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?It is well known that a majority ofTaguchi method applications have
the capacity for addressing asingle-response problem.
: Most Taguchi methodapplications can address asingle-response problem.
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?It may be said that computers havethe ability to incorporate kinds of
equipment in order that the user isin a position to interact with thecomputer.
: Computers canincorporate equipment so thatthe user can interact with the
computer.
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?It is the operator who makes adetermination of the questions as
to the phase should beimplemented.
: The operator determineswhether to implement the phase .
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?There is a guideline thatmakes a provision of the
necessary requirements.
: A guideline provides
the requirements .
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?It has been found that any errorthat might happen will be more
destructive in light of the fact thatXYZ applications is in a position tomake direct calls to the hardware.
: Any possible error will bemore destructive since XYZapplications can make direct
calls to the hardware.
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It has long been known that thelogon between the workstation and
NT server is encrypted consideringthe fact that an eavesdropperactually wants to gain the ID andpassword.
: The logon between theworkstation and NT server isencrypted because aneavesdropper wants to gain theID and password.
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?It is our opinion that Windows 95 isfor all intents and purposes a good
operating system in a situation inwhich the user has manyrequirements.
: We believe that Windows95 is a good operating systemwhen the user has many
requirements.
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It is possible that the error affects
the necessary requirements whenattempting to ascertain the locationof the variables.
: The error might affect therequirements when attemptingto find the variables.
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It is noted that 10Mbps network
cards are basically becomingobsolete for the reason of theirslow data transfer rates.
: 10Mbps network cardsare becoming obsolete becauseof their slow data transfer rates.
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?It is interesting to note thatmonitoring features in most cases
inform the user provided that aperformance bottleneck occurs.
: Notably, (ORInterestingly,) monitoringfeatures usually inform the userif a performance bottleneck
occurs.
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