A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: William

General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion between the two part s of unit 3. Your written work is strong but you must make sure all visual documentation is up to the same standard.

Task Assessment Criteria Covered

Feedback AO band

Leaflet AO1 An excellent leaflet task, you have clearly thought about the layout and design of different leaflets and the fact you have been to exhibitions to find them shows a commitment to the task. Your research demonstrates you’re fluent ability to glean significant information from your chosen sources. A very well thought out and executed task that will stand out as an example to future students well done.

AO1: Fluent

Practical Work and Gallery responses.

AO1AO3

A poignant and moving set of observation the explanation behind why you have turned the images to black and white demonstrates your FLUENT ability to record your experiences. It is a shame that you didn’t undertake the second part of the summer brief that would have involved you created a storey that you had pre-visualised.

AO1: FluentAO3: confident

Observational Starting Points

AO3AO2

A good start to the project as always you write with a real elegance that is a pleasure to read. I would like your visual documentation to back up this strong wording. I think that finding derelict landscapes within London will be a challenge but one which I am sure you are more than capable of achieving.

AO3: FluentAO2: Confident

Research Starting Points

AO1 AO1: