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BOHEMIAN RHAPSODY: An ASL Translation of the Epic Song by Queenn
ASL Video produced by:
Joani Laginess
Amber Miles
Cheryl Monte
Ben Seiple
Directed and Edited by:
Brett Wheat
Video Assistants:
Julie Pulgini Alyse Paquin
Angela Keller Ted Pittman
A special thank-you to
Dan McDougall for
creative assistance.
Introduction: This video was produced as a project for Sign Language Studies class,
SLS4650: Contrastive Text Analysis class at Madonna University, Livonia, Michigan. Our group of
four students was paired with an intern from the Broadcast and Cinema Arts (BCA) program with the
objective of creating a music video with an ASL translation of a song. The video needed to
incorporate into its translation the features found in ASL poetry, story telling and other established
creative forms of signing. This is our story.....
The process: As a group, we had about 12 weeks to select a song, translate it into ASL, and video
tape a performance of the song. Once we chose our song, we looked at its composition. Bohemian
Rhapsody does not have a typical song structure (verses and chorus). However, it has 6 distinct
sections: intro, ballad, guitar solo, opera, hard rock and outro. It also has repetition of some lyrics.
We used all of these features to not only divide the work of creating a translation, but to connect the
various parts of the song. We researched the lyrics, the group Queen, and various opinions on the true
meaning of the song. Did it refer to a murder or a suicide? Is it a veiled personal story about AIDS or
drug use? One of the members of Queen described the song as “fairly self-explanatory with just a bit
of nonsense in the middle.” In the end, we developed OUR translation of the song...
Storyboard Translation: This epic song tells the story of a prisoner that is sentenced to death by
electric chair for murdering a man. The video opens paying homage to the original music video
produced by Queen in 1975 when music videos were in their infancy. The diamond formation with the
four members of our group mirrors the four members of Queen in the beginning of their video of
Bohemian Rhapsody. The second section is a ballad, where the story is told by the prisoner as he sits in
a prison cell. All members of our group play the part of the prisoner, showing that the story is universal
- it can apply to all people. The prisoner is writing a farewell letter to his mother on his final day. As
the prisoner is being led to the electric chair, he experiences a nonsensical jumble of words, feelings and
emotions, as depicted in the opera section of the song. The feel is that of an acid trip gone bad....sensory
overload. In the second half of the opera the forces of good and evil wrestle for the prisoner’s soul, with
evil prevailing in the end, convincing the “good” to join in, condemning the prisoner. The switch to the
electric chair is thrown and the prisoner dies, but in the throes of death, the prisoner feels he has defied
death. The hard rock section of the song shows the prisoner defiant and victorious over death, but as the
song crescendos then slows to the outro, the prisoner realizes that he is in fact dead. He accepts his
fate...what will be, will be. Again, the outro pays homage to the original Queen video with the diamond
shape formation at its closing.
INDEX:
Video Guide: Pgs 2 - 5
Lyrics-ASL Gloss: Pgs 6 - 8
Bohemian Rhapsody from the album
A Night at the Opera Released 1975
Members of Queen:
Freddie Mercury
Brian May
John Deacon
Roger Taylor
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Time Code Feature Type Feature Description VIDEO GUIDE
INTRO
0:00-0:47
Setting the Scene The intro portion of the video pays tribute to the original video by Queen, with the diamond formation of the
four members of Queen. We used the same overhead lighting for an eerie, fleeting feel to the song
Behind the Scenes This section of the video is compiled using 3 different cameras angles, cutting from camera to camera.
0:01 Signing: Rhyme Using the signs REAL and FAKE keeps the same hand shape that is used for ME and QUESTION.
Additionally, the sentence structure flows down then up, with the sides mirroring each other to give balance
to the overall effect.
0:08 Signing: Lexical
Choice
The choice of ANXIETY depicted by “rising water” and DROWNING allowed us to “play” with the sign,
again passing the sign upward and downward.
0:15 Signing: Lexical
Choice
The choice of a cupped closed ‘5’ hand mimics an unmasking of the eyes, followed by a full upward gaze,
finalizing with a complete understanding of self.
0:26 Signing: Lexical choice
and Poetic Feature
“poor” boy is translated as a person that’s BROKEN-DOWN, but refusing to be pitied. Again, the signed
sentence moves down then up the diamond shape
0:32 Signing: Rhyme and
Rhythm
The sign for TAKE-IT-EASY moves, side to side, then up and down in a wave-like motion to give the
impression of a person that is truly “easy come, easy go, Little high, little low” with a rhyming hand shape.
0:39 Signing: Lexical choice
and Poetic Feature
“Anyway the wind blows” is translated to mean that anything life throws your way, you accept. The center
of the diamond formation is LIFE, the sides mirror each other to ACCEPT.
0:43 Signing: Poetic Feature The end of the intro and the end of the outro feature this identical line, DON’T CARE, WORTHLESS.
Additionally, the sign used for WORTHLESS is featured in the ballad as well. Repetition is a poetic feature
found in ASL as well as English.
BALLAD
Part 1
0:48-1:53
Setting the Scene The ballad begins the story of a prisoner (each person in the video plays the part of a prisoner) who has killed
a man, resulting in a death sentence. The prisoner displays no remorse for the killing, but is sorry for the
pain he has caused his mother.
Behind the Scenes The bars on the window of the jail are achieved by “opacity” superimposing a cut-out of jail bars over the
set. This section of video uses cross dissolves to change from one camera to another, thus including all four
characters in the ballad sections.
Signing: Rhythm Because this is a story, the ASL translation is straightforward, telling the story of killing a man. Throughout
the ballad, signing pace matches the music for a rhythmic flow. Many signs are modified to 2 hands for
poetic reasons.
1:02 Signing: Lexical choice The use of classifiers in ASL gives a visual picture of exactly what takes place. The fist is a classifier for a
head, which explodes when shot with a gun (modified ‘H’ classifier), then flows into the sign for DEAD.
1:09 Signing: Lexical choice The sign for MOTHER is modified to a 2-handed sign to show the prisoner reaching out to his mom during
the story. “Life has just begun” is translated to mean that the prisoner is young....
1:15 Signing: Lexical choice ....and has in effect torn his heart out (thrown his life away) because of his actions.
1:23 Signing: Rhyme The 2-handed sign for MOTHER used above is used again, followed by the same hand shape flowing into
the sign for a bleeding heart, a metaphor to match the mournful “oo’s” in the music where no words are
spoken but the sorrow can be felt in the music.
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Time Code Feature Type Feature Description VIDEO GUIDE
1:29 Signing: Lexical choice The sign for CRY is modified with an outstretched left hand, tracing the tear on the mother’s cheek to show
that it is the mother that is crying. The reaching out to the mother, also mimics the outstretched hand used
for MOTHER at the beginning of the ballad.
1:34 Signing: Lexical choice Straightforward ASL translation, using the “if” part of a conditional question (eyebrows raised)
1:38 Signing: Lexical choice The “then” part of an ASL conditional. Carry on, carry on is signed with 2 different ASL signs for
CONTINUE and PROCEED to tell the mother that life must go on as usual.
1:41 Signing: Rhyme The sign WORTHLESS used at the end of the intro is repeated, as a poetic feature linking the intro to the
ballad.
BALLAD
Part 2
1:54-2:36
Setting the Scene The second part of the ballad is a realization of what is to come, and a final good-bye to his mother, as the
story continues.
1:55 Signing: Lexical choice “Too late, my time has come” is interpreted as the prisoner realizes and accepts the futility of the situation,
giving up.... knowing that he will be executed for his crime.
2:02 Signing: Lexical choice SHIVER and ACHE are Body Anchored signs in ASL, showing that the feeling is all over the body. Non-
manual markers (facial expression) are required to show the degree of pain and agony of the situation.
2:09 Signing: Lexical choice The ASL sign for “good-bye” did not fit the meaning of this final good-bye. Rather, it is a separation from
all people, hence the single person classifier is shown separating from the group (5-hand classifier), which is
glossed as UNPOPULAR.
2:15 Signing: Lexical choice The group (society) is pushed aside, and the prisoner confronts the truth of his situation.
2:23 Signing: Rhyme For a third time, the 2-handed sign for MOTHER is used, followed by the same hand shape flowing into the
sign for a bleeding heart again, a metaphor to match the mournful “oo’s” in the music where no words are
spoken but the sorrow can be felt in the music.
2:29 Signing: Lexical choice This is a straight ASL translation of the English sentences “I don’t want to die” and “I sometimes wish I’d
never been born at all.”
GUITAR
SOLO
2:37-3:03
Behind the Scenes The B roll footage shot throughout the song contains no signing, but adds to the mood of the story, and fills
in with pictures similar to instrumental solos within a song. During the final line of the ballad (2:32), opacity
is used to show the male prisoner sitting up from his cot, while another prisoner is signing to set the stage for
the cot being overturned. Time relapse (speed change) is used for the scene where the cot is overturned
during the musical interlude. The remaining portion of the guitar solo between the ballad and the opera
consists of a master shot of the cot, with layers of cross dissolves to show all of the prisoners in different
positions in the jail cell contemplating their impending death sentence.
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Time Code Feature Type Feature Description VIDEO GUIDE
OPERA
Part 1
3:03-3:33
Setting the Scene The guards lead two condemned prisoners to the electric chair. The thought of their impending deaths
causes sensory overload (like an acid trip!), with random, nonsensical thoughts and a pity party.
Behind the Scenes The first part of the opera consists of cuts from the various cameras to give interest and to focus on the story
elements.
3:09 Signing: Lexical choice All signs are two-handed, with the prisoners hands constricted by handcuffs. “Scaramouch” in an opera
refers to a character who appears as a boastful coward. We chose to translate this as one wearing a mask.
3:11 Signing: Lexical choice Fandango is a courtship dance done with castanets. The guards perform the more traditional dance, while the
prisoners provide a more “hip” translation, reflective of their “bad acid trip” state of mind.
3:16 Signing: Lexical choice The lyrics in the song are random, nonsensical referrals to Galileo, the famous astronomer, hence the sign
shows the prisoners viewing the moon, the sun and stars with a telescope.
3:22 Signing: Lexical choice Magnifico is translated as an accolade, hence the blowing of a kiss.
3:23 Signing: Rhyme “Poor boy” is translated the same as in the Intro, a broken-down person;
3:27 Signing: Lexical choice However, “poor family” is translated as not wealthy. English often has more than one meaning for the same
word, hence a different sign choice is appropriate.
OPERA
Part 2
3:34-4:07
Setting the Scene The prisoner(s) is now strapped into the electric chair. A struggle over the prisoner’s soul begins between
good and evil, represented by characters clothed in white and black. Ultimately, the white character gives up
and also condemns the prisoner to die.
Behind the Scenes This section begins with cuts from the various cameras to show the good and the evil arguing over the
prisoner’s soul. Time relapse is used to speed up the signing, and to coincide with the overlapping of the
words in the music. At 3:49 (the final “let me go!” which is signed as SAVE), a video filter gives the light
rays effect. At 3:58 (Beelzebub/DEVIL), cut-outs of the 3 characters are used with a reduction, and
superimposed over a black screen. The aspect ratio is changed to fit all 3 characters in layer by layer.
3:34 Signing: Rhyme The sign for TAKE-IT-EASY is repeated, to mirror the signing in the intro.
3:37 Signing: Lexical choice “Bismallah” refers to a supreme being (Allah), hence the sign for GOD was chosen.
3:54 Signing: Rhyme MOTHER is again signed with two hands, identical to the ballad sections.
3:58 Signing: Lexical choice “Beelzebub” is another name for devil; in our translation, the supreme devil is sending a part of himself to
devour the soul of the prisoner.
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Time Code Feature Type Feature Description VIDEO GUIDE
HARD
ROCK
4:07-4:55
Setting the Scene The switch on the electric chair is thrown, and the prisoner(s) die. However, during most of the hard rock
section, the prisoners feel they have defeated death and are defiant. They break their straps in the electric
chair, much to the amazement of the portrayers of good and evil. In the end, the prisoners “disconnect” as
they are truly dead, slumped in the electric chair. Their fates have been sealed.
Behind the Scenes After the switch is thrown, video of the prisoners in the throes of death is split into short segments with a
blade tool, and the short segments are spliced together, and given a negative effect (every color is replaced
with its opposite). This gives the appearance of the prisoners being electrocuted. Cuts from the different
cameras are then used for visual interest as the prisoners defy their death.
4:15 Signing: Rhythm The hard rock section reverts back to the telling of a story in ASL. As in the ballad, the rhythm of the story
matches the rhythm of the music. In the ballad section, the signing was slow, soft and poetic to match the
rhythm of the music. In this hard rock section, the signing is rough and demonstrative, to match the rhythm
of the music.
OUTRO
4:55-5:55
Setting the Scene For the final section of the song, we again pay tribute to the original video by Queen, returning once again to
the diamond formation, which allows not only a poetic tie to the beginning of the video, but also interplay
between the signs, poetic movement of ASL(motion and location rhyme).
Behind the Scenes As the song transitions from the Hard Rock section to the outro (5:01) the sign for DISCONNECT is done
using a superimposed image of the prisoners over a plain background with an opacity effect. This allows the
scene to transition to the next scene where both prisoners are dead in the electric chair. The editor uses a
split screen with feathered edges on each of the dead prisoner’s images. The outro is done with the same
technique as the intro, using 3 different cameras angles, cutting from camera to camera, but with a higher
contrast. At 5:38 as the camera spans upward, a lens flare is added to the spotlight, giving the impression of
movement. At 5:43 a flash dissolve to white screen is used. Finally, at 5:49 a dissolve glow technique to
fade is used, visually representing the final gong.
Theme The video concludes with a fleeting sense that all is lost and the life of the prisoner is insignificant. The pace
of the signing slows to match the music as it winds down.
5:01 Signing: Lexical choice As the music transitions from hard rock to the slow paced outro, the prisoners “DISCONNECT” from their
life, as they finally realize that they are truly dead.
5:12 Signing: Lexical choice “Nothing really matters” is sung 3 times in this part of the song. ASL uses a faceting expansion technique to
give a whole definition and feeling to these words. WHATEVER is introduced, while DON’T CARE and
WORTHLESS are poetic repetitions of the ASL signs used in the introduction, thus tying the outro to the
intro in an additional way besides the diamond formation.
5:44 Signing: Rhyme The sign for ABANDON moves up the diamond formation, while the sign ACCEPT is drawn from the sides
of the diamond formation, as a form of ASL poetic movement. It poetically ties to the intro, where LIFE was
signed by the middle of the formation, and ACCEPT was drawn from the sides of the diamond.
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Intro (0:00 – 0:47) Lyrics Translation - ASL GLOSS
Is this the real life? ME REAL
Is this just fantasy? ME FAKE
Caught in a landslide ANXIETY DROWNING
No escape from reality SAFE NEVER
Open your eyes CL-EYES OPENING (flat palms across eyes open)
Look up to the skies and see CL-LOOK UPWARD (4 hand shape, starting from the eyes, looking up) UNDERSTAND
I’m just a poor boy ME BROKEN-DOWN
I need no sympathy PITY-ME (brushed aside)
Because I’m easy come, easy go TAKE IT EASY (left and right)
Little high, little low TAKE-IT-EASY (in wave motion, up and down)
Anyway the wind blows LIFE ACCEPT
Doesn’t really matter to me to me DON’T CARE WORTHLESS
Ballad 1 (0:48 – 1:53) Mama just killed a man MOTHER (with outstretched left hand) MAN I KILL
Put a gun against his head CL- (left S hand signify person) – (H right hand signify gun)
Pulled my trigger now he’s dead CL (show pull trigger – S hand explodes) DIE-FINISH
Mama life has just begun MOTHER (with outstretched left hand) ME (honorific) YOUNG
But now I’ve gone and thrown it all away NOW LIFE (tearing out heart and throw away to the right) DISAPPEAR FINISH
Mama, ooh MOTHER (with outstretched left hand) BLEEDING-HEART (8 left hand touch heart, 5 right hand
palm back indicate bleed)
Didn’t mean to make you cry CRY(one hand on own cheek, one hand on “mother’s cheek”) SORRY
If I’m not back again this time tomorrow TOMORROW SHOW-UP NOT (if part of conditional – eyebrows raised)
Carry on Carry on as if nothing really
matters
CONTINUE PROCEED - WORTHLESS (eyebrows lowered)
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Ballad 2 (1:54 – 2:36) Too late my time has come GIVE-UP DEATH WILL (short will close to body)
Send shivers down my spine SHIVER-CL (Right open 5 hand moves up one arm down another)
Body’s aching all the time ACHE (all over body move ache up and down body)
Goodbye, Everybody UNPOPULAR-CL (person (1 CL) separating from group (5 CL))
I got to go PERSON-CL (turns and leaves group) LEAVE
Gotta leave you all behind and face the
truth
PUSH-ASIDE (as if pushing group away) TRUTH CONFRONT
Mama oooooooh ( Anyway the wind
blows)
MOTHER (with outstretched left hand) BLEEDING-HEART (8 left hand touch heart, 5 right hand
palm back indicate bleed)
I don’t want to die (show negation, shake head no) DIE NOT-WANT
Sometimes wish I’d never born at all SOMETIMES WISH BORN NEVER
Opera (3:03 – 4:07) Prisoners Guards CL-(C-opera hands during piano intro)
I see a little silhouetto of a man SEE - DARK - SHAPE (2 hands)
Scaramouch, Scaramouch MASK (one hand) MASK (one hand)
Will you do the Fandango (dance) (cassinets - left) (cassinets - right)
Thunderbolt and Lightening (dance) THUNDER - LIGHTENING
Very, very frightening me! SCARED EXPLODE
Galileo, Galileo, Galileo, Figaro! TELESCOPE (3rd
) TELESCOPE (4th
) MOON (1st) SUN (2
nd ) STARS (5
th)
Magnifico! (Blow kiss, right hand, palm up outward
I’m just a poor boy, nobody loves me, ME (honorific), POOR; LOVE NONE
He’s just a poor boy from a poor family, HE BREAK-DOWN; FAMILY POOR
Spare him his life from this monstrosity PITY-ME SAVE LIFE TERRIBLE HAPPEN
Prisoners Good (person on right) Evil (person on left)
Easy come, easy go, TAKE-IT-EASY
Will you let me go? SAVE – PITY-ME
Bismillah! No, we will not let you go! GOD SAVE NEVER
Let him go! SAVE – PITY-HIM
Bismillah! No, we will not let you go! GOD SAVE NEVER
Let him go! SAVE – PITY-HIM
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Bismillah! No, we will not let you go GOD SAVE NEVER
Let me go (Will not let you go) SAVE - PITY-ON-ME SAVE NEVER SAVE NEVER
Let me go (Will not let you go) SAVE - PITY-ON-ME SAVE NEVER SAVE NEVER
Let me go, o, o, o, o SAVE!
No, no, no, no, no, no! N-O! (x6) (alternate rt & left
hands)
N-O! (x6) (alternate rt & left
hands)
Oh mama mia, mama mia! Mama mia! Let
me go
MOM (sign with rt. hand, while
left hand reaches forward)
FORGIVE!
Beelzebub has a devil put aside DEVIL (mime putting "devil"
on left hand)
DEVIL (mime putting "devil"
on rt hand)
For me, for me, for me! PROTECT PUSH ASIDE SEND SEND
Hard Rock (4:07 – 4:55) Lyrics Translation
So you think you can stone me and spit in
my eye
YOU THINK CAN ATTACK (directional towards self) SPIT INSULT (pointing at eye)
So you think you can love me and leave me
to die
YOU THINK CAN LOVE IGNORE ABANDON
Oh baby can’t do this to me baby NO NO INSULT CAN’T
NO NO IGNORE CAN’T
Just gotta get out just gotta get right outta
here
I MUST ESCAPE I MUST LEAVE
Oooh yeah, oooh yeah DISCONNECT
Outro (4:55 – 5:55) Lyrics Translation
Nothing really matters WHATEVER
Anyone can see EVERYONE KNOW
Nothing really matters DON’T CARE
Nothing really matters to me WORTHLESS
Anyway the wind blows ABANDON (middle of formation) ACCEPT (side people of formation)
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