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Year 4 have been learning about what features you need for writing postcards. A simple task you may think. But Year 4 have had to prove to their teachers what good writers they can be by packing their writing with as many good features as they can! A postcard from . . . THE PUPIL VOICE THE PUPIL VOICE Howbridge Church of England Junior School Issue 4 Autumn 1 ~2016 The Pupil Voice is looking for budding journalists and enthusiastic writers. Here are some examples of story ideas: Interesting hobbies inside and outside of school; Teacher interviews; Celebrity interviews; Book / DEAR reviews; Student Council updates; Match reports; Write-ups about interesting lessons; What's going on in the local area; Advice for homework. Please post any ideas and writing into the Pupil Voice post-box with your name and class or send to [email protected] Any featured articles will be rewarded! Meet this month’s news team! Meet this month’s news team! Miley-Kay Shumba, Jacob Smith, Noah Dennison, Leah Butler Monday 10th October 2016 Dear Mum and Dad, On Sunday, I went to Kentwell. I loved it! The best bit was Scaresville. Although it wasn’t that scary, it was great fun because I got to stick my hand in brain slime. After that, I went in the garden to play football. Tomorrow, I want to go to a blood wedding. Well, let’s see? See you soon, Mason. P.S. Have you bought Match Attax for me? To Mrs T Baker 6 Xxxxxxx Road Witham Essex CM8 XXX Monday 10th October 2016 Dear Mum and Dad, I went to Barleylands farm, it was amazing! I can’t wait for tomorrow. I have been doing some fun things like: feeding lambs, cows and rabbits. Tomorrow, we are going to a bird of prey flying show. I’m really scared! My belly is turning over. Guess what? There’s an animal barn. There were lots of cute fluffy animals. In a minute, we are having cake - yum! I never want to come home, pick me up in two years please because I adore it. I have had a jolly good time. It’s the perfect place to be and find unusual gifts. The craft village is amazing and it’s been lovely to see all the animals. Love Maci XXX P.S. Give the dog a hug. Mr and Mrs. Smith 14 Xxxxxxx Road Witham Essex

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Page 1: THE PUPIL VOICETHE PUPIL VOICE - howbridgejunior.co.uk · Year 4 have been learning about what features you need for writing postcards. A simple task you may think. But Year 4 have

Year 4 have been learning about

what features you need for

writing postcards. A simple task

you may think. But Year 4 have

had to prove to their teachers

what good writers they can be

by packing their writing with as

many good features as

they can!

A postcard from . . .

THE PUPIL VOICETHE PUPIL VOICE

Howbridge Church of England Junior School Is

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The Pupil Voice is looking for budding

journalists and enthusiastic writers.

Here are some examples of story ideas:

Interesting hobbies inside and outside of

school;

Teacher interviews;

Celebrity interviews;

Book / DEAR reviews;

Student Council updates;

Match reports;

Write-ups about interesting lessons;

What's going on in the local area;

Advice for homework.

Please post any ideas and writing into the Pupil Voice

post-box with your name and class or send to

[email protected]

Any featured articles will be rewarded!

Meet this month’s news team!Meet this month’s news team!

Miley-Kay Shumba,

Jacob Smith,

Noah Dennison,

Leah Butler

Monday 10th October 2016

Dear Mum and Dad,

On Sunday, I went to Kentwell. I loved

it! The best bit was Scaresville.

Although it wasn’t that scary, it was

great fun because I got to stick my

hand in brain slime.

After that, I went in the garden to play

football. Tomorrow, I want to go to a

blood wedding. Well, let’s see?

See you soon,

Mason.

P.S. Have you bought Match Attax for

me?

To Mrs T Baker

6 Xxxxxxx Road

Witham

Essex

CM8 XXX

Monday 10th October 2016

Dear Mum and Dad,

I went to Barleylands farm, it was amazing! I

can’t wait for tomorrow. I have been doing some

fun things like: feeding lambs, cows and rabbits.

Tomorrow, we are going to a bird of prey flying

show. I’m really scared! My belly is turning over.

Guess what? There’s an animal barn. There were

lots of cute fluffy animals.

In a minute, we are having cake - yum! I never

want to come home, pick me up in two years please

because I adore it. I have had a jolly good time. It’s

the perfect place to be and find unusual gifts. The

craft village is amazing and it’s been lovely to see

all the animals.

Love Maci XXX P.S. Give the dog a hug.

Mr and Mrs. Smith

14 Xxxxxxx Road

Witham

Essex

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The Sky of WWII

Madeleine Smith

The sky of powerful planes

Against the shimmering moon

The BOMBS go BANG! It’s way too

soon.

The sky of sparkling STARS

Above the houses of hell

Oh I do hope that we do well.

The sky of fierce fire

During the scary night

It’s the only thing that keeps a light.

The world of eerie silence

All gone in a flash

The Nazis' die, Hitler’s lie!

The Bomb

by Jake Rose

The bomb of ruination

As ferocious as a falcon

Feared beside the bouncing bomb.

The bomb of ruination

As the eerie bomb meandered

Past the shattering buildings.

The Sounds of …

The sound of terror

Above the shelters

With the thudding bullets gliding to

the ground.

The sounds of panicking

As the sirens sounded beside

Big Ben

Before it was ten.

The sounds of motors

As the Messerschmitt glides across

London

Circling its prey.

by Logan Jackson

Esmiralda Dajqi’s

The Year of Death

The year of death comes again,

While the horrifying Hitler makes a

den.

BANG! POW! The Jews are down,

As the moon began to dance around.

The year of death comes again,

When the hideous Hitler says ‘Amen’.

Fizz and Fizzle as embers soar,

Like fire flies across the door.

The Crumbled Houses

By Ashleigh Cross

The crumbled houses of London

Falling down one by one

Like a villain that has just been defeated.

The crumbled houses of Birmingham

Shivering outside in the cold

Like they have been frozen and

broken free.

The crumbled houses of Liverpool

Worrying inside of the war

Like their life has been destroyed.

Try this recipe for a poem. Each verse has 3 lines.

Begin with the words ‘ XXxx Xxx...’ Then write a noun, e.g. night, stars, confu-

sion, hope, disaster etc. End the opening line with a verb that re-

lates to the title. Line 2 begins with a preposition, e.g. by,

beside, around, towards, past etc. Then include a place, e.g. castle, town, city,

tower etc. Add on ‘of’ plus a noun, e.g. silence, wishes,

scars etc. The 3rd line is a simile, starting with ‘like’.

As part of their World War II studies, Year 6 have

been writing poetry inspired by some poems that

they have been looking at in class.

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Tom Barton’s ‘The Bomb …’

The bomb of destruction

BANG! Bouncing off buildings

Like a raging rhino

Causing terror wherever it jumps.

The bomb of destruction

Hovering like a hawk

Like a dragon’s roar

Causing commotion parkouring the

skyline.

The bomb of destruction

Blazing like a fireball

Whistling a whale song

Burning down a burgundy brick wall.

The bomb of destruction

Slithers like a scaly snake poisoning

innocent people

Rampaging round corners with a rake.

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Very hard! Q5: Do you ever get fed up? Sometimes I do. Q6: What is your dream job? To be a fantastic teacher. Q7: What do you

normally eat for school

lunch?

I have school dinners.

Q8: We hear you have a

grandchild—can you

tell us about him/her?

I have a granddaughter. Her

name is Arabella and she’s

thirteen weeks old and very

beautiful.

Mrs Wendholt is the

school librarian, she

has been at the school

since 1997.

Leah and Noah, in Year

3, wrote some questions

and conducted the

interview.

Q1 How do you know

where each of the books

go in the library?

They are sorted by

author, non-fiction and

fiction books. They are

also sorted by number.

Q2 How do you choose

the library monitors?

They are chosen by the

teachers at the beginning of

the school year. Lunchtime

monitors are Years 5 and 6

only. They volunteer on a

waiting list.

Q3 How do you choose

classes for story time?

Monitors designed their

own posters and lead story

time and organised it for

them to read to Year 3s.

Q4 How much money do

the walkie-talkies cost?

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“Her name is

Arabella.”

THE PUPIL VOICE THE PUPIL VOICE

Miss Swan is a Year 3 teacher at Howbridge Junior School. She joined the school in 2001. Miley and Jacob in Year 3 made a list of questions and carried

Miss Swan

BEHIND THE SCENES: An interview with Miss Swan...

BEHIND THE SCENES: An interview with Mrs Wendholt...

“He makes me

a nice, hot cup

of tea.”

Miss Swan with her granddaughter Arabella.

out an interview with her. Q1: Where were you born? I was born in London. Q2: Is teaching hard when someone doesn’t understand? Yes Q3: Do you enjoy being a teacher?

Yes I do, very much.

Q4: Is it hard to teach when people are talking?

The school dinner ladies

purchased the walkie-

talkies so I don’t have a

clue!

Q5 Do you enjoy being a

librarian?

Most of the time but

sometimes it is lonely,

quiet or noisy. I enjoy

helping children find

books.

Q6 When and where

were you born?

St. Peter’s Hospital in

Maldon in May 1958.

Q7 What do you do at

lunchtime?

I go round to my Dad’s

house, he lives next to the

school and he makes me a

nice, hot cup of tea.

Q8 How do you spend

your time outside of

school?

I go to fitness classes on

Monday and Tuesday,

and on Wednesday I do

floristry at college. On

Thursday, I enjoy

gardening.

Mrs Wendholt, our lovely school librarian.

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Last month’s £5 Amazon voucher winners are: David Simkhada and Dylan Symmonds ~ Thank you for all the entries!