Initial Feedback

House style

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Comments on DPS

Easy to see what the pull quotes and text says

Pull quotes make me wanna read more

Struggling to find how to improve it

The band is representative of the genre

Well presented, easy to read, attractive

Improvements

“Mast head could be bigger “ (contents page)“too much text” (contents)“photo too big” (contents)being clear on the sub-genre being represented “ looks more pop punky than heavy”“too generic” “wider genre range” “offer a CD”

I found that doing all surveys was quite time consuming for the person and therefore I created a similar survey online to get a quick quantitative response.

I decided to make the survey to give out to pepole as I thought it would be a quick way to get useful results. When pressured to do a survey online, people will finally do them fairly quickly and results tend not to be very helpful. By giving someone the survey they feel they have to complete it well, as I will be in the room with them, waiting to collect the surveys once complete. Therefore I am gauranteed the results and will have useful qualitative feedback.

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