storyboard merland rise
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‘Merland Rise’
Storyboard
Feargus Bracken - 4009Keir Speirs - 4131
Bethany Vaughan - 4137St Andrews Catholic School - 64135
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Static looking at antagonist.
Partially revealing shot, reveals male antagonist talking to female protagonist at bar in a flirtatious manner.
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3 seconds
Cut
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Upwards Tilt from floor to sign.
Ambient noise of glasses clinking and talking
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Pub sign establishing location so the audience will know where scene is being held.
Establishing shot of front of pub so the audience can see the pub and know where they are.
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1 second
Static looking at the front of the pub.
Cut
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Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Mid shot eye level
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Merland Rise
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany Vaughan
Ambient noise of glasses clinking and talking
Ambient noise of glasses clinking and talking but begins to fade
HA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
Indistinguishable chatter from inside the pub.
Static
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People sitting in the pub talking.
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8 Close Up LA
33 seconds
Cut
Repetition of slap from a different angle.
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MCU HAAntagonist being slapped by the main female character.
Slap noise so the audience and pub goers can hear and react.
Repetition of slap from a different angle.
4 seconds
Static looking at the antagonist and main female character
Hand held camera
POV MID SHOT
Cut
Cut
Static looking at the antagonist being slapped.
3 seconds
2.5 seconds
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Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Merland Rise
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany VaughanHA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
Slap noise so the audience and pub goers can hear and react.
Slap noise so the audience and pub goers can hear and react.
Male continues to talk to the girl who is obviously uncomfortable highlighted through shot showing expression.
Static looking at antagonist
Cut
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2 seconds
ELNancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
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Man angry expression from being slapped by the main female character.
Girl turning to love interest with creepy guy in background out of focus.
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MCU HA Static looking at the expression of the slapped antagonist.
Static looking at the main female character and her love interest with the antagonist in the background.
Cut
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Cut
2 seconds
3 seconds
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Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Merland Rise
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany VaughanHA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
Glass being knocked over by man as he tries to leave, spilling drink
CU HA
Cut
StaticSound of glass falling and pub chatter
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Peoples reactions of the slapped character.
Cut
LS HA Shocked sounds from the pub goers from the slap. Slow pan from left to
right
HANancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
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16 Text tone repeatedly (like when spamming phone)Phone on side with
weird text message.Slow zoom into the text on the phone.
Cut
ECU birds eye
1.5 seconds
HANancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany VaughanHA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
Text being sent to girl by stalker saying he is coming for her.
static
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CU HA IPhone zoon message sent soundNancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
EST HACut to the girl alone in the room with love interest, phone goes off and she looks over at it.
Static looking at the main female character and her love interest.
Phone message tone goes off once
Cut
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5 seconds
HANancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
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cut
Duffel bag being filled with items a gun, and a picture of the girl.
Rustle of bag as being packed quickly Hand held camera
LANancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
CU HA
MLS HAGirl gets comfort from love interest as she is shocked from the text.
Static looking at main female character being comforted by love interest.
Girl opens phone and reads the message.
MS HA
Cut to the girl dropping the phone from as she is shocked by text.
CUCanted angle
Static looking at the girl opening her phone and reading the text.
Static looking at the girl dropping her phone.
Cut
Cut
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Cut
Girl being comforted by boyfriend as the antagonist seen outside window.
Pull focus – starting at the couple and then focuses on the window looking at the antagonist.
3 seconds
1.5 seconds
5 seconds
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Merland Rise
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany VaughanHA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
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Merland Rise point of call.
Gun shot
Static with just the point of call on screen.
Cut to antagonist outside in the dark with gun (prop) up, begin at feet and pan upwards to his face.
Click of the gun
Tilt upwards from feet to face.
Dips to black
MCU LA TO HA
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Creepy man outside with gun, end at eye level.
N/A Tilt upwards from feet to face.
5 seconds
5 seconds
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Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Nancy Sinatra – ‘Bang Bang’ Plays
Keir speirs, Feargus Bracken, Bethany Vaughan
MCU LA TO HA
Voiceover – “Brand new soap ‘Merland Rise’ coming soon to BBC 2 HD”
HA = High Angle EL = Eye Level LA = Low Angle
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Fades to black from point of call
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