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Form 1: English Guided Writing.Your school had celebrated National Day recently. Write a letter to your friend to tell him about the National Days Celebration in your school.

Format:54, Jalan Bintang,11900, Gelugor,Pulau Pinang9th August 2010

Introduction:- keep my fingers crossed- in hale and hearty condition-- Recently- celebrated- grand manner-- truly- unforgettable- Dear Lucy:How are you? I keep ...................................................... you are in ...................................................................Recently, my school celebrated ...................................................................It was truly an ...................................................................... Let me share .............................................................................

1st paragraph:- started early- gathered-- first event- march past event-- was accompanied- school band.- a number of- bodies- march-- looked smart- marched- orderly manner- The celebrations .......................................................................... when our students ........................................................... for the

preparations. The first event .................................................................. The march past .......................................................................... Students from ........................................................................ in the march. All of them ..................................................................... while they marched in .........................................................................in front of the ............................................................

2nd paragraph:- After- raising- Jalur Gemilang-- steadily raised- - national anthem- followed-- sang a wide range of- songs-- hall- full of melodious tune-- on cloud nine- - a speech- principal-- advised- loyal- After the march past event, the next event was the raising ........................................................ The national flag was ......................................by our ............................................ The national anthem ............................................................ We even sang ................................................................ The hall was full of ......................................... We were indeed ........................................ while the songs .......................................... After that, a ............................................................................. He advised .................................................................................

3rd paragraph:- potpourri- cultural shows- in conjunction- - First- dance troupe- caught the lime light of the day-- wore extremely attractive- danced gracefully-- put on thick make up- eye-catching costumes-- captivating event- poem recital- - stole the show- country- ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4th paragraph:- superb event- rhythmic gymnastic performance-- gave big applause- ended-- were on top of the world-- played,- ribbons and hoopes- .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Ending:- In conclusion- red letter day-- cultivate practice- spirit-- stop here-- How was-?- look forward to hearing- .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Yours sincerely,____________