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Assessment Practice assess Taking this practice test will help you assess your knowledge of these skills and determine your readiness for the Unit Test. review After you take the practice test, your teacher can help you identify any standards you need to review. DIRECTIONS Read the two texts and the public service advertisement. Then, answer the questions that follow. La Puerta by José Antonio Burciaga It had rained in thundering sheets every afternoon that summer. A dog-tired Sinesio returned home from his job in a mattress sweat shop. With a weary step from the autobús, Sinesio gathered the last of his strength and darted across the busy avenida into the ramshackle colonia where children played in the meandering pathways that would soon turn into a noisy arroyo of rushing water. The rain drops striking the barrio’s tin, wooden and cardboard roofs would soon become a sheet of water from heaven. Every afternoon Sinesio’s muffled knock on their two-room shack was answered by Faustina, his wife. She would unlatch the door and return to iron more shirts and dresses of people who could afford the luxury. When thunder clapped, a frightened Faustina would quickly pull the electric cord, believing it would attract lightning. Then she would occupy herself with preparing dinner. Their three children would not arrive home for another hour. On this day Sinesio laid down his tattered lunch bag, a lottery ticket and his week’s wages on the oily tablecloth. Faustina threw a glance at the lottery ticket. Sinesio’s silent arrival always angered Faustina so she glared back at the lottery ticket, “Throwing money away! Buying paper dreams! We can’t afford dreams, and you buy them!” Sinesio ignored her anger. From the table, he picked up a letter, smelled it, studied the U.S. stamp, and with the emphatic opening of the envelope sat down at the table and slowly read aloud the letter from his brother Aurelio as the rain beat against the half tin, half wooden rooftop. Dear Sinesio, I write to you from this country of abundance, the first letter I write from los Estados Unidos. After two weeks of nerves and frustration I finally have a job at a canning factory. It took me that long only because I did not have the necessary social security number. It’s amazing how much money one can make, but just as amazing how fast it goes. I had to pay for the social security number, two weeks of rent, food, and a pair of shoes. The good pair you gave me wore out on our journey across the border. From the border we crossed two mountains, and the desert in between. I will get ahead because I’m a better worker than the rest of my countrymen. I can see that already and so does the “boss.” Coming here will be hard for you, leaving Faustina and the children. It was hard enough for me and I’m single without a worry in life. But at least you will have me here if you come and I’m 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 Take it at thinkcentral.com. KEYWORD: HML9N-186 Practice Test 186 unit 1: narrative structure RL 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL 5 Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text create tension. RI 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RI 5 Analyze how an author’s ideas are refined by particular sentences. W 5 Strengthen writing by revising and editing to ensure that it demonstrates the conventions of standard English grammar and punctuation. L 6 Acquire and use accurately general academic words; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge.

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Assessment Practice

assessTaking this practice test will help you assess your knowledge of these skills and determine your readiness for the Unit Test.

reviewAfter you take the practice test, your teacher can help you identify any standards you need to review.

DIRECTIONS Read the two texts and the public service advertisement. Then, answer the questions that follow.

La Puerta by José Antonio Burciaga

It had rained in thundering sheets every afternoon that summer. A dog-tired Sinesio returned home from his job in a mattress sweat shop. With a weary step from the autobús, Sinesio gathered the last of his strength and darted across the busy avenida into the ramshackle colonia where children played in the meandering pathways that would soon turn into a noisy arroyo of rushing water. The rain drops striking the barrio’s tin, wooden and cardboard roofs would soon become a sheet of water from heaven.

Every afternoon Sinesio’s muffled knock on their two-room shack was answered by Faustina, his wife. She would unlatch the door and return to iron more shirts and dresses of people who could afford the luxury. When thunder clapped, a frightened Faustina would quickly pull the electric cord, believing it would attract lightning. Then she would occupy herself with preparing dinner. Their three children would not arrive home for another hour.

On this day Sinesio laid down his tattered lunch bag, a lottery ticket and his week’s wages on the oily tablecloth. Faustina threw a glance at the lottery ticket.

Sinesio’s silent arrival always angered Faustina so she glared back at the lottery ticket, “Throwing money away! Buying paper dreams! We can’t afford dreams, and you buy them!”

Sinesio ignored her anger. From the table, he picked up a letter, smelled it, studied the U.S. stamp, and with the emphatic opening of the envelope sat down at the table and slowly read aloud the letter from his brother Aurelio as the rain beat against the half tin, half wooden rooftop.

Dear Sinesio, I write to you from this country of abundance, the first letter I write from los

Estados Unidos. After two weeks of nerves and frustration I finally have a job at acanning factory. It took me that long only because I did not have the necessary social security number. It’s amazing how much money one can make, but just as amazing how fast it goes. I had to pay for the social security number, two weeks of rent, food, and a pair of shoes. The good pair you gave me wore out on our journey across the border. From the border we crossed two mountains, and the desert in between.

I will get ahead because I’m a better worker than the rest of my countrymen. I can see that already and so does the “boss.” Coming here will be hard for you, leaving Faustina and the children. It was hard enough for me and I’m single without a worry in life. But at least you will have me here if you come and I’m

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RL 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RL 5 Analyze how an author’s choices concerning how to structure a text create tension. RI 1 Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. RI 5 Analyze how an author’s ideas are refined by particular sentences. W 5 Strengthen writing by revising and editing to ensure that it demonstrates the conventions of standard English grammar and punctuation. L 6 Acquire and use accurately general academic words; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge.

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sure I can get you a job. All you’ve heard about the crossing is true. Even the lies are true. “Saludos” from your “compadres” Silvio and Ramiro. They are doing fine. They’re already bothering me for the bet you made against the Dodgers.

Next time we get together I will relate my adventures and those of my “compañeros” . . . things to laugh and cry about.

Aurelio signed the letter Saludos y abrazo. Sinesio looked off into space and imagined himself there already. But this dreaming was interrupted by the pelting rain and Faustina’s knife dicing nopal, cactus, on the wooden board.

¿Qué crees?—“What do you think?” Faustina asked Sinesio.¡No sé!—“I don’t know,” Sinesio responded with annoyance. “But you do know, Sinesio. How could you not know? There’s no choice.

We have turned this over and around a thousand times. That miserable mattress factory will never pay you enough to eat with. We can’t even afford the mattresses you make!”

Sinesio’s heart sank as if he was being pushed out or had already left his home. She would join her comadres as another undocumented widow. Already he missed his three children, Celso, Jenaro, and Natasia his eldest, a joy every time he saw her. “An absence in the heart is an empty pain,” he thought.

Faustina reminded Sinesio of the inevitable trip with subtle statements and proverbs that went straight to the heart of the matter. “Necessity knows no frontiers,” she would say. The dicing of the nopal and onions took on the fast clip of the rain. Faustina looked up to momentarily study a trickle of water that had begun to run on the inside of a heavily patched glass on the door. It bothered her, but unable to fix it at the moment she went back to her cooking.

Sinesio accepted the answer to a question he wished he had never asked. The decision was made. There was no turning back. “I will leave for el norte in two weeks,” he said gruffly and with authority.

Faustina’s heart sank as she continued to make dinner. After the rain, Sinesio went out to help his compadre widen a ditch to keep the water from flooding in front of his door. The children came home, and it became Faustina’s job to inform them that Papá would have to leave for a while. None of them said anything. Jenaro refused to eat. They had expected and accepted the news. From their friends, they knew exactly what it meant. Many of their friends’ fathers had already left and many more would follow.

Throughout the following days, Sinesio continued the same drudgery at work but as his departure date approached he began to miss even that. He secured his family and home, made all the essential home repairs he had put off and asked his creditors for patience and trust. He asked his sisters, cousins and neighbors to check on his family. Another compadre lent him money for

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the trip and the coyote1. Sinesio did not know when he would return but told everyone, “One year, no more. Save enough money, buy things to sell here and open up a negocio, a small business the family can help with.”

The last trip home from work was no different except for the going-away gift, a bottle of mezcal, and the promise of his job when he returned. As usual, the autobús was packed. And as usual, the only ones to talk were two loud young men, sinvergüenzas—without shame.

The two young men talked about the Loteríá Nacional and a lottery prize that had gone unclaimed for a week. “¡Cien millones de pesos!—One hundred million pesos! ¡Caray! ” one of them kept repeating as he slapped the folded newspaper on his knees again and again. “Maybe the fool that bought it doesn’t even know!”

“Or can’t read!” answered the other. And they laughed with open mouths. This caught Sinesio’s attention. Two weeks earlier he had bought a lottery

ticket. “Could . . . ? No!” he thought. But he felt a slight flush of blood rush to his face. Maybe this was his lucky day. The one day out of the thousands that he had lived in poverty.

The two jumped off the bus, and Sinesio reached for the newspaper they had left behind. There on the front page was the winning number. At the end of the article was the deadline to claim the prize: 8 that night.

Sinesio did not have the faintest idea if his ticket matched the winning number. So he swung from the highest of hopes and dreams to resigned despair as he wondered if he had won one hundred million pesos.

Jumping off the bus, he ran home, at times slowing to a walk to catch his breath. The times he jogged, his heart pounded, the newspaper clutched in his hand, the heavy grey clouds ready to pour down.

Faustina heard his desperate knock and swung the door open. “¿Dónde está?” Sinesio pleaded. “Where is the lottery ticket I bought?”

He said it slowly and clearly so he wouldn’t have to repeat himself. Faustina was confused, “What lottery ticket?” Sinesio searched the table, under the green, oily cloth, on top of the dresser

and through his papers, all the while with the jabbing question, “What did you do with the boleto de lotería?”

Thunder clapped. Faustina quit searching and unplugged the iron. Sinesio sounded off about no one respecting his papers and how no one could find anything in that house. “¿Dónde está el boleto de lotería?—Where is the lottery ticket?

They both stopped to think. The rain splashed into a downpour against the door. Faustina looked at the door to see if she had fixed the hole in the glass.

¡La puerta!—“The door!” blurted Faustina, “I put it on the door to keep the rain from coming in!”

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Sinesio turned to see the ticket glued on the broken window pane. It was light blue with red numbers and the letters “Lotería Nacional.” Sinesio brought the newspaper up to the glued lottery ticket and with his wife compared the numbers off one by one—Seis-tres-cuatro-uno-ocho-nueve-uno-¡SIETÉ—DOS!—Sinesio yelled.

“¡No!” trembled a disbelieving and frightened Sinesio, “One hundred million pesos!” His heart pounded, afraid this was all a mistake, a bad joke. They checked it again and again only to confirm the matching numbers.

Sinesio then tried to peel the ticket off. His fingernail slid off the cold, glued lottery ticket. Faustina looked at Sinesio’s stubby fingernails and moved in. But Faustina’s thinner fingernails also slid off the lottery ticket. Sinesio walked around the kitchen table looking, thinking, trying to remain calm.

Then he grew frustrated and angry. “What time is it?” “A quarter to seven,” Faustina said looking at the alarm clock above the

dresser. They tried hot water and a razor blade with no success. Sinesio then lashed out at Faustina in anger, “You! I never answered your mockery! Your lack of faith in me! I played the lottery because I knew this day would come! “¡Por Dios Santo!” and he swore and kissed his crossed thumb and forefinger. “And now? Look what you have done to me, to us, to your children!”

“We can get something at the farmacia! The doctor would surely have something to unglue the ticket.”

“¡Sí! ¡O sí!” mocked Sinesio. “Sure! We have time to go there.” Time runs faster when there is a deadline. The last bus downtown was due

in a few minutes. They tried to take the broken glass pane off the door but he was afraid the ticket would tear more. Sinesio’s fear and anger mounted with each glance at the clock.

In frustration, he pushed the door out into the downpour and swung it back into the house, cracking the molding and the inside hinges. One more swing, pulling, twisting, splintering, and Sinesio broke the door completely off.

Faustina stood back with hands over her mouth as she recited a litany to all the santos and virgins in heaven as the rain blew into their home and splashed her face wet.

Sinesio’s face was also drenched. But Faustina could not tell if it was from the rain or tears of anger, as he put the door over his head and ran down the streaming pathway to catch the autobús.

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“Live Your Dreams”89th Connecticut College Commencement AddressDelivered May 20, 2007by Robert D. Ballard

We are here today to celebrate an important event in your life. A day you have worked so hard to have, a day that marks the end of one adventure in your life and the beginning of another.

For life truly is and should be a series of great adventures; a series of journeys within journeys.

Now, I am sure most of you have mixed emotions about today. You are glad your four-year journey in education is over but you are also nervous about what lies ahead. Are you sure about your next adventure in life? Have you made the right decision?

It is important to remember that all journeys in life begin with a dream, a dream to become someone; a dream to do something important in life that you and your friends and parents will be proud of. . . .

But all of us have different kinds of dreams, different goals in life to pursue. It is hard to know at times which dream to pursue since so many can run through your head while growing up. It is easy to question your decision to pursue one dream instead of another. To be paralyzed at times by indecision, fearful that you have made the wrong choice and that you may be going down the wrong road.

If you have such fears, put them aside, for life is the act of becoming; you never arrive. It’s the journey that counts. Isn’t it amazing how much time and energy mountain climbers spend planning and executing their ascent of Mount Everest and the meager amount of time they spend once they reach the summit taking in the view? It was the act of climbing that took them to the top, not a desire to get there and stay.

The question is which mountain in life should you pick to climb, which dream to pursue. I would like to share with you some important insights I have made which help me pick the mountains in life to climb.

The most important thing I have discovered is not whether the mountain is in Asia, or Europe, or under the sea.

The most important thing is that the mountain you choose to climb is high. I have discovered that if you climb a mountain that is say 1,000 feet tall and fall off its summit and break your neck you are just as dead as you would be had you fallen off a mountain that is 30,000 feet tall. You’re dead all the same, so why did you pick a small mountain to fall off?

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I have also discovered that it is just as hard to climb a 1,000-foot mountain, as it is to climb one 30,000 feet tall. People that climb tall mountains get up at the same time in the morning and go to bed at the same time in evening as those who climb little ones. They have to put up with the same amount of trials and tribulations each day. So what I learned was, it is just as easy or just as hard to climb a tall mountain as it is to climb a small mountain, so why not go for it!

When you walk up on the stage today to receive your diploma, having finally reached the summit of your present dream, a dream that has taken four or more years to reach, you will only spend a few seconds here. But when you look out at your parents and friends and see how proud they are, you will realize that this four-year journey was well worth the effort.

What is also important about climbing a tall mountain instead of a small one is that it takes a longer time to climb. This gives you a lot of time to think about what you are doing along the way and it gives you more time to enjoy the journey.

If you can reach the top of a mountain in just an hour or a day, it wasn’t worth your time to climb.

I have found that if I pick a distant summit in the clouds to pursue, time is on my side and I can have a lot of fascinating side trips along the way. Side trips that enrich my life, but since I have that distant summit on the horizon to guide me, I find that I don’t get lost along the way. I always know how to get back on the trail once my side trip has ended.

I also discovered that tall mountains frighten people off. As a result, there aren’t many people climbing them. The path up to the summit is less crowded, less congested, and in fact easier to climb.

So I advise you to think big, have big dreams. Climb tall mountains.

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Assessment Practice

Reading ComprehensionUse “La Puerta” (pp. 186–189) to answer questions 1–10.

1. In paragraph 1, the word meandering means —

A. crowded

B. expensive

C. straight

D. twisting

2. In the beginning of the story, the conflict between Sinesio and Faustina is that —

A. Faustina thinks that she works harder than Sinesio

B. Faustina wants Sinesio to think more about the family’s finances

C. Faustina is tired of ironing other people’s clothing

D. Sinesio dislikes giving Faustina his paycheck every week

3. In paragraph 8, when Aurelio writes “It was hard enough for me and I’m single without a worry in life” it emphasizes —

A. Sinesio’s internal conflict about leaving his family

B. the external conflict between Sinesio and Faustina

C. Faustina’s internal conflict about her family’s poverty

D. how hard it is to succeed in the face of obstacles

4. In paragraph 15, the author foreshadows that —

A. Sinesio will not travel across new frontiers

B. the window will be fixed with the lottery ticket

C. the family will become wealthier

D. the door will be replaced

5. In paragraph 18, the word drudgery means —

A. chores

B. entertainment

C. skills

D. failure

6. The reader can infer from the young men’s reaction to the unclaimed lottery ticket in paragraphs 20–21 that —

A. they wish they had bought the winning ticket

B. they think uneducated people play the lottery

C. they know no one will claim the prize

D. they wish the prize money was larger

7. The word desperate comes from the Latin root desperatus, meaning “to despair.” In paragraph 26, desperate means —

A. calm

B. difficult

C. hopeful

D. urgent

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8. An antonym for the word stubby as it is used in paragraph 35 is —

A. long

B. pretty

C. short

D. thin

9. The author creates suspense at the climax of the story when —

A. Sinesio and Faustina find the lottery ticket

B. it starts to rain and the door and roof begin leaking

C. the deadline for redeeming the lottery ticket nears

D. Sinesio is returning from work

10. What is the resolution of the story?

A. Sinesio breaks the door off the shack.

B. Faustina prays to the saints.

C. Sinesio runs down the street with the door.

D. It is left to the reader’s imagination.

Use “Live Your Dreams” (pp. 190–191) to answer questions 11–16.

11. The author believes that the key element of any journey is —

A. a destination

B. a dream

C. an itinerary

D. good planning

12. In paragraph 5, the author describes the struggle to —

A. choose the right dream

B. grow up too quickly

C. get a college education

D. stay on the mountaintop

13. In paragraph 6, the word meager means —

A. adequate

B. plenty

C. very little

D. uncertain

14. The author includes a question at the end of paragraph 9 to —

A. make the audience aware of the dangers of mountain climbing

B. get the audience emotionally involved

C. make sure the audience is still listening

D. provoke an answer from the audience

15. The word tribulations comes from the Latin root tribulare, meaning “to oppress.” In paragraph 10 tribulations means —

A. burdens

B. court battles

C. judgments

D. morals

16. The reader can conclude that the author —

A. has climbed a mountain

B. has traveled around the world

C. has fulfilled some of his dreams

D. has given this speech before

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Assessment Practice

Use “La Puerta” and “Live Your Dreams” to answer questions 17–18.

17. Sinesio and Ballard would agree that —

A. dreams can change over time

B. difficult dreams are worth pursuing

C. dreams are only important for young people

D. there is only one dream that a person should follow

18. The tone at the end of both selections is one of —

A. fear

B. humor

C. optimism

D. suspense

Use the public service advertisement on page 192 to answer questions 19–20.

19. The purpose of this advertisement is to —

A. encourage teens to be more physically active

B. teach teens how to play tennis

C. persuade Venus Williams to teach tennis

D. keep the local community together

20. According to the advertisement, teens should play —

A. on organized teams

B. anytime, anywhere

C. if they’re physically able

D. games they will win

SHORT CONSTRUCTED RESPONSE Write a short response to each question, using text evidence to support your response.

21. In “La Puerta,” what does the door symbolize? Support your response with evidence from the text.

22. Why does the speaker of “Live Your Dreams” use the metaphor of climbing a mountain? Support your response with evidence from the text.

Write a short response to this question, using evidence from both texts to support your response.

23. What is one similarity between Sinesio in “La Puerta” and Robert Ballard, the author of “Live Your Dreams”? Support your response with evidence from both texts.

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Revising and EditingDIRECTIONS Read this passage, and answer the questions that follow.

(1) Of all the events of my childhood the one I remember best is my first ride on

the school bus. (2) It took our bus forty-five minutes to get from my house to the

school. (3) As I stepped on and looked for an empty seat, I saw countless strange

faces glaring back at me. (4) I sat near the back of the bus next to a shy-looking

kid wearing a backpack, it was almost as big as he was. (5) As the bus got rolling

I soon found myself in the middle of a raging paper war. (6) “Will this ever stop?”

I wondered as a thick, wet paper wad struck my ear. (7) “Get under here!” the boy

next to me shouted. (8) He signaled me to duck under the backpack with him.

(9) As we crouched, we laughed together at the chaos around us. (10) I promised

to meet him after school so we could ride home together.

1. Which sentence should be deleted to make the paragraph more coherent?

A. Sentence 1

B. Sentence 2

C. Sentence 6

D. Sentence 8

2. Which sentence should the writer add to include relevant sensory details?

A. The bus had room for sixty-four students.

B. I disliked waiting for the bus almost as much as riding it.

C. I waded through crumpled litter and masses of students to get to my seat.

D. My friend’s mom worked at the school, so he didn’t ride the bus.

3. What change, if any, should be made to sentence 4?

A. Add a comma after bus

B. Delete the comma and it was

C. Change shy-looking to shy looking

D. Make no change

4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

A. Add a comma after rolling

B. Change myself to me

C. Add a comma after raging

D. Make no change

5. What is the best way to combine sentences 7 and 8?

A. “Get under here!” the boy next to me shouted when he signaled me to duck under the backpack with him.

B. “Get under here!” the boy next to me shouted, he signaled me to duck under the backpack with him.

C. “Get under here!” the boy next to me shouted, but he signaled me to duck under the backpack with him.

D. “Get under here!” the boy next to me shouted, signaling me to duck under the backpack with him.

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Assessment Practice

6. Which sentence should the writer add to explain the significance of the event?

A. That school bus ride was really awkward.

B. In the midst of flying trash, I had somehow found a friend.

C. The bus system was in need of stricter discipline.

D. The school bus was an efficient mode of transportation.

7. Which transitional word or phrase should be added to the beginning of sentence 10?

A. When we arrived,

B. As a matter of fact,

C. Before this all began,

D. However,

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