AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback

Student Name: RADCLIFFE Harrison

Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on blog1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Casino Royale

3 more needed!!!Taken

2. Genre Analysis Action – needs detail3. Target Audience Blog – needs detail4. Script No - Loads to incorrect page - Added5. Drafts Blog - ideas6. Storyboard Blog – detail needed7. Shotlist No - Loads to incorrect page- Added8. Layouts – floor plan Blog9. Locations No - Loads to incorrect page- Added10. Costumes Blog11. Props Blog – detail and images needed12. Actors Blog – detail and images needed13. Equipment No - Added14. Production schedule No - Added

Teachers comments1. Casino – some detail but far too descriptive. You need to analyse why choices have been made and how this

affects the genre. Some detail on technical elements.Taken – good detail on how technical elements have set up character and hints at genre conventions.

2. You have mentioned a lot of info but it all lacks in depth detail. What modern films have female heroes? What are key weapons used? What are key narratives? What are the key films other than Bond? Some conventions identified in diagram

3. Some thought into age range of potential audience with some thought into content but lacks good information. What other interests may they have? Who exactly is your TA? Where have you got all your evidence?

4. Loads to incorrect page - script is too simple, not enough detail. Only clue to genre is the rifle??5. No script draft but initial ideas added.6. Very colourful but lacks any technical detail on camera.7. Loads to incorrect page – good detail on list, with key info added – location, sound, action.8. Good detail on one set up, but lacks movement.9. Loads to incorrect page – good images with some info on how they will be used.10. Some detail given on why costumes chosen with links to characters.11. More detail needed on how props will be used and how they link to genre. Some images now added.12. Some detail given on why actor chosen for their role – but more info needed than just ‘he likes wearing a suit’. What

other aspects make him a good choice – physical appearance?13. Missing – now added with a very brief note on how/why they will be used.14. Missing – some good info on shooting and editing schedule. No info on pre-prod.

Add all missing work!

Work now all added. Student has clear understanding of task and conventions. More care and better use of terminology needed.

Mark out of 20: 8Teacher name: MDR Date: Dec 14

Student action plan for improvement

Final mark out of 20: 13 Date: Mar 2015