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Sonnets
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Historical Overview
• evolvedovercenturies;enduredforover700years
• originallydevisedasalyric,developedinsouthernFrance,northernItaly
• creationistraditionallyattributedtoFrancescoPetrarch,
(July20,1304–July19,1374)theFatherofHumanism—
howeveritisclearhepopularizedtheformduringhislifetime
Defined
•Thesonnetisapoemcomposedwitharecognizedformulaandisconcerned
withasinglethoughtortheme,andmayhaveasecondarytheme.
•ThetermmeanslittlesonginItalian
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Types of Sonnets
Becauseofitspopularity,thepoemhastransformedovertime,retaining
importantcategorizingelements,yetmetamorphosingsomecomponents.
Common forms:
•Italiansonnet >orPetrarchansonnet
•Englishsonnet >orShakesperiansonnet
•Spenseriansonnet
•Blanksonnet
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Basic Characteristics of Traditional Sonnet
•fourteenlines
•chosenrhymeschemeandstrategicmeter
•aturnorshiftintheme(referredtoasthevolta)
Important Terms
•octave eightlines ||Forsonnetsthefirsteightlinescarryatheme.
•sestet sixlines ||Theremainingsixlinescantwistthetheme.
•tercet threelines
•quatrain fourlines
•couplet twolines
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Charles Simic
History
Onagrayevening
Ofagraycentury,
Iateanapple
Whilenoonewaslooking.
Asmall,sourapple
Thecolorofwoodfire,
WhichIfirstwiped
Onmysleeve. 8
ThenIstretchedmylegs
Asfarasthey’dgo,
Saidtomyself
Whynotclosemyeyesnow
BeforetheLate
WorldNewsandWeather. 14
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octave: in this case composed of two quatrains
sestet:in this case composed of a quatrain and a couplet
Simic,Charles.“History.”The Making of a Sonnet: A Norton Anthology. EdwardHirschandEavanBoland,eds.NewYork:W.W.Norton.2008.Print.
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No matter the type of sonnet:
•Boththeoctaveandthesestetmustcontainparallelthemesortwostories
whichrelatetooneanother.
• Typicallytheoctavepresentsasituation,event,image,orgeneralization
andthesestetpresentsareflectionormeditationontheprevioussection,
areaction,oraresult.
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Francesco Petrarch (July20,1304–July19,1374)
•notallowedtomarryduetoclericaldutieswiththeRomanCatholicChurch
• itisbelievedhefatheredtwochildrennonetheless
• wasaEuropeancelebrityfromhisearlywritingsinLatin
• diedofthePlagueinhislatesixties
• heestablishedcommonthemesinthesonnetformwhichbecometraditional
elementsforhundredsofyears
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The Italian Sonnet • sonnetsmustbewrittenaboutaBeloved • thePoet-writermustbeobsessedwiththeBeloved >thePoetwouldkillfortheBelovedifsheaskedhim >thePoetwouldkillhimselfifsheaskedhim • thePoet’sloveissogreatheeventuallybecomessickwithwant • itisacknowledgedthatloveisatrial;afrustrationforthePoet • thePoetfallsinloveatfirstsightoftheBeloved • theBelovedcannotbenamedinthework;theyaregivenasecretname tohidetheirtrueidentity;thePoetwillmakepunsoutoftheBeloved’sname • theBelovedisunattainableeitherbecausetheyarealreadybetrothed ortheyarenotinterestedinthePoetatall;thePoetisbeneaththeirclass • insomecasestheBelovedraisesthelowlystatusofthePoettohigherstatus —orcondemnshimtodamnation • theBelovedisanintensebeauty,anIdealexampleofthePerfectWomanlivingin theMaterialWorld • theBelovedissobeautifulandmoralsheislovedevenbyHeaven • traditionallytheBelovedisblonde,blue-eyed
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• insomecases,(aswithPetrarch)theBelovedisfatedtodieanearlydeath (ThisallowsfurthercreationofsonnetscommentingontheMaterialWorld’s lossofherperfection.) • thesonnetswillimmortalizetheBelovedonearth • loveisshownalmostinamannerofstalking • idolatryandinsomecasesintensesensualityanderoticallusions • Greek/Romandeitiesareshownfrequentlyintheseworks,specifically Venus(Aphrodite)andCupid(Eros)duetotheircontroloverlove.
To simplify, these poems can appear, when poorly written, over-dramatic, pathos driven, scenes filled with heaving bosoms, and self-centered whining.
When well-crafted, the poems share a common story of lost love with the reader.
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The Form’s Popularity
• considertheseaspop-songsoftheirday
• thepoemswerecomposedinthevernacularItalian,nottheacademicLatin
• thisallowshisworktobeaccessibletotheaverageperson
• likewise,Petrarch’smainthemedealswiththepsychologyofaspurnedlover,
aconceptanyonecanrelateto,nomatterwhatsocialclassoroccupation
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The Sonnet Sequence
• ThroughPetrarch’sfullcollectionofpoemstheconceptofasonnetsequence
wascreated.
• Apopularformofwritingevenin16thCenturyEngland,200yearslater.
• Itiscrucialtofocusontheunityoftheworkasawhole.
• Thesequenceisapublicdeclarationofanartist’sdevotiontoaBeloved.
• Theoriginalintentionwasnottojustreadoneofthesepoemsrandomlyout
ofsequence,butrathertoreadtheentirecollectionfrombeginningtoend
toseethetransformationofthecharactersandtoseeastoryunfold.
• HismanuscriptistiltedRime Sparse, orinEnglish:Scattered Rhymes.
• Alsocalled:Canzoniere
• Thepoemsarearrangedasifcomposedinchronologicalorder,butrecent
studieshaveshownthathewrotethemoutofpropersequence.
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The Story within Rime Sparse
• inPetrarch’spoems,thebelovedisnamedLaura
• hewroteover366poemstoher,317aresonnets
• thefullmanuscriptisdedicatedtoher
• thecollectionevolvestoincludethemesofbereavementoverheruntimely
death,andthelostpossibilitiestobewithher,andmemoriesofherbeauty
• ablurringoffictionandrealityoccurhereaswell:
>heclaimsshewasarealpersonhesawatachurchonApril6,1327
>fellinloveinstantly
>shediedonEasterSunday,April6,1348bythereckoningatthattime.
• hisloveforherwasunreciprocated;sheneverrespondsinkind
• LaurawasalreadymarriedandturneddownallofPetrarch’sadvances
• itisunknownifthetwoeveractuallyspoke(ifshereallyexisted)
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The Italian Rhyme Scheme
A A
B B
B A
A B
A A
B B
B A
A B
C C C
D D D
E C C
C C D
D D C
E C D
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octave: in this case composed of two quatrains
sestet:in this case composed of two tercets
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Francesco Petrarch(July1304-July1374)
fromRime Sparse original Italian
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Voich’ascoltateinrimesparseilsuono
diqueisospiriond’ionudriva‘lcore
insulmioprimogiovenileerrore
quand’erainpartealtr’uomdaquelch’i’sono,
delvariostileinch’iopiangoetragiono
fralevanesperanzee‘lvandolore,
ovesiachiperprovaintendaamore,
sperotrovarpietà,nonchéperdono.
Mabenveggioorsícomealpopoltutto
favolafuigrantempo,ondesovente
dimemesdesmomecomivergogno;
etdelmiovaneggiarvergognaè‘lfrutto,
e‘lpentersi,e‘lconoscerchiaramente
chequantopiacealmondoèbrevesogno.
English translation
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Youwhohearthesound,inscatteredrhymes,
ofthosesighsonwhichIfedmyheart,
inmyfirstvagrantyouthfulness,
whenIwaspartlyotherthanIam,
Ihopetofindpity,andforgiveness,
forallthemodesinwhichItalkandweep,
betweenvainhopeandvainsadness,
inthosewhounderstandlovethroughitstrials.
YetIseeclearlynowIhavebecome
anoldtaleamongstallthesepeople,sothat
itoftenmakesmeashamedofmyself;
andshameisthefruitofmyvanities,
andremorse,andtheclearestknowledge
ofhowtheworld’sdelightisabriefdream.
takenfrom:http://petrarch.petersadlon.com/canzoniere.html trans:A.S.Kline
A
B
B
A
A
B
B
A
C
D
E
C
D
E
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Sonnet One from Rime Sparse
• themainthemeoffullcollectionisexpressedinopeningpoem:
>astroyofunrequitedlove
>thepoetissufferingfromremorse
>—andheisindespairfromfailuresinlove
• establishesintroductiontostoryofafailedloveaffair,twentyyearsprior
• thispoemactsasthethesisofthefullsonnetsequence
• Poetislove-lornandfoolish
• thereaderisshownaswise,knowledgeableinlove
• Poetisshownasridiculedbysociety,anobjectofgossip
• themainpointisrevealed:theworldistemporal
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Francesco Petrarch
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Itwasonthatdaywhenthesun’sray
wasdarkenedinpityforitsMaker,
thatIwascaptured,anddidnotdefendmyself,
becauseyourlovelyeyeshadboundme,Lady.
Itdidnotseemtometobeatimetoguardmyself
againstLove’sblows:soIwenton
confident,unsuspecting;fromthat,mytroubles
started,amongstthepublicsorrows.
Lovediscoveredmeallweaponless,
andopenedthewaytotheheartthroughtheeyes,
whicharemadethepassagewaysanddoorsoftears:
sothatitseemstomeitdoeshimlittlehonour
towoundmewithhisarrow,inthatstate,
henotshowinghisbowatalltoyouwhoarearmed.
takenfrom:http://petrarch.petersadlon.com/canzoniere.html trans:A.S.Kline
Francesco Petrarch
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WhenIuttersighs,incallingouttoyou,
withthenamethatLovewroteonmyheart,
thesoundofitsfirstsweetaccentsbegin
tobeheardwithinthewordLAUdable.
YourREgalstate,thatInextencounter,
doublesmypowerforthehighattempt;
but:‘TAcit’,theendingcries,‘sincetodoherhonour
isforothermen’sshoulders,notforyours’.
So,wheneveronecallsouttoyou,
thevoiceitselfteachesustoLAUd,REvere,
you,O,ladyworthyofallreverenceandhonour:
exceptperhapsthatApolloisdisdainful
thatmorTAltonguecanbesopresumptuous
astospeakofhiseternallygreenbranches.
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English or Shakespearean Sonnet
TheEarlofSurrey,HenryHoward,inventedwhatisnowknownas
theEnglishorShakespeareanSonnet.*
• followsoctave+sestetformulaslightly
• allowsforthreesetsofquatrainswithindividualrhymes
• anindependentcouplet,whichservesasaneffective“moral”tothepoem
• traditionallyfollowsiambicpentameter
*SomehistorianslikewisegivepartialcredittoLordThomasWyatt(1503–11October1542)forintroducingthe sonnetconcepttoEngland;HowardhoweverexclusivelydevelopedtherhymeschemeusedinEnglishformsoftheverse.
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Henry Howard(1517–19January1547)
Complaint of the Lover Disdained
InCyprussprings,whereasDameVenusdwelt, A 5
Awellsohot,thatwhosotastesthesame, B 5
Wereheofstone,asthawediceshouldmelt, A 4.5
Andkindledfindhisbreastwithfixedflame; B 4.5
Whosemoistpoisondissolvedhathmyhate. C 4.5
Thiscreepingfiremycoldlimbssoopprest, D 5
Thatintheheartthatharbour’dfreedom,late: C 5
Endlessdespairlongthraldomhathimprest. D 5
Anothersocoldinfrozeniceisfound, E 5.5
Whosechillingvenomofrepugnantkind, F 5
TheferventheatdothquenchofCupid’swound, E 5
Andwiththespotofchangeinfectsthemind; F 5
Whereofmydearhathtastedtomypain: G 5
Myservicethusisgrownintodisdain. G 5
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octave:
Venus
sestet:
Cupid
Surrey,HenryHoward,Earlof.The Poetical Works of Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey. Boston:Little,BrownandCompany,1854.Print.
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Description of Spring, Wherein Every Thing Renews, Save Only the Lover
Thesooteseason,thatbudandbloomforthbrings, A 5
Withgreenhathcladthehill,andekethevale. B 5
Thenightingalewithfeathersnewshesings; A 5
Theturtletohermakehathtoldhertale. B 5
Summeriscome,foreveryspraynowsprings, A 5
Theharthathhunghisoldheadonthepale; B 5
Thebuckinbrakehiswintercoatheslings; A 5
Thefishesfletewithnewrepairèdscale; B 5
Theadderallhersloughawaysheslings; A 5
Theswiftswallowpursueththefliëssmale; B 5
Thebusybeeherhoneynowshemings; A 5
Winteriswornthatwastheflowers’bale. B 5
And thusIseeamongthesepleasantthings A 5
Eachcaredecays,andyetmysorrowsprings! A 5 } volta
1. soote:sweet4. turtle:turtledove;make:mate6. his olde head:i.e.hisantlers; pale:fencepost7. brake:bushes9. sloughe:skin11.minges:mingles;mixes12: bale: evil;harm;misfortune;woe; misery;sorrow
Surrey,HenryHoward,Earlof.The Poetical Works of Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey. Boston:Little,BrownandCompany,1854.Print.
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Spenserian Sonnet
ThisformwascreatedbyEdmundSpenser(1552—1599).
• ItcombinestheItalianformwiththeEnglish,followingthethreequatrains
andcoupletconceptfromtheEnglish.
• HisrhymeschemefollowsamodificationofItalianversion:
italian : ABAB/ABAB/CDC/CDC
spencerian: ABAB/BCBC/CDCD/EE
• Likewisehedividesthepoemintothreesections:
>statementoftheproblem,asathesis;theopeningquatrainisusually
onesentence
>explorationoftheproblemintheresultingoctave
>solutionappearsintheendingcouplet
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Emund Spenser(1552—1599)
fromAmoretti || IX
LongwhileIsoughttowhatImightcompare
Thosepowerfuleyes,whichlightenmydarksight,
YetfindInoughtonearthtowhichIdare
Resembleth’imageoftheirgoodlylight.
Nottothesun,fortheydoshinebynight;
Nortothemoon,fortheyarechangednever;
Nortothestars,fortheyhavepurersight;
Nortothefire,fortheyconsumenotever;
(octave ends/sestet begins; Spenser blurs the two together)
Nortothelightning,fortheystillpersever;
Nortothediamond,fortheyaremoretender;
Noruntocrystal,farnoughtmaythemsever;
Noruntoglass,suchbasenessmightoffendher;
ThentotheMakerselftheylikestbe,
Whoselightdothlightenallthatherewesee.
thesis: problem
established
problem discussed
in following octave.
problem resolved
in couplet
A
B
A
B
B
C
B
C
C
D
C
D
E
E
5
5.5
5
5
5
5
5
5.5 /(6?)
5.5
5.5
5.5
5.5
5
5
English Sixteenth-Century Verse: An Anthology.RichardS.Sylvester,ed.W.W.Norton&Co., NewYork,©1974.Print.
Rhyme scheme || Meter
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Noticetheemphasisinline4ontheword“sight.”Withitfallingastheextrahalf
foot,itissubconsciouslystressedinthereader’smind.Thecorrelateswiththe
themeofwantingtodescribehisBeloved’seyes,whichblindhimwithlove.
Withhisnewformula,inthisparticularcasetheoctaveestablishesahierarchy
oficons,beginningwithmajorelementsfirst,thecelestialobjects,thenworksits
waydowntoearthlyelements,indescendingorder:
sun
moon
stars
fire
lightning
diamond
crystal
glass
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•Helikewisetwistsallthenegativesintopositives,
allthewhilecomplimentinghisBeloved’seyes.
•Toforcethisidea,heutilizesatechniquecalled caesura,whichisapause
innaturalspeaking—whichdoesnotinterferewithmeter.
Here,thecaesura’srepresentanintakeofbreath.
• InSpenser’scase,heemployedthistrickinthestructureofthelistitself,
breakingbetweentheinferiormodelandtheperfectionoftheeyes.
• Theresolutioncouplettransformswhatappearstobeobviousfailure
toassertionofpositive:onlyGodcouldbeequaltohereyes.
ThePoetreachessalvationthroughhisBeloved.
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Emund Spenser(1552—1599)
fromAmoretti || LXXV
OnedayIwrotehernameuponthestrand,
Butcamethewavesandwashéditaway:
AgayneIwroteitwithasecondhand,
Butcamethetyde,andmademypayneshispray.
“Vayneman,”saydshe,“thatdoestinvaineassay,
Amortallthingsotoimmortalize,
ForImyselveshalllyketothisdecay,
Andeekmynamebeewypédoutlykewize.”
(octave ends/sestet begins; Spenser blurs the two together)
“Notso,”quodI,“letbaserthingsdevize
Todyindust,butyoushalllivebyfame:
Myverse,yourvertuesrareshalleternize,
Andinthehevenswryteyourgloriousname.
Wherewhenasdeathshallalltheworldsubdew,
Ourloveshalllive,andlaterliferenew.”
thesis: problem
established
problem discussed
in following octave.
problem resolved
in couplet
A
B
A
B
B
C
B
C
C
D
C
D
E
E
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5.5
5
5
Edmund Spenser’s Poetry.Secondedition.HughMacLean,ed.W.W.Norton&Co., NewYork,©1982.Print.
Rhyme scheme || Meter
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The Sonnets of William Shakespeare || English Sonnet
•ThesefollowtherhymeschemeABAB,CDCD,EFEF,GG
•Thisisanotherexampleofwhyitisimportanttoreadtheentiresequenceas
awhole,notliftoneortwopoemsoutoftheseries.Thereisastoryunfolding
betweenall154ofthepoemsinthiscollection.
• The SonnetsareattributedtoWilliamShakespeare,althoughlately
ithasbeensuggestedotherauthorsmayhavewrittenthese.
• ThethemesarecloselylinkedtothePetrarchanconceptintroducedearlier
inthecourse.However,oftentimesthethemesaretwisted.
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Themes include:
• love
• sex
• beauty
• politics
• (im)mortality
Four characters appear within the poems’ plot-structure:
1.ThePoet-Speaker
2.TheYoungMan
3.TheDarkLady
4.RivalPoet
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Looking at the entire sequence of 154 poems:
•Thefirst17sonnetsarewrittentoayoungman,urginghimtomarry
andhavechildren,therebypassingdownhisbeautytothenextgeneration.
Thesearecalledtheprocreation sonnets.Theearliestpoemsinthe
collectiondonotimplyaclosepersonalrelationship;instead,they
recommendthebenefitsofmarriageandchildren.Thiswasacommon
themeatthetime.
•Thefollowingsonnets,18-126,areaddressedtoayoungmanexpressing
thepoet’sloveforhim—criticsarguewhetherthisisaspirituallove,a
brotherlyaffection,oragayrelationship—eitherwaytheyareread,
thesepoemsdefinitelyreshapethePetrarchanmodelofaBeloved.
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•Finally,sonnets127-152arewrittentoafemalefigure,theDarkLady;
thesepoemsexpressastrong,earthylove—thesealsobreakthePetrarchan
modelofanIdealBeauty.
• TheDarkLadyisnotblonde,norblueeyed,butinsteadisadarkhaired,
oliveskinnedwomanofmiddleclass.
• Allofthesonnetsfollowaformatofthreequatrains(4lines)
andafinalcouplet.
• Theyaremostlycomposediniambicpentameter.
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William Shakespeare(1564—1616)
18
ShallI/compare/theeto/asum/mer’sday?
Thouart/morelove/lyand/moretemp/erate;
Roughwinds/doshake/thedar/lingbuds/ofMay,
Andsum/mer’slease/hathall/tooshort/adate;
Sometimetoohottheeyeofheavenshines,
Andoftenishisgoldcomplexiondimm’d;
Andeveryfairfromfairsometimedeclines,
Bychanceornature’schangingcourseuntrimm’d;
Butthyeternalsummershallnotfade,
Norlosepossessionofthatfairthouow’st;
NorshallDeathbragthouwander’stinhisshade,
Whenineternallinestotimethougrow’st:
Solongasmencanbreatheoreyescansee,
Solonglivesthis,andthisgiveslifetothee.
The Sonnets and Narrative Poems: The Complete Non-Dramatic Poetry.SylvanBarnet,ed. SignetClassic,PenquinBooks,NewYork,1989.Print.
thesis: problem
establishedand
discussed in octave
sestetshifts
in tone
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
F
E
F
G
G
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
5
Rhyme scheme || Meter
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Sonnet 18: “Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer’s Day?” • oneoftheYoungManpoems;afrequentlyquotedpiece • rhymeschemeisanexampleoftypicalEnglishsonnet: ABAB/CDCD/EFEF/GG • themeterisaperfectiambicpentameter
• ll1-4:thePoetopenswithaquestioningofhiscreativepowers,seeking anappropriatemetaphorfortheBeloved;throughthecontextofthepoem hediscoverstheYoungManisamorepositiveimagethantheseasonitself • ll5-8:thePoetbringsuptheconceptofApollo,theyoungGreekgodof thesun,music,andpoetry;heisalsoseenasaleaderoftheartisticMuses. ThePoetalsoresolvesthatallbeautyfadesovertime,eitherbycasual circumstancesorbyseasonalchangesintheyear. • ll9:establishesthetraditionalvolta,“Butthyeternalsummershallnot fade”—duetothepoemitselfpreservingasenseoftheyouth’sbeauty. • ll13-14:ithasbeensuggestedthattheclosingcoupletencouragesasense thattheyouthisrathervain.
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William Shakespeare
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Whenin/disgrace/withFor/tuneand/men’seyes,
Iall/alone/beweep/myout/caststate,
Andtrou/bledeaf/heaven/withmy/bootless/cries,
Andlook/upon/myself/andcurse/myfate,
Wishingmeliketoonemorerichinhope,
Featuredlikehim,likehimwithfriendspossess’d,
Desiringthisman’sart,andthatman’sscope,
WithwhatImostenjoycontentedleast;
Yetinthesethoughtsmyselfalmostdespising,
HaplyIthinkonthee,andthenmystate,
Liketothelarkatbreakofdayarising
Fromsullenearth,singshymnsatheaven’sgate;
Forthysweetloveremember’dsuchwealthbrings
ThatthenIscorntochangemystatewithkings.
The Sonnets and Narrative Poems: The Complete Non-Dramatic Poetry.SylvanBarnet,ed. SignetClassic,PenquinBooks,NewYork,1989.Print.
thesis: problem
establishedand
discussed in octave
sestetshifts
in tone; ending couplet
confirms
A
B
A
B
C
D
C
D
E
B
E
B
F
F
5
5
5.5
5
5
5
5
5
5.5
5
5.5
5
5
5
Rhyme scheme || Meter
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Sonnet 29: “When in Disgrace with Fortune and Men’s Eyes” • oneoftheYoungManpoems;mostquotedfromthefullsequence • thepoemispresentedasonelongsentence • rhymeschemeisanexperimentinthiscase;theopeningquatrain establishessamerhymesusedinthethirdquatrain: ABAB/CDCD/EBEB/FF
• ll1-2:thePoetannouncesheisaloneintheworld,indisgrace • ll3-4:likeJob,hecomplainstoheaven,cursinghislostreputation • ll5-6:becauseofhisbadluck,hewishesforother’ssuccesses, anotherman’spopularity, • l7:another’screativity,another’svision • l8:atcloseofoctave,thePoetisleastsatisfiedwithhischosencareer • ll9-10:Yet,despitethesethoughtsofself-hatred,justbythinkingofthe YoungMan,thePoetfeelsacontentment • ll11-12:heformsananalogycomparinghimselfwithalark:justasa commonbirdsingstoheavenatdawn:Poet(bird)toYoungMan(sun) •ll13-14:TheloveoftheYoungManisenoughtohelpthepoetsurvive; somuchsohewouldn’tchangehislotinlife
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William Shakespeare
126
Othou,mylovelyboy,whointhypower
DostholdTime’sfickleglass,hisficklehour;
Whohastbywaninggrown,andthereinshow’st
Thyloverswithering,asthysweetselfgrow’st.
IfNature,sovereignmistressoverwrack,
Asthougoestonwards,stillwillplucktheeback,
Shekeepstheetothispurpose,thatherskill
Maytimedisgraceandwretchedminuteskill.
Yetfearher,Othouminionofherpleasure!
Shemaydetain,butnotstillkeep,hertreasure:
Heraudit(thoughdelayed)answeredmustbe,
Andherquietusistorenderthee.
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Rhyme scheme || Meter
thesis: problem
establishedand
discussed in octave
shift in tone
The Sonnets and Narrative Poems: The Complete Non-Dramatic Poetry.SylvanBarnet,ed. SignetClassic,PenquinBooks,NewYork,1989.Print.
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Sonnet Types
revised 04.19.13 || English 1302: Composition & Rhetoric II || D. Glen Smith, instructor
William Shakespeare
130
Mymist/ress’eyes/arenoth/inglike/thesun;
Coral/isfar/morered/thanher/lips’red;
Ifsnow/bewhite,/whythen/herbreasts/aredun;
Ifhairs/bewires,/blackwires/growon/herhead.
Ihave/seenros/esda/mask,red/andwhite,
ButnosuchrosesseeIinhercheeks;
Andinsomeperfumesistheremoredelight
Thaninthebreaththatfrommymistressreeks.
Ilovetohearherspeak,yetwellIknow
Thatmusichathafarmorepleasingsound;
IgrantIneversawagoddessgo;
Mymistress,whenshewalks,treadsontheground:
Andyet,/byheav/en,I/thinkmy/loveas/rare
Asan/yshe/belied/withfalse/compare.
The Sonnets and Narrative Poems: The Complete Non-Dramatic Poetry.SylvanBarnet,ed. SignetClassic,PenquinBooks,NewYork,1989.Print.
problem resolved
in couplet
thesis: problem
establishedand
discussed in octave
sestetshifts
in tone, slightly
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Rhyme scheme || Meter
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Sonnet Types
revised 04.19.13 || English 1302: Composition & Rhetoric II || D. Glen Smith, instructor
Sonnet 130: “My Mistress’ Eyes Are Nothing Like The Sun”
• Thefirstlineisironicinthesensethatallofthepoemsaddressingthe
YoungMancomparehimtothesun,orassertheisasbeautifulasApollo,
theGreeksun-god;theDarkLadyisofoppositecharacterization.
• Thefullpoemexplainsthecontrastofidealismandreality.
• Thesonnetendswithanassertionthathisbelovedisasbeautifulasany
thathasbeenfalselycomplimentedbyotherpoets.
A slight rewording of the final couplet for modern clarification:
Andyet,Iswearbyheaven,Ithinkmyloveisrare
Asanyshe(that is:anyotherwoman)misrepresentedwithfalsecompliments.
Theword“compare”inthiscaseisbeingusedbythePoetasanounnotaverb.
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IfyoucomparetheDarkLadyagainstthecharacterizationofPertrarch’sLaura,
yougetacollectionofextremecontrastingelements.
Laura: Dark Lady:
beautiful average
blonde/blueeyes brunette/browneyes
pale,fairskin olivetones
artificialidealism realisticbeauty
icon/outofreach/goddess downtoearth/obtainable/mortal