the five-paragraph essay: template for college writing dr. harold william halbert
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The Five-Paragraph Essay:Template for College Writing
Dr. Harold William Halbert
How Many of You Remember the Five-Paragraph Essay?
• Who taught it to you?
• What were the major elements?
• What good was it?
Key Elements
• Introduction
• Body Paragraph (Claim 1)
• Body Paragraph (Claim 2)
• Body Paragraph (Claim 3)
• Conclusion
• Introduction– A “Hook” (whatever that was)– Background Information on subject– Thesis (the argument you are making)– Preview of 3 Pieces of Evidence or Claims– Springboard (restatement of thesis)
• Body Paragraph (Claim 1)– A transition– A central claim– 3 details to flesh out claim– Conclusion to paragraph
• Body Paragraph (Claim 2) SAME• Body Paragraph (Claim 3) SAME• Conclusion
– Summation transition (“In Conclusion”)– Restatement of thesis– Review of 3 pieces of evidence
– Synthesis of claim + evidence applied to broader issue
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Official Uses of Five-Paragraph Essay
• English class essay (book reviews, short arguments, etc.)
• In-class essay exams
• SAT Writing assessment
• Some editorial or newspaper column pieces
REAL Purpose of Five Paragraph Essay
• Easy template to American academic writing expectations
• Easy to teach
• Easy to grade
• Easy to remember
• Easy to finish
PROBLEM: Never Shown Broader Application
• Instead of thinking “paragraphs,” think “sections”
• Instead of thinking “five,” think “Introduction--Body--Conclusion”
• Better still, think
“Context/Claim, Evidence, Synthesis”
INTRODUCTION = CONTEXT & ARGUMENT
BODY PARAGRAPH #1
= BODY OF EVIDENCE
BODY PARAGRAPH #2
BODY PARAGRAPH #3
CONCLUSION = SYNTHESIS
Five-Paragraphs are just a template:
Still Need Same Basic ElementsIntroduction Context &
Claim
•Create Hook•Establish background context for writing•Give thesis•Preview evidence/organization•Springboard
Body Paragraphs
Evidence •Transition from prior section•Single, clear claim for section•Strong details supporting claim•Mini-conclusion on claim
Conclusion Synthesis •Restate central claim•Review evidence•Apply evidence and claim to context to create broader significance