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1500 K Street, NW Suite 1100 Washington, DC 20005 Telephone: +1 202.230.5621 Email: [email protected] Website: https://iqconsortium.org IQ CONSORTIUM COMMENTS ON FDA-2019-D-2330 PATHOLOGY PEER REVIEW IN NONCLINICAL TOXICOLOGY STUDIES: QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS; GUIDANCE FOR INDUSTRY; DRAFT GUIDANCE We are pleased to offer the following comments, developed by the DruSafe Leadership Group (with input from the Quality Leadership Group) of the International Consortium for Innovation and Quality in Pharmaceutical Development (www.iqconsortium.org). The IQ Consortium is a not-for-profit organization of pharmaceutical and biotechnology companies with a mission of advancing science and technology to augment the capability of member companies to develop transformational solutions that benefit patients, regulators and the broader research and development community. The IQ Consortium and DruSafe Leadership Group appreciate the opportunity to review the draft guidance and to share detailed feedback below. First, general comments on the current draft guidance’s text are presented. In the table that follows, specific comments and proposed revisions are provided for your consideration. The IQ Consortium hopes this feedback will assist the Agency in their efforts. If you require clarification of any of these comments, please contact Dr. Ann Marie Stanley at the IQ Consortium Secretariat: IQ Consortium Secretariat* 1500 K Street NW Washington DC 20005 Telephone: (202) 230-5158 Fax: (202) 842-8465 Web: www.iqconsortium.org Email: [email protected] *Secretariat, Drinker Biddle & Reath LLP GENERAL COMMENTS ON PATHOLOGY PEER REVIEW IN NONCLINICAL TOXICOLOGY STUDIES: QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS DRAFT GUIDANCE FOR INDUSTRY The goal of the pathology peer review is to assist the study pathologist with the creation of the best, most accurate set of histopathology data and interpretations of those data to describe the toxicity of the test article in the test system under the conditions of the nonclinical study. Some details outlined in the draft guidance, particularly as they pertain to how the process of peer review is recorded, appear to jeopardize the main goal and collaborative benefit of performing a peer

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  • 1500 K Street, NW Suite 1100

    Washington, DC 20005 Telephone: +1 202.230.5621 Email: [email protected]

    Website: https://iqconsortium.org

    IQ CONSORTIUM COMMENTS ON FDA-2019-D-2330

    PATHOLOGY PEER REVIEW IN NONCLINICAL TOXICOLOGY STUDIES:

    QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS; GUIDANCE FOR INDUSTRY; DRAFT GUIDANCE

    We are pleased to offer the following comments, developed by the DruSafe Leadership Group

    (with input from the Quality Leadership Group) of the International Consortium for Innovation

    and Quality in Pharmaceutical Development (www.iqconsortium.org). The IQ Consortium is a

    not-for-profit organization of pharmaceutical and biotechnology companies with a mission of

    advancing science and technology to augment the capability of member companies to develop

    transformational solutions that benefit patients, regulators and the broader research and

    development community.

    The IQ Consortium and DruSafe Leadership Group appreciate the opportunity to review the

    draft guidance and to share detailed feedback below. First, general comments on the current

    draft guidance’s text are presented. In the table that follows, specific comments and proposed

    revisions are provided for your consideration.

    The IQ Consortium hopes this feedback will assist the Agency in their efforts. If you require

    clarification of any of these comments, please contact Dr. Ann Marie Stanley at the IQ

    Consortium Secretariat:

    IQ Consortium Secretariat*

    1500 K Street NW

    Washington DC 20005

    Telephone: (202) 230-5158

    Fax: (202) 842-8465

    Web: www.iqconsortium.org

    Email: [email protected]

    *Secretariat, Drinker Biddle & Reath LLP

    GENERAL COMMENTS ON PATHOLOGY PEER REVIEW IN NONCLINICAL

    TOXICOLOGY STUDIES: QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS DRAFT GUIDANCE

    FOR INDUSTRY

    The goal of the pathology peer review is to assist the study pathologist with the creation of the

    best, most accurate set of histopathology data and interpretations of those data to describe the

    toxicity of the test article in the test system under the conditions of the nonclinical study. Some

    details outlined in the draft guidance, particularly as they pertain to how the process of peer review

    is recorded, appear to jeopardize the main goal and collaborative benefit of performing a peer

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    review. There is fundamental disagreement on what should be included in the peer review

    statement (A5) and how differences in interpretation between the pathologist and the peer review

    pathologist should be recorded (A9). The area of greatest concern is the lack of trust in the integrity

    of pathologists to perform their job role (Q8). The remainder of the discussion and detailed

    comments in the table are recommendations intended to increase the clarity in the guidance and

    drive consistency throughout the industry.

    DruSafe agrees with the FDA position that “Casual discussions, consultations, opinion exchange,

    and mentoring among pathologists do not constitute formal pathology peer review and are not

    covered by this guidance document.” However, each organization’s interpretation of these aspects

    of communication versus what constitutes a formal peer review are expected to result in substantial

    differences in detailed documentation. In addition, the iterative process of communication between

    the primary pathologist and peer review pathologist would be made cumbersome if documentation

    and justification are required along the way. The current philosophy of the industry is that the

    retention of interim information, working notes, communications to reconcile differences of

    opinions or draft versions of narrative reports from prospective/contemporaneous peer reviews is

    not essential for the reconstruction and understanding of the pathology section of the final study

    report, and do not require an audit trail or retention after the pathology report is finalized (Morton

    et al, 2010; US FDA 1987).

    The expectation of an audit trail initiation in between the study pathologist and peer review

    pathologist analysis appears to change the definition of pathology raw data. In addition, the

    initiation of an audit trail on interim data poses a burden to both study conduct and quality

    assurance units to manage this information for data which is not considered final, as identified in

    the 1987 GLP Final Rule1. It is strongly recommended that the expectation of an audit trail

    initiation prior to the peer review pathologist analysis be removed from the draft guidance prior to

    finalization.

    Regarding ‘undue influence’, it is not in any Sponsor’s best interest of patient safety to

    mischaracterize a nonclinical hazard. The essential correspondence to retain as part of peer review

    activities are communications that reflect the process, plans and expectations directly linked to the

    slides used in peer review (Fikes et al, 2015). Examples include correspondence on the process

    involved in the selection of slides for review, the selection of animals for full slide review, and the

    selection of potential target tissues for review in remaining animals. However, communications

    regarding preliminary pathology observations prior to final database lock and the generation of

    histopathology raw data by the study pathologist’s signature of the narrative report are not needed

    for reconstruction of the histopathology portion of the study and would not be required to be

    maintained, in accordance with FDA, OECD and Japanese Ministry of Health Labour and Welfare

    guidance (US FDA 1987, OECD guidance no. 16, 2014, and Japanese MHW 1997). In addition to

    the ability to reconstruct the pathology section of the study, additional safeguards are the retention

    of specimens, allowing a third party or FDA to evaluate the slides themselves, in the rare event

    that a concern arises for unethical practice.

    Finally, DruSafe has the consensus opinion that FDA and OECD need to be harmonized in

    practices that drive a quality product but are also straightforward and easy to be consistent across

    the industry. Avoiding unnecessary regulations that are prone to variability in execution will not

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    drive alignment and will likely result in confusion and misinterpretation which could delay our

    main goal of getting new medicines to patients. We would like to take this opportunity to thank

    FDA for considering DruSafe’s opinion and input on this draft guidance.

    SPECIFIC COMMENTS ON PATHOLOGY PEER REVIEW IN NONCLINICAL

    TOXICOLOGY STUDIES: QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS DRAFT GUIDANCE

    FOR INDUSTRY

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    FDA

    Guidance text Comment

    General The intent of comment is

    to provide an overarching

    statement that

    acknowledges that while

    some of the principles

    articulated in the draft

    reflect best practices in

    toxicologic pathology,

    there are major points of

    concern regarding

    Questions 5 and 8 related

    to the degree of

    documentation of

    differences for

    prospective peer review

    which appears to conflict

    with the definition of

    pathology raw data as

    stipulated in the federal

    rule.

    As the introduction of the draft guidance notes,

    documentation of practices during peer review have not been

    clearly defined and vary among testing facilities. While it is

    true that these practices have not been codified in regulatory

    guidance, it is important to note that the toxicologic

    pathology community has carefully considered both

    scientific and compliance aspects of pathology review and

    published documents related to pathology peer review (Fikes

    et al, Toxicologic Pathology 2015; Morton et al, Toxicologic

    Pathology 2010; STP, Toxicologic Pathology 1997; and

    Ward et al, Toxicologic Pathology 1995). These documents

    were prepared by expert panels of pathologists and IQ

    DruSafe suggests that the principles in these publications

    provide a strong scientific basis for both the scientific

    conduct of a peer review as well as appropriate

    documentation practices to allow study reconstruction.

    The current draft guidance references several of these

    publications and we appreciate that in many of the questions

    (Q1-4, and 6-7) portions of these practices have been

    adopted. Our primary concern regards statements in Q 5

    and 7 related to the nature of documentation required in

    prospective peer review of any differences between the

    primary and peer review pathologist. While we appreciate

    the agency’s desire to be assured that primary pathologists

    are not unduly influenced during the peer review process, the

    report practices suggested for prospective peer review in this

    draft guidance will not guarantee undue influence, will add a

    notable and cumbersome addition to the reporting process,

    and will likely result in pathology narratives which may be

    unclear and confusing to non-pathologists. More detailed

    comments are described below.

    General

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    34/35

    53

    55

    57

    Definitions:

    Histopathological

    assessment (lines 34/35)

    Findings (53)

    Interpretations (55)

    Output (57)

    Terminology around the conduct of the histopathology phase

    of a toxicology study and pathology peer review used

    throughout this document (e.g. histopathological assessment,

    findings, interpretations, and output) is confusing. It would

    be helpful to more clearly define these terms in the

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    introduction and use them consistently throughout the

    document.

    Line 36

    (Backgr

    ound)

    ….includes an initial read

    of tissue slides by the

    study pathologist….

    Recommend changing colloquial term “read” to “evaluate”

    to take into account the pathologist’s training, experience

    and understanding of the range of normal tissue

    morphologies, background observations and

    pathophysiology.

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    37-39

    Pathology peer review can

    be particularly useful in

    situations where unique or

    unexpected findings are

    noted or when the peer-

    review pathologist has a

    particular expertise with a

    class of compounds.

    The scope of pathology peer review is broader than

    described here; it is not just for unique or unexpected

    findings and is intended as a quality control measure to

    ensure accuracy of diagnoses, consistency of terminology,

    and appropriate interpretation of pathology findings.

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    43-44

    Pathology peer review can

    be valuable when

    performed during the

    conduct of a GLP study,

    pathology peer review is

    not specifically addressed

    in GLP regulations.

    The expectation of initiating an audit trail on interim

    microscopic data in between the study pathologist and peer

    review pathologist reviews adds a level of complexity and

    confusion to the dataset without added benefit. Given that

    the signed and dated pathology report is considered

    pathology raw data, the added burden to administer a process

    which is not a regulatory requirement may prompt some

    entities to discontinue the peer review process. This would

    weaken the GLP quality management system.

    Line 53

    (A1)

    Pathology peer review is

    the process by which the

    findings of the pathologist

    It is unclear here what ”the findings” means and if the

    expectation is that a peer review pathologist reviews both the

    recorded morphologic diagnoses and the interpretation of

    these within the context of the study. Recommend clarifying

    in this section.

    Line 55 ….or group of

    pathologists (peer-review

    pathologists).

    Add pathology working group as follows:

    “… or group of pathologists (peer review pathologists or a

    pathology working group, PWG).”

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    56-57

    Interpretations of

    histopathological changes

    are made using expert

    scientific and medical

    judgment resulting in

    output that is mostly

    qualitative and therefore

    subjective

    Recommend deleting “and therefore subjective”

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    57-58

    Pathology peer review can

    help to ensure the quality

    and accuracy of

    histopathological

    diagnoses and

    interpretations

    Consistency should be mentioned as well, as this is a key

    element of the pathologist’s work.

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    60-61

    Casual discussions,

    consultations, opinion

    exchange, and mentoring

    Clarify and/or define what is meant by a “formal pathology

    peer review” as compared to “casual discussions,

    consultations, opinion exchange and mentoring” and who

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    among pathologists do not

    constitute formal

    pathology peer review and

    are not covered by this

    guidance document

    may or may not be included in the definitions of pathologists

    in these roles.

    Suggest replacing “casual” with “informal” and delete

    “opinion exchange”. The types of interactions described

    here are critical components of the iterative process of

    arriving at a diagnosis in both the experimental and

    diagnostic pathology arenas. We fully support that both

    these interactions, as well as the exchange of information

    between the primary and peer review pathologist that occurs

    as part of study preparation are not necessary for study

    reconstruction and are out of scope of the guidance.

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    65-67

    (A2)

    The peer-review

    pathologist should have a

    combination of

    appropriate education,

    training, and experience

    to be qualified to render

    opinions on the study

    pathologist’s histological

    descriptions.

    “Sufficient knowledge” may be more appropriate

    terminology than “experience” in the first sentence.

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    67-69

    (A2)

    In addition, the peer-

    review pathologist should

    have experience with the

    route of administration of

    the test article, species

    and strains of animals

    being tested, and duration

    and design of the study

    Appropriate experience to perform the peer review does not

    always require specific expertise in all of these aspects.

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    69-71

    Furthermore, it can also

    be beneficial for the peer-

    review pathologist to have

    knowledge of the

    mechanism of action of

    the test article and

    knowledge of the results

    of test article

    administration at other

    dose levels or in other

    species.

    Change the word “can” to “is” – “Furthermore it is also

    beneficial….”

    Lines

    78-79

    (A3)

    Pathology peer review

    that occurs before

    finalization of the study

    pathologist’s report is

    considered prospective

    peer review

    “Prospective” corresponds to “contemporaneous” I OECD

    Guideline. Recommend harmonization.

    Lines

    80-81

    pathologist should

    complete the analysis of

    all slides and prepare a

    draft pathology report

    Recommend changing “prepare a draft pathology report” to

    “prepare study pathologist interpretation.”

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    before the prospective

    peer review occurs.

    We concur that it is optimal for the draft pathology report to

    be prepared prior to the initiation of the prospective

    pathology peer review; however, as written, the text is not

    sufficiently flexible to accommodate many study designs

    and reporting processes. Specifically, in order to

    accommodate pathologist scheduling and efficient

    evaluation and reporting it is necessary for both the primary

    and peer review process to be divided into multiple phases.

    For example, certain tissues or special techniques may have

    significantly longer processing times and it may be most

    efficient to have all “routine” tissues processed, evaluated,

    and peer reviewed and then the additional tissues evaluated

    when they are available. In addition, for 2-year

    carcinogenicity studies it is most efficient for the study

    pathologist to begin reviewing early sacrifice animals prior

    to the end of the live phase. In these cases, flexibility should

    be allowed to provide for a phase of peer review covering

    the early sacrifice animals. In all of these instances, neither

    the primary or peer review evaluation would be complete

    until all protocol-specified tissues have been reviewed and

    the various phases of peer review would be documented in

    the peer review statement.

    Recommendation: We suggest removing the language

    suggested all tissues must be evaluated prior to the start of

    the peer review and retain the language that the draft

    pathology interpretation should be available prior to peer

    review as follows:

    “When pathology peer review occurs prospectively, the

    study pathologist should complete the analysis of all slides

    and prepare a draft pathology interpretation before the

    prospective peer review occurs. In those cases where the

    primary or peer review occurs in multiple phases, the draft

    pathology interpretation which covers the relevant

    phase/tissues should generally be available during the peer

    review”

    While this practice is generally agreed to, there are cases (eg,

    peer review conducted in several phases and/or early deaths

    occur that require early evaluation and peer review to

    support changes to the study protocol) when the full draft

    interpretation cannot be available at the start of the peer

    review. Recommend including flexibility to take these

    possibilities into consideration.

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    83-86

    Pathology peer review

    that occurs after

    finalization of the

    pathology report is

    considered retrospective

    peer review. When

    Please clarify if retrospective peer review could be applied

    for the peer review conducted many years after fixation

    without original study pathologist, as described in OECD

    guidance No. 16. Please clarify if an independent report for

    peer review that occurred after finalization of final report is

    acceptable.

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    pathology peer review

    occurs retrospectively, the

    study pathologist should

    document any changes to

    the conclusions of the

    study that result from the

    retrospective peer-review

    process in an amendment

    to the final pathology

    report.

    Because question 3 is focused on timing and not

    documentation we suggest the following revisions.

    Pathology peer review that occurs after finalization of the

    pathology report is considered retrospective peer review.

    When pathology peer review occurs retrospectively, the

    study pathologist should document any changes to the

    conclusions of the study that result from the retrospective

    peer-review process in an amendment to the final pathology

    report. Refer to question 5 regarding differences in

    documentation practices for prospective and retrospective

    peer review.

    Lines

    88-89

    (Q4)

    Can pathology peer

    review be conducted at a

    non-GLP‐compliant site for a GLP compliant

    study?

    Consider alignment with OECD 16 and 20.

    Lines

    91-93

    (A4)

    It is possible to conduct a

    pathology peer review

    outside of a GLP-

    compliant site for a GLP-

    compliant study provided

    certain safeguards are in

    place to protect the

    integrity of study data.

    Recommend inclusion of chain of custody documentation

    (condition at arrival, confirmation of arrival to study director

    etc.). Secure retention of the GLP slides at a non-GLP site is

    to be ensured.

    Clarify archiving recommendation for peer reviewer

    documentation

    Remove the word “data” in this section: “….to protect the

    integrity of the study.”

    Recommend replacing the term “safeguards” with

    “appropriate procedures and documentation”

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    93-95

    It is preferable that the

    peer-review pathologist

    perform the review at the

    GLP-compliant testing

    facility after receiving the

    appropriate training on

    GLP principles and

    relevant internal standard

    operating procedures

    Clarification requested: if the peer reviewer has received

    adequate training on GLP and internal SOP, we consider that

    he/she is operating under the umbrella of the test facility and

    is GLP-compliant.

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    95-96

    …however, if the peer

    review is conducted at a

    non-GLP-compliant site,

    that fact should be

    recorded and justified

    within the study protocol

    and final study report

    Recommend removing the word ‘justified” as it implies

    requirements exist for choosing a non-GLP compliant site

    for peer review.

    Please clarify that the justification referred to is ensuring

    appropriate GLP training and documentation practices of the

    peer review pathologist.

    Suggest deleting the sentence specifying the documentation

    practices as this is covered in Q5 and this may create

    confusion. We suggest the following revision:

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    “Regardless of where the peer review is conducted, the

    name, affiliation, and location (i.e., address) of the peer-

    review pathologist study director should follow the

    documentation practices described in Q5 of this

    guidance”

    Lines

    93-97

    It is preferable that the

    peer-review pathologist

    perform the review at the

    GLP-compliant testing

    facility after receiving the

    appropriate training on

    GLP principles and

    relevant internal standard

    operating procedures

    (SOPs); however, if the

    peer review is conducted

    at a non-GLP- compliant

    site, that fact should be

    recorded and justified

    within the study protocol

    and final study report.

    In an environment where global systems enable successful

    deployment of GLP compliant business, a GLP peer review

    can easily be supported by global GLP training and SOP

    systems, but the site as a whole not conduct other GLP

    activities. Recommend this section be revised as follows:

    It is preferable that the peer-review pathologist perform the

    review at a GLP-compliant testing facility after receiving the

    appropriate training on GLP principles and relevant

    internal standard operating procedures (SOPs); however, if

    the peer review is conducted remotely to a GLP- compliant

    site, appropriate measures and documentation must be

    undertaken to ensure that the peer review was GLP

    compliant. If the peer review was conducted non-GLP, that

    fact should be recorded within the study protocol and final

    study report.

    We contend that if the peer reviewer is GLP trained and the

    pathologist is conducting the peer review in a GLP standard

    manner, the GLP accreditation of the facility where it is

    done is not critical.

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    98-100

    Also, the name,

    qualifications (including

    GLP training), affiliations,

    and address of the peer-

    review pathologist should

    be documented in the

    study file

    As an alternative option a centralized process (not study

    related documentation) at the test facility could be

    considered (if defined within a respective SOP)

    For privacy reasons, it may be more appropriate to list only

    the city name or to use the affiliated business address for the

    peer review pathologist. Home addresses can be kept in test

    facility records.

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    102-104

    The portions of the study

    that were not conducted

    under GLP compliance

    should be explicitly stated

    in a study director-signed

    GLP compliance

    statement and included in

    the final study report.

    Clarify if this exception would include any pathology peer

    reviews conducted in a GLP-compliant manner at a non-

    GLP compliant site.

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    111-112

    (A5)

    The process should be

    guided by written

    procedures to establish the

    extent of the review and

    ensure the integrity of the

    study data.

    Since no data is produced during a pathology peer review,

    and all data is safely protected within the data capture

    system under the control of the study pathologist, how could

    study data integrity be affected by peer review, unless FDA

    are redefining the definition of histopathology raw data.

    Suggest removing the word data: “….to ensure the integrity

    of the study.”

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    Lines

    116-119

    A formal pathology peer

    review should be planned,

    conducted, documented,

    and reported in

    accordance with

    established procedures.

    These procedures should

    be documented and

    available to the peer-

    review pathologist before

    initiation of the peer

    review and should be

    clearly described in the

    study protocol or study

    protocol amendments and

    in SOPs pertaining to the

    GLP studies.

    Peer review procedures are typically described in SOPs.

    The peer review statement can be used to document the

    detailed activities of the peer review and to state the overall

    results (i.e., that consensus was reached).

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    118-120

    and

    126-129

    “An SOP and GLP study

    protocol (or protocol

    amendments) should

    include a description of

    the peer-review

    procedure, including

    selected target tissues, the

    dose groups to be

    examined, the number of

    specimens to be examined

    in each group, and

    whether the peer review

    should be conducted in a

    blinded fashion. Relevant

    SOPs can be referenced

    where appropriate.”

    Potential or suspected target tissue selection can occur at the

    time of prospective peer review and having to provide a

    protocol amendment with such detail will result in delays to

    the completion of the process, or a study deviation rather

    than an amendment if the peer review is time-critical. It is

    considered more appropriate to include the target tissues and

    other details of what was evaluated (specimens, animals,

    etc.) in the peer review statement rather than requiring them

    to be decided a priori within the protocol or having to

    provide a protocol amendment/deviation.

    In GLP studies, details from SOPs are not also repeated in

    Study Protocols; this is a long established GLP practice and

    this guidance, as written would inappropriately replicate the

    purpose of an SOP. Since formal Peer Review details

    including target organs, which dose groups, the number of

    specimens examined, and blinding aspects cannot be

    accurately determined until primary pathology read is

    complete, they cannot be included in the protocol. While

    the SOP describes the standard expectations, it is not able to

    provide the specific Peer Review details. The SOP does

    outline which doses, groups and animals should be reviewed,

    but allows the pathologist to use scientific judgement in the

    evaluation. Adding the information from the SOP to the

    protocol is repetitive and more specific target organ detail is

    not known at the time of protocol generation. The scope of

    the peer review often includes additional material not

    foreseen ahead of time. As written, this will require

    generating abundant protocol amendments which are not the

    appropriate means of documenting prior events. The detailed

    information is included in the peer review memo, where

    information is better explained in context of the study.

    Blinding is also specifically mentioned in the draft guidance

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    as requiring prior documentation in the SOP, Protocol or

    Protocol Amendments. Blinding is not routinely done

    during peer reviews. Toxicologic pathology is not conducted

    blindly in practice in GLP toxicity studies except in rare

    circumstances, as described in multiple publications (Rouse

    et al., 2015; Neef et al., 2012; Holland et al., 2011).

    Blind examination is usually triggered by perceived subtle

    differences between control and treated animals; it is an

    unbiased way to confirm that a suspected target organ is

    indeed a target organ.

    Therefore, the recommendation would be to reword the

    sentence, and state: "slide review during the peer review

    process may include blind examinations”

    Change “number of specimens to be examined in each

    group” to “the number of animals and/or tissues examined”.

    Counting and documenting how many slides/specimens

    were evaluated is not value-added. It is more meaningful to

    document which animals and tissues were evaluated.

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    121-123

    (A5)

    Lines

    177-178

    (A7)

    The peer-review

    pathologist should

    generate a signed and

    dated peer-review

    statement (document,

    report, memorandum, or

    certificate) for inclusion

    in the permanent study

    files and the study report.

    … the signed peer-review

    statement should be

    included as an appendix

    to the final study report

    and should also be

    included as part of the

    study file (see Q1).

    This seems duplicitous and should not be required within the

    study report since documentation of data verification and

    review processes are not typically included in study reports.

    However, it should be retained in the study file for a

    reviewer. The study report should confirm that a peer review

    was conducted and that there was alignment between

    pathologists. GLP study documents maintained in the study

    file with similar or greater impact include Note to File,

    Protocol Deviations, SOP Deviations, and raw data. The

    value of publishing the peer review statement within the

    report is not evident in comparison to these other documents.

    Of note, the need to include the peer review statement in the

    final study report is not required in OECD guideline.

    Line

    127

    …peer-review procedure,

    including selected target

    tissues, the dose groups to

    be examined, th

    “selected target tissues” should read “selection of tissues for

    peer review” as target tissues cannot be selected.

    Line

    129

    “Relevant SOPs can be

    referenced when

    appropriate”

    Suggest deleting line 129 reference to SOPs. Listing of all

    SOPs related to a study is not standard practice in other areas

    so it is not clear why this option would be provided for peer

    review. SOPs are available for inspection as part of the audit

    process.

    Line

    135

    When, where, and under

    what conditions (i.e.,

    GLP- or non-GLP-

    compliant) the peer

    review was conducted

    Suggested clarification, ‘when, where, and whether the peer-

    review was conducted as GLP-compliant or not.’

    Indication of the GLP-status is most appropriate in the

    compliance exception statement of the overall report and it is

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    not clear that this is needed in the actual peer review

    certificate. If retained, instead of indicating “and under what

    conditions”, revise to “and indicate the GLP-compliance

    status of the peer review location”.

    Lines

    140-141

    A statement on whether

    the terminology and

    findings used in the

    pathology report were

    agreed upon by both the

    study and peer-review

    pathologist

    Does this mean that the peer review statement needs to

    confirm agreement on all and any findings reported,

    including terminology used for spontaneous findings known

    as background changes? Recommend deletion of this

    sentence

    Lines

    148-156

    If the peer-review

    pathologist concurs with

    the study pathologist’s

    diagnoses and

    interpretations, the peer-

    review statement might

    not include a

    comprehensive analysis of

    the outcome of the peer

    review. Under these

    conditions, a statement

    that a peer review was

    conducted and that the

    final pathology report

    reflects the consensus

    opinions of the study

    pathologist and peer-

    review pathologist would

    suffice. (lines 148-152)

    Any changes to the

    overall study

    interpretations by the

    study pathologist because

    of a prospective peer-

    review process should be

    documented in the peer-

    review statement and

    discussed in the final

    pathology report, as

    applicable. (lines 154-

    156)

    If consensus is reached during the peer review process,

    we agree with recommendations put forth in lines 148-

    152 and recommend deletion of lines 154-156. We do not

    agree that documentation of changes occurring prior to

    consensus is appropriate. We recommend that changes

    to diagnosis and terminology associated with changes to

    overall study interpretation do not need to be detailed in

    the peer review statement. More context provided below.

    In accordance with the 1987 FDA GLP Final Rule (US FDA

    1987), only the finalized pathology report represents raw

    data. For this reason, the study pathologist’s “original

    interpretation” of the raw data is the point of creation of the

    microscopic pathology raw data and its integrated

    interpretation with other study-related data indicative of the

    overall survival and health of the animals such as

    macroscopic necropsy observations, organ weight

    differences, and in-life observations such as clinical signs,

    effects on body weight and food consumption, and clinical

    laboratory tests (i.e., hematology, clinical chemistry,

    coagulation tests, urinalysis and urine chemistry).

    Additionally, the U.S. EPA and the U.S. FDA consider that

    interim notes are not essential for the reconstruction and

    evaluation of the pathology report because of the availability

    of the tissue sections from which reconstruction could be

    accomplished if necessary. Prior to finalization of the

    pathology report, the study pathologist can therefore modify

    pathology data without documentation until finalization.

    After the finalization of the study report which should

    include the locking of the pathology data capturing system,

    any modification of the pathology data would result in the

    production of an audit trail.

    The peer review pathologist provides an additional set of

    eyes, as a means of promoting consensus between

    independent observers. This approach has been the mainstay

    of Peer Review for decades to help reduce individual

    observer bias. The Peer Review of available study materials,

    including in-life results, clinical pathology findings, organ

    weights, and toxicokinetic exposure data, along with

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    preliminary findings from the study pathologist, enhances

    the thorough interpretation of data. Language in the FDA

    draft guidance recommending documenting all discussions

    will encourage greater discord than what actually occurs in

    pathology peer review practice-- which is consultative,

    collegial and constructive. The inclusion of peer review

    suggestions or notes into the file indicates that there is raw

    data generated prior to the signing of the pathology report

    and is thus in opposition to the Final Rule. Adding an audit

    trail to preliminary findings is an unnecessary exercise

    imposed on the data generation process. Creating this type

    of audit trail, or retention of original draft interpretations are

    unnecessary forms of documentation which themselves open

    an environment of adversarial approach, which is entirely

    contrary to the practice and purpose of peer review.

    Comparing preliminary versions to final versions will also

    create an assessment of competency, and this environment

    will build defensive postures that are not conducive to

    consultation, consensus, and collegiality. In practice,

    differences between pathologists that are unresolvable are

    quite rare. It is not in any Sponsor’s best interest of patient

    safety to mischaracterize nonclinical hazard. Consequently,

    the new proposed forms of documentations in this draft

    guideline impose a hurdle and not a value to the

    pharmaceutical drug development process while offering no

    assurance of patient safeguards.

    As written, it will be open to interpretation to determine

    which “changes to the overall study interpretations by the

    study pathologist” are in scope regarding what

    communication to document. This could be viewed as a new

    target organ or change to an effect level or recovery

    interpretation, or even a slight change to severity score, or all

    of the above. Ambiguous language in regulation creates

    confusion, promotes disparate interpretations in the quality

    assurance community, and delivers burdensome processes

    that do not avert any real risk. Much of these discussions

    have historically been handled as professional

    communications without further disclosure or retention, and

    while the aim is to diminish undue influence, logistically it

    will be difficult and resource intensive to ensure every

    change to a study table is documented above just an audit

    trail based on locked data. The peer review is an iterative

    process that requires input from both parties to reach a

    scientific consensus, and thus including all communications

    would be voluminous in many cases.

    We recommend this not be adopted as written nor

    documented by the peer review pathologist. However, any

    documentation performed should be within the study

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    pathologist responsibility since they hold ultimate authority

    and responsibility over the raw data (final signed report)

    There is also confusion if the level of detail being requested

    includes specific recorded observations or interpretation of

    those observations. For example, this may apply when only

    changes to severity grades and/or terminology used to record

    an observation across the board without any impact on

    criteria or “diagnosis”, or only if nothing is changed at all.

    Lines

    169 –

    170

    (A6)

    The peer review statement

    can be signed by the peer

    review pathologist before

    or after the finalization of

    the pathology report.

    No changes to suggest. We agree and appreciate the agency

    clarifying this point. We are aware of audits which have

    appeared to suggest a requirement for peer review statement

    timing which is not consistent with the GLPs and which can,

    in some reporting systems, created undue burden on the

    reporting process and unnecessary report delays. This

    section appropriately affirms that the pathology report is the

    sole responsibility of the study pathologist and as such the

    timing of the signing of the peer review statement is not

    relevant to study reconstruction.

    The statement should clearly indicate what was part of the

    peer review process; if it is signed prior to the finalization of

    the pathology report, it should state that the diagnoses and

    interpretation were reviewed.

    Lines

    180-181

    (Q8)

    How can the Agency be

    assured that the study

    pathologist’s interpretive

    findings are not unduly

    influenced during the

    pathology peer-review

    process?

    We understand that the agency’s desire is to minimize the

    potential for undue influence on the primary pathologist;

    however, several factors should be considered:

    If implemented as suggested in the current draft guidance, it will still not be possible for an

    independent reviewer, whether pathologist or non-

    pathologist, to determine if the changes were a

    legitimate change based on a more accurate

    diagnosis/interpretation or if the change was brought

    about due to undue influence of either a peer

    reviewer or a report reviewer. Only a third

    inspection of the microscopic slides by a pathologist,

    or panel of pathologists, will allow this.

    Potential unintended implications of the current guidance include inconsistency with the definition of

    raw data in the regulations and multiple

    datasets/interpretations resulting in confusion around

    the final dataset and decreasing confidence in

    providing a well-defined, high-quality consensus

    data set.

    The current set of peer review practices which adhere to the

    OECD guidance on pathology peer review have served the

    profession well. We are not aware of any examples where

    fraud has been demonstrated in the conduct of pathology

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    peer review or where pathology peer review issues have led

    to implications for patient safety. As such, we urge caution

    in implementing cumbersome documentation practices that

    will detract from the overall quality of the study report and

    still not achieve the stated goal of limited undue influence

    during pathology evaluations.

    Lines

    189-192

    (A8)

    Therefore, the testing

    facility management

    should implement

    appropriate measures to

    ensure independence of

    the study pathologist and

    enforce procedures to

    track all changes to a

    study pathologist’s

    interpretations, including

    changes that might results

    from a pathology peer

    review. Such procedures

    can include the

    implementation of an

    audit trail.

    Remove reference to “audit trail” or specify that this refers

    to retrospective peer reviews.

    For prospective peer reviews, our position is that this is not

    necessary as the interpretation is in draft form and is being

    refined by casual consultations and peer review. Tracking all

    changes is unnecessary, will result in unnecessary

    documentation burden, and will result in unnecessarily

    complex data tables.

    This statement should pertain to retrospective peer review

    activities. A retrospective peer review occurring after the

    anatomic pathology report has been finalized has the

    potential to alter histopathology raw data and interpretations

    derived from those data. Under those conditions,

    implementation of procedures to document all changes such

    as implementation of an audit trail is appropriate and

    consistent with GLP requirements.

    However, in the conduct of a prospective or

    contemporaneous peer review, the study pathologist’s

    “original interpretation” of the raw data is the point of

    creation of the microscopic pathology raw data and its

    integrated interpretation with other study-related data, which

    per the 1987 FDA GLP Final Rule (US FDA 1987) is the

    point at which the pathology report is signed and finalized.

    There are no changes to overall study interpretations to be

    discussed or documented through procedures such as an

    audit trail.

    It should be remembered that the goal of pathology peer

    review is to assist the study pathologist with the creation of

    the best, most accurate set of histopathology data and

    interpretations of those data to describe the toxicity of the

    test article in the test system under the conditions of the

    nonclinical study. The study pathologist has the sole

    responsibility for the final histopathology diagnoses and

    final interpretation of data as indicated by his or her

    signature on the final anatomic pathology narrative report.

    The only necessary record of that activity is a short

    document indicating what was evaluated by the peer review

    pathologist in order to come to that consensus opinion.

    Generation of an audit trail as part of a prospective peer

    review prior to the generation of raw data creates the

    appearance of a second primary evaluation of the

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    microscope slides with a subsequent reconciliation step

    between multiple sets of preliminary diagnoses that are not

    raw data according to the 1987 FDA GLP Final Rule.

    Documentation of these interim steps prior to the generation

    of histopathology raw data is of little value for the purpose

    of producing the most accurate description and interpretation

    of the effects of the test article under the conditions of the

    study.

    The essential processes to document and correspondences to

    retain as part of a prospective peer review are the

    communications and documentation that reflect the process,

    plan and expectations linked to the specimens used for peer

    review—the microscope slides. However, the retention of

    interim information, working notes, communications to

    reconcile differences of opinions or draft versions of

    narrative reports from prospective, contemporaneous peer

    reviews is not essential for the reconstruction and evaluation

    of the pathology section of the final study report, and do not

    require an audit trail or retention after the pathology report is

    finalized (Morton et al, 2010; US FDA 1987).

    The initiation of an audit trail on interim data poses a burden

    to both study conduct and quality assurance units to manage

    this information for data which is not considered final, as

    identified in the 1987 GLP Final Rule. Highly recommend

    the expectation of audit trail initiation between study and

    peer review pathologist analysis be removed from the

    document

    Lines

    193-199

    The Agency

    acknowledges that

    pathology peer review is

    an iterative process and

    the draft pathology report

    is subject to change until

    the report is signed and

    dated by the study

    pathologist. The process

    of conducting pathology

    peer review involves

    communication between

    the study pathologist,

    peer-review pathologist,

    sponsor, testing facility

    management, study

    director(s), sponsor-

    delegated representative,

    and test site management

    (if applicable). Records of

    communications pertinent

    The study pathologist and peer review pathologist often have

    informal discussions and communications regarding findings

    and study interpretation. These informal communications

    need not be retained because they are not raw data. Such

    extensive documentation requirements may reduce and/or

    interfere with the scientific interactions between the study

    pathologist and peer review pathologist. Along with the Peer

    Review Statement, the final pathology report (containing

    final conclusions) is the only documentation necessary to

    reconstruct this phase of a study. Specimens (wet tissues,

    tissue blocks, tissue slides) are retained and can contribute to

    reconstruction of the study, if necessary.

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    to the process of slide

    evaluation and meeting

    summaries (e.g., meeting

    minutes) relevant to the

    pathology peer review

    should be retained in the

    study file.

    Lines

    198-200

    Records of

    communications pertinent

    to the process of slide

    evaluation and meeting

    summaries (e.g., meeting

    minutes) relevant to the

    pathology peer review

    should be retained in the

    study file.

    Some clarity as to the level of detail expected and what the

    documentation should include would be helpful. We would

    hope that FDA would reflect the position of Fikes et all,

    2015 in their proposed interpretation of the OECD 16.

    Section 2.5. Difference of interpretation could result in wide

    variability in communication retention eg clinical pathology

    data discussion or mode of action of the test article as it

    pertains to the findings.

    Recommend change “should” to “can be”. If changes are

    appropriately recorded and peer review statement includes

    the overall result of the process, retention of evaluation and

    meeting summary will not be needed.

    The specific study files for retention of such records should

    be clarified (i.e. the ones of the primary pathologist, peer

    review pathologist or the test facility)

    Lines

    204-206

    To best ensure

    transparency, documents

    (e.g.,

    worksheets, electronic

    files) that record peer-

    review events and

    changes to the study

    pathologist’s findings

    should be retained in the

    study records.

    The iterative process of communication between the primary

    pathologist and peer review pathologist is made difficult

    when documentation and justification is required along the

    way. The requirement to save pathologist worksheets, draft

    reports, preliminary diagnoses and study pathologists notes

    is not consistent with current best practices as described in

    Morton et.al, 2010 nor is it consistent with retention of pre-

    “raw data” records elsewhere in GLP regulations.

    The critical outcome of anatomic pathology evaluation and

    peer review of nonclinical studies is to achieve the best,

    most accurate set of tables of diagnoses, and to interpret

    these findings to accurately describe the toxicity of the test

    article in the test species as part of hazard identification and

    risk assessment. This requires achieving the best possible

    scientific understanding of the data. It is not uncommon for

    the study pathologist to be a generalist in toxicologic

    pathology employed by a contract research organization,

    with limited to no prior specific knowledge, experience or

    specialized in the novel biological mechanism of action or

    specific chemical/biological classes of novel therapeutic

    agents. This may mean that the most relevant expertise to

    leverage in support of the study pathologist’s activities

    resides with peer review pathologists selected or employed

    by the Sponsor. The only necessary record of prospective

    peer review prior to raw data generation is a short document

    describing the materials evaluated by the peer review

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    pathologist and a statement of consensus with the study

    pathologist’s diagnoses and interpretations as provided in the

    final signed narrative report. Locking the database of interim

    histopathology findings before the start of pathology peer

    review does not alleviate the subjective nature of a

    collaborative process. Instead, it creates the appearance of a

    second primary-read of the microscope slides that may

    require a subsequent reconciliation step of potentially

    multiple data sets that are not considered raw data according

    to the 1987 FDA GLP Final Rule. Only the final tables

    reflect the “correct” diagnosis—by consensus agreement--at

    the time raw data is generated upon report signature by the

    study pathologist. It serves no purpose of record-keeping for

    the reconstruction of the study to document multiple

    preliminary diagnoses. Anatomic pathology evaluation of

    nonclinical studies remains a subjective, iterative scientific

    process, and is strengthened by aligned industry

    recommendations for pathology peer review (Morton et.al,

    2010; Fikes et al, 2015). The goal of anatomic pathology

    evaluation and prospective peer review of nonclinical studies

    is to achieve the best, most accurate set of tables of

    diagnoses, and to interpret these findings to accurately

    describe the toxicity of the test article in the test species as

    part of hazard identification and risk assessment. That is not

    accomplished by locking databases before raw data is

    generated and the pathology report is signed or retaining

    working notes related to parallel sets of incorrect findings.

    The relevant information regarding peer review events

    should be captured in the peer review statement and as such,

    retaining interim notes in the study file does not add

    transparency to the process, but merely adds bulk to the

    study files.

    Lines

    206-208

    One option to ensure

    transparency is to fix or

    lock the database of

    pathology findings before

    the start of the peer-

    review process to ensure

    that changes to the

    pathology findings will be

    recorded in an audit trail.

    This recommendation is in conflict with the US FDA’s

    definition of pathology raw data as the final signed

    pathology report. While an audit trail is critical for

    recording changes to raw data it is labor intensive and

    impedes iterative processes like pathology assessment

    with prospective peer review.

    While this is offered as “one option” it would be helpful if

    the guidance would propose additional options for ensuring

    transparency.

    We would prefer the removal of any reference to using an

    audit trail as a method to record changes made by a

    pathologist prior to the final signed report (i.e. the currently

    defined presence of raw data).

    Lines

    210-212

    If the draft pathology

    report is shared with the

    Recommend removing ‘The peer-review statement should

    clearly identify changes resulting from the peer-review

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    peer-review pathologist,

    this should be reflected in

    the peer-review statement.

    Also, the peer-review

    statement should clearly

    identify changes resulting

    from the peer-review

    process that affect the

    study pathologist’s

    interpretations

    process that affect the study pathologist’s interpretations."

    and replace this with: "The peer review statement needs to

    include a statement on agreement and/or disagreement

    between study pathologist and peer reviewer."

    As per the response to Q5, line 154-156, this requires

    duplication of record-keeping and puts the emphasis

    (inappropriately) on the peer review pathologist to keep

    records of changes made by the study pathologist. It is not

    the peer review pathologist which is directly capable of

    making any changes to the observations and/or

    interpretation, and as such, the peer review pathologist

    should not be responsible for recording what changes are

    made. It is the responsibility of the study pathologist to make

    any changes with full accountability for them.

    The peer review statement should not have to include

    detailed changes if both pathologists are in agreement at the

    time of pathology report finalization when it becomes raw

    data. Line 140-141 indicates that the peer review memo will

    include a statement that the terminology and conclusions

    were agreed upon. If everything is agreed upon, then it

    seems unnecessary to record all the iterations of the data that

    lead up to this point?

    Lines

    221-222

    (A9)

    “The difference in

    interpretation should be

    documented by the peer-

    review pathologist before

    engaging in a dialogue to

    resolve the interpretative

    differences.”

    This new requirement is not suited to the collegial and

    consultative process that comprise peer review, and it further

    creates undue burden and documentation which adds no

    value. Quite often, the difference in interpretation is worked

    out very quickly once a discussion takes place. These

    discussions between the peer review pathologist and study

    pathologist are often occurring in real time, with the peer

    review pathologist asking questions or raising concerns

    about slides he/she has just examined. Proposing this

    regimented documentation for these questions and

    interactions prior to receiving clarification from the study

    pathologist or while discussing differences in opinion that

    rest on the experience of one over another creates an

    unnecessary step in the peer review process and like the

    suggestion in Q5 regarding documenting study notes, runs

    counter to other FDA guidance. If peer reviewing

    pathologist’s opinions prior to peer review are recorded or

    documented, it is treating them as raw data, which they are

    not. Any notations or questions on terminology, severity

    grade, missed findings, or findings considered consistent

    with normal background made by the peer review

    pathologist are considered working notes and not retained,

    aligned with OECD guidelines and STP best practices for

    peer review. Just as the study pathologist notes, they are not

    required to be recorded or included in the study file or

    documented in the final report. It is critical that this practice

    of not retaining working notes is consistent with industry

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    best practices and OECD peer review guidelines. FDA and

    OECD should be harmonized to prevent confusion,

    misinterpretation, and potentially delay bringing new

    medicines to patients that accompany unnecessary

    regulation.

    Please clarify what is meant by the statement “differences in

    interpretation should be documented …… before engaging

    in a dialogue….” and what the expectation is as to how and

    where this would be documented.

    Lines

    222-225

    If no resolution can be

    reached, the study

    pathologist and peer-

    review pathologist should

    carefully follow a

    transparent and unbiased

    process that is clearly

    described in the testing

    facility’s SOPs for

    resolving interpretative

    differences during

    pathology peer review.

    Suggest changing to: “….follow a transparent and unbiased

    process for resolving interpretative differences during

    pathology peer review that is clearly described in the SOP’s

    under which the peer review is performed.”

    Lines

    227-230

    Depending upon the

    directives of the SOPs,

    consensus may be

    achieved through

    consultation with

    additional experienced

    pathologists. Records of

    communications pertinent

    to the process of slide

    evaluation and records of

    meeting summaries (e.g.,

    meeting minutes) relevant

    to the pathology peer

    review should be retained

    in the study file.

    The essential correspondence to retain as part of peer review

    activities are communications that reflect the process, plans

    and expectations directly linked to the slides used in peer

    review (Fikes et al, 2015). Examples include

    correspondence on the process involved in the selection of

    slides for review, the selection of animals for full slide

    review, and the selection of potential target tissues for

    review in remaining animals. However, communications

    regarding preliminary pathology observations prior to final

    database lock and the generation of histopathology raw data

    by the study pathologist’s signature of the narrative report

    are not needed for reconstruction of the histopathology

    portion of the study and would not be required to be

    maintained, in accordance with FDA, OECD and Japanese

    Ministry of Health Labour and Welfare guidance (US FDA

    1987, OECD guidance no. 16, 2014, and Japanese MHW

    1997).

    We are not aware of a single facility that takes minutes of

    peer review or that create summaries of discussions to

    include in either the peer review memo or final reports or

    study files. This is burdensome, cumbersome, and doesn’t

    aid the interpretation of a study. Such discussions constitute

    nothing more than “working notes” as described in OECD

    Peer Review Guidelines and the official STP/ESTP/

    BSTP/JSTP response (Fikes et al., 2015), and working notes

    are not retained after the Peer Review.

    When additional consultations with experienced pathologists

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    1 Final rule, “Good Laboratory Practice Regulations,” September 4, 1987 (52 FR 33768).

    occur, clarification of the expectations of the documentation

    process and retention of such documentation would be

    beneficial.