The Cultural Acceptance of OnlineDating: Attitudes Towards Online

Relationship Formationby Venica Ffrench

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TIME SUBMITTED 09-DEC-2013 09:49AMPAPER ID 381943493

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14/20The Cultural Acceptance of Online Dating: Attitudes TowardsOnline Relationship FormationGRADEMARK REPORT

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Missing "," Missing comma:Though it may not always be grammatically necessary, a comma can often help to prevent amisreading. When a sentence opens with an introductory element (a phrase, clause or word that islogically related to another phrase or clause in the same sentence), it is a great help to your reader toplace a comma after that introductory element. Such phrases will often begin with words like "because,""while" or "although," as in the following example: "While everyone was fighting, the bear wanderedaway." As you can see, without the comma, the sentence would be confusing.

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S/V Agreement Subject-verb agreement:Subjects and verbs should match in number and person. Singular subjects require singular verbs;plural subjects require plural verbs.

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WC Word choice error:Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do.Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come upwith a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you're

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trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking up. However, it canoften introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.

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Comment 3 A research question would have been more suitable seeing as your study is of anexploratory nature.

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Awk. Awkward:The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.

Comment 4 I'm not sure how well this measures what you were seeking to test.

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Comment 5 Please clarify whether it is one focus group with 100 persons or several focusgroups. Either way this figure is extremely high.

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The Cultural Acceptance of Online Dating: Attitudes Towards Online Relationship Formationby Venica Ffrench

The Cultural Acceptance of Online Dating: Attitudes Towards Online Relationship FormationGRADEMARK REPORTFINAL GRADEGENERAL COMMENTSInstructor