Unit 6 Detective stories

Main task

学习目标

1.知识目标 学习如何根据所给图片提示写一篇侦探故事。

2.能力目标 能够根据所提供的图片，展开合理的想象，写出语意清晰、结构合理的侦探故事。

3.情感目标 通过侦探或警员办案过程的了解，让同学们养成积极思维、关注细节的好习惯。

◆ Protect the crime scene.◆ Check the scene for objects, f___________ or other c____. ◆ Interview w________ for more information. ◆ Decide who the s_______ are and talk to them.◆ Find the right c_______ . the scene of the scene of

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Tom was under arrest for robbery.

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a jewellery shop a diamond necklace

Tom was shocked.

ac dba. A witness said that she had seen

someone running into Tom’s building.b. Tom planned to take the necklace to the

police station the next day.c. One day, Tom found a diamond necklace

outside his door.d. Tom was charged with robbery.

Police station

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Tom got along with all of his neighbours except the man who lived next door. The man never spoke to anyone and no one knew what he did for a living. One day, when Tom came home from work, he found a (1) _______________ outside his (2)____.Tom wondered where it came from. Tom thought that perhaps someone had dropped the necklace. So he planned to take it to the (3) ___________ the next day. He

Tom and the robber

diamond necklace door

police station

thought the police would be able to find the owner. Just then, the (4) _____ came to Tom’s home and saw the necklace in his hand. Tom was very shocked when he was (5) ___________ robbery. A policeman told him that a jewellery shop had been robbed. A (6) ______ said that she had seen someone run from the jewellery shop into (7) _____________ right after the (8) ______.Tom was not (9) _____, but how could he prove it ?

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charged with

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DiscussionDiscussion

Tom was not guilty, but how can we Tom was not guilty, but how can we

help him prove it?help him prove it?

We’d better call the police.

I don’t know. I’ve never seen him before.

We didn’t see or hear anything. We were having a party.

I’ll have to check thesefor fingerprints.

You’re under arrest for murder.

He was murdered. Start looking for clues.

Mr. and Mrs. Brown

• What happened one night?

• How was Mr. Smith killed?

(… by a gun / a knife)• Who found their

neighbour dead at home?

• How did they feel ?• What did they do ?

We’d better call the police.

A description of the crimeA description of the crime

Mr. Smith

What happened one night?How was Mr. Smith killed?(… by a gun / a knife)Who found their neighbour dead at home? How did they feel ?What did they do ?

We didn’t see or hear anything. We were having a party.

• Who arrived soon?• What could he find after

checking the scene?• What did the Browns say ?

because of having a party.

They said they hadn’t seen or heard anything

Objects or clues found at the crime sceneObjects or clues found at the crime scene

He was murdered. Start looking for clues.

Detective Li

I don’t know. I’ve never seen him before.

Nick, a cook in a

nearby restaurant

• Who else did Detective Li interview?

• Who was Nick?• What did Nick say?

• How did Nick look?

Nick said he had never seen Mr. Smith before.

A description of the suspectA description of the suspect

• How did Detective Li know the cook was the murderer ?

• Why did the cook do this?

Fingerprints / Other evidences.

How the detective knows he or she How the detective knows he or she has found the right personhas found the right person

You’re under arrest for murder.

I’ll have to check thesefor fingerprints.

• A description of the crimeA description of the crime• Any objects or clues found at the Any objects or clues found at the

scene of the crimescene of the crime• A description of the suspectA description of the suspect• How the detective knows he or she How the detective knows he or she

has found the right personhas found the right person

A detective story should A detective story should include ___ parts.include ___ parts.

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WritingWriting

Please write your own Please write your own detective story using the etective story using the pictures in Part B1.pictures in Part B1.

Remember: Try to make Remember: Try to make your story interesting your story interesting and reasonable.and reasonable. （合理（合理的）的）

TipsTipsTime: One nightTime: One nightPlace: At homePlace: At homeCrime: MurderCrime: MurderVictim: Mr. SmithVictim: Mr. SmithWitnesses: the BrownsWitnesses: the BrownsDetective: Detective LiDetective: Detective LiMurderer: NickMurderer: Nick供认供认…… (admitted that (admitted that ……))

写作侦探故事的评分标准写作侦探故事的评分标准

标准 分值得分

描写侦探故事的四大环节，缺一不可

40

文章构思合乎逻辑

10

文章过渡自然、流畅

10

语法、词汇运用得当

40

写作侦探故事的评分标准写作侦探故事的评分标准

标准 分值 得分描写侦探故事的四大环节，缺一不可

40

文章构思合乎逻辑 10

文章过渡自然、流畅 10

语法、词汇运用得当 40

Homework

Choose one of them to write about.