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Openings •Openings are an important tool in writing. They are what is used to grasp your audiences attention, so that they will not replace your story with something they feel to be more adequate. •An opening is much like an introduction when writing a letter, or a thesis statement when writing a thesis paper. •Without a proper opening your story may not be read for all it is worth. If the first twenty to thirty minutes of a movie are boring, many would probably go to sleep.

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Openings

•Openings are an important tool in writing. They are what is used to grasp your audiences attention, so that they will not replace your story with something they feel to be more adequate.

•An opening is much like an introduction when writing a letter, or a thesis statement when writing a thesis paper.

•Without a proper opening your story may not be read for all it is worth. If the first twenty to thirty minutes of a movie are boring, many would probably go to sleep.

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What is an Opening?

•An opening is the beginning of your paper, story, speech, etc.

•At the beginning is the most important time to grab your audiences attention. This is usually called a hook. Just like fishing once someone finally decides to bite on your idea, you must yank that hook into them and keep them stuck on it. Without a decent hook you will lose your flock of fish.

•This is why thesis statements are so important, because without capturing the readers attention, confidence, and interest the paper loses worth.

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How to make the best of your openings.

•As I have said the best openings are like a hook. The best openings grab the attention of your reader. To do this one must understand their audience, exactly who is going to be reading this?

•Attempt to intrigue your target audience without exceeding the limits of your imagination. After all, you still need a plot and climax.

•In order to do this one must not start too far away. One must provide enough context to begin the film rolling in the audiences minds. The story cannot start too far back and leave people wondering where it is going, nor can it start ahead of itself leaving people to wonder how it happened.

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Continued best of openings.

•An opening should be exciting, yet informative. Do not blandly tell your audience what you are going to do, that would be similar to revealing the end of a long awaited film.

•You must convince your audience that reading the story will be worth the time it takes to read it. The opening must open their eyes to a whole new set of thrills.

•Without direction or purpose in your opening your reader may become bored, Keep them interested. You do not need to reveal the story, nor should you, but do provide enough purposeful direction to give the audience an idea of where they might end up.

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More best of openings.

•All openings must engage the audience, grabbing their attention. They must also provide enough context and direction so that the reader does not simply read the first paragraph and then do away with the story in its entirety.

•An opening must show focus on its intent to entertain. It must also show authority declaring that it has the knowledge to broach its topic. Without focus and authority the reader is left like a passenger on this bridge.

•Since it is not good to bore the reader, the writer must find ways to close the gap, and give the story direction and focus.

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What to do and what not to do.•What you want to do when writing an opening is first of all create a compelling hook. Secondly you want to ground the audience in a viable direction usually with context related toward your protagonist.

•An opening is like a double rainbow, which is great to look up and see a full-on double rainbow, but it is only a complete arc within itself that should lead to something more. The double rainbow is cool, but without promise of an adventure to get the gold or the leprechauns at the end.

•Some things that you should not do is for one bore your reader from the beginning. Do not reveal the climax or resolution only give hints as to the road taken to get there.

•Do not contradict yourself. Establish authority and a focus and follow them. If you lose direction so does the film playing in the mind of your audience.

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Examples of openings

•From our reading this week in “The Things They Carried” the first sentence is exemplary. Usually when starting a opening one should try reading the first two paragraphs of their favorite novel and see what entices them about it.

•“The things they carried” starts with a single sentence that not only grounds us with the protagonist the First Lieutenant, but also gives us context as to his situation. The first paragraph is an extension of that first sentence, declaring the time, place, and also the protagonists attitude to both.

•The other story we read this past week “Girl” was far different. Since the entire story was only one long paragraph it doesn’t stand to reason to have a long opening. It does not give you much information about the protagonist nor does it give you a very in depth understanding of the setting.

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Opening Conclusion

As I conclude my presentation of opening, some things to consider. First of all, the initial capturing of the audiences attention is called a hook. Secondly it is important to begin with context as to where you got to the beginning, authority to start down this road, with the writer driving of course, and focus that you don’t get lost along the way. Thirdly do not bore your audience, if at any point the audience loses interest than you lose your audience, so keep reeling in those fish as you would keep the tape of a film rolling.

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Works Cited

Cushman Kyle. Openings: Writing effective introductions. The learning center exchange. 16 Feb 2006. 31 Jan. 2012. Web. http://www.learningassistance.com/2006/february/openings.html

Yirinic Jennifer. How to write an engaging introduction. Writing Commons. n.a. Web. 1 Feb. 2012. http://writingcommons.org/process/organize/paper-structure/396-how-to-write-an-engaging-introduction

Jenkins Stephanie. How to write a good story opening. eHow. n.a. Web. 1 Feb. 2012. http://www.ehow.com/how_6356675_write-good-story-opening.html

Bates Joseph. Components of a good opening scene. Writing-world.com. n.a. Web. 1 Feb. 2012. http://www.writing-world.com/fiction/opening.shtml