The unsatisfactory service in the school library

MAIN POINT:First I would like to report about the unsatisfactory service in the school library.

STAND : Apparently students need library as a resource of knowledge and information.

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The high food prices in the school canteen

MAIN POINT : Next, I would like to report about the high food prices in the school canteen.

STAND : Students think that the price is not affordable for students, who found that most of the food are quite expensive.

ELABORATION : Many students complained that the canteen take advantage.

EXAMPLE : For instance a bottle of mineral water is sold RM 1.30 , while its normal price is RM 1.00

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The dirty conditions of the school toilets

MAIN POINT : I would also like to report about the dirty conditions of the school toilets.

STAND : I think the dirty toilets cause many problem to the students and teachers.

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The request for a bus stop in front of the school

MAIN POINT : Then, we would like to request for a bus stop in front of the school.

STAND : The bus stop is very important to students and teachers.

ELABORATION : Provide safe and comfortable area for students while waiting for the bus.

EXAMPLE : ..especially when it is raining or when the whether is extremely hot.

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