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THE THREE LITTLE PIGSYEAR 6 WEEK 7
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MONDAY
TO IDENTIFY THE FEATURES OF A
JOURNALISTIC TEXT.
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‘PIGS IN PERIL AS HOUSESDESTROYED’.
THINKING TIME:
WHAT TYPE OF WRITING IS THIS?
WHAT'S THE STORY HERE?
WHAT IS THE STORY BASED ON?
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Can you identify the features of a newspaper article?
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How do you find your news?
NEWSPAPERS?
BBC NEWSROUND? HTTPS://WWW.BBC.CO.UK/NEWSROUND/42564095
WEBSITES?
SOCIAL MEDIA?
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Which of these are features of journalistic writing? Which are features of narrative (story)? Which are features of both?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDGrfhJH1P4
Write the 5 Ws with everything you have
learned so far.
(Who? What? When? Where? Why?)
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Tuesday
To create a headline and introduction with bias.
Success criteria:
I can explain what ‘bias’ is.
I can include the 5 W’s in my
opening.
I can use embedded clauses in my
journalistic writing.
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Headline
'WICKED WOLF FOUND DEAD IN PIG'S HOUSE‘
The editor of the newspaper has identified this headline, but there is no story as of yet.
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What is bias?
- the action of supporting or opposing a particular person or thing in an unfair way, because of allowing personal opinion
to influence your judgement
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'WICKED WOLF FOUND DEAD IN PIG'S HOUSE‘
What bias does this headline present? Who is it leaning towards?
Can you identify the bias vocabulary?(go to the next slide to see if you were right)
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The negative bias is leaning towards to the wolf; the bias vocabulary is ‘wicked’.
It implies that the wolf is: evil, hateful, shady, criminal, dishonest, unlawful,
abominable.
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Match the following to the statements below:positive bias towards the wolfnegative bias towards the pigsno biaspositive bias towards the pigs
'WOLF DISCOVERED DEAD IN PIG'S HOUSE'
'COLD-HEARTED PIG KILLS WOLF'/ 'WOLF FOUND DEAD IN KILLER-PIG'S CAULDRON' / WOLF'S CORPSE FOUND IN MURDEROUS PIG'S HOUSE'
'APOLOGETIC WOLF WRONGLY KILLED BY PIG'/ INNOCENT WOLF'S CORPSE DISCOVERED IN PIG'S HOUSE'
'INNOCENT VICTIMS CONVICTED FOR NO REASON?'/ 'WOLF FOUND DEAD IN INNOCENT PIG'S HOUSE'/ 'PIGS WRONGLY ARRESTED‘
(go to the next slide to see if you were correct)
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no bias:'WOLF DISCOVERED DEAD IN PIG'S HOUSE'
negative bias towards the pigs:'COLD-HEARTED PIG KILLS WOLF'/ 'WOLF FOUND DEAD IN KILLER-PIG'S CAULDRON' / WOLF'S CORPSE FOUND IN MURDEROUS PIG'S HOUSE'
positive bias towards the wolf:'APOLOGETIC WOLF WRONGLY KILLED BY PIG'/ INNOCENT WOLF'S CORPSE DISCOVERED IN PIG'S HOUSE'
positive bias towards the pigs:'INNOCENT VICTIMS CONVICTED FOR NO REASON?'/ 'WOLF FOUND DEAD IN INNOCENT PIG'S HOUSE'/ 'PIGS WRONGLY ARRESTED'
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Task:
Write an article opening paragraph, including the 5Ws (Who? Where? What? When? Why?) from the
information you have gathered in the first 35 seconds of the video.
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picture
caption
Feel free to create your own newspaper article template. The number of columns and the position of the picture are decisions you can make.
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Things to include:- additionally to all grammatical features we use in year 6, use vocabulary and statements to show clear positive or negative bias towards the wolf in your opening or in your
headline
- use relative/embedded clauses to add information about the wolf
- e.g. The wolf, who has been suspected of previous robberies, was found dead in the little pig’s home.
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More relative pronouns you could use.
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Using indirect speech (no speech marksneeded) He reported that . . . He also claimed that . . . He went on to state that . . . He confirmed that . . . She claimed that . . . He disputed that . . . She refused to accept that . . . He agreed that . . . He went on to tell us that . . . He continued by informing us that .
. . In addition to this . . . He also spoke of how . . . He refused to accept that . . . He reputed . . . He emphasised . . . He continued by . . . A spokesman stated that . . .
Using conjunctions in reports Shortly before daybreak . . . Later that day . . . Before long . . . As evening fell . . . As the sun set . . . Soon after . . . Hours later . . . Unfortunately . . . Fortunately . . . Soon So Afterwards After that Later on Next Moments later Seconds later Much later Within minutes Suddenly Without any warning . . . At that very moment . . . Presently In a flash Eventually Simultaneously
Newspaper Article Sentence Starters:- According to witnesses, …
- On the other hand, …- It appears that…- However, …- It is surprising that…- The following information…- Nobody knows…- Many people believe that…- Generally, …- Despite the fact that…- Although it was suspected…- Contrary to popular belief…- Even though it was thought…
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WednesdayTo write a newspaper article that
has a variety of opinions
Watch the advert from the start again, but this time, stop after 1:01
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDGrfhJH1P4
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'DESPERATE PIGS ADMIT TO
ARSON'The story is developing further and now there is a different bias to this headline.
Why? What makes it different?Today you will write the main paragraph in the newspaper, using quotes to back up any facts given.
The included quotes will be from the pig’s neighbours. Which story characters live in the neighbourhood is down to you – be creative!
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The neighbours will be interviewed by the journalist – you. They have heard the pigs scheming for weeks now about killing the wolf. Since the pigs lost their jobs, they have had little money and their neighbours have lent them money and given them food.
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Make a list of possible neighbours and the things they might say when they are interviewed. Think about things
they could have: seen, smelled, heard, witnessed etc. Look at the next slide for an example of how to include the
neighbour’s quote in the article.
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Quote step by step instructions:
Synonyms of said:
claimed, suggested, noted, declared, described, announced, reported, revealed, remarked, stated
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Another quote example:
A neighbour, Mrs. Shrek, a 30 year old unemployed super model, reported that the pigs have been plotting and scheming for quite some time now: 'I knew something suspicious was happening when I saw themthrow out the petrol cans’.
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Write 3/4/5 quotes from different neighbours, offering varied information. DO NOT repeat yourself. Be creative and use your
imagination.Remember to use the grammatical features expected in year 6 and a
few of the spellings.
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Watch advert again, but this time up to 1:28.Think about what revelations may come out at court when
pigs are questioned.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDGrfhJH1P4
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ThursdayTo write a newspaper article
including active and passive verbs.
Watch the video up to the pigs’ court scene - 1:30 secs.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDGrfhJH1P4
Success criteria:
I can suggest different motives for the crime.
I write with bias in favour of the pigs (you
are their lawyer).
I can use and identify active and passive
sentences in my work.
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FACTS MOTIVES
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What other motives could the pigs/wolf have to destroy the houses?
Use your imagination, here are some examples!
Pigs’ motives Wolf ’s motives
1. Pigs lost a bet and had to do a dare.
2. The wolf didn’t send them a Christmas
card and they wanted to get him into
trouble.
1. The wolf liked the plot of land and
wanted to build his own house on it.
2. He heard that the pigs were
spreading rumours about him on
social media.
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Identify active and passive verbs within the following sentences:
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Active verb/voice
Passive verb/voice
Active verb/voice
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Modelled Writing:
According to the pigs, they have been harassed for months. They insist that the Wolf had
threatened them with violence on numerous occasions; he had warned them that if they
told the authorities, he would destroy their houses. My clients - the pigs - were obviously
terrified of informing the police and lived in constant fear that the defendant would carry
out his despicable threats. The pigs continued to suffer in silence. As a direct result of
this, a complaint was lodged by the trio, stating they could not sleep and were put on
medication to relieve their anxiety. The medication, however, proved to have a negative
effect on the pigs' health. The victims became so petrified of the Wolf, that they refused
to leave their homes. Consequently, each of my clients was, in turn, fired from their
employment, which later resulted in financial difficulties. What possible motive could my
clients have for destroying the only place they considered a sanctuary from the Wolf's
bullying?
Can you identify the passive verbs in the example? (see next slide to check if you were right)
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Modelled Writing:
According to the pigs, they have been harassed for months. They insist that the Wolf had
threatened them with violence on numerous occasions; he had warned them that if they
told the authorities, he would destroy their houses. My clients - the pigs - were obviously
terrified of informing the police and lived in constant fear that the defendant would carry
out his despicable threats. The pigs continued to suffer in silence. As a direct result of
this, a complaint was lodged by the trio, stating they could not sleep and were put on
medication to relieve their anxiety. The medication, however, proved to have a negative
effect on the pigs' health. The victims became so petrified of the Wolf, that they refused
to leave their homes. Consequently, each of my clients was, in turn, fired from their
employment, which later resulted in financial difficulties. What possible motive could my
clients have for destroying the only place they considered a sanctuary from the Wolf's
bullying?
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Write your own defence case speech for the pigs with a strong bias. Remember, they are ‘innocent creatures’, mistreated by the ‘evil, wicked’ wolf. Think carefully about the use of vocabulary to show your bias position. Write the speech as a separate piece of writing; parts of it will be used in the article.
Must:- show clear bias- use passive voice - use relative and subordinate clauses
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Friday
To write a newspaper report?Success criteria:
I can write an opening paragraph including the
5 W’s.
I can include quotations from witnesses/people
of interest.
I can write a final paragraph summarising the
story and looking to the future.
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Using your work over the last 4 days, write a complete newspaper article, showing bias.
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Article structure:
• opening Paragraph: (5 W's)
• middle Paragraphs: What Happened? Wolf is Dead - What does the
evidence suggest happened?
• more details: times, dates, witnesses, reported speech, direct
quotations. Who has been arrested?
• final paragraph: What will happen next? Court
dates/location/judge's identity
• possible consequences/repercussions if pigs found guilty. Will the
laws change as a result of this case e.g- reasonable force?
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picture
caption
Feel free to create your own newspaper article template. The number of columns and the position of the picture are decisions you can make.
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