strength and weaknesses learnt from my audience feedback
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Strengths from my audience feedback.
This is an example of the comedyscenes that my audience feedback
said they liked in my trailer.
Audience feedback suggestedthat they liked the introduction
of the characters.
Here are examples of the storyline which the audience feedback said were conventional and good
Weaknesses from our audience feedback
From my audience feedback
they said my opening scene
was too long and theysaid I needed to shorten
itdown.
My audience feedback suggestedthat the relationship between
Eddy and Chloe should be shownbefore this scene, to give a contrast
between the party and therelationship before.