conciseness 06:delete redundant and needless phrases

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Unit Six :Delete Redundant andNeedless Phrases

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?It is well known that a majority ofTaguchi method applications have

the capacity for addressing asingle-response problem.

: Most Taguchi methodapplications can address asingle-response problem.


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?It may be said that computers havethe ability to incorporate kinds of

equipment in order that the user isin a position to interact with thecomputer.

: Computers canincorporate equipment so thatthe user can interact with the

computer.


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?It is the operator who makes adetermination of the questions as

to the phase should beimplemented.

: The operator determineswhether to implement the phase .


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?There is a guideline thatmakes a provision of the

necessary requirements.

: A guideline provides

the requirements .


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?It has been found that any errorthat might happen will be more

destructive in light of the fact thatXYZ applications is in a position tomake direct calls to the hardware.

: Any possible error will bemore destructive since XYZapplications can make direct

calls to the hardware.


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It has long been known that thelogon between the workstation and

NT server is encrypted consideringthe fact that an eavesdropperactually wants to gain the ID andpassword.

: The logon between theworkstation and NT server isencrypted because aneavesdropper wants to gain theID and password.


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?It is our opinion that Windows 95 isfor all intents and purposes a good

operating system in a situation inwhich the user has manyrequirements.

: We believe that Windows95 is a good operating systemwhen the user has many

requirements.


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It is possible that the error affects

the necessary requirements whenattempting to ascertain the locationof the variables.

: The error might affect therequirements when attemptingto find the variables.


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?

It is noted that 10Mbps network

cards are basically becomingobsolete for the reason of theirslow data transfer rates.

: 10Mbps network cardsare becoming obsolete becauseof their slow data transfer rates.


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?It is interesting to note thatmonitoring features in most cases

inform the user provided that aperformance bottleneck occurs.

: Notably, (ORInterestingly,) monitoringfeatures usually inform the userif a performance bottleneck

occurs.


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