Using Strong Verbs

Created By Kathryn Reilly

Why Use Strong Verbs?

• Strong verbs create a clear image.

• Strong verbs convey a deeper meaning.

• Strong verbs eliminate reader confusion.

Weak vs. Strong Verbs• Said is a weak verb

– It leaves the reader wondering how it was said.

• Example: John said “Don’t go”.

• Replacing said with a strong verb clarifies John’s state of mind:

– John whispered “Don’t go.”– John screamed “Don’t go.”– John laughed “Don’t go.”– John pleaded “Don’t go.”

Replacing Weak Verbs• 1. Identify the weak verb.

• 2. Ask the weak verb “How?”• Maria sat on the couch. How did she sit?

• 3. Replace the weak verb with a strong verb.– Note: Sometimes a few words may change, and that’s okay!

• Maria slumped on the couch.• Maria curled into the couch.• Maria lounged on the couch.• Maria reclined on the couch.

Partial Weak Verb List• Try to eliminate the following weak verbs:

• Is• Are• Was• Were• Be• Being• Been• Said• Spoke• Walk• Ask