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Students CAN Write Changing the Narrative of a Deficit Model Kirsten Melise LeBlanc: St. Paul Catholic School - Grosse Pointe Farms, MI Beth Shaum: St. Frances Cabrini Middle School - Allen Park, MI

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Students CAN WriteChanging the Narrative of a Deficit Model

Kirsten Melise LeBlanc: St. Paul Catholic School - Grosse Pointe Farms, MIBeth Shaum: St. Frances Cabrini Middle School - Allen Park, MI

Students can’t write because…In the 1970s and 1980s: ...they’re spending too much time watching TV

In the 1990s and 2000s: …. they’re spending too much time online

In the 2000s and 2010s:… they’re texting and tweeting too much

Students can’t write. Says who? “The Media” Education “Reformers”ParentsTeachers who don’t write

The “need” for data is trumping our need to nurture writers and readers

“Any one-shot assessment procedure cannot capture the depth and breadth of information teachers have available to them. Even when a widely used, commercial test is administered, teachers must draw upon the full range of their knowledge about content and individual students to make sense of the limited information such a test provides.”-NCTE’s Standards for the Assessment of Reading and Writing

Students need writing mentors

This is Just to SayI have eaten

the plums

that were in

the icebox

and which

you were probably

saving

for breakfast

Forgive me

they were delicious

so sweet

and so cold

- William Carlos Williams

Lonely With ManyI sit in this laundry hamper all day.Trying to find my one true match.Searching through other lost soulsWho can’t find their way either.I see white all around,And the smell of Clorox lingers in the air.Below me, the rolling hum of the tumble dryerMakes me feel anxious to see If my match will come out;The only way I can catch a ride,Is by a hand that reaches in.Everyday I see all of my friendsGet pulled up by the hand and

NeverCome Back DownAs I sleep in my smushy space,Suddenly I am swept off of my feet,I come up into the air by the hand andThereShe Is.

-Margaret B.

Change our mindset…We can obsess over what our students are doing wrong, which is an exercise in futility because developing writers will ALWAYS make mistakes…

… or we can focus on what our students do well as an entrypoint for helping them improve.

Look for more than what you asked for or you might miss moments of brilliance

Is this really the time to teach him about comma splices or whose vs. who’s when he just poured his heart out on the page?

“...good sixth grade writing may have more errors per word than good third grade writing. In a Piagetian sense, children do not master things for once and for all. A child who may appear to have mastered sentence sense in the fourth grade may suddenly begin making what adults call sentence errors all over again as he attempts to accommodate his knowledge of sentences to more complicated constructions.” - Roger McCaig (1977)

“... it is not unusual for people acquiring a skill to get ‘worse’ before they get better and for writers to err more as they venture more.” - Mina Shaughnessy (1977)

Errors are a sign your students are

learning!

"But their grammar is so bad!"● What exactly do we mean by this? ● What rules are we holding sacred?

○ Productive rules that help with clarity? ○ or arbitrary, prescriptive, archaic "rules"

A run-on/fragment in the first paragraph!

Oh really?

“Well that’s all well and good, but certainly this text messaging business is ruining the English language as we know it.”

Oh, really? "[Adolescence] is characterized by its own language, both as a traditional defense against outsiders (i.e., adults) and as a group identity sharing. The latter is something in which most adolescents have historically engaged although the shape of it is varied in different generations." - Handbook of Adolescent Literacy Research

So in the words of my 8th graders:

“Relax, bruh.”

Are we encouraging risk-taking?

“But they have to know the rules before they can break them.”

How do our beliefs about writing influence the work students complete?

How we spend our time matters. If we only show students one genre of writing, i.e., the five-paragraph essay, then that’s all we can ever expect. There’s more to writing!

Same writing, different students“I’ve read the same thing

150 times.”

I’ve yet to read a five-paragraph essay that gave me goosebumps.

Subversion… it’s a Good Thing

Subversion… it’s a Good Thing

Subversion… it’s a Good ThingDear Big Fish from This is Not My Hat,

You are a mean-spirited and evil fish! The little fish did you a favor buddy. The hat you were wearing was way too small for you. How could you be so mean to Little Fish after you saw how cute he swam? He was adorable and you, I can't even talk to you right now...

You ate Little Fish! Have you no soul man! All Little Fish wanted to do was to look snazzy with a hat (that fit properly). Yes, I'll admit it was wrong of Little Fish to steal it, but it was worse of you to eat him! Now Big Fish, you sit down and think about what you have done.

Please don't get me started about that crab...

- Zoe, 8th grader (2012-2013)

Don’t be so quick to dismiss the student who perpetually turns in work late.

“Alright let me explain why i'm not happy, John Green gets it really easy here. There are people in college right now that are getting kicked out of their university. And then there's John Green who gives zero credit to this girl whatsoever and doesn't get any problems with the authorities.” - Charles P, 8th grader

Ask yourself:

What’s more important - that the assignment is turned in on time, or that it’s done with passion and conviction?

Quantity TimeAre we giving students:

● enough time to really commit to a piece of writing?

● a long enough leash to wrestle with their own decision-making?

Sacred Writing Time“There must be time for the seed of the idea to be nurtured in the mind.” -Don Murray

Three Rules:1. Write the entire

time.2. Ignore your

inner critic.3. Have fun!

“I just need to write today.”

“I wrote all those comments and my students just ignored

them!”

Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and

expecting a different result.

It’s not just what feedback you give, but how you give it that matters

● Are their papers bleeding red?○ Give them no more than 2 conventional issues to

work on ● Don’t forget to tell students what they did

well● Ask them questions rather than giving

demands○ Have you thought about...?○ I wonder what it would look like if...?

Think about WHEN you give feedback, not just what that feedback is

If students can’t write, some of that’s on you.

Caldecott Essay Criteria Point Value Points Earned

Mentions title, author, and illustrator of the book at the beginning of the essay

5

Summary of the story 5

Description of the artwork 5

References the Caldecott criteria 5

Answers why you think it is the “most distinguished” picture book of 2014

5

Effective reasoning and evidence as to why you think it is the “most distinguished”

10

Written in multiple, indented paragraphs (preferably double-spaced)

5

Written in a formal yet conversational style(i.e., it has voice and personality, yet still adheres to the proper conventions of Standard English)

10

Total 50

Are we celebrating all kinds of authors and books in our classrooms...

...or only a select and privileged few?

Repositioning StudentsStudents are writers in the room, too!

They know what they need!“I need to know what other words I could use except ‘he said’ and ‘she said.’ I need more descriptive words.”

“I’m not sure how to end it, or even how to lead to the end. Does it need dialogue?”

And they know how to help!“Other people like my work,

but they said I needed

more details about Chuck

and if he got in trouble by

the store.”

“My peers wanted me to

explain more about Danny.

I only mentioned his name.”

“People seemed to like

how I played with colors… but they also

said I need to go deeper into her goals

and hopes.”

Write Beside ThemSo…

What we discover when we write with our students is that this writing thing is HARD...

… and we begin to show a little empathy toward our students’ plight.

Write Beside Them"For years I had expected my students to go on swimming without me while I barked orders from my chaise lounge." - Penny Kittle

“Mrs. Shaum, remember when you said at the beginning of the year to call you out if you’re not writing with us? Well, did you do the article of the week?”

Visit the EMWP website:http://emichwp.org/wp/

A place to start writing beside them

“Writing is how we think our way into a subject and make it our own.”

~ William Zinsser

Students Can’t Write in Math...● Writing has no place in the math

curriculum.

● Elementary students are too young to express their thoughts in writing.

● It’s too hard.

Are We Sure About That?!

“If I can think about it, I can talk about it. If I can talk about it, I can write about it.”

~ Lucy Calkins

In Order to Own the Concept...

Students need to be given time to:

REFLECTDISCUSSWRITE

about the concept at hand, in their own words.

Let Me Think About ThatThoughtful reflection is an integral part of the math classroom.

Let’s Talk Math!A meaningful discussion leads to in-depth writing.

Write Now...A Window to their ThoughtsWrap up discussion with written responses. Allow students to apply, analyze, evaluate

and create!

Writing Samples…Direct from a 3rd Grade Math Class

The Progression of Learning “Tell me and I forget. Teach me and I remember. Involve me and I learn.”

~ Benjamin Franklin

“I don’t know.” “I don’t get this.” “Do you mean…?

“No, wait...I got this…!”

I Got This!● Created a multistep

story problem.

● Identified strategies needed to solve it.

● Broke it down into manageable diagrams.

● Solved with detailed explanation of thought process.

● Presented final answer in a sentence.

“There will always be an error, a refusal, an inadequate paragraph. Student writing will never be perfect. We live among the mess. We can choose to wallow in the doom. Or we can choose joy.” - Ruth Ayres

Contact usFind this presentation on Slideshare

Kirsten Melise LeBlanc - [email protected] Shaum - [email protected]

BibliographyAyres, R., & Overman, C. (2013). Celebrating writers: from possibilities through publication. Portland, Maine: Stenhouse.

Christenbury, L., Bomer, R., & Smagorinsky, P. (Eds.). (2009). Handbook of adolescent literacy research. New York: Guilford Press.

Kittle, P. (2008). Write beside them: risk, voice, and clarity in high school writing. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

McCaig, R.A. (1977). What research and evaluation tell us about teaching written expression in the elementary school. In C. Weaver and R. Douma (Eds.), The language arts teacher in action (pp. 46-56). Kalamazoo, MI: Western Michigan University. Distributed by the National Council of Teachers of English.

Shaughnessy, M.P. (1977). Errors and expectations: A guide for the teacher of basic writing. New York: Oxford University Press.

Sheils, M. (1975, December 8). Why johnny can't write. Newsweek, p. 58.

Weaver, C. (1996). Teaching grammar in context. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook Publishers.

Bibliography - Math ReferencesChapin, S., O’Connor, C. & Anderson, N. (2009). Classroom Discussions Using Math Talk to Help Students Learn. Sausalito, CA: Math Solutions.

Smith, M. & Stein, M. (2011). 5 Practices for Orchestrating Productive Mathematics Discussions. Reston, VA: The National Council of Teachers of Mathematics.

Van de Walle, J. & Lovin, L. (2006). Teaching Student Centered Mathematics Grades 3-5. Boston, MA: Pearson Education Inc.

Trade Books ReferencedGaiman, N., & Young, S. (2013). Fortunately, the milk. New York: Harper.

Levine, G. C. (2012). Forgive me, I meant to do it: false apology poems. New York: Harper.

Lloyd, N. (2014). A snicker of magic. New York: Scholastic.

Winter, J. (2011). The watcher: Jane Goodall's life with the chimps. New York: Schwartz & Wade Books.