A2 Photography Assessment: Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio

STUDENT: Patrick Ryan CANDIDATE # TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey

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UNIT 3 n/a n/a n/a n/a n/a Patrick you have produced some very interesting work that has strong contextual content. However there needs to be more the development of your idea to fade memories represented by a distorted part of the image is good but where are these pictures and the interviews. I think it would be good if you could record the interviews as the sound of someone voice alongside the image gives the viewer a more personal connection to the picture. I would also like to see more Artist research you simply cannot have enough of this to back up your own visual practise. You must make sure that all artists you look at have at least one image analysed in detail and then connected to your own visual practise.

TasksInterviews and new woven images need to be put up on weeblyVoice recordings of the people you are interviewingPuzzle photograph experiment with different ways of presenting an imageRefine portrait image made up of different picturesArtist analysis on all displayed artistsP

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UNIT 3 15 15 15 15 60 cThis is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is reflected in your mark