WritingCommon mistakes:1.信的格式 ------ 未署名或署错名（不能出现自己的名字） 位置错 Yours, Li Hua Yours, Li Hua2. 涂改较多，卷面不整洁 ( 可事先打草稿）3. 时态前后不一致 如： Yesterday we hold…

4. 单复数前后不一致 1). The people who loves me 2). a adults 3).a people5. 单词拼写错误 1).yesterday 2). First 3).be proud of

6. 其他错误 1). I was very exciting. 2).thank for our teacher 3). In order to me ,they work hard.

held

Class 7 Grade 1Dear Tom, It’s great to receive your email. I should have written to you yester-

day, but I was really very busy. The school held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first, we made an oath that we

were no longer children, we should make contribution to our country from then on. And I couldn’t hold back my tears because I was think-

ing about all the people who cared about me. If we hadn’t got enough love from them, we couldn’t grow up so well. So we should thank our

parents and teachers for their hard work. Then our teachers gave us

cards wishing us a better future. With the cards in hands, we were

all moved with tears in our eyes. Not only we but also our parents

speak highly of the teachers, and I’ll work hard and won’t let them

down. The ceremony was over with our wonderful performances. All

of us took an active part in activities, such as dancing and singing.

And we all lost ourselves in the beautiful music.

I hope you can write to me and share your feelings with me, too. Yours, Li Hua

Class 7 Grade 1Dear Tom, It’s great to receive your email. I should have written to you yester-

day, but I was really very busy. The school held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first, we made an oath that we

were no longer children, we should make contribution to our country from then on. And I couldn’t hold back my tears because I was think-

ing about all the people who cared about me. If we hadn’t got enough love from them, we couldn’t grow up so well. So we should thank our

叶国栋

陈艳 占一涓

冯非池

邓鹏涛

parents and teachers for their hard work. Then our teachers gave us

cards wishing us a better future. With the cards in hands, we were

all moved with tears in our eyes. Not only we but also our parents

speak highly of the teachers, and I’ll work hard and won’t let them

down. The ceremony was over with our wonderful performances. All

of us took an active part in activities, such as dancing and singing.

And we all lost ourselves in the beautiful music.

I hope you can write to me and share your feelings with me, too. Yours, Li Hua

周依丹 叶国栋

舒晨 吕行

严晓莉 冯非池

陈杏珠

章伟英

包宇雄

周依丹

Class 8 Grade 1Dear Tom, It’s great to receive your email. Yesterday our school held a grown-

up ceremony for us. We, the students that were 18 years old, made an

oath that we were no longer children and must think more about life.

We should make every effort to study well to make contribution to our

country. And then we thanked our parents and teachers for giving us

love and knowledge. I felt the teachers were deeply moved with tears

in their eyes. Our teachers also gave us cards with their best wishes.

Looking at the cards, I really didn’t know how to describe what I thought. Teacher plays an important part in our life. I will keep

what my teachers tell me in mind. At the end of the ceremony, we

put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. The cere-

mony seemed short, but our memory will last forever.

Don’t you think that’s interesting? I’m looking forward to

hearing from you to share your happiness with me.

Yours, Li Hua

Class 8 Grade 1Dear Tom, It’s great to receive your email. Yesterday our school held a grown-

up ceremony for us. We, the students that were 18 years old, made an

oath that we were no longer children and must think more about life.

We should make every effort to study well to make contribution to our

country. And then we thanked our parents and teachers for giving us

love and knowledge. I felt the teachers were deeply moved with tears

in their eyes. Our teachers also gave us cards with their best wishes.

廖丹萍

范彩霞

朱俊芳 郑瑜婷 黄磊 汪少俊等 章倩 马骁 卢超等

范彩霞

郭欣然 童贯中

Looking at the cards, I really didn’t know how to describe what I thought. Teacher plays an important part in our life. I will keep

what my teachers tell me in mind. At the end of the ceremony, we

put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. The cere-

mony seemed short, but our memory will last forever.

Don’t you think that’s interesting? I’m looking forward to

hearing from you to share your happiness with me.

Yours, Li Hua

邵晓彤

钟丹丽 吴晓芳

赵翔

郭欣然

叶 ming