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Page 1: "What Has Changed? Black and Minority Ethnic Levels of Satisfaction With the Metripolitan Police Service Since the London Riots."

"What Has Changed? Black andMinority Ethnic Levels of

Satisfaction With theMetripolitan Police ServiceSince the London Riots."

by Herval Almenoar-Webster

FILE

TIME SUBMITTED 14-SEP-2015 02:35PM

SUBMISSION ID 46786025

WORD COUNT 11520

CHARACTER COUNT 62056

FINAL_DISSY_M.DOCX (170.08K)

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InstructorThis is an excellent dissertation that is written toa very high standard and rigorously thoughtthrough, where you have included a clearintroduction that lets the reader know exactly andstrategically what you intended to arguethroughout.

Your usage of your primary sources is balancedby the secondary sources you have marshaled tobolster your claims regarding the relationshipbetween the MPS and the BME communities innot just Tottenham, your f ield site, but alsospeaks to broader concerns in the wider publicarena.

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