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‘Uniform’ Magazine
Evaluation
Things I am happy with about the Front Cover
Masthead to give the Magazine an
important connotation
Cover line to give the
major article of the issue
most attention
Puff to give the magazine a
sense of status
A mid-shot smiling, Feature Article Photograph to give a warm and inviting tone to the magazine
A barcode as a filler, in keeping with convention.
Things I am NOT happy about the Front CoverI used a typography that was very large and confrontational because it was very much like
army writing, giving it a harsh connotation. Which is against the happy and welcoming vibe I was trying to create in this cover. As this is the only font used I also feel the cover lacks
variation and seems very unnegotiable.
There is also only two colours used on the cover, which I feel isn’t enough
variation to attract a reader.
Also, because there are
not many plugs, the reader doesn’t really
know what is inside the magazine. Creating a
lack of interest and a not clear of
mode of address, which will perhaps
leave a reader confused as to what the
demographic is.
I am not happy with the overall miss-en-scene with the cover because I
feel it does not give off the overall feeling I was looking for
Things I am happy about the Contents Page
I numbered the page which is good because people like order and creates
a functional connotation
Used an image, related to the Feature Article, to give the connotation that Page 4 is the most important in the whole issue.
Very easy to read typography, making it easy for the reader to follow the content of the magazine and skip to the features that matter to them.
Because it is orderly, it creates a house style. Which will help
build the Brand of the magazine
Things I am NOT happy about the Contents Page
A lot of negative space which needs fillers to make the page more interesting.
Absolutely no colour, making it not engaging for the reader, giving it a
dull house style and wouldn’t engage the
demographic of students.
Typography is very small so there is too much emphasis on page numbers and gives a
confused connotation for the reader.
The image is noisy because of the black and white filter, making it very un lively:
Contrasting the cover and
going against the house style previously set up.
Not enough images to keep the reader interested or
give the Feature Articles enough attention Overall, I am not happy with the Contents Page
because I feel it gives a negative House Style
and isn’t in keeping with the demographic of students.
Tools used when creating the Front Cover
I used Type Tool and chose my
typographyEye-dropper Tool to ensure my text is the same colour
I used the Ellipse Tool and made it the same colour as my
title to put in a Plug
Move Tool to move text and shapes around the cover
Tools used when creating the Contents Page
Move Tool, to move text, images and shapes around the page
I Cropped the image so there wasn’t too much left over space around Louise
Type Tool to change the
typography, and size
Rectangle Tool to make the page number more dominant and to make
the columns of the page more clear
The conventions I used
I used a mid-shot on the front cover
Barcode as a space filler
Quote from the
feature article
I used columns on the contents page
Page numbers on the contents page
An image related to
the feature article
Large numbers to emphasise importance of articles