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Concrete Poetry

Concrete Poetry is

the use of words and their physical formation to convey meaning.  This may be done

with color, the shape of letters, or the arrangement of words.

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c① Use a letter of the

alphabet.

① Make the letter look like the object you are drawing.

① Create a phrase using words.

① Try to use the same beginning letter for each word.

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Concrete Poetry

Directions: • Graphically create

a scene using only words.  • From a distance this

will look like a picture.

• Up close it will consist only of words and phrases.   

• A light pencil line might be drawn first as a guide.

• Use colors, shapes, and sizes that will enhance the meaning of words.

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Synonym Poetry

• Synonym–A word having

the same or nearly the same meaning as that of another word.

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Synonym Poetry• Directions:

① Use a thesaurus to look up your word.

② Find three to five synonyms for it.

③ Write the synonyms below your word.

④ Write a descriptive phrase about your word.

⑤ Try to rhyme.

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Synonym Poetry Student Examples

LOVEAttachment, adoration, warmth, Adore.Love is so pure, right down to the core.-Kimiko Brantley (Grade 10)

NOISEClamor, uproar, Hullabaloo.These things can

reallyannoy you.-Shasta Inman (Grade 9)

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Opposites/Antonym Poetry

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Opposites① Choose two things that are opposites.

Examples: day/night, hot/cold, life/death, up/down, in/out, etc.

② Try to make the poem two to four lines long.

③ Try to make the first two and the last two lines rhyme.

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Opposites Student Examples

The opposite of honest

What a lot of people do on a

hard test.-Benjamin Swanson (Grade 9)

OPPOSITES What is the opposite

of love?Maybe it is as

beautiful as a white dove,

Because love is so fine,

This is something that I know is mine.

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Opposites Student Examples

What is the opposite of a smile?

Maybe it is a frown that hasn't been seen in a while,Because a great

smile brightens up the day,

 This has made my day better in every

way.

What is the opposite of true?

It could be purple, or even

blue.Because truth is better than a lie,I want the truth even from my special guy.

-Kimiko Brantley (Grade 10)

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List Poems

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List Poems• Directions:

① Lists can be either rhyming or not.② It is up to the writer to decide

which style s/he uses.③ Try to make one of the poems

humorous or far-fetched.④ Try to give the poem a serious

twist or turn.

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List Poems• List Poems

IdeasThe Sources of:

graynessstiffnesssoftnessrednesssqueakscoldsights

Things That:ring,light,

you find in the store,

hear in your house,

smell in the school,

are round, square,

red, blue, yellow, green, black,

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Three Word Forms

Directions:

① Each line of this form is made up of three words.

② The last two words become the first two words in the next line.

③ In the poem try to progress through images so a story is told.  

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Three Word Forms

MORNINGS sleep, alarm, awakealarm, awake, shower

awake, shower, clothesshower, clothes, shoes

clothes, shoes, dogshoes, dog, run

dog, run, breakfastrun, breakfast,

sunrisebreakfast, sunrise, car

sunrise, car, work.---Alex Buffington (Grade 10)

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Three Word Forms

ball, snap, runsnap, run,

tacklerun, tackle,

sacktackle, sack,

pass

sack, pass, catch

pass, catch, 1st downcatch, 1st

down, touchdown.

---Josh Jones (Grade 10)

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I Don't Understand Poems

???Write a poem about something that you do not understand

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I Don't Understand① Begin the poem with the following:

"I don’t understand...“② List three things you do not understand

about the world or people.③ Write one thing you do not understand

most of all.“Most of all, I do not understand…”

④ End the poem with an example of something you DO understand.

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I Don't UnderstandI DON'T

UNDERSTAND why people dislike me   why people can't get along   why dogs are colorblind and cats

aren’t.But most of all

why people are prejudiced

why people must move away   why people argue over stupid

stuffwhy there are

wars. What I understand most is…

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I Don't UnderstandWhat I understand

most is   why trees grow   why birds chirp   why the sun shines   why the car goes.---Anita Pepper (Grade 10)

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Just because…

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Just Because...

• Just Because... poems ask you to describe yourself in the first line of the poem

• The next three lines in each stanza tell what you are NOT.

• The final line restates the first line and adds a tag directing the reader to do something.

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Just Because...Just because I'm scared

Don't laugh and giggle behind my headDon't kid and play when I'm not there

Still ask me because I might playJust because I'm scared

It doesn't mean I can't do it It doesn't give you the right to talk about me

It doesn't stop me from having funJust because I'm scared

Still tell me everything you did Can't wait until I get big

Just because I'm scared -- please try to be my friend-Brandon Womack (Grade 10)

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Just Because...Just because I'm an only child

I'm not a freak I'm not shy

Just because I'm an only child I'm not lonely I'm not selfish I'm not spoiled

Just because I'm an only child I know I'm not perfect

I can't always be the best friend I'm not a nerd

Just because I'm an only child -- let me be me.-Liz Webster (Grade 9)

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Just because…Directions:

① Describe yourself in the first line of the poem.

① In the next three lines in each stanza describe what you are NOT.

① In the final line restate the first line and add a tag directing the reader to do something.

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Just because…Just because I'm scared

Don't laugh and giggle behind my headDon't kid and play when I'm not there

Still ask me because I might playJust because I'm scared

It doesn't mean I can't do itIt doesn't give you the right to talk about me

It doesn't stop me from having fun

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Just because…Just because I'm scared

Still tell me everything you didCan't wait until I get big

Just because I'm scared -- please try to be my friend

-Brandon Womack (Grade 10)

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Just because…Just because I'm an only child

   I'm not a freak   I'm not shyJust because I'm an only child   I'm not lonely   I'm not selfish   I'm not spoiled

Just because I'm an only child   I know I'm not perfect   I can't always be the best friend   I'm not a nerdJust because I'm an only child -- let me be me.---Liz Webster (Grade 9)

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I am… Poem (Version #1)

DIRECTIONS: Below are line-by-line directions for writing

this kind of poem: #1. Write “I am” #2. Write three nouns about which you

have strong feelings. Begin each with a capital letter.

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I am… Poem (Version #1)#3. Write a complete sentence about two

things that you like.

#4. Write three nouns that describe what you like to see in other people and end the sentence with "are important to me.“ Capitalize each noun.

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I am… Poem (Version #1)#5. Write a sentence containing a positive

thought or feeling. It can tell what you find acceptable in yourself.

#6.-#7. Sentence in which you show something negative in yourself or others, however the sentence must end by showing that out of something BAD can come GOOD. Use the word "but" to link the bad and good.

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I am… Poem (Version #1)

#8 to #10. Each line is a short sentence relating something about which you have strong feelings--likes or dislikes. They do not have to relate to each other or to the previous lines you have written.

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I am… Poem (Version #1)

#11. End with "This is me" or "I am."

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Diamonte or Diamond• The French word diamont means diamond.

• A DIAMONTE is a seven-line poem that gradually changes from one idea to a direct opposite idea.  When it is completed, its total appearance is diamond shaped.   

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Diamonte

• There are two patterns you can follow in writing a diamonte.

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DiamontePattern #1:Line 1 = NounLine 2 = Adjective, AdjectiveLine 3 = Verb, Verb, VerbLine 4 = Noun, Noun, Noun, NounLine 5 = Verb, Verb, VerbLine 6 = Adjective, AdjectiveLine 7 = Noun

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DiamontePattern #2:Line 1 = Opposite of line 7Line 2 = Describe line 1Line 3 = Action about line 1Line 4 = 2 nouns about line 1

2 nouns about line 7Line 5 = Action about line 7Line 6 = Describe line 7Line 7 = Opposite of line 1

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DiamonteLove

Bright, PassionateCharming, Drifting,

GrowingCherish, Infatuation, Antipathy, UncaringAnimosity, Falling,

DeadDark, Disgust

Hate---Kimiko Brantley (Grade 10)

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Cinquain

• A CINQUAIN is a poem with five lines.

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Cinquain• Directions:– There are a few things to remember NOT

to do with a CINQUAIN or any short poem:• (1) don't be tempted to add extra words of

syllables to fill out the form • (2) if every line sounds "finished," there is a

full stop at its end and it sounds boring • (3) a CINQUAIN should build to a climax and

have a surprise at the last line.   

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Cinquain• WORD PATTERN:

Line 1 = One Word (Noun)Subject & title of poem

Line 2 = Two Words (Adjectives)Line 3 = Three Words (verbs)Line 4 = Four words that relate feelingsLine 5 = One word that repeats or refers to line 1

(subject)

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Cinquain• SYLLABLE PATTERN:

Line 1 = 2 syllablesLine 2 = 4 syllablesLine 3 = 6 syllablesLine 4 = 8 syllablesLine 5 = 2 syllables

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Cinquain• A cinquain is a five line poem.

trianglespointy edges

revolving, rotating, anglingTriangles are all different.

180o

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Cinquain• A cinquain is a five line poem.

Snow is white

and very cold pretty as soft lace

making angels in the drifts

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Cinquain• A cinquain is a five line poem.

Elephants are large

gray and wrinkly have great ivory tusks

endangered

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Cinquain

Cats fluffy fur

a rough tongue cute as a

button purring

Cynthia my mom has three daughters

one grandson four

granddaughters teacher

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CinquainPoetry

many thoughts different words

written ink place on

paper sweet, sad,epics

and odes

Coffee fresh brewed

dark Columbian beans

Mocha Latte, French Vanilla Caoachino,

Esspresso, Hot or Iced.

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CinquainScrabble

words formed played with tiles many points are

scored looks like a crossword

puzzle

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Emotions & Actions• Sometimes it is

hard to put your emotions and feelings on paper.  The following patterns for poems are designed to allow you to get used to putting your emotions into writing.

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Writing About Weather

• Possibly the most famous poem about weather is Carl Sandburg's Fog.

• You can write about a force in nature in the style of Sandburg by following his.

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Poetry TermsAssignment #11

• Show Poetry Terms PowerPoint Presentation

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Writing About Weather Assignment #12

Title:  Form of Nature chosenLine #1:  Title + (how it arrives or begins as the animal would arrive)Line #2:  Tell what it doesLine #3:  And how it does itLine #4:  And where it isLine #5:  Tell how it leaves (as the animal would leave)

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Writing About Weather Assignment #12

THUNDER Thunder comes in loud

Like the majestic roar of a lion.It answers the callOf lighteningBy striking fear into people.Away, somewhere in the sky,Somewhere in the unknown,An unknown voice,And then leaves without a traceOf its existenceExcept in peoples' stories.---Elia Miller (Grade 9)

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Writing About Weather Assignment #12

76. Fog THE fog comeson little cat feet.

It sits lookingover harbor and cityon silent haunchesand then moves on.-carl sandburg