syracuse city school district 08-unit02... · page 1 revised: 9/28/2016 syracuse city school...
TRANSCRIPT
Page 1
Revised: 9/28/2016
SYRACUSE CITY SCHOOL DISTRICT
Grade08 Unit 02 Writing Unit Template
Argument Writing
Writing Standards:W.8.1,W.8.4,W.8.5,W.8.9
Language Standards:L.8.1,L.8.2,L.8.3,L.8.6
UNIT DESCRIPTION
This argumentative writing unit asks students to reflect on the issues presented in the Informational Reading Unit in
order to plan and craft a persuasive speech. Students will use persuasive techniques and present a clearly organized
argument, supported with evidence gathered through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of relevant
sources. Emphasis will be given to the development of a claim supported with clear reasons and relevant evidence,
appropriate attention to task, purpose, and audience, the introduction of a counterclaim and a call to action. Writing a
persuasive speech will challenge students to develop strong persuasive techniques and disciplined planning, drafting,
and revision skills.
Page 2
STANDARDS
Writing Standards:
W.8.1 Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and
relevant evidence.
a. Introduce claim(s), acknowledge and distinguish the claim(s)
from alternate or opposing claims, and organize the reasons
and evidence logically.
b. Support claim(s) with logical reasoning and relevant
evidence, using accurate, credible sources and demonstrating
an understanding of the topic or text.
c. Use words, phrases, and clauses to create cohesion and
clarify the relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons,
and evidence.
d. Establish and maintain a formal style.
e. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from
and supports the argument presented.
W.8.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development,
organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and
audience. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in
standards 1–3 above.)
W.8.5 With some guidance and support from peers and adults,
develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising,
editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well
purpose and audience have been addressed. (Editing for conventions
should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and
including grade 8 on page 66.)
Language Standards:
L.8.1 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English
grammar and usage when writing or speaking.
a. Explain the function of verbals (gerunds, participles, infinitives)
in general and their function in particular sentences.
b. Form and use verbs in the active and passive voice.
c. Form and use verbs in the indicative, imperative, interrogative,
conditional, and subjunctive mood.
d. Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb voice and
mood.
L.8.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English
capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing.
a. Use punctuation (comma, ellipsis, dash) to indicate a pause or
break.
b. Use an ellipsis to indicate an omission.
c. Spell correctly.
L.8.3 Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing,
speaking, reading, or listening.
a. Use verbs in the active and passive voice and in the
conditional and subjunctive mood to achieve particular effects
(e.g., emphasizing the actor or the action; expressing uncertainty
or describing a state contrary to fact).
Embedded Standards: W.8.9, W.8.10, L.8.4, L.8.5, L.8.6, SL.8.1, SL.8.3, SL.8.4
Writing Rubric
Link to standards-based rubric (This rubric is based on the NYS 6-8 4 point rubric but revised to fit persuasive writing)
Writing Assessment
Writing Prompt:
Think back to the previous unit’s reading selections. Reflect on the issues that we read about. Choose one issue that you believe history should not
repeat itself with. Write a persuasive speech in which you persuade your audience why we should never repeat this historical, social issue.
In your speech, be sure to include the following:
Introduce your claim with a thesis statement (your position on the issue)
Page 3
Acknowledge the opposing view’s position (counterargument)
Distinguish your position from opposing position
Use supportive evidence when discussing both positions
Provide a concluding statement that supports your position
Suggested topics:
Should it be legal for children to be used as laborers to benefit society and the economy?
Do unions protect the rights of industrial workers?
Do immigrants deserve equal treatment as naturally born citizens?
Post Assessment (Post-Assessment):
Read Teen Curfews, by Todd Foster. Write a persuasive speech where you take a stand on the issue.
In your speech, be sure to include the following:
Introduce your claim with a thesis statement (your position on the issue)
Acknowledge the opposing view’s position (counterargument)
Distinguish your position from opposing position
Use relevant evidence to support your position
Provide a concluding statement that supports your position
* Assessment text can be found in the Glencoe, Course 3 textbook, on page 561.
Mentor Texts for Think Alouds Resources for Informational/Descriptive Writing
Speech to Support Unit:
Michelle Obama Speech on childhood obesity (use segments, as
appropriate)
Angelina Jolie Persuasive Speech
Mentor Text (for teaching points):
Virtual High Schools Text and Think Aloud/ Mini Lesson Resource
*If students do not choose to write about the previous unit’s issues, see
the following texts as reference for a social issue.
From Glencoe In Time Magazine:
A Symphony of Her Own by Lev Grossman (Lexile 950)
An Elusive Dream in the Promise Land by David Thigpen (Lexile
1260)
Not Just An African Story by Richard Schickel (Lexile 1080)
Starving for Friendship by Audrey Brashich (Lexile 1050)
Big Ideas Essential Questions
Writers use topics that they feel strongly about to persuade an
audience.
Persuasive writing allows a writer to address a difference in
opinion.
Writers state an opinion, defend it, and convince others to
agree with them.
How do we convince the world today to learn from historical social
injustices?
How does an author persuade their readers?
Page 4
Vocabulary Anchor Charts
Alternate
Argue
Claim
Counter
Evidence
Oppose
Persuade
Components of a Persuasive Speech
Standard/
Outcome
Teaching Points
(Lesson Objectives) Checks for Understanding Scaffolds & Supports
Instructional
Resources & Tools
Generating /
Brainstorm
2.1a Writers research relevant
evidence to support their claims by
using accurate, credible sources.
2.1b Writers generate ideas about
a topic by asking:
What do I know about this? What
do my sources tell me?
(Teacher to students: In order for a
writer to take a stance on an issue
he or she must gather information
and then decide on a claim.)
a. Completed graphic organizer of
pros and cons related to the claim
students choose to make.
b. Quick Write: What evidence will
be included in your speech? How
does the evidence persuade the
audience?
Text Coding of research
article.
Working with a peer to
identify relevant evidence.
Conferencing Questions:
What are the pros and
cons to your issue? After
looking at both sides of the
argument, where do you
stand? Why?
Completed speech outline
with relevant evidence for
the both sides of the claim.
Complete an outline for
support and organization.
Planning,
Drafting &
Revising
2.2 Writers develop a thought-
provoking introduction by drawing
on opposing views or the
controversy around a topic
Quick Write: Is your claim clear and
debatable?
Review examples of
informative text that is
designed to persuade the
audience. Examine the
claim within those texts.
Provide examples of
interesting leads or hooks.
Explain that a claim is
similar to a thesis
statement.
Introduce a claim by
engaging the reader
LearnZillion Lesson
Resource on writing
the persuasive essay:
Use pg. 2 as a
resource for the
introduction and
thesis statement.
Lessons on Crafting a
Page 5
Standard/
Outcome
Teaching Points
(Lesson Objectives) Checks for Understanding Scaffolds & Supports
Instructional
Resources & Tools
Persuasive Essay
(LearnZillion)
2.3 Writers acknowledge alternate
or opposing claims by addressing
both sides of an issue.
(Teacher to students: Addressing
possible arguments against your
claim keeps the writer in control
and further persuades the
audience to accept your claim.)
Quick Write: What evidence does
the opposing side use to support
their claim?
Working with a partner,
brainstorm
counterarguments about
your claim. Plan evidence
that you would use to
argue the
counterarguments.
Conferencing Questions:
What are the opposing
arguments of your claim?
How can you argue
against them? What is the
strongest point against your
stance that you can
confidently argue against?
Acknowledge a
counterclaim by
critiquing your own
argument
LearnZillion Lesson
2.4 Writers support claims with
relevant evidence, using accurate,
credible sources by asking
themselves “does this support my
claim?”
Quick Write: What are the three
strongest pieces of evidence you
have to support your claim? Put
these in order of most relevant to
least relevant and elaborate with
supportive details for each piece
of evidence.
Conferencing Questions:
How does your evidence
relate to each other in
each paragraph?
Use of boxes and bullets
strategy (LearnZillion)
Graphic Organizer
for evaluating a
writer’s argument:
Glencoe Course 3,
pg. 541
Strengthen body
paragraphs by
connecting
evidence to the
claim
LearnZillion Lesson
2.5a Writers organize and structure
their work by ensuring evidence is
presented in a clear and logical
manner.
(Teacher to students: Today we are
going to work on revising our work.
The word “revision” literally means
a. Peer Conversation: Have
partners exchange papers, read
each other’s topic sentences to
see if (a)they present a clear
argument and (b) the evidence
presented is relevant to the topic
sentence?
Conferencing Questions:
What do you feel is your
strongest point? Do you
have enough evidence to
support your claim?
Working with a partner,
review essay drafts. In the
Topic Sentence and
Paragraph Structure
Resource
Page 6
Standard/
Outcome
Teaching Points
(Lesson Objectives) Checks for Understanding Scaffolds & Supports
Instructional
Resources & Tools
‘to see again.’ During this phase
you will look at your essay with new
eyes and make sure it
communicates your beliefs
effectively to the audience.)
2.5b Writers create clear
relationships among the claims,
counterclaims, reasons, and
evidence by using a variety of
transitions.
(Teacher to students: Transitional
words, phrases and clauses help
you show how ideas are related to
each other.)
b. Revision Activity: Highlight any
transition words you used. Ask
yourself, “Do they help describe
the relationship between ideas? Do
they help move from one
paragraph to the next?”
body of the essay, rank the
strength of the evidence
starting with the most
powerful.
Look through sample texts
and identify transition
words. Have students write
the words on sticky notes.
Create a class poster of
transition words or have
partners work together to
include transition between
ideas.
Conferencing Questions:
What transitional words did
you use to show the
relationships between your
thoughts and ideas?
Using Transition
Words Resource
(LearnZillion)
2.6 Writers utilize the conclusion as
their final opportunity to convey a
claim with conviction to the
audience.
(Teacher to students: Writers can
end a persuasive speech in many
ways. Quotes, predictions,
questions, and a call to action are
methods that help to summarize a
speech.)
Think-Ink-Pair-Share: What
methods can you use in the
conclusion to further persuade the
audience?
Provide definition of a call
to action: a statement that
tells the audience what
actions you want them to
take as a result of the
knowledge you have given
them.
Examine strong conclusions
in sample speeches.
Closing a Persuasive
Speech Resource
Drafting a
Conclusion (LearnZillion)
Write a concluding
statement by
rewording main
points
LearnZillion Lesson
Editing &
Publishing
2.7 Writers show respect for the
reader by applying what is known
about conventions (check
punctuation, capitalization,
spelling, and grammar).
Editing Activity: With the use of an
editing/ proofreading checklist,
students should make any
necessary corrections.
Mini Lessons as needed on
punctuation, capitalization,
grammar, citing sources,
etc.
Peer editing with a
proofreading guide.
Conferencing Questions:
General Strategies
for Proofreading
Resource
Proofreading Marks
Resource
Page 7
Standard/
Outcome
Teaching Points
(Lesson Objectives) Checks for Understanding Scaffolds & Supports
Instructional
Resources & Tools
What aspects of writing are
you and your partner
focusing on during peer
editing? What constructive
advice do you have for
your partner?
2.8 Writers practice the delivery of
their speeches by practicing in a
quiet place, in front of friends or
adults, or with an audio/ video
tape recorder.
Think-Ink-Pair-Share: You’ve heard
that practice makes perfect, but
how can you practice a speech?
Review etiquette for giving
a speech.
Provide a feedback sheet
for partners, if practicing in
pairs.
Tips for delivering a
persuasive speech:
Glencoe Course 3,
pg. 588
Speaking Writers present speeches
Writers present speeches in small
groups made up of peers,
teachers, and other adults.
Self-Reflection:
Was your thesis well-defined?
Did you use evidence to
differentiate fact from opinion?
Did you anticipate and answer
counterarguments?
Did you maintain a reasonable
tone as well as eye contact?
Anchor Chart:
o Look at the audience.
o Speak loudly and
clearly.
o Speak in a slow, natural
tone. Look at your
notes only when you
need a reminder.
o Use clear, correct
language. Do not use
slang.
o Stand up tall.
Unit Speech rubric
Post Assessment
Students administered Post
Assessment and are graded on
Rubric.
Page 8
Suggested Pacing Calendar
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
December 12 December 13
December 16 December 17 December 18 December 19 December 20
December 21-January 5
Holiday
January 6 January 7 January 8 January 9
Unit Assessment Unit Assessment