the literary/rhetorical analysis paragraph beefing up literary analysis
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The Literary/Rhetorical Analysis Paragraph
Beefing up literary analysis
Objectives• 1. We will refine our definitions the
components of a quality literary analysis paragraph (topic, context, quote, explanation, analysis)
• 2. We will revise our literary analysis paragraphs to include at LEAST TWO quotes and TWO explanations to provide in-depth evidence within our analysis.
Write the following on your paper:
• Topic sentence:
• Context:
• Quote:
• Explanation w/citation:
• Analysis:
Evidence/Support
Topicsentence
Concluding Sentence
A good paragraph is a like a good hamburger…
Evidence/Support
Evidence/Support
Topicsentence
Concluding Sentence
Evidence/Support
Evidence/Support
Evidence/Support
Topicsentence
Concluding Sentence
okay good best
From Burger to Analysis Paragraph
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Topic Sentence
• Gives the main idea of the paragraph
• In literary/rhetorical analysis, includes the element or device (i.e. character, imagery, etc.)
• In a complete essay, ties back to the thesis statement.
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Context
• Sets up background for your quotation: who? to whom? when? where? what is happening?
• Tells reader what they need to know to understand the quotation.
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Quotation
• The actual words from the text
• Make it as brief as you can by cutting out the fluff!
• Limit yourself to a few words or short phrases, if possible
• Incorporate/blend into your own sentence
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Citation
Cite according to MLA format:
“quote quote” (4).
novel: page (#)
poem: line (#)
essay: paragraph (para. #)
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Explanation
• Interpret what the quotation means or what the author is saying
• Try using “Here” to start your sentence:“Here the author indicates/shows/ demonstrates…”
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Analysis
• Connect the quotation to the literary/ rhetorical device from your topic sentence (and your thesis statement)
• What is the writer’s effect/purpose?
• Use words like “because,” “evidently,” “this proves,” and “this shows”
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Concluding Sentence
• Refers back to the topic sentence (and/or thesis statement)
• Include the name of the rhetorical device or literary element
• Wrap it up!
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
Analysis Paragraph TOTALS
ONE literary/rhetorical device
TWO pieces of evidence from the text
EIGHT sentences minimum
Topic sentence
Context-Quotation-Citation
Explanation
Analysis
Explanation
Context-Quotation-Citation
Analysis
Concluding sentence
It’s time to practice
• First, we will read Ms. Pelotte’s essay and make improvements by adding quotes (evidence) and explanations.
• Second, you will improve your own writing by adding quotes (evidence) and explanations.
• *Each body paragraph must contain AT LEAST TWO quotes and explanations
SOAPS ParagraphIn the 1966 essay, “Paradox and Dream,” John Steinbeck highlights the contradictions inherent in the American Dream through the use of syntax. Early in his essay, Steinbeck characterizes this “strong and imperishable dream” as paradoxical (para. 4). Here the words “strong” and “imperishable” imply lasting, while dreams, themselves, are ephemeral. This contradiction in words emphasizes the paradoxical nature of the American Dream. Steinbeck’s use of conjunctions—”and”, “but”, “yet”—throughout the piece also signal contradictions to the reader. Steinbeck uses these words to make his sentences feel connected and opposing such as when Steinbeck writes, “we fight our way in, but try to buy our way out” (para. 2). This mirrors the inherent discord found in how Americans strive to obtain the Dream. Steinbeck’s style, heavy in conjunctions and contradictory word choice helps signal to the reader that it is the quest for the dream, itself, the “vague yearnings” that truly embody what it means to pursue an elusive dream.
TopicSentence
C-Q-C
Concluding Sentence
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C-Q-C
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In the 1966 essay, “Paradox and Dream,” John Steinbeck highlights the contradictions inherent in the American Dream through the use of syntax. Early in his esay, Steinbeck characterizes this “strong and imperishable dream” as paradoxical (para. 4). Here the words “strong” and “imperishable” imply lasting while dreams, themselves, are ephemeral. This contradiction in words emphasizes the paradoxical nature of the American Dream. Steinbeck’s use of conjunctions—”and”, “but”, “yet”—throughout the piece also signal contradictions to the reader. Steinbeck uses these words to make his sentences feel connected and opposiing such as when Steinbeck writes, “we fight our way in, but try to buy our way out” (para. 2). This mirrors the inherent discord found in how Americans strive to obtain the Dream. Steinbeck’s style, heavy in conjunctions and contradictory word choice help signal that it is the quest for the dream, itself, the “vague yearnings” that truly embody what it means to pursue an elusive dream.
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TopicSentence
C-Q-C
Concluding Sentence
E
A
C-Q-C
E
A
In the 1966 essay, “Paradox and Dream,” John Steinbeck highlights the contradictions inherent in the American Dream through the use of syntax. Early in his esay, Steinbeck characterizes this “strong and imperishable dream” as paradoxical (para. 4). Here, the words “strong” and “imperishable” imply lasting while dreams, themselves, are ephemeral. This contradiction in words emphasizes the paradoxical nature of the American Dream. Steinbeck’s use of conjunctions—”and”, “but”, “yet”—throughout the piece also signal contradictions to the reader. Here, Steinbeck uses these words to make his sentences feel connected and opposiing such as when Steinbeck writes, “we fight our way in, but try to buy our way out” (para. 2). This mirrors the inherent discord found in how Americans strive to obtain the Dream. Steinbeck’s style, heavy in conjunctions and contradictory word choice help signal that it is the quest for the dream, itself, the “vague yearnings” that truly embody what it means to pursue an elusive dream.
Timed Writing Re-writeTopic: In “The Great Gatsby” F. Scott Fitzgerald makes the reader relate to the character of nick by/through________________________________.
C-Q-C: In the passage Fitzgerald writes “__________________________” (1).
E: Here, Fitzgerald shows/implies__________________________________.
A: This shows/proves__________________________________________.
C-Q-C: In addition, Fitzergerald writes “____________________________”
E: Here Fitzgerald implies, __________________________________________.
A: This reveals_____________________________________________
C: As a result___________________________________________________.