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    Faces in the Mirror: Raymond Carver and the Intricacies of LookingAuthor(s): Christof Decker

    Source: Amerikastudien / American Studies, Vol. 49, No. 1, Neorealism – Between Innovationand Continuation (2004), pp. 35-49Published by: Universitätsverlag WINTER GmbhStable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/41157910Accessed: 28-07-2015 18:17 UTC

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    Faces

    in

    the Mirror:

    Raymond

    Carver nd the ntricacies f

    Looking

    Christof

    Decker

    ABSTRACT

    It hasrepeatedlyeenpointed ut thatneo-realistexts re characterizedy particularisual

    quality,

    ot

    only

    with

    egard

    o audiovisual evices eatured

    hematically

    ut lso

    concerning

    heir

    literarytyle,

    which t some

    point

    ven came to be called

    TV

    Fiction. his

    essay attempts

    o

    show

    hat,

    n

    order o

    appreciate

    hevisual

    uality

    f

    neo-realism,

    e

    should hift ur attention

    from he

    predominance

    f he

    mage

    o a more

    omplex

    nderstanding

    f

    visuality.rawing

    n the

    concept

    f he

    gaze, suggest

    hatwe

    haveto examine

    losely

    ow he ct of

    ooking

    s ntroduced

    as thecrucial

    way

    of

    nterrelatingmage

    nd

    subject,

    nd,

    more

    pecifically,

    ow t contributeso

    the

    mergence

    f

    newforms f

    elf-knowledge.y

    case

    in

    point

    will

    be

    Raymond

    arver's

    mini-

    mal

    realism,

    hich s characterized

    y

    disjunction

    etween oice nd

    eye,

    peaking

    nd

    ooking.

    This

    disjunction

    as been inkedwith henotion

    f

    postmodern epthlessness,

    et

    would

    rgue

    that t relates ess

    to

    epistemological

    oubt han o the dea of a crisis fcommunication.

    arking

    backto Americanmodernism,he ensuousness fthematerial orld s contrasted ith herealm

    of

    peech

    n

    order o stress hat

    isual nd

    haptic

    orms f contact an

    compensate

    or he

    funda-

    mental

    nadequacy

    f

    poken anguage.

    hreedifferent

    ypes

    f

    ooking-

    the

    narcissistic,

    elevisu-

    al,

    and cinematic

    aze-

    will

    be discussed

    o elaborate

    uestions

    fvisualization

    n

    neo-realism.

    Whenminimal ealism ame

    to be

    regarded

    s a

    major iterary

    orce

    n

    the

    1980s,

    wo

    spects

    f

    particular

    nterest

    erenoticedwhich

    ave

    ince

    haped

    he-

    oretical ebates. n the ne

    hand,

    ritics

    ere

    mpressed

    y

    he

    predominance

    f

    ordinary,

    omestic

    ubjects;

    n the

    other,

    hey

    marvelledt the

    aggressive

    ucid-

    ity f he iterarytyledvocated ywritersuch sRaymond arver,

    nn

    Beat-

    tie,

    Mary

    Robison,

    r TobiasWolff.ncontrasto the

    xpansiveness

    f

    postmod-

    ern iteratureminimalism

    ppeared

    o be

    likea

    microchip,ighly

    unctional,

    finely

    rafted,

    nd

    polished

    o

    precision

    Herzinger

    4).

    Numerous

    uggestions

    weremade s to what his

    ew

    ype

    ffictionhould e

    called,

    anging

    rom

    irty

    Realism o K-Mart

    ealism,

    et

    most riticseemed o

    agree

    hat n

    mportant

    l-

    ementwasa newform f

    ccessibilityrawing

    n

    the

    epresentationalromises

    f

    realistic

    riting.

    s Kim

    Herzinger

    ummed

    t

    up:

    'Minimalist'tories

    enerally

    position

    hereader

    irectly

    cross he

    able,

    t

    eye

    evel,

    where ommunication

    s

    most

    ikely 15).

    The notion feye evel ommunicationefers o the implicityfdesign reva-

    lent

    n

    minimalist

    riting

    nd welcomed s a new readerorientation

    r 'user

    friendliness.'et talso alludes o the

    mportance

    fnon-verbal

    orms fcommu-

    nication rucial

    n

    stories

    acking

    laborate

    assages

    f direct

    peech.

    n

    this e-

    1

    On the

    oncept

    f

    minimalism,

    f.Barth nd Facknitz

    Menace

    of

    Minimalism ).

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    36 Christof

    ecker

    spect,

    aymond

    arver

    as come o be

    regarded

    s one of he

    most

    mportant

    u-

    thors-though,s I will rgue, requentlyisapprehended.2incethe ate 1970s

    the

    visual

    uality

    f his tories nd

    iterarytyle

    as

    persistently

    een related o

    painting.

    hetherriticsaw

    him s a

    minimalist,

    eo-realist,

    r

    postmodern

    rit-

    er,

    hey sually

    alledhis

    ean,

    unadorned

    tyle

    photo-realistic

    cf.

    tull,

    altz-

    man, luck,

    nd

    Nesset).

    This

    nalogy

    with

    hoto-

    r

    hyper-realism

    rew

    ut of

    the sense that ertain

    hemes nd moods

    prevalent

    n

    photo-realisticaintings

    could lso

    be discerned

    n

    Carver's

    writings.

    oth rt

    forms

    eveloped

    t

    roughly

    the ame

    historical

    oment,

    n the

    ate

    1960s,

    nd were een

    as related esthetic

    movements

    n American ulture.

    Yet even

    hough

    otions f

    theme nd mood

    eemed o

    point

    o

    similar

    ercep-

    tions fAmericanociety, anyriticsailed onotice hat nterms f tyle,arver

    and

    the

    photo-realists

    dvocated

    adically

    ifferent

    epresentationaltrategies.

    While

    ainters

    uch

    s Robert

    echtle,

    ichard

    stes,

    r

    Ralph

    Goings

    trove or

    a

    representation

    f

    reality mulating

    hevisual

    ichness

    f

    photography,

    arver's

    highly

    ondensed tories

    ere,

    n the

    ontrary,

    haracterized

    y ompression

    nd

    reduction.3

    aradoxically,literary

    tyle,

    hich ame

    to be known s

    minimalism,

    was

    routinely

    ssociated

    with isual

    mages

    enowned or heir

    inely rought

    e-

    tails nd

    high

    ensity,

    . e. their bundance

    fvisual nformation.ritics

    ailed o

    see thatCarver's

    mages

    f uburbia ere

    highlytylized

    nd

    compressed

    ental

    images

    elated

    o notions f n alienated

    elf.

    One consequence fthe inkagewas thatCarver'swritingouldbe subsumed

    under hebanner

    f

    postmodernism.

    ven

    though

    e

    seemed

    o returno certain

    elements f

    realism,

    o the

    rgument

    ent,

    e

    shared he

    photo-realists'

    redilec-

    tion or urface tructures

    nd their oncomitant

    epthlessness.

    s MichaelTrus-

    sler

    uts

    t: Thereader

    erceives

    he urface

    event, escription),

    ut

    s

    ncapable

    of

    penetrating

    he

    surface o discover he

    occluded

    meaning

    r structurehat

    grants

    he urface

    ts

    texture,

    ts

    shape

    27-28).

    A

    closer

    ook at his stories e-

    veals,

    however,

    hat

    Carver

    id not

    attempt

    o

    reproduce

    he

    minutiae f visual

    surface tructures

    nd

    consequently

    as

    not o be confused

    ith he

    fleeting

    o-

    ments f

    pop-art'snapshot aintings.ather,

    is

    representation

    f

    reality

    was

    highly

    electivend reductive. e followed n aestheticf

    abstraction,

    rowing

    out

    of,

    ut lso

    transforming

    he

    xperience

    f

    everyday

    ife.

    To be

    sure,

    arver's tories o

    not

    ignifysimple

    eturno traditionalorms

    f

    realism

    gnorant

    f

    postmodern

    esthetic

    trategies.

    et

    would

    rgue

    hat eferenc-

    es

    tothe

    photo-realistic

    uality

    f

    his

    writing

    ave bscured

    ow nd

    why uestions

    of visualization

    re at

    thecenter f his neo-realist

    esthetic.

    requently,

    arver's

    writing

    vokes

    hevisual

    uality

    f

    painting,

    ut

    t s crucial o realize

    hat his s

    achieved

    y

    ompeting

    orms f

    visual

    xploration

    nd

    representation.

    n

    the ne

    hand,

    is tories

    re

    distinguishedy

    various

    orms f

    ooking,

    enerating

    onflict-

    inggazes

    nd

    types

    fvisualization.n

    theother

    and, hey

    ntroduce

    he heme

    ofvisualizationot s an end n tself ut s

    part

    f desire o communicate.ince

    Carver's

    haracters

    xperience

    erbal ommunication

    s

    prone

    o failurend

    frus-

    2

    On Carver's

    blossoming eputation,

    f. cott.

    3

    On Carver's

    tyle,

    f.

    Campbell,

    Nesset,

    nd Facknitz

    Menace

    of

    Minimalism ).

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    Faces

    n

    theMirror 37

    tration,

    on-verbalorms

    erve s insufficient

    et enuine ttempts

    o

    compensate

    for his ack.4 he essCarver'sharactersalk, hemore hey bserve. hus,what

    to some ritics

    ppeared

    o be a variant f

    postmodernepthlessness

    s

    in fact n

    inability

    o communicate.

    his

    nability

    o

    express

    hemselves

    dequately

    s not

    only major

    auseof he haracters'

    uffering,

    t lso

    represents

    n

    mportant

    le-

    ment

    f

    Carver's

    tyle.

    ack

    and

    nsufficiency

    ust e answered

    y

    a search or

    newmeans

    f

    xpression,

    ndthis

    earch

    hapes

    he haracters's well

    s the ead-

    er's

    activity.

    n contrasto

    the

    photo-realists'

    igh-densityaintings,

    arver

    re-

    sents ketches

    nneedof

    upplementation.

    n order obe

    understood,

    hey

    must e

    completed y sympathetic

    ialogicalmagination.5

    Looking

    as an Act

    of Transformation

    The

    inadequacy

    f

    spoken

    anguage

    s a recurrent

    heme

    n

    Carver's

    tories.

    Characters

    roping

    or

    words,

    ot

    knowing

    hat o

    say,

    r

    being

    nable o

    express

    themselvesre a common

    eature f

    hisblue-collar

    ettings

    nd

    serve s a

    major

    trope

    or he

    arger

    risis

    fverbal ommunication.

    case

    n

    point

    s thenarrator

    of Cathedral.

    esitant bout

    a blindman

    who comesto visithis

    house,

    he is

    stunned o hear

    him

    ay

    hat,

    s an owner

    ftwo elevision

    ets,

    e

    prefers

    o turn

    on his olor et:

    I didn't now

    what o

    say

    o that. had

    absolutely othing

    o

    sayto that.No

    opinion

    205). ronically,

    s the

    tory roceeds,

    atching

    elevisiono-

    gether

    ill

    help

    both,

    he

    blindman nd

    the

    narrator,

    o come o a

    new evel fun-

    derstanding.

    ut at this

    oint

    he

    nability

    o

    express

    imself

    erbally ighlights

    common ilemma

    fCarver's

    haracters.

    anguage

    s seento be insufficient

    or

    genuine

    nd ntimate

    orm fcommunication.

    alking

    reates

    istance,

    nd those

    who talk

    elf-assuredly

    re looked

    upon

    with

    uspicion. onsequently,

    arver's

    charactersre often

    ortrayed

    s

    inarticulate,

    t a loss for

    he

    right

    ord,

    while

    the

    ct of

    ooking roduces

    kind f

    knowledge

    n which he ense

    oftheirnte-

    riority

    an build.

    Thesignificancef his otion f nteriorityompensating

    or he

    nadequacy

    f

    spoken

    anguage

    wasmade

    apparent

    nRobertAltman's ilmhortCuts

    1993),

    based on a number f Carver's

    tories.

    n his

    adaptation

    or he

    creen,

    Altman

    created

    fascinating

    etwork

    f cross-references

    etween itherto nconnected

    stories

    lowing

    moothly

    nto ach

    other ike n elaboratemusical

    iece.

    Yet

    some

    critics oted hat

    Altman ntroducedwo

    narrative

    echniques

    hich undamen-

    tally hanged

    he haracter

    f

    Carver's

    writing.

    nstead f

    ympathy

    hey

    aw ro-

    ny,

    while he

    ubjectivity

    f nternal

    hought

    ad been translatednto

    xternalc-

    tion

    cf.Gallagher,

    tewart,

    cofield,

    nd

    Boddy).

    n Tess

    Gallagher's

    stimation,

    the ffectf hese

    hanges

    was to

    toughen

    nd

    peedup

    what s

    tender ndcircu-

    itousnCarver 11). In thehigh-densityodeoffilmmages, ltman eemedn-

    capable

    of

    representing

    hemoremeditativend

    blurry

    lements fCarver's

    ma-

    4

    On the

    mportance

    f

    nonverbal

    ignals,

    f.Gearheart.

    5

    The crisis fcommunication

    n

    Carver's tories

    s elaborated

    y

    Gearheart

    nd Shute.

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    38 Christofecker

    terial.Most

    mportantly,

    he ension etween

    alking

    nd

    observing,

    rucial o his

    explorationf ubjectivity,layed much mallerole n Altman's ilm.6

    Carver's

    isjunction

    etween erbal ndnon-verbalormsf ommunicationas

    first

    cknowledged

    n n

    nsightfulnalysis y

    David Boxer ndCassandra

    hillips:

    If

    Carver's

    ye

    s that f he

    voyeur, hey

    write,

    his

    voice s that fdissociation

    (81).

    Sight

    nd

    speech, ye

    and voice re differentiateds distinctommunicative

    levels

    n

    Carver's

    riting,enerating

    ifferentinds

    f

    knowledge

    nd

    nsight.

    on-

    sequently,

    oxer nd

    Phillips

    ntroducehe erm

    oyeurism

    tomeannot

    ust

    exu-

    al

    spying,

    ut hewistfuldentificationith ome

    distant,

    nattainable

    dea of elf

    (79).

    Dissociation,

    n theother

    and,

    s

    understood

    s a senseof

    disengagement

    from ne'sown

    dentity

    nd

    ife,

    state

    f

    tandingpart

    rom hateverefineshe

    self, r ofbeing nselfed 79). Inboth asestheytress hefeelingf nadequacy:

    gazing

    t an unattainable

    dea of

    self,

    isengagingerbally

    rom he elf. et

    they

    also note

    hat

    arver

    as

    endowed he ctof

    ooking

    ith new

    xperiential

    orce:

    Looking

    tself ecomes

    xperience,

    ot

    merely

    icarious

    xperience.

    t

    s a trans-

    forming

    ct,

    newhich

    hanges

    he haracterf hat

    whichs seen

    79).

    As Boxer nd

    Phillips

    ave

    pointed

    ut,

    Carver ndermines

    he

    hierarchy

    e-

    tween erbal nd

    non-verbal

    orms f

    ommunication

    o show hat he

    truggle

    o

    express

    he elf akes

    place

    on differentevels.

    n A

    Small,

    Good

    Thing,

    nn

    Weiss ealizes fter hedeath f herchild hat he s unable o

    express

    er

    grief

    adequately.

    he

    thinks,

    howunfairtwas that he

    only

    words

    hat

    ame

    outwere

    the sort f words sed on TV showswherepeoplewerestunned yviolent r

    sudden eaths. he

    wanted er

    words

    o

    be

    herown

    76).

    Yet,

    s this esire o

    find

    words

    f one's own s

    thwarted,

    lternative eansof

    expressing

    he self

    must e

    foregrounded.alking

    eads to alienation

    rom

    he

    elf

    nd

    others,

    hile

    looking

    r

    touching

    reates

    feeling

    fcloseness nd sometimes

    ven senseof

    empathy.

    re-verbal,

    isual nd

    haptic,

    orms

    re ntroduced

    o

    compensate

    or

    communicativeack.

    However,

    ince

    hey

    re ess elaborate

    hey ighlight

    de-

    sire o communicate

    teeped

    n

    the

    discrepancies

    f

    ambiguous

    r

    fuzzy

    emiotic

    systems.

    Boxer

    nd

    Phillips

    ocussed

    n thekind

    f

    voyeurismrevalent

    n stories ike

    Neighbors,

    here ill

    Miller,

    ending

    othe

    mpty

    partment

    fhis

    neighbors,

    begins

    o invade heir

    rivacy y observing

    he

    apartment

    losely:

    He looked

    outthe

    window,

    nd then e moved

    lowly

    hrough

    ach

    room

    onsideringvery-

    thing

    hatfellunder

    his

    gaze,carefully,

    ne

    object

    t a time

    13).

    However,

    character's

    aze

    can have

    variety

    f

    mplications

    n

    Carver's

    tories:tcan

    signi-

    fy eflexively

    he

    process

    f

    collecting

    nd

    selecting

    material

    or

    new)

    stories;

    t

    can be

    part

    f a

    voyeuristic

    ct of

    spying,canning

    nd

    possessing' bjects

    hat

    help

    o

    transformhe

    elf;

    r tcan

    mply

    hat

    he elf s

    placing

    im- r herself

    n

    the

    cene

    under bservation. ow charactersook at

    objects

    nd

    people,

    r how

    they

    re

    being

    ooked

    t,provides

    ot

    only

    ital its f

    storynformation,

    t

    also

    underlineshat he

    gaze

    nCarver's

    writing

    s an active

    rocess,

    mplicated

    n re-

    6

    RobertAltman's

    daptation

    must, owever,

    lso be seen

    n

    thecontext f his

    ownwork. n

    particular,

    he enseoffarcical

    rony

    nd

    the

    depthlessness

    fhischaracters ave been

    persistent

    elements fhisfilms ince he

    arly

    970s.

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    lations f

    knowledge

    nd

    power. ooking

    n

    tsmost

    omplex

    orm ecomes n

    act of elf-examination.7

    Carver's

    Regime

    of

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    Carver's toriesmust

    e

    carefully

    ifferentiatedith

    egard

    o the

    question

    s

    to what he

    haracters

    re

    ooking

    t,

    how heir

    azes

    are

    qualified,

    nd what

    hey

    see.8 hree

    ypes

    f

    ooking

    re

    particularly

    elevantince

    hey

    akeon

    a reflexive

    quality:ooking

    nto

    mirrors,

    atching

    elevision,

    nd

    closely

    bserving

    undane

    objects

    r scenes.

    ooking

    ntomirrorss a traditionalevice or he

    motif f elf-

    analysis. et t s strikingowoften tfigures rominentlynCarver'swork. ro-

    tagonistserusing

    heir aces

    nmomentsf tress r

    n

    unusual nvironments

    an

    be found

    n

    numerous

    tories.

    n

    hisfirst isit o the

    mptypartment

    fhis

    vaca-

    tioning eighbors,

    ill Miller ends o the at and

    plants,

    hen

    lowly

    e is over-

    powered y transgressivempulse:

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    he atto

    pick

    t her

    food,

    e head-

    ed for hebathroom. e looked

    t himselfn themirrornd then losedhis

    eyes

    andthen ooked

    gain

    Neighbors 0).

    He

    goes

    on to search hevarious ooms

    ofthe

    partment,

    o that t this

    oint ooking

    nto he

    mirrors ike

    waking p

    n

    a

    strangely

    ltered

    tate,

    meeting

    he elf n a

    new,

    more

    evealing

    nd

    fascinating

    form.

    ater,

    s he

    puts

    n his

    neighbor'slothes,

    othmale nd

    female,

    e returns

    repeatedly

    o stare ntomirrors,

    ngaging

    n the silent

    pleasure

    of

    seeing

    his

    formerelf akeon

    multiple

    ppearances.

    Carver's arrator

    s careful otto

    udge

    what

    Bill

    thinks f

    himself hilehe is

    observing

    imselfn the

    mirror,

    nviting

    he

    reader o

    speculate

    n thethrills

    f

    cross-dressing.

    et a character's

    ook nto hemirroran also denote decisive

    step

    oward new evelof

    elf-knowledge.

    n

    this ense

    Al,

    themain haracter

    f

    Jerry

    nd

    Molly

    nd

    Sam,

    whose ife eems o be

    fallingpart

    nd

    who,

    n a des-

    perate esture

    o restore

    senseof

    order,

    as abandoned he

    family og,

    makes

    vital

    iscovery

    hile

    ooking

    nto hemirror:

    Whilehe

    was

    shaving,

    e

    stopped

    once andheldtherazor n hishand nd ookedat himself

    n themirror: isface

    doughy,

    haracterless-

    mmoral,

    hatwas theword.He laid therazordown. be-

    lieve havemadethe

    ravest

    mistake his ime

    165;

    original

    talics).

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    7

    The

    concept

    f the

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    heory

    here twas

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    the ontext

    f

    psychoanalytic

    nd

    apparatus

    heories. or our

    purpose,

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    aspects

    re most

    ignificant.

    he

    gaze

    not

    only

    efers o

    thevisual

    bjectgenerated y

    the ct of

    ooking,

    .

    e. the

    mage;

    t

    also

    in-

    cludes he

    ctivity

    f

    ooking

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    f

    par-

    ticular

    ubject

    r

    subject

    osition.

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    analyze

    he

    gaze,

    therefore,

    equires

    close

    examination f

    'image'

    nd

    subject'

    n

    order

    o discern ow he ext

    resents

    heir

    nterrelationship.

    or

    different

    approaches oncerning

    he

    oncept

    f the

    gaze

    in film

    heory,

    f.TheSexual

    Subject.

    8 Care mustbe taken o distinguishetweenCarver'srelativelyhort tories nd his onger,

    more laborate

    ieces

    for

    n

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    fthe hort

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    nly

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    hisvolumeWhat

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    Christof ecker

    moment

    l

    breaks

    hrough

    isreluctanceo

    acknowledge

    hat

    he haosof

    family

    life s a consequencefhisownmaking,side-effectfhisfaultyimmoral har-

    acter. n this

    ase,

    hen,

    ooking

    nto hemirror

    riggers

    psychological

    r moral

    insight

    hat

    Carver nderlines

    y nterspersing

    rief

    assages

    f nterior

    ono-

    logue.

    The actof

    ooking

    onjures p

    the

    word

    immoral l seems o have

    been

    looking

    or,

    et

    he does not

    mention

    t n

    conversations

    ith iswife.

    elf-knowl-

    edge

    generated

    y

    mirrors

    ften emains t this

    ubjective

    evel

    without

    ntering

    direct erbal ommunication.

    Still,

    t

    shouldbe obvious hat

    ooking

    ntomirrorss a mode of

    self-analysis

    does notfollow he

    postmodern)rope

    fboundless orms freflectionnable o

    locate sense f elf. n

    Carver'smore

    omplex

    tories

    e.

    g. Jerry

    nd

    Molly

    nd

    Sam or WillYou Please Be Quiet,Please? ), ookingntomirrors arksmo-

    ments fmoral

    r

    personal nsight,

    hile

    n

    his hortertoriest

    usually

    akes n

    the

    quality

    f a

    narcissistic

    aze:

    an

    exaggerated

    orm f self-interest

    rying

    o

    combat he

    feeling

    f

    mptiness

    r

    blankness.

    n

    both ases

    t

    represents

    form f

    looking

    hich llows

    limpses

    nto he haracters'

    ersonalities,

    evealing

    heir t-

    tempt

    o

    integrate

    hat

    hey

    ee withwhat

    hey

    eel,

    o find he

    right

    ords or

    images

    fthe elf.

    Watching

    elevision

    If

    we can callthenumerousaces nthe

    mirrors

    mong

    arver's tories

    prima-

    ryway

    of

    ooking

    n,

    watching

    elevisionan

    be understoods a

    way

    of

    ooking

    out.

    Significantly,

    hough,

    t s a

    way

    of

    ooking

    ut anchoredn thedomesticet-

    tings

    f he haractersndthus erves o

    emphasize

    ather

    han vercome he

    fun-

    damental

    assivity

    ntheirives.

    t can

    signify

    heblank tare f n mmobileudi-

    ence,

    athering

    n

    front

    f

    the elevisionet n order o kill

    ime,

    s in the

    drying-

    out

    facility

    f Where

    'm

    Calling

    rom : I make t to a

    big

    chair hat's lose to

    the

    radiator,

    nd I sit down.

    ome

    guys

    ook

    up

    from heir V. Then

    they

    hift

    back o what

    hey

    were

    watching125).

    n

    this

    ase,

    what

    xactly hey

    re watch-

    ing

    snot laborated

    n, nd,

    ndicating

    he

    degree

    ftheir

    xhaustion,

    t doesn't

    seem

    to make difference.

    atching

    elevision,hen,

    an denote routine

    aily

    activity

    hat

    metonymically

    lludes o the

    repetitious

    nd mechanical

    attern

    f

    everyday

    ife. nsteadof

    engaging

    withwhat

    hey

    ee

    by looking

    ut intothe

    world,

    arver's haractersend o

    be drawn

    eeper

    nto heir

    omestic

    phere.

    On theother

    and,

    watching

    elevision,

    ust

    ike

    ooking

    nto

    mirrors,

    as more

    complexmplications,articularly

    hen ntroduceds a

    competing

    arrativeevice

    influencing

    nd

    nterrelating

    ith

    he ction

    n the

    tory.

    s has been

    pointed

    ut,

    the

    force f Carver's toriesies n their

    bility

    o underminehehabitual

    xperi-

    enceof

    veryday

    ife

    ymaking

    he sual eem

    trange:

    It s the

    amiliar,

    he eem-

    ingly

    known,'

    hichs the ruemask fthe

    errifyingBoxer

    nd

    Phillips 3).

    To

    this

    nd,

    watching

    elevisions a constant

    eminder

    f

    how

    uickly

    error

    enerated

    in the

    public phere

    an nvade he

    eeming

    almness f the

    private

    ealm.

    High-

    lighting

    he

    ontingency

    f

    death nd

    violence,

    arrativesn television

    epresent

    subtle hreat rom

    he utside

    world,

    technically)

    eceivedn the

    deceptive

    eclu-

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    sion f hehome.

    n

    the

    gin-soaked

    ocial

    gathering

    f WhatWeTalkAboutWhen

    We TalkAboutLove, ardiologistel McGinnis ummarizes horrible ighway

    accident:Drunk

    kid,

    eenager,lowed

    hisdad's

    pickup

    nto his

    amper

    with his

    old

    couple

    n t

    146).Watching

    elevisionanhave he imilarffectf

    nterjecting

    visions

    f

    sudden eath.

    As

    Jack

    nd Franvisit iswork

    al

    Bud in

    Feathers,

    stock arrace s

    running

    n

    television:

    'Maybe

    ne of hose amn arswill

    xplode

    right

    nfrontf

    us,'

    ran aid.

    Or

    else

    maybe

    ne'llrun

    p

    nto he

    grandstand

    nd

    smash he

    guy elling

    he

    rummy

    ot

    dogs' 9).

    Significantly,

    ran

    magines

    cenesmoreviolent nd brutal han heones

    actu-

    ally

    hown,

    bviouslyxpecting

    he

    worst.n contrasto the

    ntrospectiveuality

    of

    ooking

    nto

    mirrors,hen,

    watching

    elevision

    reates differentevelofvisu-

    alization. n theonehand, elevision'segime faudiovisualityeemstoblock

    out

    moredirect nd

    open

    forms

    f

    communication,

    itualizing

    n

    empty

    orm f

    interaction

    n

    relationships

    hathave osttheir motional

    asis.As Jack emarks

    about

    his

    marriage

    ith ran: She and

    talk ess and ess as it s.

    Mostly

    t's

    ust

    the

    TV

    (23).

    On the

    other

    and,

    he act of

    watching

    elevision

    s torn etween

    two

    radically ivergent

    motional tates:

    gnorance

    nd

    hypersensitivity.

    oth

    re-

    actions,

    taring assively

    t

    the televisionet or

    anticipating

    he worst o

    come,

    indicate hatCarver's haracters

    eel need to

    protect

    hemselves

    gainst

    ver-

    powering

    mages.

    n

    this

    ense,

    watching

    elevision,

    ike

    ooking

    nto

    mirrors,

    e-

    volves round he

    theme f a

    split ubject.

    Unable to find

    words o

    express

    he

    self, arver's

    rotagonists

    lso seem to lack an

    adequate

    emotional eactionn

    thefaceof disaster.

    ornbetween xtremes- ilence nd

    small-talk,

    isinterest-

    edness

    nd

    sentimentality-

    he

    notion

    f a

    split ubject oints

    o the entralack

    of

    his

    characters:

    he

    nability

    o

    express

    nd

    integratembiguous

    eelings

    nd

    the oncomitant

    ear f

    shifting

    ncontrollably

    etween

    adically ivergent

    mo-

    tional tates.9

    Analyzing

    heSelf

    The

    exploratory

    aturef

    ooking

    n and

    ooking

    ut an

    partly

    e

    explained

    y

    thefact hat

    mirrorsndtelevisioncreens

    re

    technologies

    fvisualization

    hose

    reflexive

    uality

    s an intrinsic

    spect

    ftheir

    esign.

    he third

    egime

    f

    ooking

    that want o focus

    n

    goes beyond

    his lement

    f

    technologicalesign.

    t in-

    cludeswhatBoxer nd

    Phillips

    efine

    s a

    voyeuristic

    dentification

    ith n un-

    attainable

    dea of self

    79).

    Yet t need not

    necessarily

    r

    solely

    e seen

    as

    voy-

    euristic,

    . e.

    performed

    n

    secrecy

    nd fueled

    y

    forbiddenesires.

    More

    fittingly,

    it

    can

    be characterizeds the ctof

    generatingelf-knowledge

    y

    careful

    bser-

    vation

    f

    mundane

    bjects

    r scenes.Carver's narticulate

    haractersften

    ain

    their irstnsightsimply y ooking.Middle-aged, arried rnoldBreit, he n-

    9

    Obviously,

    eo-realism la Carver lso creates

    'new

    psychology.'

    scillating

    etween

    n-

    tagonistic

    tates f

    feeling,

    he

    subject

    does not see

    him- r herself s

    integrated

    r whole but

    rather

    s

    responding

    o various timuli rom he outside.

    he concomitant

    poverty

    f

    spirit

    s

    viewed

    riticallyy

    Facknitz

    Menace

    of

    Minimalism ).

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    Christof ecker

    hibited

    rotagonist

    f AreYou a Doctor?

    visits woman

    who

    has

    mysteriously

    calledhim t home nd wants o see him.Arrivingther partment,e finds hat

    shehas

    gone

    outandwaits or er:

    He looked

    around.The roomwas

    lighted y

    a

    gold

    floor

    amp

    that

    had a

    large shtray

    and a

    magazine

    ack ffixed o the

    pole.

    A

    television et stood

    against

    hefar

    wall,

    he

    picture

    n,

    thevolume ow.

    A

    narrow

    allway

    ed to theback of the

    partment.

    he fur-

    nace was turned

    p,

    the

    ir close with medicinal mell.

    Hairpins

    nd

    rollers

    ay

    on the

    coffee

    able,

    pink

    athrobe

    ay

    on the ouch.

    36)

    The

    passage

    erves s a

    descriptive

    ntroductiono theunknown oman's

    part-

    ment,

    et

    t also sketches ital

    details

    stablishing

    mood that

    eflects rnold's

    hesitanttate fmind. he pink athrobe oreshadowshat e will lumsilyry

    to kiss

    the

    stranger,

    onfused ver

    their

    meeting

    n an

    atmosphere

    f

    ntimacy

    without

    nowing

    ach other ut

    manating

    similar

    eeling

    f

    repressed

    iscon-

    tent.

    hus,

    ntently

    bserving particularetting,

    he

    protagonist

    ecomes ware

    of

    sexually harged bject,

    which

    orresponds

    ith ishidden

    esires. ther x-

    amples

    how venmore

    xplicitly

    ow

    watching

    scene an

    generate

    elf-knowl-

    edge.

    n Will

    You Please Be

    Quiet,

    lease?

    Ralph

    nd

    Marian re

    experiencing

    a

    maritalrisis fter he dmits

    o a sexual ffair.

    alph

    remembershe imewhen

    they

    were

    honeymooning

    n

    Mexico nd he watched iswife

    eaning

    motionless

    on

    thebalustrade ftheir

    partment:

    She wore white

    lousewith

    bright

    ed carf

    t her

    hroat,

    nd he could ee her

    breasts

    pushing

    gainst

    hewhite loth.

    He had a bottle f

    dark,

    nlabeled

    wineunderhis

    arm,

    and thewhole

    ncident

    utRalph

    n

    mind f

    omething

    rom

    film,

    n

    ntensely

    ramatic

    momentntowhichMarian

    ouldbe fitted ut

    he couldnot.

    229).

    Again,

    s

    in

    the

    passage

    from AreYou a

    Doctor? ,

    bserving

    brief,

    intensely

    dramatic

    moment ntroduces

    mages

    with exualconnotations.

    ut

    n

    this ase

    theobservers not

    only

    haracterizeds

    sexually

    ntimidated

    and

    ultimately

    n-

    adequate),

    he evaluates

    he act of

    ooking

    s

    a

    painful

    lash f

    self-recognition.

    SinceCarver's arrator

    ualifies

    he cene s

    something

    rom film t s

    tempt-

    ing o callRalph's ctof ooking cinematicaze helpingo establish particular

    modeofnarration.

    any

    fCarver's tories

    re characterized

    y

    hese

    rolonged

    passages

    f

    observation

    ntroducing particular

    etting

    nd

    combining

    hisde-

    scriptive

    assage

    with ubtle

    eflectionsbout

    place:

    How does the

    character it

    into

    he cenehe or she s

    watching?

    isual

    xploration

    f

    space

    thus reates n

    establishing

    hot fthe

    etting

    nd,

    t tsmost

    istinctive,

    lso

    serves s an assess-

    ment

    fhow ndwhere he elf an

    be

    placed

    nto he cene.

    Toward

    he

    end

    of

    the

    tory

    scene

    mirroringalph's

    arlier

    lashback ision

    ofthe

    honeymoon

    nderlineshis

    narrativeevice.After

    night

    f

    drinking

    nd

    gambling,alph

    returnso his

    home,

    till ndecided owhe

    should ct.

    He watch-

    es hiswife leepingnd,ust s inMexico, uzzled nd nsecure,ries ocometo

    terms ith is

    place

    n the

    cenebefore im:

    She was

    sleeping,

    erhead off he

    pillow,

    urned oward he

    wall,

    herhairblack

    gainst

    the

    heet,

    he overs unched roundher

    houlders,

    overs

    ulledup

    from he

    foot fthe

    bed.

    She was on her

    ide,

    her

    secret

    ody

    ngled

    t the

    hips.

    He stared.

    What fter

    ll,

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    shouldhe do? Take his

    things

    nd leave?

    Go

    to a

    hotel?Make certain

    rrangements?

    How should man ct,given hese ircumstances?249)

    In a mild ubversion

    f

    gender tereotypes,alph

    realizes t this

    oint

    hathe

    the

    man-

    precisely

    oes notknow

    how

    o act.The

    experience

    f

    personal

    risis

    often

    eads Carver'smale

    protagonists

    o

    retreat nd a

    heightened

    tate f self-

    pity

    ather han

    decisive ction.

    arlier,

    s

    Ralph

    wanders

    imlessly

    hrough

    he

    night,

    is

    feeling

    f

    vulnerability

    s

    evoked

    n

    entering liquor

    tore:

    A bellover

    thedoor inkled.

    alph

    lmost

    wept

    rom he ound f t

    241).

    How the elf an

    be included

    n

    a

    scene, herefore,

    ften eads to a notion

    f

    ackand nconclusive-

    ness-

    in

    this ase the ackofmarital

    normalcy'

    ndthe

    onsequent

    motional

    e-

    stabilizationfthemaleprotagonist.et the rucial oint bout hepassagewith

    regard

    o the

    analysis

    f different

    ypes

    f

    ooking

    s that bservationnd self-

    analysis

    re

    ntimately

    inked ndtake n an active

    uality,

    hich

    he

    male)

    char-

    acters re

    ncapable

    f

    n

    a more

    iteral ense.

    Thus,

    we can

    distinguish

    etween

    hree asic

    types

    hat have

    tentatively

    and

    heuristically)

    alled

    he

    narcissistic,elevisual,

    nd cinematic

    aze.

    What he har-

    acters re

    looking

    t,

    how their

    ook s

    qualified,

    nd how t affectsheir

    self-)

    knowledge

    ecomes

    itallymportantgainst

    he

    background

    fa

    pervasive

    eel-

    ing

    of

    peechlessness.

    n

    Carver's

    work he

    gaze

    takes n numerous orms

    more

    thanmentioned

    bove),yet

    wo

    spects

    re crucial.

    irstly,azing

    nvites consid-

    eration fplaceand self. trevolves round he ssueofhow heobserver itsnto

    the

    cene

    he or she s

    watching

    and

    describing).

    econdly,

    t s

    presented

    s an ac-

    tivity reating special

    bond between

    he

    observer nd

    the

    person

    or

    object

    looked t.

    Thus,

    he

    gaze negotiates

    evels

    f

    proximity

    nd

    distance,

    nvolvement

    and

    retreat,

    hich

    aveboth

    metaphorical

    nd iteral

    mplications.

    he narcissis-

    tic

    gaze

    s a closeform f elf

    perusal

    hile he elevisual

    aze

    s

    by

    definition)

    ar

    removed rom he cene

    being

    watched;

    et

    oth orms f

    ooking

    an ead

    to sur-

    prising

    iscoveries-

    .

    g.

    that loseness ncovers

    feeling

    falienation

    hile is-

    tance

    may gnite

    motionalnvolvement.

    Still,

    hevarious

    ypes

    f

    ooking

    an thus e summarized:

    henarcissistic

    aze

    representsform f ntrospection,he elevisual aze signifiesooking ut at the

    (mediated)

    worldwhile hecinematic

    aze

    establishes

    (self-reflexive)

    orm

    f

    looking

    which

    cknowledges

    he bservers a

    participant

    n a narrative

    equence.

    All

    types

    ndicate hat

    n

    Carver's

    writingye

    contact s a

    specific

    orm f ommu-

    nications of central

    mportance.

    owever,

    s the

    discussionn WhatWe Talk

    AboutWhenWe TalkAbout

    Love

    suggests,

    his

    may

    not

    lways

    e clear o

    the

    protagonists.

    n

    the ftermath

    fthedreadful

    ighway

    ccident,

    aving

    aved

    the

    old

    couple's

    ife

    n

    numerous

    perations,

    ardiologist

    el

    McGinnis

    inds utthat

    the ld man s not

    uffering

    o much rom he ccident ut

    from

    aving

    isfield f

    vision

    mpaired.

    nbelievingly,

    e recalls:

    I'm

    telling ou,

    he man's

    heartwas

    breakingecausehe couldn't urn isgoddamn ead and seehisgoddamnwife

    (151).

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    44

    Christof

    ecker

    Looking

    and

    Everyday

    Life

    In its movement etween

    mages

    of extreme

    iolence,

    otions

    f

    love,

    and

    states fdrunken

    tupor,

    WhatWe TalkAbout

    When

    We

    TalkAboutLove es-

    tablishes

    precarious

    alancebetween hedomestic

    phere

    nd a hostile utside

    world. he notion fhome s an enclosed nd

    protective

    pace together

    ith he

    relationship

    etween

    rivate

    nd

    public,

    elf nd

    community,

    s

    constantly

    hal-

    lenged.

    n

    the ne

    hand,

    t s undermined

    y

    ommunication

    echnologies

    hreat-

    ening

    o invade he homewith isual nd verbal

    messages.

    n the

    other

    hand,

    Carver's

    rotagonistssually

    ome

    to

    realize hat

    he vil

    they

    re

    trying

    o hide

    from esurfaces

    n themidst ftheirmost ntimate

    elationships.

    t

    signifies,

    fter

    all, he uppressedesire rviolent rge f heir issociatedelves,ndicatinghat

    longing

    o

    retreat

    nto

    protectedrivate pace

    must e seenas theultimateorm

    of elf-delusion.

    Still,

    he

    predominance

    fthe

    ommonplace

    s an

    importantspect

    f Carver's

    writing,

    nd

    the

    domestic iction

    ftheminimalistsn

    general.

    t harks ack o the

    modernist

    roject

    f a

    democratic

    rt

    apable

    of

    addressing,

    nd situated

    ithin,

    the ealm f

    veryday

    ife.

    ikeWilliam arlos

    Williamsr

    Charles

    heeler,

    arver

    investigates

    he

    thingness'

    f

    ordinary

    xperience

    n an

    attempt

    o discover

    at-

    terns

    apable

    of

    tructuring

    hatworld n

    meaningful ays.10

    o this

    nd,

    ooking

    becomes n

    exploratory

    ct

    n

    pursuit

    f

    experience

    nd

    knowledge.

    et n con-

    trast o the arliermodernists,arver rames his ttempt ith pervasiveense

    of

    mpoverishment,

    oth

    n

    terms f he

    ubject's

    ntuitiveacultiesndthe ensu-

    ous

    quality

    f

    his or her

    environment.rban

    landscapes

    nd

    technological

    progress,

    allowed

    ymbols

    f

    modernity,

    ave

    degenerated

    nto uburban

    ark-

    ing

    ots nd

    Styrofoamups.

    Colors, extures,

    hadesof

    ight

    re notfeatured

    prominently

    n

    Carver's

    tories.

    ather,

    he

    mpoverishment

    f suburbia orre-

    sponds

    with

    n

    mpoverishment

    f timuli or he enses.

    Similarly,

    he

    xperience

    f

    everyday

    ife,

    n

    tsritualizednd routine

    spects,

    s

    often

    ortrayed

    s

    frustrating

    r even

    depressing.

    et at the ametime t s

    highly

    valorized s the

    nly

    modeofexistencehere s.

    Thus, lthough

    rdinariness

    s the

    cause of the characters'iscontentnd

    suffering,hey esperatelyling

    o itas

    soon as it s

    being

    hreatened.

    requently,

    his onstitutesarver's

    xistentialist

    twist:

    aught

    nside

    stifling

    nd

    pointless veryday

    xistence,

    is

    haracters

    ev-

    ertheless

    anic

    as

    they

    eel

    their

    miserable

    xistence

    lipping

    rom hem.

    And

    Carvermakes ure

    hat t

    does

    slip

    by ntroducing

    sense fmenace hat reates

    feeling

    f

    shiftinground: emporary

    oments f destabilization

    emonstrating

    to the haractersheir

    elplessness

    nd

    nability

    o act

    decisively

    r

    to

    change

    he

    course f their ate.11he

    struggle

    f Carver's haracterso find words f

    their

    own

    s, herefore,

    ituated

    n

    the

    arger

    ontext f a

    democraticrt

    finding

    t n-

    creasingly

    ifficulto

    identify

    he

    extraordinary

    ithin he

    ordinary

    r

    to

    assign

    spiritual

    alues o mundane

    bjects. nchoring

    esthetic

    xperience

    nthe

    very-

    10

    Carver

    allsWilliams ne ofhis

    iterary

    heroes',

    f.

    McCaffery

    nd

    Gregory.

    n the

    history

    of

    Sheeler

    nd

    Williams,

    f.

    Marling,

    rvell,Rourke,

    nd Lucie.

    11

    On the

    prevalence

    fthis enseof

    menace,

    f. owell nd Carver

    On Writing ).

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    Faces

    n

    theMirror 45

    day

    world s

    hampered

    y

    the

    mpoverishment

    f

    ts

    material

    exture,

    hilemass

    mediated isastershreatenooverpowerheperceptiveacultiesivotal or dis-

    criminating

    ook.

    Thus,

    arver's eo-realistesthetics

    ultimately

    ore

    oncerned

    ith

    he

    ong-

    ing

    or iscoveries

    n

    the

    rdinary

    orld han he ctual

    depiction

    fthediscover-

    ies

    themselves,

    fferingnly

    ketches fmoments ftruth r

    nsight.

    et t could

    be

    argued

    hat his

    eeling

    f unfulfilledesire onstitutes crucial

    spect

    f

    his

    stories

    ointing

    eyond

    he smallness fvision hat

    Carver

    ound aultwith e-

    garding

    he ermminimalism

    cf.

    Herzinger).

    n his

    arly

    tories,

    he

    ctof

    ooking

    generates elf-knowledge

    n

    order o overcome

    he

    nadequacy

    f

    spoken

    an-

    guage

    hat s

    underminingnterpersonalelationships.

    n his

    ater

    work,

    subtle

    shifteems o occur s to the ignificancefnon-verbalorms fcommunication.

    Now

    they

    re ntroduceds a

    remedy,

    owever

    phemeral

    nd

    ncomplete,

    or he

    difficulties

    f human

    nteraction.

    s

    Carver

    pens

    up

    themarital

    ettings

    f his

    more

    omplex

    tories,

    he ctof

    ooking

    ot

    only

    nhancesntimate

    elationships,

    italso comes o

    denote,

    metaphorically,

    rtisticreation s such.

    Discovering

    he

    Haptic

    This hift

    s

    most bvious

    n

    Cathedral,

    he

    tory

    bout blindman

    visitingmarried

    ouple

    cf.

    Facknitz

    HumanWorth ],

    rown,

    nd

    Gearheart).

    ears

    ago

    thewomanworked or

    im,

    eading

    rom ase studies nd

    reports.

    ftermov-

    ing way

    he has

    kept

    n touch

    y

    exchanging

    apes.

    Now,

    s he is about o enter

    their

    ome,

    he

    prejudiced

    nd

    apprehensive

    usband ells he

    tory

    f heir

    meet-

    ing, evealing

    nxieties nd

    ealousy oncerning

    iswife's ormer

    cquaintances.

    In contrasto WhatWe TalkAbout

    WhenWe TalkAbout

    Love,

    he

    mportance

    of

    ye

    contacts

    acknowledged

    s a crucial ommunicative

    actor f ntimateela-

    tionships.

    n

    fact,

    henarrator

    ustifies

    is

    pprehensivenessoncerning

    he

    blind

    visitor

    y magining

    hat

    tmust

    e

    like

    o

    be married o a blindman:

    Imagine womanwho could never ee herself s she was seen in theeyesof her oved

    one. A womanwhocould

    go

    on

    day

    after

    ay

    and never eceive he mallest

    ompliment

    from er

    beloved.

    A

    woman

    whosehusband ouldnever ead the

    xpression

    n her

    face,

    be

    it

    misery

    r

    something

    etter.

    200)

    The

    scornful

    gnorance

    f the

    narrator,

    ho at the

    beginning

    f their

    meeting

    wishes heblind isitor ouldweardark

    lasses, hanges

    n

    the ourse

    f he

    tory.

    Slowly

    e comes o realize hatnot

    being

    ble to read a woman's acedoes

    not

    mean

    being

    nable o communicate

    on-verbally.

    hile he hree fthem nd

    the

    evening mokingmarijuana

    nd

    watching

    elevision

    the

    wife

    alling sleep),

    the

    narratorappens pon channelhowing documentaryn thehistoryffamouscathedrals. t

    length

    etries o describe o theblindmanwhat he athedrals n

    televisionook ike.

    However,

    fter fewfutile

    ttempts

    nd

    finding

    is

    expres-

    sive

    verbal)

    ower

    oo

    imited,

    e

    finallyives p. ngeniously,

    heblindman

    ug-

    gests

    he should raw

    cathedral,

    nd at this

    point

    new evelof

    understanding

    develops

    between he two

    strangers,

    ounded n an

    attempt

    t non-verbalx-

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    46 Christof ecker

    change.

    he

    narrator

    athers ough aper

    nd

    enthusiasticallyegins

    o

    draw he

    cathedral, orkingimselfnto kind f creativerenzy.ll thewhile,heblind

    man'shand s

    riding

    n

    top

    ofhis o feel

    he

    hapes

    ndforms

    volving:

    I

    took

    up

    the

    penagain,

    nd

    he found

    my

    hand.

    kept

    t t. 'm no artist.

    ut

    kept rawing

    just

    he

    ame

    213).

    By

    remarking

    hat e s no

    artist,

    henarrator

    tresseshe

    rtlessnessnd ackof

    refinementf

    he

    drawing,et

    t

    s obvious hat

    he ctof reations the

    rucial x-

    periential

    orce fthis cene.

    The

    unleashing

    f

    creativity

    pensup

    newforms f

    communicationnd

    thus,

    lmost oo

    obviously,ighlights

    he

    roleof art s a tool

    for

    ndividualnd

    nterpersonal

    rowth.

    fter he

    drawing

    s

    finished,

    he

    blind

    man

    encourages

    is host

    to look at the

    result. ut he

    prefers

    o

    keep

    his

    eyes

    closed,eeminglyntheverge f discoveryhat equiresheblockingutof ye-

    sight: Myeyes

    were

    till losed.

    was

    n

    my

    house.

    knew hat. ut

    didn't eel

    like

    was nside

    nything.

    It's

    really

    omething,'

    said

    214).

    Thus,

    henarratorf

    Cathedral moves

    rom

    gnorance

    o

    nsight,

    rom

    reju-

    dice

    to

    openness,

    rom

    assivity

    o

    creative

    reakthrough

    nd,

    pparently,

    lso to

    a

    kind f

    piritual

    evelation. ost

    mportantly,

    he

    tory

    emonstrates

    owCarver

    expands

    n his heme f

    non-verbal

    ommunication

    s the rucial actorn

    human

    relationships.

    n

    thefinal

    cene,

    ooking

    means

    ooking

    nward.

    hus,

    he

    motif f

    gatheringself-)

    nowledgehrough

    particularaze

    s

    supplemented

    y

    he dea

    of

    seeing

    with

    yes

    closed.

    On theone

    hand,

    his an be

    understoods a

    philo-sophical xpansion fearlier hemes,

    ointing

    oward more

    general

    otion f

    perception.

    n the ther

    and,

    nd

    probably

    loser o

    Carver's

    onceptual

    laims,

    ithas

    palpable mplications.

    eeing

    with

    yes

    losed

    ntroduceshe

    mportance

    f

    haptic

    orms f

    communication,

    rimarily

    ouching.

    urthermore,

    f

    understood

    metaphorically,

    trelates o the

    power

    f

    the

    magination.

    hile

    n

    the

    beginning

    of

    Cathedral he

    narrator

    ities

    heblindmanfor

    eing

    nable

    o

    read wom-

    an's

    face,

    e

    ultimately

    omes o

    appreciate

    hat his

    isability

    anbe

    overcome

    y

    touching

    nd artistic

    reation.

    aptic

    forms f

    communicationstablish

    ew ev-

    els of

    ntimacy

    nd

    exchange.

    Significantly,

    his

    elebrationf

    concretenessefers

    ackto American

    modern-

    istmovements.

    mong

    he elevisedathedralsnCarver's

    tory

    henarratorlti-

    mately

    ocuses n the

    famous ne n

    Paris,

    with ts

    flying

    uttressesnd ts

    pires

    reaching p

    to the

    louds

    209).

    By

    accident e has come cross

    mages

    f

    Char-

    tres

    Cathedral,

    etby

    choosing

    t

    as themodelforhis

    drawing

    e

    incorporates

    building,

    hich

    was the

    subject

    f

    a famous

    eriesof

    photographs

    y

    Charles

    Sheeler.

    heeler ound hat

    y bstracting

    ertain

    etails

    f

    the

    building

    e

    could

    highlight

    tructural

    imilaritiesetween

    athedralsnd ndustrial

    uildings,spe-

    cially

    ord'sRiver

    Rougeplant.

    arver nvokes

    similar esthetic

    rocess.

    rans-

    ferring

    n

    object

    from ne

    medium o

    another- n this ase from

    visual

    epre-

    sentation n

    television o a

    rough nd tactilemageon paper-creates new

    object

    apable

    of

    generating

    ovel

    nsights

    ndnewforms f humannteraction.

    Artistic

    reation

    n

    both

    ases ncludes

    dematerializationf

    objects

    rom he eal

    world

    n

    order o

    change

    ways

    f

    perceiving

    nd

    ooking

    t them. ts main

    bjec-

    tivebecomes

    change

    f

    perspective

    or

    heviewer

    nd,

    consequently,

    lso

    the

    reader.

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