First assignment reflectionI think that in class workshop really helped me a lot in different ways. First, I

think my weaknesses in writing are that I cannot use correct grammar and proper words. This will make readers confused. In my draft, there are a lot of mistakes like this; some of them should not happen. And I should read it again after finish, try to find out basic mistakes as such as I can. The advantage in my paper is that I included in every detail and I think I did a good observation. In this workshop, my peer helped me a lot. For example, I have many grammar problems and they pointed out for me. At the same time, they also points out some similar articles structure problem. When I helped others, I also found many others the advantages in their article, but I was not found in my article. For example, Alyssa colye, I think her article is perfect. She has note in different places which can help readers understand easily. The article also adds pictures, which make the article will not looks monotonous, and also increases the content. These are all I need to learn. I hope the teacher can help me to find out the deficiency in the article as much as possible. Because I think my articles and there are many problems need to be improved.

Annotations: Read other people's articles can help me a lot. For example, they have some great details such as images and annotations. In put forward their problems on others, I also think that do I have the same problem of my own. The best part is I can learn how to use the way Americans to express points.