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Eng 100BC FA14Review quiz #3

Process Writing

Prewriting & Planning

Quotations, in-text citations, slashes, brackets,ellipsis


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Review Quiz #31. Choose the sentence that follows all rules for

using exact words, appropriate language, andavoiding wordiness.A. In order that I may increase my expertise in the

area of delivery of services to clients, I feel thatparticipation in this conference will bebeneficial.

To improve my performance, I should attend theconference.

B. The bottom line is that the company isexperiencing a negative cash flow.

The company is losing money.

C. An elementary school teacher should understandthe concept of nurturing if she intends to beeffective.

Elementary school teachers...if they...D. None of the above.


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Review Quiz #3

2. Queen Anne was so angry ______ Sarah

Churchill that she refused to see her again.C. with

3. The parade moved _______ the streetand onto the beach.

A. off

4. Be sure ______ report on the danger ofreleasing genetically engineered bacteria

into the atmosphere.E. to


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Review Quiz #3

5. Which of the following sentences properly

uses apostrophes?A. Each days menu features a different

European countries dish.

B. Each days menu features a differentEuropean countrys dish.

C. Each days menu features a differentEuropean countrys dish.

D. None of the above.


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uses apostrophes?A. The fashions of the 60s greatly influenced

the designers choice of fabric.

B. The fashions of the 60s greatly influencedthe designers choice of fabric.

C. The fashions of the 60s greatly influencedthe designers choice of fabric.

D. The fashions of the 60s greatlyinfluenced the designers choice of fabric.


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uses apostrophes?A. She wouldnt allow the childrens toys to

be left behind during the move.

B. She wouldnt allow the childrens toys tobe left behind during the move.

C. She wouldnt allow the childrens toys tobe left behind during the move.

D. She wouldnt allow the childrens toys tobe left behind during the move.


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Review Quiz #3

8. A. In one game a player was injured, and

Coach Warner sent in Jim.B. In one game a player was injured and,

Coach Warner sent in Jim.

C. None of the above

D. All of the above


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9. A. At first, no one but Jim, and the

coach believed that Jim could play wellenough.

B. At first, no one but Jim and the coachbelieved that Jim could play well enough.


D. All of the above


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Review Quiz #3

10. A. In a game against Army, Thorpe had

the ball.B. In a game, against Army Thorpe had

the ball.


D. All of the above


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11. A. One Army player tried to tackle Jim,

failed, injured his knee in the process andhad to be helped from the field.

B. One Army player tried to tackle Jim,failed, injured his knee in the process, and

had to be helped from the field.


D. All of the above


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12. A. I like pizza with pepperoni, sausage,

and onions; fries with cheese, bacon, andketchup; and ice cream with fudge,sprinkles, and whip cream.

B. I like pizza with pepperoni, sausage,

and onions; fries with cheese, bacon, andketchup; ice cream with fudge, sprinkles,and whip cream.

C. None of the aboveD. All of the above


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13. A. My worst trips were; Egypt, France,

and China.B. My worst trips included the following

countries; Egypt, France, and China.


D. All of the above


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14. A. People said that Thorpes confidence

in himself was so great that he oftenskipped practice at the Olympics; they toldthe broad jump story to illustrate hisconfidence.

B. People said that Thorpes confidencein himself was so great that he oftenskipped practice at the Olympics; so theytold the broad jump story to illustrate hisconfidence.


D. All of the above


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15. A. He had a peculiar style of running

that left his football tacklers flat on theground: He would twist his hips away fromthe player who was after him.

B. He had a peculiar style of running

that left his football tacklers flat on theground: he would twist his hips away fromthe player who was after him.

C. None of the aboveD. All of the above


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16. A. We need different tools such as: saws,

hammers, and drills.B. Be at the corner by 6:00: we need to

regroup.


D. All of the above


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17. A. Clothes are often made from

synthetic material, for instance: rayon.B. Clothes are often made from

synthetic material: for instance rayon.

C. All of the above

D. None of the above


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18. Choose the sentence that uses dashes

correctly.A. He traveled - all over America to Boston,Chicago, Denver, Salt Lake City, and manyother places to promote his idea.

B. He traveled all over America to Boston,Chicago, Denver, Salt Lake City, and manyother places to promote his idea.

C. He traveled all over America toBoston, Chicago, Denver, Salt Lake City, and

many other places to promote his idea.D. He traveled all over America to Boston

Chicago Denver, Salt Lake City and manyother places to promote his idea.


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19. Choose the sentence that correctly uses

parenthesis.A. He was amazed at the countrys size,industry, and enthusiasm for (creating

things) buildings, that is, not art.B. He was amazed at the countrys size,

(industry), and enthusiasm for creatingthings, buildings, that is, not art.C. He was amazed at the countrys size,

industry, and enthusiasm for creating

things, (buildings, that is, not art).D. He was amazed at the countrys size,

industry, and enthusiasm for creatingthings (buildings, that is, not art.)


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20. A. What a cute-little-bird she has!

B. You must let-down your guard.C. She jumped from a two-story

building.

D. The cancellation of the snow was areal-letdown.


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Process


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Writing ProcessWhat is process?

Set of direction for how to do something

Recipe in a cookbook

Directions on how to install a CD changer in

your car Description of how something happens or is

done

Textbook discussion of how the body convertsfood into energy and fat

Online explanation of why earthquakes occur


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Writing ProcessHow do you choose a process subject?

Choose a subject that can be adequatelydescribed or analyzed in the space available

Three decades of revision...not three decades

of every change during that time Identify the audience

Consider audiences knowledge dont boreyour reader but dont overwhelm with

unfamiliar terms and concepts


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WritingHow do you structure a process essay?

Fundamental structure is chronological order Make a list of various steps in the process Once list seems complete, arrange items in

order performed or in which they occur Check to make sure nothing is omitted or

misplaced Practice the process in order to ensure nothing

is missing Converting into paragraph form

Carefully explain technical terms Use many transitional phrases

First, second, third, while this is being done, next,begin, finally


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RevisingHow do you revise a process essay?

Key element in process is clarity

How-to-do-it essay is successful if reader canreproduce the process you describe without

error and with same result Here-is-how-it-works essay does not intend

for reader to reproduce the process


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Choose an interesting & manageable subject Look critically at essay as a whole

Ask the following questions:

Is the subject too simple? Is it too complicated?

Does your draft have three very short body paragraphsor twelve long ones?

Define imagined reader

Consider prior knowledge of audience

Define technical words and concepts Assess purpose of essay

To inform

Giving directions to duplicate a process

Describing a process to increase reader understanding


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Check for logical organization

Use transitions

Paragraphs

parallelism


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RevisingHow do you revise a process essay? Write an appropriate introduction & conclusion Introduction

Identifies subject

Catches readers attention by persuading reader toread essay What is important or interesting about this process?

How will your readers benefit from reading this essay orfrom knowing this process?

Conclusions Do not simply summarize steps or stages in process

Repetition is boring and unnecessary

Use these questions What is important about this knowledge?

Why is this knowledge useful?

What can be learned through studying this process?


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Process Prewriting

In groups Given a box of items Use whatever items you want to create an

original gameWrite down the steps taken to create the

game Here-is-how-it-works essay Prompt #1 How the group created a new

gameWrite down how to play the game

How-to-do-it essay Prompt #2 How to play a new game


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Process Plan

Title

I. IntroductionA. Engage readerB. BackgroundInformation

C. Thesis statementII. Body: Steps in the

ProcessA. Step 1

1. substep 12. substep 2

B. Step 2, etc

III. Body: Troublespots & Solutions

A. Trouble spotsB. Solutions

IV. Conclusion

A. link back tointroductionB. summarizeimportance ofprocess, refer back

to thesisC. lastingimpression, finalpoint


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Quotation Marks


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Read the following sonnet:Let me not to the marriage of true mindsAdmit impediments. Love is not love

Which alters when it alteration finds,Or bends with the remover to remove:O no! it is an ever-fixed markThat looks on tempests and is never shaken;

It is the star to every wandering bark,Whose worths unknown, although his height betaken.

Loves not Times fool, though rosy lips andcheeks

Within his bending sickles compass come:Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,But bears it out even to the edge of doom.If this be error and upon me proved,I never writ, nor no man ever loved.


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Quotation Marks

What is a direct quotation?

Exactly repeats what someone said orwrote


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Quotation MarksWhen are quotation marks used? Use quotation marks around direct quotations

Paul Gilstersaid, Weve inherited thisnotion that if it pops up on a screen and looksgood, we think of it as fairly credible. Quotation marks always appear in pairs

Use quotation marks around titles of poems,song titles, short stories, magazine ornewspaper articles, essays, speeches, chaptertitles, and episodes of TV or radio shows

Just Like a Woman, by Bob Dylan ITALICIZE titles of magazines, novels, books,

newspapers, television series, movies, albumsFamily Guy, The Walking Dead, Fahrenheit

451

Q t ti M k


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Quotation MarksHow is a quotation within a quotation punctuated? With single quotation marks

The man said, Im sorry, officer, but did I hearyou correctly when you said, Drive into thatditch?

Sally said, My favorite short story is Hills LikeWhite Elephants by Ernest Hemingway.

What is an indirect quotation? Restates what someone said or wrote, but not

word for wordRachel told the security guard that she

needed to enter the building for official business.

DO NOT USE QUOTATION MARKS FORINDIRECT QUOTATIONS!!!

Q t ti M k


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Quotation Marks

Punctuation & Quotation marks

Place periods and commas insideThe name of the short story is HillsLike White Elephants.

Put question marks and exclamationpoints inside quotation marks unlessthey apply to the whole sentence

Bedtime at my house is marked byMommy, can I tell you a story now?

Have you heard the old proverb Donot climb the hill until you reach it?

Q t ti M k


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Quotation Marks

Punctuation & Quotation marks

Put colons and semicolons outsideHarold wrote, I regret that I amunable to attend the fundraiser for

AIDS research; his letter, however,

came with a substantial contribution. Do not use quotation marks to draw

attention to familiar slang, to disowntrite expressions, or to justify anattempt at humor

http://youtu.be/E-PIidaqCyUIt was a ballpark figure.
http://youtu.be/E-PIidaqCyUhttp://youtu.be/E-PIidaqCyUhttp://youtu.be/E-PIidaqCyU


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Brackets

B k


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Brackets Use to enclose any words/phrases that havebeen inserted into an otherwise word-for-word quotation Audubon reports that if there are not enough

young to balance deaths, the end of the species[California condor] is inevitable (4).

The Latin word sic in brackets indicatesthat an error in a quoted sentence appears inthe original source.

Do NOT overuse because calling attention to

others mistakes can appear snobbish. According to the review, NellyFortadosperformance was brilliant, exceeding [sic]the expectations of even her most loyal fans.

B k


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Brackets Use to enclose any words/phrases that havebeen inserted into an otherwise word-for-word quotation Audubon reports that if there are not enough

young to balance deaths, the end of the species[California condor] is inevitable (4).

The Latin word sic in brackets indicatesthat an error in a quoted sentence appears inthe original source.

Do NOT overuse because calling attention to

others mistakes can appear snobbish. According to the review, NellyFortadosperformance was brilliant, exceeding [sic]the expectations of even her most loyal fans.

B k t P ti


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Brackets Practice

1. Lisettes speech contained the following

remark: I accept this medal Comal CollegeStudent of the Year with theacknowledgment of the support of myfamily, friends, and teachers.

[Comal College Student of the Year]

2. The actor remarked, none too humbly,When I deliver my characters famous

speech Act I Scene 3, the audience weeps.[Act I Scene 3]


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Brackets Practice

3. If you read the quotation from the Navy

captain (see the article entitled Life DownUnder page 4, column 5), you will have a

better understanding of life on asubmarine.

[page 4, column 5]

4. At one point in the interview, the singerresponded, When Im home London,

England, I occasionally give free concerts.[London, England]


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Brackets Practice

5. As part of the preparation for your trip,

you will find it immensely helpful to readabout the local customs (the When inRome... section of Chapter 2 pages 18-20).

[pages 18-20]

6. The mayor-elect then commented, It isimperative that we make this the proposedloop around the city a priority of this

administration.[the proposed loop around the city]

B k P i


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Brackets Practice7. The winner answered my question about

the best type of racing bicycle with Theresno doubt that mine a twenty-seven speedItalian bicycle is the best.

[a twenty-seven speed Italian bicycle]

8. To get to the Connellys farm, you go downArrowhead Road (between Route 10 theturnoff is north of Evinston and Route 52).

[the turnoff is north of Evinston]

B k t P ti


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Brackets Practice9. Do you happen to know the year that

Tony Dorsett was awarded it the HeismanTrophy? Luella asked.

[the Heisman Trophy]

10. Please turn to the statistics on the world

population (see page 46 Chart C) beforecontinuing.

[Chart C]


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Using quotations in research Use sparingly

Too many quotes causes a loss of

ownershipAlso makes readers question your

knowledge of the topic

Purpose of quote is to give you credibility


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When should quotes be used inresearch-based essays? Quoting memorable language

Worded so eloquently or powerfully thatsummarizing/paraphrasing would sacrificeimpact and meaning

Quoting clear and concise language

To summarize/paraphrase would make ittoo wordy

Quoting authoritative language Lends authority and credibility to your

essay


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What techniques can be used toincorporate sources into your

sentences? Quote only part of sentence or paragraph

needed.

Love alters not with his brief hours andweeks, but bears it out even to the edge ofdoom.


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What techniques can be used to incorporatesources into your sentences?

Avoid freestanding quotations

Use attributive tags

Shakespeare insists that Love alters not withhis brief hours and weeks, but bears it outeven to the edge of doom.

Love alters not with his brief hours andweeks, Shakespeare insists, but bears it outeven to the edge of doom.

Shakespeare insists that true lovers arepersistent: Love alters not with his briefhours and weeks, but bears it out even to theedge of doom.


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Avoid strings of quotations

Do not pile up quotations

Shakespeare says, Let me not to the

marriage of true minds / Admitimpediments. He also says, it is an ever-fixed mark / That looks on tempests andis never shaken. If this be error and

upon me proved, / I never writ, nor noman ever loved, Shakespeare concludes.


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Incorporate the quotation into the flow ofyour own sentence

In Sonnet 116, true lovers [bear] it out

even to the edge of doom.


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Ellipsis


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Ellipsis Mark

Use to indicate a hesitation or aninterruption in speech or to suggestunfinished thoughts

The apartment building next doorits goingup in flames! yelled Marcia.


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Ellipsis Mark

Use to indicate that words have been deletedfrom an otherwise word-for-word quotation Shute acknowledges that treatment for autism can

be expensive: Sensory integration therapycan

cost up to $200 an hour (82). If a full sentence or more is deleted in the middle

of a quoted passage, use a period before thethree ellipsis dots If we dont properly train, teach, or treat our

growing prison population, says long-timereform advocate Luis Rodriguez, somebody elsewill.This may well be the safety issue of the newcentury (16).


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Ellipsis Mark

DO NOT

Begin a quote with an ellipsis

of true minds / Admit impediments, saidShakespeare.


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What do you do when you want to quote thebeginning and end of a passage?

Use...ellipses...

Shakespeares description of true loveargues that love is not love which alterswhen it alteration finds...but bears it outeven to the edge of doom.


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Slash


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Slash

Use to separate two or three lines of poetry

Add a space before and after the slash

Roses are red / violets are blue / sugar issweet is how the poem begins.

Any quote of four lines or more (poetry or adirect quote) becomes a block quote


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Block quotes Any quote of four lines or more

(poetry or a direct quote) becomes a

block quote Double indent quoted material

Block Quote (incorrect)


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Block Quote (incorrect)

Block Quote (correct)


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Block Quote (correct)


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For next Tuesday...

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