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Learning English with CBC
Calgary
Monthly feature story:
A Passion for Accordion
November 2013 Lesson plans created by Sara Gnida, Justine Light
http://www.cbc.ca/calgary/learning‐english/ www.alberta.ca
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Feature Story Objectives
A passion Accordion
CLB competency outcomes Listening: Reading: Speaking: Writing:
L: Identifies and interprets factual information and explanations in extended narration. R: Demonstrates comprehension of moderately complex extended descriptions, reports and narrations on familiar topics; recognizes and understands some literary language. S: Encourages conversation by adding supportive comments. W: Expresses main ideas and supports them with details; demonstrates adequate control of tenses.
Language skills
Vocabulary: Use vocabulary words in context
Grammar: Identify and use logical tenses
Pronunciation: Identify and use intonation patterns in encouraging comments
Language Activities (in order of appearance in materials)
Answering comprehension questions about a short background text on different types of rehabilitation therapy Completing pre‐listening activities to build vocabulary and prepare learners for audio Listening to the audio to identify facts and details Listening to the audio to develop listening transfer skills – identifying and interpreting information and explanations in order to complete a form Identifying intonation patterns in encouraging statements in audio transcript Completing pre‐reading vocabulary activity Reading to identify main ideas, factual details, implied meanings and attitudes Understanding figurative language Selecting logical tenses for writing Providing evidence to support an opinion
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Introduction
Background Reading:
When we think of health care professionals, we first think of doctors, nurses, and pharmacists. However, there are many types of healthcare professionals in Alberta. They use widely different approaches to help people with physical, emotional, mental, social, and/or cognitive limitations. These professionals receive special training and are often called “therapists.” They may use art, music, massage, exercises, games, and much more, to help people maintain, improve or restore their health. Following are just some of the many types of therapists that can be found in Alberta.
Physiotherapists are “movement specialists” who work with people with pain, illness, injuries or conditions that affect their ability to move and do things.
Occupational therapists work to improve the daily living and work skills of patients with physical, mental, and developmental conditions.
Recreation therapists work to improve a person’s ability to function independently in life and leisure activities.
Music therapists use music (singing, instruments, dancing, improvisation, imagery, song writing, etc.) to help people improve their ability to move, think, communicate, and participate in community.
Art therapists use art to help people understand and express themselves and cope with emotional and mental health conditions, disabilities, and illness.
Massage therapists use massage to relieve pain or improve physical function.
Speech language pathologists help people improve their ability to communicate.
Food for thought
Are any of the above occupations new to you? Can you find this type of therapist in your country of origin?
Click on one of the above links to find out about a type of therapy that is new to you. Do you know someone who might be suited for that type of work?
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The Audio
In this audio, you will join CBC journalist Paul Karchut and Phyllis, a Calgary senior, for her weekly accordion lesson. You will also hear Jane (Phyllis’ companion) and Maureen (Phyllis’ music teacher) as they talk about how the lessons have affected Phyllis.
CBC file photo (http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/newfoundland‐labrador/story/2012/11/27/nl‐accordion‐crime‐1127.html)
Before you listen: Have you ever learned to play a musical instrument? If so, which one? If not, would you like to learn?
Maureen is not a trained music therapist, but she gives Phyllis accordion lessons. Listen to find out what Phyllis gains from her accordion lesson.
SPEAKER TITLE: ACCORDIAN
Jane Hey Phyllis. Like to come down? We’ll go do your lesson.
Paul Phyllis Strepnychuk is helped down the stairs into a southeast Calgary basement. She’s here for her regular accordion lesson.
Jane Kay, let’s get you sitting down there, honeybucks.
Paul Phyllis is 69 years old and she’s had a hard couple of years....
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Pre‐listening vocabulary:
The words below are from the audio. The definitions are next to the words. Read the definitions then complete the sentences.
Use the vocabulary words on this page to complete the sentences on the following page. (Answers can be found in the appendix.)
WORD DEFINITION
1. a couple of (expression) two; a few; a small number
2. long term care facility (noun phrase)
the term “facility” is often used to describe a building; a long term care centre or facility is an institution that provides personal and medical care for people who are unable to care for themselves (sometimes called a seniors home)
3. depressed (adjective) sad; hopeless
4. companion someone who spends a lot of time with someone; a person (e.g., healthcare aide) who works one‐on‐one with a patient
5. to break through to someone (expression)
to overcome a barrier or obstruction; to make a connection with someone
6. a sea of something (expression)
lots of something
7. reservation (noun) doubt, misgiving, hesitation; an unstated reason for not completely accepting something
8. challenged (adjective) disabled; impaired; to have a handicap (mental or physical)
9. passion (noun) an enthusiasm for something; a strong interest in something (can also refer to love or sexual desire, but in this case it is used more in the sense of a life‐long passion or interest in something)
10. non‐reactive without feeling; numb; apathetic; giving no response
11. nostalgic (adjective) the melancholy (slightly sad) but also pleasurable feeling that one has when longing for the past
12. persevere (verb) to continue doing something, even if it is difficult (to not give up)
13. instinctually (adverb) without thinking
14. challenge (noun) something that requires effort; something that is difficult to do
15. convince (verb) to persuade someone to do something
16. blossom (idiom/verb) to develop; to become more confident, successful, beautiful, etc.
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1. When the toddler ran out into the road, the driver _______________________ stepped
on the brakes and swerved, missing the child.
2. It was a ________________________ at first to jog up the long hill without stopping,
but after a few weeks of running, it was easier.
3. They’ve had an exciting _______________________ months, but now they are back
from their travels overseas and school is starting again.
4. When they could no longer care for his grandmother on their own, they hired a
______________________________ to provide her with individualized care.
5. When his grandmother’s medical needs became too great, she moved into a
_____________________________________.
6. As she looked out at the audience, all she could see was a ________________________
faces.
7. She is _________________________ every winter. She’s not sure if this is caused
because of the lack of sunshine or because she misses her family during the Christmas
season.
8. When Keichi asked her to marry him, she accepted without _______________________.
had absolutely no doubts.
9. When the child was first adopted, she was ______________________. She didn’t smile,
laugh, show affection or even cry.
10. Although it took awhile, her new parents were finally able to
_________________________________ her. Slowly she learned to trust them, and even
to laugh and play like other children her age.
11. Although she did well in most of her classes, she really ________________________ in
her art class. She was confident, happy, and did amazing work.
12. Although she was physically _______________________________ in a number of ways,
she was clearly very intelligent.
13. Even when she found her studies difficult, she ____________________________.
14. She enjoyed math, but art was always her _________________________. So, she
decided to enrol in fine arts rather than engineering.
15. Her parents tried to ____________________ her to go into engineering, but she
refused.
16. Every year in the fall, she feels ____________________________. She remembers the
excitement she felt as a child, looking forward to school starting, the first snowfall, and,
of course, Christmas.
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Listening for meaning
As you listen to the podcast, indicate whether the following statements are true or false. If
they are false, fix them (Note: you may need to listen a second time to fix the statements).
The first one is done for you.
1. True/False Phyllis was hospitalized because she lost her memory.
False: Phyllis was hospitalized because she lost her memory... she had a nasty infection.
She then lost her short‐term memory.
2. True/False Phyllis now lives in a long‐term care facility.
3. True/False Jane is paid to spend time with Phyllis.
4. True/False When Jane first met her, Phyllis was excited about playing the accordion.
5. True/False Phyllis asked Jane to arrange accordion lessons for her.
6. True/False At first, Maureen was enthusiastic about having Phyllis as a student.
7. True/False After not playing the accordion for over 50 years, Phyllis had forgotten how to read music.
8. True/False During the interview, Phyllis forgets who Jane is.
9. True/False Phyllis’ father, a musician, had played the accordion.
10. True/False Phyllis was a teenager when she last took accordion lessons.
11. True/False Phyllis plays songs that she learned as an adult.
12. True/False Music was Phyllis’ passion throughout her adult life.
13. True/False At the first lesson, Phyllis immediately showed excitement about music.
14. True/False Phyllis is more alert and active after her music lessons.
15. True/False Phyllis is now a very happy person.
16. True/False It is a challenge for Phyllis to read music.
17. True/False Phyllis enjoys listening to music, as well as playing her accordion. (Answers can be found in the appendix.)
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Listening strategies – Identifying and interpreting factual information and explanations in order to complete a form
The goal of the listening strategies section of the monthly feature is to help you to improve your listening skills for all listening situations, not just this audio. This month we are focusing on the ability to extract necessary information from a listening text to do tasks – in this case, to complete a form.
When you go to the doctor, you often have to fill in a “medical history” form. In this listening, Phyllis’ musical history is discussed. Imagine that a new Music Therapy Program is being offered at the Rehab Centre near Phyllis’ long term care facility. In order to be part of the program, the following form needs to be completed for Phyllis. Read through the form, and then listen to the podcast and complete the form. In the last section, select details from the listening that would convince a reader to allow Phyllis into the program (e.g., details showing how accordion lessons have helped Phyllis). (Sample answers in the appendix)
Music Therapy Intake Form Name: ________________ Age: _________ Housing/support: _____________________________
Limitations/conditions: ________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Music History:
Parents/family: __________________________________________________
Lessons: Type:___________________ Number of years:_____
Experience:
• As a child:_________________________________________________________________ • As an adult:________________________________________________________________
Present skills/experience: _________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Reason for applying for Music Therapy:
Since Phyllis has been taking accordion lessons, she_______________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
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Building Speaking Skills: Encouraging
Paul, Jane, and Maureen go out of their way to encourage Phyllis. They give her compliments. Giving compliments can sometimes be tricky – the wrong intonation can make a compliment sound insincere, or even sarcastic.
Listen to the excerpts in the boxes below.
Notice that certain syllables in the compliments are focused on. Sometimes they are just louder and longer than other syllables. In most cases there is a more extreme intonation change than is found in other statements. In some compliments, the stressed syllable is very high, and then there is a fall and maybe a rise again. In other compliments, the stressed syllable is very low, leading to a rise then a fall (and maybe another rise). In either case, the highs and the lows are more exaggerated than in other situations, and there are more intonation changes in the intonation.
2:18 Paul
Maureen
Jane
You sounded good.
That was amazing!
Yeah!
3:02 Jane. It’s not too late.
What are you talking about?
It’s not too late.
It’s never too late.
Note: Very exaggerated intonation, as is found in the last “Never too late” comment (3:10), is commonly used with children, and can come across as somewhat patronizing when used with adults. Perhaps that is why Phyllis sounds a bit uncomfortable after the last “It’s never too late” statement. Or perhaps she is just not sure how to respond to so many compliments!
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4:20 Jane What’s amazing with you is that you can sight read so well, Phyllis.
4:25 Phyllis You think so?
4:26 Jane Oh god, yes.
I think it’s wonderful.
You just look at music and you can pretty near find every note.
5:33 Maureen
Jane/
Isn’t that pretty?
It’s beautiful. I love...
Practice saying these compliments at the same time as Paul, Maureen and Jane. Be sure to use the same intonation patterns they use. A flat intonation pattern can sometimes make a compliment sound insincere. You can practice as many times as you want!
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Reading Activity
Pre‐reading vocabulary
The following vocabulary activity will help you to understand the reading below. Match each word to its correct definition. Number 1 has been done for you. (Answers can be found in the appendix.)
1. resident (noun) P A. to have promised to do something
2. isolated (adjective) B. treatment to heal or relieve a condition/ someone who provides such treatment
3. therapy/therapist (nouns) C. to catch someone’s interest or attention; to involve someone
4. cognitive (adjective) D. to create and perform something without planning (e.g., to make up a song)
5. awareness (noun) E. to join in; to share in something
6. to improvise (verb) F. someone who publicly supports and recommends a person, policy, cause or program
7. to engage (verb); G. having little contact with others; solitary; lonely; separate
8. to participate (verb) H. the state of having knowledge or understanding of something
9. a sense of community (expression)
I. to be organized, designed, planned
10. to be structured _____ (expression)
J. being very interested in or enthusiastic about something
11. passionate (adjective) K. money
12. advocate (noun) L. related to intellectual processes such as thinking, perceiving, reasoning, remembering
13. to be committed to do something (expression)
M. to support; to keep in good condition
14. funds (noun) N. the feeling of belonging to a group
15. to maintain (verb) O. to improve the quality of something
16. to enhance (verb) P. a person who lives in a particular place (e.g., residents of a community; residents of a seniors home)
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Reading text: Music Therapy strikes the right chord
Music therapy strikes right chord February 7, 2013
Melodies ‘spark a flame’ in long‐term care residents in Canmore
There’s magic in music.
“It’s a beautiful thing to see the music spark a flame in someone who is more isolated than most,” says Corina Strim, resident music therapist on the Golden Eagle View long‐term care unit at the Canmore General Hospital. “While our goals are non‐musical – for example, cognitive stimulation and social awareness – music is the driver to reach those goals.”
Marilyn Croll’s husband, Gawn, is a long‐term care resident at Golden Eagle View and has been involved with music all his life. So when the music program was introduced, Marilyn was thrilled he had the opportunity to continue enjoying his life‐long passion in music.
“My husband is very sleepy a lot of the time, but when he heard (Richard) Rodgers’s and (Oscar) Hammerstein’s O What A Beautiful Morning, he woke up and started singing,” says Croll.
According to one of many studies, music therapy has led to increased cognitive abilities in Alzheimer patients.
Music therapy runs every Thursday morning at Golden Eagle View, with residents sitting in a circle and participating in their own ways. Whether listening to or improvising music, or feeling instruments in their laps, the music engages patients. Some have even been known to dance.
“It was so sweet!” says Strim. “Two residents grabbed each other’s hand and started moving to the beat. That’s a wonderful thing – especially when eye contact is the only success we see in some.”
The program provides a sense of community and belonging.
While the program is structured in some ways to meet goals, it’s pretty much up to the residents to write the day’s song sheet. If a particular chord is struck, such as making up a song, they go with it. The program has a varied playlist, including sensory motivation that includes touch – an important part of the symphony. Simply putting an instrument, such as a small guitar or “reverie harp” across a lap is engaging. It’s human nature to want to touch it.
A former music teacher, Croll is as passionate about music as her husband. “Corina’s program is wonderful,” she says. “When the music starts, you can see the inspiration.”
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The Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation is a big advocate and supporter of the program. “This program is an excellent fit for us in terms of supporting the social fabric of our community,” says Carla Helder, a director on the Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation Board. “We are committed to providing funds for music therapy for the next three years.”
Now that demands a big encore!
The Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation supports the Canmore Hospital maintaining and enhancing a high standard of health care. For more information, please visit www.canmorehealthfoundation.com or call 403.678.4358.
Story courtesy Alberta Health Services: http://www.albertahealthservices.ca/7942.asp
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Reading for meaning
1. What are the goals of the music program?
__________________________________________________________________________
2. What effect does music have on Gawn Croll?
__________________________________________________________________________
3. Give an example of how music engages patients:
__________________________________________________________________________
4. Who decides the schedule for what will be done during the music therapy program each
week?
__________________________________________________________________________
5. Describe Gawn and Marilyn Croll’s musical history and attitude towards music:
• Gawn: _____________________________________________________________
• Marilyn: ____________________________________________________________
6. Give evidence to show that the Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation (CAHCF)
supports the music therapy program.
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
7. The Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation (CAHCF) is a charitable organization that
people can donate money to. What can you infer about the relationship between the
CAHCF and the Canmore Hospital?
__________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
8. What is the general tone of the article? (select one)
negative, critical
neutral, objective
positive, enthusiastic
Write one quote that you could use as evidence to support your answer:
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
(Answers can be found in the appendix)
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Reading Strategies – recognizing and understanding literary language
Some articles make more use of literary language than others. In the article you just read, the writer uses alliteration1 in the first sentence when she says: “There’s magic in music.” Then the author goes on to make use of many different figures of speech2. Sometimes, as in the following table, the figurative meaning of a word is commonly understood. That is, when people read that word, they have a shared understanding of what it means. Examine the literal meanings and figurative meanings of the bolded words in the following table. Did you understand what they meant in their original contexts?
Context Literal meaning Figurative meaning Meaning in context
It’s a beautiful thing to see the music spark a flame in someone who is more isolated than most.
a spark = a fiery particle, often produced by a fire or by stones striking together
a flame: fire
to spark: to start something
a flame: a passion or interest
It’s beautiful to see music catch someone’s interest.
While our goals are non‐musical – for example, cognitive stimulation and social awareness – music is the driver to reach those goals
a driver = someone who drives a vehicle
a driver: something that causes something to happen; something that stimulates activity
Music helps improve cognitive stimulation and social awareness.
This program is an excellent fit for us in terms of supporting the social fabric of our community
fabric = cloth, (often woven or knitted)
social fabric: characteristics of a community; what holds a community together; personal connections
The program suits us; it helps people connect.
Sometimes writers develop their own figures of speech – that is, there is not always a
shared understanding of what the figure of speech means. To understand those figures, it is
important to look carefully at the context. Because this article is about music, the writer
uses figures of speech from the world of music to communicate her ideas. However, you
may have found it difficult to understand what she was saying if you didn’t know the literal
meanings of the musical terms. In the following table you will find the literal meanings of
the musical terms. In each case, use the context and the literal meaning to guess what the
author means. (Sample answers are in the appendix)
1 Repetition of the same consonant in words. 2 Expressive uses of language that are not literal (e.g., “the sun smiled at me”).
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Context Literal meaning Meaning in this context
While the program is structured in some ways to meet goals, it’s pretty much up to the residents to write the day’s song sheet.
a song sheet: printed lyrics and music
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
If a particular chord is struck, such as making up a song, they go with it.
a chord: a harmonic set of notes played at the same time (e.g., on a guitar)
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
The program has a varied playlist, including sensory motivation...
a playlist: a list of songs ___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
...that includes touch –an important part of the symphony.
symphony: a complex musical composition, written to be played by an orchestra (large number of musical instruments)
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
“We are committed to providing funds for music therapy for the next three years.”
Now that demands a big encore!
encore: at the end of a performance, an approving audience might demand an encore – an extra performance.
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
___________________________
(Answers can be found in the appendix)
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Grammar Activity – Choosing logical tenses
You may have been told to avoid switching from one tense to another in your writing. This is generally good advice – you should not switch tenses unless there is a good reason to do so! For instance, when reporting on an interview or reporting what others have said, a writer can choose to use the present tense or the past tense – but it is best to be consistent through the entire piece of writing. Often, though, it is necessary to change tenses because of what you are describing. The reading in this month’s story makes use of the following tenses, often switching tense even within sentences:
• It uses the Simple present to describe general truths, situations that are seen as permanent, scheduled events, and habitual actions. It also uses the simple present to report what someone said during the interview (the writer could have chosen to use the past tense for this ‐‐ the key is that the writer is consistent).
• It uses the Present perfect to describe things that happened at an unspecified time in the past. For example it uses the present perfect to describe a change that has happened over time. It also uses the present perfect to describe something that started in the past and is still relevant or happening now.
• It uses the Simple past to describe a completed action that occurred at a specific time in the past (even if the specific time is not mentioned).
Complete the following table. In some cases, the verbs are omitted – put them in using the correct tense. In other cases, the tense and/or purpose are omitted – write in the tense or purpose.
Original sentences Tense Purpose “It’s a beautiful thing to see the music spark a flame in someone who is more isolated than most,”
_____________ _____________
To describe a general truth/situation
says Corina Strim, resident music therapist on the Golden Eagle View long‐term care unit at the Canmore General Hospital.
Simple present ________________________________ ________________________________
“While our goals _________ (to be) non‐musical – for example, cognitive stimulation and social awareness – music _________ (to be) the driver to reach those goals.”
Simple present ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________
Marilyn Croll’s husband, Gawn, _________ (to be) a long‐term care resident at Golden Eagle View
Simple present To describe a somewhat permanent situation
and _____________ (to be) involved with music all his life.
Present perfect (passive)
To describe a situation that began in the past and is still true now
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So when the music program was introduced, Marilyn was thrilled he had the opportunity to continue enjoying his life‐long passion in music.
_____________ _____________ (passive)
________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________
“My husband_________ (to be) very sleepy a lot of the time,
Simple present ________________________________ ________________________________
but when he _________(to hear) (Richard) Rodgers’s and (Oscar) Hammerstein’s O What A Beautiful Morning, he _________ (to wake)up and _________ (to start) singing,”
_____________ _____________
To describe a completed action in the past
says Croll. _____________ _____________
To report what someone said
According to one of many studies, music therapy _____________ (to lead) to increased cognitive abilities in Alzheimer patients.
_____________ _____________
To describe a change over time (began in the past, still happening now)
Music therapy ____________ (to run) every Thursday morning at Golden Eagle View, with residents sitting in a circle and participating in their own ways.
Simple present ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________
Whether listening to or improvising music, or feeling instruments in their laps, the music ___________ (to engage) patients.
_____________ _____________
To describe a repeated action or general truth/situation
“It ____________ (to be) so sweet!” _____________ _____________
To describe a completed action in the past
____________ (to say) Strim. Simple present ________________________________ ________________________________
“Two residents ________ (to grab) each other’s hand and ___________ (to start) moving to the beat.
_____________ _____________
To describe a completed action in the past
That____ (to be) a wonderful thing – especially when eye contact ______ (to be) the only success we see in some.”
_____________ _____________
To describe a general truth/situation
The program provides a sense of community and belonging.
_____________ _____________
________________________________ ________________________________
If you wish, re‐read the text to see if you chose the correct tense. Answers are provided in the appendix.
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Writing Activity – Persuading; providing evidence to support an opinion
Using specific examples to support an opinion is an important part of persuading. For instance, in a job interview, your goal is to convince the interviewer that you would be an ideal candidate for a job. So, your main point might be the following:
• I am a strong candidate for the position as I have the relevant training and the personal characteristics that you are looking for. I also have good leadership skills and am responsible and creative.
If you stop there, however, no one will believe you. You have not yet given them a reason to believe you. You need to give examples of how your training (maybe specific classes) matches the job requirements. You also need to give examples of how you
• showed leadership (e.g., describe an incident where you convinced people of a course of action)
• are responsible (e.g., your school record shows perfect attendance and you completed your assignments on time; at the same time, you held a part‐time job to support your family, and never missed a shift)
• are creative (e.g., perhaps an example of how you solved a problem that others had difficulty with; perhaps examples of your work)
The detailed examples provide evidence that you do indeed have leadership skills, are responsible, and are creative. These, in turn, can convince an interviewer that you would be a good candidate for a job.
The reading you completed provides evidence that music therapy is effective (helps clients improve cognitively and socially):
• Gawn wakes up and sings when he hears music • Research shows music therapy improves cognitive awareness in Alzheimer patients • Music therapy engages people ‐‐ some residents dance; two residents held hands
and moved to the beat • Music therapy provides a sense of community and belonging – the residents
determine what happens in therapy, and the CAHCF says that it supports the “social fabric” of their community.
• The CAHCF recognizes the value of the program by promising to fund it for 3 years.
Practice using specific examples and details to support your opinion by completing the writing assignment on the following page.
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Imagine that a new Music Therapy Program is being offered at the Rehab Centre near Phyllis’ long term care centre. The program has funding for only 6 clients. You strongly feel that Phyllis would be an ideal client for the music therapy program. Write a paragraph to convince the program coordinator to accept Phyllis into the program. Use specific details you recorded in the Music Therapy Intake Form (regarding Phyllis’ musical history, her present skills, and her reactions to her accordion lessons) to convince the coordinator that Phyllis would be the best client for the program. (See sample paragraph in answer key)
Phyllis would be an ideal client for the new Music Therapy program at the Rehab
Centre._____________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
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After you have finished writing the paragraph, double check your verb tenses.
• Did you use present perfect to describe things that happened in the past and are still relevant now? (e.g., importance of music in her life; loss of memory)
• Did you use simple past to describe completed actions in the past? (e.g., details from Phyllis’ musical history)
• Did you use present perfect to describe changes that occurred over time? (e.g., become more alert)
• Did you use simple present to describe general truths? (e.g., Phyllis’ musical skills; her present condition)
• Did you use present continuous to describe actions that are happening (perhaps not at this second, but during this period of time)? (e.g., the lessons).
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Links
• For a recent article about a music therapist working with children at the Hospital for
Sick Children in Toronto, see the following link:
http://www.edmontonjournal.com/health/Sound+means+healing+Music+therapy+s
oothe+sick+both+body+soul/8011588/story.html
Note: if the link does not work, do a search for the author+title (Sheryl Ubelacker,
“Sound means of healing: Music therapy can soothe the sick, both body and soul.”
The article was published in the Edmonton Journal on February 26, 2013.)
• For descriptions of a wide variety of careers in Alberta Health Services see the
following links:
o For clinical careers (i.e., working with patients), see
http://www.albertahealthservices.ca/careers/page15.asp
o For non‐clinical careers, see
http://www.albertahealthservices.ca/careers/page16.asp
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Appendix ‐ Answer Keys
Pre‐listening vocabulary
1. When the toddler ran out into the road, the driver instinctually stepped on the brakes
and swerved, missing the child.
2. It was a challenge at first to jog up the long hill without stopping, but after a few weeks
of running, it was easier.
3. They’ve had an exciting couple of months, but now they are back from their travels
overseas and school is starting again.
4. When they could no longer care for his grandmother on their own, they hired a
companion to provide her with individualized care.
5. When his grandmother’s medical needs became too great, she moved into a long term
care facility.
6. As she looked out at the audience, all she could see was a sea of faces.
7. She is depressed every winter. She’s not sure if this is caused because of the lack of
sunshine or because she misses her family during the Christmas season.
8. When Keichi asked her to marry him, she accepted without reservation. She had
absolutely no doubts.
9. When the child was first adopted, she was non‐reactive. She didn’t smile, laugh, show
affection or even cry.
10. Although it took awhile, her new parents were finally able to break through to her.
Slowly she learned to trust them, and even to laugh and play like other children her age.
11. Although she did well in most of her classes, she really blossomed in her art class. She
was confident, happy, and did amazing work.
12. Although she was physically challenged in a number of ways, she was clearly very
intelligent.
13. Even when she found her studies difficult, she persevered.
14. She enjoyed math, but art was always her passion. So, she decided to enrol in fine arts
rather than engineering.
15. Her parents tried to convince her to go into engineering, but she refused.
16. Every year in the fall, she feels nostalgic. She remembers the excitement she felt as a
child, looking forward to school starting, the first snowfall, and, of course, Christmas.
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Listening for meaning
1. True/False Phyllis was hospitalized because she lost her memory... she had a nasty infection. She then lost her short‐term memory.
2. True/False Phyllis now lives in a long term care facility.
3. True/False Jane is paid to spend time with Phyllis. (she was hired...)
4. True/False When Jane first met her, Phyllis was excited about playing the accordion. depressed, nothing interested her. But there was a light in her eyes when she talked about music.
5. True/False Phyllis asked Jane to arrange accordion lessons for her. Jane kept bringing up the idea of playing the accordion again – it took a while to convince Phyllis.
6. True/False At first, Maureen was enthusiastic worried, afraid, had reservations about having Phyllis as a student.
7. True/False After not playing the accordion for over 15 years, Phyllis had not forgotten how to read music. She could still sight read...playing tunes without stopping.
8. True/False During the interview, Phyllis forgets who Jane is.
9. True/False Phyllis’ father, a musician, had played the accordion. the violin, mandolin, and banjo
10. True/False Phyllis was a teenager when she last took accordion lessons.
11. True/False Phyllis plays songs that she learned as an adult. as a child
12. True/False Music was Phyllis’ passion throughout her adult life.
13. True/False At the first lesson, Phyllis immediately showed excitement about music....was quiet, non‐reactive. After the 2nd or 3rd lesson, she showed excitement.
14. True/False Phyllis is more alert and active after her music lessons.
15. True/False Phyllis is now a very happy person. She’s happier than she was, but she’s still nostalgic and melancholy because she’s lost a piece of her life.
16. True/False It is a challenge very easy for Phyllis to read music. She can look at music and fine every note; intuitive, like riding a bicycle.
17. True/False Phyllis enjoys listening to music, as well as playing her accordion.
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Listening strategies – Recognize language used to convey mood and attitude
1. When you go to the doctor, you often have to fill in a medical history form. In this listening, Phyllis’ musical history is discussed. Imagine that a music therapist has asked that the following form be filled in for Phyllis.
Music Therapy Intake Form
Name: Phyllis M. Age: 69 Housing/support: Long term care facility/companion
Limitations/conditions:
Short term memory gone; depressed
Music History:
Parents/family: father musician, played the violin, mandolin, banjo
Lessons: Type: Accordion Number of years: 3
Experience:
• As a child: played for dance pieces at a senior’s club • As an adult: played in a Ukrainian orchestra
Present skills/experience: can play accordion, can sight read music, is taking accordion lessons
Reason for applying for Music Therapy funding:
Since Phyllis has been taking accordion lessons, she has become more alert and interactive. She has more confidence, more joy, more smiling. She seems to “wake up.” Instead of being non‐reactive, she laughs, smile. When she listens to music, she taps her foot. It seems to give her hope.
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Reading Activity
Pre‐reading vocabulary
1. resident (noun) P A. to have promised to do something
2. isolated (adjective) G B. treatment to heal or relieve a condition/ someone who provides treatment
3. therapy/therapist (nouns) B C. to catch someone’s interest or attention; to involve someone
4. cognitive (adjective) L D. to create and perform something without planning (e.g., to make up a song)
5. awareness (noun) H E. to join in; to share in something
6. to improvise (verb) D F. someone who publicly supports and recommends a person, policy, cause or program
7. to engage (verb); C G. having little contact with others; solitary; lonely; separate
8. to participate (verb) E H. the state of having knowledge or understanding of something
9. a sense of community (expression)
N I. to be organized, designed, planned
10. to be structured (expression)
I J. being very interested in or enthusiastic about something
11. passionate (adjective) J K. money
12. advocate (noun) F L. related to intellectual processes such as thinking, perceiving, reasoning, remembering
13. to be committed to do something (expression)
A M. to support; to keep in good condition
14. funds (noun) K N. the feeling of belonging to a group
15. to maintain (verb) M O. to improve the quality of something
16. to enhance (verb) O P. a person who lives in a particular place (e.g., residents of a community; residents of a seniors home)
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Reading for meaning
1. What are the goals of the music program?
cognitive stimulation, social awareness (these are 2 of the goals – there may be others.
However, the program does not have the goal of improving people’s musical skills)
2. What effect does music have on Gawn Croll?
He is generally sleepy, but when he hears the music he wakes up and starts singing.
3. Give an example of how music engages patients:
Some residents dance; 2 residents held hands and started to move with the beat; playing
an instrument.
4. Who decides the schedule for what will be done during the music therapy program each
week?
Residents (it’s up to residents to write the day’s song sheet)
5. Describe Gawn and Marilyn Croll’s musical history and attitude towards music:
• Gawn: involved with music all his life/music was his lifelong passion
• Marilyn: former music teacher/also passionate about music
6. Give evidence to show that the Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation supports the
music therapy program.
They have promised to provide funds ($$$) for music therapy for the next 3 years. The
director of the program says, “This program is an excellent fit for us.”
7. The Canmore and Area Health Care Foundation (CAHCF) is a charitable organization that
people can donate money to. What can you infer about the relationship between the
CAHCF and the Canmore Hospital?
The CAHCF raises funds to support the quality of care provided by the Canmore Hospital.
Perhaps they provide money for extra programs (such as the Music Therapy program) that
the hospital cannot fund in their budget.
8. What is the general tone of the article? (select one)
negative, critical
neutral, objective
positive, enthusiastic
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Write one quote that you could use as evidence to support your answer:
“Now that demands a big encore!” (OR “There’s magic in music” “The program
provides a sense of community and belonging.”)
(Answers can be found in the appendix)
Reading Strategies
Context Literal meaning Figurative meaning in context
While the program is structured in some ways to meet goals, it’s pretty much up to the residents to write the day’s song sheet.
a song sheet: printed lyrics and music
The residents determine what happens during music therapy (they set the plan).
If a particular chord is struck, such as making up a song, they go with it.
a chord: a harmonic set of notes played at the same time (e.g., on a guitar)
If something interests or impresses the clients (i.e., they resonate or connect with the idea), then they do that activity.
The program has a varied playlist, including sensory motivation that
a playlist: a list of songs The program has lots of different parts
includes touch –an important part of the symphony.
symphony: a complex musical composition, written to be played by an orchestra (large number of musical instruments)
Music Therapy is complex – lots of parts make up the whole program. Touch is one of those aspects.
“We are committed to providing funds for music therapy for the next three years.”
Now that demands a big encore!
encore: at the end of a performance, an approving audience might demand an encore – an extra performance.
The writer approves of the funding for music therapy – She is hoping it will continue to be funded even after the next 3 years.
Grammar Activity – choosing the best verb tense
Complete the following table. In some cases, the verbs are omitted – put them in using the correct tense. In other cases, the tense and/or purpose are omitted – write in the tense or purpose. (Answers are provided in the appendix).
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Tense Purpose
“It’s a beautiful thing to see the music spark a flame in someone who is more isolated than most,”
Simple present To describe a general truth/situation
says Corina Strim, resident music therapist on the Golden Eagle View long‐term care unit at the Canmore General Hospital.
Simple present To report what someone said
“While our goals are non‐musical – for example, cognitive stimulation and social awareness – music is the driver to reach those goals.”
Simple present To describe a general truth/situation
Marilyn Croll’s husband, Gawn, is a long‐term care resident at Golden Eagle View
Simple present To describe a somewhat permanent situation
and has been involved with music all his life. Present perfect (passive)
To describe a situation that began in the past and is still true now
So when the music program was introduced, Marilyn was thrilled he had the opportunity to continue enjoying his life‐long passion in music.
Simple past (passive)
To describe a completed action in the past
“My husband is very sleepy a lot of the time, Simple present To describe a habitual situation
but when he heard (Richard) Rodgers’s and (Oscar) Hammerstein’s O What A Beautiful Morning, he woke up and started singing,”
Simple past To describe a completed action in the past
says Croll. Simple present To report what someone said
According to one of many studies, music therapy has led to increased cognitive abilities in Alzheimer patients.
Present perfect To describe a change over time (began in the past, still happening now)
Music therapy runs every Thursday morning at Golden Eagle View, with residents sitting in a circle and participating in their own ways.
Simple present To describe a scheduled event (repeated action)
Whether listening to or improvising music, or feeling instruments in their laps, the music engages patients.
Simple present To describe a repeated action or general truth/situation
“It was so sweet!” Simple past To describe a completed action in the
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past
says Strim. Simple present To report what someone said
“Two residents grabbed each other’s hand and started moving to the beat.
Simple past To describe a completed action in the past
That’s a wonderful thing – especially when eye contact is the only success we see in some.”
Simple present To describe a general truth/situation
The program provides a sense of community and belonging.
Simple present To describe a general truth/situation
Writing Activity
Sample paragraph with supporting examples:
Phyllis would be an ideal client for the new Music Therapy program at the Rehab
Centre. First of all, music has always been an important part of her life. Her father
was a musician and passed his love of music on to Phyllis. When she was a teenager,
she took accordion lessons and together with her father, performed at seniors clubs.
As an adult, she played in a Ukrainian orchestra. Even though she has lost much of
her short term memory and some of her cognitive skills, Phyllis is competent
musically: she can play the accordion and sight read music. She is now taking
accordion lessons and is responding very well to them. Before the accordion lessons,
Phyllis was depressed and non‐reactive. Since taking accordion lessons, she has
become more alert and interactive. She has more confidence, more joy, and smiles
and laughs more often. During the lessons, she seems to “wake up.” When she
listens to music, she taps her foot. Because music is an important part of her life and
gives her confidence and hope, she should be funded for Music Therapy.
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Appendix – Transcript
SPEAKER TITLE: ACCORDIAN
0:00 Jane Hey Phyllis. Like to come down? We’ll go do your lesson.
0:04 Paul Phyllis Strepnichuk is helped down the stairs into a southeast Calgary basement. She’s here for her regular accordion lesson.
0:12 Jane Kay, let’s get you sitting down there, honeybucks.
0:15 Paul Phyllis is 69 years old and she’s had a hard couple of years. She was hospitalised for a nasty infection and hasn’t been the same since. Her short‐term memory is gone. Now she lives in a long term care facility. Last October, Jane Ruktasho was hired as a companion for Phyllis. She was depressed and Jane says it was hard to break through to Phyllis at first.
0:39 Jane There was really nothing that interested her. So I would come up with all kinds of ideas and... there was nothing. And so, just in getting to know her and finding out about her love of music... She had played the accordion in the past. And when she would talk about it, I would see there would be light in her eyes, and I was just trying to wrap my brain, of how we could do something. So, I kept bringing this up: “Well, Phyllis, what about if you, whatever, think about playing the accordion again?” And then, finally, we got... a friend of hers, Joyce, told us about Maureen. And so we got Maureen’s number...
1:13 Paul And so, today, Phyllis is here, in Maureen Jaroch’s music studio, surrounded by a sea of instruments and sheet music. Maureen’s been teaching for 40 years now, but had her reservations about taking on Phyllis as a student.
1:30 Maureen I was afraid of working with someone that, you know, might be challenged. And the first lesson, I’m going, ok , this woman hasn’t touched the accordion for maybe 15 years. Sits down, opens her book, and she can play sixty to seventy tunes, sight reading them, without stopping. And knowing that she has a little bit of a handicap, I was absolutely amazed.
1:55 Maureen Let’s go for it. And then we’ll see what we can do to improve it and get the notes better, OK?
2:20 Paul/Jane/ Maureen
You sounded good. Amazing. Yeah!
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2:21 Paul Jane was saying that you have a musical history. Your family played a lot of music growing up, that your father was a musician. Can you tell me a little bit about that?
2:30 Phyllis Jane? This is Maureen.
2:33 Paul Uh, well, Jane, your uh your companion.
2:36 Phyllis Oh yeah. My father played the violin, the mandolin, and the banjo. And I played the accordion. We played for dance pieces, like the seniors’ club. My father got me to take the accordion lessons, like say... 14, 15, and 16. Three years. I see it now, I should have stayed with the accordion. Anyway, it’s too late now, so, I could
3:02 Jane? It’s not too late. What are you talking about? It’s not too late. It’s never too late. [laughter]
3:08 Phyllis OK
3:10 Maureen/Jane What’s this one called? To Fresha with Love. Yes. We’re gonna...
3:15 Paul The songs Phyllis play come from her childhood. Maureen flips through handwritten books of sheet music. Old Ukrainian folksongs, painstakingly written out by her father.
3:26 Maureen Lookit. You’ve got all the titles. It’s all handwritten.
3:28 Paul In her adult years, Phyllis played in a Ukrainian orchestra. Music was her passion then. And it’s given her a new lease on life now.
3:37 Maureen The first time she came in here for her first music lesson, um, she was very quiet, very non‐reactive. By the time we got through the second or third lesson, she was familiar with me, she giggles, she laughs, she just... the wheel starts to spin a little faster once she’s done her music. So.. It’s like she wakes up out of a sleep, or something. It is nostalgic in a way, and you know that she’s a little bit melancholy, because she’s lost some of what she feels is part of her life. But you’re trying to get it back for her. I just have great respect for her for just going back and persevering and making parts of her life work for her again.
4:20 Jane What’s amazing with you is that you can sight read so well, Phyllis.
4:25 Phyllis You think so?
4:26 Jane Oh god, yes. I think it’s wonderful. You just look at music and you can pretty near find every note ...
4:32 Maureen Instinctually and that just comes from years and years and years of just playing
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music. I mean it’s like riding a bicycle. [accordion music]
4:51 Paul Phyllis’ companion, Jane Ruktashel, says it was a challenge at first to convince Phyllis to play again, but has since seen her blossom.
5:00 Jane I actually see some more confidence in her, and certainly more joy, more smiling. We play... I have her CD’s, and every time we get in the car, I play her CD’s for her, and she’s tapping her foot. And it’s bigger than just her accordion. It is her love of music, and that is really what, I think, drives her passion and gives her life and hope and, you know, it’s just something that’s in her blood from a child, and she really loves it.
5:33 Jane/Maureen Isn’t that pretty? It’s beautiful.
5:37 Paul Phyllis’ lesson is done for the week. She’ll return to her long term care facility to practice, and Jane will work on her next challenge – getting Phyllis to perform in front of a crowd, once again.
5:49 Maureen OK, thanks. OK, we will see you. Take care.
2:20 Paul For the Calgary eye‐opener, I’m Paul Karchut.