A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Miles

General Make sure you always use a capital when using the first person I.Task Assessment Criteria

CoveredFeedback AO band

Leaflet AO1 It’s fascinating that you spend more time analysing leaflets than the photographers who actually appear in your exhibition. A well designed leaflet however, the lack of research makes the content sound naïve and more like your stream of consciousness than informed comment.

AO1: Competent

Practical Work and Gallery responses.

AO1AO3

Well done. You have documented the exhibitions you visited well. The practical tasks have also been completed to a confident level. I like the quality of the ipad images and the composition of these fleeting shots however, they are low in contrast and would have benefitted from more editing. Make sure research is in your own words.

AO1: FluentAO3: Confident

Observational Starting Points

AO3AO2

You haven’t taken any photographs in over 4 weeks!

AO3:AO2:

Research Starting Points

AO1 Not started specific to brief. AO1:

Target grade for Practical Response project: C

Next steps:

Please complete the tasks set by Mr Holden on the 1st Oct. Make sure you have entered the ideas he gave you into the teacher comments tab (AT THE TOP) on your weebly.