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November 2013

©2013 Public Consulting Group. All rights reserved.

Structures and Systems:

Homework, Annotation, and

Accountable Independent Reading

115

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 2 • Lesson 5

File: 9.1.2 Lesson 5 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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9.1.2 Lesson 5

Introduction

In the next two lessons, students will read closely and discuss an excerpt from Chapter 2,“Hangman,”

from the novel Black Swan Green. Students will read from “So anyway, Mum dropped me at Malvern”

to “I was taken to see Mrs. de Roo, the speech therapist at Malvern Link Clinic. That was five years ago”

(pp. 24–26). This reading will introduce students to the narrator and main character, Jason, and will

familiarize them with his style and voice. Close reading in this section will prepare students for reading

a second, longer section from later in the novel that will offer them rich content for comparison to

Rilke’s “Letter One.”

After a brief introduction and teacher Read-Aloud, students will close read the first four paragraphs of

the selection, using text-dependent questions to drive them back into the text and deepen their

understanding. Students will carefully consider the character, his feelings, and his motivations. They

will also consider the relationship between language and meaning in this rich novel. In a homework

assignment, students have an opportunity to deepen their understanding of the character and his

situation by choosing a precise word to describe Jason and supporting their choice with evidence from

the text.

Standards

Assessed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.3 Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)

develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot

or develop the theme.

Addressed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says

explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.9-10.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including

figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word

choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a sense of time and place;

how it sets a formal or informal tone).

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 2 • Lesson 5

File: 9.1.2 Lesson 5 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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Assessment

Assessment(s)

· The assessment in this lesson is in two parts. The first part consists of student responses to text-

dependent questions that occur during the lesson sequence. The second part is the homework.

· Homework: Reread the section of the text from today’s lesson. Then choose a precise word from or

implied by the text to describe Jason as the author presents him in this chapter. Write a well-

developed paragraph that uses details from the paragraphs to support your choice. Be sure to use a

word we discussed today in your response.

High Performance Response(s)

· Teaching points related to the text-dependent questions are embedded in the Learning Sequence

below.

· A proficient response to the reflective writing prompt will offer a specific descriptive word stated in

or inferred from the text, such as insecure, worried, or embarrassed. These responses will use

details from the present action of the text as well as the flashback to support the claim. Look for

evidence of students choosing smaller pieces of text and embedding them with appropriate

quotation marks in sentences.

o A word that could be used to describe Jason is insecure. He is insecure about his speech, so

much so that he envies those who do not need to test what they want to say for “stammer

words.” This self-consciousness has been with him since his very first stammering episode,

which took place five years before the story begins. He was unable to say the word nightingale

in class and was humiliated by this. His insecurity extends to other aspects of his life, including

a wish to avoid the “Dyson Perrins” kids so he would not have to worry about getting beaten

up.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)

· scrap (n.) – a fight

· skive off (v.) – skip

· flid (n.) – slang for someone with physical or mental challenges

· noose (n.) – a loop with a running knot that tightens as the rope is pulled

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)

· stammer (v.) – to speak with involuntary breaks and pauses

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 2 • Lesson 5

File: 9.1.2 Lesson 5 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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Lesson Agenda/Overview

Student-Facing Agenda % of Lesson

· Standards: RL.9-10.1, RL.9-10.3, RL.9-10.4

· Text: “Hangman” from Black Swan Green (pp. 24–26)

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

• Read-Aloud

• Close Reading and Partner Discussion

• Closing

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bid

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wa

tery

ey

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nd

th

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om

an

“w

ith

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at

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ng

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s.”

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e f

ee

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ha

t th

e r

ece

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e i

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f th

e r

ece

pti

on

ist’

s

ab

ilit

y t

o s

ay

wh

at

she

wa

nts

wh

en

she

th

ink

s it

. T

he

na

rra

tor

als

o h

ea

rs

in t

he

clo

ck’s

tic

k a

re

min

de

r o

f h

is

up

com

ing

exe

cuti

on

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esc

rib

ed

mo

re

exp

lici

tly

in t

he

pa

ren

the

tica

l th

at

foll

ow

s.

the

na

rra

tor’

s re

aso

n f

or

be

ing

at

the

clin

ic s

o i

nd

ire

ctly

.

3.

In t

he

ir r

esp

on

ses

to t

he

pre

vio

us

qu

est

ion

, st

ud

en

ts m

ay

ha

ve

alr

ea

dy

no

ted

th

at

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n e

nv

ies

the

re

cep

tio

nis

t,

bu

t th

ey

ma

y a

lso

se

e t

ha

t th

is e

nvy

is

the

re

ve

lati

on

of

his

sta

mm

er,

th

e “

thin

g

he

wa

nts

to

ta

lk a

bo

ut

lea

st.”

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he

lp

stu

de

nts

co

nn

ect

th

e i

nd

ire

ct r

eve

lati

on

to a

fe

eli

ng

of

susp

en

se,

ask

th

em

to

con

sid

er

ho

w t

he

pa

rag

rap

h m

igh

t b

e

dif

fere

nt

if it

be

ga

n w

ith

an

exp

lan

ati

on

tha

t h

e i

s a

t th

e c

lin

ic f

or

his

sta

mm

eri

ng

pro

ble

m.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

re

ad

an

d a

nn

ota

te t

he

ne

xt

two

pa

rag

rap

hs,

fro

m “

Mo

st

pe

op

le t

hin

k s

tam

me

rin

g a

nd

stu

tte

rin

g

are

th

e s

am

e ”

to

“W

ha

t’s

wro

ng

wit

h

Jaso

n T

aylo

r?”

be

fore

en

ga

gin

g t

he

m i

n

the

ne

xt s

et

of

dis

cuss

ion

qu

est

ion

s:

Stu

de

nts

re

ad

an

d a

nn

ota

te.

4.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

co

mp

lete

a T

urn

-an

d-

Ta

lk a

bo

ut

the

dif

fere

nce

be

twe

en

a

sta

mm

er

an

d a

stu

tte

r.

Lea

d a

qu

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de

bri

ef

to m

ak

e s

ure

stu

de

nts

un

de

rsta

nd

th

is d

isti

nct

ion

.

4.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y in

clu

de

th

e

foll

ow

ing

:

·A

stu

tte

r is

wh

en

a s

pe

ake

r re

pe

ats

the

fir

st s

ou

nd

of

a w

ord

.

·A

sta

mm

er

is w

he

n a

sp

ea

ker

ge

ts

stu

ck o

n t

he

fir

st s

ou

nd

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en

do

es

the

ga

me

of

Ha

ng

ma

n

na

rra

ted

he

re t

ak

e p

lace

?

5.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y in

clu

de

th

e

foll

ow

ing

:

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ere

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rte

d t

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he

sh

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sta

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Ho

w d

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s th

e n

arr

ato

r fe

el

du

rin

g t

he

ga

me

of

Ha

ng

ma

n?

6.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y in

clu

de

:

·Ja

son

is

em

ba

rra

sse

d.

·H

e i

s fr

igh

ten

ed

an

d s

elf

-co

nsc

iou

s.

7.

Fo

llow

up

th

e d

iscu

ssio

n b

y

cha

lle

ng

ing

th

e s

tud

en

t p

air

s to

lo

ok

for

inte

rest

ing

la

ng

ua

ge

th

at

giv

es

a d

ee

pe

r

sen

se o

f w

ha

t Ja

son

is

fee

ling

.

7.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y in

clu

de

th

e

foll

ow

ing

:

·“k

ab

oo

m”

·th

e r

efe

ren

ce t

o “

no

ose

·im

ag

es

of

“ey

es

po

pp

ing

ou

t” a

s it

tig

hte

ns

·re

pe

titi

on

an

d e

xag

ge

rati

on

of

“Eve

ry”

7.

Off

er

ad

dit

ion

al m

od

eli

ng

an

d

gu

ida

nce

as

ne

ed

ed

, b

ut

be

gin

by

en

cou

rag

ing

stu

de

nts

to

dra

w o

n t

he

ir

kn

ow

-ho

w f

rom

wo

rk w

ith

th

e R

ilke

lett

er

be

fore

in

tro

du

cin

g a

ne

w s

caff

old

.

Co

nsi

de

r p

rov

idin

g l

an

gu

ag

e f

ram

es

to

he

lp s

tud

en

ts l

ink

spe

cifi

c w

ord

ch

oic

es

wit

h t

he

ir e

ffe

cts:

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he

wo

rd _

__

giv

es

a

sen

se o

f _

__

_”

or

“Co

mp

ari

ng

__

_ t

o

__

_ le

ts m

e k

no

w _

__

.”

Th

is s

ect

ion

is

pa

rtic

ula

rly

ric

h.

Co

nsi

de

r

pro

ject

ing

it

for

full

-cla

ss r

efe

ren

ce a

s

yo

u d

iscu

ss i

t.

Co

ncl

ud

e t

he

clo

se r

ea

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g s

ect

ion

of

the

le

sso

n b

y r

ea

din

g a

lou

d t

he

la

st

pa

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rap

h f

or

tod

ay

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om

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are

d,

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ath

less

an

d a

sha

me

d”

to “

Th

at

wa

s fi

ve

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ars

ag

o.”

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de

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fo

llow

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ng

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ad

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en

tly

.

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lan

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e f

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nte

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resp

on

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ma

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clu

de

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e

foll

ow

ing

:

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o m

att

er

ho

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rep

ea

ts t

hre

e

tim

es.

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ult

iple

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ject

ive

s in

a r

ow

,

“sh

ock

ed

, sc

are

d,

bre

ath

less

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ash

am

ed

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hif

ts a

bru

ptl

y t

o “

I co

uld

n’t

sa

y

‘nig

hti

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ale

.’”

It’s

a v

ery

lo

ng

le

ad

- in

to a

sh

ort

, st

ark

sta

tem

en

t.

8.

Alt

ho

ug

h s

tud

en

ts m

ay

no

tice

th

e

rep

eti

tio

n,

the

y m

ay

no

t b

e a

ble

to

dis

cuss

its

co

ntr

ast

to

“I

cou

ldn

’t.”

If

no

t,

pro

mp

t st

ud

en

ts b

y s

ha

rin

g t

ha

t o

ne

wa

y t

o a

na

lyze

th

e e

ffe

ct o

f re

pe

titi

on

is

to lo

ok

at

the

po

int

wh

ere

th

e r

ep

eti

tio

n

bre

ak

s.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

do

a T

urn

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d-T

alk

ab

ou

t th

eir

re

act

ion

s to

th

is p

ara

gra

ph

an

d t

his

se

ctio

n o

f B

lack

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an

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Inv

ite

th

em

to

ma

ke a

no

te o

f th

ing

s

the

y f

ou

nd

pu

zzli

ng

.

Lea

d a

sh

ort

dis

cuss

ion

of

stu

de

nt

rea

ctio

ns

an

d r

esp

on

ses

to t

he

te

xt.

T

he

pe

rso

na

l a

nd

em

ba

rra

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g n

atu

re

of

this

na

rra

tive

wil

l ve

ry l

ike

ly r

eso

na

te

wit

h s

tud

en

ts.

Th

ey

ha

ve

no

w s

pe

nt

con

sid

era

ble

tim

e d

uri

ng

th

is l

ess

on

an

aly

zin

g t

he

te

xt.

Dis

cuss

ing

th

eir

rea

ctio

ns

giv

es

an

op

po

rtu

nit

y t

o

pro

cess

an

d c

on

ne

ct t

o w

ha

t th

ey

ha

ve

rea

d.

5%

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losi

ng

F

or

ho

me

wo

rk,

inst

ruct

stu

de

nts

to

rere

ad

th

e s

ect

ion

of

the

te

xt f

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tod

ay’s

le

sso

n.

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oo

se a

pre

cise

wo

rd

fro

m o

r im

plie

d b

y t

he

te

xt t

o d

esc

rib

e

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n,

as

the

au

tho

r p

rese

nts

him

in

th

is

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pte

r. W

rite

a w

ell

-de

ve

lop

ed

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rag

rap

h t

ha

t u

ses

de

tail

s fr

om

th

e

text

to

su

pp

ort

yo

ur

resp

on

se.

Exp

lain

th

at

stu

de

nts

wil

l u

se t

he

ir

R

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ind

stu

de

nts

to

in

teg

rate

sh

ort

er

qu

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ord

s a

nd

ph

rase

s—to

exp

lain

the

ir c

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.

De

pe

nd

ing

on

stu

de

nts

’ e

xpe

rie

nce

s a

nd

sen

siti

vit

y t

o t

his

se

lect

ion

, y

ou

ma

y

wis

h t

o a

dd

an

op

po

rtu

nit

y to

wri

te

ab

ou

t th

eir

pe

rso

na

l re

spo

nse

to

wa

rd

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n a

nd

his

sit

ua

tio

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fte

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ey h

ave

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ple

ted

th

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lose

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ad

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d

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File: 9.1.3 Lesson 2 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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9.1.3 Lesson 2

Introduction

In this lesson, students will develop their close reading skills as they begin to work carefully through the

short excerpt Act 1.1.206–236. In this passage, Romeo discusses his unrequited love for Rosaline with

his cousin Benvolio. Students will complete their close reading of this passage in Lesson 3.

Activities involve reading aloud, discussion and reflection, and writing work in tandem with a set of

text-dependent questions to guide students in their exploration of the unifying focusing question of

this two-lesson arc: What can you infer about Romeo from the way that he describes Rosaline? Student

work in this lesson will lay the groundwork for this exploration, while Lesson 3 will prompt students to

draw upon and further their initial analysis.

Students will analyze sentence structure, rhyme scheme, word choice, and figurative language in order

to begin their unit-long exploration of Romeo’s character development. This passage is students’

introduction to the character of Romeo. As such, it acts as a point of origin for student analysis of how

Romeo’s character unfolds throughout the play as revealed by Shakespeare’s language and syntax, and

Romeo’s interactions with other characters.

This lesson also functions as an introduction to Baz Luhrmann’s film Romeo + Juliet, which will be used

regularly throughout the unit to supplement close readings of the text. Students will watch Luhrmann’s

representation of the events of 1.1 that precede a close reading of excerpt 1.1.206–236. This first

section of film will introduce students to many of the key characters of Shakespeare’s play, as well as

facilitate understanding of the key events that lead up to Romeo’s discussion with Benvolio.

Additionally, this lesson will introduce students to critical viewing strategies via Film Tool: Stylistic

Choices, a tool that will accompany the film throughout the unit and encourage students to think

critically about Luhrmann’s stylistic choices as well as assist in the collection and organization of notes

on the sequential structure of the play. This tool will ensure that film viewing remains a purposeful,

critical, and rigorous classroom activity. For homework, students will expand this lesson’s Quick Write

assessment response to include additional pieces of textual evidence.

Standards

Assessed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text, including

figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of specific word

choices on meaning and tone.

Addressed Standards

RL.9–10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says

explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

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File: 9.1.3 Lesson 2 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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RL.9-10.3 Analyze how complex characters develop over the course of a text, interact with other

characters, and advance the plot or develop the theme.

Assessment

Assessment(s)

Quick Write: Draw upon your understanding of the metaphor that Romeo has constructed in lines 206–

209 to answer the following prompt: Do Romeo and Rosaline feel the same way about their

relationship?

High Performance Response(s)

Student responses should call upon their understanding of Romeo’s motivations and interactions that

they have developed through their exploration of word choice and figurative language in this lesson.

Lesson 3 will ask students to build on this initial understanding of Romeo’s motivations and

interactions to begin to develop an understanding of how Shakespeare crafts Romeo as a complex

character.

Sample response: Although Romeo desires this relationship as evidenced by his pursuit of Rosaline,

“she’ll not be hit with cupid’s arrows (207–208). Rosaline’s resistance to Romeo’s “arrows” of love

indicates that she does not seem to feel the same way.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)

· Dian (n.) – a reference to Diana, the Roman goddess of hunting and chastity

· proof (n.) – in this context, armor

· chastity (n.) – virginity, celibacy

· posterity (n.) – all future generations

· forsworn (v.) – relinquished under oath

· doctrine (n.) – a set of beliefs held and taught by a church, political party, or other group

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)

· assailing (v.) – making a violent attack on

Lesson Agenda/Overview

Student-Facing Agenda % of Lesson

• Standards: RL.9-10.1, RL.9-10.3, RL.9-10.4

• Text: Act 1.1.206–236

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

• Film: Excerpt from Baz Luhrmann’s Romeo + Juliet (2:37–13:35)

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• Masterful Reading: BBC Radio Production of 1.1.206–236 (14:35–16:14)

• Text-Dependent Questions and Activities

• Quick Write

• Closing

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· Film: Excerpt from Baz Luhrmann’s Romeo + Juliet (2:37–13:35)

· Masterful Reading: BBC Radio Production of 1.1.206–236 (14:35–16:14)

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ut

the

lig

hti

ng

in

ea

ch

sce

ne

? W

hy

do

yo

u t

hin

k L

uh

rma

nn

ma

de

th

ese

cho

ice

s?

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ast

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ul

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ad

ing

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BC

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dio

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du

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n

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s st

ud

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ts m

ay

ha

ve

no

ted

wh

ile

wa

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ing

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nn

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ilm

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is

oft

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sie

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un

de

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nd

a

pla

y l

ike

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me

o a

nd

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lie

t th

rou

gh

pe

rfo

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nce

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lain

th

at

tod

ay

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na

lysi

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gin

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ce.

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ce o

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ct 1

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stru

ct s

tud

en

ts t

o f

ollo

w

alo

ng

in

th

eir

te

xt a

nd

be

pre

pa

red

to

off

er

the

ir

firs

t im

pre

ssio

ns

to t

he

fo

llow

ing

qu

est

ion

:

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at

are

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me

o a

nd

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nvo

lio

dis

cuss

ing

?

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d a

qu

ick

cla

ss d

eb

rie

fin

g o

f st

ud

en

t

ob

serv

ati

on

s.

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de

nts

lis

ten

to

a p

rofe

ssio

na

l re

cord

ing

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this

po

int

in t

he

le

sso

n,

stu

de

nts

ma

y

po

sse

ss o

nly

te

nta

tiv

e f

am

ilia

rity

wit

h t

he

exc

erp

t. S

tud

en

ts m

ay

be

ab

le t

o i

de

nti

fy t

he

top

ic o

f th

e c

on

vers

ati

on

be

twe

en

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nvo

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gir

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ail

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le o

n b

oth

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es

an

d

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e U

nit

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.)

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ern

ati

vely

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ad

alo

ud

th

e p

ass

ag

e

or

call

up

on

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de

nt

volu

nte

ers

to

he

lp p

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th

e e

nti

re e

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ve

less

flu

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ta

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imp

ler

vo

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ng

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l a

id

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tud

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t co

mp

reh

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sio

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rein

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co

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tha

t th

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1.

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gg

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de

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top

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om

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an

d B

en

voli

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re

dis

cuss

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, e

xpla

in t

ha

t yo

u w

ill

be

wo

rkin

g t

hro

ug

h d

iffi

cult

la

ng

ua

ge

an

d p

hra

ses

tog

eth

er

to c

om

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o a

be

tte

r u

nd

ers

tan

din

g o

f th

e e

xce

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pro

of

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d c

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o a

nsw

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foll

ow

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qu

est

ion

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1.

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y w

ill R

osa

lin

e “

no

t b

e h

it w

ith

cu

pid

’s

arr

ow

s”?

(1

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–2

07

)

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stu

de

nts

to

re

rea

d l

ine

s 2

06

–2

09

in

th

eir

pa

irs

an

d u

nd

erl

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th

e w

ord

s th

at

are

re

late

d t

o t

he

de

fin

itio

n o

f p

roo

f th

ey

ha

ve d

iscu

sse

d.

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en

,

ha

ve

th

em

co

nsi

de

r th

e f

ollo

win

g q

ue

stio

n:

2.

Wh

at

is t

he

re

lati

on

ship

be

twe

en

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me

o a

nd

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sali

ne

?

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de

nts

lis

ten

to

lin

es

20

6–

20

9 a

nd

th

en

dis

cuss

de

fin

itio

ns

of

pro

of

an

d c

ha

stit

y.

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de

nts

re

ad

lin

es

20

6–

20

9 i

n p

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s a

nd

an

swe

r q

ue

stio

ns.

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de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e:

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sali

ne

is

usi

ng

he

r ce

liba

cy l

ike

arm

or

to

pro

tect

he

rse

lf f

rom

fa

llin

g in

lo

ve;

she

is

“in

stro

ng

pro

of

of

cha

stit

y w

ell

-arm

ed

” (2

09

).

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me

o i

s in

love

wit

h R

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lin

e a

nd

pu

rsu

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he

r, l

ike

a h

un

ter

try

ing

to

ca

tch

his

pre

y,

as

is

ev

ide

nce

d b

y h

is a

tte

mp

ts t

o “

hit

” h

er

wit

h

“cu

pid

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rro

ws”

(2

07

–2

08

).

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av

e s

tud

en

ts r

esp

on

d t

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fo

llow

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ick

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te p

rom

pt:

Do

Ro

me

o a

nd

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sali

ne

fe

el

the

sa

me

wa

y a

bo

ut

the

ir r

ela

tio

nsh

ip?

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su

re t

o u

se e

vid

en

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the

te

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up

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r a

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rm s

tud

en

ts t

ha

t a

t th

e b

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of

the

ne

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mp

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rite

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e H

igh

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rfo

rma

nce

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spo

nse

at

the

be

gin

nin

g o

f th

is

less

on

.

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are

th

e m

ost

imp

ort

an

t o

bje

cts

in t

he

sce

ne

(s)?

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w a

re t

he

y u

sed

?

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un

s a

re b

ran

dis

he

d i

n t

his

sce

ne

.

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yb

alt

po

ints

a g

un

at

a h

arm

less

lit

tle

bo

y.

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yb

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ses

his

gu

n b

efo

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e s

ho

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it

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ctio

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ap

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in a

nd

aro

un

d f

lash

y s

po

rts

cars

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he

ch

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rs w

ea

r cr

oss

ne

ckla

ces.

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ere

is

a c

ross

on

th

e d

ash

bo

ard

in

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nta

gu

e’s

ca

r.

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eli

cop

ters

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tro

l th

e a

ir o

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ity.

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ity l

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r C

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om

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d s

o is

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ma

y b

e w

riti

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etr

y.

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ing

Sty

les:

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w d

o t

he

act

ors

po

rtra

y t

he

ir c

ha

ract

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? A

re t

he

y d

ram

ati

c? A

re t

he

y r

ese

rve

d?

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on

tag

ue

s a

re b

ein

g r

ea

lly g

oo

fy,

fig

ht

sce

ne

is

a b

it o

ve

rly d

ram

ati

c, h

igh

ly s

tyli

zed

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itin

g:

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at

do

yo

u n

oti

ce a

bo

ut

cam

era

po

siti

on

at

dif

fere

nt

mo

me

nts

in

th

e s

cen

e(s

)? I

s it

clo

se t

o t

he

act

ion

? I

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fa

rth

er

aw

ay

? A

t w

ha

t a

ng

le i

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e

cam

era

po

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oe

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ve b

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cto

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le

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ut

of

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sce

ne

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era

zo

om

s in

on

th

e g

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f M

on

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pu

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th

e f

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t sc

en

e.

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is p

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ph

asi

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n t

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we

ap

on

s.

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am

era

cu

ts v

ery

qu

ick

ly b

etw

ee

n M

on

tag

ue

s a

nd

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pu

lets

in

fig

ht

sce

ne

. T

his

cre

ate

s a

nd

he

igh

ten

s a

fe

elin

g o

f in

evit

ab

le v

iole

nce

.

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an

y a

lte

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tin

g c

lose

up

s o

f fa

ces

in f

igh

t sc

en

e d

ram

ati

ze t

he

te

nsi

on

.

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am

era

cu

ts b

etw

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n c

lose

up

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nta

gu

e a

nd

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pu

let’

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ces

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rie

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fig

hti

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lico

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arm

y c

om

ing

in

, e

tc.

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om

e p

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f th

e f

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t sc

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e a

re i

n s

low

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tio

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le

ap

s th

rou

gh

th

e a

ir w

ith

gu

ns

bla

zin

g.

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hti

ng

an

d C

olo

r: H

ow

is

ligh

t u

sed

? W

ha

t co

lors

do

yo

u s

ee

in

th

e s

cen

e(s

)?

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ts o

f b

rig

ht

lig

ht

an

d c

olo

rs a

re u

sed

in

th

e f

igh

t sc

en

e—

blu

e s

ky,

pin

k h

air

, b

rig

ht

blu

e,

red

an

d y

ell

ow

sp

ort

s ca

rs

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he

n M

on

tag

ue

s q

ue

stio

n B

en

vo

lio

ab

ou

t R

om

eo

, th

e c

olo

rs a

re m

ute

d a

nd

du

sky,

an

d t

he

lig

hti

ng

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da

rk.

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he

n R

om

eo

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intr

od

uce

d,

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sit

s o

n t

he

be

ach

fra

me

d b

y o

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ge

an

d y

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f a

ro

ma

nti

c su

nse

t.

List

th

e k

ey

eve

nts

of

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film

se

gm

en

t yo

u v

iew

ed

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he

re i

s a

str

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t fi

gh

t b

etw

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n t

he

Mo

nta

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es

an

d t

he

Ca

pu

lets

.

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he

Pri

nce

ye

lls

at

the

fa

mili

es

for

fig

hti

ng

an

d t

ell

s th

em

to

pu

t a

sto

p t

o i

t.

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he

Mo

nta

gu

es

ask

Be

nv

olio

ab

ou

t th

e w

he

rea

bo

uts

of

Ro

me

o.

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om

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d B

en

voli

o m

ee

t a

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lk a

bo

ut

Ro

me

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ect

ed

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ne

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le v

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. T

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rie

ty o

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bse

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ot

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qu

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tity

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no

tes

tha

t th

ey

sh

ou

ld t

ake

.

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om

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wa

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t h

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sali

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stru

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ha

t th

ey

re

vis

ed

an

d e

xpa

nd

ed

for

ho

me

wo

rk a

nd

po

st t

he

fo

llow

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inst

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ion

s o

n t

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bo

ard

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rea

d y

ou

r Q

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rite

an

d l

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s 1

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9 o

f th

e p

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ase

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ho

me

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acc

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act

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ca

n h

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u t

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nd

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tan

d t

he

me

an

ing

of

the

ad

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ass

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lin

e 2

11

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de

nt

resp

on

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ma

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de

nts

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po

int

to t

he

wo

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lin

e 2

06

an

d s

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me

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ssiv

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de

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at

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n s

om

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ect

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de

nts

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turn

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ain

to

th

eir

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on

2 Q

uic

k W

rite

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o R

om

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an

d

Ro

sali

ne

fe

el t

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sa

me

wa

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bo

ut

the

ir

rela

tio

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ip?

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ose

th

e f

oll

ow

-up

qu

est

ion

:

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w t

ha

t yo

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ak

en

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ne

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20

9�

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nce

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th

e t

ext

to

su

pp

ort

th

e c

laim

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ma

de

in

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sso

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dy

to

dis

cuss

yo

ur

ob

serv

ati

on

s w

ith

th

e c

lass

.

2.

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 3 • Lesson 5

File: 9.1.3 Lesson 5 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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9.1.3 Lesson 5

Introduction

In this lesson, students will begin a close reading analysis of Romeo and Juliet’s first encounter at the

Capulet Ball (1.5.92–109). Students will focus on Romeo’s initial overture to Juliet in lines 1.5.92–95.

Slowing down the pace and unpacking Romeo’s first four lines will enable students to construct the

complex foundational understanding necessary for their continued engagement with this multifaceted

extended metaphor. In Lesson 6, students will continue their analysis of this excerpt as they explore

how Juliet’s response shapes the dialogue that follows, and what this increasingly intricate interaction

might reveal about these two complex characters.

This lesson and the following one focus student analysis on Shakespeare’s use of imagery. A set of text-

dependent questions with an emphasis on vocabulary guide students in making meaning of Romeo’s

complex metaphor. At the close of the lesson, students will be introduced to the Stage Directions Tool

that will continue to shape their analysis in Lesson 6. For homework students will briefly respond in

writing to a focusing question that asks them to consider their understanding from this lesson’s close

reading.

Standards

Assessed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.3 Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting

motivations) develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters,

and advance the plot or develop the theme.

Addressed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text

says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.9-10.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in the text,

including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the cumulative impact of

specific word choices on meaning and tone (e.g., how the language evokes a

sense of time and place; how it sets a formal or informal tone).

CCSS.ELA-Literacy.

CCRA.R.7

Integrate and evaluate content presented in diverse media and formats, including

visually and quantitatively, as well as in words.

Assessment

Assessment(s)

• Stage Directions Tool

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 3 • Lesson 5

File: 9.1.3 Lesson 5 Date: 8/31/13 Classroom Use: Starting 9/2013

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High Performance Response(s)

• The paraphrasing and stage directions required by the Stage Direction Tool will encourage students

to analyze the interactions between Romeo and Juliet and what these interactions may reveal

about the motivations of these two complex characters. See the Stage Direction Tool Model for

High Performance Responses.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)

· shrine (n.) – a place in which devotion is paid to a saint or god; a tomb for the dead

· pilgrim (n.) – one who travels to a shrine or holy place as a devotee

· saint (n.) – one who is officially recognized after death as being holy

· palmer (n.) – another word for pilgrim

· purged (v.) – gotten rid of; cleared of guilt

· trespass (v.) – to sin; to enter someone’s land illegally

· prodigious (adj.) – being an omen (obsolete)

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)

· profane (v.) – to treat something sacred with contempt or irreverence

Lesson Agenda/Overview

Student-Facing Agenda % of Lesson

• Standards: RL.9-10.1, RL.9-10.3, RL.9-10.4, CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.R.7.

• Text: Act 1.5.92–109

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

• Watch Romeo + Juliet [27:57–30:26]

• Opening Activity

• Text-Dependent Questions and Activities

• Stage Directions Tool

• Closing

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Materials

• Film Tool: Stylistic Choices (see Lesson 2)

• Film Clip: Romeo + Juliet [27:57–28:46]

• Stage Directions Tool (found at the end of this lesson)

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d A

ctiv

itie

s

H

av

e s

tud

en

ts f

orm

re

ad

ing

pa

irs

an

d r

ere

ad

Ro

me

o’s

fir

st f

ou

r li

ne

s a

lou

d (

92

–9

4).

Dis

pla

y

the

fo

llow

ing

qu

est

ion

s fo

r st

ud

en

ts t

o

dis

cuss

in

th

eir

pa

irs.

Stu

de

nts

sh

ou

ld r

eco

rd

the

ir a

nsw

ers

an

d b

e r

ea

dy

to s

ha

re i

n f

ull

cla

ss d

iscu

ssio

n.

1.

Wh

at

is t

he

ho

ly s

hri

ne

th

at

Ro

me

o’s

ha

nd

is u

nw

ort

hy

to

to

uch

?

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

1.

Ro

me

o i

s re

ferr

ing

to

Ju

liet,

or

pe

rha

ps

mo

re s

pe

cifi

call

y,

Juli

et’

s h

an

d.

Ad

dit

ion

al

sca

ffo

ldin

g f

or

lin

es

92

94

:

·U

nd

erl

ine

th

e w

ord

th

at

Ro

me

o u

ses

to d

esc

rib

e h

is

ow

n h

an

d.

Stu

de

nts

un

de

rlin

e u

nw

ort

hie

st.

·W

ha

t is

Ro

me

o c

om

pa

rin

g h

is

lip

s to

? U

nd

erl

ine

th

e e

vid

en

ce

in t

he

te

xt.

Stu

de

nts

un

de

rlin

e t

wo

blu

shin

g

pil

gri

ms.

2.

Ho

w c

an

th

is d

esc

rip

tio

n h

elp

yo

u t

o

un

de

rsta

nd

th

e m

ea

nin

g o

f th

e w

ord

pro

fan

e

(92

) in

th

is c

on

text

?

2.

If R

om

eo

is

say

ing

th

at

his

ha

nd

is

un

wo

rth

y t

o t

ou

ch J

uli

et’

s, t

he

n p

rofa

ne

de

scri

be

s th

e r

esu

lt o

f th

e c

on

tact

be

twe

en

so

me

thin

g h

oly

an

d s

om

eth

ing

un

wo

rth

y.

Ro

me

o’s

to

uch

wo

uld

ma

ke

dir

ty,

de

gra

de

, o

r d

ish

on

or

Juli

et’

s

ho

lin

ess

.

3.

Wh

at

is R

om

eo

co

mp

ari

ng

his

lip

s to

?

Un

de

rlin

e t

he

wo

rds

in t

he

te

xt.

Usi

ng

th

e

vo

cab

ula

ry b

ox

at

the

bo

tto

m o

f yo

ur

too

l,

3.

“Tw

o b

lush

ing

pil

gri

ms.

” R

om

eo

is

com

pa

rin

g h

is l

ips

to t

wo

re

d-f

ace

d,

em

ba

rra

sse

d,

self

-co

nsc

iou

s, o

r fl

ush

ed

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tr

av

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ho

ly p

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.

4.

Wh

at

ge

ntl

e s

in a

re R

om

eo

’s l

ips

ab

ou

t to

com

mit

?

4.

Ro

me

o w

an

ts t

o p

lace

a t

en

de

r k

iss

on

Juli

et’

s h

an

d t

o r

ep

lace

th

e r

ou

gh

to

uch

of

his

un

wo

rth

y h

an

d.

5.

Ho

w m

igh

t yo

ur

un

de

rsta

nd

ing

of

this

pa

ssa

ge

ch

an

ge

if

the

wo

rd g

en

tle

(in

“g

en

tle

sin

”) w

as

rep

lace

d w

ith

ro

ug

h?

Ho

w d

oe

s th

e

ad

ject

ive

ge

ntl

e i

nfo

rm y

ou

r u

nd

ers

tan

din

g o

f

Ro

me

o’s

to

ne

an

d i

nte

nti

on

in

th

is p

ass

ag

e?

Wh

at

oth

er

ad

ject

ive

s in

lin

es

92

–9

5 s

up

po

rt

this

un

de

rsta

nd

ing

?

5.

If R

om

eo

ha

d r

efe

rre

d t

o h

is a

ctio

ns

as

“ro

ug

h”

sin

, it

wo

uld

se

em

lik

e R

om

eo

be

lie

ves

tha

t th

is f

lirt

ati

on

is t

ruly

a b

ad

thin

g.

Alt

ho

ug

h R

om

eo

is

usi

ng

se

rio

us

reli

gio

us

lan

gu

ag

e,

he

is

flir

tin

g w

ith

Ju

lie

t.

His

“si

n,”

an

d t

he

refo

re h

is o

ve

rtu

res,

are

no

t tr

uly

ev

il,

the

y a

re k

ind

an

d t

en

de

r

(95

).

6.

Re

fer

to t

he

de

fin

itio

ns

of

pil

gri

m a

nd

shri

ne

at

the

bo

tto

m o

f y

ou

r to

ol.

Wh

at

ext

en

de

d m

eta

ph

or

is R

om

eo

co

nst

ruct

ing

in

the

se f

irst

fo

ur

lin

es?

6.

Ro

me

o h

as

cre

ate

d a

re

ligio

us

me

tap

ho

r

to d

esc

rib

e h

is f

irst

in

tera

ctio

n w

ith

Ju

lie

t.

Ro

me

o i

s co

mp

ari

ng

him

self

to

a r

eli

gio

us

de

vo

tee

, a

nd

Ju

lie

t is

th

e h

oly

th

ing

th

at

he

ha

s co

me

to

wo

rsh

ip.

7.

Wh

at

mig

ht

this

me

tap

ho

r su

gg

est

ab

ou

t

ho

w R

om

eo

pe

rce

ive

s Ju

lie

t?

7.

Th

is m

eta

ph

or

sug

ge

sts

tha

t R

om

eo

see

s Ju

lie

t a

s so

me

thin

g t

ha

t is

wo

rth

y o

f

his

wo

rsh

ip.

So

me

stu

de

nts

mig

ht

infe

r

tha

t R

om

eo

is

pu

ttin

g J

uli

et

up

on

a

pe

de

sta

l or

ele

va

tin

g h

er

to a

sta

tus

ab

ov

e

him

self

.

Cir

cle

aro

un

d t

he

ro

om

an

d a

ssis

t a

s n

ee

de

d.

Lea

d a

fu

ll c

lass

dis

cuss

ion

of

qu

est

ion

s 1

–7

.

20

%

Sta

ge

Dir

ect

ion

s T

oo

l

E

xpla

in t

o s

tud

en

ts t

ha

t in

a p

lay

lik

e t

his

on

e,

sta

ge

dir

ect

ion

s te

ll t

he

act

ors

wh

at

the

y w

ill

An

swe

rs w

ill

vary

, b

ut

the

y s

ho

uld

in

dic

ate

an

un

de

rsta

nd

ing

of

the

imp

lie

d a

ctio

ns

in

No

te:

If s

tud

en

ts a

re u

nfa

mil

iar

wit

h t

he

fo

rma

t a

nd

fu

nct

ion

of

sta

ge

dir

ect

ion

s, d

ire

ct t

he

m t

o

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g t

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rite

a s

tag

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for

Ro

me

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o a

cco

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an

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e f

irst

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ur

lin

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this

sce

ne

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ow

wo

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yo

u d

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ct t

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act

ion

?

Ta

ke

a m

inu

te t

o t

hin

k i

nd

ep

en

de

ntl

y,

the

n

dis

cuss

wit

h y

ou

r p

art

ne

r.

Ca

ll u

po

n s

ev

era

l stu

de

nt

pa

irs

to s

ha

re t

he

ir

resp

on

ses.

No

w d

ire

ct s

tud

en

ts i

n f

ram

ing

a m

od

el

sta

ge

dir

ect

ion

to

acc

om

pa

ny

th

ese

lin

es.

Fin

all

y,

ha

ve

stu

de

nts

re

cord

th

is

coll

ab

ora

tive

ly f

orm

ed

sta

ge

dir

ect

ion

on

the

ir o

wn

to

ol.

Stu

de

nts

ca

n r

efe

r to

th

is

sta

ge

dir

ect

ion

as

a m

od

el

in t

he

ir c

on

tin

ue

d

wo

rk w

ith

th

is t

oo

l in

Le

sso

n 6

.

Inst

ruct

stu

de

nts

to

ha

nd

in t

he

ir S

tag

e

Dir

ect

ion

s T

oo

l. T

he

to

ol

will

be

pa

sse

d b

ack

at

the

be

gin

nin

g o

f Le

sso

n 6

.

the

se f

ou

r li

ne

s.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

: R

om

eo

mig

ht

be

re

ach

ing

fo

r

Juli

et’

s h

an

d o

r m

ov

ing

to

gra

b i

t. R

om

eo

mig

ht

be

mo

vin

g t

o k

iss

Julie

t’s

ha

nd

,

lift

ing

it

to h

is m

ou

th.

(Se

e t

he

Mo

de

l

Sta

ge

Dir

ect

ion

s T

oo

l fo

r a

sa

mp

le

resp

on

se.)

lin

es

10

6 a

nd

10

8.

Po

int

ou

t th

e

bra

cke

ted

in

form

ati

on

in

th

e

ma

rgin

, [k

isse

s h

er]

, a

s a

n

exa

mp

le.

5%

C

losi

ng

F

or

ho

me

wo

rk s

tud

en

ts w

ill r

e-r

ea

d a

po

rtio

n

of

the

exc

erp

t fr

om

th

is l

ess

on

an

d r

esp

on

d

bri

efl

y i

n w

riti

ng

to

th

e f

ollo

win

g q

ue

stio

n:

Ho

w d

oe

s R

om

eo

’s i

nit

ial

ap

pro

ach

to

wa

rds

Juli

et

com

pa

re t

o h

is a

pp

roa

ch t

ow

ard

s

Stu

de

nts

re

-re

ad

an

d r

efl

ect

on

th

e c

lose

rea

din

g t

he

y c

om

ple

ted

in

th

is l

ess

on

,

resp

on

din

g b

rie

fly

in w

riti

ng

to

a f

ocu

sin

g

qu

est

ion

.

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spo

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me

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Re

rea

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lin

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92

–9

5 a

nd

re

vie

w y

ou

r Le

sso

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no

tes.

No

w r

ere

ad

Ro

me

o’s

de

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on

of

his

lo

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fo

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23

5).

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te a

re

fle

ctiv

e r

esp

on

se t

o t

he

fo

llo

win

g q

ue

stio

n:

Ho

w d

oe

s R

om

eo

’s i

nit

ial

ap

pro

ach

to

wa

rds

Juli

et

com

pa

re t

o h

is

ap

pro

ach

to

wa

rds

Ro

sali

ne

? B

e r

ea

dy

to h

an

d i

n y

ou

r w

ritt

en

re

spo

nse

at

the

be

gin

nin

g o

f th

e n

ext

less

on

.

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9–12 ELA Prefatory Material

Instruction Is Shifting

This is a comprehensive English Language Arts curriculum designed to fit the demands and instructional

shifts of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS). As such, the modules, units and lessons in this

curriculum were designed with a close adherence to the Publisher's Criteria and The Tri-State/ EQuIP

Rubric. This means that teachers may encounter some new or unfamiliar structures, approaches, and

strategies. The authors of these modules have been careful to ensure that its strongest characteristic is

that it will support teachers as they build students' skills and knowledge in order to prepare them for

College and Career as defined by the standards themselves. The major features of the modules and the

ways in which these materials may differ from more traditional resources are outlined in the paragraphs

below.

The following information is organized into three sections.

1. Overall Curricular Changes Due to the Shifts Demanded by the Common Core State Standards

Some of the design features herein may necessitate shifts in practice for many high school ELA

teachers, while many of them may be familiar as principles of strong and effective teaching. Where

we see a possibility for significant changes in teacher practice, we are providing a bit of the logic

behind the choices we've made.

2. Our Approach to Homework

The modules include a research-informed, consistent, and scaffolded approach to nightly homework

for students. It blends "Accountable Independent Reading" (AIR) with opportunities for extension of

student thinking and preparation for new learning. We are providing a thorough explanation of the

system suggested herein.

3. Flexibility in This Curriculum

While some lessons provide detailed instructions or recommendations, it’s important to note that

the lessons are not scripts and they do allow for teacher preference and flexibility to ensure that

what is happening in the classroom both meets the needs of students and is in service of the shifts

and the standards. We've been careful to point out the key places where teacher perspective and

context-based decision making will be critical.

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1. Overall Curricular Changes Due to the Shifts Demanded by the

Common Core State Standards

a. Text Complexity The texts read in this curriculum, with few exceptions, are considerably and consistently more complex

than texts often studied at the high school level. This is in keeping with the increase in text complexity

demanded by the Common Core State Standards. While there are familiar canonical texts such as

Romeo and Juliet and “The Short, Happy Life of Francis Macomber,” there are also contemporary works

such as David Mitchell's Black Swan Green and Karen Russell's “St. Lucy's Home for Girls Raised by

Wolves.” These lessons and units also include literary nonfiction such as Rainer Maria Rilke's Letters to a

Young Poet in order to expose students to a balance of text types and to build knowledge about the

world (NYS ELA shifts 1,2, 3). It will always be necessary and appropriate for teachers to ask and support

all students to navigate grade-level text complexity. The real difference here is that teachers will no

longer translate or explain texts that are complex; all students—regardless of current ability—will be

unpacking, chunking, deconstructing, seeking meaning, conducting analysis, defining words in context,

using and developing background knowledge, and working to understand what they can of the text at

hand.

b. Depth, Not Breadth This curriculum focuses on slowing the pace and carefully exploring complex text through reading and

rereading sections to fully explore the ideas, structures, and layers of meaning. The emphasis is placed

on depth of student understanding of the text they are reading rather than the breadth of texts

“covered” by teachers. In order to keep this focus on deep student analysis of texts some works are read

in their entirety, while many others are read in excerpted selections. As students progress through each

year and up through the grades, their ability to read closely and raise and answer evidence based

questions will develop and increase in efficiency. The traditional goals of "covering texts or "collecting

miles on the page" are secondary to ensuring that students have the space, time, and support to truly

navigate grade level text complexity. What's more, the likelihood of those goals being met

independently by all students is increased when classroom time devotes itself to thoughtful exploration

and analysis of text. This curriculum expects students to engage in regular and accountable independent

reading to ensure all students are reading a sufficient volume of texts; this is discussed in greater detail

below.

c. Text Pacing and Creating Space for Close Reading As a result of the complexity of the texts used in the curriculum and the depth with which we want

teachers and students to engage in analyzing and making meaning from texts, the lessons within the

curriculum require a much slower pace than is common in many high school ELA classrooms. Pacing has

been slowed to provide time for the teacher to facilitate class in such a way that it is the students who

are thinking, talking, and writing about the text through reading, rereading, and collaborating. This will

often feel different from more traditional approaches where teachers establish background knowledge,

conduct sometimes lengthy pre-reading activities, restate or upgrade nascent student ideas and share

meaning more readily. It will not be efficient at first, and it may even feel uncomfortable for awhile as

teachers and students all work to find their “sea legs” in this new venture. In other words, in these

lessons, students are more frequently asked to address difficult questions with complex text

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independently and in groups and to understand and articulate their own confusions and understandings

before teachers provide answers or modeling.

d. Revisiting Text and Annotating Text While common practice in poetry lessons, rereading and reviewing prose in small chunks for specific

purposes is more common in these modules than in traditional curricula. A class may spend an entire

period on ten lines of text to achieve a common and solid understanding. Part of the process of

achieving this depth of understanding involves annotating text. This curriculum frequently asks students

to note specific parts of a text that contain important ideas or themes that spark connections to other

parts of the text or a different text, or require additional attention or discussion to support

comprehension and analysis. In situations where students do not have their own copies of text to

annotate, direct guidance should be provided to them on how to take notes and make annotations not

directly on the text. For example, T-Charts with page numbers and comments or the liberal use of small

self-stick notes would be fine solutions among others.

e. Academic Vocabulary One of the foci of this curriculum, as with the Common Core Standards in general, is building students'

academic vocabulary through exposure to Tier Two words (what the standards refer to as “academic

vocabulary”) more likely to appear in complex literary and informational texts as well as regular practice

and review with the words in varied contexts (shift 6). By encountering a volume of challenging text

through independent and classroom reading, students will be exposed to a large number of these

transferable, high-octane terms; gain familiarity with them through context; and occasionally—when the

absence of definition would prohibit understanding—learn their meaning from their teacher. See our

research page for more information on the approach to academic vocabulary and academic language

demanded by the Common Core State Standards.

f. Writing from Sources and Research This curriculum emphasizes writing from sources and research, again matching the emphasis placed on

these activities in the Common Core State Standards. Using the text as the basis for forming claims and

making inferences, the students write in a variety of contexts for a variety of purposes (shifts 4, 5).

Students also engage in peer-supported and independent research projects of varying lengths and

regarding various topics. See our research page for more information about the writing standards and

the approach to research demanded by the Common Core.

g. Standards Assessed versus Standards Addressed For each lesson in the curriculum, we have identified one or two "Assessed Standards" and another

small group (most often 1–3) of "Addressed Standards." Assessed Standards identify the core work of

the lesson around which student learning has been designed. For the Assessed Standard(s) we have paid

special attention to ensure that the work of the lesson provides students opportunities to engage with

the demands of the full standard. Students will be assessed on this core work during the daily

assessment at the end of each lesson.

This Assessed/ Addressed difference may require a shift in teacher thinking in that the Common Core

demands careful attention to the language of the entire standard. Typically, for example, ELA curriculum

has concerned itself with the independent study of theme. Because of the structure and coherence of

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individual standards within the Common Core, we must now examine the way an author manifests

theme over time through the arc of a character's development.

Due the interrelated nature of the standards, each lesson addresses (or requires some work in) other

standards to varying degrees. We have identified those standards, which have been "addressed" in

sufficient detail to scaffold student learning in order to more deeply engage with the standards in future

lessons.

The daily assessments are specifically designed to provide students the opportunity to demonstrate

their development (growth in their learning) against the standard(s) assessed in that lesson. In some

assessments, the language of the standard will be evident in the question. Other assessment questions

do not clearly reflect the language of the standards but require students to conduct all of the thinking

embedded in a specific standard in order to appropriately address the standards.

2. Our Approach to Homework

a. Independent and Regular Reading The CCSS places great emphasis on academic vocabulary. These modules focus robustly on in-class

close reading of complex text, and this is a key way to support students’ vocabulary growth. But it is

not enough.

Most of the words students need to know to be college and career ready are learned through wide

and extensive reading. Students, therefore, need to read independently—the more the better. This

is especially true for students who are currently reading below grade level because they will gain the

stamina and vocabulary required to attain grade level.

Students will read independently and regularly for homework; Accountable Independent Reading

will happen most nights, and students will quickly develop habits of mind around this practice.

Independently, therefore, students will be consuming a volume of text that they can navigate on

their own. These texts can and should often connect to the topics and ideas explored in the

modules. A companion independent reading text list is currently in development by New York State.

Ultimately, each of the modules in NYS 9–12 ELA will include a list of books and articles related to

the topics and themes of each module. These books and articles will be at a variety of complexity

levels so teachers will be able to recommend these differentially for independent reading for all

students. Independent reading is too important to wait until this can be fully developed, however,

so we are recommending an interim independent reading program oriented to the CCSS Reading

Standards.

Now and always, the school librarian or media specialist should play a key role in this aspect of the

student's literacy education by helping students and teachers locate quality high-interest books for

this purpose. They are trained and poised to be key players and student advocates in a Common

Core-aligned curriculum.

b. Accountability for Accountable Independent Reading

To make the program accountable, easy to implement, and Common Core oriented, we will focus

student attention on an applicable reading standard. To make it easier for teachers to implement,

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and more pleasant for students, students will be encouraged to work in pairs. This can work as

described in section c (Establishing a System for Accountable Independent Reading).

c. Establishing a System for Accountable Independent Reading

Students will need to be given time to choose books, articles, websites, or journals. They can pick

any text they feel they can read independently, and they will be encouraged to do this in pairs. In

the first few days, the homework assignment would be to find a partner and a text both agree they

want to read. Beginning on day five, teachers will briefly (if they have not done so already) introduce

and explain one informational text standard and one literary standard, beginning with standard one.

For grades 9 and 10 informational, standard one is “cite strong and thorough textual evidence to

support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.” To make

sure that students are able to connect a focus standard to their text, we recommend introducing

informational text and literature standards 1–6 only, as these standards are the most broadly

applicable to a wide variety of texts.

Regularly during the second week, students will be given 3–5 minutes with their partner to prepare

to explain how they employed this standard in what they read the night before. For example, if a

pair of students had read an article on performance enhancing drugs in sports, they might say, “The

article talked about how substances are bad for baseball.” One strong and thorough piece of

evidence the student might cite to support this would be decreases in attendance in parks

throughout the country.

Teachers will "cold call” students and record only whether or not the response indicates that the

reporting pair understood the text and interpreted the standard accurately. If done in pairs, one

student could provide the answer, but the other student will respond to questions from the teacher

or students. Students would be graded in their pairs, with both accountable to and dependent on

the other for their performance. We suggest that teachers include these results in ELA grading and

that the focus standard change regularly until all the applicable reading standards have been

introduced. Then students can use the standard that makes most sense for what they read the night

before.

Surely some students, especially at the high school level, will game this system. Nothing is

completely airtight when it comes to holding students accountable for activity beyond the class

period. Many students will, however, do this, especially since they can gain credit for being diligent.

Even those who do shirk the work will get brief daily exposure to the reading standards and will get

modeling and exposure to how they inform a variety of reading strategies and approaches to

comprehending text. Teachers may want to assign an accountability measure, such as reading logs,

posting to a wiki, journaling, etc. for homework so that they can spot check the writing/

collaboration/thinking that happens at night for students who aren't cold called.

Once the suggested related titles for each module are posted, teachers can choose to use this same

system to hold students accountable for the related text titles. This would make the beginning

dialogue more closely connected to the unit and would help to build students’ background

knowledge.

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d. Other Homework/Additional Homework Outside of Independent Reading In addition to AIR, students will be asked to do two homework activities each week. It is critical that

this additional homework extend the learning of the day's lesson or prepare them for the lessons of

the following day. Homework cannot and should never be a opportunity for low performing

students to fall farther behind because of an inability to navigate grade level complex text

independently.

3. Flexibility in this Curriculum

While some lessons provide detailed instructions or recommendations, it’s important to note that

the lessons are not scripts and they do allow for teacher preference and flexibility to ensure that

what is happening in the classroom both meets the needs of students and is in service of the shifts

and the standards.

This curriculum has been carefully designed to give an example of how the standards and shifts can

be enacted in a high school ELA classroom. However, the curriculum designers recognize in any

given classroom there is a range of student needs. To accommodate that reality, this curriculum is

designed to be flexible in terms of day-to-day implementation, but with specific planning

parameters as detailed below.

a. Timing The lessons will give a suggested portion of classroom time to spend on specific activities; however,

given the complexity of the texts and analytic nature of the tasks in these lessons/units, it may be

necessary to move even more slowly than recommended. Teachers implementing this curriculum

should always move at the pace they think is right in order to give their students the essential

literacy skills demanded by the CCSS. It is better to extend the lesson than to omit sections of it for

the sake of time.

Importantly, if students are engaged in substantive evidence-based discourse and are making

meaning of the text under study, it is not necessary to push forward into the next activity, question,

or task. The priority in this work is that students are constantly developing their ability to engage in

rigorous conversation and writing informed by their analysis of texts and are gaining insights and

proficiency for themselves. In order for them to become successful and independent learners, they

need to learn these skills for keeps.

Because we are sensitive to the fact that high schools and their students are in a variety of places

with their understanding and implementation of many of the core elements of this curriculum,

including the Common Core State Standards, Accountable Independent Reading, evidenced-based

conversations about text, teaching vocabulary in context, and teaching close reading, we have

included detailed instruction on each of these elements early on in each year of instruction. If direct

instruction on each of these elements is necessary, lessons may run longer than a typical class

period. Teachers will have to make decisions, as they always have, around what is most appropriate

for their students, while ensuring students are moving towards mastery of the standards.

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b. Building Fluency The curriculum will include instances where the teacher is instructed to read a text aloud, in part or

in whole, in order to model fluent reading for students and to give students who are not fluent with

complex text a chance to hear the text read well. Students reading below grade level will benefit

enormously from hearing the text read while they follow along, “reading in their heads,” before they

begin to deconstruct it and conduct their own analysis. Some students may need two of these read-

throughs in order to access the text with confidence. If teachers serve students mostly reading on or

near grade level, they might choose to limit these activities in favor of having students read

independently or in group settings. This element of the curriculum is designed essential to support

weaker readers. Not only does it bring them into the text with more confidence and comfort, but it

does that while developing their ability to read more fluently.

c. Paired and Group Reading/Collaborative Work Collaboration plays a major role in being ready for college and careers (see speaking and listening

Anchor Standard 1 and Writing Anchor standard 6) and as such, these lessons/units allow for

multiple opportunities for students to collaborate while reading, writing, listening, and speaking.

Social learning and sharing of insights will likewise support students who didn’t arrive at the same

conclusion. Students who develop the habit of presenting the textual evidence that led them to

their conclusion will become better at it. Listening to peers presenting their position and supporting

it well will lift everyone’s capacity for doing the same. The Common Core Standards were designed

to weave together the four strands of reading, listening, speaking, and writing for just these reasons.

d. Grading/Scoring of Assessments These lessons/units include frequent and varied opportunities to assess student learning and track

progress towards mastery of the CCSS. These assessments can and should be used for formative

purposes, but educators may also choose to select specific assessments for the purpose of assessing

student progress and holding them accountable for their learning. To this end, we have included

rubrics and others information to give the educator data that can drive instruction or be used for

summative purposes towards determining a final course or unit grade for students.

e. Text Versions This curriculum deals with a variety of texts, both those in the public domain and those with

privately held publishing rights. Given the nature of these texts, you may notice some variance

(language, page numbers, etc.) between versions referenced in this curriculum and other available

versions. There is also a text list available, which denotes information about the text versions. The

specific version of a text is identified at the module level. Generally, the most readily available

version of a text was used; however, it is important to ensure the versions of texts used in

implementation are cross-referenced with the curriculum to ensure alignment and to make any

necessary adjustments.

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g S

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th

at

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me

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de

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en

tly

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Ask

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de

nts

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re

spo

nd

to

th

e f

ollo

win

g

qu

est

ion

in

de

pe

nd

en

tly:

Wh

at

is h

ap

pe

nin

g

wit

h M

ira

be

lla

? (

Giv

e s

tud

en

ts t

wo

to

th

ree

min

ute

s to

re

spo

nd

in

div

idu

all

y.)

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en

, h

av

e

stu

de

nts

sh

are

ou

t th

eir

re

spo

nse

s. R

em

ind

stu

de

nts

to

cit

e t

ext

ev

ide

nce

wh

en

giv

ing

the

ir r

esp

on

ses.

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de

nt

resp

on

se m

ay

in

clu

de

th

e

foll

ow

ing

:

·

Sh

e i

s st

ill

fall

ing

be

hin

d.

Sh

e i

sn�t

ab

le t

o s

pe

ak

En

gli

sh o

r e

at

at

the

tab

le.

(�M

ira

be

lla

, b

att

lin

g a

ra

cco

on

un

de

r th

e d

inn

er

tab

le w

hile

th

e r

est

of

us

too

k d

ain

ty b

ite

s o

f p

ea

s a

nd

bo

rsch

t. M

ira

be

lla

, d

oin

g b

ell

y f

lop

s

into

co

mp

ost

.�)

·

Sh

e i

s st

art

ing

to

lo

ok

ba

d.

He

r te

eth

are

fa

llin

g a

pa

rt a

nd

sh

e i

s g

ett

ing

thin

ne

r. (

�He

r te

eth

we

re g

rou

nd

do

wn

to

nu

bb

ins;

he

r h

air

wa

s fa

llin

g

ou

t.�)

·

Th

e n

un

s th

ink

so

me

thin

g m

ust

be

do

ne

ab

ou

t h

er.

Co

nsi

de

r ca

llin

g o

n s

eve

ral s

tud

en

ts

to e

nco

ura

ge

ma

xim

um

pa

rtic

ipa

tio

n a

nd

a v

ari

ety

of

resp

on

ses.

Co

nti

nu

e r

ea

din

g f

rom

�It

wa

s d

uri

ng

Sta

ge

3

tha

t w

e m

et

ou

r fi

rst

pu

reb

red

gir

ls �

� to

,

�Je

an

ett

e g

ot

a h

ole

in

on

e.�

(p

p.

23

7�

23

9)

Stu

de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

wit

h t

he

re

ad

-alo

ud

.

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ha

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e t

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gir

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ea

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g t

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ive

th

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to t

wo

min

ute

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nd

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lk.)

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de

nt

pa

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pa

rtic

ipa

te i

n a

Tu

rn-

an

d-T

alk

wit

h s

om

eo

ne

sit

tin

g n

ea

r th

em

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stu

de

nts

are

dis

cuss

ing

, ci

rcu

late

an

d p

rov

ide

su

pp

ort

wh

ere

ne

cess

ary

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Ha

ve

stu

de

nt

pa

rtn

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sh

are

ou

t th

eir

resp

on

ses.

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de

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resp

on

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ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

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ow

ing

:

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Rid

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cle

s, d

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ce,

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rea

d,

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ve

ry F

rid

ay

, th

e g

irls

wh

o h

ad

lea

rne

d h

ow

to

rid

e a

bic

ycle

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bra

ted

by

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to t

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pre

ten

din

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elt

alm

ost

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to,

��y

ou

cou

ld t

ell t

ha

t th

ey w

ere

ple

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(pp

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39

24

0).

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de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

wit

h t

he

re

ad

-alo

ud

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

wri

te d

ow

n q

ue

stio

ns

the

y

ha

ve

ab

ou

t S

tag

e 3

. E

nco

ura

ge

stu

de

nts

to

loo

k b

ack

th

rou

gh

th

e S

tag

e 3

na

rra

tive

to

cap

ture

an

y q

ue

stio

ns

the

y m

ay

ha

ve f

rom

Sta

ge

3�s

en

tire

ty.

Stu

de

nts

wri

te t

he

ir q

ue

stio

ns

ab

ou

t th

e

text

. Stu

de

nts

� q

ue

stio

ns

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

·

Wh

at

mig

ht

ha

pp

en

to

Mir

ab

ell

a?

Wil

l

she

ge

t k

icke

d o

ut

of

St.

Lu

cy�s

?

·

Wh

at

are

pu

reb

red

gir

ls?

·

Ho

w c

an

th

eir

ta

ils

be

in

vis

ible

?

·

Is J

ea

ne

tte

sa

d a

bo

ut

no

lon

ge

r b

ein

g

a w

olf

?

An

y q

ue

stio

n a

stu

de

nt

ha

s is

va

lid

,

as

lon

g a

s it

is

rela

ted

to

th

e t

ext

. If

stu

de

nts

are

str

ug

gli

ng

wit

h

qu

est

ion

s, e

nco

ura

ge

th

em

to

th

ink

ab

ou

t u

nk

no

wn

vo

cab

ula

ry,

de

tail

s

in t

he

te

xt t

ha

t se

em

ed

co

nfu

sin

g,

or

wh

at

the

y w

an

t to

kn

ow

fro

m t

he

text

th

at

wil

l b

e r

ea

d n

ext

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

sh

are

ou

t a

nd

wri

te t

he

ir

qu

est

ion

s o

n t

he

bo

ard

or

on

ch

art

pa

pe

r.

Exp

lain

to

stu

de

nts

th

at

ma

ny

of

the

se

Stu

de

nts

sh

are

ou

t th

eir

qu

est

ion

s a

nd

reco

rd t

he

m o

n t

he

bo

ard

or

on

ch

art

pa

pe

r.

Co

nsi

de

r p

ost

ing

stu

de

nt

qu

est

ion

s

to h

elp

th

em

wh

en

th

ey

go

ba

ck a

nd

clo

se r

ea

d t

his

pa

rt o

f th

e t

ext

.

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de

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ng

, re

ad

ing

sil

en

tly

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

en

ga

ge

in

a T

urn

-an

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alk

wit

h a

pa

rtn

er

sitt

ing

ne

ar

the

m a

bo

ut

the

foll

ow

ing

qu

est

ion

s: H

ow

do

es

this

sce

ne

rev

ea

l th

e d

iffe

ren

ces

be

twe

en

Mir

ab

ell

a,

Jea

ne

tte

, a

nd

Cla

ud

ett

e,

an

d w

ha

t te

xtu

al

ev

ide

nce

su

pp

ort

s yo

ur

ide

as?

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

·

Mir

ab

ell

a i

s st

ill

be

hin

d.

Sh

e i

s th

e

low

est

pe

rfo

rmin

g s

tud

en

t. E

vid

en

ce

incl

ud

es:

Sh

e s

cra

tch

es

at

the

gir

ls

an

d t

he

n r

oll

s a

rou

nd

on

th

e f

loo

r.

(�M

ira

be

lla

le

t o

ut

a w

him

pe

r. S

he

scra

tch

ed

at

us

an

d s

cra

tch

ed

at

us,

rak

ing

he

r n

ail

s a

lon

g o

ur

shin

s so

ha

rd t

ha

t sh

e d

rew

blo

od

.�)

·

Jea

ne

tte

is

the

hig

he

st p

erf

orm

er.

Sh

e

is h

igh

en

ou

gh

in

th

e c

lass

to

ta

lk t

o

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ab

ell

a.

(�Je

an

ett

e f

row

ne

d.

�Yo

u

are

a l

ate

blo

om

er,

Mir

ab

ella

! U

sua

lly

,

ev

ery

thin

g�s

be

gu

n t

o m

ake

mo

re

sen

se b

y M

on

th T

we

lve

at

the

late

st.�

�)

·

Cla

ud

ett

e is

on

ly w

orr

ied

ab

ou

t

he

rse

lf.

Sh

e d

oe

sn�t

ca

re a

bo

ut

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ab

ell

a o

r Je

an

ett

e.

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ore

d h

er

an

d c

on

tin

ue

d d

ow

n t

he

ha

ll.

I h

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on

ly f

ou

r m

ore

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urs

to

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ct t

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Sa

usa

lito

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on

ly a

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ut

my

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fly

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in t

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de

nts

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at

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y w

ill

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tin

ue

to

wo

rk w

ith

sta

nd

ard

s R

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nd

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itio

n,

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de

nts

are

go

ing

to

sta

rt

wo

rkin

g w

ith

sta

nd

ard

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sk

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de

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to

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y re

ad

th

e s

tan

da

rd w

hil

e

yo

u r

ea

d i

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lou

d f

rom

th

e C

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mo

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tan

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on

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ha

t d

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ou

no

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ab

ou

t th

is

sta

nd

ard

? W

ha

t is

it a

skin

g y

ou

to

be

ab

le t

o

do

? A

sk s

tud

en

ts t

o j

ot

the

ir i

de

as

do

wn

.

Lea

d a

bri

ef

dis

cuss

ion

ab

ou

t th

e s

tan

da

rd.

Stu

de

nts

fo

llo

w a

lon

g,

rea

din

g s

ile

ntl

y t

he

sta

nd

ard

RL.

9-1

0.3

.

Stu

de

nts

wri

te t

he

ir i

de

as

ab

ou

t R

L.9

-10

.3

an

d s

ha

re t

he

ir r

esp

on

ses.

Sa

mp

le

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

fo

llo

win

g:

·

An

aly

ze h

ow

ch

ara

cte

rs d

ev

elo

p

·

An

aly

ze h

ow

th

ey

ad

va

nce

th

e p

lot

or

the

me

an

d i

nte

ract

wit

h o

the

r

cha

ract

ers

·

Th

is f

ocu

ses

on

co

mp

lex

cha

ract

ers

.

Th

e im

po

rta

nt

po

int

to h

elp

stu

de

nts

un

de

rsta

nd

he

re is

th

at

RL.

9-1

0.3

de

als

wit

h f

ar

mo

re t

ha

t

just

�ch

ara

cte

riza

tio

n.�

Th

is

sta

nd

ard

ask

s st

ud

en

ts t

o c

on

sid

er

ho

w c

ha

ract

ers

gro

w a

nd

ch

an

ge

ove

r th

e c

ou

rse

of

a t

ext

an

d h

ow

tho

se c

ha

ract

ers

he

lp a

dv

an

ce t

he

plo

t o

r il

lum

ina

te k

ey

id

ea

s in

a t

ext

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

in

div

idu

all

y re

rea

d s

tan

da

rd

SL.

9-1

0.3

an

d a

sse

ss t

he

ir f

am

ilia

rity

wit

h

Stu

de

nts

re

rea

d s

tan

da

rd S

L.9

-10

.3 a

nd

ass

ess

th

eir

fa

mil

iari

ty w

ith

an

d m

ast

ery

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on

th

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Co

mm

on

Co

re L

ea

rnin

g S

tan

da

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To

ol.

of

the

sta

nd

ard

.

Dis

cuss

th

e im

po

rta

nce

of

an

no

tati

ng

te

xt b

y

ask

ing

stu

de

nts

th

e f

ollo

win

g q

ue

stio

ns:

1.

Ho

w h

av

e w

e m

ark

ed

th

e t

ext

th

us

far

in o

ur

rea

din

g?

2.

Wh

at

are

so

me

pu

rpo

ses

for

ma

rkin

g

the

te

xt?

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

sho

uld

incl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

1.

We

ha

ve

bo

xed

un

kn

ow

n w

ord

s a

nd

wri

tte

n t

he

de

fin

itio

ns

ne

xt t

o t

he

wo

rds,

sta

rre

d i

de

as

tha

t se

em

imp

ort

an

t o

r a

re r

ep

ea

tin

g,

an

d

sum

ma

rize

d s

om

e o

f o

ur

thin

kin

g o

n

the

te

xt.

2.

Ma

rkin

g t

he

te

xt h

elp

s yo

u

rem

em

be

r w

ha

t yo

u a

re r

ea

din

g b

y

wri

tin

g y

ou

r th

ink

ing

on

th

e t

ext

,

ke

ep

ing

tra

ck o

f im

po

rta

nt

ide

as,

thin

kin

g a

bo

ut

un

fam

ilia

r w

ord

s a

nd

qu

est

ion

ing

th

e t

ext

or

ma

kin

g

con

ne

ctio

ns

be

twe

en

id

ea

s.

As

stu

de

nts

sh

are

th

eir

id

ea

s in

th

e

foll

ow

ing

dis

cuss

ion

, it

ma

y b

e

he

lpfu

l to

ca

ptu

re t

he

ma

jor

ide

as

ab

ou

t a

nn

ota

tio

n b

y t

ak

ing

no

tes

on

cha

rt p

ap

er

or

on

th

e b

oa

rd.

Th

ese

no

tes

can

th

en

be

po

ste

d in

th

e

cla

ssro

om

fo

r re

fere

nce

pu

rpo

ses.

Sh

are

wit

h s

tud

en

ts t

ha

t m

ark

ing

th

e t

ext

is

call

ed

an

no

tati

on

. A

sk s

tud

en

ts:

3.

Ho

w d

oe

s a

nn

ota

tin

g t

ext

ch

an

ge

th

e

wa

y y

ou

re

ad

?

3.

S

tud

en

t re

spo

nse

s m

ay

in

clu

de

th

e

foll

ow

ing

:

·

It c

on

ne

cts

you

to

th

e t

ext

mo

re

de

ep

ly b

y f

orc

ing

yo

u t

o r

ea

d

act

ive

ly a

nd

pa

y c

lose

att

en

tio

n t

o

de

tail

s.

·

It m

ak

es

it d

iffi

cult

to

ju

st r

ea

d a

nd

shu

t yo

ur

min

d o

ff.

·

It m

ak

es

you

slo

w d

ow

n a

s y

ou

re

ad

.

If s

tud

en

ts s

tru

gg

le,

it m

ay

be

he

lpfu

l, t

o s

ha

re w

ith

stu

de

nts

th

at

the

re

spo

nse

s ju

st s

ha

red

re

ve

al

wh

y a

nn

ota

tio

n i

s a

clo

se r

ea

din

g

skil

l; a

nn

ota

tio

n f

orc

es

yo

u t

o r

ea

d

de

lib

era

tely

. E

xpla

in a

nn

ota

tio

n�s

rela

tio

nsh

ip w

ith

sta

nd

ard

RL.

9-

10

.1.

An

no

tati

on

he

lps

stu

de

nts

loo

k c

lose

ly a

t te

xt e

vid

en

ce t

o

fig

ure

ou

t te

xt�s

exp

lici

t a

nd

im

pli

cit

me

an

ing

s.

Exp

lain

th

at

rea

de

rs u

se s

ho

rth

an

d w

ay

s o

f S

tud

en

ts w

rite

th

e a

nn

ota

tio

n c

od

es

in

An

no

tati

on

is

a d

iffi

cult

sk

ill f

or

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the

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Dis

pla

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exp

lain

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foll

ow

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co

de

s:

·

Bo

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mil

iar

wo

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·

Sta

r (*

) im

po

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nt

or

rep

ea

tin

g i

de

as.

·

Pu

t a

qu

est

ion

ma

rk (

?)

ne

xt t

o a

se

ctio

n

yo

u�r

e q

ue

stio

nin

g o

r co

nfu

sed

ab

ou

t.

·

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an

exc

lam

ati

on

po

int

(!)

for

ide

as

tha

t st

rik

e y

ou

or

surp

rise

yo

u i

n s

om

e

wa

y.

Sh

are

wit

h s

tud

en

ts t

ha

t b

esi

de

s u

sin

g t

he

cod

es,

ma

rkin

g t

he

te

xt w

ith

yo

ur

thin

kin

g

rela

ted

to

th

e c

od

es

is im

po

rta

nt.

Exp

lain

tha

t st

ud

en

ts w

ill

use

th

ese

co

de

s

thro

ug

ho

ut

the

ir c

lose

re

ad

ing

of

�St.

Lu

cy�s

to t

hin

k m

ore

de

ep

ly a

bo

ut

the

de

tail

s in

th

e

text

.

the

ir n

ote

bo

oks

or

refe

r to

a h

an

do

ut

of

the

co

de

s a

nd

th

eir

exp

lan

ati

on

s.

stu

de

nts

to

ma

ste

r b

eca

use

stu

de

nts

mu

st d

ete

rmin

e w

ha

t a

nd

ho

w t

o a

nn

ota

te.

Dif

fere

nti

ati

on

Co

nsi

de

rati

on

: T

he

pro

cess

of

an

no

tati

on

ca

n b

e

com

ple

x fo

r so

me

stu

de

nts

. S

om

e

stu

de

nts

wil

l n

ee

d t

he

an

no

tati

on

sym

bo

ls a

va

ila

ble

to

th

em

on

ch

art

pa

pe

r, o

n a

ha

nd

ou

t/b

oo

kma

rk,

an

d/o

r p

ost

ed

on

th

eir

de

sk.

20

%

Lea

rnin

g H

ow

to

An

no

tate

A

sk s

tud

en

ts t

o t

urn

to

th

e S

tag

e 1

ep

igra

ph

in t

he

ir �

St.

Lu

cy�s

� te

xt (

p.

22

5).

S

tud

en

ts o

pe

n t

he

ir �

St.

Lu

cy�s

� te

xts

to

the

Sta

ge

1 e

pig

rap

h.

Exp

lain

to

th

e s

tud

en

ts t

ha

t a

s th

ey

re

rea

d

the

Sta

ge

1 e

pig

rap

h a

nd

pa

rag

rap

h,

the

y

sho

uld

th

ink

ab

ou

t p

art

s o

f th

e t

ext

th

at

are

surp

risi

ng

or

sta

nd

ou

t to

th

em

in

so

me

wa

y.

Stu

de

nts

lis

ten

to

dir

ect

ion

s.

In t

his

le

sso

n,

on

ly t

wo

an

no

tati

on

cod

es

wil

l b

e t

au

gh

t b

eca

use

bo

xin

g

un

fam

ilia

r w

ord

s a

nd

wri

tin

g

qu

est

ion

s h

av

e b

ee

n i

ntr

od

uce

d i

n

pri

or

less

on

s.

Re

rea

d t

he

Sta

ge

1 e

pig

rap

h a

nd

pa

rag

rap

h 1

alo

ud

to

stu

de

nts

.

Stu

de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

, re

ad

ing

sil

en

tly

.

Mo

de

l a p

art

of

the

te

xt t

ha

t w

as

surp

risi

ng

.

(In

th

e s

am

ple

stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses,

th

ere

are

Stu

de

nts

re

cord

th

e t

ea

che

r m

od

eli

ng

on

S

tud

en

ts m

ay

no

tice

a v

ari

ety

of

ide

as

an

d c

od

e t

he

se i

de

as

slig

htl

y

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xam

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.) W

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ati

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on

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ext

an

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el

the

re

aso

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usi

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nts

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tio

n o

n

the

ir t

ext

.

the

ir t

ext

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An

no

tati

on

s m

ay

in

clu

de

th

e f

ollo

win

g:

·

Th

e n

um

be

r o

f a

nim

al-

like

refe

ren

ces

·

Th

e l

ack

of

act

ion

by

the

nu

ns

de

spit

e t

he

ir d

isp

lea

sure

dif

fere

ntl

y,

bu

t th

ese

exa

mp

les

sho

w t

he

te

xt d

eta

ils

stu

de

nts

sho

uld

be

th

ink

ing

mo

re d

ee

ply

ab

ou

t.

A d

ocu

me

nt

rea

de

r m

ay

be

he

lpfu

l

to s

up

po

rt t

his

mo

de

lin

g.

If s

tud

en

ts a

re n

ot

allo

we

d t

o w

rite

on

th

eir

te

xts,

pro

vid

e t

he

m w

ith

self

-sti

ck n

ote

s o

n w

hic

h t

o w

rite

the

ir a

nn

ota

tio

ns.

No

te:

it is

imp

ort

an

t to

no

t o

nly

sho

w s

tud

en

ts t

he

an

no

tati

on

ma

rkin

gs

on

th

e t

ext

, b

ut

als

o t

he

no

tes

ab

ou

t th

e m

ark

ing

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

id

en

tify

ad

dit

ion

al

are

as

to

an

no

tate

.

Stu

de

nts

vo

lun

tee

r a

nn

ota

tio

ns.

T

he

bri

dg

e b

etw

ee

n m

od

eli

ng

an

d

gu

ide

d p

ract

ice

ma

y r

eq

uir

e m

ore

tha

n o

ne

exa

mp

le f

or

stu

de

nts

to

full

y u

nd

ers

tan

d;

con

sid

er

pro

vid

ing

a f

ew

exa

mp

les.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

loo

k o

ve

r th

is s

ect

ion

of

text

an

d h

av

e t

he

m s

tar

on

e i

mp

ort

an

t o

r

rep

ea

tin

g i

de

a.

Stu

de

nts

sta

r o

ne

imp

ort

an

t o

r re

pe

ati

ng

ide

a.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

vo

lun

tee

r a

nsw

ers

.

Stu

de

nts

sh

are

ou

t th

eir

id

ea

s.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

·

A s

tar

by

the

wo

rd f

ore

ign

be

cau

se i

t

is a

re

min

de

r o

f th

e S

tag

e 1

ep

igra

ph

say

ing

th

at

this

pe

rio

d i

s �n

ew

an

d

inte

rest

ing

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sly

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all

ow

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lre

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stu

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nt

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re

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d

an

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fer

wit

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pa

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ab

ou

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sk:

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ma

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ou

ld s

tar

som

e o

f th

e f

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g

ide

as:

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eh

av

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to

id

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th

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d f

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vin

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n t

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na

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it t

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ol t

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pro

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vid

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n t

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on

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sed

on

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th

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, w

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tell

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ls a

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e H

igh

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rma

nce

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spo

nse

at

the

be

gin

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f

this

le

sso

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pa

re f

or

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less

on

ah

ea

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me

by

wri

tin

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ass

ess

me

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est

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s

on

th

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r o

n c

ha

rt p

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se

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cre

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nd

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stu

de

nts

wit

h s

pa

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o w

rite

be

twe

en

th

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qu

est

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ve

th

e s

tud

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in

de

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rag

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tha

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