andres, sergi, joey y eric ice age ii
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I N S E D U A R D F O N T S E R E
4 R T B
Y E A R 2 0 1 2 – 1 3
G R O U P : _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
Exam Corrections Ice Age II
TASK
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Correct as many sentences as you can. There is oneincorrect sentence from each of you
Upload it to the wiki again before the end of theclass.
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If someone was missing, or did not contribute, youshould NOT write his/her name
Teacher tip
Remember you can use some of these sentences for your Learning Diary!
Example
Error Correction Explanation
Ellie I like Mannie Ellie LikeS Mannie A sentence cannot havetwo subjects
The 3rd person singular needs an S in presentsimple
Error Correction Explanation
Paris Hilton is a girl very beautiful
Paris Hilton is a very beautiful girl.
In English, the adjective goes before the Noun
Error Correction Explanation
Sid it is a lazy Sid is a sloth No puedes poner dos sujetos como “Sid” y “it”
En inglés, perezoso (animal) es “Sloth”
Error Correction Explanation
Ice Age II to start when the ice “se descongela”
Ice Age II starts when the ice melts
SPANGLISH!!
“To start” es empezar, empieza de tercera persona es “starts”.
Error Correction Explanation
Ellie think she possums Ellie thinks she’s a possum
“she’s a” es muy importante. Es el verbo que hace la función de indicar que es Ellie.
Error Correction Explanation
Sid loves sing and talk too much
Sid loves too much sing and talk.
En inglés, el determinante “too much” (mucho) va antes del verbo.
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Diego, Mannie and Sid is good friend.
Diego, Mannie and Sid are good friends
En inglés, si el sujeto esta en plural, el verbo y el nombre tienen que coincidir en número
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At first sight he is a lot of kind.
At first sight, he is too kind.
“a lot of” sólo se utiliza para denominar cosas o objetos contables e incontables, kind es un adjetivo y no se puede denominar así.
Error Correction Explanation
In the Ice Age II have a very characters.
In the Ice Age II have too many characters.
“Very” es un adverbio de cantidad, significa “muy”, para cosas comtables como characters (personajes), se usa “too many”
Error Correction Explanation
Manny search her herd. Manny is searching his herd.
“her”, es el “su” femenino, el masculino es “his”.
Si intentas explicar que esta haciendo, usa el present continous, “is verbo+ing”
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I’m a prey of the love. I’m prey of love. Idon’t know how explain this sentence.
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Ellie she very confused Ellie is very confused. No puedes poner dos sujetos como “Ellie” y “she”
don’t exist sentences without verb.
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You prefer either a ice cream or a rattle snakes.
Do you prefer either a ice cream or a rattlesankes?
Muy importante el verbo y el signo de interrogación.
“rattle sankes” va todo junto.
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Either study english for next day or play PS3
Do you prefer either study English for next day or play PS3?
Muy importante el verbo y el signo de interrogación.
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Ellie she is shy and thinks that it is a possum
Ellie thinks she’s a possum also she is too shy
All sentence have got fails.What can i say?
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Many is fat but and Ellie like.
Manny is fat but Ellie likes him as well.
El verbo está bien situado, pero en tercera persona es “verbo+S”
“And” (y) no se porque sale si no pinta nada.
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Possums are heavies. The possums are boring El problema es que no pone el artículo del principio y se ha equivocado en coger el “pesado” adecuado.
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I don’t eat junk food never
I never eat junk food Joey (mi error) el adverbio de cantidad va antes del nombre al que acompaña, y el “don’t desaparece.
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Manny is a bad because not have family.
Manny is bad because he doesn’t have family.
Se ha olvidado que el “no tener” va con el “does”.
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Mannie and Ellie they are very big
Manny and Ellie are very big.
Como ya hemos dicho anteriormente, no pueden haber 2 sujetos juntos.
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Diego a fraid of water Diego is afraid of water Te dejas el verbo “to be”
afraid va todo junto.
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His friends are intelligents and not speak with he.
his friends are intelligents and doesn’t speak with him.
En 3ª persona se usa doeSn’t.
He significa él, pero en este caso se usa “him”.