What do you think about the script?

What do you like about it?

What do you think can be better?

You need to mention the headlines I like that you’ve added background information Too formal, make it more fun

I like the fact its factual You have various interviews with people, which is good You need to make it less formal

What music are you using? Specify the type Have a good structure Make it more casual

I emailed my group my draft script in order to gain some constructive criticism about it. This is what they had to say. Using the feedback I made some changes to my script.