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Writers Workshop:
Joyful Writing
Building Community
Trust is key! “A window into the soul.” – Oscar Wilde All of Us: Played an instrument as a child Some of Us: Enjoy going to live concerts in small venues Unique to Me: Used to hang around with a punk rock band
Learning Intentions
I more fully understand how Gradual Release of
Responsibility and Assessment for Learning
support students to become more effective & joyful
writers
I have a couple of practical ideas I can use in my
classroom to help my students experience the joy of
writing
Developing Writers
Model
Feedback, feedback, feedback
Gradual Release of Responsibility
English Language Arts is more about the “how” than the “what”
“I do, you watch.”
“I do, you help.”
“You do, I help.”
“You do, I watch”
Foundation of Writers’ Workshop Lessons
Possible Writers’ Workshop Structure
Targeted Instruction (mini-lesson, read-aloud, modelling, shared writing)
-short
Time to write (long)
Time to share
Feedback … throughout
From Faye Brownlie, “New Trends in Assessment: 2nd Manitoba Adolescent Literacy
Summit Taking Action”, 2013.
From Faye Brownlie, “New Trends in Assessment: 2nd Manitoba Adolescent Literacy
Summit Taking Action”, 2013.
Joy & Hope
Key aspects of the new ELA curriculum are:
• focuses on the Big Ideas of the discipline:
o communicating ideas and information
o enjoyment of language, literature, reading, story
o exploration of self and community
• reflects the importance of BC’s Aboriginal worldviews and the importance of story in Aboriginal culture
• provides opportunities for students to:
o be engaged in playful language activities
o connect to literature in ways that are personally meaningful
o think creatively, reflectively and critically
How to Start?
Not everything makes for a great story
Task: What do real writers do? And, what are the
strengths in my writing?
Model
Things that happened this morning …
Read the newspaper; found out about the latest Rob Ford shenanigans
Went for a run … a coyote crossed my path
Nathaniel didn’t want to wear his Hallowe’en costume to pre-school
Dropped off goodies at my daughter’s school
Met with Dave Rawnsley regarding Spirals of Inquiry
Pick a story, think of a first line, write!
Our eyes met. His beady and empty eyes were frozen on me. He was no more than 20 feet away.
The bright full moon was the only light on this dark street next to the forested vacant golf course. I carefully brushed away the bead of sweat trickling down my cheek.
“Scram,” I yelled, surprising my self.
“Get out of here!” I continued, now waving my arms, making myself bigger.
What features of good writing
do you see?
Feature
Example
Co-Create Criteria
Your Turn
Class Brainstorm (3 things)
Individual Brainstorm
Pair Talk: Pick most interesting story
Getting Ready to Write
Goal for Writing
Walk & Talk – first line
Write for ….
AFL
Teacher feedback
Self-Assessment
Peer Talk: One thing I want you to notice about my story is ….
Partner Response
Goal for next time
Other Possibilities …
Placemat: What makes a great story?
Using Pictures
Goal: Use Juicy Words
Cover of a book (pictures from a book)
What do you notice?
What do you think will happen next?
Let’s Write!
Walk and talk
Write
Self Assess
Peer Talk
Other Possibilities
GuardianEye (app)
Fact to Fiction – Bryan Gidinski
Write it UP!
Pick your favourite story
Write IT up!
T-Square: minimum number of stories
T Square
Juicy Words
Engaging first line
Varied sentences
Personal Goal
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Criteria Evidence
Reflection: One thing I would like you to notice about my writing is ….
One goal I have for next time is ….
Poetry
Field Trip
Free Write – underline imagery
Deconstruct what makes a great poem
Establish criteria
Use Free-Write to create poem
One thing I can do …
What is ONE idea you can take back to your
classroom?
Write for ….
Share with two people