how to write problems – solutions essay

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will

this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to

reduce the impact of ageing populations.

1. B CC BI VIT PROBLEMS SOLUTIONS

Introduction:

- Introduce the topic: Da vo cu ca bi v paraphrase li cu .

Cu ca bi l: In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

In the developed world = in industrialised nations

Average life expectancy is increasing = live longer

It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before

- Give your answer to the question

bi hi v problems cng nh solution cho vn trn, do bn cn cp

trc rng thn bi bn s gii quyt Problems v Solutions

Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies

can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.


Body paragraph 1: Problems

- Problem (General).

- Explanation/Example and Result.

Hai vn .

Khi tui th trung bnh tng, s lng ngi c hng ch lng hu s

tng. Kt qu s l chnh ph s phi chi tr tin lng hu cho nhng ngi gi

ng thi chu nhng gim st trong tin thu, v c th lc lng lao ng tr s

phi b vo phn thiu ht .

Ngi ngi ta tr nn gi hn, h thng hay i mt vi cc vn v sc

khe. Khi , chnh ph s phi u t nhiu hn cho dch v chm sc sc khe

cng nh nhng ngi tr s phi dnh nhiu thi gian, tin bc cho vic chm

sc sc khe ngi gi.

Topic Sentence:

Cu topic sentence ng vai tr nh mt cu vn ch ng ngi c bit bn s vit

g trong on vn ny. N l cu tm tt ni dung ca on. C th trong on vn u

tin, bn s ch ra nhng tc ng tiu cc ca vn tng tui th trung bnh

Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations

of developed countries grow older.

Problem 1

General problem:

The prime issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be

eligible to receive a pension.

Vn u tin, bn c th s dng nhng cm t nh: The main/first/most obvious/

most important + issue/problem/matter is that + clause

Explanation and result:


The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will

therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other

words, the increasing number of senior citizens will mean a greater tax burden for

working adults.

Paraphrase: Paraphrase l mt trong nhng vn ng quan tm ca Academic Writing.

Bn khng th dng mt t elderly people t u n cui c. Thay vo , bn c

th s dng: senior citizens/members, people of retirement age, hoc ni v ton th:

ageing population.

Academic Words: Nhng t ng mang tnh hc thut s lm bi vit trang trng v ng

vn phong vit. V d: senior citizens, the number of, tax burden.

Linking words on vn c trnh by logic v d theo di, c kt dnh gia cc

phn, cc on: Moreover, Therefore, In other words.

Problem 2

General problem:

Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare

Further pressures l t dng chuyn sang th 2 ca on. Bn c th s dng cc

cm t khc: Another problem/pressure | Additional problem(s) is.

Explanation:

as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases.

Result:

In this way, the government will have to invest in healthcare and young adults will

increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives..

T , bn c on vn u tin ca thn bi:


of developed countries grow older. The main issue is that there will obviously be more


people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of

younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less

money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing

population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will

include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are

often subject to many diseases. In this way, the government will have to invest more in

healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.

Body paragraph 2: Solutions.

C 3 solutions c a ra c th thy rt r t on vn:

- Tng tui v hu trung bnh t 65 ln 70.

- Khuyn khch nhp c tng lng ngi lao ng, nhng ngi s ng thu.

- S dng ngun vn t cc lnh vc khc.

There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described

above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working

adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to

continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to

encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay

taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and

spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers

of older citizens.

SAMPLE:


It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.

Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies

can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.


of developed countries grow older. The main issue is that there will obviously be more

people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of

younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less

money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing

population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will

include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are

often subject to many diseases. In this way, the government will have to invest more in

healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described

above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working

adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to

continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to

encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes.

Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on

vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older

citizens.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to

arise as the populations of countries grow older.

2. SAMPLE OUTLINE

It is true that -------topic-------. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative

consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

Several related problems can be anticipated when ---------topic----------. The main issue is

that---------problem 1--------Explanation/example--------. Further pressures will include -


--------problem 2--------Explanation/example-------. ---Topic---- can also result in -----

problem 3--------Explanation/example---

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described

above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to -----solution 1--------Explanation/example--

------. A second measure would be -----solution 2 -------- Explanation/example--------

..Finally, ---- solution 3 --------Explanation/example--------.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to

arise as-------topic--------.

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RESULT Due to

Owing to

Because of

Caused by

Brought about by

.. CAUSE


On account of

As a result of

CAUSE .. Results in

Causes

Gives rise to

Leads to

Brings about

Accounts of

RESULT

a ra cch gii quyt

Trong cu trc ny bn nn s dng cu b ng s nhn mnh c cch gii quyt m

bn a ra .

Steps

Measures

Should

Must

Could

Be taken So as to

In order to

Solve .

Overcome

Combat

Deal with

Eradicate

Serious attempts to halt/ prevent / solve .must be taken

One (possible)

Another

Way to Solve/ overcome/

combat/ deal

This problem

The problem

Would be

Is.


An alternative with/ eradicate of.

People Should focus their/ our

attention on ways

To solve/ overcome the problem of .

To improve the situation of

To reduce the impacts of .on society..

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