pak kau college s1 english theme 4 pack your bags writing...
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Pak Kau College
S1 English
Theme 4 – Pack your bags
Writing a postcard
Name: _____________________ Class: ________ ( )
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From Reading to Writing - Writing a postcard
Genre: Postcard
Situation: You are a form one student of Pak Kau College. The Student Association has
invited you to take part in an event called ‘Send A Postcard Action’. Read the details.
Dear Pak Kau students,
The Student Association invites you to take part in …
Just send a local postcard to a friend or a relative overseas,
… and promote an attraction in Hong Kong!
You will have a chance to win a $500 book coupon.
The Chance!
The Student Association has joined the ‘Send a Postcard Action’ organized by the Hong
Kong Tourist Association. Read the sample written by Chris, the chairperson of the Student
Association, and learn the text feature of writing a postcard.
(*You can also download the apps of “PostcardDIY” to learn how to write a postcard.)
The front of the postcard The back of the postcard
Space for
your Message
The address of person you
are sending the postcard to
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Pre-writing Task: The Structure of a Postcard
Task 1: Read the postcard and label the parts with.
sender’s signature closing opening paragraph greeting
closing paragraph body paragraphs salutation date
Learn the features of a postcard.
The Postcard
10 February 2015
Dear Jacky (name of friend or relative),
Hi! My friends and I are enjoying a one-day tour on Hong Kong
Island today.
This morning, we’d brunch at Jumbo Restaurant where I ate dim
sum and seafood. The food’s yummy. It’s an amazing
restaurant decorated like a great old Chinese palace.
Right now, we're having a wonderful time at the Repulse Bay. My
friend’s taking photos of the sea at the moment and I’m writing this
postcard under a tree. It’s cold to swim! We’re having a sunbath
then. The weather is sunny and we're relaxing at the seashore.
Anyway, I feel happy today. That’s all I want to share with you.
Bye for now.
Chris
Postcard Writing
1. Have you ever received or sent a postcard?
2. Nowadays, people prefer sending emails, using Facebook and texting on their phone.
Why?
3. What are the advantages of sending postcards to friends?
4. Is postcard writing ‘formal’ or ‘informal’?
Text features
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Task 2: Language feature
1. Use ______________ tense to describe things happened.
2. Use ______________________ tense to describe what you are doing.
3. Use _____________ language / _______________ (I’m/ We’re/ It’s …).
4. Use _______________ before nouns.
Task 3: Group Work
You are going to take part in ‘Send a Postcard Action’. You and your classmates collected
the data files of different attractions in Hong Kong. Read the information and discuss the
best place you can visit and promote Hong Kong to tourists.
Task 4: Mind-map
Write a postcard to a friend or a relative who lives overseas. First decide who you want to
write to. Then look at your itinerary and decide where you are at the moment. Make notes
about your situation on the mind map below:
Writing a postcard
Who do you write to?
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Where are you now?
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What is the date?
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What are you doing now?
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Who are you with?
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What did you do in the morning?
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How do you feel?
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What other things you want to say?
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Task 5: Write the postcard
Use the information from the mind map to write your postcard below.
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Date:
Greeting:
Introduction:
Where are you? Who
are you with? How
do you feel?
Body:
- Describe what
you did this
morning.
- What is the
weather like?
- What are you
doing? (list the
activities you are
doing)
- Are you enjoying
yourself?
Closing:
Signature:
Closing paragraph:
How do you feel?
What else do you want
to say?
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From Reading to Writing - Writing a postcard
Writing Evaluation Form
Grammar Checklist
I used the following:
simple past tense to describe things happened.
present continuous tense to describe what I was doing.
informal language e.g. isn’t/ There’re/ You’re/ I’ll …
articles before the nouns (a/ an/ the).
Content Checklist
I told the receiver:
where I was
who I was/ were with.
what I did
what I am doing and feeling.
What can I do to improve my writing next time?
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Organization Checklist
I wrote the postcard:
in a few paragraphs.
with the date.
including the salutation and greetings.
with opening and closing paragraphs.
with a few paragraphs for the body.
with my signature.
using linking words.