes:
Friendly Letter (24 points)
Traits
Scale
Expression
Format
Factual
Structure
4
Expressive, fits mode,
integrates another mode
All components of a letter
are present
0 factual errors
5 paragraphs
3
Expression that
fits mode
Missing 1-2 components
1 factual error
4 paragraphs
2
Expression
does not fit mode
Missing 3-4 components
2 factual errors
3 paragraphs
1
Little expression
Lacking letter format
3 factual errors
2 paragraphs
Score
Weights
*2
*2
*1
*1
Weighted Score
Notes:
Mechanics (24 points)
Traits
Scale
Grammar
Punctuation
Sentence Structure
Spelling
4
1 or fewer
grammatical errors
1 or fewer
punctuation errors
1 or fewer
fragments
1 or fewer
spelling errors
3
2-3 grammatical errors
2-3 punctuation errors
2-3 fragments
2-3 spelling errors
2
4-5 grammatical errors
4-5 punctuation errors
4-5 fragments
4-5 spelling errors
1
6-7 grammatical errors
6-7 punctuation errors
6-7 fragments
6-7 spelling errors
Score
Weights
*2
*2
*1
*1
Weighted Score
Notes:
NAME ______________________
TEST YOUR INVENTIVENESS (40 points)
Matching (9 points)
Match one item from column a-c with the mode that it best fits. Write your answer in the space
to the left of the number.
____ 1. descriptive a. facts
____ 2. informative b. format
____ 3. friendly letter c. adjectives
Match one item from column a-c and one from column d-f with the punctuation mark that they
best fit. Write your answer in the space to the left of the number.
____; ____ 4. . a. period d. excited
____; ____ 5. ! b. question mark e. statement
____; ____ 6. ? c. exclamation mark f. asking
Completion (8 points)
Fill in the blank and explain your reasoning.
7. _______________ is important for interesting, meaningful writing.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
8. If I were a(n) ________________________, I could express myself using the descriptive
mode.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
9. If I were a(n) ________________________, I could express myself using the informative
mode.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
10. If I were a(n) ________________________, I could express myself using the friendly letter
mode.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Multiple Choice (5 points)
Write the correct response of a, b, or c in the space to the left of the number.
____ 13. I ______________ the story with my family.
a. red
b. read
c. reed
____ 14. ______________ asking for a treat.
a. Their
b. There
c. They’re
____ 15. I like the bright, orange towel that you used when it was blistering hot on the white
sand beach.
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
____ 16. The boomerang uses Bernoulli’s principle to help it fly.
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
____ 17. Dear Abby,
Thank you for the flowers.
Sincerely,
Martha
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
+/O (4 points)
If the sentence is structured correctly, write + and explain your reasoning.
If the sentence is structured incorrectly, write O and explain your reasoning.
____ 11. i ran to the park.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
____ 12. We are going to Valleyfair!
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Essay (14 points)
Your essay should include at least one paragraph and complete sentences. You should also use
proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Your essay should include at least four nouns, two pronouns, three adjectives, and four verbs.
They must be labeled as follows in order to receive credit. Place a box around nouns (4),
triangle around pronouns (2), oval around adjectives (3), and underline verbs (4).
Write an essay using one of the following prompts or create your own.
Jill and Anna ran a marathon…
Jennifer read a book…
Adam asked a question about…
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
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NAME ____Answer Key_______
TEST YOUR INVENTIVENESS (40 points)
Matching (9 points)
Match one item from column a-c with the mode that it best fits. Write your answer in the space
to the left of the number.
__c__ 1. descriptive a. facts
__a__ 2. informative b. format
__b__ 3. friendly letter c. adjectives
Match one item from column a-c and one from column d-f with the punctuation mark that they
best fit. Write your answer in the space to the left of the number.
__a__; __e__ 4. . a. period d. excited
__c__; __d__ 5. ! b. question mark e. statement
__b__; __f__ 6. ? c. exclamation mark f. asking
Completion (8 points)
Fill in the blank and explain your reasoning.
7. ____Expression______ is important for interesting, meaningful writing.
__Answers will vary_______________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
8. If I were a(n) _____salesperson______, I could express myself using the descriptive
mode.
__They use a lot of adjectives to make items sound good so that people want to buy them.
________________________________________________________________________
9. If I were a(n) __newscaster/tour guide__, I could express myself using the informative
mode.
__They give the facts.
________________________________________________________________________
10. If I were a(n) __friend/fan club member__, I could express myself using the friendly letter
mode.
__The letter must be addressing someone so they can read it.
________________________________________________________________________
Answers will vary and they will be
accepted as long as the explanations fit.
Sample answers are given.
Multiple Choice (5 points)
Write the correct response of a, b, or c in the space to the left of the number.
__b__ 13. I ______________ the story with my family.
a. red
b. read
c. reed
__c__ 14. ______________ asking for a treat.
a. Their
b. There
c. They’re
__a__ 15. I like the bright, orange towel that you used when it was blistering hot on the white
sand beach.
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
__b__ 16. The boomerang uses Bernoulli’s principle to help it fly.
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
__c__ 17. Dear Abby,
Thank you for the flowers.
Sincerely,
Martha
a. descriptive
b. informative
c. friendly letter
+/O (4 points)
If the sentence is structured correctly, write + and explain your reasoning.
If the sentence is structured incorrectly, write O and explain your reasoning.
__O__ 11. i ran to the park.
__I ran to the park.____
__Sentence beginnings must be capitalized.
__+__ 12. We are going to Valleyfair!
__Sentence beginnings and endings are done correctly.___
Essay (14 points)
Your essay should include at least one paragraph and complete sentences. You should also use
proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
Your essay should include at least four nouns, two pronouns, three adjectives, and four verbs.
They must be labeled as follows in order to receive credit. Place a box around nouns (4),
triangle around pronouns (2), oval around adjectives (3), and underline verbs (4).
Write an essay using one of the following prompts or create your own.
Jill and Anna ran a marathon…
Jennifer read a book…
Adam asked a question about…
__Answers will vary. Any school appropriate essay will be accepted. Points will be awarded
based on proper use of grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Points will also be awarded for use
of complete sentences within at least one full paragraph.
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DAY 5 DAY 10 DAY 15
In Class Morning Journal Morning Journal
What are your plans for
your project? How will
you write expressively?
Where have you seen
informative expression in
your daily life? Write
about at least three
sightings and explain why
they are informative.
Write about four of your
favorite adjectives or
descriptors. Why are they
your favorites?
DAY 20 DAY 21 DAY 29
Morning Journal In Class In Class
Write a letter to one of
your friends or family
members. Use the
correct form because it
will be mailed out.
Which mode are you most
comfortable, why? Which
mode are you least
comfortable with, why? Is
there anything that you
need help with on your
presentation/portfolio?
Write a letter to me, tying in
all of the modes, telling me
what you think of the unit we
just completed.
Name _________________
Self-Evaluation on Practice
I feel prepared for my presentation.
I practiced my speech in front of a mirror or video camera.
I practiced my speech for another person (adult or peer).
Notes:
Writing Evaluation: Descriptive
Student Peer Comments
Displays a positive
attitude
Make good use of
classroom time
Appropriate topic choice
Factual information
Draft focuses on one
idea
Writes complete
sentences
At least 5 paragraphs
Proper mechanics
Adjectives/Descriptors
Expressive (correct
mode)
Key: 3 = Yes 2 = Sometimes 1 = Not Yet
Writing Evaluation: Informative
Student Peer Comments
Displays a positive
attitude
Make good use of
classroom time
Appropriate topic choice
Factual information
Draft focuses on one
idea
Writes complete
sentences
At least 5 paragraphs
Proper mechanics
Facts
Expressive (correct
mode)
Key: 3 = Yes 2 = Sometimes 1 = Not Yet
Writing Evaluation: Friendly Letter
Student Peer Comments
Displays a positive
attitude
Make good use of
classroom time
Appropriate topic choice
Factual information
Draft focuses on one
idea
Writes complete
sentences
At least 5 paragraphs
Proper mechanics
Format
Expressive (correct
mode)
Key: 3 = Yes 2 = Sometimes 1 = Not Yet
Writing Evaluation:
Student Peer Comments
Displays a positive
attitude
Make good use of
classroom time
Appropriate topic choice
Factual information
Draft focuses on one
idea
Writes complete
sentences
At least 5 paragraphs
Proper mechanics
Adjectives/Facts/Format
Expressive (correct
mode)
Key: 3 = Yes 2 = Sometimes 1 = Not Yet
Name ________________________
Inventive and Expressive: First Look
Fill out these pages as best you can. Do not worry if there are blank spaces. You are not expected
to know everything, because this is what we will be learning about in the coming weeks. I just
want to have an idea of what you already know.
On the short line to the left of each word, draw a symbol to note your knowledge of the term.
O = I have never heard of this term before
√ = I have heard of this term, but I do not know a lot about it
* = I know a lot about this term
For any of the words that you put a √ or * next to, write what you know about it on the long line
to the right.
_____ Invention ________________________________________________________________
_____ Expressive _______________________________________________________________
_____ Brainstorm _______________________________________________________________
_____ Research ________________________________________________________________
_____ Internet _________________________________________________________________
_____ Sources _________________________________________________________________
_____ Roles ___________________________________________________________________
_____ Jobs ____________________________________________________________________
_____ Informative writing ________________________________________________________
_____ Descriptive writing ________________________________________________________
_____ Friendly letter ____________________________________________________________
_____ Mode ___________________________________________________________________
_____ Evaluation _______________________________________________________________
_____ Portfolio ________________________________________________________________
_____ Presentation ______________________________________________________________
_____ Journal __________________________________________________________________
_____ Reflection _______________________________________________________________
_____ Mechanics _______________________________________________________________
On the next page is a web which covers mechanic. The bubbles which stem off of Mechanics to
form a web are Why?, Complete Sentences, Grammar, and Punctuation. In the bubbles
connected to each term, write everything you know about that word (one item per bubble.) Feel
free to draw in more bubbles if you know more than two facts about a term.
Name ________________________
Inventive and Expressive: Second Look
This looks like the worksheet that I passed out a few weeks ago. Now we are at the end of the
unit. It is time to check and see how much everyone has learned. Fill everything out as best you
can. Make sure to fill in the lines to the right with explanations of what you have learned.
On the short line to the left of each word, draw a symbol to note your knowledge of the term.
O = I have never heard of this term before
√ = I have heard of this term, but I do not know a lot about it
* = I know a lot about this term
For any of the words that you put a √ or * next to, write what you know about it on the long line
to the right.
_____ Invention ________________________________________________________________
_____ Expressive _______________________________________________________________
_____ Brainstorm _______________________________________________________________
_____ Research ________________________________________________________________
_____ Internet _________________________________________________________________
_____ Sources _________________________________________________________________
_____ Roles ___________________________________________________________________
_____ Jobs ____________________________________________________________________
_____ Informative writing ________________________________________________________
_____ Descriptive writing ________________________________________________________
_____ Friendly letter ____________________________________________________________
_____ Mode ___________________________________________________________________
_____ Evaluation _______________________________________________________________
_____ Portfolio ________________________________________________________________
_____ Presentation ______________________________________________________________
_____ Journal __________________________________________________________________
_____ Reflection _______________________________________________________________
_____ Mechanics _______________________________________________________________
On the next page is a web which covers mechanic. The bubbles which stem off of Mechanics to
form a web are Why?, Complete Sentences, Grammar, and Punctuation. In the bubbles
connected to each term, write everything you know about that word (one item per bubble.) Feel
free to draw in more bubbles if you know more than two facts about a term.
Invent to Present Day 2 of 30
Teacher: Andrea Hanson
Date: TBD
Time: 50 minutes
Grade Level: 3
Description of Learners: There are twenty-six students in the class. There is a fairly even mix
of lower, middle, and higher level learners. There are also some students with learning
disabilities and behavioral issues.
Description of Teaching Environment: The classroom is set up to foster work in pairs, triads,
and groups of six. There are also wide aisles that allow the teacher to move throughout the
classroom to interact with students.
Subject Area: Language Arts
Topic: Types of writing
Lesson Context: Day 2 of 30
Goals:
The learners will understand the similarities and differences among the three modes of writing
that are covered.
The learners will have a base knowledge on which to build their abilities to write in these three
modes.
Standard(s): II. Writing
A. Types of Writing: The student will compose various pieces of writing.
1. Write in a variety of modes to express meaning, including:
a. descriptive
c. informative
d. friendly letter
Objectives:
The learner will classify each of three presented videos as representative of a certain mode of
writing, after viewing the videos and discussing their qualities with the class. (Analyze)
The learner will create a venn diagram of the three modes of writing after viewing an example of
each and discussing their qualities with the class. (Synthesize)
The learner will act out an example of one mode of writing with help of group members. (Apply)
The learner will categorize short peer presentations as examples of each mode, using the class
created venn diagram for assistance. (Synthesize)
Motivation:
Level of Concern
The writing experiences will challenge students to write expressively and bring emotion into
their writing. As students write their papers which relate to their lives, I will move among them
to offer help when needed. The group writing assignment will require participation for all
students to help them begin verbalizing their thoughts.
Feeling Tone
Students are greeted in the morning as they enter the room and are further given the opportunity
to be heard in the classroom by participating in morning meeting. Student work adorns the walls,
both in the form of classwork and an artist’s wall on which students can place creations from
home.
Success
Each lesson is evaluated prior to teaching to ensure that prerequisites have been met. They will
also be evaluated to ensure that students are challenged enough to feel success when the work is
completed, but easy enough that the students do not become frustrated with work and stop trying.
To achieve this level that fosters success, lessons may need to be differentiated or some students
may need additional assistance.
Interest
Many of the writings that students complete are related to their lives. Examples that are
presented in class often contain students’ names and personal experiences in positive situations.
Novelty is added to lessons by changing inflection in the voice, moving throughout the room,
mixing lecture and questioning, involving students in group work, and using the internet to
research their topic.
Knowledge of Results
Feedback is one of the most important motivators in the classroom. Students receive feedback on
their daily work, paper drafts, and final projects (both performance task and portfolio.) Feedback
is both verbal and written. Students receive notes that specify accomplishments and deficits so
that students can improve accordingly, rather than receiving holistic grades which give no guides
for improvement.
Intrinsic and Extrinsic
Intrinsic motivation is fostered in students by providing opportunities for them to participate in
interesting activities that relate to their lives.
Materials/Resources Needed:
Teacher:
Salesperson outfit (blazer and tametag)
Scientist outfit (lab coat and goggles)
Three videos on flash drive
Written examples of three modes
Computer and projector to play videos on
Venn diagram (28 copies)
Venn diagram answer key
Whiteboard
Whiteboard markers
Tagboard with venn diagram skeleton drawn on it
Student:
Notebook
Pencil
Prerequisites:
The learner will have an understanding of paragraph structure.
The learner will have an understanding of basic essay form.
The learner will know how a venn diagram functions.
Review:
Host a group discussion to allow each student to share his/her ideas gained during the invention
tour the previous day.
Anticipatory Set:
Teacher dresses as a salesperson and then changes into a scientist outfit.
Teacher previews that students will be learning about how different expressions in writing can be
portrayed as “jobs”.
Note that in these videos I will be portraying three different jobs which they will get to help
figure out and relate to a mode of writing.
Objective:
It is our job to watch the three videos and decide what the similarities and differences are among
the presentations and label them as being a certain mode of expression.
We will then practice writing our own examples of these modes.
Input and Modeling:
Hand out a blank copy of the venn diagram.
Students watch the three videos of the teacher acting out each mode of writing. Throughout the
videos they should begin thinking about the characteristics of each mode and how they could
fit into the venn diagram.
After each movie, students break into groups to discuss and take notes the “job” that they think I
was portraying and what characteristics made them think that way.
Repeat until all three modes have been watched and discussed in small groups.
Students share their ideas with the class (write the jobs on the left side of the whiteboard.)
ex. salesperson
fan club member
scientist
Discuss the qualities of the movie that made them think of that job.
ex. salesperson -- describing everything, making things sound interesting
fan club member -- conversational
scientist -- facts
On right side of the whiteboard, write the three modes: informative, descriptive, and friendly
letter.
Discuss the qualities of the three modes and connect with lines each mode to its related job(s).
Checking for Understanding:
As teacher circulates through the room, students fill in the main circles of their venn diagrams
with at least one job and at least one quality for each mode of writing.
Review the qualities within the circles by asking students to explain their reasoning:
Q: Can you tell me what the main characteristics of a friendly letter are? (Knowledge)
Q: How do you distinguish between a descriptive and an informative paper? (Analyze)
With answers from students, fill in the main circles of a large venn diagram on tagboard.
(See the included sample answer key as a guide.)
Discuss similarities amongst the three modes:
Q: Now that we have contrasted the modes, how do they compare (are the same)?
Take suggestions from students on how to fill in the class venn diagram for
similarities between modes. (Evaluate)
Q: What do all of the modes of writing have in common?
Discuss qualities as a class until all can fill in the center of the venn diagram with
the understanding that all of the modes of writing are used to portray a type of
expression. (Evaluate)
Guided Practice:
In their table groups of six, students write and perform a brief paragraph on their assigned mode.
In their groups of six, the other students categorize the presentations as a designated mode,
giving reasons to support.
Discussion time available for when groups disagree on the mode presented.
Closure:
Review the venn diagram. (Comprehend)
Note that students will have the chance to write in all three modes throughout the coming weeks.
Independent Practice:
Students begin brainstorming how they could use each mode to represent their topic.
Further practice will come following the more detailed explanation of each mode throughout the
next three weeks.
Lesson Evaluation:
Circulate throughout the room during work time when students are creating their modes to
present. Ensure that all students are participating in the writing and presentation.
Collect the papers to gauge students’ early understandings of the material.
Observe the students as they guess the presented modes and justify their answers. This will help
to focus the amount of time that needs to be spent presenting each mode in the coming weeks.
Blooms Taxonomy:
The levels that are included in this lesson are indicated in italics behind the objectives, questions,
and/or steps to which they relate.
This lesson features activities at the following levels:
Knowledge
Comprehend
Apply
Analyze
Synthesize
Evaluate
Sponge Activities:
Students choose an object (piece of furniture in the room, favorite food, etc) to write a paragraph
of each mode about.
Students search the newspaper or magazines and identify each piece of writing as mainly
descriptive, informative, or friendly letter.
Students watch video clips and identify the main mode that they employ.
Informative Paper
Boomerangs are complex creations which have been used for hunting and sport.
The boomerangs are able to stay in flight for three reasons. They work with the air, are
strategically designed, and are thrown in a specific manner.
A boomerang works with the air to stay in flight. As it flies, the boomerang pushes
air down. The movement of the air channeling downward causes the wings to react and
holds the boomerang up. The combination of high pressure on the bottom and low
pressure on the top prompts the wing to spread slightly and speed up. This complex
reaction to air movement is facilitated by strategic design.
The design of boomerangs has evolved greatly over time; however, the main
principle remains the same. The top surface is slightly curved to allow for sustained, easy
flight. The boomerangs can be in any shape of the alphabet or tri-pointed. The most
traditional shape is the V. This shape allows boomerangs centers of spin and lift to vary,
allowing for flight and return. This unique design is supplemented with a specific method
of throwing the boomerang.
A prescribed method of boomerang release is required for optimal flight. The
boomerang should be thrown sidearm. This motion is similar to the throw of a Frisbee or
baseball from second to first bases. Prepared boomerang throwers, especially novices
who are not accustomed to the catch, should wear heavy gloves. In flight, the boomerang
builds up so much speed and energy in its journey that is can be painful to receive. In
order to achieve sustained flight which returns the boomerang to the thrower, he/she must
be prepared to properly throw and catch the boomerang.
This strategic design of boomerangs allows them to actively work with the air to
promote flight. When these two factors combine with a skilled throw, the result is a
spectacle of flight. This makes for an amazing display of flight as either sportsmanship or
hunting.
www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/73646/boomerang
www.encarta.msn.com/features/columns/?article=bn_boomerang
Descriptive Paper
Shapes from A to Z. Sizes from ten to fifty meters. There are three different stages
of boomerangs which are available for different learning levels. No where will you find a
piece of sporting equipment with more exciting, imaginative options or design.
The beginning level boomerang is most often either tri-bladed (such as this
elegantly crafted, orange and white beauty) or the traditional V-shaped model. These
boomerangs are designed from lightweight material that does not take a great deal of
force to throw. This model is perfect for any amateur thrower who wishes to get a start in
the sport. Just be sure not to let the boomerang get away from you on a windy day -- you
want an intermediate model for those blustery days.
Intermediate boomerangs can be designed in nearly any shape. With these models
you are lucky enough to receive heavier boomerang. This boomerang requires a slightly
higher level of skill for a positive throw; however, it is well worth the increased practice
time. This boomerang, when set in motion by an experienced thrower, is capable of
varied patterns of flight. The amazing capabilities of this boomerang are only topped by
our advanced, competition boomerangs.
As with the intermediate model, competition boomerangs can be purchased in a
variety of shapes, sizes, and colors. This beauty is an offset V-shape with vibrant blue
coloring. They are also sold in a variety of weights. Our MTA (short for maximum time
aloft) boomerangs are incredibly lightweight. These boomerangs are designed to stay in
the air for extended periods of time. We also sell heavy boomerangs which are weighed
with lead so that they will have long flight patterns before returning to their thrower.
These models are quite advanced and meant for serious throwers.
With boomerangs that come in numerous shapes, sizes, colors, weights, and levels,
we have the best fit for any thrower. Whether you are a new thrower or a professional we
are happy to serve you. We will help you find the highest quality boomerang on the
market.
www.boomerangs.org
Friendly Letter
301 17th
St SW
Austin, MN 55912
March 16, 2009
Dear Haruki Taketomi,
You are the best boomerang thrower I have ever heard of. You obviously work
very hard to do well in your sport. I have followed your career for years and I have
always been impressed.
I am writing to congratulate you on setting the international record for consecutive
catch. I am incredibly impressed by your 2251 catches. You are quite dedicated to have
thrown for almost twelve hours.
Your skill and record setting are amazing. I learned that you beat the Australian
record for consecutive catches by over 1400 catches. You have accomplished such a great
feat this year.
I am only beginning to learn to throw. I look up to you for all of the work that you
have done. I hope one day to be a skilled boomerang thrower also.
Best of luck in retaining your record. Keep up your hard work. You are an
amazing athlete.
Sincerely,
Ms. Hanson
P.S. I cannot wait to hear more in the news about your boomerang throwing!
www.boomerang.org.au/news/
Descriptive
Paper
Informative
Paper
Friendly
Letter
Name _____________________
Venn Diagram: Modes of Writing
Descriptive
Paper
Informative
Paper
Friendly
Letter
Focus on adjectives
Write like a salesperson
Conversational tone
Write like a friend/
fan club member
Focus on facts
Write like a reporter/
tour guide/scientist
Expression
Focus
on uses
Explain invention Focus on pros
Venn Diagram: Modes of Writing -- Possible Answer Key
Introduce Informative Day 6 of 30
Teacher: Andrea Hanson
Date: TBD
Time: 50 minutes
Grade Level: 3
Description of Learners: There are twenty-six students in the class. There is a fairly even mix
of lower, middle, and higher level learners. There are also some students with learning
disabilities and behavioral issues.
Description of Teaching Environment: The classroom is set up to foster work in pairs, triads,
and groups of six. There are also wide aisles that allow the teacher to move throughout the
classroom to interact with students.
Subject Area: Language Arts
Topic: Informative writing
Lesson Context: Day 6 of 30
Goals:
The learners will understand that the most distinctive quality of informative papers is the
presentation of factual information.
The learners will begin to relate their learning to their own papers on their chosen invention.
Standard(s):
II. Writing
A. Types of Writing: The student will compose various pieces of writing.
1. Write in a variety of modes to express meaning, including:
c. informative
Objectives:
The learner will understand that informative essays should be focused on presentation of facts
after revisiting and discussing a venn diagram that depicts this fact. (Comprehend)
The learner will be able to identify careers which use mainly informative speech, after a class
discussion/debate. (Knowledge)
The learner will be able to defend his/her choice of informative speech careers while in a debate.
(Evaluate)
The learner will develop topic ideas for their informative papers, after looking over their research
and discussing facts with a partner. (Apply)
Motivation:
Level of Concern
The writing experiences will challenge students to write expressively and bring emotion into
their writing. As students write their papers which relate to their lives, I will move among them
to offer help when needed. The group writing assignment will require participation for all
students to help them begin verbalizing their thoughts.
Feeling Tone
Students are greeted in the morning as they enter the room and are further given the opportunity
to be heard in the classroom by participating in morning meeting. Student work adorns the walls,
both in the form of classwork and an artist’s wall on which students can place creations from
home.
Success
Each lesson is evaluated prior to teaching to ensure that prerequisites have been met. They will
also be evaluated to ensure that students are challenged enough to feel success when the work is
completed, but easy enough that the students do not become frustrated with work and stop trying.
To achieve this level that fosters success, lessons may need to be differentiated or some students
may need additional assistance.
Interest
Many of the writings that students complete are related to their lives. Examples that are
presented in class often contain students’ names and personal experiences in positive situations.
Novelty is added to lessons by changing inflection in the voice, moving throughout the room,
mixing lecture and questioning, involving students in group work, and using the internet to
research their topic.
Knowledge of Results
Feedback is one of the most important motivators in the classroom. Students receive feedback on
their daily work, paper drafts, and final projects (both performance task and portfolio.) Feedback
is both verbal and written. Students receive notes that specify accomplishments and deficits so
that students can improve accordingly, rather than receiving holistic grades which give no guides
for improvement.
Intrinsic and Extrinsic
Intrinsic motivation is fostered in students by providing opportunities for them to participate in
interesting activities that relate to their lives.
Materials/Resources Needed:
Teacher:
Tagboard with blank venn diagram drawn on it
Video of teacher acting out informative writing
Tagboard with informative paper example written on it
Markers
Informative Rubric (28 copies)
Class roster
Pencil
Student:
Notebook
Pencil
Research on individual invention (compiled during work time last week)
Prerequisites:
Students will have collected facts about their inventions.
Review:
Refer to venn diagram on tagboard posted to the bulletin board.
Review what we have already learned about informative papers. (Comprehend)
ex. Facts
Presented like a scientist
Anticipatory Set:
Review the video of the teacher presenting as a scientist teaching about boomerangs.
Objective:
We are going to learn how to present information in a paper that is factual.
Input and Modeling:
Take out and read aloud the example informative paper from the video which is written on
tagboard.
As a class, discuss why this paper is informative.
ex. it teaches us about the invention
there are a lot of facts covered
As a class, underline the facts that are present in the example. Post the completed example on the
bulletin board.
Checking for Understanding:
Discuss types of jobs that use informative speech.
Students brainstorm ideas and raise their hands.
Call on one student, he/she names a job.
Ask all students to raise their hand and hold up five fingers if they agree and a fist if they
disagree.
Call on at least one person who raised five fingers and at least one who made a fist.
Ask both/all students to argue their side and tell the class why the job described is or is not
representative of informative speech. (Evaluate)
Give the student who noted the job an opportunity to defend his/her selection as well.
Continue noting jobs until all students have had a chance to either note a possible job or
comment on another person’s idea.
Guided Practice:
Individually, have students brainstorm what aspect of their invention they could write an
informative paper on and what would make it informative.
Students write their ideas. Teacher circulates to check that all students have strong subtopics and
rationale.
Students who wish to share with the class can do so to give classmates more ideas to run with.
Students peruse their research to find at least four facts about their invention.
Students share their facts with a partner.
The partners evaluate each others facts to ensure that they are facts rather than opinions. The
teacher is available to help when questions arise.
The teacher is circulating throughout the classroom to ensure that all students are reading facts.
Closure:
Review that informative papers focus on facts. (Comprehend)
Hand out and discuss the rubric for the informative paper that will be placed in their portfolio, so
that they know the expectations.
Independent Practice:
Students begin writing the first drafts of their informative papers, using the research that they
completed last week and worked with today in class.
Lesson Evaluation:
During “Check for Understanding”, on a class roster note how many times each child
participates and the types of comments made (cursory or detailed.)
Collect the sheets of facts each student writes on his/her chosen invention. If there are students
who have written opinions conference with them to clear up misconceptions. Return all papers
promptly so that students can use them to write their drafts.
Blooms Taxonomy:
The levels that are included in this lesson are indicated in italics behind the objectives, questions,
and/or steps to which they relate.
This lesson features activities at the following levels:
Knowledge
Comprehend
Apply
Evaluate
Sponge activities:
Students find examples of informative writing in newspapers or magazines and highlight the
facts or other characteristics that signal to them that the writing is informative.
Students research a job that uses informative writing and write an informative paragraph on their
learning.
Students listen to a newscast.
Adjectives Day 12 of 30
Teacher: Andrea Hanson
Date: TBD
Time: 50 minutes
Grade Level: 3
Description of Learners: There are twenty-six students in the class. There is a fairly even mix
of lower, middle, and higher level learners. There are also some students with learning
disabilities and behavioral issues.
Description of Teaching Environment: This lesson will begin outside as students interact with
nature to begin formulating descriptive ideas. The lesson will then move to the classroom. The
classroom is set up to foster work in pairs, triads, and groups of six. There are also wide aisles
that allow the teacher to move throughout the classroom to interact with students.
Subject Area: Language Arts
Topic: Adjectives
Lesson Context: Day 12 of 30
Goals:
The learners will learn about the function of adjectives within writing.
The learners will practice implementing adjectives into their writing to make paragraphs more
interesting.
Standard(s):
II. Writing
C. Spelling, Grammar, and Usage: The students will apply standard English
conventions when writing.
4. Apply grammar conventions correctly in writing, including:
c. adjectives
Objectives:
The learner will be able to identify words that are functioning as adjectives within a sentence
after discussing such words with the class. (Knowledge)
The learner will be able to formulate a set of adjectives to help describe items, after observing
the teacher perform such a task related to nature. (Synthesize)
The learner will construct a progressive story which builds on more adjectives with each
sentence, after hearing an example presented and discussed in class. (Apply)
Motivation:
Level of Concern
The writing experiences will challenge students to write expressively and bring emotion into
their writing. As students write their papers which relate to their lives, I will move among them
to offer help when needed. The group writing assignment will require participation for all
students to help them begin verbalizing their thoughts.
Feeling Tone
Students are greeted in the morning as they enter the room and are further given the opportunity
to be heard in the classroom by participating in morning meeting. Student work adorns the walls,
both in the form of classwork and an artist’s wall on which students can place creations from
home.
Success
Each lesson is evaluated prior to teaching to ensure that prerequisites have been met. They will
also be evaluated to ensure that students are challenged enough to feel success when the work is
completed, but easy enough that the students do not become frustrated with work and stop trying.
To achieve this level that fosters success, lessons may need to be differentiated or some students
may need additional assistance.
Interest
Many of the writings that students complete are related to their lives. Examples that are
presented in class often contain students’ names and personal experiences in positive situations.
Novelty is added to lessons by changing inflection in the voice, moving throughout the room,
mixing lecture and questioning, involving students in group work, and using the internet to
research their topic.
Knowledge of Results
Feedback is one of the most important motivators in the classroom. Students receive feedback on
their daily work, paper drafts, and final projects (both performance task and portfolio.) Feedback
is both verbal and written. Students receive notes that specify accomplishments and deficits so
that students can improve accordingly, rather than receiving holistic grades which give no guides
for improvement.
Intrinsic and Extrinsic
Intrinsic motivation is fostered in students by providing opportunities for them to participate in
interesting activities that relate to their lives.
Materials/Resources Needed:
Teacher:
Whiteboard
Whiteboard markers
Twenty-eight brown paper bags containing items from the attached list (one item per bag)
Grading sheet (for adjectives used and help required)
Pencil
Paper
Clipboard
Student:
Notebook
Pencil
Prerequisites:
Students will have prior knowledge of nouns and their function within sentences.
Review:
Students walk a lap around the school building. Discussion centers around things that we can see
which are nouns, ie trees, grass, playground, etc., getting examples from the students.
Anticipatory Set:
Students walk another lap around the school building. Discussion moves to adjectives.
Teacher (T): How could I describe the tree?
Students (S): Green, tall, leafy.
Explain rules of “I Spy”.
ex. I say: “I spy something green…”
Students guess grass, trees, etc. until they name the item I was thinking of.
If students do not guess correctly, I add on a second adjective to help describe it.
Play an “I Spy” game. Items are inspired by sights around school. As game is played, teacher
writes sentences on paper connected to clipboard to that they can be written on the whiteboard
and discussed back in the room. Included are some examples.
T: I spy something yellow. I spy something bouncy. (tetherball)
T: I spy something hard. I spy something black. (the ground)
T: I spy something crunchy. I spy something green. (leaves)
Objective:
Explain that students will be practicing how to describe things so that when they write or speak
they are able to help make a picture appear in someone’s mind.
Example: If I said that I see a ball you would probably all have different pictures in your
head, but if I said that I saw a small, bumpy, orange ball you would all have more
similar pictures in your heads.
Input and Modeling:
Explain that the describing words we used in “I Spy” are called adjectives. Write the “I Spy”
sentences on the board. Have students underline the adjectives.
Explain the game “Riddle Me Descriptive” in which students have an item inside of a brown
paper bag. They must keep the items secret while they write three adjectives to describe the
item so that the classmates will be able to guess the item.
Give an example
T: My item is red.
T: My item is shiny.
T: My item is juicy.
S: It is an apple.
Checking for Understanding:
Ask all students to write at least one example of another word that could describe an apple.
Circulate around the room. Ask students to share creative responses. Help students who are
having difficulty.
Write shared student adjectives on the whiteboard
Q: Can each of you select the two words that you think best describe the apple and write
them on your papers? (Evaluate)
Guided Practice:
Pass out the brown paper bags with items inside. (see attached list)
Give students time to generate their adjectives. Circulate to ensure understanding. (Synthesize)
Students present items one by one so that classmates can guess what their item is.
Closure:
On the whiteboard, make a list of all of the adjectives that students used.
Refer back to descriptive lesson from yesterday. Discuss why we use adjectives.
ex. To make writing more interesting. To help us see a picture in our minds.
Independent Practice:
Students compose their own poem using adjectives to make the poem increasingly interesting.
The students must use at least five different adjectives. The students must create a poem by
modifying each previous line with another adjective. Students can make up their own
beginning stem or use one that is provided. Stems and an example poem are both below. These
should be written on the whiteboard and discussed. (Synthesize)
Stems:
After school I saw…
On the way to sport practice…
While I was playing with my brother/sister…
On my birthday…
Poem Example:
On my way to the park I saw a toad.
It was a brown toad.
It was an ugly, brown toad
It was a bumpy, ugly, brown toad
It was a spotted, bumpy, ugly, brown toad
It was a slimy, spotted, bumpy, ugly, brown toad
It was a squirmy, slimy, spotted, bumpy, ugly, brown toad
And it wanted to be my new pet!
Circulate through the class to help students who have difficulty thinking of fitting adjectives.
Lesson Evaluation:
As students are reading their poems, note on a grading sheet how many adjectives they used and
how much help they required to write their poems. Meet with small groups of students during
work time in following days if there are students who are unclear on how to write descriptive
sentences using adjectives.
Blooms Taxonomy:
The levels that are included in this lesson are indicated in italics behind the objectives, questions,
and/or steps to which they relate.
This lesson features activities at the following levels:
Knowledge
Apply
Synthesize
Evaluate
Sponge Activities:
Students search newspaper or magazine articles to underline adjectives and either replace each
with a similar adjective or add on another, more descriptive adjective.
Students compile an adjective dictionary.
Students write a descriptive poem about their favorite place, food, etc.
Brown Bag Items
Grapefruit
Golf ball
Stuffed animal
Matchbox car
Lego
Marker
Crayon
Pencil
Scarf
Glove
Ziploc bag
Book
CD
Scissors
Napkin
Spool of thread
Bracelet
Clothespin
Candy
Pony band
Button
Doll
Baseball
Tape
Rubber band
Spoon
Magnetic letter
Bouncy ball
Introduce Friendly Letter Day 16 of 30
Teacher: Andrea Hanson
Date: TBD
Time: 50 minutes
Grade Level: 3
Description of Learners: There are twenty-six students in the class. There is a fairly even mix
of lower, middle, and higher level learners. There are also some students with learning
disabilities and behavioral issues.
Description of Teaching Environment: The classroom is set up to foster work in pairs, triads,
and groups of six. There are also wide aisles that allow the teacher to move throughout the
classroom to interact with students.
Subject Area: Language Arts
Topic: Friendly Letter
Lesson Context: Day 16 of 30
Goals:
The learners will have an understanding of why friendly letters are written.
The learners will have an understanding of how friendly letters are formatted.
Standard(s):
II. Writing
A. Types of Writing: The student will compose various pieces of writing.
1. Write in a variety of modes to express meaning, including:
d. friendly letter
Objectives:
The learner will distinguish between the format of typical essays and friendly letters after
viewing a class example. (Analyze)
The learner will organize the elements of a friendly letter when provided with a bank of
components in random order. (Synthesize)
The learner will compose a friendly letter to the new student with the cooperation of the class.
(Synthesize)
The learner will draft a friendly letter for his/her portfolio after being introduced to the format
and working through one example with the class.
Motivation:
Level of Concern
The writing experiences will challenge students to write expressively and bring emotion into
their writing. As students write their papers which relate to their lives, I will move among them
to offer help when needed. The group writing assignment will require participation for all
students to help them begin verbalizing their thoughts.
Feeling Tone
Students are greeted in the morning as they enter the room and are further given the opportunity
to be heard in the classroom by participating in morning meeting. Student work adorns the walls,
both in the form of classwork and an artist’s wall on which students can place creations from
home.
Success
Each lesson is evaluated prior to teaching to ensure that prerequisites have been met. They will
also be evaluated to ensure that students are challenged enough to feel success when the work is
completed, but easy enough that the students do not become frustrated with work and stop trying.
To achieve this level that fosters success, lessons may need to be differentiated or some students
may need additional assistance.
Interest
Many of the writings that students complete are related to their lives. Examples that are
presented in class often contain students’ names and personal experiences in positive situations.
Novelty is added to lessons by changing inflection in the voice, moving throughout the room,
mixing lecture and questioning, involving students in group work, and using the internet to
research their topic.
Knowledge of Results
Feedback is one of the most important motivators in the classroom. Students receive feedback on
their daily work, paper drafts, and final projects (both performance task and portfolio.) Feedback
is both verbal and written. Students receive notes that specify accomplishments and deficits so
that students can improve accordingly, rather than receiving holistic grades which give no guides
for improvement.
Intrinsic and Extrinsic
Intrinsic motivation is fostered in students by providing opportunities for them to participate in
interesting activities that relate to their lives.
Materials/Resources Needed:
Teacher:
Teacher or secretary to interrupt class and deliver a letter
Whiteboard
Whiteboard markers
“Giant” letter (see below to write onto one piece of tagboard)
Masking tape
Tagboard (two pieces, preferably lined)
Markers
Worksheet (28 copies)
Worksheet answer key
Construction paper (28 pieces)
Mini mailbox
Student:
Notebook
Pencil
Scissors
Glue stick
Prerequisites:
The learner will have established skills in writing complete sentences throughout the preceding
weeks in the unit.
The learner will be accustomed to writing in both paragraph and essay form of topic, three
supports, and conclusion.
Review:
Mad Libs complete sentences on the board.
Students write the sentences in their notebooks, filling in a word for each missing part of speech.
I saw a (noun) at the zoo.
I like to (verb) all day in the summer.
My favorite food is (adjective) (noun).
I asked my mother to give me five dollars to go see a (noun).
My favorite animal is a (adjective) (noun). I like watching it (verb).
Students share their sentences while we wait for the teacher or secretary to interrupt our review.
Anticipatory Set:
Another teacher or secretary knocks on the door. He/she delivers a “giant” letter addressed to
Ms. Hanson’s class, Room X from the “new student”.
Open the letter and tape it to the white board so that all students can see the outline of the letter’s
format.
Read the letter aloud.
Objective:
We want to respond to our new student’s letter.
We need to know how to write the letter, because it looks different than a normal essay.
Input and Modeling:
Dissect components of delivered letter. (Analyze)
Street address
Date
Dear ______,
Introduction
Three paragraphs
Conclusion
Sincerely,
Signature
P.S. (post script)
Discuss why components of the letter are used, students give ideas similar to those listed.
Street address (know where to send return letter to)
Date (know when letter was written)
Dear ______, (know who the letter is for)
Introduction (know what the letter is about)
Three paragraphs (body of the letter)
Conclusion (sums up the letter and maybe notes when you will write next)
Sincerely, (formal ending of the letter)
Signature (know who the letter is from)
P.S. (add anything that you forgot in the body of the letter)
Discuss inclusion of descriptive and informative modes
Descriptive (using adjectives to make writing more interesting)
Informative (facts may be necessary to convey message)
Students help Ms. Hanson write a response to the “new student” on a piece of tagboard (this
letter needs all of the components, but does not need full paragraphs.)
Checking for Understanding:
The students complete the worksheet below. The students cut the pieces out of their worksheet
and paste them to a piece of construction paper. This shows that they have an understanding of
how the components of a letter are organized and provides them with a guide to hold on to for
future reference.
Guided Practice:
Students write their own letter to the “new student”.
Students should introduce themselves, tell a little bit about their invention, and welcome the new
student.
Students label their letters to ensure that all components are included. (Knowledge)
Closure:
Students drop their letters in the mini mailbox.
Review as a class why we write letters and how they are setup.
Review the roles that friendly letters can be used for. (Comprehend)
ex. fan club member or friend
Ask if students have additional ideas to share.
Hand out and discuss the friendly letter rubric so that students are aware of the expectations.
Independent Practice:
Students begin to draft their letter for their portfolio. This must have all friendly letter
components and complete paragraphs.
Lesson Evaluation:
The teacher reads all of the letters from the mailbox to gauge students’ understanding. There is
time to review in small groups during writing/work days if there are students who have not
mastered the material.
Blooms Taxonomy:
The levels that are included in this lesson are indicated in italics behind the objectives, questions,
and/or steps to which they relate.
This lesson features activities at the following levels:
Knowledge
Comprehend
Analyze
Synthesize
Sponge activities:
Students search for letters (such as those to the editor) within the newspaper or magazines.
Students correct these letters to put them into the proper form.
Stationary is available for students to write letters to anyone in the class. These letters can be
dropped into the mini mailbox, read by the teacher to ensure that they are appropriate, and
delivered to the student.
Stationary is available for students to write letters to their friends or family members. These can
be sent out after being previewed by the teacher for pointers or without this preview.
Students can complete the jigsaw worksheet again by cutting the pieces apart, pasting them to the
construction paper, and cutting apart the construction paper so that there is a jigsaw puzzle for
he/she and the classmates to put together.
1234 Mulberry Road
Stratus, New York 98765
5/24/2009
Dear Ms. Hanson’s Class, Room 456,
I am writing to introduce myself. My name is Greg. I am very excited
to come join your class in a few weeks.
I want to tell you a little about my family. I have a father, mother, and
two brothers. I have an older brother, John, who is in fifth grade. I have a
younger brother, Adam, who is in kindergarten. I also have a dog named
Rover who is a Chocolate Labrador. I spend a lot of time at home playing
with my brothers.
I have some interests outside of playing with my brothers too. I like to
play baseball. I am excited to watch your team, the Minnesota Twins, play. I
also like to read. My favorite author is Andrew Clements. I look forward to
learning new games and activities that are popular in your town.
I have heard that you will be teaching me about inventions that I am
unfamiliar with. We just moved from a small town in Asia to here in New
York, before we move to Austin. I hope that you all have a lot to teach me. I
want to know how to run the inventions in your country. It is so nice of you
to help me learn about some common inventions.
I am glad that I could introduce myself to you. You now know a little
about my family, interests, and eagerness to learn about inventions. I will see
you all in a few weeks. Hope to hear from you soon!
Sincerely,
Greg
P.S. I have never seen snow, so I am excited to see that for the first time too!
Date
Dear ______________,
Introduction
Conclusion
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Sincerely,
Signature/Name
P.S.
Street Address
City, State Zip Code
Date
Introduction
Conclusion
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Signature/Name
Street Address
City, State Zip Code
Paragraph 3
P.S.
Dear ______________, Sincerely,
Spelling Day 18 of 30
Teacher: Andrea Hanson
Date: TBD
Time: 50 minutes
Grade Level: 3
Description of Learners: There are twenty-six students in the class. There is a fairly even mix
of lower, middle, and higher level learners. There are also some students with learning
disabilities and behavioral issues.
Description of Teaching Environment: The classroom is set up to foster work in pairs, triads,
and groups of six. There are also wide aisles that allow the teacher to move throughout the
classroom to interact with students.
Subject Area: Language Arts
Topic: Spelling common homophones
Lesson Context: Day 18 of 30
Goals:
The learners will understand that there are words that sound the same, but are spelled differently.
The learners will work on spelling homophones correctly.
Standard(s):
II. Writing
C. Spelling, Grammar, and Usage: The students will apply standard English
conventions when writing.
4. Spell common homophones correctly.
Objectives:
The learner will understand that there are words that sound the same by are spelled differently,
after being presented with examples in class. (Comprehend)
The learner will distinguish between common words that have two homophones, after discussing
common examples in class. (Analyze)
The learner will distinguish among common words that have three homophones, after discussing
common examples in class. (Analyze)
The learner will correct their classmates’ incorrectly spelled homophones, after practicing such
skills in class. (Evaluate)
Motivation:
Level of Concern
The writing experiences will challenge students to write expressively and bring emotion into
their writing. As students write their papers which relate to their lives, I will move among them
to offer help when needed. The group writing assignment will require participation for all
students to help them begin verbalizing their thoughts.
Feeling Tone
Students are greeted in the morning as they enter the room and are further given the opportunity
to be heard in the classroom by participating in morning meeting. Student work adorns the walls,
both in the form of classwork and an artist’s wall on which students can place creations from
home.
Success
Each lesson is evaluated prior to teaching to ensure that prerequisites have been met. They will
also be evaluated to ensure that students are challenged enough to feel success when the work is
completed, but easy enough that the students do not become frustrated with work and stop trying.
To achieve this level that fosters success, lessons may need to be differentiated or some students
may need additional assistance.
Interest
Many of the writings that students complete are related to their lives. Examples that are
presented in class often contain students’ names and personal experiences in positive situations.
Novelty is added to lessons by changing inflection in the voice, moving throughout the room,
mixing lecture and questioning, involving students in group work, and using the internet to
research their topic.
Knowledge of Results
Feedback is one of the most important motivators in the classroom. Students receive feedback on
their daily work, paper drafts, and final projects (both performance task and portfolio.) Feedback
is both verbal and written. Students receive notes that specify accomplishments and deficits so
that students can improve accordingly, rather than receiving holistic grades which give no guides
for improvement.
Intrinsic and Extrinsic
Intrinsic motivation is fostered in students by providing opportunities for them to participate in
interesting activities that relate to their lives.
Materials/Resources Needed:
Teacher:
Whiteboard
Whiteboard markers
Red sweater
Book
Piece of cake shaped as an “8”
Poem written on tagboard
Masking tape
Student:
Notebook
Pencil
Rough drafts of three papers
Prerequisites:
Students should have an understanding of how to form complete sentences.
Review:
Students correct the sentences that are written on the whiteboard by capitalizing the first letter
and/or adding end punctuation and writing the complete sentences in their notebooks.
i like to run in the park. (capitalize beginning I)
My favorite color is green (add a period at the end)
could you please help me carry this package (capitalize beginning C, add question mark)
After all students have completed the work, call on a few students to adjust the sentences on the
whiteboard.
Anticipatory Set:
After completing the review, the teacher sits down at the front table with a book and piece of
cake. Teacher is wearing a red sweater, reading a book, and eating a piece of cake shaped like
an 8. As students begin to wonder what the teacher is doing, discuss that there are words that
sound alike, but have different meanings.
Objective:
Let students know that we will be learning to spell these words correctly. If we use the wrong
spelling it is hard for people to understand us, so we will work to learn to use the correct
spelling of words that sound the same.
Input and Modeling:
Let students know that there are two examples of homophones that I just demonstrated.
Give students time to think and give ideas if anyone can think of which two I depicted.
Write the following sentences on the board and underline the homophones.
Read and red. (I read a book while wearing a red sweater.)
Eight and ate. (I ate a piece of cake shaped like an eight.)
Allow students to brainstorm more homophones in their triads.
Share student-created homophones with the group. (Synthesize)
Write the words on the board and have the group provide a sentence which uses both words
correctly.
Provide students with any of the following homophones which students did not already mention.
Provide the homophones and ask students for sentences which use both words correctly
(Examples are given if students are unfamiliar with the difference between/among the words.)
Allowed and aloud. (Boys are not allowed in our clubhouse where we read diaries aloud.)
See and sea. (I want to go to Europe to see the Black Sea.)
Four and for. (I need four dollars for candy.)
Son and sun. (The woman’s son is playing in the sun.)
Hear and here. (If you cannot hear me from there, you can come here.)
Your and you’re. (You’re in charge of your future.)
No and know. (I do not know how to say no when someone asks me for a favor.)
Buy, by, bye. (The milk that I want you to buy is by the yogurt, good-bye.)
There, their, they’re. (Their friends will be there to help them, even if they’re late.)
Have students write the sentences into their notebooks so that they will have examples of these
common homophones to reference later. (Knowledge)
Provide an example of a poem that uses homophones correctly and creatively.
Tape poem on tagboard to the whiteboard.
Whether the weather be fine,
Or whether the weather be not,
Whether the weather be cold,
Or whether the weather be hot,
We’ll whether the weather
Whatever the weather
Whether we like it or not.
Checking for Understanding:
Leave sentences on the board so that there are examples of how to spell the homophones,
depending on their meanings.
Read the following sentences so that students can write them with the correct spelling.
I read a book about the weather.
I ate four cupcakes.
I know that the sun is yellow.
Circulate to check that students are writing sentences correctly.
Stop after each sentence to have a student share his/her answer.
Teacher writes the sentence on the board and all students check their answers.
Guided Practice:
Write the following sets of words on the whiteboard and ask students to write two sentences of
their own, using both spellings correctly.
see/sea
your/you’re
their/there
Read the following sets of words and ask students to write one sentence, using one spelling of
each word correctly.
son/sun and they’re/there/their
weather/whether and no/know
buy/by/bye and hear/here
Students each pick one sentence that they are particularly proud of and know that they have
spelled correctly to share with their neighbor.
Students trade papers with their neighbor to read each others sentences and help one another
correct any errors in their spelling of homophones.
Offer students a chance to share one of their sentences with the class by writing it on the
whiteboard, reading it, and explaining it.
Closure:
Discussion about the importance of spelling homophones correctly.
Q: Why do we worry about spelling words correctly?
(This is a modified form of one of the essential questions which has no specific
answer, but an example may be that having correct spelling allows others to better
understand our writing.)
Q: What is the difference between hear and here? (Evaluate)
Independent Practice:
Students retrieve the rough drafts of their papers and revise them for misspelled homophones.
(Evaluate)
Lesson Evaluation:
Collect the notebook pages that students completed when writing sentences. Arrange time during
future work days to work with small groups of students who may still have difficulties with the
correct spelling of these homophones.
Blooms Taxonomy:
The levels that are included in this lesson are indicated in italics behind the objectives, questions,
and/or steps to which they relate.
This lesson features activities at the following levels:
Knowledge
Comprehend
Analyze
Synthesize
Evaluate
Sponge Activities:
Students search newspapers or magazines to find homophones that need to be corrected.
Students write a poem that incorporates one or more of the homophones discussed in class.
Students compile a spelling dictionary of the common homophones we discussed in class.
Students research other homophones to add to the spelling dictionary.
Exceptionalities and Cultural Diversity
There are times throughout the unit in which the teacher is available to help students who are
struggling with difficult concepts while classmates are working on the drafts of their papers.
The amount of choice provided as students select their own invention to work with and specific
subtopics to write about, allows students to choose items that are of interest and importance to
them.
Rubrics could be adjusted to accommodate different levels by raising or lowering required levels
for students whose IEPs require such adaptations.
The element of choice that students have to increase the interest level in their presentation allows
for students with different learning styles to incorporate their interests (music, art, drama, etc) to
assist in the effective presentation of their chosen mode.
Technology Integration
Walk into an elementary or middle school classroom today and it is unmistakably clear
that technology becomes more prevalent everyday. In an age when many preschoolers can run a
computer as well as or better than the average adult, teachers must stay on the cutting edge of
technological advances to ensure that students are benefiting from these developments. I believe
that teachers should keep abreast to the changes of the digital world, but not become overrun by
them. The use of resources such as the internet, software programs, SmartBoards, and the like
can certainly enhance learning for students, but only when used effectively. I do not believe that
a teacher should attempt to force integration of technological resources into every area. I feel
there is a great deal of value in knowing how to function without technology. As much as
students need to learn to use the technological tools available to them, they also need to learn
how to problem solve and troubleshoot if problems arise. They must also learn that while a
technological resource may be preferable in a certain situation, should one not be available, there
are other options in life. I often fear that students will forget that reference books exist and feel
unable to learn anything should the internet be down. This being said, I feel that the use of the
internet for speedy retrieval of information from around the world is an amazing feat of
technology and one that students should learn to use effectively. The ability of students and
teachers to access such information and process it in programs such as Microsoft Word allows
for expedited and neat delivery of information.
Student learning is enriched in my UBD through online research, word processing, and
optional additional technological incorporation. Students begin by planning their process of
research and writing with relation to how they will allot their time in the computer lab, which
relates to the critical thinking, problem solving, and decisions making standard. Specific
benchmarks note that students will “identify and define authentic problems and significant
questions for investigation”, “plan and manage activities to develop a solution or complete a
project”, and “collect and analyze data to identify solutions and/or make informed decisions.”
Students use internet sources to research their inventions. They are required to use and site
reliable sources, while displaying responsible use of the school’s technological resources. This
search process fulfills all four benchmarks of the research and information fluency standard. The
benchmarks are to “plan strategies to guide inquiry”, “locate, organize, analyze, evaluate,
synthesize, and ethically use information from a variety of sources and media”, “evaluate and
select information sources and digital tools based on the appropriateness to specific tasks”, and
“process data and report results.” Use of the internet to assist in research also requires that all
students act responsibly and meet the benchmarks of the digital citizenship standard to “advocate
and practice safe, legal, and responsible use of information and technology”, “exhibit a positive
attitude toward using technology that supports collaboration, learning, and productivity”,
“demonstrate personal responsibility for lifelong learning”, and “exhibit leadership for digital
citizenship.” They are also required to type their three papers which will be assembled into a
final portfolio. The typing of these three papers on expressive modes of writing helps to fulfill
the creative and innovation standard’s benchmarks to “apply existing knowledge to generate new
ideas, products, or processes” and “create original works as a means of personal or group
expression”. For their presentations, the students are also given the option of incorporating
technology if it supplements their projects. This optional piece fits with the communication and
collaboration standard’s benchmark to “communicate information and ideas effectively to
multiple audiences using a variety of media and formats” and the technology operations and
concepts standard to “select and use applications effectively and productively.” The varied
technology requirements for student learning address aspects of all six of their standards.
Students do not hold the monopoly on using technological resources to supplement their
pieces. In order to enhance the presentation of my UBD unit, I wrote and performed examples of
all three modes of writing. The performances were recorded so that I could more easily
incorporate costumes and scenery which enhances the performance. By making these creative
additions to the presentation, I fulfill the standard to facilitate and inspire student learning and
creativity. Applicable benchmarks are to “promote, support, and model creative and innovative
thinking and inventiveness”, “engage students in exploring real-world issues and solving
authentic problems using digital tools and resources”, and “promote student reflection using
collaborative tools to reveal and clarify students’ conceptual understanding and thinking,
planning, and creative processes.” The opportunity to reshoot also allowed the final product,
which serves as an example to students at the beginning of the unit, to be of high quality. In
order to write these papers I completed my own research using internet sources. Students’
completion of online research is an important component in their projects. Many of the
benchmarks of the design and develop digital-age learning experiences and assessments standard
are addressed, including to “design or adapt relevant learning experiences that incorporate digital
tools and resources to promote student learning and creativity, “develop technology-enriched
learning environments that enable all students to pursue their individual curiosities and become
active participants in setting their own educational goals, managing their own learning, and
assessing their own progress”, and “customize and personalize learning activities to address
students’ diverse learning styles, working strategies, and abilities using digital tools and
resources.” I will also spend time in the early lessons addressing the manner in which students
should conduct themselves when using technological equipment and resources such as the
internet. This fulfills two benchmarks from the model digital-age work and learning standard to
“model and facilitate effective use of current and emerging digital tools to locate, analyze,
evaluate, and use information resources to support research and learning” and “demonstrate
fluency in technology systems and the transfer of current knowledge to new technologies and
situations.” It also fulfills two benchmarks from the standard to engage and model digital
citizenship and responsibility to “advocate, model, and teach safe, legal, and ethical use of digital
information and technology, including respect for copyright, intellectual property, and the
appropriate documentation of sources” and “promote and model digital etiquette and responsible
social interactions related to the use of technology and information.” The students will be
evaluated on their use of the internet sources available and their online behavior. The checklist
that is attached relates back to the requirements of the NET student standards, which applies to
the design and develop standard benchmark to “provide students with multiple and varied
formative and summative assessments aligned with content and technology standards and use
resulting data to inform learning and teaching.” The teaching aspect of the UBD fulfills aspects
of four of the five technology standards for teachers.
The use of both the learning and teaching forms of technology are effective and engaging
for students. I cannot think of something much more interesting to third graders than watching a
video of their teacher dressed up and acting out a part. Even as an adult, I think that I would still
be enthralled if I were able to see my teacher perform in such a manner. This process is also
effective because the information can be presented to the students in a high quality form in which
I was able to practice my expressive speech. The learning of the content area is so enriched by
the fact that students are able to see and hear an example of quality expression so that they have
a frame of reference for their own writing and presentations. Expression can be an allusive
concept, but with these examples the complex topic becomes much more tangible. The learning
aspects of their technology component revolve around helping them learn to find reliable
information so that the details in their paper are all factual. It is also important that they learn to
word process their work so that it is more legible. While these aspects do not seem overly
engaging to adults, for students who do not generally spend as much time at a computer as adults
do, being able to use the system to explore and write about a topic of interest is exciting. If their
only option were to research the information in textbooks or reference books, the out-dated
information that they could find there would quickly become boring. The fact that the internet
provides great up-to-date data is a definite positive for students to learn about. The integration of
technology on both the learning and teaching sides of the coin positively influences the
effectiveness of and students’ engagement in the unit.
Overall, there are many ways that technology could be used to enhance my UBD.
However, to prevent overkill I chose these aspects which I see as the most effective, engaging,
and pertinent for the topics being studied. Attached are my teaching artifact, the three videos on
writing as expression, and an example of the student artifact, the written examples of the three
modes. Also included are the project guide and checklist that will be provided to the students so
that they are aware of the expectations that I have for their work throughout the project.
Writing Portfolio
Project Guide: Technology
A new student has moved to our country and does not know anything about your invention! It is
your task to help your new classmate. By becoming a newscaster, a scientist, an inventor, a
salesperson, a fan club member, a friend, or any other fitting role you get approved by me, you
will help our new friend learn about the invention. You will assemble a portfolio which includes
all three modes (using appropriate expression of course!) and your reflections. You will then
choose your favorite piece and present it to your classmates and parents. We all want to learn
from you. Remember to focus on expression and mechanics so that your new classmate will be
able to understand you!
In order to learn about the invention that you chose, you will use the internet to help you
research. You are expected to give us factual information, site your sources, and be responsible
online. You will also type all three of your papers using Microsoft Word. All papers will be
formatted with one inch margins and 1.5 spacing. Length and font size do not matter, but make
sure that your font style can be read. You also have the option of using additional technology to
aid in your presentation. You can talk with Ms. Hanson if you are interested and need my help to
make sure that we have the correct equipment for presentation day. The bottom of this sheet is a
checklist to make sure that you have all of the technology requirements completed before you
turn in your portfolio at the end of the unit. As always, ASK if you have questions -- I am here
and HAPPY to help.
Technology Checklist
Please turn this in with your project. Your self assessment counts for part of your grade.
Internet Searches
____ I used 3 or more internet sources
____ I used only reliable sites
____ I sited all of my sources
____ I found enough factual information to fulfill my requirements for each paper
____ I was responsible online
____ I treated school equipment with respect
Typed Papers
____ I have 1 inch margins
____ I used 1.5 spacing
____ I chose the same legible font for all three papers
Other
____ I spoke with Ms. Hanson if I wanted to use technology in my presentation
____ I spoke with Ms. Hanson if I had questions
Resource List
Three videos of me performing the three modes
Age of New Ideas by Gerry Bailey
Big Talk: Poems for Four Voices by Paul Fleischman
Children’s Story Writing, www.midlandit.co.uk/education/index.htm
Cool Stuff 2.0 and How it Works by Chris Woodford
Cool Stuff Exploded: Get Inside Modern Technology by Chris Woodford
Early Civilization by Gerry Bailey
First Thousand Years by Gerry Bailey
Inventions We Use for Information and Entertainment by Jane Bidder
Inventors/Invention Information, www.edtech.kennesaw.edu/web/inventor.html
Kid Friendly Resources, www1.center.k12.mo.us/EDTECH/resources/kidfriendly.html
Kids Konnect, www.kidskonnect.com/content/view/350/27/
Long, Long, Ago by Gerry Bailey
Modern Times by Gerry Bailey
National Inventors Hall of Fame, www.invent.org
Secret Letters from 0 to 10 by Susie Morgenstern
The A to Z of Inventions and Inventors by Pennie Stoyles
The Inside and Out Guide to Inventions by Chris Oxlade
The Kid’s Research Center - Inventions, www.gigglepotz.com/krc_inventions.htm
The World Almanac for Kids, www.worldalmanacforkids.com/WAKI-ViewArticle.
aspx?pin=fflf-0000930&article_id=627&chapter_id=14&chapter_title=
Technology&article_title=Inventions
Trade and Industry by Gerry Bailey
Reference List
Mrs. Wilson, Teacher, Banfield Elementary, Austin, MN
www.api.ning.com/files/6qZim4GC*xSAu4mh9UD8YlJmnqYWSc41Kr8HJBff5SpGzH-
w908OWnheOYQHmvsZ1KAHzhzNnMxP5NWrA8H9YagvslbBbTJ/creative_writing.jpg
www.bifroest.demon.co.uk/misc/homophones.html
www.blogs.nashvillescene.com/nashvillecream/2008/08/how_to_join_the_secret_cabal_t.php
www.boomerang.org.au/news/
www.boomerangs.org
www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/73646/boomerang
www.californiacriminallawyerblog.com/2008/03/
www.canteach.ca/elementary/songspoems17.html
www.celebrating200years.noaa.gov/monitor/geer.html
www.classdisplays.co.uk/literacy.html
www.commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Selection.svg
www.culturequest.us/aboriginal_tools/boomerang.htm
www.culturequest.us/aboriginal_tools/boomerang_files/Actual20boomerang.gif
www.eduplace.com/graphicorganizer/
www.encarta.msn.com/features/columns/?article=bn_boomerang
www.globalhousesonline.com/greatplace.htm
www.greenasathistle.com/2007/05/18/lobbying-petitioning-letter-writing-day-79/
www.iste.org/AM/Template.cfm?Section=NETS
www.jc-schools.net/write/letter-write.htm
www.letterwritingguide.com/friendlyletterformat.htm
www.mcw.edu/display/docid2546.htm
www.mhslibrary.org/Teacher%20Projects/Teacher%20Projects/Teams/Gummis/hiphopcontent
rubric.htm
www.myword.info/sendword.php?pronoun_1-a
www.poetryzone.ndirect.co.uk/resouce.htm#adj
www.previous.aeroplastics.net/2003_WFOR/WFOR_04.html
www.school.discoveryeducation.com/clipart/clip/presentation-boy.html
www.soe.ucdavis.edu/ms0809/180Sec2/BernhardtT/web/web/Loop-Around.html
www.technostudies.wordpress.com/
www.tpchd.org/page.php?id=154
www.visi.com/%7Etomcat/monologue/shaw/Page3.shtml
www.wendykehoe.com/html/class_sign_up.html
www.zattoo.com/de/blog/archive/2008/04
Bulletin Board
The attached diagram of a bulletin board is a template for the board that will be added to
throughout the unit so that students have a constant visual reference point. To begin the unit the
only posted item will be the title of the unit: Inventive and Expressive. After the calendar is
discussed with the students, it will be posted. The graphic organizer (venn diagram) will be
created with students on day two and posted at that time. The essential questions and big ideas
will be addressed and posted on day five. An example of each type of writing will be posted the
night after it is presented in class. The mechanics area will be added to as a class each week as
the lessons are spread out over the course of the unit. Finally, the student area will be added to
throughout the unit as students create work which they wish to post in this area for classmates to
read and gain inspiration from.
Inventive & Expressive
Calendar
Essential
Questions/
Big Ideas
Graphic
Organizer
Friendly Letter
Descriptive
Paper
Informative
Paper
Mechanics
Student Area
Substitute Folder
I have an arrangement with a fellow third grade teacher to come to my room and set up for a
substitute teacher if such a need arises. I call her in the morning to set out the calendar. This note
allows the substitute to have an idea of the progression of the unit and how to structure the class.
Thank you for substitute teaching in third grade with us today!
During our current Language Arts unit, the students are learning to write in three
different modes (informative, descriptive, and friendly letter), using appropriate expression
throughout. Attached is the calendar for unit. The day we are presently on in the sequence is
circled for your reference so that you know what we have completed thus far.
Today will be a work day for the students to continue writing their papers. They are
allowed to peer conference with each other, as long as the conversation focuses on their papers I
am more than happy to let them help each other out as long as they do not become disruptive to
you.
If there are students who do not currently need work time, the following are activities that
can be given to them to work on. Before allowing students to pursue these activities, please
remind them that they should take advantage of the work time that they are being given and these
activities are only for those who have worked ahead. They already know that they are the ones
responsible for remembering this, but a reminder never hurts.
All of the activities listed will be presented in class at some point in the unit. If there is
one that a student is unfamiliar with, he/she should skip over that one until it has been presented
in class.
I hope that everything goes well today! Notes for the rest of the classes are attached.
Thank you,
Andrea Hanson
Options for Student Enrichment
1. Go to the library. Look up articles in newspapers or magazines which are written in a
variety of modes and note the characteristics of the article which point to the specific
style.
2. Go to the library. Look up articles in newspapers or magazines articles that have
grammatical, punctuation, and/or spelling errors. Photocopy the articles and become an
editor.
3. Create a Mad Libs leaving openings for fellow classmates to fill in spaces.
4. Write a letter to a teacher. Place it in the mini mailbox for Ms. Hanson to look over. You
can deliver it tomorrow.