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Page 1: CRACKING - Garlinge Primary · Teaching and Assessment Guide CRACKING COMPREHENSION Kate Ruttle Year 4 452602_FM_CC_2e_Y4_001-007.indd 1 06/03/19 8:19 AM

Teaching and Assessment Guide

CRACKING COMPREHENSION

Kate Ruttle

Year 4

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ContentsHow to use this resource . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4

Introduction to Cracking Comprehension . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6

FICTION

Unit Teaching/Practice Title Page

1 Teaching text The Children of Green Knowe – Lucy M. Boston 8

Practice text War Boy – Michael Foreman 12

2 Teaching text The Diary of a Killer Cat – Anne Fine 16

Practice text Harriet’s Hare – Dick King-Smith 20

3 Teaching text The Scroll of Alexandria: A Lottie Lipton Adventure – Dan Metcalf 24

Practice text The Better Brown Stories – Allan Ahlberg 28

4 Teaching text Mackerel and Chips – Michael Morpurgo 32

Practice text Oliver Twist’s Childhood – Charles Dickens 36

5 Teaching text Charlotte’s Web – E.B. White 40

Practice text Stuart Little – E.B. White 44

6 Teaching text How to Train Your Dragon – Cressida Cowell 48

Practice text How to Train Your Dragon – Cressida Cowell 52

7 Teaching text An Egyptian Myth – Kate Ruttle 56

Practice text A Korean Myth – Kate Ruttle 60

NON-FICTION

Unit Teaching/Practice Title Page

8 Teaching text Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough? – Anna Claybourne 66

Practice text Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough? – Anna Claybourne 70

9 Teaching text Are You Wasting Good Food? – Kate Ruttle 74

Practice text Would You Eat Less-Than-Perfect Fruit and Vegetables? – Kate Ruttle 78

10 Teaching text What Is a Robot? – Kate Ruttle 82

Practice text Robots in Films and TV Programmes – Kate Ruttle 86

11 Teaching text The Battle of Britain – Gillian Clements 90

Practice text Dunkirk – Kate Ruttle 94

12 Teaching text Epic: Animal Migrations – Camilla de la Bédoyère 98

Practice text Epic: Animal Migrations – Camilla de la Bédoyère 102

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POETRY

Unit Teaching/Practice Title Page

13 Teaching text Childhood Tracks – James Berry 106

Practice text Hot Food – Michael Rosen 110

14 Teaching text A Small Dragon – Brian Patten 114

Practice text The Spirit of Place – Richard Brown 118

15 Teaching text The Kitten at Play – William Wordsworth 122

Practice text Letting in the Light – Elizabeth Lindsay 126

ASSESSMENT TASKS

Fiction

Task 1: The Pudding Like a Night on the Sea – Ann Cameron 130

Task 2: The Green Ship – Quentin Blake 134

Task 3: The Little Ghost – Otfried Preussler 138

Task 4: Cliffhanger – Jacqueline Wilson 142

Non-fiction

Task 5: Homesick Bugsy the Beagle 146

Task 6: Rocket Balloon 150

Task 7: Mummies 154

Poetry

Task 8: A Dream of Elephants – Tony Mitton 158

Task 9: Daddy Fell into the Pond – Alfred Noyes 162

Answers to Assessment Tasks. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 166

Content Domains . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 169

Content Domain Coverage . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 170

l The Interactive Modelling Software

l All teaching notes

l Teaching text questions

l Progress Task sheets for all Assessment Tasks

Don’t forget to log on to My Rising Stars to access:

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4 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

1 Give the children copies of the Teaching text and questions so that they can apply the strategies they learned in the previous session. (These can be found in the home screen for each unit, by clicking the Teaching text button.)

2 Ask the children to work independently and give their own answers.

3 In the Question zap tab, select a question. Move to the Crack it tab, and click Check it to review the model answer. Repeat for each question. Allow the children to mark their own work as you review each model answer. You can also check answers and strategies in the Teacher’s Guide.

4 Encourage discussion so that the children can compare their own answers to the model answer. There may be alternative possible ‘correct’ answers for each question.

1 Introduce the unit by sharing the Key text features and Reading the Teaching text questions in the Teacher’s Guide.

2 Use the Read tab text in the Interactive Modelling Software to introduce the Teaching text. Press the play button to listen to the audio. The Listening comprehension questions will be shown on screen. If you prefer, you can read the text yourself.

How to use this resourceIntroduce, Listen and Read

1 In the Question zap tab, click on the first question to open it.

2 Zap the question: Teach children how to interpret the question:

“What is being asked?”

“Which reading strategies will be needed to find the answer?”

Use the on-screen tools to highlight key words in the question.

Answers and strategies are supplied in the Teacher’s Guide.

3 In the Text search tab, use the on-screen tools to highlight any pieces of text that are relevant to the question. Click Copy to Crack it to transfer this text to the evidence section of the Crack it tab.

4 In the Crack it tab, use the copied text in the Evidence section to write an answer. Compare this with the model answer given in the Teacher’s Guide and encourage the children to discuss and consider the relative merits of their own answers and the model answer.

Model

Apply

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1 Revisit the key strategies taught using the Teaching text, and then distribute photocopies of the Practice text, and Practice text questions, for children to practise answering the questions, using and applying the strategies taught. (These can be found in the home screen for each unit, by clicking the Practice text button, and in the Teacher’s Guide.)

2 Display the Practice text tab in the Interactive Modelling Software. Use the strategies suggested in the Teacher’s Guide to mark and discuss the children’s answers. Let children mark their own work, although you will want to monitor their answers as part of your ongoing assessment procedures.

Children can extend their learning, either through writing (see Moving into writing) or through developing further reading pathways (see Extending reading). Brief suggestions for both of these routes are included in each unit of the Teacher’s Guide. It is anticipated you will use your professional understanding of effective ways to teach reading and writing if you follow the suggestions.

1 Introduce the Assessment Tasks through class discussion so that children are clear what they are being asked to do. If appropriate, display the text in the Interactive Modelling Software and read it out. If the text is a playscript or a poem which lends itself well to being read aloud, encourage children to enact some or all of the text over the course of the assessment.

2 Provide each child with the question sheet.

3 Circulate throughout the task, offering support or challenge as necessary. Allow verbal responses, where required, to enable you to assess understanding independently of reading accuracy.

Practise

Extend

Assess

Unit 4 • FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page 37

Name:

Class: Date:1 Why was Oliver sent to a baby-farm?

2 In this text, what do you think the “baby-farm” was? Tick one. a farm where babies were grown

□ a building where people went to choose a baby to adopt □

a building where orphaned babies were allowed to grow up □ a health farm where people went to have their babies □

3 “She kindly kept most of the money and managed to raise her young crop of orphans on even

less than the parish provided for them.” Do you think it was kind of her? Explain your answer.4 Do you think Oliver was happy at the baby-farm? Explain your answer fully using ideas from

the text.

5 List two things that happened to Oliver on his ninth birthday.6 “Goodness gracious! Is that you, Mr Bumble, sir?” said Mrs Mann, thrusting her head out of the

window. “(Susan, take Oliver and them two other brats upstairs, and wash ‘em directly.) Well

Mr Bumble, how glad I am to see you!” (paragraph 5) Why did the author use brackets in direct speech?

7 Why do you think Mrs Mann wants Oliver and the other two boys to be taken out of the cellar?8 Based on what you have read so far, tick the statement that is the best prediction of what

happens just after Oliver is taken to see Mr Bumble. Tick one. He is adopted by a loving family.

□ He is taken to a workhouse, where he is treated even more cruelly. □

Mr Bumble is angry with Mrs Mann because Oliver is so thin. □ Mr Bumble likes Oliver and takes him home with him.

□9 This story was originally written over 100 years ago. List two ideas from the text that show it is

not set in the 21st century.

1 mark

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

2d

1 mark

2e

2 marks

2f

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

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6 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Introduction to Cracking Comprehensionn What is Cracking Comprehension?Cracking Comprehension is a step-by-step resource to improve the comprehension skills of children aged 5–11 years old. It teaches children the skills and strategies they need to successfully explain their understanding of a wide range of texts, and offers ideas to extend their enjoyment of, and engagement with, reading.

The Interactive Modelling Software and this Teacher’s Guide will help children to develop the techniques to answer the types of questions asked in the Key Stage 2 National Test for Reading, and help you to deliver the 2014 National Curriculum for English, including the harder question paper which requires more in-depth understanding.

The Assessment Tasks provide a range of assessment for learning (AfL) activities for reading comprehension within the new Primary National Curriculum for Key Stage 2 English. These tasks can be used alongside the teaching units or as stand-alone assessment tasks.

Cracking Comprehension comprises both this Teacher’s Guide and online access to the Interactive Modelling Software and printable resources on My Rising Stars at www.risingstars-uk.com. The icon, used throughout this book, highlights where access to online content is required.

The online access at My Rising Stars provides interactive tools and pupil quizzes for modelling and practice. The Interactive Modelling Software helps teachers and children model key reading skills, and can be followed by the pupil quizzes, where children can practise the skills acquired independently, at home or in small working groups. The online pupil quizzes can be used to track and monitor progress, using the reporting and progress area.

n What is in it?Cracking Comprehension offers 15 comprehension units and nine Assessment Tasks for each year organised by text type (fiction, non-fiction, playscripts and poetry), and includes full teacher and assessment guidance.

The units have been chosen to support the expectations of the new National Curriculum for Key Stage 2 English. The texts can also be used as resources to complement your wider teaching.

n Cracking Comprehension and the National Curriculum for English

The 2016 test framework recognises eight ‘content domains’ which can be assessed in reading tests and which primarily interrogate the reading comprehension objectives of the national curriculum.

The table on pages 170–171 gives a summary of content domain coverage for each comprehension unit and assessment task.

n How do I use the teaching units?The pathway through each Cracking Comprehension unit is flexible, according to the specific needs of you and your children. (See How to use this resource on pages 4–5 for a suggested learning pathway.) Whether you choose to teach a comprehension lesson every day for a week, weekly over a half-term or for a focused half day per half-term is your choice. The range of content domains practised during each unit is clearly indicated. This gives you the opportunity to decide which assessable elements you want the children to practise.

n How do I use the Assessment Tasks?The tasks are not tests and are therefore not carried out under test conditions. Children may work on the tasks individually, in pairs or in groups. The tasks encourage a variety of activities including reading out loud, learning by heart and performance, all of which are emphasised in the new curriculum. The tasks may be used in any order.

There are no hard-and-fast time limits for these tasks, and some children may need more time than others. Tasks involving performance will need a greater time allowance than others. We suggest one-and-a-half to two hours on average.

Gathering and using evidence for diagnostic assessment

The outcomes for each task supply evidence for the regular review of children’s progress in reading. The teacher notes provide a question-by-question breakdown giving examples of likely outcomes for each question at three standards of achievement: children working towards the expected standard, at the expected standard and those working at greater depth within the expected standard.

For maximum flexibility, the tasks are designed to be administered in any order, and so a single benchmark standard is required. The benchmark used in all the tasks is the expected standard at the end of the year. As children typically make significant progress over the course of the year, you will need to take this into account when assessing children against expected progress, particularly for any tasks children attempt during the first half of the academic year.

The questions for each task focus on several content domains from the new programme of study.

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Introduction to Cracking Comprehension

Support for assessment for learning

A simple, tick-based pupil self-assessment sheet for each Assessment Task can be found on My Rising Stars. Use this after the task, to give children the opportunity to reflect on what they can do. Begin by discussing the questions with the class, and then give children an opportunity to fill in the sheets individually. Those struggling with reading may need individual help to fill in their sheets.

Use the self-assessment sheets, together with your own assessment of each child’s attainment in the task, to set future targets for reading. A child’s completed self-assessment sheet could form the focus of a meeting you have with them about their reading targets.

n Using Cracking Comprehension with other resources

Cracking Comprehension can be used as a stand-alone resource for teaching reading comprehension, or together with other Rising Stars resources to support your classroom teaching and improve outcomes for the children in your class. Detailed mapping documents, which provide further detail on how Cracking Comprehension content can be used successfully with some of the resources listed below, can be found on My Rising Stars.

Progress in Reading Assessment (PiRA)

PiRA is the best-selling stand-alone reading test which can be used to track children’s progress from one term to the next, throughout Key Stages 1 and 2. Cracking Comprehension is an ideal teaching tool to ensure good progress through PiRA because the texts are of a similar length and demand, and the range and presentation of questions are based on those used

in the National Tests. Strategies that are learned and practised in Cracking Comprehension are all appropriate and useful for PiRA.

On Track Comprehension

On Track Comprehension is a structured intervention programme for children in Key Stage 2 who are falling behind in comprehension. One of the key areas of focus for On Track Comprehension is developing vocabulary and skills for working out the meaning of words. This is in response to research which shows that a more limited vocabulary is one of the biggest barriers to accurate comprehension for many children. On Track Comprehension also provides opportunities for children to respond to texts orally, before they record written answers.

Cracking Writing

Cracking Writing units can be used as extension tasks for Cracking Comprehension. Each of the Cracking Writing units is closely related to a Cracking Comprehension unit and includes comprehension questions before going on to use the text extract as a model for writing. Grammar is extensively taught in context in the units.

Read in to Writing

In addition to one-off comprehension tasks based on short texts and text extracts, many schools are now opting to read full-length books together, in order to give children opportunities to read and respond to entire good-quality texts. Extracts from some of these texts, or related to the texts, are used in Cracking Comprehension in order to build children’s familiarity with the texts.

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• FICTION

8 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 1FICTION

The Children of Green Knowe/War BoyLucy M. Boston/Michael Foreman

Key text features

The texts present different views of children and childhood.

l The Teaching text is an extract from the beginning of The Children of Green Knowe by Lucy M. Boston.

l The Practice text is an extract from War Boy by Michael Foreman.

Reading the Teaching text: The Children of Green Knowe

l Introduce the text by explaining that the extract is from the beginning of a book that was first published in 1954. Tolly has come to stay with his grandmother at Green Knowe, a house that has been in her family for generations. It is his first time at the house and the land is flooded when he arrives.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract aloud.

l After listening to the story, talk about the children’s impressions of each of the characters.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 10–11).

Reading the Practice text: War Boy

l Before they read the story, ask the children what they know about the Second World War. Discuss growing up during the Second World War. How might it be different from today?

l Once they have read the story, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the beginning of War Boy, talking about the choice of anecdote that the author made.

l Ask the children to think about their own experiences. If they were to choose one anecdote about something that happened (or almost happened, or they wish had happened) in their lives, what would it be?

l Allow them to tell partners about their anecdote and encourage partners to ask questions.

l Reread the extract and discuss key points of first-person storytelling before the children begin to write.

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Unit 1 • FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 9

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Iggy and Me – Jenny Valentine

The Fish in Room 11 – Heather Dyer

Voices in the Park – Anthony Browne

Invisible Vinnie – Jenny Nimmo

The Marble Crusher – Michael Morpurgo

Extending reading

Q1: What do you think Tolly would see if he looked out of the window when it wasn’t flooded?

A1: A garden/lawns and flower beds/grass

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text.

Q2: What is the Linnet? How old is this one?

A2: A boat: this one is no more than 20 years old.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text.

Q3: Who do you think Toby might be?

A3: Tolly’s grandfather – the one who he looks very like

Strategy: Listen again to the whole text, noting words and phrases which answer the question.

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Unit 1 • FICTION

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Unit 1 • FICTION

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n ov

er 6

0 ye

ars

ago.

Fi

nd o

ne p

iece

of e

vide

nce

that

sh

ows

that

the

sett

ing

for t

he s

tory

is

not

mod

ern

times

.

Acce

pt a

ny o

f:

•Th

e ch

ild is

cal

led

Mas

ter T

osel

and.

•M

r Bog

gis

is a

lso c

alle

d Bo

ggis

.•

Gre

at-G

rand

mot

her i

s ca

lled

“ma’

am”

(par

agra

ph 7

).•

cutt

ing

woo

d/lo

gs fo

r the

fire

•la

ngua

ge s

uch

as “l

east

way

s” (p

arag

raph

 7)

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e te

xt lo

okin

g fo

r ide

as, o

bjec

ts, w

ords

or w

ays

of th

inki

ng

that

are

not

com

mon

ly u

sed

toda

y.

6.

Choo

se fo

ur o

f the

se s

tate

men

ts to

cr

eate

a s

umm

ary

of th

e st

ory

so

far.

□ T

he fl

oods

wer

e be

ginn

ing

to g

o do

wn.

□ T

olly

cou

ld s

ee th

e sh

apes

of l

awns

in

the

rippl

es o

f the

floo

d.

□ T

olly

com

es d

owns

tairs

for l

unch

.

□ B

oggi

s br

ings

in lo

gs fo

r the

fire

.

□ H

e st

acks

them

bes

ide

the

ingl

enoo

k fir

epla

ce.

□ T

here

’s a

lway

s a

Linn

et o

n th

e riv

er.

□ B

oggi

s bo

rrow

s bo

ots

from

his

ni

ece

who

se b

oy is

in h

ospi

tal.

□ B

oggi

s gi

ves

Tolly

boo

ts to

wea

r.

□ M

rs O

ldkn

ow c

alls

Tolly

“Tob

y”.

□ T

olly

goe

s w

ith B

oggi

s to

the

barn

.

Acce

pt a

ny fo

ur o

f:

•Th

e flo

ods

wer

e be

ginn

ing

to g

o do

wn.

•Bo

ggis

brin

gs in

logs

for t

he fi

re.

•Bo

ggis

giv

es T

olly

boo

ts to

wea

r.•

Mrs

Old

know

cal

ls To

lly “T

oby”

.•

Tolly

goe

s w

ith B

oggi

s to

the

barn

.

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt w

hile

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Re

ad th

e st

atem

ents

and

dec

ide

whi

ch a

re m

ost u

sefu

l to

sum

mar

ise

the

stor

y so

far.

Rem

embe

r to

tick

four

.

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Unit 1 • FICTION

12 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

War BoyMichael Foreman

I woke up when the bomb came through my roof. It came through at an angle, overflew my bed by inches, bounced up over my mother’s bed, hit the mirror, dropped into the grate and exploded up the chimney. It was an incendiary. A fire-bomb.

My brother Ivan appeared in pyjamas and his Home Guard tin hat. Being in the Home Guard, he had ensured that all the rooms in our house were stuffed with sandbags. Ivan threw sand over the bomb but the dry sand kept sliding off. He threw the hearthrug over the bomb and jumped up and down on it, until brother Pud arrived with a bucket of wet sand from the yard. This did the trick.

Mother grabbed me from the bed. The night sky was filled with lights. Searchlights, anti-aircraft fire, stars and a bombers’ moon. The sky bounced as my mother ran. Just as we reached our dug-out across the street, the sky flared red as the church exploded.

1

5

11

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Unit 1 • FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page 13

1 Where was the narrator just before this story begins?

2 “I woke up when the bomb came through my roof.” (paragraph 1)

Why do you think the author began the story with this sentence?

3 “It was an incendiary. A fire-bomb.” (paragraph 1)

Why do you think the author added the information telling you what kind of bomb it was?

4 The Home Guard were not soldiers but they were trained to keep people in towns and cities safe.

How did being in the Home Guard help Ivan and Pud to keep the family safe?

5 How do you think Ivan felt when he was throwing sand on the bomb?

Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

6 Do you think it was dark outside?

Yes □ No □ Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

7 “the sky flared red as the church exploded.”

Suggest a different word with a similar meaning that the author could have used instead of “flared”.

8 The setting for this story is in 1940.

Find two more pieces of evidence that show that the setting is during a war.

9 Do you think the narrator was an adult or a child when this event happened?

Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2f

1 mark

2g

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2f

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

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14 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 1 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: War

Boy

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Whe

re w

as th

e na

rrato

r jus

t bef

ore

this

sto

ry b

egin

s?in

bed

/asle

ep2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt.

2.

“I w

oke

up w

hen

the

bom

b ca

me

thro

ugh

my

roof

.” (p

arag

raph

1)

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or b

egan

th

e st

ory

with

this

sen

tenc

e?

•It

is a

n ex

citin

g/su

rpris

ing

begi

nnin

g.•

It m

akes

you

wan

t to

find

out w

hat h

appe

ns

next

.•

It is

the

begi

nnin

g of

the

adve

ntur

e he

is

writ

ing

abou

t.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

why

the

auth

or m

ight

hav

e m

ade

that

dec

isio

n.

3.

“It w

as a

n in

cend

iary

. A fi

re-b

omb.

” (p

arag

raph

1)

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or a

dded

th

e in

form

atio

n te

lling

you

wha

t ki

nd o

f bom

b it

was

?

in c

ase

the

read

er d

idn’

t kno

w w

hat a

n in

cend

iary

was

/to

emph

asis

e th

e po

int

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt.

•Co

nsid

er re

ason

s w

hy th

e au

thor

mig

ht h

ave

chos

en to

use

this

lang

uage

.

4.

The

Hom

e G

uard

wer

e no

t sol

dier

s bu

t the

y w

ere

trai

ned

to k

eep

peop

le in

tow

ns a

nd c

ities

saf

e.

H

ow d

id b

eing

in th

e H

ome

Gua

rd

help

Ivan

and

Pud

to k

eep

the

fam

ily s

afe?

•Al

l the

room

s in

the

hous

e w

ere

stuf

fed

with

sa

ndba

gs.

•Th

ey k

new

how

to d

eal w

ith th

e bo

mb.

•Pu

d us

ed w

et s

and

to p

ut th

e bo

mb

out.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for m

entio

n of

the

Hom

e G

uard

.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt.

5.

How

do

you

thin

k Iv

an fe

lt w

hen

he

was

thro

win

g sa

nd o

n th

e bo

mb?

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

•fr

ustr

ated

/ang

ry/c

ross

bec

ause

the

sand

ke

pt s

lippi

ng o

ff•

wor

ried/

anxi

ous

beca

use

it w

as in

the

sam

e ro

om a

s hi

s m

othe

r and

bro

ther

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

the

answ

er w

ill b

e.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt.

•U

se y

our o

wn

expe

rienc

e an

d em

path

y to

ans

wer

the

ques

tion.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r rec

ogni

tion

of th

e fe

elin

g an

d an

othe

r for

an

expl

anat

ion

whi

ch re

late

s to

info

rmat

ion

give

n in

the

text

.

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Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 15

Unit 1 • FICTION

6.

Do

you

thin

k it

was

dar

k ou

tsid

e?

□ Y

es

□ N

o

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

Yes

•It

was

nig

ht ti

me.

•Th

ey w

ere

in b

ed.

•Iv

an w

as w

earin

g hi

s py

jam

as.

No

•Th

e ni

ght s

ky w

as fi

lled

with

ligh

t (“fl

ared

re

d” li

ne 1

5).

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

the

answ

er w

ill b

e.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt.

Ther

e is

no

mar

k fo

r the

firs

t par

t of t

he q

uest

ion.

7.

“the

sky

flare

d re

d as

the

chur

ch

expl

oded

.”

Su

gges

t a d

iffer

ent w

ord

with

a

sim

ilar m

eani

ng th

at th

e au

thor

co

uld

have

use

d in

stea

d of

“flar

ed”.

Acce

pt s

ugge

stio

ns s

uch

as g

low

ed, b

urne

d,

blaz

ed, fl

ashe

d, s

park

ed, fl

amed

.2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

giv

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

con

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Scan

the

text

look

ing

for r

elev

ant w

ords

and

info

rmat

ion.

8.

The

sett

ing

for t

his

stor

y is

in 1

940.

Fi

nd tw

o m

ore

piec

es o

f evi

denc

e th

at s

how

that

the

sett

ing

is d

urin

g a

war

.

•Th

ere’

s an

ince

ndia

ry b

omb.

•Th

e H

ome

Gua

rd.

Men

tion

of:

•sa

ndba

gs in

the

hous

e•

sear

chlig

hts/

sky

fille

d w

ith li

ghts

•an

ti-ai

rcra

ft fi

re•

an in

cend

iary

bom

b•

the

Hom

e G

uard

•a

bom

bers

’ moo

n•

a du

g-ou

t•

the

chur

ch e

xplo

ded.

2f 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for e

vide

nce

of a

war

-tim

e se

ttin

g.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

9.

Do

you

thin

k th

e na

rrato

r was

an

adul

t or a

chi

ld w

hen

this

eve

nt

happ

ened

?

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

a ch

ild:

•H

e is

sle

epin

g in

the

sam

e ro

om a

s hi

s m

othe

r.•

He

is n

ot h

elpi

ng h

is b

roth

ers

to p

ut th

e bo

mb

out.

•It

say

s “m

othe

r gra

bbed

me

from

the

bed”

.•

It s

ays

“the

sky

boun

ced

as m

y m

othe

r ran

”, w

hich

sho

ws

that

she

was

car

ryin

g hi

m.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

for a

n ov

eral

l im

pres

sion

.•

Scan

it fo

r spe

cific

det

ails.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r rec

ogni

tion

that

the

auth

or w

as a

chi

ld.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r evi

denc

e fr

om th

e te

xt fo

r thi

s.

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• FICTION

16 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 2FICTION

The Diary of a Killer Cat/Harriet’s HareAnne Fine/Dick King-Smith

Key text features

Both texts are extracts from books which feature talking animals.

l The Diary of a Killer Cat, by former children’s laureate Anne Fine, is written as a first-person narrative by a killer cat.

l The award-winning Harriet’s Hare, by Dick King-Smith, is about a young girl’s encounter with a talking hare from outer space.

Reading the Teaching text: The Diary of a Killer Cat

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit.

l Introduce the text by showing the title and author. Is Anne Fine familiar to any of the children?

l Talk about the title and establish expectations.

l Read the extract aloud to the children and discuss it against their predictions.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 18–19).

Reading the Practice text: Harriet’s Hare

l Before you read the text, tell the children the name of the author. Do they recognise it?

l Show the children pictures of crop circles. Discuss how they might have been made.

l Once they have read the text, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the extract from The Diary of a Killer Cat.

l Give the children the chance to explore more about the character of the cat, based on drama activities such as hot-seating.

l Let the children work in groups to discuss other things that the Killer Cat might get up to – and to work out the cat’s responses.

l Ask the children to write another adventure of the Killer Cat.

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Unit 2 • FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 17

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Finger Eater – Dick King-Smith

The Legend of Captain Crow’s Teeth – Eoin Colfer

The Dragonsitter – Josh Lacey

Extending reading

Q1: What was on the notice at the top of the cat’s case notes?

A1: “HANDLE WITH CARE”

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text.

Q2: How many other animals are mentioned in the text?

A2: Two: the Rottweiler and the baby gerbil

Strategy: Listen carefully to the whole text. Jot down references to animals.

Q3: What does the cat mean by “And neither can anyone else round here” (paragraph 4)?

A3: The people in the room couldn’t take a joke either/got cross with him.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text.

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18 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 2 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: The

Dia

ry o

f a K

iller

Cat

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

“I w

as st

ill q

uite

susp

icio

us w

hen

we

reac

hed

the

desk

.”

Su

gges

t ano

ther

wor

d to

repl

ace

“s

uspi

ciou

s” th

at k

eeps

the

sam

e m

eani

ng.

Acce

pt w

ords

or p

hras

es s

uch

as d

isbe

lievi

ng,

war

y, d

oubt

ful,

cage

y, d

ubio

us, u

nsur

e w

hat

was

goi

ng o

n.

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

give

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

to re

ad th

e se

nten

ce in

con

text

.•

Cons

ider

the

mea

ning

of t

he w

ord

to b

e re

plac

ed.

2.

“So

I was

a li

ttle

rude

in th

e w

aitin

g ro

om.

So

wha

t? I

hate

wai

ting.

” (p

arag

raph

2)

U

nder

line

the

wor

ds th

at te

ll yo

u th

at th

e na

rrato

r isn

’t s

orry

for

bein

g ru

de in

the

wai

ting

room

.

“So

wha

t”2g 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

.•

Rere

ad th

e qu

estio

n an

d th

ink

abou

t the

mea

ning

of t

he w

ords

.

3.

Wha

t is

the

mai

n id

ea o

f the

se

cond

par

agra

ph?

Choo

se th

e be

st a

nsw

er.

□ I

was

sitt

ing

quie

tly a

nd th

e ba

by

gerb

il w

ound

me

up. I

did

n’t m

ean

any

harm

.

□ I

was

bor

ed s

o I s

tart

ed to

look

ar

ound

for s

omet

hing

to d

o.

□ I

was

alre

ady

cros

s an

d si

ttin

g in

th

e ca

ge m

ade

me

even

cro

sser

.

□ I

was

bor

ed a

nd c

ross

and

thou

ght

I wou

ld te

ase

my

neig

hbou

r.

I was

bor

ed a

nd c

ross

and

thou

ght I

’d te

ase

my

neig

hbou

r.2c 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

.•

Com

pare

the

info

rmat

ion

in th

e te

xt w

ith th

e qu

estio

n op

tions

.

4.

The

cat c

ompl

ains

that

bab

y ge

rbils

can

not t

ake

a jo

ke.

W

hat w

as th

e ca

t doi

ng th

at h

e m

ight

thin

k w

as a

joke

?

licki

ng h

is li

ps a

nd p

rete

ndin

g to

eat

the

gerb

il2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

.

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Unit 2 • FICTION

5.

The

cat o

ften

exa

gger

ates

(mak

es

thin

gs s

ound

mor

e dr

amat

ic th

an

they

real

ly a

re).

Giv

e tw

o ex

ampl

es

from

the

text

.

Exam

ples

:

•“a

litt

le ru

de” (

para

grap

h 2)

•“a

few

hun

dred

min

utes

” (pa

ragr

aph

2)•

“hal

f to

deat

h” (p

arag

raph

2)

•“H

ones

tly” (

para

grap

h 3)

Also

acc

ept:

•“n

o re

ason

on

eart

h” (p

arag

raph

1)

•“t

he o

nly

reas

on” (

para

grap

h 1)

2g 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

look

ing

for w

ords

and

phr

ases

whi

ch e

xagg

erat

e.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h ex

ampl

e gi

ven,

up

to 2

mar

ks.

6.

Whi

ch o

f the

follo

win

g is

the

mos

t lik

ely

to h

appe

n w

hen

the

cat g

ets

in to

see

the

vet?

Cho

ose

one.

□ T

he c

at w

ill h

iss

and

try

to s

crat

ch

the

vet.

□ T

he c

at w

ill re

fuse

to le

ave

its c

age.

□ T

he c

at w

ill b

e pu

rrin

g to

sho

w it

is

happ

y.

□ T

he c

at w

ill s

leep

pea

cefu

lly d

urin

g th

e ap

poin

tmen

t.

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er.

The

cat w

ill h

iss

and

try

to s

crat

ch th

e ve

t.

Acce

pt e

xpla

natio

ns th

at re

fer t

o th

e ca

t’s

beha

viou

r ear

lier i

n th

e ex

trac

t. E.

g.

•Th

e w

ords

“Kill

er C

at” a

re in

the

title

, so

he

is n

ot a

gen

tle c

at.

•Th

e ca

t has

trie

d to

frig

hten

eve

ryon

e el

se it

ha

s m

et s

o fa

r.•

The

cat h

as “H

andl

e w

ith C

are”

writ

ten

on

its c

ase

note

s be

caus

e it

is d

ange

rous

.

2e 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pred

ict w

hat m

ight

hap

pen

from

det

ails

stat

ed a

nd im

plie

d.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt w

hile

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r wor

ds o

r ide

as to

use

in y

our a

nsw

er.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r the

firs

t par

t of t

he q

uest

ion

(an

accu

rate

pre

dict

ion)

and

th

e se

cond

mar

k fo

r an

expl

anat

ion

whi

ch re

fers

bac

k to

oth

er e

vent

s in

the

text

.

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Unit 2 • FICTION

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Harriet’s HareDick King-Smith

Harriet walked into the middle of the circle. It was big, perhaps twenty metres across, and all the corn in it was squashed down to the ground, flat, as though an enormously heavy weight had rested there.

As she stood there now, in the stillness, with no sound but distant birdsong, a hare suddenly came out into the corn circle and stopped and sat up. It turned its head a little sideways, the better to see her.

Harriet stood stock-still. Aren’t you handsome, she thought, with your tawny coat and your black-tipped ears and your long hind legs. Don’t run away. I won’t hurt you.

For a moment the hare stayed where it was, watching her. Then, to her great surprise, it lolloped right up to her.

Surprise is one thing, but total amazement is quite another, and that was what Harriet next felt when all of a sudden the hare said, loudly and clearly, “Good morning.”

Harriet pinched herself, hard. Wake up, she thought. This whole thing is a dream, hares don’t talk, and then she said it aloud: “Hares don’t talk.”

“I’m sure they don’t as a general rule,” said the hare, “but I’m a rather unusual hare.”

“You certainly are,” said Harriet. “Are you anything to do with this corn circle?”

For a moment the hare didn’t answer but fell to grooming its face. Then it said, “What’s your name?”

“Harriet.”

“Can you keep a secret, Harriet?”

“Yes.”

“I,” said the hare, “am a visitor from outer space.”

“You mean … this circle was made by your spacecraft?”

“Yes.”

“So you come from another planet.”

“Yes, I come from Pars.”

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4

7

10

12

15

17

21

23

24

25

26

27

28

29

30

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Unit 2 • FICTION

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Name: Class: Date:

1 What was Harriet’s first thought about why the corn was squashed flat?

2 “a hare suddenly came out into the corn circle and stopped and sat up.” (paragraph 2)

Why do you think the author used the word “suddenly”?

3 “Harriet stood stock-still.”

What do the underlined words mean in this sentence?

4 The author uses three adjectives to describe the hare. Draw lines to match the adjective and the part of the hare’s body.

long coat

tawny ears

black-tipped legs

5 “Then, to her great surprise, it lolloped up to her.”

a) Tick the words or word that you think are closest in meaning to the underlined word.

bounded □ moved slowly □ inched towards her □ b) Why do you think the writer used the original word and not one of these synonyms?

6 Number these events to show the order in which they happened.

The hare spoke. Harriet saw the hare.

Harriet pinched herself. Harriet stood on the flattened corn.

7 Harriet asked if the hare had anything to do with the corn circle. Why did it not answer immediately?

8 Why do you think Harriet pinched herself?

9 Do you think Harriet will keep the secret?

Yes □ No □ Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2a

2 marks

2a/2g

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2e

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2c

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Unit 2 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Har

riet’

s H

are

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

W

hat w

as H

arrie

t’s

first

thou

ght

abou

t why

the

corn

was

squ

ashe

d fla

t?

an “e

norm

ously

hea

vy w

eigh

t had

rest

ed

ther

e” (p

arag

raph

1)

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

2.

“a h

are

sudd

enly

cam

e ou

t int

o th

e co

rn c

ircle

and

stop

ped

and

sat u

p.”

(par

agra

ph 2

)

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or u

sed

the

wor

d “s

udde

nly”

?

•to

sho

w th

at it

was

a s

urpr

ise

for H

arrie

t w

hen

it ap

pear

ed•

to s

ugge

st th

at th

e ha

re w

as h

idin

g fr

om h

er

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e te

xt e

xtra

ct c

onsi

derin

g th

e im

pact

of t

he w

ord

“sud

denl

y”.

3.

“Har

riet s

tood

stoc

k-st

ill.”

W

hat d

o th

e un

derli

ned

wor

ds

mea

n in

this

sen

tenc

e?

“Sto

ck-s

till”

mea

ns u

nmov

ing,

mot

ionl

ess,

com

plet

ely/

abso

lute

ly s

till.

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

giv

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

con

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

at p

art o

f the

text

, loo

king

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

sent

ence

.

4.

The

auth

or u

ses

thre

e ad

ject

ives

to

des

crib

e th

e ha

re. D

raw

line

s to

m

atch

the

adje

ctiv

e an

d th

e pa

rt o

f th

e ha

re’s

bod

y.

(S

ee ri

ght.)

long

co

at

taw

ny

ears

blac

k-tip

ped

legs

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•M

atch

the

text

to th

e qu

estio

n.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r all

answ

ers

corr

ectly

join

ed.

5.

“The

n, to

her

gre

at su

rpris

e, it

lo

llope

d up

to h

er.”

(a

) Tic

k th

e w

ords

or w

ord

that

you

th

ink

are

clos

est i

n m

eani

ng to

the

unde

rline

d w

ord.

□ b

ound

ed

□ m

oved

slo

wly

□ i

nche

d to

war

ds h

er

(b

) Why

do

you

thin

k th

e w

riter

us

ed th

e or

igin

al w

ord

and

not o

ne

of th

ese

syno

nym

s?

(a) b

ound

ed

(b) A

ccep

t an

expl

anat

ion

such

as

the

follo

win

g:

•“lo

llope

d” d

escr

ibes

how

a h

are

mov

es w

hen

it is

n’t i

n a

hurr

y.•

The

writ

er th

ough

t tha

t “lo

llope

d” w

as a

m

ore

desc

riptiv

e w

ord.

•N

one

of th

e sy

nony

ms

mea

ns e

xact

ly th

e sa

me

as th

e or

igin

al w

ord.

2a/2

g

2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

giv

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

con

text

/exp

lain

how

mea

ning

is

enha

nced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds a

nd p

hras

es.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he s

ente

nce

in it

s co

ntex

t to

see

wha

t add

ition

al

info

rmat

ion

ther

e is

.•

Cons

ider

why

the

writ

er c

hose

to u

se th

e w

ord.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pa

rt o

f the

que

stio

n.

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Unit 2 • FICTION

6.

Num

ber t

hese

eve

nts

to s

how

the

orde

r in

whi

ch th

ey h

appe

ned.

□ T

he h

are

spok

e.

□ H

arrie

t pin

ched

her

self.

□ H

arrie

t saw

the

hare

.

□ H

arrie

t sto

od o

n th

e fla

tten

ed c

orn.

The

hare

spo

ke.

3

Har

riet p

inch

ed h

erse

lf.

4

Har

riet s

aw th

e ha

re.

2

Har

riet s

tood

on

the

flatt

ened

cor

n.

1

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

text

to re

min

d yo

urse

lf of

the

even

ts.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

.•

Whe

n yo

u ha

ve c

hose

n, s

kim

-read

the

text

aga

in to

che

ck th

e m

atch

.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks if

all

even

ts a

re c

orre

ctly

seq

uenc

ed.

Awar

d 1

mar

k if

two

even

ts a

re c

orre

ctly

iden

tified

as

cons

ecut

ive.

7.

Har

riet a

sked

if th

e ha

re h

ad

anyt

hing

to d

o w

ith th

e co

rn c

ircle

. W

hy d

id it

not

ans

wer

imm

edia

tely

?

•It

was

tryi

ng to

dec

ide

whe

ther

to tr

ust h

er.

•It

did

n’t y

et k

now

any

thin

g ab

out h

er.

•It

wan

ted

to k

now

her

nam

e fir

st.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Dec

ide

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.

8.

Why

do

you

thin

k H

arrie

t pin

ched

he

rsel

f?•

She

wan

ted

to c

heck

whe

ther

she

was

aw

ake

or d

ream

ing.

•Be

caus

e th

e ha

re s

poke

to h

er a

nd in

the

real

wor

ld h

ares

do

not s

peak

.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Dec

ide

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.

9.

Do

you

thin

k H

arrie

t will

kee

p th

e se

cret

?

□ Y

es

□ N

o

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

Yes

•Sh

e fo

und

it ha

rd to

bel

ieve

that

the

hare

w

as ta

lkin

g an

d sh

e co

uld

hear

it.

•Sh

e pr

omis

ed th

at s

he w

ould

kee

p a 

secr

et.

No

•An

yone

wou

ld w

ant t

o bo

ast a

bout

hav

ing

a ta

lkin

g ha

re fo

r a fr

iend

.•

Oth

er p

eopl

e m

ight

ask

abo

ut th

e cr

op c

ircle

an

d th

en s

he w

ould

hav

e to

tell 

them

.

2e 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pre

dict

wha

t mig

ht h

appe

n fro

m d

etai

ls st

ated

and

impl

ied.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

for a

n ov

eral

l im

pres

sion

whi

le y

ou c

onsi

der t

he

ques

tion.

•Sc

an fo

r wor

ds a

nd p

hras

es to

use

in th

e an

swer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n w

hich

mat

ches

the

yes/

no c

hoic

e.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r app

ropr

iate

quo

tatio

n fr

om/r

efer

ence

to th

e te

xt.

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• FICTION

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Unit 3FICTION

The Scroll of Alexandria: A Lottie Lipton Adventure/The Better Brown StoriesDan Metcalf/Allan Ahlberg

Key text features

The texts are both from near the beginning of books and create different portraits of children at home.

l The Teaching text is from The Scroll of Alexandria by Dan Metcalf.

l The Practice text is from The Better Brown Stories by Allan Ahlberg.

Reading the Teaching text: The Scroll of Alexandria

l Introduce the text by asking what the children know about museums and, in particular, the British Museum in London. Discuss:– why people go to museums– what you expect to find in them.

l Explain that this story is set in the British Museum in 1928.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about what might be different if this story were set today.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 26–27)

Reading the Practice text: The Better Brown Stories

l Introduce the text by asking whether the children know any other books by Allan Ahlberg. Explain that this is a group of stories about nine-year-old Brian Brown’s family.

l Once they have read the story, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the extract from The Scroll of Alexandria.

l Tell the children you want them to write about an adventure in a museum.

l In groups, ask them to make lists of all the kinds of things they might expect to find in a museum and identify one or two that might lead to an adventure.

l Invite the children to share their ideas with another group.

l In pairs, ask the children to plan and develop an idea for a story based in a museum. They should try out an idea with a different response partner before writing their story.

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Unit 3 • FICTION

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Q1: Where is Lottie at the beginning of the text?

A1: In the British Museum (Do NOT accept in the library.)

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: Why did Lottie hide in the library?

A2: Her uncle told her to./She liked being in the library.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again, thinking about why Lottie hid.

Q3: Why did Lottie come out of her hiding place?

A3: She knew the answer to the American’s question.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again, thinking about why Lottie came out of hiding.

The Lottie Lipton Adventure series – Dan Metcalf

The Secret Lake – Karen Ingles

Swallows and Amazons – Arthur Ransome

Secret Seven series – Enid Blyton

Extending reading

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Unit 3 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: The

Scr

oll o

f Ale

xand

ria: A

Lot

tie

Lipt

on A

dven

ture

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Look

at p

arag

raph

2, b

egin

ning

“T

he c

ry e

choe

d …

”.

(a

) How

did

Lot

tie fe

el w

hen

she

hear

d th

e cr

y “L

ottie

!”?

(b

) Fin

d an

d co

py o

ne w

ord

whi

ch

give

s yo

u th

is in

form

atio

n.

(a)

Acce

pt a

des

crip

tion

whi

ch im

plie

s sc

ared

/wor

ried/

anxi

ous.

(b)

Acce

pt e

ither

:

• “g

ulpe

d”•

“dar

ted”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

para

grap

h fo

r an

over

all f

eelin

g of

how

Lot

tie fe

lt.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h tr

ying

to id

entif

y w

ords

that

giv

e yo

u th

at

info

rmat

ion.

2.

Who

crie

d “L

ottie

!”?Si

r Tre

vely

an2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e te

xt, l

ooki

ng fo

r a p

laus

ible

cha

ract

er w

ho m

ay h

ave

calle

d.

3.

“Lot

tie q

uick

ly h

id h

erse

lf in

a n

ook

betw

een

som

e ne

arby

boo

kcas

es.”

W

hich

wor

d or

phr

ase

is c

lose

st

in m

eani

ng to

“noo

k” in

this

se

nten

ce?

Choo

se o

ne.

□ b

ooks

helf

□ c

upbo

ard

□ s

mal

l spa

ce

□ s

tatu

e

smal

l spa

ce2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

sen

tenc

e.•

Scan

the

text

to fi

nd th

e se

nten

ce.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, thi

nkin

g ab

out w

hat t

he w

ord

mig

ht

mea

n.

4.

Why

doe

s th

e au

thor

tell

us th

at

Unc

le B

ert’

s m

oust

ache

“dro

oped

”?to

em

phas

ise

how

wor

ried

he is

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

the

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

look

ing

for t

he w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d, c

onsi

derin

g its

im

plic

atio

ns.

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Unit 3 • FICTION

5.

Choo

se th

ree

thin

gs w

e kn

ow a

re

true

abo

ut L

ottie

from

this

ext

ract

.

□ S

he w

as b

orn

in E

gypt

.

□ S

he li

kes

livin

g w

ith h

er g

reat

unc

le.

□ S

he s

pend

s al

l her

tim

e in

the

libra

ry.

□ S

he li

ves

in th

e gr

ound

s of

the

mus

eum

.

□ S

he k

now

s so

me

info

rmat

ion

abou

t th

e lib

rary

.

She

likes

livi

ng w

ith h

er g

reat

unc

le.

She

lives

in th

e gr

ound

s of

the

mus

eum

.

She

know

s so

me

info

rmat

ion

abou

t the

lib

rary

.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Whe

re in

the

text

will

you

fin

d re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n?•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whe

ther

you

kno

w

from

the

text

that

the

stat

emen

t is

true

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o co

rrec

t or 2

mar

ks fo

r all

thre

e co

rrec

t.

6.

Why

did

the

auth

or b

egin

the

book

w

ith th

e w

ord

“Lot

tie!”?

Acce

pt p

laus

ible

reas

ons

such

as:

•so

the

read

er is

inte

rest

ed in

wha

t has

ha

ppen

ed a

nd w

ants

to re

ad m

ore

•to

est

ablis

h th

e na

me

of th

e m

ain

char

acte

r•

to w

arn

us th

at L

ottie

is th

e ty

pe o

f per

son

who

get

s in

to tr

oubl

e.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

. •

Care

fully

read

the

begi

nnin

g of

the

text

, con

side

ring

the

impa

ct o

f the

au

thor

’s d

ecis

ion

and

the

info

rmat

ion

the

read

er is

giv

en.

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Unit 3 • FICTION

28 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

The Better Brown StoriesAllan Ahlberg

Brian Brown, who had no dog of his own, nevertheless knew more about dogs than any boy in Snuggleton. His room was full of dog books; in school even the teacher had come to rely on his superior knowledge. At home, Brian did his share of the hoovering and often boiled eggs for the family breakfast. All he asked for in return was a dog or, more particularly, a puppy. His thoughtless parents, however, refused to consider it and his apathetic sister was no help either. Brian endured the situation with dignity. As time went by, he slowly covered the walls of his room with dog pictures, collected cheap sets of dog cards whenever he went to an antique fair … and waited.

It was half-past ten on a cool May night … Brian ate a sandwich at the kitchen table and listened to the radio. Suddenly there was a newsflash: “WE INTERRUPT THIS PROGRAMME TO REPORT ANOTHER MISSING DOG IN SNUGGLETON.” It was the Plumber’s Pekinese, apparently. The police were at the scene of the crime in Roman Road. Owners were again advised to check the whereabouts of their dogs and warned to “STAY INDOORS”.

Brian wandered over to the window. His cool yet curiously reckless mind was considering this business of the missing dogs. He drew the curtain aside. Fog, drifting in from the sea, pressed up against the glass and smothered the view. The street lamp was barely visible. Brian listened: faint rumblings from the fridge, gurgling water in the radiator. Outside, a distant throbbing. He switched off the light.

1

10

16

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Name: Class: Date:

1 Why is it a bit surprising that Brian is such an expert on dogs?

2 Write a question that Brian’s teacher might ask him when she is relying on his superior knowledge.

3 Draw lines to join each character to words the writer uses to describe them.

Brian apathetic

his parents dignified

his sister thoughtless

4 “Brian endured the situation”

Which word or phrase is closest in meaning to “endured” in this sentence? Tick one.

continued □ put up with □ enjoyed □ endangered □5 At the end of paragraph 1, it says that Brian waited. What do you think he was waiting for?

6 Find and copy a word, phrase or clause from paragraph 1 that gives a reason why the police might ask Brian for help.

7 Brian is described as having a “cool yet curiously reckless mind”.

What do you think the author meant by this? Tick one.

He was calm, clever and brave. □ He got angry very quickly. □ He got into trouble because he didn’t think things through. □ He didn’t care about anyone else. □8 Do you think Brian might have taken the Pekinese? Explain your answer.

9 Write the paragraph number that matches each of these statements.

introduces the problem in the story

begins to explore how the problem might be solved

introduces the characters

gives hints about who might solve the problem

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

1 mark

2e

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2c

1 mark

2g

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Unit 3 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: The

Bet

ter B

row

n St

orie

s Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Why

is it

a b

it su

rpris

ing

that

Bria

n is

suc

h an

exp

ert o

n do

gs?

He

does

not

hav

e a

dog.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h to

find

you

r ans

wer

.

2.

Writ

e a

ques

tion

that

Bria

n’s

teac

her m

ight

ask

him

whe

n sh

e is

re

lyin

g on

his

sup

erio

r kno

wle

dge.

Acce

pt a

ny q

uest

ion

that

is a

bout

dog

s. E.

g.

•H

ow m

any

teet

h do

es a

dog

hav

e?•

Whi

ch k

inds

of d

og m

ake

the

best

pet

s?

Do

not a

ccep

t per

sona

l que

stio

ns a

bout

why

Br

ian

likes

dog

s or

wha

t kin

d of

dog

he

wou

ld

like.

The

se q

uest

ions

do

not p

robe

his

sup

erio

r kn

owle

dge.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r inf

orm

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, b

ut re

mem

ber t

hat t

he a

nsw

er w

ill n

ot

be in

the

text

; you

hav

e to

und

erst

and

the

char

acte

rs a

nd w

rite

wha

t you

th

ink

they

mig

ht s

ay.

3.

Dra

w li

nes

to jo

in e

ach

char

acte

r to

wor

ds th

e w

riter

use

s to

des

crib

e th

em.

Br

ian

apat

hetic

hi

s pa

rent

s di

gnifi

ed

hi

s si

ster

th

ough

tless

Bria

n ap

athe

tic

his

pare

nts

dign

ified

his

sist

er

thou

ghtle

ss

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

info

rmat

ion.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h to

find

you

r ans

wer

.

4.

“Bria

n en

dure

d th

e si

tuat

ion.

W

hich

wor

d or

phr

ase

is c

lose

st

in m

eani

ng to

“end

ured

” in

this

se

nten

ce?

Tick

one

.

□ c

ontin

ued

□ e

njoy

ed

□ p

ut u

p w

ith

□ e

ndan

gere

d

put u

p w

ith2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

sen

tenc

e.•

Scan

the

text

to fi

nd th

e se

nten

ce.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, thi

nkin

g ab

out w

hat t

he s

ente

nce

mig

ht m

ean.

5.

At th

e en

d of

par

agra

ph 1

, it s

ays

that

Bria

n w

aite

d. W

hat d

o yo

u th

ink

he w

as w

aitin

g fo

r?

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers

that

reco

gnis

e he

was

wai

ting

for a

n op

port

unity

to a

cqui

re a

dog

. E.g

.

•H

e is

wai

ting

until

his

par

ents

giv

e in

and

ge

t him

a p

uppy

.•

He

is w

aitin

g fo

r his

birt

hday

bec

ause

he

mig

ht g

et a

pup

py th

en.

2e 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pre

dict

wha

t mig

ht h

appe

n fro

m d

etai

ls st

ated

and

impl

ied.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

for t

he o

vera

ll m

eani

ng o

f it.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

para

grap

h m

entio

ned

in th

e qu

estio

n an

d th

ink

abou

t w

hat y

ou a

lread

y kn

ow a

bout

Bria

n.

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Unit 3 • FICTION

6.

Find

and

cop

y a

wor

d, p

hras

e or

cl

ause

from

par

agra

ph 1

that

giv

es

a re

ason

why

the

polic

e m

ight

ask

Br

ian

for h

elp.

“kne

w m

ore

abou

t dog

s tha

n an

y bo

y in

Sn

uggl

eton

.”

Do

not a

ccep

t “Al

l he

aske

d fo

r in

retu

rn w

as a

do

g or

, mor

e pa

rtic

ular

ly, a

pup

py.”

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

rere

ad p

arag

raph

 2 to

find

out

how

the

polic

e ne

ed h

elp.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

par

agra

ph 1

, thi

nkin

g ab

out t

he w

ays

Bria

n co

uld

help

 them

.

7.

Bria

n is

des

crib

ed a

s ha

ving

a “c

ool

yet c

urio

usly

reck

less

min

d”.

W

hat d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or

mea

nt b

y th

is?

Tick

one

.

□ H

e w

as c

alm

, cle

ver a

nd b

rave

.

□ H

e go

t ang

ry v

ery

quic

kly.

□ H

e go

t int

o tr

oubl

e be

caus

e he

di

dn’t

thin

k th

ings

thro

ugh.

□ H

e di

dn’t

car

e ab

out a

nyon

e el

se.

He

was

cal

m, c

leve

r and

bra

ve.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

wor

ds.

•Sc

an th

at p

art o

f the

text

, loo

king

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Thin

k of

eve

ryth

ing

else

you

kno

w a

bout

the

char

acte

r.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n.

8.

Do

you

thin

k Br

ian

mig

ht h

ave

take

n th

e Pe

kine

se?

Expl

ain

your

an

swer

.

No,

bec

ause

he

was

at h

ome

whe

n he

hea

rd

the

new

s so

he

coul

d no

t hav

e be

en o

ut

stea

ling

the

dog.

Also

acc

ept a

“Yes

” ans

wer

if th

e ex

plan

atio

n is

lo

gica

l and

cle

arly

rela

tes

back

to e

vent

s in

the

stor

y. E

.g.

Yes,

beca

use

he m

ight

hav

e st

olen

the

dog

earli

er b

ut th

e po

lice

have

onl

y ju

st fo

und

out.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r inf

orm

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, b

ut re

mem

ber t

hat t

he a

nsw

er w

ill n

ot

be in

the

text

; you

hav

e to

und

erst

and

the

char

acte

r and

thin

k ab

out w

hat

he m

ight

do.

9.

Writ

e th

e pa

ragr

aph

num

ber t

hat

mat

ches

eac

h of

thes

e st

atem

ents

.

□ i

ntro

duce

s th

e pr

oble

m in

the

stor

y

□ b

egin

s to

exp

lore

how

the

prob

lem

m

ight

be

solv

ed

□ i

ntro

duce

s th

e ch

arac

ters

□ g

ives

hin

ts a

bout

who

mig

ht s

olve

th

e pr

oble

m

2 in

trod

uces

the

prob

lem

in th

e st

ory

3 be

gins

to e

xplo

re h

ow th

e pr

oble

m m

ight

be

solv

ed

1 in

trod

uces

the

char

acte

rs

3 (A

lso a

ccep

t 1) g

ives

hin

ts a

bout

who

mig

ht

solv

e th

e pr

oble

m

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

idea

s fro

m m

ore

than

one

par

agra

ph.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

eac

h pa

ragr

aph

sepa

rate

ly, c

onsi

derin

g w

hich

sta

tem

ent

appl

ies

to it

.•

Read

all

the

othe

r par

agra

phs

to c

heck

you

hav

e gi

ven

the

best

ans

wer

.

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• FICTION

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Unit 4FICTION

Mackerel and Chips/Oliver Twist’s ChildhoodMichael Morpurgo/Charles Dickens

Key text features

The texts present contrasting views of children and childhood.

l The Teaching text is an extract from the beginning of Mackerel and Chips by Michael Morpurgo.

l The Practice text is an adaptation of an extract from Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens.

Reading the Teaching text: Mackerel and Chips

l Are the children familiar with any other works by Michael Morpurgo? What kind of stories does he write?

l What can the children predict about the genre from the title?

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract aloud. After listening to this extract, how do the children think the story might progress?

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 34–35).

Reading the Practice text: Oliver Twist’s Childhood

l Before they read the story, ask the children what they already know about Oliver Twist and the author Charles Dickens.

l Once they have read the story, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the beginning of Mackerel and Chips.

l Ask the children to identify information in what they have read that will help them to predict how the story moves forward. What do they think will happen next?

l Explore some of their ideas through drama.

l Ask the children to write the rest of the story.

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Unit 4 • FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 33

Mackerel and Chips/Oliver Twist’s ChildhoodMichael Morpurgo/Charles Dickens

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

The Daydreamer – Ian McEwan

The Lion and Unicorn – Shirley Hughes

The Indian in the Cupboard – Lynne Reid Banks

One Dog and His Boy – Eva Ibbotson

A Hen in the Wardrobe – Wendy Meddour

The Unforgotten Coat – Frank Cottrell Boyce

Extending reading

Q1: What can you predict about the story from just the opening line?

A1: The story is about a family holiday on the Isles of Scilly. They have been before.

The story is written in the first person.

Strategy: Listen to the opening sentence. Make notes, including as much information as you can from it.

Q2: What did Eloise want Leah to do?

A2: Tell her the wish.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make notes of words used in the text.

Q3: What was Leah’s birthday present from her mum?

A3: A morning of mackerel fishing/going out on her own with Mr Pender.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make notes of words used in the text.

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Unit 4 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Mac

kere

l and

Chi

ps

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Whi

ch w

ords

in p

arag

raph

2 te

ll yo

u th

is w

as n

ot L

eah’

s fir

st v

isit

to

the

Isle

s of

Sci

lly?

“whe

re w

e st

ay” (

line

3) m

eans

they

hav

e be

en

ther

e be

fore

.2g 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

to th

is q

uest

ion.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r inf

orm

atio

n ab

out w

here

they

are

on

holid

ay.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

to fi

nd o

ut h

ow y

ou k

now

this

was

not

he

r firs

t vis

it.

2.

“My

birt

hday

. Ten

yea

rs o

ld”

(par

agra

ph 2

). W

hy d

id th

e au

thor

us

e su

ch s

hort

sen

tenc

es h

ere?

•to

intr

oduc

e th

e na

rrato

r•

to s

how

us

that

it is

a fi

rst-

pers

on n

arra

tive

•to

sho

w th

at th

e na

rrato

r fel

t spe

cial

•to

ech

o th

e na

rrato

r’s

spee

ch

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

the

quot

atio

n co

mes

from

.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e im

pact

of t

he a

utho

r’s

choi

ce o

f lan

guag

e.

3.

Do

you

thin

k Le

ah w

ould

be

happ

y if

her w

ish

real

ly c

ame

true

? Ye

s / N

o

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er.

Yes

•Sh

e w

ould

kno

w w

hat i

t fel

t lik

e.•

She

sees

the

lifeb

oats

and

wan

ts to

go

in

one.

•Sh

e w

ould

be

able

to s

ave

som

eone

’s li

fe.

No

•Sh

e w

ould

be

in a

n em

erge

ncy

and

that

w

ould

n’t b

e go

od.

•Sh

e w

ould

be

in d

ange

r.•

She

mig

ht b

e se

asic

k.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r Lea

h’s

wis

h.•

Read

the

wis

h an

d th

ink

abou

t the

impl

icat

ions

of i

t com

ing

true

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a re

ason

able

exp

lana

tion

that

mat

ches

the

yes/

no a

nsw

er

give

n.

4.

Mr P

ende

r ask

s Le

ah if

she

get

s se

asic

k at

the

end

of th

e pa

ssag

e.

Wha

t do

you

thin

k he

r res

pons

e te

lls u

s ab

out h

er?

•Sh

e do

esn’

t kno

w if

she

get

s se

asic

k.•

She

has

been

sea

sick

bef

ore

but h

opes

that

sh

e w

on’t

be

this

tim

e.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

to th

is q

uest

ion.

•Th

ink

abou

t the

impl

icat

ions

of L

eah’

s an

swer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eith

er a

nsw

er.

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Unit 4 • FICTION

5.

Choo

se th

e be

st s

umm

ary

of th

is

pass

age.

□ L

eah

is o

n ho

liday

with

her

fam

ily,

stay

ing

in M

rs P

ende

r’s

B&B.

It’s

he

r birt

hday

.

□ L

eah

is g

oing

out

with

Mr P

ende

r in

his

mac

kere

l boa

t. M

r Pen

der

war

ns h

er th

at th

e se

a m

ay b

e ch

oppy

but

she

say

s sh

e do

esn’

t ge

t sea

sick

.

□ L

eah’

s bi

rthd

ay w

ish

is to

go

in th

e lif

eboa

t, bu

t her

birt

hday

trea

t is

to

go m

acke

rel fi

shin

g w

ith M

r Pen

der.

□ L

eah’

s bi

rthd

ay p

rese

nt w

as a

tr

ip in

Mr P

ende

r’s

mac

kere

l boa

t w

ithou

t Elo

ise.

Leah

’s b

irthd

ay w

ish

is to

go

in th

e lif

eboa

t, bu

t her

birt

hday

trea

t is

to g

o m

acke

rel fi

shin

g w

ith M

r Pen

der.

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to e

nsur

e go

od u

nder

stan

ding

. Sel

ect t

he s

umm

ary

stat

emen

t tha

t is

clos

est t

o th

e m

eani

ng o

f the

text

.

6.

Base

d on

wha

t you

hav

e re

ad s

o fa

r, ch

oose

the

stat

emen

t tha

t is

the

best

pre

dict

ion

of w

hat w

ill

happ

en in

the

rest

of t

his

stor

y.

□ L

eah

will

cat

ch lo

ts o

f mac

kere

l an

d M

rs P

ende

r will

coo

k th

em fo

r Le

ah’s

birt

hday

tea.

□ L

eah

will

be

seas

ick

and

Mr P

ende

r w

ill h

ave

to b

ring

her h

ome

with

out

catc

hing

any

fish

.

□ T

here

will

be

a st

orm

at s

ea a

nd

Leah

will

be

very

bra

ve.

□ S

omet

hing

will

go

wro

ng a

nd L

eah

will

be

resc

ued

by th

e lif

eboa

t.

Som

ethi

ng w

ill g

o w

rong

and

Lea

h w

ill b

e re

scue

d by

the

lifeb

oat.

2e 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pred

ict w

hat m

ight

hap

pen

from

det

ails

stat

ed a

nd im

plie

d.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

, kee

ping

the

optio

ns in

min

d.•

Cons

ider

eac

h op

tion

in tu

rn, s

cann

ing

all o

f the

text

look

ing

for i

nfor

mat

ion

to s

uppo

rt it

.

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Unit 4 • FICTION

36 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

Oliver Twist’s ChildhoodAdapted from the book Oliver Twist by Charles Dickens

When his mother died, leaving Oliver as an orphaned baby, the parish generously decided to ‘farm’ him out. In other words, he would be sent to a ‘baby-farm’ where twenty or thirty other villains – who were as guilty as Oliver of the crime of poverty – rolled about the floor all day, without the inconvenience of too much food or too much clothing.

The culprits at the baby-farm were looked after by an elderly woman for the princely sum of sevenpence-halfpenny per week. Sevenpence-halfpenny each week, said the parish, is enough to provide food for a child. Mrs Mann, who was a woman of wisdom and experience, felt that sevenpence-halfpenny would buy so much food it might make a child ill; she knew what was good for children! She kindly kept most of the money and managed to raise her young crop of orphans on even less than the parish provided for them.

It cannot be expected that this system of farming would produce any very extraordinary or luxuriant crop. Oliver Twist’s ninth birthday found him a small, thin child. He was celebrating his birthday in the coal-cellar with two other young gentlemen, with whom he had been locked up for daring to be hungry.

Mrs Mann, the good lady of the house, glanced up and saw Mr Bumble, who looked after the workhouse, marching up the path.

“Goodness gracious! Is that you, Mr Bumble, sir?” said Mrs Mann, thrusting her head out of the window. “(Susan, take Oliver and them two other brats upstairs, and wash ‘em directly.) Well Mr Bumble, how glad I am to see you!”

Mrs Mann showed the beadle into a small parlour with a brick floor. “I am here on business, Mrs Mann,” he declared. “The boy, Oliver Twist, is nine years old today and is therefore too old to remain here. So we have decided to put him to work back at the workhouse. The parish has already been generous enough to him and now it is time for him to pay it back. Let me see him at once.”

“I’ll fetch him directly,” said Mrs Mann. Oliver, having had his skin rubbed raw, was led back into the room by his kindly protectress.

1

6

14

19

21

25

31

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Name: Class: Date:

1 Why was Oliver sent to a baby-farm?

2 In this text, what do you think the “baby-farm” was? Tick one.

a farm where babies were grown □ a building where people went to choose a baby to adopt □ a building where orphaned babies were allowed to grow up □ a health farm where people went to have their babies □3 “She kindly kept most of the money and managed to raise her young crop of orphans on even

less than the parish provided for them.”

Do you think it was kind of her? Explain your answer.

4 Do you think Oliver was happy at the baby-farm? Explain your answer fully using ideas from the text.

5 List two things that happened to Oliver on his ninth birthday.

6 “Goodness gracious! Is that you, Mr Bumble, sir?” said Mrs Mann, thrusting her head out of the window. “(Susan, take Oliver and them two other brats upstairs, and wash ‘em directly.) Well Mr Bumble, how glad I am to see you!” (paragraph 5)

Why did the author use brackets in direct speech?

7 Why do you think Mrs Mann wants Oliver and the other two boys to be taken out of the cellar?

8 Based on what you have read so far, tick the statement that is the best prediction of what happens just after Oliver is taken to see Mr Bumble. Tick one.

He is adopted by a loving family. □ He is taken to a workhouse, where he is treated even more cruelly. □ Mr Bumble is angry with Mrs Mann because Oliver is so thin. □ Mr Bumble likes Oliver and takes him home with him. □9 This story was originally written over 100 years ago. List two ideas from the text that show it is

not set in the 21st century.

1 mark

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

2d

1 mark

2e

2 marks

2f

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

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Unit 4 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Oliv

er T

wis

t’s

Child

hood

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Why

was

Oliv

er s

ent t

o a

ba

by-fa

rm?

His

mot

her d

ied

whe

n he

was

a b

aby.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

info

rmat

ion.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

this

info

rmat

ion

is m

ost l

ikel

y to

be

foun

d.•

Scan

the

text

for r

efer

ence

to a

bab

y-fa

rm.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph.

2.

In th

is te

xt, w

hat d

o yo

u th

ink

the

“bab

y-fa

rm” w

as?

Tick

one

.

□ a

farm

whe

re b

abie

s w

ere

grow

n

□ a

bui

ldin

g w

here

peo

ple

wen

t to

choo

se a

bab

y to

ado

pt

□ a

bui

ldin

g w

here

orp

hane

d ba

bies

w

ere

allo

wed

to g

row

up

□ a

hea

lth fa

rm w

here

peo

ple

wen

t to

hav

e th

eir b

abie

s

a bu

ildin

g w

here

orp

hane

d ba

bies

wer

e al

low

ed to

gro

w u

p2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

give

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

the

mea

ning

of e

ach

of th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n an

d ch

oose

th

e be

st fi

t.•

Scan

the

first

two

para

grap

hs to

iden

tify

othe

r wor

ds a

nd p

hras

es.

3.

“She

kin

dly

kept

mos

t of t

he m

oney

an

d m

anag

ed to

rais

e he

r you

ng

crop

of o

rpha

ns o

n ev

en le

ss th

an

the

paris

h pr

ovid

ed fo

r the

m.”

D

o yo

u th

ink

it w

as k

ind

of h

er?

Expl

ain

your

ans

wer

.

No.

She

was

ste

alin

g fr

om th

e ch

ildre

n be

caus

e sh

e w

asn’

t fee

ding

the

child

ren

enou

gh.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

hs.

4.

Do

you

thin

k O

liver

was

hap

py

at th

e ba

by-fa

rm?

Expl

ain

your

an

swer

fully

usi

ng id

eas

from

the

text

.

Yes

•Th

ere

wer

e ot

her c

hild

ren

for h

im to

pla

y w

ith.

•H

e di

dn’t

hav

e to

do

muc

h; h

e ro

lled

arou

nd

on th

e flo

or a

ll da

y.•

He

was

look

ed a

fter

by

Mrs

Man

n.

No

•M

rs M

ann

kept

the

child

ren

hung

ry.

•M

rs M

ann

hurt

him

.•

Mrs

Man

n lo

cked

him

in a

cel

lar.

•H

e w

as s

mal

l and

thin

.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ords

“bab

y-fa

rm”.

•Re

read

the

near

by te

xt fo

r ref

eren

ce to

whe

ther

Oliv

er w

as h

appy

.

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Unit 4 • FICTION

5.

List

two

thin

gs th

at h

appe

ned

to

Oliv

er o

n hi

s ni

nth

birt

hday

.Ac

cept

any

two

of:

•H

e w

as lo

cked

in th

e ce

llar.

•H

e ha

d hi

s sk

in ru

bbed

raw

.•

He

was

take

n to

see

Mr B

umbl

e.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

info

rmat

ion.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

the

answ

er w

ill b

e.•

Scan

that

par

t of t

he te

xt fo

r ref

eren

ce to

thin

gs th

at h

appe

ned

to O

liver

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o co

rrec

t ans

wer

s.

6.

Why

did

the

auth

or u

se b

rack

ets

in

dire

ct s

peec

h in

par

agra

ph 5

?•

to s

how

that

this

is a

n ‘a

side

’ to

Susa

n•

Mrs

Man

n is

spe

akin

g qu

ietly

to S

usan

so

that

Mr B

umbl

e ca

nnot

hea

r.•

This

is p

art o

f a d

iffer

ent c

onve

rsat

ion

– no

t th

e on

e sh

e is

hav

ing

with

Mr B

umbl

e.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Rere

ad th

e pa

ssag

e to

you

rsel

f. H

ow d

id y

ou re

ad th

ose

wor

ds?

•Co

nsid

er w

hy b

rack

ets

are

norm

ally

use

d, a

nd o

ther

pun

ctua

tion

the

auth

or

coul

d ha

ve u

sed.

7.

Why

do

you

thin

k M

rs M

ann

wan

ts

Oliv

er a

nd th

e ot

her t

wo

boys

to b

e ta

ken

out o

f the

cel

lar?

She

does

n’t w

ant M

r Bum

ble

to k

now

that

sh

e ha

s lo

cked

them

in th

e ce

llar.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

use

ful i

nfor

mat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

.

8.

Base

d on

wha

t you

hav

e re

ad so

fa

r, tic

k th

e st

atem

ent t

hat i

s the

be

st p

redi

ctio

n of

wha

t hap

pens

ju

st a

fter

Oliv

er is

take

n to

see

Mr

Bum

ble.

Tic

k on

e.

□ H

e is

ado

pted

by

a lo

ving

fam

ily.

□ H

e is

take

n to

a w

orkh

ouse

, whe

re

he is

trea

ted

even

mor

e cr

uelly

.

□ M

r Bum

ble

is a

ngry

with

Mrs

Man

n be

caus

e O

liver

is s

o th

in.

□ M

r Bum

ble

likes

Oliv

er a

nd ta

kes

him

hom

e w

ith h

im.

He

is ta

ken

to a

wor

khou

se, w

here

he

is

trea

ted

even

mor

e cr

uelly

.2e 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pre

dict

wha

t mig

ht h

appe

n fro

m d

etai

ls st

ated

and

impl

ied.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

, kee

ping

the

optio

ns in

min

d.•

Cons

ider

eac

h op

tion

in tu

rn, s

cann

ing

all o

f the

text

look

ing

for i

nfor

mat

ion

to s

uppo

rt it

.

9.

This

sto

ry w

as o

rigin

ally

writ

ten

over

100

yea

rs a

go. L

ist t

wo

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt th

at s

how

it is

not

set

in

the

21st

cen

tury

.

•W

e do

not

hav

e w

orkh

ouse

s or

bab

y-fa

rms.

•Th

e w

ay th

e ch

ildre

n ar

e tr

eate

d w

ould

be

illeg

al to

day.

•“c

oal-c

ella

r”/”

parlo

ur”/

”bea

dle”

are

wor

ds

no lo

nger

use

d.•

The

mon

ey is

old

fash

ione

d:

“sev

enpe

nce-

halfp

enny

”.•

“Sev

enpe

nce-

halfp

enny

” wou

ld n

ot b

e en

ough

to fe

ed a

chi

ld to

day.

2f 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

to fi

nd id

eas,

wor

ds a

nd p

ract

ices

that

are

not

par

t of l

ife

toda

y.

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• FICTION

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Unit 5FICTION

Charlotte’s Web/Stuart LittleE.B. White

Key text features

The texts are both extracts from classic children’s fiction from the 1940s and 1950s.

l The Teaching text is from Charlotte’s Web by E.B. White.

l The Practice text is from Stuart Little by E.B. White.

Reading the Teaching text: Charlotte’s Web

l Have the children read Charlotte’s Web or seen the film?

l Explain that the book was written in the 1950s. Can the children list ways in which life has changed since those times?

l Introduce the text by explaining that the book is set on an American farm. Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about why Fern might have wanted a pet pig.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 42–43).

Reading the Practice text: Stuart Little

l What do the children know about Stuart Little? Have they seen the film or read the book?

l Show them images of the inside of a grand piano. Talk about how the action of pressing a key makes a felt hammer strike a string to make a noise. What do they think it would be like to be inside a piano when it is being played?

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the extract from Stuart Little. Explain to the children that you want them to write about another adventure Stuart might have.

l Arrange the children in groups. Give each group some sticky notes. Ask each group to record one characteristic of either Stuart or George on each note. Give them time to compare their ideas with those of other groups.

l Discuss how these characteristics might affect the way the characters respond to a range of different situations.

l In pairs, ask the children to develop one of the situations discussed and plan the shape of the new adventure. Children should make notes of any details they might want to incorporate.

l Encourage the children to explain their ideas to a new response partner. Ask the response partner to give feedback, before children start to write.

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Charlotte’s Web/Stuart LittleE.B. White

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Little House on the Prairie – Laura Ingalls Wilder

The Sheep-Pig – Dick King-Smith

The Borrowers – Mary Norton

Pippi Longstocking – Astrid Lindgren

Stig of the Dump – Clive King

Extending reading

Q1: Where do you think Wilbur had been before he was two weeks old?

A1: Inside/in the kitchen/in a barn

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: How did Wilbur make himself a place to sleep?

A2: He dug a tunnel in the straw with his snout and then crawled into the tunnel.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again, thinking about what Wilbur is doing.

Q3: Fern treated Wilbur like her baby. Find two pieces of evidence for this statement.

A3: Accept any two of:

• She worried that he would be too cold at night./“It relieved her mind to know that her baby would sleep covered up.”

• She fed him from a bottle./“she held the bottle for him while he sucked.”

• She gave him a ride in her doll’s pram./“Fern would pick him up and put him in the carriage alongside the doll.”

Strategy: Listen to the whole text again, being alert for information about Fern treating Wilbur like a baby. Jot down the details you notice.

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Unit 5 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Cha

rlott

e’s

Web

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Wilb

ur w

as b

orn

in th

e sp

ring.

Fi

nd o

ne p

iece

of e

vide

nce

for t

his

stat

emen

t. U

se d

irect

quo

tatio

ns

from

the

text

.

Acce

pt e

ither

:

•“I

t was

app

le-b

loss

om ti

me”

•“t

he d

ays w

ere

gett

ing

war

mer

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of th

e se

ason

s.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Rem

embe

r to

give

a d

irect

quo

tatio

n.

2.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Car

ryin

g a

bott

le o

f milk

…”.

W

hy w

ould

Wilb

ur n

ot b

e co

ld a

t ni

ght?

•H

e du

g a

tunn

el in

the

box

of s

traw

.•

He

was

com

plet

ely

cove

red

up b

y th

e st

raw

.2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

sea

rchi

ng fo

r rel

evan

t inf

orm

atio

n to

ans

wer

the

ques

tion.

3.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Car

ryin

g a

bott

le o

f milk

…”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

one

wor

d th

at te

lls

you

Fern

was

del

ight

ed th

at W

ilbur

w

ould

be

war

m.

“enc

hant

ed”

Do

not a

ccep

t “re

lieve

d”.

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for a

wor

d w

ith th

is m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d to

che

ck y

our r

espo

nse.

4.

Find

and

cop

y tw

o pl

aces

Fer

n w

ent w

ithou

t Wilb

ur.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•“t

he b

us”

•“s

choo

l”•

“ups

tairs

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

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Unit 5 • FICTION

5.

Choo

se w

hich

of t

he fo

llow

ing

are

true

and

whi

ch a

re fa

lse

(see

righ

t).

True

Fals

e

Wilb

ur w

as s

hut i

n a

woo

den

box

full

of

stra

w.

Fern

’s fa

ther

was

not

w

orrie

d ab

out W

ilbur

be

ing

cold

at n

ight

.✓

Wilb

ur w

aite

d fo

r the

sc

hool

bus

with

Fer

n.✓

Wilb

ur a

lway

s w

ent

to s

leep

bes

ide

Fern

’s d

oll.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

text

yo

u w

ill fi

nd re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whe

ther

eac

h st

atem

ent i

s tr

ue o

r fal

se.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

four

ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

6.

Whi

ch o

f the

se w

ould

be

the

best

tit

le fo

r thi

s ex

trac

t fro

m th

e bo

ok?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ F

ern

and

Frie

nds

□ F

ern

and

Wilb

ur

□ W

ilbur

’s N

ew H

ome

□ W

ilbur

’s D

ay

Fern

and

Wilb

ur2c 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of it

s m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n, m

atch

ing

them

aga

inst

you

r ov

eral

l und

erst

andi

ng.

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Unit 5 • FICTION

44 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

Stuart LittleE.B. White

Mr and Mrs Little, and their son George, were very surprised when a second child was born looking like a mouse. They called him Stuart.

Stuart was also helpful when it came to Ping-pong. The Littles liked Ping-pong, but the balls had a way of rolling under chairs, sofas, and radiators, and this meant that the players were forever stooping down and reaching under things. Stuart soon learned to chase balls, and it was a great sight to see him come out from under a hot radiator, pushing a Ping-pong ball with all his might, the perspiration rolling down his cheeks. The ball, of course, was almost as high as he was, and he had to throw his whole weight against it in order to keep it rolling.

The Littles had a grand piano in their living room, which was all right except that one of the keys was a sticky key and didn’t work properly. Mrs Little said she thought it must be the damp weather, but I don’t see how it could be the damp weather, for the key had been sticking for about four years, during which time there had been many bright clear days. But anyway, the key stuck, and was a great inconvenience to anyone trying to play the piano. It bothered George particularly when he was playing the ‘Scarf Dance’, which was rather lively. It was George who had the idea of stationing Stuart inside the piano to push the key up the second it was played. This was no easy job for Stuart, as he had to crouch down between the felt hammers so that he wouldn’t get hit on the head. But Stuart liked it just the same: it was exciting inside the piano, dodging about, and the noise was quite terrific. Sometimes after a long session he would emerge quite deaf, as though he had just stepped out of an airplane after a long journey; and it would be some little time before he felt really normal again.

1

3

11

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Unit 5 • FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page 45

Name: Class: Date:

1 Look at the second paragraph, beginning “Stuart was also helpful …”.

What does the word “stooping” mean? Tick one.

bending □  looking □ slouching □ stretching □

2 Why did Stuart find it hard to push a Ping-pong ball?

3 Look at the paragraph beginning “The Littles had a grand piano …”.

Find and copy three words that tell us why a sticky key was a problem.

4 The sticky key was probably not caused by the weather.

Find one piece of evidence for this statement. Use direct quotations from the text.

5 Why do you think George suggested that Stuart should be inside the piano when it was being played?

6 Give two reasons why it was uncomfortable for Stuart to be inside the piano.

7 In spite of the discomfort, why is it likely that Stuart will go into the piano the next time George asks?

8 Tick one box in each row to show whether each statement is true or false.

True False

Stuart Little’s brother was also a mouse.

Stuart liked to play Ping-pong.

Stuart liked being inside the piano.

Sometimes, being inside the piano made Stuart deaf for a bit.

9 Which of these would be the best title for this extract? Tick one.

Inside the Piano □ Stuart Helps Out □

Stuart the Ball Boy □ The Sticky Key □

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2e

2 marks

2b

1 mark

2c

2 marks

2d

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Unit 5 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Stu

art L

ittle

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Look

at t

he fi

rst p

arag

raph

, be

ginn

ing

“Stu

art w

as a

lso

help

ful …

”.

W

hat d

oes

the

wor

d “s

toop

ing”

m

ean?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ b

endi

ng

□ l

ooki

ng

□ s

louc

hing

□ s

tret

chin

g

bend

ing

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ce c

onta

inin

g th

e w

ord,

then

iden

tify

a w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n w

ith th

e sa

me

mea

ning

.

2.

Why

did

Stu

art fi

nd it

har

d to

pus

h a

Ping

-pon

g ba

ll?•

The

ball

was

alm

ost a

s hi

gh a

s he

was

.•

He

had

to th

row

all

his

wei

ght b

ehin

d it.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

3.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“The

Litt

les h

ad a

gra

nd p

iano

…”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

thre

e w

ords

that

tell

us w

hy a

stic

ky k

ey w

as a

pro

blem

.

Acce

pt e

ither

:

•“d

idn’

t wor

k pr

oper

ly”

•“a

gre

at in

conv

enie

nce”

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

4.

The

stic

ky k

ey w

as p

roba

bly

not

caus

ed b

y th

e w

eath

er.

Fi

nd o

ne p

iece

of e

vide

nce

for t

his

stat

emen

t. U

se d

irect

quo

tatio

ns

from

the

text

.

Acce

pt e

ither

:

•“t

he k

ey h

ad b

een

stic

king

for a

bout

four

ye

ars”

•“t

here

had

bee

n m

any

brig

ht c

lear

day

s”

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of th

e w

eath

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ces

arou

nd th

e ev

iden

ce.

•Re

mem

ber t

o gi

ve a

dire

ct q

uota

tion.

5.

Why

do

you

thin

k G

eorg

e su

gges

ted

that

Stu

art s

houl

d be

in

side

the

pian

o w

hen

it w

as b

eing

pl

ayed

?

Stua

rt c

ould

pus

h th

e ke

y up

whe

n it

was

pl

ayed

, so

his

mus

ic s

ound

ed b

ette

r.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

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Unit 5 • FICTION

6.

Giv

e tw

o re

ason

s w

hy it

was

un

com

fort

able

for S

tuar

t to

be

insi

de th

e pi

ano.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•H

e ha

d to

cro

uch

dow

n to

avo

id b

eing

hit

on th

e he

ad.

•H

e ha

d to

dod

ge a

bout

.•

“the

noi

se w

as q

uite

terri

fic”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of S

tuar

t bei

ng u

ncom

fort

able

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Eith

er g

ive

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng fo

r you

r ans

wer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

7.

In s

pite

of t

he d

isco

mfo

rt, w

hy is

it

likel

y th

at S

tuar

t will

go

into

the

pian

o th

e ne

xt ti

me

Geo

rge

asks

?

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers

that

reco

gnis

e an

y of

:

•H

e ha

s be

en in

side

the

pian

o m

ore

than

on

ce, s

o he

is li

kely

to g

o ag

ain.

•It

say

s th

at h

e lik

ed it

.•

Stua

rt li

kes

to b

e he

lpfu

l.

2e 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pre

dict

wha

t mig

ht h

appe

n fro

m d

etai

ls st

ated

and

impl

ied.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for a

reas

on w

hy S

tuar

t mig

ht g

o in

to th

e pi

ano

agai

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

sect

ions

of t

ext y

ou fi

nd to

che

ck y

our a

nsw

er.

8.

Tick

one

box

in e

ach

row

to sh

ow

whe

ther

eac

h st

atem

ent i

s tru

e or

fa

lse.

True

Fals

e

Stua

rt L

ittle

’s

brot

her w

as a

lso a

m

ouse

.

Stua

rt li

ked

to p

lay

Ping

-pon

g.

Stua

rt li

ked

bein

g in

side

the

pian

o.

Som

etim

es, b

eing

in

side

the

pian

o m

ade

Stua

rt d

eaf f

or

a bi

t.

True

Fals

e

Stua

rt L

ittle

’s

brot

her w

as a

lso a

m

ouse

.✓

Stua

rt li

ked

to p

lay

Ping

-pon

g.✓

Stua

rt li

ked

bein

g in

side

the

pian

o.✓

Som

etim

es, b

eing

in

side

the

pian

o m

ade

Stua

rt d

eaf f

or

a bi

t.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

text

yo

u w

ill fi

nd re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whe

ther

eac

h st

atem

ent i

s tr

ue o

r fal

se.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

four

ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

9.

Whi

ch o

f the

se w

ould

be

the

best

tit

le fo

r thi

s ex

trac

t? T

ick

one.

□ I

nsid

e th

e Pi

ano

□ S

tuar

t Hel

ps O

ut

□ S

tuar

t the

Bal

l Boy

□ T

he S

ticky

Key

Stua

rt H

elps

Out

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of it

s m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n, m

atch

ing

them

aga

inst

you

r ov

eral

l und

erst

andi

ng.

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• FICTION

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Unit 6FICTION

How to Train Your DragonCressida Cowell

Key text features

The texts are both extracts from the same fantasy novel.

l The Teaching text is an extract from How to Train Your Dragon, entitled First Catch Your Dragon, by Cressida Cowell.

l The Practice text is an extract from How to Train Your Dragon, entitled Into the Dragons’ Cave, by Cressida Cowell.

Reading the Teaching text: First Catch Your Dragon

l What do the children know about How to Train Your Dragon? Have any of them seen the films or read the books? Invite the children to share their experiences and impressions.

l What do the children know about Vikings? Invite them to share their knowledge.

l Introduce the text by explaining that the book is set in Viking times, on an imaginary island called Berk. Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about why the Vikings might want to tame the dragons.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 50–51).

Reading the Practice text: Into the Dragons’ Cave

l Encourage the children to think, pair, share what they remember about Hiccup and the other boys from the Teaching text.

l Discuss why the boys might be going into the dragons’ cave.

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread the extracts from How to Train Your Dragon.

l Explain to the children that you want them to write about what might happen next in this story.

l Use a drama session to explore the children’s ideas and develop characterisation of Hiccup, Gobber and the other boys.

l In pairs, ask the children to make a story map showing how their story could develop. They should include any details they want to feature in their writing, such as information relating to Vikings.

l Encourage the children to explain their ideas to a new response partner for feedback, before they start to write.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

The How to Train Your Dragon series – Cressida Cowell

The Wizards of Once – Cressida Cowell

The Kingdom of Gems trilogy – Jasper Cooper

The Wee Free Men – Terry Pratchett

The Secret Lake – Karen Inglis

Kestrel Island – A.B. Martin

Extending reading

Q1: What are the boys aiming to achieve on this adventure?

A1: Accept either:

• to prove themselves as Viking heroes

• to catch dragons

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: What do the words “Ohhhhhh suffering scallops” tell us about how Hiccup is feeling?

A2: He is scared/worried.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again, thinking about what Hiccup might be feeling.

Q3: The words “scenic spot” are usually used to describe somewhere beautiful. Why does Gobber use it to describe Wild Dragon Cliff?

A3: Accept either:

• He thinks it is beautiful.

• He is being sarcastic.

Strategy: Listen to the whole text again, being alert for information about Wild Dragon Cliff, why the boys are at Wild Dragon Cliff, and why someone would describe it as a “scenic spot”.

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Unit 6 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Firs

t Cat

ch Y

our D

rago

n Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Hic

cup

will

be

lead

ing

you

…”.

(a) F

ind

and

copy

two

wor

ds th

at

expl

ain

why

Hic

cup

shou

ld n

ot b

e le

adin

g th

e ad

vent

ure.

(b) F

ind

and

copy

four

wor

ds th

at

expl

ain

why

Hic

cup

is g

oing

to le

ad

the

adve

ntur

e.

(a) “

com

plet

ely

usel

ess”

(b) “

son

of th

e CH

IEF”

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

first

for t

he a

nsw

er to

(a)

and

then

for t

he a

nsw

er to

(b).

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

Capi

talis

atio

n of

“CH

IEF”

is n

ot n

eces

sary

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h co

rrec

t ans

wer

.

2.

In th

e pa

ragr

aph

begi

nnin

g “O

ur

drag

ons a

re w

hat s

et u

s apa

rt!”,

G

obbe

r say

s “I

t is o

nly

the

VIKI

NG

H

ERO

ES w

ho d

are

to ta

me

the

wild

est,

mos

t dan

gero

us c

reat

ures

on

ear

th.”

W

hat a

re th

e cr

eatu

res

that

G

obbe

r is

talk

ing

abou

t?

drag

ons

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

wor

ds, l

ooki

ng fo

r clu

es a

bout

the

crea

ture

s.

3.

Why

do

the

Viki

ng b

oys

wan

t to

pass

the

Dra

gon

Initi

atio

n Te

st?

so th

ey c

an e

nter

the

Hai

ry H

oolig

an T

ribe

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

wor

ds, l

ooki

ng fo

r rea

sons

why

the

boys

wou

ld w

ant t

o do

this

.

4.

In th

e pa

ragr

aph

begi

nnin

g “T

he c

liff l

oom

ed d

izzy

ingl

y hi

gh

abov

e th

em”,

wha

t doe

s th

e w

ord

“loom

ed” t

ell u

s ab

out t

he c

liff?

Choo

se o

ne.

□ I

t is

dark

col

oure

d.

□ I

t is

tric

ky to

clim

b.

□ I

t is

thre

aten

ing.

□ I

t is

cove

red

in m

ist.

It is

thre

aten

ing.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d, c

onsi

derin

g th

e im

plic

atio

ns o

f the

wor

d.

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Unit 6 • FICTION

5.

Choo

se w

hich

of t

he fo

llow

ing

are

true

and

whi

ch a

re fa

lse

(see

righ

t).

TF

All V

ikin

gs e

njoy

rid

ing

hors

es.

The

first

job

the

boys

mus

t do

is st

eal

som

ethi

ng.

The

boys

hav

e co

me

to W

ild D

rago

n Cl

iff

to s

ee h

ow m

any

drag

ons

they

can

sp

ot.

Wild

Dra

gon

Cliff

is

very

hig

h.✓

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

text

yo

u w

ill fi

nd re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whe

ther

eac

h st

atem

ent i

s tr

ue o

r fal

se.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

four

ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

6.

This

adv

entu

re ta

kes p

lace

in

win

ter.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

for t

his

stat

emen

t. Yo

u do

not

hav

e to

use

di

rect

quo

tatio

ns fr

om th

e te

xt.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Th

ey a

re s

tand

ing

in s

now

./“G

obbe

r spa

t so

lem

nly

into

the

snow

.”•

They

can

see

the

cliff

./“In

sum

mer

you

co

uld

bare

ly e

ven

see

the

cliff

…”

•Th

e dr

agon

s ar

e hi

bern

atin

g./I

t is

sile

nt

exce

pt fo

r the

sou

nd o

f the

dra

gons

sn

orin

g./“

the

omin

ous,

low

rum

ble

of th

eir

snor

es.”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of th

e se

ason

s.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Giv

e ei

ther

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

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Into the Dragons’ CaveCressida Cowell

Although he wasn’t your usual mindless thug of a Hooligan, Hiccup wasn’t a wimp, either. Being frightened is not the same as being a coward. Maybe he was as brave as anyone else there, because he went to catch a dragon despite knowing what dragons are like. And, when he had climbed perilously to the mouth of the cave and had found that inside there was a long, twisty tunnel, he still went down it, despite not being too keen on long, twisty tunnels with dragons at the end of them.

The tunnel was dripping and clammy. At times it was high enough for the boys to walk upright. Then it would close down into narrow, claustrophobic holes that the boys could only just squeeze through, squirming on their stomachs, with the flares held in their mouths.

After ten long minutes of walking and crawling into the heart of the cliff, the stench of dragon – a salty stink of seaweed and old mackerel heads – got stronger and stronger, until finally it became unbearable and the tunnel opened out into a ginormous cavern.

The cavern was full of more dragons than Hiccup could ever have imagined existed.

They were every possible colour and size, and they included all the species that Hiccup had heard of, and quite a few more that he hadn’t.

Hiccup started sweating as he looked around him at pile after pile of the animals, draped over every available surface; even hanging upside-down from the roof like giant bats. They were all fast asleep, and most of them were snoring in unison. This was a sound so loud and so deep that it seemed to penetrate right into Hiccup’s body and vibrate around his soft insides, churning his stomach and bowels, and forcing his heart to beat at the same slow dragon pulse.

If one, just one, of these countless creatures were to wake up, it would raise the alarm to the others and the boys would meet a horrible death.

1

8

12

16

18

20

33

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Name: Class: Date:

1 Find and copy two words from the first paragraph that tell us what most of the Hooligan Tribe are like.

2 In the first paragraph, what does the word “despite” mean? Tick one.

although □ because □ thoughtless □ unkind □

3 What did Hiccup expect to find at the end of the tunnel?

4 The tunnel was not a comfortable place to be.

Find two pieces of evidence from paragraph 2 for this statement. You do not have to use direct quotations from the text.

5 Look at the paragraph beginning “After ten long minutes …”.

Find and copy the first word that warns us that dragons do not smell good.

6 Why do you think the smell got stronger as the boys got closer to the end of the tunnel?

7 Give two reasons why Hiccup might have been surprised when he reached the end of the tunnel.

8 Tick to show which statement is true for each place. One statement is true for both places.

Tunnel Cave

long and twisty

full of dragons

stench of dragon

dragons hanging upside down

9 Number the events to show the order in which Hiccup did them.

He started sweating.      He smelled the dragons.

He climbed the cliff.      He went down the tunnel.

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2b

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2h

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2c

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Unit 6 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Int

o th

e D

rago

n’s

Cave

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Find

and

cop

y tw

o w

ords

from

the

first

par

agra

ph th

at te

ll us

wha

t m

ost o

f the

Hoo

ligan

Trib

e ar

e lik

e.

“min

dles

s thu

g”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

2.

In th

e fir

st p

arag

raph

, wha

t doe

s th

e w

ord

“des

pite

” mea

n? T

ick

one.

□ a

lthou

gh

□ b

ecau

se

□ t

houg

htle

ss

□ u

nkin

d

alth

ough

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ord.

(The

re a

re tw

o in

stan

ces

in th

is p

arag

raph

, bot

h w

ith th

e sa

me

mea

ning

.)•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s co

ntai

ning

the

wor

d, th

en id

entif

y a

wor

d in

th

e qu

estio

n w

ith th

e sa

me

mea

ning

.

3.

Wha

t did

Hic

cup

expe

ct to

find

at

the

end

of th

e tu

nnel

?dr

agon

s2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

4.

The

tunn

el w

as n

ot a

com

fort

able

pl

ace

to b

e.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

from

pa

ragr

aph

2 fo

r thi

s st

atem

ent.

You

do n

ot h

ave

to u

se d

irect

qu

otat

ions

from

the

text

.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•It

was

wet

./“dr

ippi

ng a

nd c

lam

my”

•It

was

low

./“na

rrow

, cla

ustr

opho

bic

hole

s”•

It w

as a

tigh

t fit./

“the

boy

s cou

ld o

nly

just

sque

eze

thro

ugh,

squi

rmin

g on

thei

r st

omac

hs”

•It

was

dar

k./“

the

flare

s hel

d in

thei

r mou

ths”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of c

ondi

tions

in th

e tu

nnel

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Giv

e ei

ther

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

5.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Aft

er te

n lo

ng m

inut

es …

”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

the

first

wor

d th

at

war

ns u

s th

at d

rago

ns d

o no

t sm

ell

good

.

“ste

nch”

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for w

ords

that

refe

r to

smel

l.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h, lo

okin

g fo

r the

firs

t ref

eren

ce to

a s

mel

l and

reco

gnis

ing

that

the

auth

or c

hose

a p

artic

ular

wor

d to

war

n th

e re

ader

that

the

smel

l w

as b

ad.

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Unit 6 • FICTION

6.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e sm

ell g

ot

stro

nger

as

the

boys

got

clo

ser t

o th

e en

d of

the

tunn

el?

They

wer

e ge

ttin

g cl

oser

to th

e dr

agon

s (a

nd

the

smel

l was

com

ing

from

the

drag

ons)

.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

7.

Giv

e tw

o re

ason

s w

hy H

iccu

p m

ight

hav

e be

en s

urpr

ised

whe

n he

reac

hed

the

end

of th

e tu

nnel

.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Th

e ca

vern

was

gin

orm

ous.

•Th

ere

wer

e m

ore

drag

ons

than

Hic

cup

imag

ined

exi

sted

.•

Ther

e w

ere

spec

ies

of d

rago

n th

at H

iccu

p ha

d ne

ver h

eard

of.

•Th

ere

wer

e dr

agon

s ev

eryw

here

.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

8.

Tick

to sh

ow w

hich

stat

emen

t is

true

for e

ach

plac

e. O

ne st

atem

ent

is tr

ue fo

r bot

h pl

aces

.

Tunn

elCa

ve

long

and

twis

ty

full

of d

rago

ns

sten

ch o

f dra

gon

drag

ons

hang

ing

upsi

de d

own

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elCa

ve

long

and

twis

ty✓

full

of d

rago

ns✓

sten

ch o

f dra

gon

✓✓

drag

ons

hang

ing

upsi

de d

own

2h 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e co

mpa

rison

s with

in th

e te

xt.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

text

yo

u w

ill fi

nd th

e re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whi

ch o

f the

pla

ces

each

sta

tem

ent d

escr

ibes

.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

five

answ

ers

corr

ect.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r fou

r ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

9.

Num

ber t

he e

vent

s to

sho

w th

e or

der i

n w

hich

Hic

cup

did

them

.

□ H

e st

arte

d sw

eatin

g.

□ H

e sm

elle

d th

e dr

agon

s.

□ H

e cl

imbe

d th

e cl

iff.

□ H

e w

ent d

own

the

tunn

el.

He

star

ted

swea

ting.

4

He

smel

led

the

drag

ons.

3

He

clim

bed

the

cliff

. 1

He

wen

t dow

n th

e tu

nnel

. 2

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

who

le te

xt fo

r eac

h of

the

even

ts d

escr

ibed

.•

Num

ber t

he e

vent

s, th

en c

heck

you

r ans

wer

aga

inst

the

text

.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

even

ts c

orre

ctly

seq

uenc

ed.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o ev

ents

cor

rect

ly s

eque

nced

.

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• FICTION

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Unit 7FICTION

An Egyptian Myth/A Korean MythKate Ruttle

Key text features

The texts are both short creation myths from different cultures.

l The Teaching text is an Egyptian myth retold by Kate Ruttle.

l The Practice text is a Korean myth retold by Kate Ruttle.

Reading the Teaching text: An Egyptian Myth

l What do the children know about myths? Confirm that they are often stories that explain how things came to be in the natural world and usually have some element of magic or reference to gods. Myths are often specific to individual cultures.

l What do the children know about Ancient Egypt, its pharaohs and gods? Show them pictures of some Ancient Egyptian gods, including Ra, Set, Isis, Osiris and Horus.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about whether this is really likely to be the reason that the Nile floods each year.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 58–59).

Reading the Practice text: A Korean Myth

l Encourage the children to think, pair, share what they remember about myths.

l Introduce the text by exploring the children’s knowledge of different types of tree. Show pictures of birch, oak, maple, fir, pine and holly (you may wish to show the deciduous trees with and without leaves). Ask the children to identify similarities and differences between the trees.

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread these myths, confirming key features of myths with the children.

l Read the children a myth linked to a country you have studied in geography. The internet is a rich source of myths for children.

l Explain to the children that they are going to create a multimedia presentation of their own version of the new myth.

l Encourage the children to work in groups to retell and improve the myth.

l In pairs, ask the children to illustrate key events in the myth, draw relevant illustrations and scan these (if done on paper). They can then use word-processing software to write and edit their version of the myth, inserting their images to illustrate it.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Stories from Ancient Egypt – Joyce Tyldesley

A Year Full of Stories – Angela McAllister

The Orchard Book of Greek Myths – Geraldine McCaughrean

Beowulf – Michael Morporgo

Illustrated Norse Myths – Alex Frith

Q1: Why was Osiris made the first pharaoh?

A1: He was Ra’s favourite grandchild and a good man.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: Why do you think Set was made god of deserts and storms?

A2: Accept answers such as:

• People don’t usually live in the desert, so Set could not hurt them.

• Set was angry and storms are angry.

• The desert is not an important place of which to be god.

Strategy: Listen to the whole text again, thinking about what Set did and how Ra felt about him.

Q3: List all the Egyptian gods and goddesses mentioned in the story.

A3: Ra, Osiris, Isis, Set, Horus

Strategy: Listen to the whole text again, being alert for information about gods and goddesses

Extending reading

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Unit 7 • FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: An

Egyp

tian

Myt

h Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Look

at t

he fi

rst p

arag

raph

. Fin

d an

d co

py fi

ve w

ords

that

exp

lain

w

hen

thes

e ev

ents

hap

pene

d.

“Bef

ore

the

begi

nnin

g of

tim

e”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

2.

In th

e fir

st p

arag

raph

, wha

t doe

s th

e w

ord

“sol

itary

” mea

n?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ p

rivat

e

□ q

uiet

□ s

ingl

e

□ u

nsoc

iabl

e

sing

le2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ce c

onta

inin

g th

e w

ord,

then

iden

tify

a w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n w

ith th

e sa

me

mea

ning

.

3.

Why

did

Set

kill

Osi

ris?

•H

e w

as je

alou

s.•

He

wan

ted

to b

e th

e ph

arao

h.2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

4.

Why

doe

s th

e w

riter

men

tion

the

god

Ra in

the

first

par

agra

ph?

It is

impo

rtan

t to

know

who

Ra

is fo

r the

w

hole

sto

ry.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

•Sk

im-re

ad th

e w

hole

text

, con

side

ring

the

role

of R

a in

the

text

.•

Refle

ct o

n th

e im

pact

of m

entio

ning

Ra

at th

is e

arly

poi

nt.

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Unit 7 • FICTION

5.

Ra w

as th

e m

ost p

ower

ful o

f the

go

ds.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

for t

his

stat

emen

t. Yo

u do

not

hav

e to

use

di

rect

quo

tatio

ns fr

om th

e te

xt.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•H

e w

as th

e fir

st g

od.

•Al

l of t

he o

ther

god

s w

ere

eith

er h

is w

ife o

r hi

s ch

ildre

n an

d gr

andc

hild

ren/

“the

y ha

d m

any

child

ren

and

gran

dchi

ldre

n”•

It w

as h

is jo

b to

run

the

wor

ld, b

ut h

is

fam

ily h

elpe

d./“

His

fam

ily w

ere

all g

ods l

ike

him

, and

they

hel

ped

him

to ru

n th

e w

orld

.”•

He

was

abl

e to

mak

e O

siris

a p

hara

oh./“

Ra

mad

e hi

m th

e fir

st ru

ler –

the

first

pha

raoh

of

all

of E

gypt

.”•

He

deci

des

wha

t eac

h go

d is

resp

onsi

ble

for./

Set w

as b

anis

hed

to b

ecom

e re

spon

sibl

e fo

r des

erts

and

sto

rms./

“Ra

gave

H

orus

the

resp

onsi

bilit

y of

pro

tect

ing

all

futu

re p

hara

ohs,

as w

ell a

s mak

ing

him

god

of

the

sky.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of R

a’s

posi

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ces

arou

nd th

e ev

iden

ce.

•G

ive

eith

er d

irect

quo

tatio

ns o

r par

aphr

ase

thei

r mea

ning

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

6.

Whi

ch o

f the

se w

ould

be

the

best

tit

le fo

r thi

s m

yth?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ W

hy O

siris

Was

the

Firs

t Pha

raoh

□ W

hy th

e N

ile R

ises

Eac

h Ye

ar

□ W

hy S

et K

illed

Osi

ris

□ W

ho A

re th

e Eg

yptia

n G

ods?

Why

the

Nile

Ris

es E

ach

Year

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of it

s m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n, m

atch

ing

them

aga

inst

you

r ov

eral

l und

erst

andi

ng.

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A Korean MythOne day, years and years ago, the birds of this world knew that cold winter was approaching and began to fly south to warmer countries. All except one little bird who had a broken wing and could not fly.

“I will ask the trees in the forest if they can keep me warm in the cold winter,” he said.

So, he jumped and he flapped towards the trees at the fringe of the forest. He first met a majestic birch. “Magnificent Birch,” he sang, “will you allow me to stay warm in your branches during the cold winter?”

“Certainly not!” the birch tree said. “I have to take care of my branches.”

The little bird staggered on until he came to a great oak tree. “Oh, mighty Oak, when winter comes, I may freeze. Will you keep me warm in your branches?”

“No, for you might eat my acorns!” replied the oak. “Go away.”

The little bird jumped and he flapped until he came to a maple tree. “Oh, glorious Maple, will you let me spend winter in your warm branches?”

“I shall not!” replied the maple. “I never help strangers.”

The poor little bird did not know where to go, but he kept staggering and flapping along with his broken wing. Presently the fir tree saw him and said, “Come here, little bird. You may spend the winter in my branches.”

The pine tree nearby said, “I will spread my branches to keep the wind away.”

The holly tree added, “You may eat my berries. They are good food for birds.”

The little bird was very comfortable in his warm nest, protected from the cold wind and with holly berries to eat.

That night, the Frost King said, “North Wind, it’s time to start winter. Blow the leaves from the trees, my friend, except for those who helped the bird with the broken wing. For their kindness, they may keep their leaves, even in winter.”

1

4

6

9

10

13

14

16

17

20

21

22

26

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Name: Class: Date:

1 From the first paragraph, find and copy four words that explain when these events happened.

2 Why does the bird call the trees “magnificent”, “mighty” and “glorious”?

3 Look at the paragraph beginning “So, he jumped and he flapped…”.

What does the word “fringe” mean?

Tick one.

centre □ edge □ heart □ nearby □

4 Write the name of the tree beside the excuse it gave not to help the bird.

“No, for you might eat my acorns!”

“I never help strangers.”

“I have to take care of my branches.”

5 Why does the writer tell you in the first paragraph that the bird had a broken wing?

6 Tick one box in each row to show whether the statement is true or false.

True False

The bird wanted the trees to give him food.

The bird tried to fly south.

The bird asked politely for help.

The bird was comfortable in its nest in the fir tree.

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

2 marks

2b

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Name: Class: Date:

7 List three trees from the story that were allowed to keep their leaves, even in winter.

8 The story is set just before the beginning of winter.

Find two pieces of evidence for this statement. You do not have to use direct quotations from the text.

9 Which of these would be the best title for this myth?

Tick one.

The Bird with the Broken Wing □ Why Some Trees Are Evergreen □ Why the Bird Didn’t Fly South □ King Frost and the North Wind □ 1 mark

2c

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2d

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Unit 7 • FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: A K

orea

n M

yth

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

Fr

om th

e fir

st p

arag

raph

, find

and

co

py fo

ur w

ords

that

exp

lain

whe

n th

ese

even

ts h

appe

ned.

“yea

rs a

nd y

ears

ago

”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

•Re

mem

ber t

o fin

d an

d co

py, n

ot p

arap

hras

e.

2.

Why

doe

s th

e bi

rd c

all t

he tr

ees

“mag

nific

ent”

, “m

ight

y” a

nd

“glo

rious

”?

He

is tr

ying

to fl

atte

r the

m s

o th

at th

ey

help

him

.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he w

ords

the

bird

cal

ls th

e tr

ees.

•Co

nsid

er w

hy th

e bi

rd w

ould

hav

e us

ed th

ese

adje

ctiv

es.

3.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“So,

he

jum

ped

and

he fl

appe

d …

”.

W

hat d

oes

the

wor

d “f

ringe

” mea

n?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ c

entr

e

□ e

dge

□ h

eart

□ n

earb

y

edge

2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ce c

onta

inin

g th

e w

ord,

then

iden

tify

a w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n w

ith th

e sa

me

mea

ning

.

4.

Writ

e th

e na

me

of th

e tr

ee b

esid

e th

e ex

cuse

it g

ave

not t

o he

lp th

e bi

rd.

“N

o, fo

r you

mig

ht e

at m

y ac

orns

!”

“I

nev

er h

elp

stra

nger

s.”

“I

hav

e to

take

car

e of

my

bran

ches

.”

“No,

for y

ou m

ight

eat

my

acor

ns!”

– oa

k

“I n

ever

hel

p st

rang

ers.”

– m

aple

“I h

ave

to ta

ke c

are

of m

y br

anch

es.”

– bi

rch

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

pass

age,

look

ing

for t

he e

xcus

es th

e tr

ees

gave

the

bird

.•

Writ

e th

e na

me

of th

e tr

ee b

esid

e ea

ch o

f the

exc

uses

.

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Unit 7 • FICTION

5.

Why

doe

s th

e w

riter

tell

you

in th

e fir

st p

arag

raph

that

the

bird

had

a

brok

en w

ing?

The

fact

that

the

bird

can

’t fl

y is

impo

rtan

t to

the

stor

y.2f 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

•Sk

im-re

ad th

e w

hole

text

, con

side

ring

the

situ

atio

n of

the

bird

in th

e te

xt.

•Re

flect

on

the

impa

ct o

f men

tioni

ng th

e bi

rd’s

inab

ility

to fl

y at

this

ear

ly

poin

t.

6.

Tick

one

box

in e

ach

row

to s

how

w

heth

er th

e st

atem

ent i

s tr

ue o

r fa

lse.

True

Fals

e

The

bird

wan

ted

the

tree

s to

giv

e hi

m fo

od.

The

bird

trie

d to

fly

sou

th.

The

bird

ask

ed

polit

ely

for h

elp.

The

bird

was

co

mfo

rtab

le in

its

nes

t in

the

fir

tree

.

True

Fals

e

The

bird

wan

ted

the

tree

s to

giv

e hi

m fo

od.

The

bird

trie

d to

fly

sou

th.

The

bird

ask

ed

polit

ely

for h

elp.

The

bird

was

co

mfo

rtab

le in

its

nes

t in

the

fir

tree

.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

text

yo

u w

ill fi

nd re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he te

xt to

dec

ide

whe

ther

eac

h st

atem

ent i

s tr

ue o

r fal

se.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

four

ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

7.

List

thre

e tr

ees

from

the

stor

y th

at

wer

e al

low

ed to

kee

p th

eir l

eave

s, ev

en in

win

ter.

fir,

pine

, hol

ly2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er to

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

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Unit 7 • FICTION

8.

The

stor

y is

set

just

bef

ore

the

begi

nnin

g of

win

ter.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

for t

his

stat

emen

t. Yo

u do

not

hav

e to

use

di

rect

quo

tatio

ns fr

om th

e te

xt.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•W

e ar

e to

ld th

at w

inte

r is

com

ing.

/“th

e bi

rds

knew

that

col

d w

inte

r was

app

roac

hing

”•

The

bird

tells

the

oak

that

win

ter i

s co

min

g./“

whe

n w

inte

r com

es, I

may

free

ze.”

•Th

e Fr

ost K

ing

told

the

Nor

th W

ind

to

star

t win

ter./

“Nor

th W

ind,

it’s

tim

e to

star

t w

inte

r.”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of th

e se

ason

s.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Giv

e ei

ther

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

9.

Whi

ch o

f the

se w

ould

be

the

best

tit

le fo

r thi

s m

yth?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ T

he B

ird w

ith th

e Br

oken

Win

g

□ W

hy S

ome

Tree

s Ar

e Ev

ergr

een

□ W

hy th

e Bi

rd D

idn’

t Fly

Sou

th

□ K

ing

Fros

t and

the

Nor

th W

ind

Why

Som

e Tr

ees

are

Ever

gree

n2c 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of it

s m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n, m

atch

ing

them

aga

inst

you

r ov

eral

l und

erst

andi

ng.

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• NON-FICTION

66 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 8NON-FICTION

Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough?Anna Claybourne

Key text features

Both texts are extracts from the same book: Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough? by Anna Claybourne.

Reading the Teaching and Practice texts: Knight Survival Guide

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Discuss the title and sub-title before reading the text: Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough?

l Encourage predictions of the text. Ask questions such as: – What do you already know about knights? – What does the sub-title tell you about being a knight? – What do you expect to find out in the text?

l Invite the children to complete the first two columns in a KWL grid (I know, I want to find out, I learned).

l Tell them that they will be able to complete the final column once they have explored the text further.

l Read the extract aloud. Allow children time to complete the final column of their grid. What did they find out?

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model 'cracking' the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 68–69).

Moving into writing

l Talk about the style of writing, giving instructions and information.

l Ask the children to think of another job that they know something about (e.g. a job that someone in the family does; a teacher; a soldier; a doctor; a builder; a shop assistant; a hotel receptionist). If possible, give the children time to research their chosen job.

l Let the children plan a text using paragraph headings. As part of their planning, suggest that they consider images, labels and text boxes.

l Challenge the children to create, edit and improve their text on a computer.

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 67

I Am a Doctor – Deborah Chancellor

Helping Out: At the Dog Rescue Centre – Judith Anderson

Helping in the Community – Victoria Parker

Extending reading

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Q1: Which words at the beginning of the text encourage the reader to want to be a knight?

A1: “Being a knight is GREAT!” (paragraph 1) (Also “Being a knight is fun” paragraph 2)

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text.

Q2: Why do you have to be strong?

A2: To wear the heavy armour/because it is hard work/because you have to lift a heavy sword

Strategy: Remember to use information in the text, not your general knowledge! Listen carefully and find ideas in the text.

Q3: Would you be a page, a squire or a knight? How do you know?

A3: A page – because I’m not yet 14.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make notes of words used in the text.

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Kni

ght S

urvi

val G

uide

: Are

You

Tou

gh E

noug

h?

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or

writ

es “A

re y

ou to

ugh

enou

gh?”

(p

arag

raph

2) a

s a

ques

tion?

•to

mak

e yo

u fe

el in

volv

ed in

the 

text

•to

mak

e yo

u th

ink

abou

t the

ans

wer

•to

mak

e yo

u w

ant t

o re

ad th

e te

xt•

to w

arn

you

that

a k

nigh

t’s

job

is h

ard

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

that

follo

ws

the

ques

tion,

con

side

ring

your

ans

wer

.

2.

“Bei

ng a

kni

ght i

s fun

, but

it’s

not

an

eas

y rid

e.”

In

this

sen

tenc

e, “i

t’s n

ot a

n ea

sy

ride”

is c

lose

st in

mea

ning

to w

hich

op

tion?

Cho

ose

one.

□ Y

ou h

ave

to b

e a

good

hor

se-ri

der.

□ T

he h

orse

s ar

e di

fficu

lt to

han

dle.

□ Y

ou h

urt y

ours

elf i

f you

fall

off.

□ I

t is

a ha

rd jo

b to

do.

It is

a h

ard

job

to d

o.2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

wor

ds in

thei

r con

text

, con

side

ring

all t

he m

eani

ngs

give

n in

the

ques

tion.

•D

ecid

e w

hich

mea

ning

mak

es th

e m

ost s

ense

in th

is te

xt.

3.

You

need

to b

e st

rong

to b

e a

knig

ht!

W

hich

two

thin

gs a

re p

artic

ular

ly

heav

y?

•ar

mou

r•

swor

d2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

info

rmat

ion

from

non

-fict

ion.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ord

“hea

vy”.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e fo

llow

ing

para

grap

h.

4.

It ta

kes

a lo

ng ti

me

to le

arn

to b

e a

knig

ht.

N

umbe

r the

trai

ning

sta

ges

to

show

the

orde

r in

whi

ch y

ou d

o th

em.

□ k

nigh

t

□ p

age

□ s

quire

3 kn

ight

1 pa

ge

2 sq

uire

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ords

and

con

side

r the

ir pu

rpos

e.

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

5.

Wou

ld y

ou b

e go

od a

t bei

ng a

pa

ge?

□ Y

es

□ N

o

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

this

? U

se id

eas

from

the

text

in y

our a

nsw

er.

Yes

•I a

m g

ood

at ti

dyin

g up

/tak

ing

mes

sage

s.•

I do

not m

ind

hard

wor

k if

it m

eans

I co

uld

be a

kni

ght.

•I l

ike

fight

ing.

•I a

m s

tron

g.•

I am

goo

d at

ridi

ng.

No

•I d

o no

t wan

t to

fight

.•

I do

not l

ike

keep

ing

thin

gs c

lean

and

tidy

/ta

king

mes

sage

s.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Find

the

info

rmat

ion

on b

eing

a p

age.

•Re

ad it

car

eful

ly.

•Re

mem

ber t

o us

e id

eas

from

the

text

in y

our a

nsw

er.

Ther

e is

no

mar

k fo

r the

firs

t par

t of t

he q

uest

ion

(yes

/no)

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k on

ly if

refe

renc

e is

mad

e to

idea

s in

the

text

in th

e an

swer

.

6.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

is b

ook

is

calle

d Kn

ight

Sur

viva

l Gui

de?

Refe

r to

two

idea

s in

the

text

in y

our

answ

er.

It h

elps

you

to u

nder

stan

d w

hat y

ou h

ave

to

do if

you

wan

t to

be a

kni

ght,

such

as

wea

ring

heav

y ar

mou

r and

lear

ning

how

to fi

ght w

ith

a he

avy

swor

d.

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt w

hilst

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Fi

nd tw

o th

ings

that

a k

nigh

t wou

ld h

ave

to k

now

or d

o if

he w

ante

d to

su

rviv

e.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h id

ea w

hich

is re

fere

nced

in th

e te

xt, u

p to

a to

tal

of 2

mar

ks.

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

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Knight Survival Guide: Are You Tough Enough?Anna Claybourne

Showing offWhen there are no real battles, take part in a tournament. This is a fighting competition in which you can show off your skills.

Charge!To joust, you must:

1. Ride towards your enemy at top speed.2. Try to hit him with your lance.3. Wear your smartest armour!

The winnersKnights who won a joust were given a prize. They were usually given money.

For the ladiesKnights sometimes fought to impress a lady.

Knight rulesA good knight must be very polite to ladies. Always bow and kneel to a lady and never, ever swear at her!

Your special ladyYou can even fight for a lady. In any fight, make sure you wear her family colours or coat of arms.

Take careKnights were expected to defend and protect women.

On a missionYour king or lord might test you by sending you on a quest, or mission. You might have to catch an enemy or save a prisoner in a castle.

Top questsIf you are really lucky you might get to find treasure or rescue a princess from a tower. And all knights want to fight a dragon, of course!

Cup of magicSome knights went on a great adventure to find a magical cup called the Holy Grail.

1

4

9

11

13

16

19

21

24

27

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Name: Class: Date:

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2b

1 mark

2f

2 marks

2b

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2g

1 Why would a knight take part in a tournament? Give two reasons from the text.

2 What does the heading “Showing off” tell us about the author’s feelings about tournaments?

3 “make sure you wear her … coat of arms.”

In this sentence, the underlined words are closest in meaning to the following. Tick one.

warm winter coat □ something you wear in secret □ family’s shield □ another layer of protection □

4 At this time, were ladies seen as strong and independent, or weak and fragile?

Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

5 Use information from the text to write a definition of a joust for the glossary.

6 Give two reasons from the text why knights would fight in a tournament.

7 “Your king or lord might test you by sending you on a quest, or mission” (paragraph 8). Why did the writer add the words “or mission”?

8 “And all knights want to fight a dragon, of course!” (paragraph 9). Why did the writer use the words “of course!” to finish the sentence?

9 Do you think the text would be helpful if you wanted to be a knight?

Yes □ No □ Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

2 marks

2c

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Kni

ght S

urvi

val G

uide

: Are

You

Tou

gh E

noug

h?

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

s

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Why

wou

ld a

kni

ght t

ake

part

in

a to

urna

men

t? G

ive

two

reas

ons

from

the

text

.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o fr

om:

•H

e co

uld

win

mon

ey.

•H

e ca

n sh

ow o

ff h

is s

kills

.•

He

can

impr

ess

a la

dy.

•It

can

kee

p hi

m re

ady

for b

attle

.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ord

“tou

rnam

ent”

and

read

the

info

rmat

ion

arou

nd it

.•

Und

erlin

e th

e re

ason

s as

you

find

them

.•

Sele

ct th

e tw

o m

ost i

nter

estin

g re

ason

s fo

r you

r ans

wer

.

2.

Wha

t doe

s th

e he

adin

g “S

how

ing

off”

tell

us a

bout

the

auth

or’s

fe

elin

gs a

bout

tour

nam

ents

?

•It

sug

gest

s th

at th

e au

thor

thin

ks th

ey a

re

silly

and

not

nec

essa

ry.

•If

the

knig

hts

are

show

ing

off,

they

are

not

be

havi

ng p

rope

rly.

•Sh

e do

esn’

t thi

nk th

ey a

re a

goo

d id

ea.

•Sh

e th

inks

they

are

spe

cial

/a c

hanc

e to

sh

ow y

our s

kills

.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

wha

t you

kno

w a

bout

sho

win

g of

f. Is

it a

goo

d th

ing

or a

bad

th

ing?

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r rec

ogni

tion

that

“sho

win

g of

f” h

as c

onno

tatio

ns b

eyon

d pr

actis

ing

and

dem

onst

ratin

g sk

ills.

3.

“mak

e su

re y

ou w

ear h

er …

co

at o

f arm

s.”

In th

is s

ente

nce,

the

unde

rline

d w

ords

are

clo

sest

in m

eani

ng to

w

hich

opt

ion?

Tic

k on

e.

□ w

arm

win

ter c

oat

□ f

amily

’s s

hiel

d

□ s

omet

hing

you

wea

r in

secr

et

□ a

noth

er la

yer o

f pro

tect

ion

fam

ily’s

shi

eld

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

giv

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

con

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

wor

ds in

thei

r con

text

, con

side

ring

all t

he m

eani

ngs

give

n in

the

ques

tion.

•D

ecid

e w

hich

mea

ning

mak

es th

e m

ost s

ense

in th

is te

xt.

4.

At th

is ti

me,

wer

e la

dies

see

n as

st

rong

and

inde

pend

ent,

or w

eak

and

fragi

le?

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

Ladi

es w

ere

seen

as

bein

g w

eak

and

fragi

le.

They

nee

ded

to b

e pr

otec

ted

and

defe

nded

alth

ough

they

like

d to

wat

ch k

nigh

ts fi

ghtin

g fo

r the

m a

nd w

earin

g th

eir c

olou

rs.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Rere

ad th

e te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.•

Iden

tify

the

mai

n id

ea fi

rst,

then

just

ify w

ith e

vide

nce

from

the

text

.

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Unit 8 • NON-FICTION

5.

Use

info

rmat

ion

from

the

text

to

writ

e a

defin

ition

of a

jous

t for

the

glos

sary

.

•fig

htin

g co

mpe

titio

n•

knig

hts

fight

ing

•rid

ing

and

fight

ing

•fig

ht w

ith la

nces

•co

mpe

te w

ith la

nces

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for i

nfor

mat

ion

abou

t jou

sts.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e in

form

atio

n.•

Sum

mar

ise

the

info

rmat

ion

for y

our d

efini

tion.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a re

ason

able

defi

nitio

n of

a jo

ust.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r the

use

of

info

rmat

ion

in th

e te

xt.

6.

Giv

e tw

o re

ason

s fr

om th

e te

xt

why

kni

ghts

wou

ld fi

ght i

n a

tour

nam

ent.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o fr

om:

•to

sho

w o

ff th

eir s

kills

.•

to w

ear t

he s

mar

test

arm

our

•to

win

mon

ey•

to im

pres

s a

lady

•Th

ey li

ke fi

ghtin

g/rid

ing

fast

/usi

ng a

sw

ord

or la

nce.

•to

win

a p

rize

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for i

nfor

mat

ion

abou

t tou

rnam

ents

.•

Care

fully

read

the

info

rmat

ion.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h re

ason

giv

en, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

. Do

not a

ccep

t ‘f

or fu

n’.

7.

“You

r kin

g or

lord

mig

ht te

st y

ou b

y se

ndin

g yo

u on

a q

uest

, or m

issi

on”

(par

agra

ph 8

).

W

hy d

id th

e w

riter

add

the

wor

ds

“or m

issi

on”?

to e

xpla

in w

hat a

que

st is

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

why

the

auth

or m

ight

hav

e m

ade

that

dec

isio

n.

8.

“And

all

knig

hts w

ant t

o fig

ht a

dr

agon

, of c

ours

e!” (

para

grap

h 9)

.

W

hy d

id th

e w

riter

use

the

wor

ds

“of c

ours

e!” t

o fin

ish

the

sent

ence

?

•Fi

ghtin

g dr

agon

s is

som

ethi

ng th

at

ever

yone

kno

ws

abou

t kni

ghts

.•

to b

e sa

rcas

tic/m

ake

a jo

ke (d

rago

ns a

re

not r

eal)

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

why

the

auth

or m

ight

hav

e m

ade

that

dec

isio

n.

9.

Do

you

thin

k th

e te

xt w

ould

be

help

ful i

f you

wan

ted

to b

e a

knig

ht?

□ Y

es

□ N

o

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

Yes

•It

tells

you

thin

gs y

ou n

eed

to k

now

, suc

h as

that

you

sho

uld

prac

tice

for b

attle

s by

ta

king

par

t in

tour

nam

ents

.•

It te

lls y

ou im

port

ant r

ules

for b

eing

a

knig

ht s

uch

as y

ou m

ust b

e po

lite

to la

dies

.

No

•It

doe

sn’t

giv

e m

uch

info

rmat

ion

abou

t fig

htin

g. It

just

tells

you

how

to jo

ust i

n a

tour

nam

ent.

•It

giv

es y

ou a

bit

of in

form

atio

n ab

out

bein

g a

knig

ht, b

ut it

doe

sn’t

tell

you

muc

h.

It is

not

ver

y us

eful

to k

now

that

you

hav

e to

bow

and

kne

el to

a la

dy.

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

for a

n ov

eral

l im

pres

sion

.•

Scan

it fo

r spe

cific

det

ails.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

expl

anat

ion

and

anot

her f

or re

fere

nce

to id

eas

or

info

rmat

ion

in th

e te

xt.

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Key text features

The texts are both persuasive and biased texts linked by the idea of reducing food waste.

l The Teaching text is Are You Wasting Good Food? It gives information about household food waste.

l The Practice text is Would You Eat Less-Than-Perfect Fruit and Vegetables? It considers the wastage in pre-farm-gate waste.

Both texts are based on information provided at www.wrap.org.uk.

Reading the Teaching text: Are You Wasting Good Food?

l Introduce the text by asking the children to think-pair-share what they know about recycling and then about how much food is thrown away in their house each week.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Talk about the title of the text. What do they think it will be about?

l Read the text to the children and ask if they think their predictions were accurate.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model 'cracking' the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 76–77).

Reading the Practice text: Would You Eat Less-Than-Perfect Fruit and Vegetables?

l Introduce the text by asking the children what they think pre-farm-gate waste means.

l Once they have read the text, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Ask the children to work in pairs (or threes) to research more about food waste. There are many internet sites about the subject, some aimed at children.

l Challenge each pair to agree wording for their ‘Ten Top Tips’ to reduce food waste.

l Ask the children to create posters of their ‘Ten Top Tips’.

Unit 9NON-FICTION

Are You Wasting Good Food?/Would You Eat Less-Than-Perfect Fruit and Vegetables?Kate Ruttle

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and Answers

.Q1: How much food are we throwing away each year? What can that weight be compared to?

A1: 8 million tonnes, which can be compared to 2 million elephants or 2,000 killer whales or 500,000 double-decker buses.

Strategy: Listen carefully for a number near the beginning of the text. Think about the information you are given immediately after you first hear the word.

Q2: Which two reasons are given for throwing away food from a plate or lunch box?

A2: Being a picky eater/having more food than you wanted to eat

Strategy: Think about where in the text you might find the reason. Listen carefully to that part of the text, listening for reasons, not facts.

Q3: What is a landfill site, according to this text?

A3: It is a huge hole in the ground that is filled up with rubbish.

Strategy: Listen to the end of the text, considering the question. Listen out for the words “landfill site” and jot down the words used to explain it. Do not just rely on general knowledge.

The listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Good Enough to Eat – Lizzy Rockwell

How Did That Get in My Lunchbox? – Chris Butterworth

Why Do We Eat? – Stephanie Turnball

Extending reading

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Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Are

You

Was

ting

Goo

d Fo

od?

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

“8 m

illio

n to

nnes

of e

dibl

e fo

od”

W

hich

wor

d or

phr

ase

is c

lose

st in

m

eani

ng to

the

wor

d “e

dibl

e”?

Choo

se o

ne.

□ p

oiso

nous

□ o

ut o

f dat

e

□ c

ooke

d

□ e

atab

le

eata

ble

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

to fi

nd th

e w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, t

hink

ing

abou

t wha

t the

wor

d m

ight

m

ean.

•Lo

ok a

t the

opt

ions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion.

Whi

ch w

ord

has

the

clos

est

mea

ning

?

2.

Giv

e tw

o ex

ampl

es fr

om th

e te

xt o

f ed

ible

food

that

is th

row

n aw

ay.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•br

ead,

rolls

, cak

e•

sala

d, s

alad

veg

etab

les

•po

tato

es, c

arro

ts•

bana

nas,

othe

r fru

it•

yogh

urts

, milk

, fru

it dr

inks

•ve

geta

bles

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

. Do

not j

ust u

se y

our

exis

ting

gene

ral k

now

ledg

e. C

heck

in th

is te

xt.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph

to fi

nd th

e in

form

atio

n yo

u ne

ed.

•Re

mem

ber t

o m

entio

n tw

o th

ings

.

3.

Why

did

the

writ

er u

se a

flow

cha

rt

in th

is te

xt?

to s

how

one

reas

on w

hy w

e ar

e w

astin

g fo

od2f 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to m

eani

ng

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Read

the

four

opt

ions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion.

•Lo

ok fo

r the

flow

cha

rt, a

nd re

ad it

car

eful

ly.

4.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e w

riter

tells

yo

u th

at fa

mili

es a

re w

astin

g m

oney

?

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers

that

sho

w a

n un

ders

tand

ing

of th

e m

essa

ge o

f the

text

. E.g

.

•to

sho

ck th

e re

ader

•to

mak

e th

e re

ader

thin

k ab

out w

hat t

hey

coul

d ha

ve fo

r the

mon

ey•

to g

et th

e re

ader

’s in

tere

st a

nd a

tten

tion

•to

sho

w w

hat a

was

te o

f mon

ey th

e fo

od

was

te is

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he p

arag

raph

abo

ut m

oney

.•

Rere

ad th

at p

arag

raph

and

con

side

r its

impa

ct in

the

who

le te

xt.

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Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

5.

Choo

se th

e st

atem

ent t

hat i

s th

e be

st s

umm

ary

of id

eas

from

the

last

thre

e pa

ragr

aphs

.

□ T

he w

eath

er a

ffec

ts h

ow w

ell a

cr

op g

row

s.

□ W

e do

not

like

to b

uy fr

uit a

nd

vege

tabl

es w

ith b

lem

ishe

s.

□ I

f we

buy

less

-tha

n-pe

rfec

t cro

ps,

the

farm

ers

will

not

was

te th

e fo

od.

□ W

e ne

ed to

find

way

s of

redu

cing

th

e am

ount

of f

ood

we

was

te.

Mos

t fam

ilies

are

put

ting

£700

-wor

th o

f foo

d a

year

into

hol

es in

the

grou

nd a

nd th

is n

eeds

to

cha

nge.

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e pa

ragr

aphs

iden

tified

.•

Dec

ide

whi

ch o

ne is

the

best

sum

mar

y of

the

last

thre

e pa

ragr

aphs

.

6.

This

text

end

s w

ith a

que

stio

n.

Wha

t doe

s th

e w

riter

thin

k is

the

answ

er?

Use

two

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt in

you

r ans

wer

.

Acce

pt re

leva

nt a

nsw

ers

that

are

bas

ed o

n id

eas

in th

e te

xt. E

.g.

•St

op b

eing

a p

icky

eat

er.

•D

o no

t put

too

muc

h fo

od o

nto

a pl

ate

or

into

a lu

nch

box.

•As

k m

y m

um/d

ad n

ot to

thro

w a

way

too

muc

h fo

od.

•Ea

t foo

d th

at is

not

ent

irely

fres

h.

Also

acc

ept “

Do

not t

hrow

aw

ay to

o m

uch

food

” if i

t is

supp

orte

d by

ano

ther

rele

vant

an

swer

. By

itsel

f, th

is a

nsw

er g

ets

no m

arks

.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Rere

ad th

e te

xt, l

ooki

ng fo

r ide

as y

ou c

ould

incl

ude

in y

our a

nsw

er.

Awar

d 1

mar

ks o

f eac

h id

ea fr

om th

e te

xt, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

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Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

78 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

Would You Eat Less-Than-Perfect Fruit and Vegetables?Farms in the UK are currently throwing away around 3 million tonnes of edible fruit and vegetables each year. Why are they throwing it away? It’s because shoppers don’t want to buy fruit and vegetables that look slightly different from all other fruit and vegetables. If shoppers won’t buy these fruit and vegetables from the shops, the shops won’t buy them from the farmers.

Many UK farmers sell their fruit and vegetable crops to supermarkets. The supermarkets will only buy carrots that are a particular colour, shape and size: they don’t want long thin carrots, or short fat ones. Carrots that are slightly bent, or have bumps and lumps, won’t end up in a supermarket. Instead, hundreds of tonnes of perfectly good, carroty-tasting carrots are being left to rot in heaps on the farm, being fed to animals or are being ploughed back and left to rot in fields.

Farmers harvest the crop.

Supermarkets buy some of the crop from the farmer.

We buy our fruit and vegetables from the supermarket.

Blemished and wonky crops are left to rot.

The biggest difficulty farmers have is that they rely on different types of weather coming at just the right times of year. If the autumn is too long or the spring is too wet, apples and pears may end up with little brown patches on their skin. These blemishes don’t affect the taste, and don’t do us any harm, but we don’t like to buy them and the fruit ends up rotting on the farms and in the orchards.

What’s the answer? Some supermarkets now sell “wonky” fruit and vegetables at a lower price, to see whether shoppers will buy them. These “weather-blemished” crops usually taste just the same as the other crops on sale, they just don’t look as pretty. If people buy these crops from the supermarkets, the farmers get paid something for them and don’t have to watch the crops rotting before they leave the farm gate.

Reducing food waste is a shared problem and we need to find a shared solution. What do you think you can do about it?

1

11

18

24

30

FACT BOX

3 million tonnes is the same weight as:

• 6 cruise liners

• 4 big aeroplanes, including passengers

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Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

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Name: Class: Date:

1 Give a reason from the text to explain why farms are throwing away so much edible fruit and vegetables.

2 Why did the writer use a fact box in this text? Tick one.

so that the text does have too many words □ to help readers understand what “3 million tonnes” means □ to explain why so much fruit and vegetables are wasted □ to tell readers to eat different-looking fruit and vegetables □

3 Give two reasons from the text why a supermarket might reject a carrot.

4 What happens to the carrots the supermarkets don’t buy?

5 “These blemishes don’t affect the taste.”

Tick the phrase that is closest in meaning to “blemishes”. Tick one.

bruises or other damage □ maggots or other insect damage □ marks or patches on the skin □ size and shape of the fruit □

6 Why do you think the supermarkets have to sell the “wonky” fruit and vegetables at a lower price?

7 Tick the statement that is the best summary of ideas from the last three paragraphs. Tick one.

The weather affects how well a crop grows. □ We do not like to buy fruit and vegetables with blemishes. □ If we buy less-than-perfect crops, the farmers will not waste the food. □ We need to find ways of reducing the amount of food we waste. □8 Put one tick in each row to show whether the fact is true or false.

True False

All the fruit and vegetables we throw away would fit into a long train.

Many shoppers will only buy fruit and vegetables that look normal.

Any fruit and vegetables the farmers cannot sell are eaten on the farm.

Fruit with blemishes on the skin taste the same as prettier fruit.

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2c

2 marks

2b

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Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Wou

ld Y

ou E

at L

ess-

Than

-Per

fect

Fru

it A

nd V

eget

able

s?

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

G

ive

a re

ason

from

the

text

to

expl

ain

why

farm

s ar

e th

row

ing

away

so

muc

h ed

ible

frui

t and

ve

geta

bles

.

Shop

pers

do

not w

ant t

o bu

y fr

uit a

nd

vege

tabl

es th

at lo

ok s

light

ly d

iffer

ent f

rom

all

othe

r fru

it an

d ve

geta

bles

.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

. Do

not j

ust u

se y

our

exis

ting

gene

ral k

now

ledg

e. C

heck

in th

is te

xt.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph

to fi

nd th

e in

form

atio

n yo

u ne

ed.

2.

Why

did

the

writ

er u

se a

fact

box

in

this

text

? Ti

ck o

ne.

□ s

o th

at th

e te

xt d

oes

not h

ave

too

man

y w

ords

□ t

o he

lp re

ader

s un

ders

tand

wha

t “3

mill

ion

tonn

es” m

eans

□ t

o ex

plai

n w

hy s

o m

uch

frui

t and

ve

geta

bles

are

was

ted

□ t

o te

ll re

ader

s to

eat

diff

eren

t-lo

okin

g fr

uit a

nd v

eget

able

s

to h

elp

read

ers

unde

rsta

nd w

hat “

3 m

illio

n to

nnes

” mea

ns2f 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to m

eani

ng

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Read

the

four

opt

ions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion.

•Lo

ok fo

r the

fact

box

, and

read

it c

aref

ully

.•

Rere

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Dec

ide

whi

ch o

ne is

the

best

exp

lana

tion

for t

he w

riter

’s d

ecis

ion.

3.

Giv

e tw

o re

ason

s fr

om th

e te

xt

why

a s

uper

mar

ket m

ight

reje

ct a

ca

rrot

.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•to

o lo

ng a

nd th

in•

too

shor

t and

fat

•sli

ghtly

ben

t•

have

bum

ps a

nd lu

mps

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

. Do

not j

ust u

se y

our

exis

ting

gene

ral k

now

ledg

e. C

heck

in th

is te

xt.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph

to fi

nd th

e in

form

atio

n yo

u ne

ed.

4.

Wha

t hap

pens

to th

e ca

rrot

s th

e su

perm

arke

ts d

on’t

buy

?•

They

are

left

to ro

t in

heap

s on

the

farm

.•

They

are

fed

to a

nim

als.

•Th

ey a

re p

loug

hed

back

and

left

to ro

t in

field

s.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

ans

wer

. Do

not j

ust u

se y

our

exis

ting

gene

ral k

now

ledg

e. C

heck

in th

is te

xt.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph

to fi

nd th

e in

form

atio

n yo

u ne

ed.

5.

“The

se b

lem

ishe

s don

’t a

ffect

the

tast

e.”

Ti

ck th

e ph

rase

that

is c

lose

st in

m

eani

ng to

“ble

mis

hes”

. Tic

k on

e.

□ b

ruis

es o

r oth

er d

amag

e

□ m

arks

or p

atch

es o

n th

e sk

in

□ m

aggo

ts o

r oth

er in

sect

dam

age

□ s

ize

and

shap

e of

the

frui

t

mar

ks o

r pat

ches

on

the

skin

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

to fi

nd th

e w

ord

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, t

hink

ing

abou

t wha

t the

wor

d m

ight

m

ean.

•Lo

ok a

t the

opt

ions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion.

Whi

ch w

ord

has

the

clos

est

mea

ning

?

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Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 81

Unit 9 • NON-FICTION

6.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e su

perm

arke

ts

sell

the

“won

ky” f

ruit

and

vege

tabl

es a

t a lo

wer

pric

e?

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers

such

as

the

follo

win

g.

•to

per

suad

e sh

oppe

rs to

buy

them

•be

caus

e sh

oppe

rs w

on’t

pay

as

muc

h fo

r th

em•

to te

ach

peop

le th

at th

ey ta

ste

the

sam

e

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Dec

ide

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r an

answ

er.

•Re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

car

eful

ly w

hile

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

7.

Tick

the

stat

emen

t tha

t is

the

best

su

mm

ary

of id

eas

from

the

last

th

ree

para

grap

hs. T

ick

one.

□ T

he w

eath

er a

ffec

ts h

ow w

ell a

cr

op g

row

s.

□ W

e do

not

like

to b

uy fr

uit a

nd

vege

tabl

es w

ith b

lem

ishe

s.

□ I

f we

buy

less

-tha

n-pe

rfec

t cro

ps,

the

farm

ers

will

not

was

te th

e fo

od.

□ W

e ne

ed to

find

way

s of

redu

cing

th

e am

ount

of f

ood

we

was

te.

If w

e bu

y le

ss-t

han-

perf

ect c

rops

, the

farm

ers

won

’t w

aste

the

food

.2c 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

idea

s fro

m m

ore

than

one

par

agra

ph.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Read

the

four

opt

ions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

para

grap

hs id

entifi

ed.

•Re

read

the

optio

ns in

the

ques

tion.

•D

ecid

e w

hich

one

is th

e be

st s

umm

ary

of th

e tw

o pa

ragr

aphs

.

8.

Put o

ne ti

ck in

eac

h ro

w to

sho

w

whe

ther

the

fact

is tr

ue o

r fal

se.

(See

tabl

e on

the

right

.)

TF

All t

he fr

uit a

nd v

eget

able

s w

e th

row

aw

ay w

ould

fit i

nto

a lo

ng

trai

n.✓

Man

y sh

oppe

rs w

ill o

nly

buy

frui

t and

veg

etab

les

that

look

no

rmal

.✓

Any

frui

t and

veg

etab

les

the

farm

ers

can

not s

ell a

re e

aten

on

the

farm

.✓

Frui

t with

ble

mis

hes

on th

e sk

in

tast

e th

e sa

me

as p

rett

ier f

ruit.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Look

for i

nfor

mat

ion

abou

t eac

h st

atem

ent i

n th

e te

xt s

epar

atel

y.•

Scan

the

text

for w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n. C

aref

ully

read

the

para

grap

h an

d de

cide

whe

ther

the

fact

is tr

ue o

r fal

se. D

o no

t rel

y ju

st o

n ge

nera

l kn

owle

dge.

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• Non-fiction

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Unit 10NON-FICTION

What Is a Robot?/Robots in Films and TV ProgrammesKate Ruttle

Key text features

Both texts are non-fiction report texts about robots.

l What Is a Robot? is a simple introduction to robots.

l Robots in Films and TV Programmes is a brief look at the use of robots on screen.

Reading the Teaching text: What Is a Robot?

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Introduce the text by showing the title. Can the children predict whether this is likely to be a fiction or non-fiction text? What clues are they using in their prediction?

l Talk about the children’s prior knowledge of robots. Can they write a definition?

l Read the text aloud to the children and discuss it against the children’s predictions.

l Read the text again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 84–85).

Reading the Practice text: Robots in Films and TV Programmes

l What do the children understand by the term ‘science-fiction’? What are their predictions about this text?

l Once they have read the text, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Talk about the children’s experiences of seeing robots on TV and in films. From Star Wars to cartoons such as WALL-E, Robots, The Incredibles and Big Hero 6, robots are commonplace in films and cartoons.

l Reread the Practice text.

l Tell the children they are going to write a new section of the Practice text about robots in cartoons.

l Discuss why some cartoons have robots when all cartoon characters are drawn and could be made to do anything.

l In groups, ask the children to make a list of features that robots in cartoons share.

l Ask the children to add another heading together with information about cartoon robots to continue this text.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

Q1: How do people often control robots?

A1: By computer

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text. Make sure you use ideas from the text, not your own general knowledge.

Q2: Name two places that people can not safely go to, but a robot can.

A2: Space/deep underwater/into fires/under the ice/into volcanoes/over forests and oceans

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of the words used in the text. Make sure you use ideas from the text, not your own general knowledge.

Q3: Why do you think different robots might need to move in different ways?

A3: So they can do different things and go to different places

Strategy: The question suggests that the answer may not be directly in the text. Listen again to the whole text for information about the jobs that robots do and think about the implications for how they need to move.

Space Blog – Angela Royston

King Arthur’s Tale – Anita Ganeri

Robots – Clive Gifford

Extending reading

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Unit 10 • NON-FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Wha

t Is

a Ro

bot?

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Wha

t is

the

defin

ition

of a

robo

t us

ed in

this

text

?“a

mac

hine

that

doe

s a se

ries o

f tas

ks w

ithou

t th

e he

lp o

f a p

erso

n”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n fro

m n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for a

defi

nitio

n.

2.

How

are

robo

ts’ s

enso

rs li

ke h

uman

se

nses

?Th

ey h

elp

the

robo

t to

find

out a

bout

the

wor

ld a

roun

d it.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

Care

fully

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, l

ooki

ng fo

r inf

orm

atio

n ab

out s

enso

rs.

3.

Why

cou

ld y

ou n

ot a

sk a

la

wn-

mow

ing

robo

t to

vacu

um

your

car

pets

?

Each

robo

t can

onl

y do

the

task

s it

has

been

de

sign

ed to

do.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

•Sk

im-re

ad th

e te

xt, t

hink

ing

abou

t the

que

stio

n an

d fin

ding

idea

s to

incl

ude.

4.

The

writ

er ta

lks

abou

t rob

ots’

ha

nds,

arm

s an

d br

ains

.

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

she

uses

wor

ds

for t

he h

uman

bod

y to

talk

abo

ut a

m

achi

ne?

•to

hel

p th

e re

ader

to u

nder

stan

d w

hat e

ach

part

doe

s, by

mak

ing

links

bet

wee

n pe

ople

an

d ro

bots

•be

caus

e w

e do

not

hav

e ot

her w

ords

to

desc

ribe

thos

e pa

rts

for r

obot

s

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for l

inks

bet

wee

n ro

bots

and

par

ts o

f the

hum

an b

ody.

•Co

nsid

er th

e im

pact

of t

he w

ords

.

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5.

Why

do

you

thin

k w

e do

not

sen

d so

man

y pe

ople

to e

xplo

re s

pace

an

y m

ore?

U

se a

reas

on fr

om th

e te

xt in

you

r an

swer

.

We

send

robo

ts b

ecau

se:

•w

e do

not

hav

e to

wor

ry a

bout

feed

ing

them

•w

e do

not

hav

e to

thin

k ab

out k

eepi

ng

them

saf

e•

even

if th

e sp

acec

raft

cra

shes

, no

pers

on is

hu

rt.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

•Sk

im-re

ad th

e te

xt, t

hink

ing

abou

t the

que

stio

n an

d fin

ding

idea

s to

incl

ude.

Do

not a

ccep

t ans

wer

s th

at a

re b

ased

on

opin

ions

or g

ener

al k

now

ledg

e ra

ther

th

an id

eas

in th

e te

xt e

.g. ‘

It is

che

aper

to s

end

robo

ts in

to s

pace

.’

6.

Wha

t can

robo

ts d

o?

Ch

oose

thre

e an

swer

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

• b

uild

car

s

• m

ake

deci

sion

s fo

r the

mse

lves

• s

mel

l if t

here

is a

fire

• fl

y in

to a

vol

cano

• s

end

info

rmat

ion

from

spa

ce

• t

ell y

ou if

they

like

som

ethi

ng

build

car

s

fly in

to a

vol

cano

send

info

rmat

ion

from

spa

ce

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Trea

t eac

h fa

ct s

epar

atel

y.•

Scan

for t

he k

ey w

ords

.•

Rere

ad th

e te

xt, t

icki

ng a

nsw

ers

in th

e qu

estio

n as

you

reac

h th

em.

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86 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

Robots in Films and TV ProgrammesRobots have been characters in films for over 75 years. In the early days, the robots were just people in robot costumes.

Computer robots50 years ago, computers were the size of wardrobes and so modern that most people had never seen one except in films. People were very excited about computers, so robots had flashing orange and red lights to make people think they were controlled by computers. Since they were still people in costume, however, most film robots still looked like people.

Puppet robotsThat was changed by the BBC TV series Doctor Who. In 1963, the Daleks arrived. Daleks – which had people inside them – looked like enormous salt-shakers on wheels. They introduced the idea that robots didn’t have to look like people, and could even be played by ‘puppets’. The most famous film robots ever made are probably R2D2 and C-3PO from the film Star Wars. The first of the Star Wars films was made in 1977. C-3PO looks like a human. R2D2 looks a bit like a dustbin. He is short, with flashing lights and beeping sounds. In some scenes, R2D2 had a man crouched inside him, but in most he was a radio-controlled puppet.

CGIToday, most robots in films are made using computer-generated imagery (CGI). Since the early 2000s, CGI has been the main type of special effect in films. Robots have become part of those ‘special effects’: they are no longer people in suits, or even radio-controlled puppets. Today, they are drawings that are made to move using CGI. But since they’re only drawings, the size and shape of CGI robots can be anything you can imagine.

1

3

9

19

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Name: Class: Date:

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2c

1 mark

2d

2 marks

2c

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2a

1 Why did robots in early films look like humans?

2 “computers were the size of wardrobes” (paragraph 2)

Suggest a different word or phrase to replace “the size of wardrobes”.

3 Why did film robots 50 years ago have flashing lights?

4 Why are Daleks so important in the history of screen robots?

5 “R2D2 looks a bit like a dustbin.” Why does the writer give the reader this information?

6 Write an alternative heading for the last paragraph.

7 Film-makers today probably wouldn’t hire an actor to play a robot. Why not?

8 Number these types of robots in the order in which they were used in films.

robots that look like anything you can imagine

robots that look as if they were controlled by computers

robots that look like people in suits

robots that are puppets

9 What do you think a robot would look like in a film that was made in 1990? Tick one.

a person in a costume

a puppet

CGI

Explain your answer.

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Unit 10 • NON-FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Rob

ots

in F

ilms

and

TV P

rogr

amm

es

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

W

hy d

id ro

bots

in e

arly

film

s lo

ok

like

hum

ans?

They

wer

e ju

st p

eopl

e in

cos

tum

es.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n fro

m n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

2.

“com

pute

rs w

ere

the

size

of

war

drob

es” (

para

grap

h 2)

Su

gges

t a d

iffer

ent w

ord

or p

hras

e to

repl

ace

“the

size

of w

ardr

obes

”.

Acce

pt a

n an

swer

whi

ch im

plie

s ve

ry b

ig/

huge

/mas

sive

.2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

give

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

the

mea

ning

of t

he q

uota

tion

in th

e co

ntex

t of t

he te

xt.

3.

Why

did

film

robo

ts 5

0 ye

ars

ago

have

flas

hing

ligh

ts?

to m

ake

peop

le th

ink

they

wer

e co

ntro

lled

by

com

pute

rs2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

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refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

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ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

4.

Why

are

Dal

eks

so im

port

ant i

n th

e hi

stor

y of

scr

een

robo

ts?

They

wer

e th

e fir

st s

cree

n ro

bots

that

did

not

lo

ok li

ke p

eopl

e.2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

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ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

5.

“R2D

2 lo

oks a

bit

like

a du

stbi

n.”

Why

doe

s th

e w

riter

giv

e th

e re

ader

th

is in

form

atio

n?

so th

e re

ader

can

imag

ine

wha

t R2D

2 lo

oks

like

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he q

uota

tion.

•Co

nsid

er th

e im

pact

of t

he a

utho

r’s

choi

ce o

f wor

ds.

6.

Writ

e an

alte

rnat

ive

head

ing

for

the

last

par

agra

ph.

Acce

pt re

ason

able

idea

s su

ch a

s:

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I rob

ots

•Im

agin

ativ

e ro

bots

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bots

of t

he fu

ture

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st-c

entu

ry ro

bots

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ecia

l-eff

ect r

obot

s

2c 1 m

ark

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stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas.

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tegi

es:

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refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

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-read

the

final

par

agra

ph to

get

the

gist

.•

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sit p

revi

ous

head

ings

to u

nder

stan

d th

e st

ruct

ure.

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7.

Film

-mak

ers

toda

y pr

obab

ly

wou

ldn’

t hire

an

acto

r to

play

a

robo

t. W

hy n

ot?

Robo

ts a

re n

ow ju

st d

raw

ings

/CG

I rob

ots

can

be u

sed/

spec

ial e

ffec

ts a

re a

vaila

ble.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

use

ful i

nfor

mat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

that

par

t of t

he te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.

8.

Num

ber t

hese

type

s of

robo

ts in

th

e or

der i

n w

hich

they

wer

e us

ed

in fi

lms.

□ r

obot

s th

at lo

ok li

ke a

nyth

ing

you

can

imag

ine

□ r

obot

s th

at lo

ok a

s if

they

wer

e co

ntro

lled

by c

ompu

ters

□ r

obot

s th

at lo

ok li

ke p

eopl

e in

sui

ts

□ r

obot

s th

at a

re p

uppe

ts

4 ro

bots

that

look

like

any

thin

g yo

u ca

n im

agin

e

2 ro

bots

that

look

as

if th

ey w

ere

cont

rolle

d by

co

mpu

ters

1 ro

bots

that

look

like

peo

ple

in s

uits

3 ro

bots

that

are

pup

pets

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

who

le te

xt fo

r des

crip

tions

of r

obot

s.•

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k of

the

orde

r in

whi

ch th

ey w

ere

intr

oduc

ed.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

answ

ers

corr

ectly

ord

ered

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o co

nsec

utiv

e an

swer

s be

ing

corr

ect.

9.

Wha

t do

you

thin

k a

robo

t wou

ld

look

like

in a

film

that

was

mad

e in

19

90?

Tick

one

.

□ a

per

son

in a

cos

tum

e

□ a

pup

pet

□ C

GI

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er.

a pu

ppet

.

1990

is b

efor

e 20

00, s

o it

will

not

be

CGI.

It

is a

fter

the

1960

s an

d 19

70s

so it

pro

babl

y w

ould

n’t j

ust b

e a

pers

on in

a s

uit.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for i

nfor

mat

ion

abou

t tim

es b

efor

e an

d af

ter t

he 1

990s

.•

Cons

ider

wha

t rob

ots

wer

e lik

e be

fore

then

and

aft

er th

en.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pa

rt o

f the

que

stio

n.

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• NON-FICTION

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Unit 11NON-FICTION

The Battle of Britain/DunkirkGillian Clements/Kate Ruttle

Key text features

The texts are historical report texts relating to key events in British history.

l The Teaching text is an extract from The Battle of Britain, entitled The Battle of Britain Begins, by Gillian Clements.

l The Practice text is from Dunkirk by Kate Ruttle.

Reading the Teaching text: The Battle of Britain Begins

l What do the children know about the Second World War? Do they know when it was? Do they know which countries were involved, and on which side? What were the names of the key people involved? What were the important events?

l Explain that less than a year after the war began, in June 1940, Hitler’s armies had taken France, Belgium, Czechoslovakia, Poland and Holland, and were setting out to invade Britain.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about what they have learned about the war.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 92–93).

Reading the Practice text: Dunkirk

l What do the children know about the events at Dunkirk during the Second World War? Show them where Dunkirk is on a map, and explain that the text describes a famous episode during the war.

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread both extracts.

l Explain to the children that you want them to write a similar descriptive piece about an event you have studied in history.

l Ask the children to think about or research the event. Show them how to use a mind map to record different aspects of the event.

l Show them an image of the event/part of the event. Together, talk about the feelings and motivations of the people involved or affected.

l Encourage the children to use sticky notes on their mind map to add interesting details to grip the reader, e.g. sound effects, smells, reactions or quotations.

l In pairs, ask the children to use their mind map to tell a response partner about the event. Ask the response partner to give feedback.

l Encourage the children to write their description of the event.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

My Secret War Diary – Marcia Williams

War Boy: A Wartime Childhood – Michael Foreman

The Worst Children’s Jobs in History – Tony Robinson

Horrible Histories: Woeful Second World War – Terry Deary

Extending reading

Q1: Which countries had already been invaded and occupied by the Germans at the start of the battle of Britain?

A1: Czechoslovakia, Poland, Holland, France and Belgium

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: What does “SCRAMBLE! SCRAMBLE!” mean?

A2: It is an instruction to pilots to rush to their aeroplanes and take to the air.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q3: Why was Hitler determined to have control of the skies above Britain?

A3: Without the British planes above them, Hitler believed that the German army would soon take over Britain.

Strategy: Listen to the whole text again, being alert for the importance of control of the skies.

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Unit 11 • NON-FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: The

Bat

tle o

f Brit

ain

Begi

ns

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

W

hat w

as th

e na

me

of:

(a

) Ger

man

y’s

lead

er?

(b

) the

Ger

man

air

forc

e?

(a) (

Adol

f) H

itler

(b) t

he L

uftw

affe

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he a

nsw

er.

2.

Look

at t

he fi

rst p

arag

raph

.

W

hich

of t

he o

ptio

ns is

the

wor

d “f

alle

n” c

lose

st in

mea

ning

to?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ b

een

inva

ded

□ b

een

redu

ced

□ b

roke

n do

wn

□ t

rippe

d ov

er

been

inva

ded

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted.

•Re

ad th

e op

tions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion

and

rere

ad th

e se

nten

ce, t

hink

ing

abou

t the

mea

ning

of t

he w

ord

in th

is c

onte

xt.

3.

The

deve

lopm

ent o

f rad

ar w

as

impo

rtan

t to

the

Briti

sh d

urin

g th

e w

ar.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

a se

nten

ce th

at

expl

ains

why

.

Acce

pt e

ither

of t

he fo

llow

ing:

•“A

maz

ingl

y, it

cou

ld d

etec

t thi

ngs i

n th

e ai

r lo

ng b

efor

e yo

u co

uld

see

them

.”•

“Rad

ar st

atio

ns b

uilt

alon

g th

e Br

itish

coa

st

coul

d w

arn

the

RAF

whe

n G

erm

an p

lane

s w

ere

on th

eir w

ay.”

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ord

“rad

ar”.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e se

nten

ces

arou

nd th

e w

ord,

tryi

ng to

thin

k w

hy it

was

im

port

ant.

4.

“Rat

atat

!”

W

hy is

this

wor

d w

ritte

n ita

lics?

to s

how

that

it is

a s

ound

eff

ect

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to m

eani

ng

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aph

cont

aini

ng th

e w

ord.

•Re

flect

on

the

impa

ct o

f writ

ing

this

wor

d in

ital

ics.

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Unit 11 • NON-FICTION

5.

Giv

e tw

o w

ays

in w

hich

the

Briti

sh

had

prep

ared

for a

Ger

man

att

ack.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Th

e RA

F ha

d bu

ilt n

ew a

nd fa

ster

pla

nes.

•Br

itish

sci

entis

ts h

ad d

evel

oped

rada

r.•

They

had

bui

lt ra

dar s

tatio

ns to

war

n th

e RA

F w

hen

Ger

man

pla

nes

wer

e on

thei

r w

ay.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of th

e m

eani

ng o

f th

e te

xt.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r evi

denc

e of

Brit

ish

prep

arat

ions

for i

nvas

ion.

6.

Num

ber t

he e

vent

s to

sho

w th

e or

der i

n w

hich

they

are

men

tione

d in

the

text

.

□ R

adar

sta

tions

wer

e bu

ilt a

long

the

Briti

sh c

oast

.

□ T

he L

uftw

affe

sta

rted

to b

omb

Briti

sh s

hips

.

□ H

itler

dec

ided

to p

repa

re fo

r an

inva

sion

.

□ R

adar

det

ecte

d a

mas

s of

Ger

man

fig

hter

s an

d bo

mbe

rs.

Rada

r sta

tions

wer

e bu

ilt a

long

the

Br

itish

coa

st.

1

The

Luft

waf

fe s

tart

ed to

bom

b

Briti

sh s

hips

. 4

Hitl

er d

ecid

ed to

pre

pare

for a

n in

vasi

on.

3

Rada

r det

ecte

d a

mas

s of

Ger

man

fig

hter

s an

d bo

mbe

rs.

2

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

who

le te

xt fo

r eac

h of

the

even

ts d

escr

ibed

.•

Num

ber t

he e

vent

s, th

en c

heck

you

r ans

wer

aga

inst

the

text

.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

even

ts c

orre

ctly

seq

uenc

ed.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o ev

ents

cor

rect

ly s

eque

nced

.

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DunkirkIn May 1940, things were not going well for the allied British and French forces in northern France. The German army had been cunning, and had managed to separate the allies into two smaller groups.

One group of nearly 400,000 allied soldiers had to retreat from the advancing German army until they reached the French coast near the town of Dunkirk. The soldiers could not retreat any further because the sea was behind them, so they worked out the best way to defend the beach and settled down, hoping for rescue. But Dunkirk harbour had been bombed, so the great warships that could transport men back to England had to stay offshore because they couldn’t reach the troops on the beaches. The German army was poised to attack.

It looked like all was lost for these soldiers.

The British commanders lost no time. They requested that the owners and crew of every boat along the south-east coast of England should go and help rescue the troops. Overnight, a great flotilla of small boats – rowing boats, fishing boats, pleasure boats, yachts, even lifeboats – set out to cross the 75 km of English Channel to ferry the men from the beach at Dunkirk to the warships. As they approached France, the little boats were attacked with bombs, mines and even torpedoes, but they didn’t give up.

In the end, nearly 340,000 British and French troops were evacuated from Dunkirk over the space of nine days. They left behind them guns, vehicles, ammunition and food – but the lives of most of the soldiers were saved.

1

4

12

13

20

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Name: Class: Date:

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2b

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2f

1 mark

2c

2 marks

2e

1 In the first paragraph, the German army is described as “cunning”. Why does the author use the word “cunning” instead of clever?

Tick one.

The word “cunning” makes us think of foxes, and the German army were like foxes.

We admire clever people, and the writer doesn’t want us to admire the German army.

There is no good reason. The words mean exactly the same thing.

The German army were lucky in the decisions they made.

2 Look at the paragraph beginning “One group of …”. Find and copy one word that means the same as withdraw.

3 Look at the paragraph beginning “One group of …”. Find and copy one word that shows that the warships were huge and powerful.

4 According to the text, what did the soldiers do while they hoped for rescue?

5 “It looked like all was lost for these soldiers.” Give two reasons for this statement. Explain your reasons.

6 “It looked like all was lost for these soldiers.” Why is this paragraph so short?

7 Why do you think the British commanders “lost no time”?

8 How do you think the German army felt when they discovered so many of the allied soldiers were being rescued? Explain your answer using ideas from the text.

9 What do you think the main lesson we can learn from this event is?

Tick one.

When to sail a small boat across the channel.

You should defend yourself while you hope for rescue.

You should not give up, even when something seems hopeless.

You should always obey a request from the army.

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Unit 11 • NON-FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Dun

kirk

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

In th

e fir

st p

arag

raph

, the

Ger

man

ar

my

is d

escr

ibed

as

“cun

ning

”.

Why

doe

s th

e au

thor

use

the

wor

d “c

unni

ng” i

nste

ad o

f cle

ver?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ T

he w

ord

“cun

ning

” mak

es u

s th

ink

of fo

xes,

and

the

Ger

man

arm

y w

ere

like

foxe

s.

□ W

e ad

mire

cle

ver p

eopl

e, a

nd th

e w

riter

doe

sn’t

wan

t us

to a

dmire

th

e G

erm

an a

rmy.

□ T

here

is n

o go

od re

ason

. The

wor

ds

mea

n ex

actly

the

sam

e th

ing.

□ T

he G

erm

an a

rmy

wer

e lu

cky

in th

e de

cisi

ons

they

mad

e.

We

adm

ire c

leve

r peo

ple,

and

the

writ

er d

oesn

’t

wan

t us

to a

dmire

the

Ger

man

arm

y.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

con

side

ring

the

impa

ct o

f the

w

ord

“cun

ning

”.•

Read

the

optio

ns in

the

ques

tion,

then

cho

ose

the

one

that

is c

lose

st to

yo

ur u

nder

stan

ding

.

2.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“One

gro

up o

f …”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

one

wor

d th

at

mea

ns th

e sa

me

as w

ithdr

aw.

“ret

reat

”2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for a

wor

d w

ith th

is m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d to

che

ck y

our r

espo

nse.

3.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“One

gro

up o

f …”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

one

wor

d th

at

show

s th

at th

e w

arsh

ips

wer

e hu

ge

and

pow

erfu

l.

“gre

at”

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

sea

rchi

ng fo

r a w

ord

that

impl

ies

size

and

pow

er.

4.

Acco

rdin

g to

the

text

, wha

t did

the

sold

iers

do

whi

le th

ey h

oped

for

resc

ue?

Acce

pt e

ither

of:

•Th

ey w

orke

d ou

t how

to d

efen

d th

e be

ach.

•Th

ey d

efen

ded

the

beac

h.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.St

rate

gies

:•

Care

fully

read

the

ques

tion,

mar

king

key

wor

ds.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r evi

denc

e of

wha

t the

sold

iers

did

whi

le th

ey h

oped

for r

escu

e.

5.

“It l

ooke

d lik

e al

l was

lost

for t

hese

so

ldie

rs.”

G

ive

two

reas

ons

for t

his

stat

emen

t.

Expl

ain

your

reas

ons.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:•

“The

sold

iers

cou

ld n

ot re

trea

t any

furt

her

beca

use

the

sea

was

beh

ind

them

.”•

The

Ger

man

arm

y w

as p

oise

d to

att

ack.

If th

ey

did

atta

ck, t

hey

wou

ld k

ill o

r cap

ture

all t

he a

llied

tr

oops

.•

Dun

kirk

har

bour

had

bee

n bo

mbe

d, so

the

war

ship

s cou

ldn’

t tak

e th

e tro

ops o

ff th

e be

ache

s.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll und

erst

andi

ng o

f the

mea

ning

of t

he

text

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for r

easo

ns w

hy a

ll m

ight

be

lost

.•

Giv

e ea

ch re

ason

and

then

exp

lain

why

you

sug

gest

ed it

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h re

ason

and

exp

lana

tion,

up

to a

tota

l of 2

mar

ks.

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Unit 11 • NON-FICTION

6.

“It l

ooke

d lik

e al

l was

lost

for t

hese

so

ldie

rs.”

W

hy is

this

par

agra

ph s

o sh

ort?

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers

that

reco

gnis

e an

y of

:

•It

mar

ks th

e tu

rnin

g po

int i

n th

e te

xt fr

om

defe

at to

resc

ue.

•Th

e pa

ragr

aph

stan

ds o

ut.

•Th

e sh

ort p

arag

raph

is e

mph

asis

ed a

s be

ing

impo

rtan

t.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g th

e ov

eral

l mea

ning

of t

he te

xt

befo

re th

e pa

ragr

aph

and

the

text

aft

er th

e pa

ragr

aph.

•Co

nsid

er th

e im

pact

of t

his

very

sho

rt p

arag

raph

at t

his

poin

t in

the

text

.

7.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e Br

itish

co

mm

ande

rs “l

ost n

o tim

e”?

They

kne

w th

at th

e tr

oops

wou

ld b

e ca

ptur

ed o

r ki

lled

unle

ss th

ey to

ok a

ctio

n qu

ickl

y.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he w

ords

in th

e qu

estio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

par

agra

phs,

cons

ider

ing

the

ques

tion.

8.

How

do

you

thin

k th

e G

erm

an

arm

y fe

lt w

hen

they

dis

cove

red

so

man

y of

the

allie

d so

ldie

rs w

ere

bein

g re

scue

d?

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e te

xt.

Acce

pt a

nsw

ers w

ith re

leva

nt e

xpla

natio

ns. E

.g.

•re

lieve

d: if

the

sold

iers

wer

e go

ne, t

here

w

ould

n’t b

e m

uch

fight

ing.

•ha

ppy:

they

cou

ld u

se a

ll th

e su

pplie

s th

e al

lied

sold

iers

had

left

beh

ind.

•an

gry:

they

mis

sed

out o

n ki

lling

/cap

turin

g al

lied

sold

iers

.

2e 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pred

ict w

hat m

ight

hap

pen

from

det

ails

stat

ed a

nd im

plie

d.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt, t

hink

ing

abou

t the

Ger

man

arm

y’s

reac

tions

to

the

even

ts.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt, l

ooki

ng fo

r whe

re y

ou m

ight

find

an

answ

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e re

leva

nt s

ectio

ns, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

appr

opria

te e

xpre

ssio

n of

em

otio

n an

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

expl

anat

ion

of th

e em

otio

n.

9.

Wha

t do

you

thin

k th

e m

ain

less

on

we

can

lear

n fr

om th

is e

vent

is?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ W

hen

to s

ail a

sm

all b

oat a

cros

s th

e ch

anne

l.

□ Y

ou s

houl

d de

fend

you

rsel

f whi

le

you

hope

for r

escu

e.

□ Y

ou s

houl

d no

t giv

e up

, eve

n w

hen

som

ethi

ng s

eem

s ho

pele

ss.

□ Y

ou s

houl

d al

way

s ob

ey a

requ

est

from

the

arm

y.

You

shou

ldn’

t giv

e up

, eve

n w

hen

som

ethi

ng

seem

s ho

pele

ss.

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt, c

onsi

derin

g w

hat l

esso

n ca

n be

lear

ned.

•Co

mpa

re y

our a

nsw

er to

the

optio

ns in

the

ques

tion.

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• NON-FICTION

98 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 12NON-FICTION

Epic: Animal MigrationsCamilla de la Bédoyère

Key text features

The texts are information report texts about animals that migrate long distances.

l The Teaching text is an extract from Epic: Animal Migrations, entitled Grey Whale – Crossing the World’s Oceans, by Camilla de la Bédoyère.

l The Practice text is an extract from Epic: Animal Migrations, entitled Arctic Tern – Record-Breaking Flier, by Camilla de la Bédoyère.

Reading the Teaching text: Grey Whale – Crossing the World’s Oceans

l Ask the children to define the word migration. Record their answers and discuss reasons for animal migrations (generally to avoid harsh winters, to find reliable food supplies or to find better breeding grounds).

l Show the children images of a grey whale.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about what they found out about the whales’ migration.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 100–101).

Reading the Practice text: Arctic Tern – Record-Breaking Flier

l Ask the children to think, pair, share their knowledge and understanding of migration, including what they learned in the previous session.

l Show images of the Arctic tern.

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread both extracts.

l Explain to the children that you want them to write a similar style of information text on a familiar topic, e.g. based on the science or geography curriculum.

l In groups, ask the children to consider why the author used each of the different layout features (such as tables, maps, fact boxes, images, timelines, text and headings).

l Give the children time to undertake additional research around their topic.

l Still in their groups, ask the children to create a planning document, using sticky notes to record key points and to try out different layouts for their text.

l In pairs, ask the children to use their planning document to tell a response partner what they plan to write. Ask the response partner to give feedback.

l Encourage the children to write their information text.

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Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 99

Listening Comprehension: Questions and AnswersThe listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

The Animal Book: A Visual Encyclopedia of Life on Earth – Dorling Kindersley

Amazing Animal Journeys – Chris Packham

Wild Animal Atlas: Earth’s Astonishing Animals and Where They Live – National Geographic Kids

Extending reading

Q1: What is the difference between the polar waters and the tropical seas?

A1: The polar waters are cold; the tropical seas are warm.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q2: Why do the baby whales need to build up stamina when they are in Mexico?

A2: So they are able to swim north to the Arctic

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

Q3: What strategy do orcas use when they want to hunt baby grey whales?

A3: They separate the calves from their mothers before launching an attack.

Strategy: Think about where in the text you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the text again.

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Unit 12 • NON-FICTION

Teac

hing

text

: Gre

y W

hale

– C

ross

ing

the

Wor

ld’s

Oce

ans

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

Lo

ok a

t the

tabl

e at

the

star

t of t

he

extr

act.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

two

reas

ons

why

th

e w

hale

s m

igra

te.

“For

food

and

cal

ving

”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sect

ion

of te

xt in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r bot

h an

swer

s co

rrec

t.

2.

Find

and

cop

y on

e w

ord

that

m

eans

the

sam

e as

bab

y w

hale

s.“c

alve

s”/c

alf

Also

acc

ept “

new

born

”.

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for a

wor

d w

ith th

is m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d to

che

ck y

our r

espo

nse.

3.

Look

at t

he g

rey

wha

le ti

mel

ine.

W

hy d

o gr

ey w

hale

s le

ave

the

Arct

ic in

the

win

ter?

“foo

d is

redu

ced”

Do

not a

ccep

t ans

wer

s th

at s

ugge

st th

e se

a is

to

o co

ld fo

r the

m u

nles

s th

ere

is a

refe

renc

e to

fo

od b

eing

har

der t

o fin

d.

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sect

ion

of te

xt in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

4.

Why

is it

par

ticul

arly

impo

rtan

t th

at p

regn

ant f

emal

es e

at w

ell

whe

n th

ey a

re in

the

Arct

ic?

•Th

ey h

ardl

y fe

ed w

hile

they

are

in M

exic

o (e

ven

thou

gh th

ey a

re fe

edin

g th

eir c

alve

s).

•Th

ey n

eed

to b

e st

rong

eno

ugh

to s

wim

to

Mex

ico

and

give

birt

h.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

et a

sen

se o

f the

info

rmat

ion.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r inf

orm

atio

n re

latin

g to

the

wha

les’

feed

ing

habi

ts.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e pa

ragr

aphs

con

tain

ing

the

info

rmat

ion.

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Unit 12 • NON-FICTION

5.

Whi

ch w

ords

are

mis

sing

from

the

sent

ence

s be

low

?

U

se in

form

atio

n fr

om th

e te

xt to

he

lp y

ou.

G

rey

wha

les

eat

. Yo

ung

wha

les

are

eate

n by

.

Gre

y w

hale

s ea

t am

phip

ods.

(Acc

ept

“tin

y se

a cr

eatu

res”

.)

Youn

g w

hale

s ar

e ea

ten

by o

rcas

. (A

ccep

t “ki

ller w

hale

s”.)

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, con

side

ring

each

of t

he s

tate

men

ts s

epar

atel

y.•

Care

fully

read

rele

vant

par

ts o

f the

text

.

6.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e au

thor

use

s a

tabl

e to

sho

w th

e w

here

/whe

n/w

hy/h

ow o

f the

wha

les’

mig

ratio

n?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ t

o dr

aw a

tten

tion

to th

e in

form

atio

n

□ t

o gi

ve th

e re

ader

a re

st

□ t

o su

mm

aris

e im

port

ant

info

rmat

ion

□ t

o su

rpris

e th

e re

ader

so

they

re

ad o

n

to s

umm

aris

e im

port

ant i

nfor

mat

ion

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to m

eani

ng

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sect

ion

of te

xt in

dica

ted,

con

side

ring

the

auth

or’s

lik

ely

inte

ntio

ns.

•Re

read

the

optio

ns in

the

ques

tion

and

sele

ct th

e be

st fi

t.

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102 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

Arctic Tern – Record-Breaking FlierCamilla de la Bédoyère

Where Between the Arctic and Antarctic

When July to November, April to June

Why For food

How Flying

Arctic terns regularly migrate between the Arctic, near the North Pole, and Antarctica, near the South Pole. If they travelled in a straight line, the route would be 15,000 km. However, these globe-trotters fly in a figure-of-eight to make the most of prevailing winds and save energy.

Each bird’s round trip actually covers an incredible 70,000 km.

Food

Arctic terns feed at sea by skimming fish from near the water’s surface, or plunging head-first into the water to grab crustaceans in their beaks.

When they reach the Antarctic, the terns feed on vast amounts of food. There are huge swarms of Antarctic krill (small, shrimp-like crustaceans) in the Weddell Sea in the southern summer, which draw many animals to the region.

Two summers

Arctic terns are almost unique among animals because they experience both the Arctic summer and the Antarctic summer. Chicks hatch in the Arctic breeding grounds and grow fast so that they are ready to begin the long flight to the Antarctic. When the terns head south they cover about 330 km a day, but they can travel up to 670 km every day on the return flight!

Arctic tern timeline

July–September November–March April–June

The birds leave their breeding sites in Greenland, near the North Pole. At the end of August, they spend a month at a stop-over point in the middle of the North Atlantic to feed.

In the middle of September the birds head south.

In November, the birds reach the Weddell Sea in the Antarctic.

They leave the Antarctic and head back to the Arctic, flying in a massive ‘S’ shape to follow the winds. Some birds take a break at the stop-over point in the North Atlantic.

In June, the birds reach Greenland to rest and breed.

THIS IS THE LONGEST REGULAR MIGRATION

OF ANY BIRD.

ARCTIC TERNS SPEND MORE

HOURS IN THE SUNLIGHT THAN ANY OTHER BIRD.

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Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page 103

Name: Class: Date:

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2b

1 What is the reason the terns migrate?

2 Look at the paragraph beginning “Arctic terns regularly migrate …”. Find and copy a phrase that means travellers.

3 What do terns eat? Find two things.

4 Look at the paragraph beginning “Arctic terns regularly migrate …”. Which of the following options is the word “prevailing” closest in meaning to? Tick one.

most basic • most common • most helpful • most successful •

5 The sub-title of this text is “Record-Breaking Flier”. Why is this appropriate? Give two reasons.

6 It is 15,000 km from the North Pole to the South Pole, yet the terns fly nearly 70,000 km. Find two pieces of evidence to explain why this is. You do not have to use direct quotations

from the text.

7 Why does it take the terns longer to fly south than it does for them to fly north? Give two reasons.

8 Why do Arctic terns spend more hours in the sunlight than any other bird?

9 Why do you think the author includes a timeline? Tick one.

to prove that Arctic terns spend more time in the sunlight than any other bird • to help the reader understand where the birds’ journey begins and ends • so the reader knows how the birds spend each month • to explain why the birds fly back to the Arctic in an ‘S’ shape •

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2c

2 marks

2b

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2b

1 mark

2f

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Unit 12 • NON-FICTION

Prac

tice

text

: Arc

tic

Tern

– R

ecor

d-Br

eaki

ng F

lier

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

W

hat i

s th

e re

ason

the

tern

s m

igra

te?

“For

food

”2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he a

nsw

er.

2.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Arc

tic te

rns r

egul

arly

mig

rate

…”.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

a ph

rase

that

m

eans

trav

elle

rs.

“glo

be-tr

otte

rs”

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for a

wor

d w

ith th

is m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

sent

ence

con

tain

ing

the

wor

d to

che

ck y

our r

espo

nse.

3. W

hat d

o te

rns

eat?

Fin

d tw

o th

ings

.Ac

cept

any

two

of:

•cr

usta

cean

s•

fish

•kr

ill

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

look

ing

for w

ords

that

mig

ht m

ean

food

. •

Care

fully

read

the

part

s of

the

text

you

iden

tify,

look

ing

for t

he a

nsw

er.

Rem

embe

r to

list t

wo

thin

gs.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r tw

o co

rrec

t ans

wer

s.

4.

Look

at t

he p

arag

raph

beg

inni

ng

“Arc

tic te

rns r

egul

arly

mig

rate

…”.

W

hich

of t

he fo

llow

ing

optio

ns is

th

e w

ord

“pre

vaili

ng” c

lose

st in

m

eani

ng to

?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ m

ost b

asic

□ m

ost c

omm

on

□ m

ost h

elpf

ul

□ m

ost s

ucce

ssfu

l

mos

t com

mon

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

para

grap

h in

dica

ted.

•Re

ad th

e op

tions

giv

en in

the

ques

tion

and

rere

ad th

e se

nten

ce, t

hink

ing

abou

t the

mea

ning

of t

he w

ord

in th

is c

onte

xt.

5.

The

sub-

title

of t

his

text

is

“Rec

ord-

Brea

king

Flie

r”.

Why

is th

is a

ppro

pria

te?

G

ive

two

reas

ons.

•Te

rns

have

the

“long

est r

egul

ar m

igra

tion

of

any

bird

”.•

“Arc

tic te

rns s

pend

mor

e ho

urs i

n th

e su

nlig

ht th

an a

ny o

ther

bird

.”

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

et a

sen

se o

f it w

hile

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

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Unit 12 • NON-FICTION

6.

It is

15,

000 

km fr

om th

e N

orth

Pol

e to

the

Sout

h Po

le, y

et th

e te

rns

fly

near

ly 7

0,00

0 km

.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

to

expl

ain

why

this

is. Y

ou d

o no

t hav

e to

use

dire

ct q

uota

tions

from

th

e te

xt.

Tern

s do

not

fly

in a

str

aigh

t lin

e.

•Th

ey fl

y in

a fi

gure

-of-

eigh

t.•

They

fly

in a

mas

sive

‘S’ s

hape

.

Tern

s us

e th

e w

ind

to h

elp

them

.

•Th

ey m

ake

the

mos

t of t

he p

reva

iling

win

ds.

•It

hel

ps th

em to

sav

e en

ergy

.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

of w

hy th

e te

rns’

jour

ney

is s

o

muc

h lo

nger

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sent

ence

s ar

ound

the

evid

ence

.•

Giv

e ei

ther

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

7.

Why

doe

s it

take

the

tern

s lo

nger

to

fly

sout

h th

an it

doe

s fo

r the

m

to fl

y no

rth?

G

ive

two

reas

ons.

•Th

ey re

st fo

r a m

onth

whe

n th

ey fl

y so

uth.

•Th

ey fl

y so

uth

with

thei

r you

ng.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for m

entio

n of

the

time

take

n to

fly.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad s

ente

nces

in th

e re

leva

nt p

arts

of t

he te

xt, l

ooki

ng fo

r the

an

swer

to th

e qu

estio

n.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h co

rrec

t ans

wer

, up

to a

tota

l of 2

 mar

ks.

8.

Why

do

Arct

ic te

rns

spen

d m

ore

hour

s in

the

sunl

ight

than

any

ot

her b

ird?

They

exp

erie

nce

both

the

Arct

ic s

umm

er a

nd

the

Anta

rctic

sum

mer

.2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om n

on-fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

you

will

find

the

answ

er.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, loo

king

for t

he a

nsw

er.

9.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e au

thor

in

clud

es a

tim

elin

e?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ t

o pr

ove

that

Arc

tic te

rns

spen

d m

ore

time

in th

e su

nlig

ht th

an a

ny

othe

r bird

□ t

o he

lp th

e re

ader

und

erst

and

whe

re th

e bi

rds’

jour

ney

begi

ns

and

ends

□ s

o th

e re

ader

kno

ws

how

the

bird

s sp

end

each

mon

th

□ t

o ex

plai

n w

hy th

e bi

rds

fly b

ack

to

the

Arct

ic in

an

‘S’ s

hape

so th

e re

ader

kno

ws

how

the

bird

s sp

end

each

m

onth

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

info

rmat

ion

is re

late

d an

d co

ntrib

utes

to

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

sect

ion

indi

cate

d, c

onsi

derin

g th

e au

thor

’s

likel

y in

tent

ions

.•

Rere

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n an

d se

lect

the

best

fit.

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• Poetry

106 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019

Unit 13POETRY

Childhood Tracks/Hot FoodJames Berry/Michael Rosen

Key text features

The poems show different experiences of being a child.

l The Teaching text is the poem Childhood Tracks by James Berry.

l The Practice text is the poem Hot Food by Michael Rosen.

Reading the Teaching text: Childhood Tracks

l Introduce the title of the poem. Make a word web, recording all the meanings of the word ‘tracks’ that are familiar to the children.

l Introduce the poet James Berry. He was born in Jamaica and moved to the UK when he was 16.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the poem together and discuss what it is about.

l Read the poem again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 108–109).

Reading the Practice text: Hot Food

l Before they read the poem, ask the children if they have ever put a piece of food into their mouths and found it to be too hot. What did they do? How do they cool food down before they eat it?

l Once they have read the poem, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Suggest developing a class poem called School Tracks based on Childhood Tracks.

l Use all five senses. Divide the class into groups, each of which should focus on memories of the school through one sense.

l Encourage each group to make their memories into a verse.

l Give each verse to another group of children to see if they can polish and improve it.

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Unit 13 • POETRY

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 107

Listening Comprehension: Questions and Answers

Q1: What was a “snowball” (verse 1)?

A1: (Sheared) ice with syrup

Strategy: Listen carefully to the beginning of the poem. Make a note of the words used in the text.

Q2: How do you know that the poet lived near the sea or a river?

A2: He talks about seeing “fishing nets repaired between canoes” (verse 4)/hears “sea-sound” (verse 3).

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of words used in the text.

Q3: The poem is called Childhood Tracks. What is it about?

A3: Memories of childhood: it is like making a list of song tracks, except that these are memories of the poet’s childhood.

Strategy: Listen again to the whole text, noting words and phrases which answer the question.

The listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit..

You Are Old, Father William from Read Me and Laugh – Lewis Carroll

There Was a Naughty Boy by John Keats in 101 Poems for Children – Carol Ann Duffy

Extending reading

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Unit 13 • POETRY

Teac

hing

text

: Chi

ldho

od T

rack

s Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Choo

se th

e se

nses

the

poem

m

entio

ns.

□ h

earin

g

□ s

ight

□ t

astin

g

□ s

mel

ling

□ t

ouch

ing

hear

ing

sigh

t

tast

ing

smel

ling

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n fro

m fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

for r

efer

ence

to s

ense

s.•

Tick

off

the

sens

es w

hen

you

find

them

.

All f

our s

ense

s ne

eded

to e

arn

the

mar

k.

2.

In v

erse

2, w

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

poet

rem

embe

rs th

ese

part

icul

ar

smel

ls?

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Th

ey a

re v

ery

stro

ng s

mel

ls.•

They

are

all

arou

nd h

im.

•Th

ey a

re v

ery

smel

ly/s

tinky

.•

They

are

par

ticul

ar to

the

plac

e w

here

he

lived

.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e se

cond

ver

se.

•Co

nsid

er th

e an

swer

s to

the

ques

tions

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h re

ason

giv

en, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

3.

In v

erse

4, w

here

wer

e th

e go

ats

and

wha

t wer

e th

ey d

oing

?Th

ey w

ere

sitt

ing

in th

e sh

ade

of d

iffer

ent

bana

na tr

ees,

chew

ing

thei

r cud

.2b 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

for r

efer

ence

to g

oats

.•

Rere

ad th

e lin

es a

nd th

ink

abou

t mea

ning

.•

Mat

ch th

e m

eani

ng o

f the

opt

ion

to th

e lin

e in

the

poem

.

4.

Whe

re d

id th

e po

et li

ve?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ c

ity

□ t

own

□ v

illag

e

Ex

plai

n ho

w y

ou k

now

.

villa

ge

•H

e ta

lks

abou

t “vi

llage

-mad

e w

et su

gar”

(li

ne 5

) and

see

ing

“a v

illag

e w

orkm

an”

(line

24)

.•

Ther

e ar

e do

nkey

s, go

ats

and

hills

. The

se

thin

gs a

re fo

und

in v

illag

es, n

ot to

wns

and

ci

ties.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

poem

to g

et a

gen

eral

idea

.•

Scan

for s

peci

fic in

form

atio

n.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

unde

rsta

ndin

g th

at h

e liv

ed in

a v

illag

e.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r the

quo

tatio

n fr

om, o

r ref

eren

ce to

, the

text

.

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Unit 13 • POETRY

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 109

5.

Thes

e m

emor

ies

are

not f

rom

th

e U

K.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

from

the

poem

to s

uppo

rt th

is

stat

emen

t.

Any

two

piec

es o

f evi

denc

e fro

m th

e po

em. E

.g.

•“E

atin

g yo

ung

jelly

-coc

onut

” (lin

e 4)

•dr

inki

ng fr

om “a

cal

abas

h go

urd”

(lin

e 6)

•“S

mel

ling

a pa

tch

of fe

rmen

ting

pine

appl

es”

(line

8)

•pa

lm tr

ees

“at C

hris

tmas

tim

e” (l

ine

22)

•vi

llage

wor

kman

with

“bag

and

mac

hete

” (li

ne 2

4)•

“ban

ana

tree

s” (l

ine

26)

•“c

oil o

f pla

ited

toba

cco”

(lin

e 28

)•

“sch

ooly

ard/

betw

een

palm

and

alm

ond

tree

s” (l

ines

30–

31)

•“fi

shin

g ne

ts re

paire

d be

twee

n ca

noes

” (li

ne 3

6).

2f 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

who

le te

xt lo

okin

g fo

r evi

denc

e to

ans

wer

the

ques

tion.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

6.

Each

sta

nza

(ver

se) i

n th

is p

oem

ha

s a

diff

eren

t the

me.

Writ

e th

e th

eme

of e

ach

stan

za. T

he fi

rst o

ne

has

been

don

e fo

r you

.

St

anza

1: t

aste

Stan

za 2

: sm

ellin

g

Stan

za 3

: hea

ring

Stan

za 4

: see

ing

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Look

at t

he re

latio

nshi

p be

twee

n st

anza

1 a

nd th

e su

mm

ary

wor

d.•

Read

the

next

sta

nzas

and

try

to w

ork

out a

sum

mar

y w

ord

for e

ach

one.

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Hot FoodMichael Rosen

We sit down to eatand the potato’s a bit hotso I only put a little bit on my forkand I blowwhooph whoophuntil it’s cooljust coolthen into the mouthnice.and there’s my brotherhe’s doing the samewhooph whoophinto the mouthnice.there’s my mumshe’s doing the samewhooph whoophinto the mouthnice.

But my dad.My dad.What does he do?He stuffs a great big chunk of potatointo his mouthThenthat really does it.His eyes pop outhe flaps his handshe blows, he puffs, he yellshe bobs his head up and downhe spits bits of potatoall over his plateand he turns to us and he says,“Watch out everybody –the potato’s very hot.”

1

5

10

15

20

25

30

35

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Name: Class: Date:

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1 Which meal do you think the family is eating?

Explain why you think it is that meal.

2 How do you think the narrator knows what to do when the potato is too hot?

3 Why do you think the poet repeats the line “whooph whooph”?

4 “He bobs his head up and down.” Suggest a different word the writer could have used.

5 What do you think the narrator said to Dad after he said “Watch out everybody – the potato’s very hot” (verse 2)?

6 “But my dad. My dad. What does he do?” (verse 2)

Why do you think the narrator chooses to use a question here?

7 Tick true or false in the following table to show what you should do when eating hot food.

True FalseStuff a great big chunk in your mouth.

Blow gently.

Spit bits of potato everywhere.

Put a little bit on your fork.

8 Why do you think the poet has written this poem in the present tense (e.g. “We sit down to eat” instead of “We sat down to eat”)?

9 This poem has two main parts: lines 1–19 and then lines 20 to the end. A summary sentence has been written for the first part. Write a summary sentence for the second part.

Lines 1–19: The potato is hot so most of the family take a little bit on their fork and blow on it before eating it and enjoying it.

Lines 20–the end:

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2a

1 mark

2e

1 mark

2f

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2f

2 marks

2c

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Unit 13 • POETRY

Prac

tice

text

: Hot

Foo

d Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

Whi

ch m

eal d

o yo

u th

ink

the

fam

ily

is e

atin

g?

Ex

plai

n w

hy y

ou th

ink

it is

that

m

eal.

•lu

nch/

tea/

dinn

er/s

uppe

r•

They

are

eat

ing

hot f

ood

incl

udin

g ho

t po

tato

es.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

2.

How

do

you

thin

k th

e na

rrato

r kn

ows

wha

t to

do w

hen

the

pota

to

is to

o ho

t?

Acce

pt a

n an

swer

suc

h as

:

•pr

evio

us e

xper

ienc

e•

He

has

wat

ched

his

Mum

in th

e pa

st.

•H

e ha

s le

arne

d fr

om m

akin

g m

ista

kes.

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Rere

ad th

e po

em, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.•

This

is a

‘wha

t do

you

thin

k’ q

uest

ion

so th

e an

swer

will

not

be

dire

ctly

in

the

text

3.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e po

et re

peat

s th

e lin

e “w

hoop

h w

hoop

h”?

•to

bui

ld u

p an

und

erst

andi

ng o

f exp

ecte

d be

havi

our

•be

caus

e th

ey a

ll kn

ew w

hat t

o do

•be

caus

e w

hat t

hey

wer

e do

ing

is n

orm

al•

beca

use

that

is w

hat y

ou w

ould

exp

ect

to d

o•

to s

how

they

all

did

the

sam

e th

ing

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds a

nd

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

reas

ons

why

the

poet

mig

ht h

ave

chos

en to

use

this

pat

tern

in

his

poem

.

4.

“He

bobs

his

hea

d up

and

dow

n.”

Su

gges

t a d

iffer

ent w

ord

the

writ

er

coul

d ha

ve u

sed.

nods

, dip

s, bo

bble

s, jo

gs. A

ccep

t mov

es.

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

give

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for t

he li

ne in

que

stio

n.•

Visu

alis

e th

e ac

tion

•Su

gges

t a d

iffer

ent w

ord.

5.

Wha

t do

you

thin

k th

e na

rrato

r sa

id to

Dad

aft

er h

e sa

id “W

atch

ou

t eve

rybo

dy –

the

pota

to’s

ver

y ho

t” (v

erse

2)?

•I k

now

.•

That

’s w

hy I

blew

on

my

pota

to b

efor

e pu

ttin

g it

in m

y m

outh

.

2e 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

pred

ict w

hat m

ight

hap

pen

from

det

ails

stat

ed a

nd im

plie

d.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

last

par

t of t

he p

oem

.•

Cons

ider

wha

t you

mig

ht re

ply

in th

e sa

me

situ

atio

n.

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Unit 13 • POETRY

6.

“But

my

dad.

M

y da

d.

Wha

t doe

s he

do?”

(ver

se 2

)

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

narra

tor

choo

ses

to u

se a

que

stio

n he

re?

•H

e is

intr

oduc

ing

the

idea

that

his

dad

di

dn’t

do

the

sam

e as

the

othe

rs.

•H

e is

bui

ldin

g su

spen

se.

•H

e is

usi

ng n

ew s

ente

nce

stru

ctur

e to

poi

nt

out t

hat h

is d

ad d

id s

omet

hing

diff

eren

t.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

for t

he li

ne a

nd re

ad th

e lin

es a

roun

d it.

•Co

nsid

er w

hy th

e po

et m

ight

hav

e m

ade

that

dec

isio

n.

7.

Tick

true

or f

alse

in th

e fo

llow

ing

tabl

e to

sho

w w

hat y

ou s

houl

d do

w

hen

eatin

g ho

t foo

d.

Stuf

f a g

reat

big

chu

nk in

you

r mou

th.

Blow

gen

tly.

Spit

bits

of p

otat

o ev

eryw

here

.

Put a

litt

le b

it on

you

r for

k.

Stuf

f a g

reat

big

chu

nk in

you

r mou

th. –

FAL

SE

Blow

gen

tly. –

TRU

E

Spit

bits

of p

otat

o ev

eryw

here

. – F

ALSE

Put a

litt

le b

it on

you

r for

k. –

TRU

E

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

for e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

.•

Rere

ad th

e lin

es a

nd th

ink

abou

t the

ir m

eani

ng.

•D

ecid

e w

heth

er th

e w

riter

is a

ppro

ving

or d

isap

prov

ing

of e

ach

actio

n.

8.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e po

et h

as

writ

ten

this

poe

m in

the

pres

ent

tens

e (e

.g. “

We

sit d

own

to e

at”

inst

ead

of “W

e sa

t dow

n to

eat

”)?

•It

mak

es it

see

m li

ke it

is h

appe

ning

now

.•

It s

ound

s lik

e he

is te

lling

wha

t is

happ

enin

g as

it is

hap

peni

ng.

2f 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

the

mea

ning

as a

who

le.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

poem

to re

mem

ber w

hat h

appe

ns.

•Co

nsid

er w

hy th

e po

et m

ight

hav

e m

ade

that

dec

isio

n.

9.

This

poe

m h

as tw

o m

ain

part

s: lin

es 1

–19

and

then

line

s 20

to th

e en

d.

A

sum

mar

y se

nten

ce h

as b

een

writ

ten

for t

he fi

rst p

art.

W

rite

a su

mm

ary

sent

ence

for t

he

seco

nd p

art.

Li

nes

1–19

: The

pot

ato

is h

ot so

m

ost o

f the

fam

ily ta

ke a

litt

le b

it on

thei

r for

k an

d bl

ow o

n it

befo

re

eatin

g it

and

enjo

ying

it.

Li

nes

20–t

he e

nd:

Acce

pt a

ny s

ensi

ble

sum

mar

y of

par

t 2. E

.g.

Dad

put

s a

larg

e pi

ece

of p

otat

o in

his

mou

th

but i

t is

too

hot a

nd h

e ca

nnot

eat

it.

2c 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

the

mai

n id

eas.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

for a

n ov

eral

l im

pres

sion

.•

Scan

it fo

r ide

as to

use

in th

e an

swer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n an

d an

othe

r for

refe

renc

e to

/a q

uota

tion

from

the

poem

.

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• Poetry

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Unit 14POETRY

A Small Dragon/The Spirit of PlaceBrian Patten/Richard Brown

Key text features

Both poems introduce fantasy/sci-fi ideas and settings.

l The Teaching text, A Small Dragon by Brian Patten, is a poem about a dragon in the woodshed.

l The Practice text, The Spirit of Place by Richard Brown, is a poem intended to be read by four voices and is the beginning of a horror story.

Reading the Teaching text: A Small Dragon

l Introduce the poem by telling the children the title of the poem and the poet. Are the children familiar with Brian Patten? What are their expectations of him?

l Have the children read other dragon poems? Discuss their expectations.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit.

l Read the poem aloud, making the most of the structure so that the children can hear the rationale for new lines and for verses.

l Read the poem again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 116–117).

Reading the Practice text: The Spirit of Place

l Let a group of children rehearse reading this poem aloud and present it to the rest of the class.

l Once they have read the poem, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread The Spirit of Place.

l Encourage performance – with sound effects if possible.

l Tell the children they’re going to continue the poem to describe what happens when the creature arrives.

l Use drama techniques to explore what might happen. Allow the children time to discuss, explain and enact their ideas.

l In groups, ask the children to create a story map to plan the events they agreed on.

l Reread the poem, reminding the children of the way the voices are used.

l In groups, ask the children to continue the poem.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and Answers

.Q1: Is this a poem about a pet dragon? Explain your answer.

A1: No. The dragon suddenly appeared in the poet’s woodshed.

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part.

Q2: Which of the foods the poet tried to feed the dragon would be the most difficult to obtain?

A2: The roots of stars

Strategy: Consider where in the text the information might be found. Listen carefully to that part. Make a note of words used in the text and use them as you explain your answer.

Q3: Do you think the dragon would make a good pet? Explain your answer.

A3: No, it would not make a good pet. It would not survive long without proper food and it is not eating the food it is given.

Yes, it would make a good pet. It would be fun to have a dragon and see who believes in it and who does not; finding out who “will pass this way” without an invitation.

Strategy: Listen to the whole poem. Use ideas from the text, not general knowledge.

The listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

On the Ning Nang Nong from Nation’s Favourite Children’s Poems – Spike Milligan

Voice in the Tunnel from Ghosts Galore – Robert Fisher

Witch Words from Witch Words – Robert Fisher

Meeting Midnight from New and Collected Poems for Children – Carol Ann Duffy

Extending reading

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Unit 14 • POETRY

Teac

hing

text

: A S

mal

l Dra

gon

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

the

phra

se fr

om

vers

e 1

that

sho

ws

that

the

poet

th

inks

the

drag

on h

as o

nly

rece

ntly

co

me

out o

f the

fore

st.

“leav

es a

re st

ill re

flect

ing

in it

s eye

s” (v

erse

 1)

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for e

vide

nce.

2.

“... a

nd is

mos

ttim

es si

lent

.”

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

poet

use

d th

e un

derli

ned

wor

d in

stea

d of

say

ing

“mos

t of t

he ti

me”

or

“usu

ally

”?

Acce

pt a

ny a

nsw

er th

at re

flect

s a

plau

sibl

e in

tent

ion

of th

e po

et. E

.g.

•H

e w

ante

d to

end

the

line

with

“sile

nt” t

o m

ake

it st

and

out m

ore.

•Th

e lin

es in

this

ver

se a

re v

ery

shor

t: th

e fir

st

two

have

eig

ht s

ylla

bles

and

the

seco

nd tw

o ha

ve o

nly

six.

•A

long

er w

ord

wou

ld b

e ou

t of p

lace

.•

“mos

ttim

es” i

s a

very

eco

nom

ical

wor

d an

d po

ets

like

to u

se e

cono

mic

al w

ords

.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

for t

hese

wor

ds a

nd re

ad th

em in

con

text

.•

Cons

ider

a re

ason

for t

he p

oet’

s w

ord

choi

ce.

3.

Com

plet

e th

is ta

ble

show

ing

th

e m

ain

idea

of e

ach

vers

e.

(See

righ

t.)

1 w

here

the

drag

on c

ame

from

(lin

es 2

–3)

2 fin

ding

food

for t

he d

rago

n (li

nes

5–6)

3 its

nes

t (lin

es 9

–10)

4 sh

arin

g th

e dr

agon

/sha

ring

belie

f in

the

drag

on (l

ines

13–

16)

2c 3 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

eac

h ve

rse

and

sum

mar

ise

its m

ain

idea

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h br

ief s

umm

ary

of th

e m

ain

idea

of a

ver

se, u

p to

a

tota

l of 3

mar

ks.

4.

Find

a li

ne fr

om th

e po

em th

at

sugg

ests

that

the

drag

on is

not

at

hom

e in

the

woo

dshe

d.

•“I

nee

d/fo

od y

ou c

an’t

pro

vide

” (ve

rse

2)•

“it is

out

of p

lace

her

e” (v

erse

3)

2d 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

poem

, loo

king

for w

ords

and

phr

ases

that

sug

gest

the

drag

on is

not

at h

ome.

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Unit 14 • POETRY

5.

Choo

se w

hich

of t

he fo

llow

ing

are

true

and

whi

ch a

re fa

lse

(see

righ

t)

to s

how

thin

gs w

e ar

e to

ld a

bout

th

e dr

agon

in th

e te

xt.

TF

It is

in th

e po

et’s

w

oods

hed.

It h

as c

ome

from

a

fore

st.

It is

red.

It is

abo

ut th

e sa

me

size

as

a b

ird.

Its

nest

is m

ade

of c

oal.

It is

qui

et.

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n fro

m fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

sep

arat

ely

for e

ach

piec

e of

info

rmat

ion.

If y

ou c

an fi

nd th

e in

form

atio

n, ti

ck ‘T

rue’

. If t

he a

nsw

er is

false

, or w

e do

n’t k

now

if it

’s tr

ue o

r no

t, tic

k ‘F

alse

’.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

answ

ers

corr

ect.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r 3 a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

6.

Wha

t is

the

poet

’s fe

elin

g ab

out

the

drag

on?

Use

wor

ds fr

om th

e po

em in

you

r ans

wer

.

•Th

e po

et th

inks

that

the

drag

on is

w

onde

rful

. He

says

“I w

ould

com

e/hu

rryin

g to

you

r hou

se to

let y

ou sh

are

this

won

der”

(v

erse

4).

•Th

e po

et is

wor

ried

abou

t tel

ling

peop

le

abou

t his

dra

gon

beca

use

he d

oesn

’t

thin

k th

ey w

ill b

elie

ve h

im. H

e sa

ys “I

wan

t in

stea

d to

see/

if yo

u yo

urse

lf w

ill p

ass t

his

way

” (ve

rse

4).

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

exp

lain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le p

oem

whi

le c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.•

Scan

the

poem

for w

ords

or i

deas

to u

se in

you

r ans

wer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n of

wha

t the

poe

t fee

ls.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

appr

opria

te q

uota

tion

from

/ref

eren

ce to

the

poem

.

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Unit 14 • POETRY

118 Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page

The Spirit of PlaceRichard Brown

A poem for four voices

Here is just the beginning of a horror story. Where will it end?

1: There was a sea2: a blue sea3: a secret blue sea4: and in this sea1: there was an island2: a spiky island3: a spiky green island4: and in this island1: there was a valley2: a deep valley3: a hot deep valley4: and in this valley

1: there was a tree2: a vast tree3: a vast ancient tree4: and in the roots of this tree1: there was an egg2: a historic egg3: a prehistoric egg4: and in this egg1: there was a creature2: a live creature3: a creature so wild4: so full of energyAll: the old tree trembled.

1: And in a hurricane2: a tearing hurricane3: a fierce tearing hurricane4: that tree crackedAll: cracked to the roots.1: And out of those roots2: those shattered roots3: roots laid bare in the howl4: climbed the creature1: the wild creature2: so full of energy3: so full of destruction4: it shrieked for escape.

1: There was a sea2: a blue sea3: a boiling blue sea4: and in this sea1: there was an island2: a spiky island3: an island in turmoil4: it was ready to plunge1: plunge into the sea2: the boiling sea3: and swim, swim, swimAll: towards us all.

1

13

26

39

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Unit 14 • POETRY

Cracking Comprehension Year 4 Teaching and Assessment Guide © Rising Stars UK Ltd 2019 You may photocopy this page 119

Name: Class: Date:

1 Do you think the island sounded welcoming at the beginning of the poem?

Yes • No • Explain your answer using ideas from the poem.

2 What are the first words in the poem that warn us we should fear the creature?

3 Find and copy three powerful words the poet uses in verse 3 (beginning “And in a hurricane”) to show the strength of the wind.

4 What is the impact of the poet’s use of four voices? Explain your answer using ideas from the poem.

5 Why do you think the poet decided to write about a storm at the point in the story when the creature is born?

6 The last verse begins by nearly repeating the lines at the beginning of the first verse.

Why do you think the poet changes “secret” (verse 1) to “boiling” (verse 4)?

Explain why the poet used both of the words.

7 There are four verses in this poem. Complete this table showing the main idea of each verse.

Verse Main idea1 establish the setting and introduce the egg

2

3

4

8 “an island in turmoil” (verse 4). What does the word “turmoil” mean in this poem?

Tick the best option.

order • chaos • calm • escape •

9 What is the poet’s feeling about the creature? Use words from the poem in your answer.

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2g

3 marks

2g

2 marks

2f

1 mark

2f

2 marks

2h

3 marks

2c

1 mark

2a

2 marks

2d

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Unit 14 • POETRY

Prac

tice

text

: The

Spi

rit o

f Pla

ce

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

D

o yo

u th

ink

the

isla

nd s

ound

ed

wel

com

ing

at th

e be

ginn

ing

of th

e po

em?

□ Y

es

□ N

o

Ex

plai

n yo

ur a

nsw

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e po

em.

Yes

•W

e ar

e to

ld th

at th

e is

land

was

in a

blu

e se

a. T

he fa

ct th

at th

e tr

ee is

vas

t and

an

cien

t hel

ps to

reas

sure

us

that

it’s

saf

e.

No

•Th

e fir

st w

e he

ar a

bout

the

isla

nd is

that

it

is “s

piky

gre

en” (

vers

e 1)

and

that

it’s

in a

“s

ecre

t blu

e se

a” (v

erse

1).

“Sec

ret”

doe

sn’t

so

und

wel

com

ing

and

neith

er d

oes

“spi

ky”.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

for e

vide

nce.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n th

at m

atch

es th

e ye

s/no

cho

ice.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

appr

opria

te q

uota

tion

from

/ref

eren

ce to

the

text

.

2.

Wha

t are

the

first

wor

ds in

the

poem

that

war

n us

we

shou

ld fe

ar

the

crea

ture

?

“so

full

of d

estr

uctio

n” (v

erse

3).

Also

acc

ept

“wild

” (ve

rse

2).

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

.

3.

Find

and

cop

y th

ree

pow

erfu

l w

ords

the

poet

use

s in

ver

se 3

(b

egin

ning

“And

in a

hur

rican

e”) t

o sh

ow th

e st

reng

th o

f the

win

d.

Acce

pt a

ny th

ree

of:

•“h

urric

ane”

•“t

earin

g”•

“fier

ce”

•“c

rack

ed”

•“s

hatt

ered

”•

“how

l”

2g 3 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

vers

e fo

r pow

erfu

l wor

ds.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h w

ord,

up

to a

tota

l of 3

mar

ks.

4.

Wha

t is

the

impa

ct o

f the

poe

t’s

use

of fo

ur v

oice

s? E

xpla

in y

our

answ

er u

sing

idea

s fr

om th

e po

em.

It b

uild

s te

nsio

n by

repe

atin

g an

d de

velo

ping

on

sim

ple

idea

s. O

ne p

erso

n ca

n m

ake

a si

mpl

e st

atem

ent,

e.g.

“the

re w

as a

sea”

(li

ne 3

9), a

nd o

ther

s ad

d a

wor

d to

dev

elop

th

e se

ttin

g an

d th

e te

nsio

n, e

.g. “

a bl

ue se

a/a

boili

ng b

lue

sea”

(lin

es 3

6–37

).

2f 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

poem

whi

lst c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.•

Look

for i

deas

to u

se in

you

r ans

wer

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n of

the

impa

ct o

f fou

r voi

ces.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r app

ropr

iate

quo

tatio

n fr

om/r

efer

ence

to th

e te

xt.

5.

Why

do

you

thin

k th

e po

et d

ecid

ed

to w

rite

abou

t a s

torm

at t

he p

oint

in

the

stor

y w

hen

the

crea

ture

is

born

?

It e

mph

asis

es th

e w

ild a

nd d

estr

uctiv

e na

ture

of

the

crea

ture

.2f 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

nar

rativ

e co

nten

t is r

elat

ed a

nd c

ontr

ibut

es to

m

eani

ng a

s a w

hole

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Cons

ider

whe

re in

the

text

to lo

ok fo

r the

info

rmat

ion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

at p

art o

f the

text

, con

side

ring

the

impa

ct.

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Unit 14 • POETRY

6.

The

last

ver

se b

egin

s by

nea

rly

repe

atin

g th

e lin

es a

t the

be

ginn

ing

of th

e fir

st v

erse

.

W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

poet

cha

nges

“s

ecre

t” (v

erse

1) t

o “b

oilin

g”

(ver

se 4

)?

Ex

plai

n w

hy th

e po

et u

sed

both

of

the

wor

ds.

“Sec

ret”

is a

cal

m w

ord

and

was

app

ropr

iate

w

hen

the

crea

ture

was

stil

l ins

ide

the

egg.

H

owev

er, a

fter

it h

as e

scap

ed, t

he s

ea is

“b

oilin

g” to

refle

ct th

e da

nger

.

2h 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e co

mpa

rison

s with

in th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

part

s of

the

poem

men

tione

d.•

Cons

ider

the

impa

ct o

f eac

h w

ord.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r an

expl

anat

ion

for e

ach

of th

e w

ords

use

d in

the

ques

tion,

up

to a

tota

l of 2

mar

ks.

7.

Ther

e ar

e fo

ur v

erse

s in

this

poe

m.

Com

plet

e th

e ta

ble

show

ing

the

mai

n id

ea o

f eac

h ve

rse.

(See

rig

ht.)

1 es

tabl

ish

the

sett

ing

and

intr

oduc

e

the

egg

2 in

trod

uce

the

crea

ture

3 th

e bi

rth

of th

e cr

eatu

re

4 th

e cr

eatu

re e

scap

es fr

om th

e is

land

2c 3 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

eac

h ve

rse

and

sum

mar

ise

its m

ain

idea

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h br

ief s

umm

ary

of th

e m

ain

idea

of a

ver

se, u

p to

a to

tal

of 3

mar

ks.

8.

“an

isla

nd in

turm

oil”

(line

41)

. W

hat d

oes

the

wor

d “t

urm

oil”

mea

n in

this

poe

m?

Ti

ck th

e be

st o

ptio

n.

□ o

rder

□ c

haos

□ c

alm

□ e

scap

e

chao

s2a 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

giv

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

con

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

for t

he re

leva

nt p

art o

f the

poe

m.

•Ca

refu

lly re

read

the

line.

•Co

nsid

er e

ach

of th

e op

tions

giv

en: w

hich

is th

e cl

oses

t to

the

mea

ning

of

the

wor

d?

9.

Wha

t is

the

poet

’s fe

elin

g ab

out

the

crea

ture

? U

se w

ords

from

the

poem

in y

our a

nsw

er.

•Th

e po

et th

inks

that

the

crea

ture

is

dang

erou

s.•

The

poem

is a

war

ning

that

it is

sw

imm

ing

“tow

ards

us a

ll” (v

erse

4).

•Th

e w

hole

poe

m is

a w

arni

ng a

bout

the

“ene

rgy/

so fu

ll of

des

truc

tion”

(ver

se 3

) of

the

crea

ture

that

had

plu

nged

into

the

sea

and

is n

ow th

reat

enin

g us

all.

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le te

xt w

hile

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Sc

an th

e te

xt fo

r wor

ds o

r ide

as to

use

in y

our a

nsw

er.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r a b

rief e

xpla

natio

n.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r app

ropr

iate

quo

tatio

n/w

ords

from

the

text

.

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• Poetry

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Unit 15POETRY

The Kitten at Play/Letting in the LightWilliam Wordsworth/Elizabeth Lindsay

Key text features

The texts are both poems about kittens.

l The Teaching text is The Kitten at Play by William Wordsworth.

l The Practice text is Letting in the Light by Elizabeth Lindsay.

Reading the Teaching text: The Kitten at Play

l Ask the children to think, pair, share their experiences of having kittens or other young animals. What kinds of things do young animals like doing?

l Together, ask the children to develop a list of vocabulary they could use to describe young animals. Keep a record of their ideas.

l Access the Interactive Modelling Software for this unit. Read the extract to the children and ask them to think about whether the poem describes the kinds of things they think kittens enjoy.

l Read the extract again, this time using the modelling software to model ‘cracking’ the questions together. Remember to look at the model answers and discuss strategies for different question types (see pages 124–125).

Reading the Practice text: Letting in the Light

l Encourage the children to think, pair, share what they know about animals at birth. Establish that some animals in the wild are born ready to run, while many other animals have babies that are helpless, e.g. kittens and puppies are born with their eyes closed, and their eyes do not open until a couple of weeks after birth.

l Introduce the poem by explaining that it is narrated by a kitten of about two weeks old.

l Once they have read the extract, remind the children that they are now going to work independently to practise the strategies introduced during the teaching session.

Moving into writing

l Reread these poems and compare their structures, including rhyme, rhythm and use of new lines.

l Find similarities in the poems (e.g. both focus on a limited range of the kittens’ experiences, both identify that kittens are playful).

l Explain to the children that they are going to write their own poem about a young animal. They can choose whether or not it should have a rhythm or rhyme.

l Encourage the children to work in groups to discuss ideas and identify attributes/experiences they wish to include.

l In pairs, ask the children to write and edit their poem. Poetry takes a lot of editing and improving, so word-processing is ideal for this task.

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Listening Comprehension: Questions and Answers

.Q1: Where is the kitten?

A1: On the wall

Strategy: Think about where in the poem you would find the answer to this question. Listen to that part of the poem again.

Q2: In the poem, the kitten is compared to two other things. What are they?

A2: A tiger and a conjurer

Strategy: Listen to the whole poem again, listening out for other nouns or similes used to describe the kitten.

Q3: Listen again to the last two lines. “Yet were gazing thousands there,/What would little Tabby care?” What is your answer to this question?

A3: She would not care because she is not performing but is amusing herself.

Strategy: Listen to the whole Poem again, being alert for information about what the kitten is doing and thinking about.

The listening comprehension questions can be accessed on the modelling software for this unit.

The Lost Words – Robert Macfarlane

The Last Hedgehog – Pam Ayres

We Animals Would Like a Word with You – John Agard

100 Best Poems for Children – Roger McGough

Extending reading

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Unit 15 • POETRY

Teac

hing

text

: The

Kit

ten

at P

lay

Cr

acki

ng th

e qu

esti

ons

Que

stio

nA

nsw

erCD

/Mar

kU

sefu

l str

ateg

ies

1.

In th

e ve

rse

1, w

hat d

oes

the

wor

d “s

port

ing”

mea

n?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ c

ompe

ting

□ k

icki

ng

□ p

layi

ng

□ r

unni

ng

play

ing

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

vers

e in

dica

ted

look

ing

for t

he w

ord.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e lin

e co

ntai

ning

the

wor

d, th

en id

entif

y a

wor

d in

the

ques

tion

with

the

sam

e m

eani

ng.

2.

The

poem

is s

et in

the

autu

mn

or

win

ter.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

from

ve

rse

1 to

sup

port

this

sta

tem

ent.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Th

e le

aves

are

with

ered

./“W

ither

ed le

aves

”•

The

leav

es a

re fa

lling

from

the

tree

./“th

e le

aves

that

fall”

•It

is fr

osty

./“th

e ca

lm a

nd fr

osty

air”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

vers

e in

dica

ted,

look

ing

for e

vide

nce

of th

e se

ason

.•

Care

fully

read

the

lines

aro

und

the

evid

ence

.•

Giv

e ei

ther

dire

ct q

uota

tions

or p

arap

hras

e th

eir m

eani

ng.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

3.

Look

at v

erse

2.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

two

wor

ds th

at

show

how

the

kitt

en m

oves

.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•“s

tart

s”•

“cro

uche

s”•

“str

etch

es”

•“p

aws”

•“d

arts

”•

“tig

er-le

ap”

2b 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

retr

ieve

and

reco

rd in

form

atio

n fro

m fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

vers

e in

dica

ted,

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Co

py tw

o w

ords

to d

escr

ibe

the

kitt

en’s

mov

emen

ts.

4.

“Now

she

mee

ts h

er c

omin

g pr

ey.”

W

hat i

s th

e ki

tten

’s p

rey?

leav

es2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

text

, loo

king

for t

he li

ne q

uote

d.•

Care

fully

read

the

lines

aro

und

the

quot

atio

n, c

onsi

derin

g th

e qu

estio

n.

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Unit 15 • POETRY

5.

In v

erse

3, w

hy d

oes

the

poet

co

mpa

re th

e ki

tten

to a

con

juro

r?•

She

is q

uick

.•

She

is g

race

ful.

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds a

nd

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

vers

e to

gai

n an

ove

rall

unde

rsta

ndin

g of

its

mea

ning

.•

Care

fully

read

the

vers

e ag

ain,

con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

6.

Wha

t is

the

kitt

en d

oing

th

roug

hout

ver

ses

2 an

d 3?

Ch

oose

one

.

□ S

he is

look

ing

at th

e le

aves

falli

ng.

□ S

he is

tryi

ng to

cat

ch th

e le

aves

.

□ S

he is

cha

sing

her

tail.

□ S

he is

jum

ping

and

leap

ing

for f

un.

She

is tr

ying

to c

atch

the

leav

es.

2c 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

sum

mar

ise

mai

n id

eas f

rom

mor

e th

an o

ne p

arag

raph

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

text

to g

ain

an o

vera

ll un

ders

tand

ing

of it

s m

eani

ng.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e op

tions

in th

e qu

estio

n, m

atch

ing

them

aga

inst

you

r ov

eral

l und

erst

andi

ng.

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Letting in the LightElizabeth Lindsay

I am warm wrapped in my fur My wobbly legs resting as I lie here, My eyes still closed. Soon they will open

Letting in the light, And when I see I’ll spin the world round in tumbles As I play chasing my tail, Or hunt specks of dust in the sunlight And wash the paws I have never seen. My mother washes my face Her tongue smoothing my fur, I hear her purr, And see, yes, see some pink.

Her busy tongue, her whiskers, Fur and eyes so orange bright, She bends towards me, Licking and licking, And over I go.

I see light everywhere And begin to know I have opened my eyes.

1

5

10

15

20

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Name: Class: Date:

1 The use of the word “warm” in the first line helps us to understand that the kitten is feeling what? Tick one. anxious • excited • joyous • safe •

2 From the first five lines, find and copy two phrases that show the kitten is newly born.

3 What will the kitten do to “spin the world round in tumbles”?

4 Look at lines 5–10. Find and copy one word that means the same as tiny pieces.

5 Why has the kitten never seen her paws?

6 How does the kitten change between the beginning and end of the poem?

7 Tick one box to choose whether each statement is true or false.

True False

The mother cat is licking the kitten’s paws.

The mother cat is purring.

The mother cat is pink.

The mother cat’s tongue is smoothing the kitten’s fur.

8 We are never told that the poem is about a kitten. Find two pieces of evidence that the poem is about a kitten. You do not have to use direct

quotations from the text.

9 Why is the poem called Letting in the Light? Tick one. It is about: what the kitten will do when her eyes are open. • what the kitten will do in the morning, when it is light. • the kitten’s first experiences of being licked by her mother. • the first time the kitten opened her eyes. •

1 mark

2g

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2d

1 mark

2a

2 marks

2b

1 mark

2h

2 marks

2d

1 mark

2c

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Unit 15 • POETRY

Prac

tice

text

: Let

ting

in th

e Li

ght

Crac

king

the

ques

tion

sQ

uest

ion

Ans

wer

CD/M

ark

Use

ful s

trat

egie

s1.

Th

e us

e of

the

wor

d “w

arm

” in

the

first

line

hel

ps u

s to

und

erst

and

that

the

kitt

en is

feel

ing

wha

t?

Ti

ck o

ne.

□ a

nxio

us

□ e

xcite

d

□ j

oyou

s

□ s

afe

safe

2g 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

how

mea

ning

is e

nhan

ced

thro

ugh

choi

ce o

f wor

ds

and

phra

ses.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

first

line

, con

side

ring

the

impa

ct o

f the

wor

d.•

Care

fully

read

the

optio

ns in

the

ques

tion,

mat

chin

g th

em a

gain

st y

our

over

all u

nder

stan

ding

.

2.

From

the

first

five

line

s, fin

d an

d co

py tw

o ph

rase

s th

at s

how

the

kitt

en is

new

ly b

orn.

•“(

My)

wob

bly

legs

”•

“(M

y) e

yes s

till c

lose

d”2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Care

fully

read

the

lines

indi

cate

d, lo

okin

g fo

r the

ans

wer

.•

Rem

embe

r to

find

and

copy

, not

par

aphr

ase.

3.

Wha

t will

the

kitt

en d

o to

“s

pin

the

wor

ld ro

und

in tu

mbl

es”?

She

will

cha

se h

er ta

il.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

, loo

king

for t

he li

ne in

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad a

djac

ent l

ines

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

4.

Look

at l

ines

5–1

0.

Fi

nd a

nd c

opy

one

wor

d th

at

mea

ns th

e sa

me

as ti

ny p

iece

s.

“spe

cks”

2a 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

the

mea

ning

of w

ords

in c

onte

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

lines

indi

cate

d, lo

okin

g fo

r the

wor

d.•

Care

fully

rere

ad th

e lin

es c

onta

inin

g th

e w

ord

to c

heck

you

r res

pons

e.

5.

Why

has

the

kitt

en n

ever

see

n

her p

aws?

Her

eye

s ha

ve n

ot y

et o

pene

d.2d 1

mar

k

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e in

fere

nces

from

the

text

.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

, loo

king

for t

he in

form

atio

n in

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad a

djac

ent l

ines

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

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Unit 15 • POETRY

6.

How

doe

s th

e ki

tten

cha

nge

betw

een

the

begi

nnin

g an

d en

d of

th

e po

em?

At th

e st

art,

her e

yes

are

clos

ed. A

t the

end

, he

r eye

s ar

e op

en a

nd s

he c

an s

ee.

2h 1 m

ark

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

mak

e co

mpa

rison

s with

in th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Skim

-read

the

who

le p

oem

, con

side

ring

the

ques

tion.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e po

em a

gain

, loo

king

for w

hat c

hang

es.

7.

Choo

se w

heth

er e

ach

stat

emen

t is

true

or f

alse

.

True

Fals

e

The

mot

her c

at is

lic

king

the

kitt

en’s

pa

ws.

The

mot

her c

at is

pu

rrin

g.

The

mot

her c

at is

pin

k.

The

mot

her c

at’s

to

ngue

is s

moo

thin

g th

e ki

tten

’s fu

r.

True

Fals

e

The

mot

her c

at is

lic

king

the

kitt

en’s

pa

ws.

The

mot

her c

at is

pu

rrin

g.✓

The

mot

her c

at is

pin

k.✓

The

mot

her c

at’s

to

ngue

is s

moo

thin

g th

e ki

tten

’s fu

r.✓

2b 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

iden

tify

key

deta

ils fr

om fi

ctio

n.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Thin

k ab

out e

ach

of th

e st

atem

ents

sep

arat

ely.

Con

side

r whe

re in

the

poem

yo

u w

ill fi

nd re

leva

nt in

form

atio

n.•

Care

fully

read

the

rele

vant

sec

tions

of t

he p

oem

to d

ecid

e w

heth

er e

ach

stat

emen

t is

true

or f

alse

.

Awar

d 2

mar

ks fo

r all

four

ans

wer

s co

rrec

t.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r thr

ee a

nsw

ers

corr

ect.

8.

We

are

neve

r tol

d th

at th

e po

em is

ab

out a

kitt

en.

Fi

nd tw

o pi

eces

of e

vide

nce

that

th

e po

em is

abo

ut a

kitt

en. Y

ou d

o no

t hav

e to

use

dire

ct q

uota

tions

fr

om th

e te

xt.

Acce

pt a

ny tw

o of

:

•Sh

e is

cov

ered

in fu

r./“w

rapp

ed in

my

fur”

•H

er m

othe

r pur

rs, s

o sh

e is

a c

at./“

I hea

r h

er p

urr”

•H

er m

othe

r is

licki

ng h

er fa

ce./“

My

mot

her

was

hes m

y fa

ce/H

er to

ngue

smoo

thin

g

my

fur”

2d 2 m

arks

Que

stio

n fo

cus:

expl

ain

and

just

ify in

fere

nces

with

evi

denc

e fro

m th

e te

xt.

Stra

tegi

es:

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e qu

estio

n, m

arki

ng k

ey w

ords

.•

Scan

the

poem

, loo

king

for e

vide

nce

that

it is

abo

ut a

kitt

en.

•Ca

refu

lly re

ad th

e lin

es a

roun

d th

e ev

iden

ce.

•G

ive

eith

er d

irect

quo

tatio

ns o

r par

aphr

ase

thei

r mea

ning

.

Awar

d 1

mar

k fo

r eac

h pi

ece

of e

vide

nce

give

n, u

p to

a to

tal o

f 2 m

arks

.

9.

Why

is th

e po

em c

alle

d Le

ttin

g in

th

e Li

ght?

Ti

ck o

ne.

It

is a

bout

:

□ w

hat t

he k

itten

will

do

whe

n he

r ey

es a

re o

pen.

□ w

hat t

he k

itten

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Assessment Task 1FICTION

Teacher notes: The Pudding Like a Night on the Sea

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:

– checking that the text makes sense to them, discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– asking questions to improve their understanding of a text

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– predicting what might happen from details stated and implied

– identifying how language, structure and presentation contribute to meaning.

Running the task

l Explain that this extract comes from a story by Ann Cameron called The Pudding Like a Night on the Sea.

l Discuss the term “narrator”, ensuring they understand that the narrator refers to himself/herself in the first person as “I”.

l Talk about temptation. Ask them to discuss in pairs a situation where they have been told they cannot have something, but it is there in front of them. How would that feel? What would they do?

l Read the text together and discuss it briefly. Remember that you may have opportunities for further assessment at this stage.

l Encourage the children to reread the text to themselves. Support children who may need support

with their reading skills, perhaps reading the text with them.

l Ask children to work on the task with a partner. While they do so, circulate and offer support to those who need it and challenge others, as appropriate. Encourage the children to expand their answers and include references to the text.

l Children who finish early, or who are working at greater depth within the expected standard, may enjoy looking for similes in the passage. These are mostly signalled by “like”; some children may identify “than” as well: “The pudding looked softer and lighter than air”; “With waves on top like the ocean”, etc. Ask the children to comment on the author’s style and suggest alternatives for the word “said”, which is used for every exchange.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding of

character, events and information; provide developed explanations for key information and events and for characters’ actions and motivations 2b

l make developed inferences drawing on evidence from the text; explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2d

l make developed predictions that are securely rooted in the text 2el identify/explain how the choice of language enhances the meaning of texts. 2g

The Pudding Like a Night on the SeaAnn Cameron

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Assessment Task 1 • FICTION

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What to expect

1 What do the two children think of the pudding? Find two things they say which show this.

Most children should be able to identify that the children thought the pudding was “wonderful”, it had “waves on top like the ocean” and it tasted like “a whole raft of lemons” or “a night on the sea”. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should recognise that the opening sentence is also the children’s view, as this is first-person narration.

(2b)

2 Why were the children told to leave the pudding alone?

Most children will understand that the children’s father was saving the pudding for their mother. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may refer to the extra care he has taken with it – making the lovely pudding and cleaning up so everything was “perfect”.

(2b)

3 Who made the pudding? Say how you know.

Most children should be able to state that it was the narrator’s father. Children working towards the expected standard may not refer to the information later in the text – where the narrator refers to ‘my father’ – but will simply explain it is a grown-up. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will take information from more than one place in the text.

(2d)

4 The children “guarded” the pudding? Why does the author say this?

Children working towards the expected standard should understand, possibly with prompting, that the children are not guarding the pudding at all, and this is just the narrator’s excuse for hanging around it longingly. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may realise that the description of “guarding” is a joke by the author for the readers.

(2g)

5 Why do you think the narrator tasted the pudding?

Children working towards the expected standard might take this at face value and give the narrator’s own reason, i.e. “because Huey tried it first”. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard might explain that Huey’s descriptions made him/her want to try it and he/she had been wanting to try it all the time.

(2d)

6 Why did the pudding end up looking like “craters on the moon”?

Most children should understand that it had holes in it; children working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to explain that this was because the children had scooped out bits to taste the pudding.

(2a)

7 How do you think the children felt after they tried to smooth over the pudding? Say why you think this.

Some children may bring their own feelings to bear and will say they felt guilty, naughty or frightened. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may pay close attention to the text and say that they were trying to make it look as though they hadn’t touched the pudding by smoothing over the holes. Those who think the children were scared about what would happen when their father found out will refer to the fact that the children go and hide in their room as further evidence of this.

(2d)

8 How do you think the father will react when he sees the pudding at the end? Say why you think this.

Most children should be able to infer that the father would be angry. Children working towards the expected standard should be able to explain why they think this using evidence from the text: the instructions he gave to the children; the tone of voice in which he gave them; the fact that they are hiding from him. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may give a more complex explanation: he would be angry because the children had disobeyed him, but also disappointed that the children’s mother couldn’t have the pudding and his effort has been wasted.

(2e)

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Assessment Task 1 • FICTION

Fro

m T

he

Pu

dd

ing

Like

a N

igh

t on

th

e Se

a b

y A

nn

Ca

mer

on

The

pu

ddin

g lo

oked

sof

ter

an

d li

ghte

r th

an

air

.

“Don

e!”

he

said

. He

wa

shed

all

th

e p

ots,

sp

lash

ing

wa

ter

on

the

floo

r, a

nd

wip

ed t

he

cou

nte

r so

fa

st h

is h

air

ma

de c

ircl

es

aro

un

d h

is h

ead.

“Per

fect

!” h

e sa

id. “

Now

I’m

goi

ng

to t

ake

a n

ap

. If

som

eth

ing

imp

orta

nt

ha

pp

ens,

bot

her

me.

If

not

hin

g im

por

tan

t h

ap

pen

s, d

on’t

bot

her

me.

An

d –

the

pu

ddin

g is

fo

r yo

ur

mot

her

. Lea

ve t

he

pu

ddin

g a

lon

e!”

He

wen

t to

th

e li

vin

g ro

om a

nd

wa

s a

slee

p in

a m

inu

te,

sitt

ing

stra

igh

t u

p in

his

ch

air

.

Hu

ey a

nd

I gu

ard

ed t

he

pu

ddin

g.

“Oh

, it’s

a w

onde

rfu

l pu

ddin

g,”

Hu

ey s

aid

.

“Wit

h w

ave

s on

top

like

th

e oc

ean

,” I

sa

id.

“I w

onde

r h

ow it

ta

stes

,” H

uey

sa

id.

“Lea

ve t

he

pu

ddin

g a

lon

e,”

I sa

id.

“If

I ju

st p

ut

my

fin

ger

in –

th

ere

– I’

ll k

now

how

it t

ast

es,”

H

uey

 sa

id.

“You

did

it!”

I s

aid

. “H

ow d

oes

it t

ast

e?”

“It

tast

es li

ke a

wh

ole

raft

of

lem

ons,

” h

e sa

id. “

It t

ast

es li

ke

a n

igh

t on

th

e se

a.”

“You

’ve

ma

de a

hol

e in

th

e p

udd

ing!

” I

said

. “B

ut

sin

ce y

ou

did

it, I

’ll h

ave

a t

ast

e.”

An

d it

ta

sted

like

a w

hol

e n

igh

t of

le

mon

s. I

t ta

sted

like

floa

tin

g a

t se

a.

“It’s

su

ch a

big

pu

ddin

g,”

Hu

ey s

aid

. “It

ca

n’t

hu

rt t

o h

ave

a

litt

le m

ore.

“Sin

ce y

ou t

ook

mor

e, I

’ll h

ave

mor

e,”

I sa

id.

“Th

at

wa

s a

big

ger

lick

th

an

I t

ook!

” H

uey

sa

id. “

I’m

goi

ng

to h

ave

mor

e a

gain

.”

“Wh

oop

s!”

I sa

id.

“You

pu

t in

you

r w

hol

e h

an

d!”

Hu

ey s

aid

. “Lo

ok a

t th

e p

udd

ing

you

sp

ille

d on

th

e fl

oor!

“I a

m g

oin

g to

cle

an

it u

p,”

I s

aid

. An

d I

took

th

e ra

g fr

om

the

sin

k.

“Th

at’s

not

rea

lly

clea

n,”

Hu

ey s

aid

.

“It’s

th

e be

st I

ca

n d

o,”

I sa

id.

“Loo

k a

t th

e p

udd

ing!

” H

uey

sa

id.

It lo

oked

like

cra

ters

on

th

e m

oon

. “W

e h

ave

to

smoo

th

this

ove

r,”

I sa

id. “

So it

look

s th

e w

ay

it d

id b

efor

e! L

et’s

get

sp

oon

s.”

An

d w

e ev

ened

th

e to

p o

f th

e p

udd

ing

wit

h s

poo

ns,

an

d w

hil

e w

e ev

ened

it, w

e a

te s

ome

mor

e.

“Th

ere

isn

’t m

uch

left

,” I

sa

id.

“We

wer

e su

pp

osed

to

lea

ve t

he

pu

ddin

g a

lon

e,”

Hu

ey s

aid

.

“We’

d be

tter

get

aw

ay

from

her

e,”

I sa

id. W

e ra

n in

to o

ur

bedr

oom

an

d cr

aw

led

un

der

the

bed.

Aft

er a

lon

g ti

me

we

hea

rd m

y fa

ther

’s v

oice

.

“Com

e in

to t

he

kitc

hen

, dea

r,”

he

said

. “I

ha

ve s

omet

hin

g fo

r yo

u.”

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Assessment Task 1 • FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What do the two children think of the pudding? Find two things they say which show this.

2 Why were the children told to leave the pudding alone?

3 Who made the pudding? Say how you know.

4 The children “guarded” the pudding. Why does the author say this?

5 Why do you think the narrator tasted the pudding?

6 Why did the pudding end up looking like “craters on the moon”?

7 How do you think the children felt after they tried to smooth over the pudding? Say why you think this.

8 How do you think the father will react when he sees the pudding at the end? Say why you think this.

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Assessment Task 2FICTION

Teacher notes: The Green Ship

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– increasing their familiarity with a wide range of books, including fairy stories, myths and legends, and retelling some of these orally

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– predicting what might happen from details stated and implied

– identifying main ideas drawn from more than one paragraph and summarising these.

Running the task

l Explain that this text is taken from a story (The Green Ship by Quentin Blake) about two children who climb into a garden and discover a ship made from bushes and trees.

l Read the extract together.

l You may need to check that children understand some of the vocabulary or geographical concepts, e.g. “Bosun”, “stowaways”, “swabbin’ the decks”, “deck-quoits”, “Arctic”, “Equator”.

l Before answering the questions, ask the children to give an oral response to the story. Ask them to say

what they think the story is about and what feeling the text evokes. Make notes of their oral responses.

l Then ask the children to answer the questions about the text.

l Help those who need support in writing and/or decoding, as suggested in the introduction to this book.

l Circulate as children perform the task, and discuss the questions with them. Support those who need it and challenge those who are working at greater depth within the expected standard.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding of character, events and information 2b

l accurately and selectively summarise main ideas, events, characters and information in fiction and non-fiction texts 2c

l make developed inferences drawing on evidence from the text 2dl explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2dl make developed predictions that are securely rooted in the text. 2e

The Green ShipQuentin Blake

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Assessment Task 2 • FICTION

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What to expect

1 What is the imaginary world in the story?

Some children will suggest that the imaginary world is the places that the children pretend to travel to. However, others may also suggest that the ship is part of the imaginary world.

(2c)

2 Draw lines to match the places the children imagined they sailed to with the real-world object.

Most children should be able to match the place with the object correctly.

(2b)

3 How does the author remind you that the ship is made of trees and bushes?

Some children will point out that some of the places they sail to are part of the garden, e.g. “bushes became icebergs”. Those working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to make the connection between “swabbin’ the decks” actually being sweeping away leaves and the Bosun looking like a gardener.

(2d)

4 Were the children invited into the garden at the start of the story? Explain your answer.

Most children will recognise that the children were probably not invited in as they were “taken by surprise” by Mrs Tredegar’s voice. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may also explain that Mrs Tredegar and the gardener were also pretending to punish them (“clap them in irons”, “swabbin’ the decks”), which suggests that they weren’t invited in to start with.

(2d)

5 How do you think Mrs Tredegar feels about having the children in her garden? What happens in the story to make you think this?

Most children will recognise that Mrs Tredegar welcomed the children into the garden because she gave them tea and invited them back, although some might mistake her first words for annoyance. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will also recognise that she enjoyed playing with them because she “trained” them as “crew”, brought out the old atlas, and suggested the “ceremony of Crossing the Line”.

(2d)

6 Number the following sentences 1 to 5 in the order that they happen in the story.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to number the events correctly. Children working towards the expected standard may order the third sentence (“They got permission from their aunt”) in the incorrect place.

(2c)

7 At the end of the extract, Mrs Tredegar decides that they must have crossed the Equator. What do you think might happen next?

Most children should be able to come up with a suitable suggestion for the “ceremony of Crossing the Line”. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will come up with more creative ideas for what the ceremony might involve.

(2e)

8 On a separate piece of paper, write what happens in no more than five lines, summarising the main ideas from the paragraphs.

Some children will struggle to include all the parts of the story and will either miss points or write too much. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to write clear, concise sentences.

(2c)

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Assessment Task 2 • FICTION

Fro

m T

he

Gre

en S

hip

by

Qu

enti

n B

lak

eA

nd

then

su

dden

ly w

e w

ere

take

n b

y su

rpri

se b

y a

voi

ce

wh

ich

sa

id: “

Wel

l, w

ha

t h

ave

we

her

e, B

osu

n?

Stow

aw

ays

?”

Ther

e w

as

a t

hin

lady

in a

da

rk d

ress

look

ing

up

at

us.

“Wh

at

do y

ou t

hin

k, B

osu

n?

Sha

ll w

e cl

ap

th

em in

 iron

s?”

“On

ly y

oun

gste

rs,”

sa

id t

he

Bos

un

, wh

o a

ctu

all

y lo

oked

m

ore

like

a g

ard

ener

. “Sw

abb

in’ t

he

deck

s is

th

e th

ing,

if y

ou

ask

me.

“An

d a

fter

th

at

per

ha

ps

we

sha

ll h

ave

tea

on

dec

k.”

Swa

bbin

g th

e de

ck t

urn

ed o

ut

to b

e sw

eep

ing

aw

ay

the

lea

ves;

bu

t te

a r

eall

y w

as

tea

, wit

h m

ade

ira

ca

ke a

nd

cucu

mbe

r sa

ndw

ich

es. A

t th

e en

d of

it M

rs T

rede

gar

(th

at

wa

s h

er n

am

e) s

aid

: “Th

e B

osu

n w

ill s

ee y

ou a

shor

e. A

ny

wh

y n

ot c

ome

abo

ard

aga

in t

omor

row

? I’

m s

ure

th

at’s

wh

at

the

Ca

pta

in w

ould

ha

ve w

ish

ed.”

Nex

t m

orn

ing,

wit

h p

erm

issi

on f

rom

ou

r a

un

t, w

e w

ere

back

a

t th

e gr

een

sh

ip.

We

clim

bed

the

ma

sts.

We

took

tu

rns

to s

tan

d a

t th

e w

hee

l a

nd

stee

r th

e sh

ip. M

rs T

rede

gar

show

ed u

s h

ow t

o u

se t

he

tele

scop

e. B

y th

e en

d of

th

e da

y w

e w

ere

a f

ull

y-tr

ain

ed c

rew

.

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ou

r n

ext

visi

t M

rs T

rede

gar

pro

duce

d a

n o

ld a

tla

s, a

nd

ever

y da

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fter

th

at

we

ima

gin

ed t

ha

t w

e w

ere

voya

gin

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som

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ew p

lace

. A fl

ower

urn

bec

am

e a

n I

tali

an

ru

in; a

p

alm

tre

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her

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all

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as

a p

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tre

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eca

me

the

far-

off

shor

e of

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pt.

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e ch

illy

da

y w

e p

rete

nde

d w

e w

ere

in t

he

Arc

tic.

Bu

shes

bec

am

e ic

eber

gs a

nd

som

e sh

eep

th

at

ha

d go

t in

to t

he

gard

en b

y m

ista

ke b

eca

me

pol

ar-

bea

rs.

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last

few

da

ys o

f ou

r h

olid

ay

wer

e h

ot a

nd

sun

ny.

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ey

got

hot

ter

an

d h

otte

r. W

e w

ore

sun

ha

ts a

nd

pla

yed

deck

-qu

oits

an

d dr

an

k lo

ts o

f li

mej

uic

e. I

t se

emed

as

thou

gh w

e w

ere

hea

din

g so

uth

wa

rd t

hro

ugh

tro

pic

al s

eas.

Eve

ntu

all

y it

be

cam

e so

hot

th

at

Mrs

 Tre

dega

r de

cide

d th

at

we

mu

st h

ave

re

ach

ed t

he

Equ

ato

r, a

nd

tha

t w

e m

ust

ha

ve t

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Assessment Task 2 • FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What is the imaginary world in the story?

2 Draw lines to match the places the children imagined they sailed to with the real-world object.

Italy sheep

Egypt flower urn

Arctic palm tree

3 How does the author remind you that the ship is made of trees and bushes?

4 Were the children invited into the garden at the start of the story? Explain your answer.

5 How do you think Mrs Tredegar feels about having the children in her garden? What happens in the story to make you think this?

6 Number the following sentences 1 to 5 in the order that they happen in the story.

The children pretended the sheep were polar bears.

They had tea and cake.

They got permission from their aunt.

They swept the decks.

They climbed the masts.

7 At the end of the extract, Mrs Tredegar decides that they must have crossed the Equator. What do you think might happen next?

8 On a separate piece of paper, write what happens in no more than five lines, summarising the main ideas from the paragraphs.

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Assessment Task 3FICTION

Teacher notes: The Little Ghost

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– using dictionaries to check the meaning of words that they have read

– discussing words and phrases that capture the reader’s interest and imagination

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– identifying how language, structure and presentation contribute to meaning

l participate in discussion about both books that are read to them and those they can read for themselves, taking turns and listening to what others say.

Running the task

l Explain to the class that this extract is from the beginning of the book The Little Ghost and is setting the scene about the main character – the little ghost.

l Distribute copies of the text and ask the children to read it to themselves. Ask them to identify any words that are unfamiliar or words that they do not know as they read the text. Explain how to pronounce “Eulenstein” and “Eulenberg”, and explain that these are place names.

l Now read the text as a class, stopping at any unfamiliar words that the children have identified, e.g. “awakened”, “legal” and “remote”. Be careful not to explain the words used in the task: “harmless” and “provoked”. However, the children could use a

dictionary to explore these for themselves before they begin the questions.

l Ask the children to complete the questions about the text.

l Support children who are working towards the expected standard and help those who may need extra support with writing.

l Read question 8 and then read the next paragraph of the book (see question 8 ‘What to expect’). Encourage the children to give a personal viewpoint on how this would make a ghost’s life easier. Encourage them to image the sort of things the ghost might be able to do with his bunch of keys.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding

of character, events and information 2bl provide developed explanations for key information and events and for characters’ actions

and motivations 2bl explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2dl identify/explain how the choice of language enhances the meaning of texts. 2g

The Little GhostOtfried Preussler

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Assessment Task 3 • FICTION

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What to expect

1 Find and copy one word from the first paragraph that tells us the ghost was not dangerous.

Most children working at the expected standard should be able to identify the word “harmless”. Children working towards the expected standard may answer with the phrase “never hurt anyone”. Remind the children to give one word as their answer.

(2a)

2 The author explains in the first paragraph that this type of ghost would “never hurt anyone unless they are provoked”. Which of the words below could the author have used instead of the word “provoked”? Tick all that apply.

This is a challenging question but children working at the expected standard should be able to identify at least one synonym of “provoked”. Children working towards the expected standard may need further support to attempt this question.

(2a)

3 Explain two things that would happen when the clock struck twelve.

Most children should be able to select two things that happened. Explain to children that they should have put each answer on a separate line but they would still gain both marks if they have written two acceptable points on one line.

(2b)

4 Using the information in the text, tick one box in each row to show whether each sentence is true or false.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to answer this question correctly. Those working towards the expected standard may answer the last three sentences incorrectly, thereby demonstrating a lack of understanding of the text.

(2b)

5 Why did the little ghost sneeze when he climbed out of the chest?

Most children should be able to answer this question correctly.

(2b)

6 In the final paragraph, what is the little ghost likened to? Explain why this is a good simile.

Most children working at the expected standard should be able to explain this simile in their own words. Children working towards the expected standard may simply state “because the ghost looked like mist”, without explaining the features of a ghost or mist and how they are the same.

(2g)

7 In the final paragraph, what does the text explain that the little ghost actually needed the bunch of keys for?

Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to answer this question clearly. Those working at the expected standard may need further guidance to formulate a clear answer to demonstrate their understanding.

(2d)

8 Listen to your teacher read the next section of the story and discuss how this would make the little ghost’s life easier. What other things might he be able to do with his keys?

Read the children the next section of the story:

However, that was not the only reason why the little ghost always carried the bunch of keys. All he had to do was to wave them in the air, and every door and gate would open. Locked or bolted, latched or left ajar, they all opened of their own accord … One wave of the bunch of keys, and they would open; a second wave, and they closed again.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to discuss how the little ghost could move around the castle, even through locked doors, and should be able to suggest some ideas of what else he might be able to do. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will be able to suggest more imaginative and fantastical ideas. Children working towards the expected standard may offer a simple suggestion without clear understanding of the possibilities available to the little ghost.

(2d)

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Assessment Task 3 • FICTION

From The Little Ghost by Otfried PreusslerThe little ghost had lived in Eulenstein Castle for hundreds of years. He was one of those harmless little ghosts who haunt places by night, and never hurt anyone else unless they are provoked.

During the day, he slept up in the attic in a heavy, iron-bound oak chest. The chest was well hidden behind one of the big chimneys. No one knew it really belonged to a ghost.

But at night, when the Town Hall clock struck twelve in the town of Eulenberg at the foot of the castle, the little ghost awakened. On the very last stroke of twelve, he would open his eyes, stretch and yawn. Then he would put his hand under the old letters and legal documents he used for a pillow, and bring out a bunch of keys. There were thirteen keys; the little ghost always carried them around. He would wave them at the lid of the chest, and immediately the lid would begin to open of its own accord.

Now the little ghost could climb out of the chest. He always bumped into the cobwebs; no human being had visited this remote attic for years, so it was covered with cobwebs and was dreadfully dusty. Even the cobwebs were full of dust. Showers of dust came tumbling down, if anything touched them.

“A-tishoo!”

Every night, as the little ghost climbed out of the chest, he would bump into the cobwebs, get some dust up his nose, and sneeze. He would shake himself once or twice, to make sure he was really awake. Then he would float out from behind the chimney and begin his nightly haunting.

Like all ghosts, he weighed nothing at all. He was light and airy as a wisp of mist. Luckily he never stirred without his bunch of thirteen keys, or the least breath of wind might have blown him away to goodness knows where.

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Assessment Task 3 • FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 Find and copy one word from the first paragraph that tells us the ghost was not dangerous.

2 The author explains in the first paragraph that this type of ghost would “never hurt anyone unless they are provoked”. Which of the words below could the author have used instead of the word “provoked”. Tick all that apply.

angered irritated sleepy annoyed happy

3 Explain two things that would happen when the clock struck twelve.

(a)

(b)

4 Using the information in the text, tick one box in each row to show whether each sentence is true or false.

True False

The little ghost used old papers for his pillow.

The little ghost carried three keys.

The little ghost didn’t need to put the key in the lock to open the chest.

The little ghost struggled to push open the chest.

People came into the attic to see the little ghost.

5 Why did the little ghost sneeze when he climbed out of the chest?

6 In the final paragraph, what is the little ghost likened to? Explain why this is a good simile.

7 In the final paragraph, what does the text explain that the little ghost actually needed the bunch of keys for?

8 Listen to your teacher read the next section of the story and discuss how this would make the little ghost’s life easier. What other things might he be able to do with his keys?

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Assessment Task 4FICTION

Teacher notes: Cliffhanger

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– asking questions to improve their understanding

of a text

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– identifying main ideas drawn from more than one paragraph and summarising these

– identifying how language, structure and presentation contribute to meaning

l participate in discussion about both books that are read to them and those they can read for themselves, taking turns and listening to what others say.

Running the task

l Explain that this extract comes from a story set on an adventure holiday.

l Read the extract together and ask the children to give an oral response before running the task.– Take each character at a time. Ask the children

who the characters are and what they are doing. If necessary, explain that Tim, Biscuits, Giles and Kelly are children on an adventure holiday, and Jake and Sally are the instructors.

– Ask them to say what they think the dilemma is in this part of the story.

l Give out the task sheet and read through the questions together. Check the children understand what they are being asked to do, i.e. answer the questions and then write a paragraph about what they would do if they were in this situation.

l Help children who may need support in writing or decoding, as suggested in the introduction to this book.

l Circulate while the children perform the task, and discuss their opinions with them. Support those who need it and challenge those who are working at greater depth within the expected standard.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l accurately and selectively summarise main ideas, events, characters and information in fiction and non-fiction texts 2c

l make developed inferences drawing on evidence from the text 2dl explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2dl identify/explain how the choice of language enhances the meaning of texts. 2g

CliffhangerJacqueline Wilson

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Assessment Task 4 • FICTION

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What to expect

1 What activity are the children doing? Which words in the text tell you this?

Children working towards the expected standard are likely to identify the word “canoe”. Most other children may refer to “the winning post” and “finish the race first” as telling them it is a canoe race.

(2c)

2 Why didn’t Jake dive in to find Theresa? Why did Jake and Sally say “Phew!”?

Most children will identify that Theresa was a doll. Some children working at greater depth within the expected standard may also suggest that Jake didn’t dive in because he realised it wasn’t a child and a doll can’t drown. They will suggest that Jake and Sally were relieved.

(2d)

3 Why do Tim and Biscuits want to rescue Theresa straightaway? Tick true or false for each of the following reasons.

Most children should be able to answer correctly. Children working towards the expected standard may incorrectly answer the first two options, thereby demonstrating a lack of understanding that a doll cannot drown but can still get lost.

(2c)

4 What sort of personality does Giles have? Find as many words and phrases from the text as you can to support your answer and write them below.

Children working towards the expected standard will use words from their own knowledge to describe Giles, such as “mean” or “bad-tempered”, and will give an example from the text to show this, e.g. “he calls Tim and Biscuits nasty names”. Other children may also say he wanted to win the race and didn’t care about the others. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may suggest he was a bully and quote Tim saying “He’s going to get us later”.

(2g)

5 What does Tim think Giles will do later? How do you think Tim feels about Giles?

Children working towards the expected standard will identify Tim’s words, “He’s going to get us later”, with no explanation of meaning. Children working at the expected standard will explain that Tim thinks Giles will be angry or bully him. These children are likely to give a personal response to how Tim feels about Giles, e.g. “he’s frightened of him” or they may use textual clues to infer Tim’s feelings, e.g. “Tim thinks Giles is a bully but he still doesn’t do what he wants on the river, so Tim doesn’t give in to the bullying”.

(2d)

6 Think about what you would do if you were Tim or Biscuits. On a separate piece of paper, write a paragraph to say what you think Tim and Biscuits should have done and give reasons for your answer. Try to include evidence from the text to support your reasons.

Children working towards the expected standard may give their opinion and support it with evidence based on one factor, such as how Kelly felt and how they wanted to help her, or that they would have lost the race so shouldn’t have stopped. Other children will expand their answer with more than one reason, suggesting that they should not let the team down; that winning was more important than a doll; or that friendship was more important than winning.

(2d)

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Assessment Task 4 • FICTION

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said

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Assessment Task 4 • FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What activity are the children doing? Which words in the text tell you this?

2 Why didn’t Jake dive in to find Theresa? Why did Jake and Sally say “Phew!”?

3 Why do Tim and Biscuits want to rescue Theresa straightaway? Tick true or false for each of the following reasons.

True False

so she doesn’t get lost

so she doesn’t drown

so she doesn’t get eaten by a fish

because Kelly was upset

4 What sort of personality does Giles have? Find as many words and phrases from the text as you can to support your answer and write them below.

5 What does Tim think Giles will do later? How do you think Tim feels about Giles?

6 Think about what you would do if you were Tim or Biscuits. On a separate piece of paper, write a paragraph to say what you think Tim and Biscuits should have done and give reasons for your answer. Try to include evidence from the text to support your reasons.

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Assessment Task 5NON-FICTION

Teacher notes: Homesick Bugsy the Beagle

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– discussing words and phrases that capture the reader’s interest and imagination

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:

– checking that the text makes sense to them, discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– predicting what might happen from details stated and implied

– identifying main ideas drawn from more than one paragraph and summarising these

l retrieve and record information from non-fiction.

Running the task

l Display the text and ask the children to look at the layout. Ask them to say what type of text this is. Do they think it is fiction or non-fiction, and why? Read it together. Check the children are familiar with the vocabulary and ask them to summarise the content of the newspaper article. Make a note of individual responses.

l Explain, if needed, that the article is a recount of events that have already happened. Remind the children of the main questions that are answered in a recount text: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? Ask the children to find the names of those involved in the event, when and where it took place, and why.

l Invite the children to say how newspaper and magazine articles often include opinion as well as facts and quotations from the people involved. Ensure the children are familiar with the way direct and indirect quotations are written.

l Ask the children in what tense the passage is mostly written, and why it uses this tense. Ask the children to underline the present tense verbs in one colour and explain why the writer uses them.

l Circulate as the children perform the task and discuss their opinions with them.

l As a plenary, ask the children to verbally summarise the story, encouraging them to try to remember all the key facts.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al accurately and selectively summarise main ideas, events, characters and information in fiction

and non-fiction texts 2cl make developed inferences drawing on evidence from the text 2dl explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2dl make developed predictions that are securely rooted in the text 2el identify/explain how information in non-fiction is related and contributes to meaning as a whole. 2f

Homesick Bugsy the Beagle

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

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Assessment Task 5 • NON-FICTION

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What to expect

1 Find and copy one word from the beginning of the article that tells us that, in the day time, Bugsy disappeared.

Most children should be able to identify the word “vanished”. Children working towards the expected standard may need reminding to provide only one word.

(2a)

2 Why did Bugsy take the bus to Sheffield? Tick the most suitable answer.

Children working at the expected standard will be able to identify the rationale behind Bugsy’s travels. Those working towards the expected standard may select an alternative option and will need to be reminded to reread the article.

(2f)

3 Order the following events from 1 to 5 in the order that they happened.

Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will be able to sequence these events correctly. Children working at the expected standard may muddle some of the sequence and will need to be reminded to read the beginning of the article slowly and carefully. Those working towards the expected standard will find this question challenging.

(2c)

4 Why might Mrs Jones have followed Bugsy?

Children working at the expected standard may suggest that she was curious. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may speculate that Mrs Jones was worried because Bugsy kept disappearing and/or because he had been acting strangely and she thought he missed his old home.

(2d)

5 Explain why Bugsy was described as “enterprising”.

This is a challenging question for children to explain clearly while demonstrating an understanding of the word “enterprising”. Those working at the expected standard should be able to explain that he did something unusual for a dog, or did something special. Those working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to explain using an example from the text.

(2a)

6 Draw lines to match the character from the article with what we know about them.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to link the character with the statements, sometimes completing it by a process of elimination. Those working towards the expected standard will need reminding to use the text as a basis for their choices.

(2c)

7 How do you think Mr and Mrs Jones will stop Bugsy from travelling on the bus?

This question has the potential for a wide range of responses. All children should be able to suggest a way that Mr and Mrs Jones could stop Bugsy. Those working at greater depth within the expected standard will suggest more appropriate or creative solutions for the problem.

(2e)

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Assessment Task 5 • NON-FICTION

Homesick Bugsy the Beagle

Homesick Bugsy the Beagle Takes the BusOwners Jack and Carol Jones were worried when their family pet, Bugsy the beagle, disappeared from their home every day at the same time and then returned, at the same time every day.

‘It’s as if he was going out to work!’ said Mrs Jones, 42. ‘He jumped over the garden wall and vanished every morning at 8.30 but he always came back at 6 p.m.’

Mrs and Mrs Jones, with Bugsy, had moved from Sheffield to Doncaster last month. Mrs Jones explained that it was clear that Bugsy missed his old home.

‘For a couple of days he just moped about and was off his food,’ said Mrs Jones. ‘Then he started his disappearing act.’

JOINING THE COMMUTE

The mystery was solved when Mrs Jones decided to follow Bugsy last week.

She was amazed to see him joining a queue at a nearby bus stop. People at the stop appeared to be talking to him and patting him. When the bus arrived, Bugsy hopped on with the other passengers. That evening, Mrs Jones watched again as the evening

bus pulled up, the doors opened and off jumped Bugsy.

Mrs Jones discovered that the enterprising animal caught the bus to his old home in Sheffield, spent the day in the area where he used to live and then came home again later. Regular commuters on the bus route became used to seeing the solo beagle and enjoyed his company.

A spokesman from Yorks Buses told us that, although this was an irregularity, there was nothing in their rule book to state that unaccompanied beagles cannot travel. However, travelling without paying a fare is against the rules. On a more serious note, they also stated that a loose dog alone on a bus might pose a danger to other travellers and the driver.

Mr and Mrs Jones apologised to the bus company and promised that Bugsy’s travelling days are over.

5 July The DONCASTER ADVERTISER

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Assessment Task 5 • NON-FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 Find and copy one word from the beginning of the article that tells us that, in the day time, Bugsy disappeared.

2 Why did Bugsy take the bus to Sheffield? Tick the most suitable answer.

He enjoyed being patted by the people. He was homesick.

He liked going to visit different places. He wanted to go to work.

3 Order the following events from 1 to 5 in the order that they happened.

Bugsy was being patted by the people waiting for the bus.

Bugsy stopped eating his food.

Bugsy disappeared every morning at 8:30.

Mr and Mrs Jones moved to Doncaster.

Mrs Jones followed Bugsy.

4 Why might Mrs Jones have followed Bugsy?

5 Explain why Bugsy was described as “enterprising”.

6 Draw lines to match the character from the article with what we know about them.

Mrs Jones enjoyed Bugsy’s company.

The commuters on the bus didn’t pay the bus fare.

The bus company discovered Bugsy caught the bus.

Bugsy talked to Bugsy.

The people at the bus stop thought Bugsy might be dangerous.

7 How do you think Mr and Mrs Jones will stop Bugsy from travelling on the bus?

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Assessment Task 6NON-FICTION

Teacher notes: Rocket Balloon

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– asking questions to improve their understanding of a text

– predicting what might happen from details stated and implied

l retrieve and record information from non-fiction.

Running the task

l Display the text and ask the children to read it together in pairs. Ask them what type of text this is and to explain how they know.

l Discuss the features of instructional writing.

l Discuss the purpose of the pictures and whether the children think it would be as easy to follow without them.

l Give the children the task sheet and ask them to complete the questions independently.

l Circulate as the children complete the task and support them as necessary.

l If there is time, you could ask groups to follow the instructions and make the rocket balloon. Ask them to assess if the instructions were easy to follow and whether they would suggest any changes or alterations.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding

of character, events and information 2bl accurately and selectively summarise main ideas, events, characters and information in fiction

and non-fiction texts 2cl make developed predictions that are securely rooted in the text 2el make accurate and appropriate comparisons within texts. 2h

Rocket Balloon

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Assessment Task 6 • NON-FICTION

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What to expect

1 What items do you need to make a rocket balloon? Tick all that apply.

This question should be answered correctly by most children.

(2b)

2 Look at steps 1 to 5. Find and copy one word that tells us that we need to blow up the balloon.

Most children working at the expected standard should be able to locate the correct word to answer this question.

(2a)

3 Number these instructions 1 to 5 in the order they occur in the text.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to sequence these events correctly using the text. Those working towards the expected standard may confuse steps 3 and 4.

(2c)

4 Once you have followed instructions 1 to 5 what happens to the balloon when you let it go?

This is a straightforward question that all children should be able to answer.

(2b)

5 Tick the picture that shows the correct movement of the balloon and air.

Most children should be able to answer this correctly using the text.

(2b)

6 What phrase from the text is used to describe the movement of an object when a force is working in the opposite direction?

This phrase is more challenging to locate and the children need to understand the text to be able to find it. Children working at the expected standard should be able to answer this correctly.

(2a)

7 Why is there a section about rockets in these instructions?

Children working towards the expected standard might answer simply “you might want to make a rocket” or “the balloon is called a rocket” without understanding the comparison between a rocket and the balloon experiment. Most children working at the expected standard should be able to formulate a simple answer to this question. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may offer a more detailed explanation of the comparison.

(2h)

8 What do you think would happen if you used a bigger balloon for this experiment? Explain your answer using evidence from the text.

This question should be answered clearly by those children working at greater depth within the expected standard. Children working at the expected standard may offer a simple answer without explaining the link between the balloon and a rocket. Children working towards the expected standard may be unable to justify their answer using the text.

(2e)

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Assessment Task 6 • NON-FICTION

Rocket BalloonMake a balloon that flies

like a rocket

You will need:• piece of string

(about 2 to 3 metres long)• balloon• 2 chairs• drinking straw• tape• scissors 1 Tie one end of the string to

the back of the chair.

3 Attach the pieces of tape to the straw as shown.

4 Inflate the balloon, hold the opening and attach it to the straw with the tape.

5 Pull the balloon to one end of the string and let go. What happens?

Action and reaction

To make something move one way, a force has to work in the opposite direction – this is known as “action and reaction”. The air inside the inflated balloon is pushing in all directions. When you let go of the balloon, air rushes out the hole, creating a pushing force in the opposite direction. This makes the balloon move.

Rockets

Real rockets work in a similar way to your rocket balloon. A rocket engine works by exploding fuel inside a chamber that is open at the bottom. The force of the exploding fuel coming out of the rocket creates an opposite force that pushes the rocket up and on into space.

The balloon starts to move as soon as you let go.

Air is forced out of the balloon in one

direction.The balloon moves in the

opposite direction to the airflow.

2 Thread the straw onto the string and tie the other end of the string to the other chair.

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Assessment Task 6 • NON-FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What items do you need to make a rocket balloon? Tick all that apply.

a stool a straw a piece of string a rocket a balloon

2 Look at steps 1 to 5. Find and copy one word that tells us that we need to blow up the balloon.

3 Number these instructions 1 to 5 in the order they occur in the text.

Let go of the balloon. Tie the string onto a chair.

Collect all the equipment that you need. The balloon starts to move.

Blow up the balloon.

4 Once you have followed instructions 1 to 5, what happens to the balloon when you let it go?

5 Tick the picture that shows the correct movement of the balloon and air.

6 What phrase from the text is used to describe the movement of an object when a force is working in the opposite direction?

7 Why is there a section about rockets in these instructions?

8 What do you think would happen if you used a bigger balloon for this experiment? Explain your answer using evidence from the text.

Balloon

Air Air Air Air

Balloon BalloonBalloon

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Assessment Task 7NON-FICTION

Teacher notes: Mummies

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– reading books that are structured in different ways and reading for a range of purposes

l retrieve and record information from non-fiction

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– identifying main ideas drawn from more than one paragraph and summarising these.

Running the task

l Display the text and read the title. Ask the children to say what type of text they think this will be. Do they think it is fiction or non-fiction, and why?

l Read it together and check the children are familiar with the vocabulary. Ask the children to find the glossary and explain why they think a glossary is needed in this type of text. Make notes of their oral responses.

l Look together through the text and ask the children to identify the features of explanation texts, e.g. an introduction to the topic, cause and effect vocabulary, temporal connectives, present tense verbs, sub-headings, paragraphs and technical terms. Make notes of their oral responses.

l Provide the children with the task sheet and a copy of the flow chart resource sheet available from the CD ROM and online. Ask them to collaborate to choose sentences, phrases and key words to show the process as a flow chart. Explain that there are six stages on the flow chart so they should mark up six stages in the text before they begin. Ensure that everyone is familiar with the idea of a flow chart and how it works.

l Help children who may need support in writing and decoding, as suggested in the introduction to this book.

l Circulate as the children perform the task and discuss their opinions with them. Support those who need it and challenge those who are working at greater depth within the expected standard.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding

of character, events and information 2bl provide developed explanations for key information and events and for characters’ actions

and motivations 2bl accurately and selectively summarise main ideas, events, characters and information in fiction

and non-fiction texts 2cl identify/explain how information in non-fiction is related and contributes to meaning as a whole. 2f

Mummies

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What to expect

1 What is mummification?

Some children may answer that it is about embalming and wrapping a body, which is the explanation closest to the term “mummification”. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may link it to the general definition at the start of the piece and say that it is about preserving dead bodies to make them look lifelike.

(2a)

2 What is the purpose of the first paragraph?

Most children should recognise that the first paragraph is an introduction to mummification. Children working at the expected standard will go further, e.g. saying that it tells us when it happened and gives a short description of what it is. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard may see that it introduces the two stages and so helps to organise the detailed description that follows for the reader.

(2f)

3 Why did the author use the two sub-headings “Embalming” and “Wrapping the mummy”?

Most children should see that the sub-headings describe the content under each one. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will also link them back to the two stages described in the introduction.

(2f)

4 What was wrapped inside the layers of bandages around the mummy? Tick all that apply.

All children should identify that amulets were wrapped into the bandages. Most children should also add the scroll of the Book of the Dead and possibly the cloth painted with the god Osiris.

(2b)

5 You need a blank flow chart. Your teacher will give you this.

Choose key words and phrases from the text.

Use them to fill in the six-step flow chart to show the mummification process.

Children may make different choices about how they break up the six stages. A sample is shown in the answers at the back of this book, but be prepared to discuss other ways of organising the information to discover the understanding behind the children’s rationales. Some children will find it harder to distil the information into key points and will often quote directly from the text. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should mostly select relevant points for their boxes and leave out much of the detail.

(2b/

2c)

6 Read the facts below and draw a line to link each fact to the section in which you would expect to find this sentence.

All children should be able to link the glossary term in the options. Children working towards the expected standard may struggle to correctly link the other options. Children working at the expected standard should be able to correctly link the facts with the appropriate sub-heading, possibly using a process of elimination to help them.

(2c)

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Glossaryamulet small charms to ward off evil spellsembalming treating a dead body in order to preserve itnatron a natural saltpapyrus paper made from reedssarcophagus a large stone coffin, usually carved and decoratedunderworld the Egyptians believed that, when they died, they went to the underworld

where they would be judged. If they were judged to be pure and good, they would go to a place that was like Egypt, and live there forever.

MummiesMummiesLong ago, the Ancient Egyptians invented a way of preserving dead bodies that enables them to remain lifelike.

This included two stages: first embalming and then wrapping and burying the body in a tomb. The process is called mummification.

EmbalmingFirst the body is taken to a special place for purification. There the embalmers wash the body with palm wine and rinse it with water from the River Nile. Then one of the embalmers makes a cut on the left side of the body and removes most of the internal organs. These are packed in natron which makes them dry out. The body is then covered and stuffed with natron to dry it out.

After around 40 days, the body is washed once more with water from the Nile. Then it is covered with oils to help the skin stay flexible. The internal organs are wrapped in linen and put back inside the body. The body is then stuffed with dry materials so that it looks lifelike. Finally, it is rubbed in scented oils and is ready to be wrapped.

Wrapping the mummyThe body is wrapped in fine linen. A papyrus scroll with spells from the Book of the Dead is placed between the wrapped hands. More linen strips are placed around the body and resin is painted on them to help them stick together. The embalmers place small amulets between the layers of linen to protect the mummy on its journey to the underworld. A cloth, painted with a picture of the god Osiris, is then wrapped around the whole body. Finally, a large cloth is used to enclose the whole mummy and tied with strips of cloth.

Before the body is put into the coffin, a board is placed on top of it. It is then lowered into a first coffin. This is then put inside a second coffin.

Finally, the body and its coffins are placed inside a large stone sarcophagus in the tomb.

Now the body is ready for its journey through the underworld. If he is judged to be good, he will be sent to live for all eternity in the beautiful “Field of Reeds”.

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Assessment Task 7 • NON-FICTION

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What is mummification?

2 What is the purpose of the first paragraph?

3 Why did the author use the two sub-headings “Embalming” and “Wrapping the mummy”?

4 What was wrapped inside the layers of bandages around the mummy? Tick all that apply.

Amulets

Palm wine

A scroll from the Book of the Dead

Cloth painted with a picture of the god Osiris

Large stones

5 You need a blank flow chart. Your teacher will give you this.

Choose key words and phrases from the text.

Use them to fill in the six-step flow chart to show the mummification process.

6 Read the facts below and draw a line to link each fact to the section in which you would expect to find this sentence.

The Ancient Egyptians believed that mummification helped people reach the afterlife.

Mummies

Purification is when things are made clean. Embalming

All the rags used by the embalmers are kept and are buried with the mummy.

Wrapping the mummy

Bandaging a mummy took between 1 and 2 weeks. Glossary

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Assessment Task 8POETRY

Teacher notes: A Dream of Elephants

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– preparing poems and play scripts to read aloud and to perform, showing understanding through intonation, tone, volume and action

– discussing words and phrases that capture the reader’s interest and imagination

– recognising some different forms of poetry [for example, free verse, narrative poetry]

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– drawing inferences such as inferring characters’ feelings, thoughts and motives from their actions, and justifying inferences with evidence

– identifying how language, structure and presentation contribute to meaning.

Running the task

l Distribute copies of the poem and ask the class to read this in pairs.

l Ask the class what type of poetry this is and discuss the features (rhyming alternate lines).

l Discuss with the class the first and the last verse being the same. Ask why they think the author has done this.

l Discuss the features of an elephant: what they look like; how big they are; how they move. Ask the class to think about these features as they read the poem

again and see if they can spot their inclusion in the poem.

l Ask the class to complete the task sheet. Remind the children to provide only one word for both questions 3 and 4.

l After the children have finished the task, ask them to discuss what alternative title they could suggest for the poem. They could also learn one of the verses and then perform this to the class using expression.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding

of character, events and information 2bl provide developed explanations for key information and events and for characters’ actions

and motivations 2bl make developed inferences drawing on evidence from the text 2dl explain and justify inferences, providing evidence from the text to support reasoning 2dl identify/explain how the choice of language enhances the meaning of texts. 2g

A Dream of ElephantsTony Mitton

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Assessment Task 8 • POETRY

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What to expect

1 What do we know about the writer’s dream from the first verse? Tick all that apply.

Most children should be able to select the three correct statements.

(2b)

2 Write two things that verse 2 tells us about the weather in the poem.

Most children should be able to identify two aspects of the weather.

(2b)

3 Find and copy one word from verse 2 that tells us the elephants were serious.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to select the correct word from the text.

(2a)

4 Find and copy one other word from verse 3 that is also used to describe the elephant’s character.

This is more challenging than question 3 and there may be a variety of different responses. Children should be encouraged to think about the elephants’ character and how they feel.

(2a)

5 How do you think the writer felt watching the elephants? Explain how you know, using evidence from the text.

Children working at the expected standard should be able to select the reference to “amazed” from the poem. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to explain this feeling using their own words.

(2d)

6 What do you think the writer means by the line “They merged into the heat and dust”?

Children working towards the expected standard may simply state “they were in the dust”. Those working at the expected standard will be able to explain clearly that they disappeared out of sight. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard will be able to explain that the heat and the dust obscured the view of the elephants once they were in the distance, so they were out of sight.

(2g)

7 Using information from the poem, tick one box in each row to show whether each statement is true or false.

Children working towards the expected standard may incorrectly suggest that the author dreamed of elephants because he likes them, without basing their view on what they know from the poem. Children working at the expected standard should answer these statements correctly but a few of these children may find the third statement difficult to explain from the text.

(2b)

8 What did the elephants think of the writer in the poem? Explain how you know.

Most children will be able to explain that the elephants paid no attention to the writer’s presence and ignored him. Children working at the expected standard should be able to explain they know this from the fact that the elephants just walked past the writer.

(2d)

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Assessment Task 8 • POETRY

A Dream of Elephants by Tony Mitton

I dreamed a dream of elephants.

I cannot tell you why.

But in my dream I saw the herd

go slowly walking by.

They moved beneath a blazing sun,

through rising dust and heat.

They made their solemn journey

on strong and silent feet.

And as I watched, the steady herd

walked slowly, sadly by,

until I stood, amazed, alone,

beneath a silent sky.

I watched them as they moved

away.

I watched as they walked on.

They merged into the heat and dust

till all of them were gone.

I dreamed a dream of elephants.

I cannot tell you why.

But in my dream I saw the herd

go slowly walking by.

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Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What do we know about the writer’s dream from the first verse? Tick all that apply.

He dreamed of elephants. The elephants were in a large group.

There were baby elephants in the group. They walked slowly.

2 Write two things that verse 2 tells us about the weather in the poem.

(a)

(b)

3 Find and copy one word from verse 2 that tells us the elephants were serious.

4 Find and copy one other word from verse 3 that is also used to describe the elephants’ character?

5 How do you think the writer felt watching the elephants? Explain how you know, using evidence from the text.

6 What do you think the writer means by the line “They merged into the heat and dust”?

7 Using information from the poem, tick one box in each row to show whether each statement is true or false.

True False

The author dreamed of elephants because he likes them.

The elephants’ feet were quiet.

The herd kept walking without stopping.

The author was scared by the elephants.

8 What did the elephants think of the writer in the poem? Explain how you know.

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Assessment Task 9POETRY

Teacher notes: Daddy Fell into the Pond

Curriculum references: Years 3–4

Programme of study: Reading comprehension

Children should be taught to:

l develop positive attitudes to reading and understanding of what they read by:– listening to and discussing a wide range of fiction,

poetry, plays, non-fiction and reference books or textbooks

– preparing poems and playscripts to read aloud and to perform, showing understanding through intonation, tone, volume and action

– discussing words and phrases that capture the reader’s interest and imagination

– recognising some different forms of poetry [for example, free verse, narrative poetry]

l understand what they read, in books they can read independently, by:– checking that the text makes sense to them,

discussing their understanding and explaining the meaning of words in context

– asking questions to improve their understanding of a text

– predicting what might happen from details stated and implied

– identifying how language, structure and presentation contribute to meaning.

Running the task

l Read the poem to the class with expression and ask the class for their views on the poem.

l Ask them now to read it together in pairs and think about what type of poetry this is. Discuss the narrative aspect of this poem and the rhyming words.

l Read the task’s questions to the children. If the children are struggling with question 1, ask them why they think the poet talks about the people and the sky on the same line. (This could alternatively be

done in a plenary where the children could improve their answer).

l Remind them to tick every statement that applies in question 5 and, in question 6, to tick only one column for each statement.

l Now ask them to complete the task sheet questions.

l When the children have finished, ask groups to learn a verse each and perform it to the rest of the class using expression and intonation.

Assessment guidance

Use the list below to identify the content domains that the children are working on in this task.

Typically, children working at the expected standard will:

l show an understanding of the meaning of vocabulary in context 2al retrieve key details and quotations from fiction and non-fiction to demonstrate understanding

of character, events and information 2bl make developed predictions that are securely rooted in the text 2el identify/explain how the choice of language enhances the meaning of texts 2gl make accurate and appropriate comparisons within texts. 2h

Daddy Fell into the PondAlfred Noyes

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What to expect

1 What is the poet trying to do with the two short sentences on the first line of the poem?

This is a very challenging question. Some children may answer “to make it interesting” without understanding the poet’s intent. Children working at the expected standard are likely to answer “to make it sound boring and dull”. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should be able to understand that the poet is setting the scene by linking the mood of the people and the grey colour of the sky.

(2g)

2 In the third line of the poem, what word with the same meaning could have been used instead of “dismal”?

Children working at the expected standard should be able to find a suitable synonym. Children working towards the expected standard may incorrectly offer a word that describes a day rather than a feeling e.g. ‘grey’, ‘rainy’.

(2a)

3 What sort of day do you think that the narrator has had, from the details in verse 1? Explain using evidence from the text.

Most children should be able to correctly identify that they have had a boring day. Children working at the expected standard should be able to quote some evidence from the text to demonstrate this.

(2e)

4 How does the mood of the characters change between verse 1 and verse 2? Why does this happen?

Children working at the expected standard should be able to answer this question clearly. Children working at greater depth within the expected standard should offer more evidence from the text.

(2h)

5 What does Timothy do in verse 2? Tick all that apply.

Most children should be able to answer this question. Some children working towards the expected standard may answer “He laughs at Dad”, which is not textually accurate.

(2b)

6 Tick true or false to the following statements from verse 3 of the poem.

This should be a straightforward question for the children to answer. Some children working towards the expected standard may not fully understand that the gardener “shaking silently” means laughing or that a “drake” is a male duck.

(2b)

7 What do you think Dad might say? What do you think might happen next?

This is a fairly open question for children to give their own views. Answers should be based on the text.

(2e)

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Daddy Fell into the Pond by Alfred NoyesEveryone grumbled. The sky was grey.We had nothing to do and nothing to say.We were nearing the end of a dismal day.And there seemed to be nothing beyond, Then Daddy fell into the pond!

And everyone’s face grew merry and bright,And Timothy danced for sheer delight.“Give me the camera, quick, oh quick!He’s crawling out of the duckweed!” Click!

Then the gardener suddenly slapped his kneeAnd doubled up, shaking silently,And the ducks all quacked as if they were daft,And it sounded as if the old drake laughed.Oh there wasn’t a thing that didn’t respond When Daddy fell into the pond!

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Assessment Task 9 • POETRY

Name: Class: Date:

Read the text, then answer the questions.

1 What is the poet trying to do with the two short sentences on the first line of the poem?

2 In the third line of the poem, what word with the same meaning could have been used instead of “dismal”?

3 What sort of day do you think that the narrator has had, from the details in verse 1? Explain using evidence from the text.

4 How does the mood of the characters change between verse 1 and verse 2? Why does this happen?

5 What does Timothy do in verse 2? Tick all that apply.

He takes a photograph. He laughs at Dad.

He crawls out of the duckweed. He dances around.

6 Tick true or false to the following statements from verse 3 of the poem.

True False

The gardener was laughing very hard.

Everyone and everything reacted in some way.

The old duck was silent and shocked.

The ducks made lots of noise.

7 What do you think Dad might say? What do you think might happen next?

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Fiction

Assessment Task 11 They thought the pudding was wonderful. Any two

of: “softer and lighter than air”; “waves on top like the ocean”; it tasted like “a whole raft of lemons” or “a night on the sea”.

2 They were told to leave the pudding alone because it was for their mother.

3 The children’s father. At the end, the narrator refers to “my father’s voice” and the person speaking is clearly the person who made the pudding.

4 The children “guarded” the pudding as an excuse for hanging round it hopefully. Their father had not asked them to guard it and there was no need to – they just couldn’t drag themselves away from the tempting sight.

5 Because the brother had tried it first. Children working at greater depth within the standard may recognise that was just an excuse because the narrator really wanted to try it and the brother said it tasted good.

6 Because the children had kept on scooping out bits to taste.

7 They felt frightened about what would happen, which is why they ran away and hid under their beds.

8 The father will probably be very angry. The reasons the children may give for inferring this include: the father gave them very strict instructions not to touch the pudding; the children ran off and hid under the bed, which implies they are afraid of their father’s reaction.

Assessment Task 21 A ship at sea.

2 Italy sheep

Egypt flower urn

Arctic palm tree

3 “Swabbing’ the deck turned out to be sweeping away the leaves”; “Bushes become icebergs”.

4 They were not invited because they were taken by surprise by Mrs Tredegar’s voice.

5 She enjoys their visits because she makes them tea, “trained” them as “crew”, gets an atlas, suggests the “ceremony of Crossing the Line” (Equator).

6 The children pretended the sheep were polar bears: 5 They had tea and cake: 2 They got permission from their aunt: 3 They swept the decks: 1 They climbed the masts: 4

7 They might have a ceremony or celebration/party/more cake and tea.

8 Answers will vary.

Assessment Task 31 “harmless”

2 angered; irritated; annoyed

3 Any two of: the ghost woke up/he would open his eyes/stretch/yawn/take his keys/open the chest/get out of the chest.

4 The little ghost used old papers for his pillow: T The little ghost carried three keys: F The little ghost didn’t need to put the key in the lock to open the chest: T The little ghost struggled to push open the chest: F People came into the attic to see the little ghost: F

5 The little ghost sneezed because the attic was very dusty/full of cobwebs.

6 The little ghost is likened to mist. This is good because a ghost is white and light like mist.

7 Without the keys he might have blown away.

8 Discussion question answers will vary

Assessment Task 41 A canoeing race: “canoe”, “winning post”, “finish the

race first”.

2 Giles told Jake that Theresa was only a doll. They said “Phew!” because they were relieved it wasn’t a child drowning.

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3

T F

so she doesn’t get lost ✓

so she doesn’t drown ✓

so she doesn’t get eaten by a fish ✓

because Kelly was upset ✓

4 Competitive; bad-tempered; bullying. Words from the text include “stupid”, “disgustedly”, “Finish the race first”, “You berks”, “yelled in disgust”, “You weedy nerdy little cissies”, “He’s going to get us later”.

5 Tim thinks Giles will bully them. The children should give a personal response to how Tim feels about Giles.

6 Answers will vary.

Non-fiction

Assessment Task 51 “vanished”

2 He was homesick.

3 Bugsy was being patted by the people waiting for the bus: 5 Bugsy stopped eating his food: 2 Bugsy disappeared every morning at 8:30: 3 Mr and Mrs Jones moved to Doncaster: 1 Mrs Jones followed Bugsy: 4

4 Curiosity; to find out what happened; she was worried.

5 It is unusual for a dog to take a bus on its own/he found his own solution to being homesick/he discovered how to go back to his old home.

6 Mrs Jones enjoyed Bugsy’s company.

The commuters didn’t pay the bus fare. on the bus

The bus discovered Bugsy company caught the bus.

Bugsy talked to Bugsy.

The people at thought Bugsy might the bus stop be dangerous.

7 By keeping an eye on him/keeping him on a lead/ taking him back to visit/building a higher wall.

Assessment Task 61 A straw; a piece of string; a balloon.

2 “inflate”

3 Let go of the balloon: 4 Collect all the equipment that you need 1 Blow up the balloon: 3

Tie the string onto a chair: 2 The balloon starts to move: 5

4 The balloon starts to move.

5 The second picture should be ticked.

6 “Action and reaction”.

7 Rockets work in a similar way to this rocket balloon.

8 The balloon might travel faster like a rocket shown in the text. Credit should be given to children who suggest that the movement will be different (e.g. slower) and that a rocket is a different size and travels at a different speed to the balloon.

Assessment Task 71 It is the process of preserving a dead body.

2 It introduces the topic and gives background information.

3 To break up the text; to signal the content of the new paragraph.

4 Amulets; a scroll from the Book of the Dead; cloth painted with a picture of the god Osiris.

5 Sample flow chart:

1 Embalmers wash the body in palm wine and water from the Nile.

2 Organs are removed and the organs and body are packed in natron to dry them out.

3 40 days later, the body is washed again and oiled. The organs are put back.

4 The body is wrapped in layers of linen with a papyrus scroll and amulets.

5 The body has a board put on top of it and is lowered into the first coffin, then into the second one.

6 Finally it is placed inside the stone sarcophagus in the tomb.

Balloon

Air

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6.

The Ancient Egyptians believed that mummification helped people reach the afterlife.

Mummies

Purification is when things are made clean.

Embalming

All the rags used by the embalmers are kept and are buried with the mummy.

Wrapping the mummy

Bandaging a mummy took between 1 and 2 weeks.

Glossary

Poetry

Assessment Task 81 He dreamed of elephants.

They walked slowly. The elephants were in a large group.

2 It was sunny/dusty/hot.

3 “solemn”

4 “sadly”

5 The writer felt “amazed”. The writer was in awe/found it incredible/wonderful to watch.

6 They disappeared out of sight into the dusty landscape.

7 The author dreamed of elephants because he likes them: F The elephants’ feet were quiet: T The herd kept walking without stopping: T The author was scared by the elephants: F

8 They ignored him/her. They just walked on/past.

Assessment Task 91 He is linking the people’s mood to the boring-coloured

sky.

2 Boring/dreary/drab/dull/gloomy/depressing or any other suitable synonyms.

3 A boring day. They have done nothing and the weather has been bad/dismal.

4 They are bored in the first verse, e.g. “nothing to do” and in the second verse they are laughing, e.g. “merry and bright”. This is because Dad falls into the pond.

5 He takes a photograph. He dances around.

6

T F

The gardener was laughing very hard. ✓

Everyone and everything reacted in some way.

The old duck was silent and shocked. ✓

The ducks made lots of noise. ✓

7 He might laugh with everyone else/He might be cross they are laughing at him/He might get out of the pond/He might splash water at everyone else/ He might go home to get dry.

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Key Stage 1 content domains

1a draw on knowledge of vocabulary to understand texts

1b identify/explain key aspects of fiction and non-fiction texts, such as characters, events, titles and information

1c identify and explain the sequence of events in texts

1d make inferences from the text

1e predict what might happen on the basis of what has been read so far

Key Stage 2 content domains

2a give/explain the meaning of words in context

2b retrieve and record information/identify key details from fiction and non-fiction

2c summarise main ideas from more than one paragraph

2d make inferences from the text/explain and justify inferences with evidence from the text

2e predict what might happen from details stated and implied

2f identify/explain how information/narrative content is related and contributes to meaning as a whole

2g identify/explain how meaning is enhanced through choice of words and phrases

2h make comparisons within the text

CONTENT DOMAINS

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CONTENT DOMAIN COVERAGE

Teach and Practice

Fiction

Unit 1 Unit 2 Unit 3 Unit 4 Unit 5 Unit 6 Unit 7 Unit 8 Unit 9

The

Child

ren

of G

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Kno

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(Tea

chin

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War

Boy

(Pra

ctic

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The

Dia

ry o

f a K

iller

Cat

(Tea

chin

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Har

riet’

s H

are

(Pra

ctic

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The

Scro

ll of

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tie L

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ure

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chin

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The

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Mac

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l and

Chi

ps (T

each

ing

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Oliv

er T

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t’s

Child

hood

(Pra

ctic

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Char

lott

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Web

(Tea

chin

g te

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Stua

rt L

ittle

(Pra

ctic

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t Cat

ch Y

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each

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Into

the

Dra

gons

’ Cav

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ract

ice

text

)

An E

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ian

Myt

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each

ing

text

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A Ko

rean

Myt

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ract

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text

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: Are

You

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each

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text

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You

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text

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? (P

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text

)

2a give/explain the meaning of words in context

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2b retrieve and record information/identify key details from fiction and non-fiction

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2c summarise main ideas from more than one paragraph

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2d make inferences from the text/explain and justify inferences with evidence from the tex

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2e predict what might happen from details stated and implied

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2f identify/explain how information/narrative content is related and contributes to meaning as a whole

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2g identify/explain how meaning is enhanced through choice of words and phrases

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓

2h make comparisons within the text

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Assessment Tasks

Non-fiction Poetry Fiction Non-fiction Poetry

Unit 10 Unit 11 Unit 12 Unit 13 Unit 14 Unit 15 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9

Wha

t Is

a Ro

bot?

(Tea

chin

g te

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Robo

ts in

Film

s an

d TV

Pro

gram

mes

(Pra

ctic

e te

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The

Batt

le o

f Brit

ain

(Tea

chin

g te

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Dun

kirk

(Pra

ctic

e te

xt)

Gre

y W

hale

(Tea

chin

g te

xt)

Arct

ic T

ern

(Pra

ctic

e te

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Child

hood

Tra

cks

(Tea

chin

g te

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Hot

Foo

d (P

ract

ice

text

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A Sm

all D

rago

n (T

each

ing

text

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The

Spiri

t of P

lace

(Pra

ctic

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The

Kitt

en a

t Pla

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each

ing

text

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Lett

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in th

e Li

ght (

Prac

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text

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The

Pudd

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Like

a N

ight

on

the

Sea

The

Gre

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hip

The

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host

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et B

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Dad

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✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2a

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✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2d

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2e

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2f

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2g

✓ ✓ ✓ ✓ 2h

CONTENT DOMAIN COVERAGE

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