Audience Feedback – Moving

Foreword

Documentary

On a scale of 1 to 5, where 1 is the

lowest and 5 is the highest, how would

you rate the following things about the

documentary?

Does the title suit the documentary?

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6

Yes No

Is the mise-en-scene of the interviews

relevant to our documentary?

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0.5

1

1.5

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4

4.5

Yes No

Does our five minute clip of the

documentary want to make you watch it?

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Yes No

Yes:“Interesting , wanted to find out more”

“I found it interesting”

“It was interesting”

“very interesting”

No:

“focuses to much on interviews”

“not interested in topic”

Does our documentary relate to our chosen

target audience?

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Yes No

Does it provide the viewer with sufficient

information about the development of

books?

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Yes No"Could do with more but the five minute clip did provide information"“Yes its full of information"

"yes through interviews, voiceover and archive footage"

What three things did you think were good in the documentary?

17%

22%

11%11%

5%

5%

5%

6%

6%

6%

6%

cutaways

voiceovers

interviews

archive

storyline

Title Sequence

creative

clear graphics

creativley clever

relevant

interesting

What improvements would you make to the

documentary?

31%

6%

6%

6%13%

13%

13%

6%

6%

shorter interviews

interviewee looking at camera

music random

cuts early

more cutaways

wider range of interviews

less archive

more clear graphics

more music

Radio

Is the radio trailer relevant to our

documentary?

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Yes No

If you heard the radio trailer would you be

encouraged to watch it?

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0.5

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1.5

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4.5

Yes No

Does the advert suit our target audience?

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Does the music suit the trailer?

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Yes No

One comment said that the music “sounds mysterious”

Name Three Good Things About The Radio

Trailer:

27%

27%13%

20%

6%

7%

voiceover

music

vox pops

information

clarity of voiceover

sound effects

Name Three Improvements that could be

added to the radio trailer:

15%

14%

14%

29%

14%

14%

music

too much interview

unsuitable for audience

better sound effects

more upbeat music

more exciting

Newspaper Advertisement

On a scale of 1 to 5, where 1 is the lowest

and 5 is the highest, how would you rate the

following things about the newspaper

advertisement?

Is The Newspaper Advertisement Eye

Catching?

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Yes No

Does the newspaper advertisement suit our

target audience?

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Yes No

If you saw this advertisement in a

newspaper would you be encouraged to

watch the programme?

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Yes No

Name Three Good Things About The

Newspaper Advertisement:

5%

11%

22%

11%5%

11%

6%

6%

11%

6%

6%

clear picture

colours info

title slogan

effective graphics

creative unique

bold

The only improvement was to “add more book references into the images” so overall

our poster feedback was very good. We received a large amount of “good things”

about the poster and we were very happy with this feedback.