Evaluation By Tavanna Hutchinson

I have included this picture to show that even males have an interest in textiles. To make this better, I would fix some tweaks in the image to perfect it more.

This is a medium close up, which shows what she is doing and shows her emotion; I don’t think I need to adjust anything to it, but if I did, I would change the lighting of the image.

This image is now a medium close up. Before my image of the student was quite distant and was a un-posed shot. In this picture, she is studying and you can tell by the close-up.

This shot isn’t a medium-shop because I want to show a range of camera angles. I had to take another one to have a final and professional shot for my magazine. And I made it more brighter.

There are a lot of changes to make within this image; to improve I should:

crop out the blurry part at the top.

change the lighting so that it is slightly darker, to define the detail and make it look more crisp.

This image is a good shot of the student studying, but to make it even more better I should:

Crop it slightly to look more like a medium close-up.

Re-think about the background because there are other students in the background, which makes the image less professional, and it doesn’t bring enough attention to the main student.