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Bell Work. Make an argument for sending a child to private school (1 sentence). Make an argument for sending a child to public school (1 sentence). ORGANIZATION. Organization is the structure of your writing. - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
Bell WorkMake an argument for sending a child to private school (1 sentence).
Make an argument for sending a child to public school (1 sentence).
ORGANIZATION
Organization is the structure of your writing.
Focus on your choice of words, as well as transitions from one thought to the next.
Essential Question: Does the organizational structure
enhance the ideas and make it easier to understand?
Organization has: An inviting introduction Thoughtful transitions Logical sequencing Pacing is under control A satisfying conclusion
Organization Simile: Reflect for a moment, then write
down a simile for organization.
Organization is like __________________________________________.
Topic Sentence (TS) Introduces the topic of the
paragraph.
Should be inviting and “HOOKS” the reader.
Your turn to HOOK your reader
Perry football beats Williams Field for first time. After a feverish drenching from mother nature, the
Pumas finally defeated rival Williams Field 157-3. “American Idol” winner comes
from your English class. As Ryan Seacrest slowly announced Chase
Richardson’s name, the Perry sophomore could hardly hold back his tears of “American Idol” joy.
More HOOKS Your favorite musician comes to
play in your Conference Period. It was a classic scene of fan-dominium in Mr.
Tippett’s conference period yesterday when the Jonas Brothers performed.
Mr. Tippett’s pug eats a freshman. Mr. Tippett’s pug, Dolly, was apprehended by Perry
security after mauling a freshman and eating his spleen late Tuesday morning.
The BODY of the paragraph1. Concrete detail – a sentence that
expands upon the ideas present in the TS.
a) They present facts and ideas associated with the paragraph topic and introduce key concepts.
The BODY of the paragraph2. Commentary sentences – provides
explanation of the concrete detail’s relevance. Typically write 2 for each concrete detail.
Answers these questions:a) So what?b) What is the point?c) Why is this fact important?
May also transition to a new fact.
The BODY of the paragraphRepeat this process 3-5 times per
paragraph. YES, this does make for a
L O N G paragraph!
The CONCLUSION The conclusion should tie everything
together, providing adequate resolution to the paragraph.
Restates the main idea of the paragraph in a new way, sometimes taking into account new info provided by the detail and commentary.
The CONCLUSION May also lead into a new
paragraph’s main idea…like an hourglass.
Effective Paragraph Structure Topic Sentence Detail/Fact (repeat 3-5X)
Explanation or Relevance(Explanation or Relevance)
Conclusion or Transition Sentence
Having trouble remembering that? Try some iced tea…
…or some Ice-T…
ICE-TICE-T• Introduce the detail or fact• Cite the detail or fact• Explain the relevance of the detail
or fact• Transition to the next idea