headline writing
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This is a journalism powerpoint for headline writing. The powerpoint was written by Bobby Hawthorne and revised by Jeanne Acton.TRANSCRIPT
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It’s all in your Head(line)
By Bobby Hawthorne, former UIL Academic Director Revised by Jeanne Acton, UIL Journalism Director
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The Headline Writing Contest: • Six stories, six headlines • 45 minutes (about 7 minutes a story) • Count parameters • About speed and creativity
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Sell the story. A good head involves readers much like a clever ad.
Tell the facts. Precise and specific heads inform readers instantly of what they may or may not want to read.
Be accurate. All facts, names, numbers, whatever must be correct.
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Be objective. Don’t editorialize.
Simple but precise. No fancy words. No weird constructions. Find the right word to communicate the meaning.
Make tone fit content. Serious story. Serious headline. Funny story. Funny headline.
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Kinds of Head(line)s
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• 1-line-headline Bricklayers engage in mortar combat
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• 2-line-headline
Backers hot for chili
as U.S. official food
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• 3-line-headline
Principal adds
six electives
to summer school
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• Main/secondary headline
Standing tall 5’-4” guard rises to challenge of leading Tigers
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• Main/secondary headline
Driven to destruction Police play game of cat and mouse with illegal racers
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• Main/secondary headline
Whole new ballgame Nolan Ryan makes smooth transition to job helping oversee state’s parks, wildlife areas
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• Main/Secondary headline
Up to date Senior makes over dad for e-bay auction
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• Be as specific as possible in your headline. Get to the heart of the news.
(not good) School board discusses items at heated Tuesday meeting
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(better – more specific) 2 board members walk out over budget argument
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• Avoid semicolons. The headline should be a single sentence, not a collection of sentences.
Hurricane strikes; School swamped; Pep rally cancelled Better:
Pep rally cancelled after hurricane slams into school
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• Don’t pad headlines with school initials or dates. Also, avoid initials and abbreviations in headlines.
Too vague…
2004 MHS FFA plans to hold annual rodeo
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• More specific…
Willie Nelson to appear at FFA rodeo Saturday
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• Put all parts of a verb on the same line avoid be verbs and linking verbs. Action. Shoot present tense or future tense.
(weak) Spongebob will attend Mensa meeting purely as spectator
(better) Spongebob to attend Mensa meeting purely as spectator
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A few more rules …
• Avoid contractions • Do not end a headline with a period • Avoid names unless they are easily recognizable • Always use single quotes in headlines
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• No articles. Use a comma instead of “and”
Heat wave blisters California, Texas
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• No clichés.
Swimmers dive into season
Golfers swing into action
Exchange students say ‘Hasta la vista’
Math Club multiplies
Football team tackles opposition
Drama Club acts up
Military recruiters say, ‘I Want You’
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• Do not repeat key words or phrases from the main headline into the secondary headline
Pocket lasers banned Authorities ban laser pointers Just in case you didn’t
catch it, the repetition is the word “laser” and “ban”
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Pocket lasers banned Principal cites injuries, class disruptions
This headline provides twice as much information in the same amount of space! Yippee!
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• Avoid "headline-ese" either in the form of simplified spellings or odd synonyms.
Board to meet Vball team destroys Tuesday nite Southside in finals
Senior play to continue thru Easter
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• Avoid initials or abbreviations, unless the initials are instantly recognizable. From the UT-Austin’s Daily Texan:
ACLU considers lawsuit for SFA’s YCT
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• Avoid passive verbs in headlines.
Internet fraud is cause of worry for administrators
Better:
Internet fraud concerns administrators
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• It is permissible to use implied passive verbs.
Mosquitos (are) biting into summer fun
Federal grant (is) renewed
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• Put modifiers and words modified on the same line
Fire guts Fred Astaire Dance Studio, 2 injured
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• Put all parts of a verb on the same line Strive for present/future tense, action verbs
(weak) Nichols will not appear in court
(better) Nichols avoids district court appearance
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• Put all parts of a verb on the same line
(weak) Big surprise: Nader will run for president again
(better) Big surprise: Nader to run for U.S. president again
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• Do not end a line with a preposition
Baseball team ready for playoff game, coach says
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• Do not end a line with a preposition
No love lost between Longhorns, Sooners
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• When separating two sentences in a headline, do so with a semi-colon.
Bardwell named Educator of the Year; experts call it sign of plunging standards
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• The main headline should never be dependent on a kicker or other secondary headline.
(incorrect) If elected in November, Obama Says he will get U.S. out of Iraq
(correct) Getting out Obama promises to end Iraq war
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• Alliteration in headlines should be used sparingly and in appropriate situations. Acceptable:
New Planetary Puzzlers A distant, oversize world causes cosmic confusion
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Take ‘meowt’ to the cat show Annual festival of felines begins today
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• Unacceptable:
Cheney’s chest chink Vice president’s thumper goes thud
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• The headline should reflect the mood of the story.
Band itching for practice as soon as mosquitos killed
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Bears capture playoff birth
• Be careful of word use and misinterpretation.
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Bush, Kerry butt heads
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Panda mating fails; veterinarian takes over
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Be sure to eat right before surgery
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Kicking baby considered to be healthy
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Crowds rushing to see Pope trample 6 to death
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Police Say Man Hid Crack in Buttocks