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Organizing and Revising Essays
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The Writing Process
• Planning• Shaping• Drafting• Revising• Editing• Proofreading
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Planning:Research and Note Taking
• Generate ideas– Freewriting and brain storming
• (Focus on your topic if you have one)– 5 W’s and an “H”– Make a list of topical thoughts/questions
• Take notes– Computer database– Note cards
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Shaping:Organizing Your Information
• Grouping Information– Outlines
• Working outline• Sentence outline/topical outline
– Clustering• Grouping
– General ~> Specific
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Drafting:Writing the Essay
• Introduction– Grabs audience’s attention– Contains the thesis
• Thesis– States essay’s topic, purpose, point of view
• Specific, powerful words ~> not general or vague– May change during revision process
• Probable that it will
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Drafting:Writing the Essay (cont.)
• Body paragraphs– Claim/argument– Counterclaim/counterargument
• Conclusion– Ties essay together
• May restate thesis (not verbatim)• May restate main points of essay (not verbatim)
– Gives a satisfying ending– Furthers introduction
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Revising:Reviewing the Draft
• Catchy introduction?• Clear and specific thesis?• Transitions
– Transitions for each paragraph?– Smooth and free flowing?– Tie contiguous paragraphs together?
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Revising:Reviewing the Draft (cont.)
• Topic sentences– Make sense when read together?– Support thesis?– Logical order?
• Supporting sentences– Support topic sentence?– Logical order?
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Revising:Reviewing the Draft (cont.)
• Conclusion– Complements introduction when read
together?– Furthers ideas in essay?– Ties essay together?– Provides a satisfying ending?
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Revising:Reviewing the Draft (cont.)
• General tips– REVISION TAKES TIME!– Plan to write at least three drafts
• 1st draft… Focus on the BIG stuff– Overall organization of essay– May revisit this step several times
• 2nd draft… Concentrate your efforts– Edit
• 3rd draft… Get nitpicky– Proofread
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Editing:Punctuation, Grammar, Spelling, Mechanics
• Check:– Spelling– Grammar– Subject/verb agreement
• Search for PERFECT word– Dictionary– Thesaurus
• Search for strong verbs • Cut extraneous material
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Proofreading:Final Check
• Take a break before proofing.• Do not rush it.• Read your essay aloud.• Read your essay slowly.• Have an unbiased pair of eyes look your
essay over. (The CTL!)
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Some General Tips
• Always take time between revision sessions to distance yourself from your work.
• Ask instructors/unbiased readers (CTL) what mistakes YOU commonly make and then LOOK FOR THOSE when revising.
• Use hard copies to revise.